" Drop Of Doubt "
why is it that i let myself bringed down so easily
by myself
by you
simple words that mean no phsycal harm
keep in mind the true things i said, i'm unsure of my kind
erase the morbid portrait
i inflicted in your mind
that told something i couldn't have said
giving and forgiving brakes through my surface
that's all i do
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more? ...)
You can see more of the poem on my personal site. I didn't want to post all of it for personal reasons.
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