Welcome to my story. This is my version of the Pokémon Mysterious Dungeon game. As you can see this started well before the games actually game out in America. Thus inspiring me to take on the idea of Mystery Dungeon, but put an entire spin on it based around my viewing. The only thing about my story that matches the games is that there is a rescue force and that the teams go on missions daily. But every town, city, village, location, and even the entire plot are no where near the mystery dungeon games. Those are what are purely from my imaginings.
Also as you can see with the chapter identification colors, the special chapters section, and the orb log, I have put a lot of thought and work into this story. This is literally the only story I have taken so seriously and spent so much time working on. I am hoping to keep it a great success and to one day print it out so I can read it myself whenever I get the chance.
Disclaimer: Pokémon is not copyrighted to me in any way nor is the idea behind the Mystery Dungeon theme. They both belong to Nintendo and Game Freak.
**Also, take note that I have 30 chapters written so far and the dates next to the listed chapters are dates that I first put them up. Oh, and the chapters become much more detailed once you get to chapter 4. So be patient with that part okay? lol**
CRITS AND COMMENTS WANTED THROUGHOUT STORY
Chapter Identification Colors
Written // Not Up Yet // Being Re-Typed Later // Thinking of Re-Typing // Currently Being Typed Up
Ch.1 ~On the Force~ [7-25-06]
Ch.2 ~The Training Begins: Stealth~ [7-28-06]
Ch.3 ~Hide and Seek Vaporeon Style~ [8-15-06]
Ch.4 ~Sandstorm Desert: Western Sand Dunes of Steel~ (part 1) [8-15-06]
Ch.5 ~Sandstorm Desert: Western Sand Dunes of Steel~ (part 2) [8-18-06]
Ch.6 ~Game Over~ [8-21-06]
Ch.7 ~Remembering~ [8-23-06]
Ch.8 ~Problems~ [8-25-06]
Ch.9 ~The Truth About Henry~ [8-25-06]
Ch.10 ~Stealth, Second Try: Failure is no longer an option~ [9-5-06]
Ch.11 ~Stealth Training…..Battle in Oakwood!?~ [9-11-06]
Ch.12 ~Rules of Combat~ [9-19-06]
Ch.13 ~A Bitter Freezing Start~ [9-19-06]
Ch.14 ~Mt. Hardstone: Not As Hard As I Thought~ [9-28-06]
Ch.15 ~Back in Vista town: Team Honoo Reports!~[10-10-06]
*Title and banner changed from PMD: RM's Rescue Team to PMD: Team 9 Lives to the Rescue!* [10-12-06]
Ch.16 ~The Discussion~ [10-19-06]
Ch.17 ~Gathering of the Teams: Oh Boy, There’s A Lot Of’em~ [11-6-06]
Ch.18 ~The Electrical Storm of the Earth Arrives~ [11-20-06]
Ch.19 ~Training Coming to an End~ [12-7-06]
Ch.20 ~Battle For the Badge~ (Part 1) [12-12-06]
Ch.21 ~Battle For the Badge~ (Part 2) [12-30-06]
Ch.22 ~Team 9 Lives is Born!~ [1-2-07]
Ch.23 ~Katori and the Electrical Orb of the State~ [1-16-07]
Ch.24 ~The Orbs Power~ [1-30-07]
Ch.25 ~Arrival at Nya Town: The News about Naru~ [2-12-07]
Ch.26 ~Krad: Past, Present, and Possibly Future~ [3-5-07]
Ch.27 ~The Electric State Mission Gains More Detail~ [3-12-07]
Ch.28 ~Arrival at the Electric State: The Overloading Charge~ [4-4-07]
Ch.29 ~The Orbs Placement: Charge Under Control~ [4-17-07]
Ch.30 ~Kore: The Medical Cat of the State…and the Addition~ [4-30-07]
Ch.31 ~Guard Duty at Soe Heng: Team Luck Draw Informed~
Ch.32 ~Ritual: Failure... or Success?~
Ch.33 ~The Seventeen~
Ch.34 ~Team Mayonaka Tsume Reports: One Down~
Ch.35 ~Festival of Evolution: A Blind Fox's Pain~
Ch.36 ~Chorbeeka Massacre~ (Part 1)
Ch.37 ~Chorbeeka Massacre~ (Part 2)
Ch.38 ~Returning of the Teams: Search Over~
Ch.39 ~Rising and Falling~
Ch.40 ~Mission 3: Lan, Zark, Eric~
Special Chapters (S.C's of this color and indented are still being thought up and pondered upon)
~A Shockingly Wicked Birthday~ [4-9-07]
~The Halo of a Moon is the Horns of my Life~
The Orbs of Creation Log
*This is a log for the OoC. It will list which ones have been seen, the date they were seen, who has them, their location, as well as a short description on what their powers are*
\Total Amount - 17/
*NOTE*: Me telling you each orbs power won't give away spoilers so don't worry. If they were giving away spoilers then I wouldn't have put them up.
