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Jake	Posted: Dec 19 2007, 10:55 PM
<3 Group: PCS Updater Posts: 5925 Member No.: 499 Joined: 1-November 06	Seashells Ebb and Flow, tabAnd so we go, tabtabCrashing like the oceans waves. Up and Down, tabAnd all around, tabtabDrifiting through the endless days. Never seeing, tabNever feeling, tabtabEmpty.

MushiKing	Posted: Jan 10 2008, 04:12 AM
Endless Journey Group: Member Posts: 362 Member No.: 717 Joined: 10-April 07	Aw man...My english teacher would love this! Though it's very short, it has a lotta sensory detail. Nice job

Jake

Posted: Jan 10 2008, 09:04 PM

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QUOTE (MushiKing @ Jan 10 2008, 04:12 AM)

Aw man...My english teacher would love this! Though it's very short, it has a lotta sensory detail. Nice job

Thanks.

Btw, highlight for title. Because I didn't want people knowing the title until after they read the poem.

sepp254	Posted: May 6 2008, 11:47 PM
Don't poke me... Group: Member Posts: 103 Member No.: 1516 Joined: 27-January 08	Crap. Crap. Crap. Yeah so I used this poem with added stuff into it for my 8^th grade Language Arts class. And now they want to publish it in a figgen' book. And I don't want you to sue me. What should I do?

castiboy	Posted: May 7 2008, 06:55 PM
postcount OVER 9k!! Group: Admin casti Posts: 10794 Member No.: 1 Joined: 8-October 05	oh man... i'm sure if you say the true nothing bad's gonna happen to you. but you'll want to say at least "excuse me jake". or else, shame on you.

Polursine	Posted: May 8 2008, 08:02 AM
Member ++++++ Group: Member Posts: 1421 Member No.: 617 Joined: 11-February 07	If it's the 'School Annual' or 'Year Book', then I think you're fine. I do believe you have the right so say no. It is 'your' work after all.

sepp254	Posted: May 8 2008, 08:27 PM
Don't poke me... Group: Member Posts: 103 Member No.: 1516 Joined: 27-January 08	It's for a celebrate young poets book or something like that... I'm really sorry about this, Jake...

Faceman2000	Posted: May 10 2008, 07:21 AM
Beginner2 Group: Newcomer Posts: 15 Member No.: 1791 Joined: 9-May 08	lol @ Zach. Thought you weren't walking down that road anymore. =P Anyways, Jake, lovely poem. I'm not that into serious poetry, but the poem was really deep. I've always been a sucker for the "Few words, great meaning" poetry. Much of Kudos.

Gorgormcgor	Posted: Jun 17 2008, 03:38 AM
Member (50+) Group: Member Posts: 58 Member No.: 829 Joined: 9-June 07	Nice work jake very short yet very detailed. Also, why would you use his work without permission??

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