Legendary Thorn, Kurama x OC. Woot! Romance =D

[Scorose]

The title says it all. It's hosted on my personal website, /portfolio more exactly. Since I have to wait 3 friggin days so I can put the fics up @ my FF.net account ~x(

Here's the link. Read and review ^^

http://rose.eternal-calm.net/portfolio/fic..._yu_hakusho.htm
I'll let you know when it's up on FF.net. Note this is my first YYH fic [not story overall; I've written before.] so I'm not sure if I'm playing the character right.

Feel free to be honest :3

[Catgirl]

Well, handling an own character is always very difficult, because the Mary-Sue risk is very, very high. :ph43r: Your Raine isn't excessively Mary-Sue-ish, and this is good... but be careful.
The other characters look fine to me. ^^

Then, this has almost nothing to do with the fic but the Titanic thing made me remember an online text game I found, where you could date Hiei and go to see a movie. ^^ and his comment was something similar to "I was terribly bored and was about to leave... but then all people started to die......." ^^;;

[Scorose]

For now. I doubt I'd actually get Raine to *marry* Kurama. Just a bit of fluff.. (not the kind you're thinking of)

Hiei's line is somewhat similar to Raine's when Kurama was surrounded by rabid fangirls ^^;


I finaly have a title. Not too original, but better than nothing. *clears throat* still trying to get that FF.net work .. u.u

[Catgirl]

I think it's a nice title ^^