|Seen // Haven't Seen // Location Unknown // Location Known but in No Ones Possetion // In Possetion of Good // In Possetion of Evil|
Electric: 1-16-07 In Possetion of Good
-Absorbs mass quantities of electricity / if of Electric type then EOoC won't stop until ALL of your Electricity is gone
-Injects holder with dark energy powering them up to extreme levels / results in holder becoming extremely addicted to this orb
-Shoots out a barray of highly toxic needles / can easilly go out of control / if not of Poison type, exposure to this orb for over five minutes results in skin beginning to burn away as if acid were dripping onto it
- Can bring the dead back to life / results in life span of user being decreased by a year each time it's used / if used in succession life span decreases by two / those brought back to life stay alove for only 24 hours unless brought back by a group of 5-10, then they are brought back to live for another lifetime at the sacrifice of the groups entire life spans / only Chaos has mastered this orb
- Creates barrier around holder that protects them from attacks as well as deflect attacks back to the sender / won't stay up forever
- Exerts waves of heat / if not of fire trait or having parts of fire trait in you, then exposure to this heat for more then seven minutes results in death
- Exerts waves of freezing cold temperatures / if not of ice trait or having parts of ice trait in you, then exposure to this for more then twebty minutes results in death
- Gives holder ability to breath under water
- Shoots out dangerous gusts of wind / highly uncontolable
- Increases speed in punches and kicks / muscles at risk of being torn apart from strain of increased speed
- Creates an extremely strong shield around holder that cuts off sunlight, sound, and vision / if under this shield for more then an hour, then user is at risk of suffication
- Emmits waves that can deflect most side effects of the other orbs as well as sound
- Gives user thick, thorn covered vines that they can lash out at their opponents / if user can use Vine Whip then orb gives them ten more vines
- Holder can control rocks / orb becomes heavier and heavier the longer it's used
- Releases massive earthquake's that can reach over 20 meters belw the earth's crust when smashed onto the ground / takes excessive amounts of holders energy every time it's used
- Has power to stabalize all the other orbs EXCEPT the Ghost orb / for this orb to work you have to know EVERYTHING about the Normal orb as well as the orb(s) you're using this with
I, RM have a dream! My dream is to be a great Pokémon rescuer! But first, I kind of need to join the rescue team. So I have traveled all the way from my village to Vista Town.
“Vista Town is defiantly not what I expected. It’s much smaller then what I have been told,” I said as I entered the town. I looked around wondering where I had to go to join up with the rescue team.
“What!? Are you serious!? That is a ‘B’ ranked mission! You’re still a freaking ‘D’ rank! You aren’t permitted to go on that mission!” yelled a feminine voice.
“Aw c’mon Meg! Why can’t I?” replied a male voice. It sounded much younger then the female one did.
“I just told you, you’re still a ‘D’ rank! Better let someone more experienced go,” said the female voice. I headed towards where I heard them to see a Vaporeon talking to a Skitty.
“Um, excuse me but –“ I was interrupted by an Arcanine that just appeared out of nowhere!
“Megumi, we have a problem on the training grounds!” he said in distress.
“What’s the problem?” Megumi replied as she looked over to the Arcanine.
“During a battle session two attacks collided with one another and created an explosion! The rock wall collapsed onto the battlers!” the Arcanine said again.
“What!? Why aren’t you helping them!?” Megumi yelled.
“We don’t have enough strength! We need you there and now! I don’t know how much longer those two can survive with that rock wall on them!” the Arcanine replied. He then turned around and ran back to where he came from. Megumi then noticed me just standing there staring at the Arcanine as he ran off.
“Who are you?” she asked in an intimidating voice. My ears perked up and I quickly turned around.
“I am RM and I want to join the rescue team! Do you know where they are?” I asked with a slightly scared voice.
“You’re looking at the training instructor of the force kid. Well I’m glad you want to join but right now isn’t the best time,” she replied.
“The accident?” I asked her as I lowered my ears. She nodded and then leapt forward.
“Come with me. You’ll have to wait until this is finished!” she said. She then began to run off to where the Arcanine headed. I followed right behind her but, the Skitty didn’t make any movements from where he was. We reached the training grounds to see what had happened. Two Pokémon, a Pichu and a Treeko were trapped under the rock! There was a Pidgeot, and Salamence trying to lift the giant rock. The Arcanine ran over and began to help them out as did Megumi. I just watched them wondering what I could do. They worked together until finally the rock began to lift! The Treeko pulled itself out from underneath it but the Pichu couldn’t move at all! It was unconscious!
“Pidge go grab it!” yelled out the Arcanine as he struggled to help keep the rock up.
“You insane LA!? I can’t let this thing go! Damnit it’ll drop and kill Amp if I let go!” Pidge yelled out.
“Well do something to get Amp out of there!” LA yelled. I could see that the four lifting the rock were in no position to get the Pichu out and no one else was around to help. I took in a deep breath and ran up to the rock.
“Keep holding it up I’m going to get Amp out of there!” I yelled out. The four Pokémon held it up as best they could as I crawled under the rock and grabbed the Pichu. I then pulled back and crawled out from under the rock.
“Okay let it go but gently!” the Salamence roared. Pidge, LA, Megumi and the Salamence whose name I am not sure of yet began to gently lower the rock until it was completely on the ground. They were all sweating and out of breath.
“Thanks kid. You know you are pretty brave for a Meote. How’s about you join up with the rescue force?” Megumi asked me as she walked up to me.
“Really!? I can join up!?” I asked her. I was surprised because usually the Rescue Force needed to see a show of strength and great bravery before they even gave a thought of letting anyone join up.
“Yeah, you showed an act of bravery out there. I don’t think a lot of young Pokémon would even attempt that,” said LA. I was so excited.
“What’s your name anyways?” asked Pidge as he walked over to me.
“My name is RM.”