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 Bind, Never to be free or unrestrained...
penguita38
Posted: Oct 17 2006, 04:46 AM


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First off, thank you to everyone who followed the other two stories. If you haven’t already guessed this part, here it is: This story does follow the series I started. The first story was called Bond, and the second was Bound. Now, here is the third installment, and as planned so far, the conclusion. I realized that I had left some things either unanswered, or glossed. So, this final part will hopefully resolve any issues that the others had.

I suppose I should say, NO, you don’t have to read the other two stories in order to follow this one. I am going to briefly summarize what had happened for you. That is why I am really here today.

So, what can you expect for the third part, Bind? I shall tell you. I am going to introduce a new vampire, and in my opinion, the best character I have ever imagined. I joke with Steffs late at night about him, as she reciprocates with her character Sonny—good times. Now, the new character is a teen, almost, aged to look somewhere around seventeen to twenty. His name is Zeniff, but his nickname is Zen. He has no recollection of his past as a human, nor does he remember being turned. His best friend, and the person he trusted the most, and depended on was…Tai. Zen has gotten wind of Tai’s death, and now seeks to find the person responsible for Tai’s death—Dean. This story is more complex than the other, I don’t mean the way it was written, but I mean the plotline. This story will read more as a novel, than a fanfic. There is a deep hidden plot, secrets, twists, and most of all angst. I hope you all like it. I am working very hard to produce something worthy of sharing with you guys, and most definitely worthy of being the last installment.

So here is a brief synopsis of all three stories. (Notice Bind will be watered down, I don’t want to spoil it).

Bond – We meet a vampire named Tai, who had taken a special interest in Sam, who he referred to as Samuel. Tai’s mate, at that time, was a vampire (Or bitch as Dean often called her) named Sophia. Tai successfully manages to turn Sam, but the process was slow. Sam did eventually turn, and that left saving him up to Dean. Dean was tortured by Tai, pretty brutally, too. At one point Tai nails Dean’s hands to a chair, to prove a point to Dean about God and Jesus. Then, Dean kills Sophia, by impaling her with a sword, but Sam was also in the line of fire. In the end, Sam drops Tai from the building (Which is on fire) and believes that he had died. End the story with Sam shocked to find out he is still indeed a vampire. (So ominous) This story was poorly written, as it was my first, please don’t judge me for my writing on that one.

Bound – Funny to call this the award winning Horror/Demon story. I still haven’t gotten used to that. So, Bound picks up right where Bond left off. Dean decides they need to enlist the help of someone, so he calls Bobby. Bobby goes into detail about the vampire lore, at least the “real” vampire lore. He explains that Cain, the son of Adam and Eve, was the first vampire, doomed to a life of immortality after slaying his brother Abel. He then explains that Cain made around 47 (I can’t remember for sure, but it is not that important) original vampires, and Tai’s maker, Malakai, was among the original descendants. So in order to turn Sam back, Malakai would have had to been killed, not Tai. You have to break the chain. But there was a catch, after awhile his vampirism would be permanent, irreversible. So time was of the essence to find Malakai and kill him. Later on Tai reappears and he goes to see Dean. You find out that he never died in the fire, but Malakai had saved him—because vampires can sense their own, like Tai could sense Sam’s distress. To make an extremely long story short, they kill Malakai, and every wound Sam had received, even those of the first story, appear now that he is human. He dies, Dean saves him, and viola the end. Now the end of this one is critical to the third. Dean decides to exact his revenge and finds Tai. In a snow covered cemetery, Dean finds a crypt, one that Tai is sleeping in. He kills Tai, and then Sam shows up and they have a brotherly moment. Great job, I just described like twenty-something chapters in a paragraph. Lol.

Bind - Have decided not to add any. Sorry guys. You will have to wait.

Now on with it.

Loves,

Lo
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penguita38
Posted: Oct 17 2006, 04:49 AM


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Okay, first off, a lot of you may not know what happens behind closed doors. In my case this is a trial run. I have been writing the heck out of it, but with no fans, I am unsure if it is continue worthy, you know? So, this is my trial. If you all say yes, oh hell yes, post it Lo, then it is a go. I just need to know. Here is the preface to Bind. Steffs, here is your Star Wars moment, just for you. Lol

Loves! Lo
OH! And I almost forgot! Aili, my wondeful beta! Thank you so much for betaing this for me. I love you!

Preface



A young man stood on the edge of a cliff. The wind blew by languidly, fluttering the fabric of his clothes as it brushed against him. The white wisp of clouds that spread across the endless blue sky never ended. The sound of the river splashing below echoed throughout the rock-formed magnificence. As the wind picked up speed, it shook a white flowered tree near by. White flowers separated as the wind plucked them from their home. They danced around aimlessly, lost, passing by the young man as they tried to find their new purpose.

Standing in the sun, he inhaled the scent of the broken flowers. It was a sweet aroma, euphoric. The feeling of the sun warmed his body. He closed his eyes and let the wind blow through his hair. The feeling was free. His eyes opened and he watched the white specs pass by him. They floated briefly in front of him, lingering in the air before twirling around slowly and scurrying away, confined to their new life in the endless sky.

His hazel eyes followed as they flew further away from him, free to fly around without ties. Their life had once been bound to the tree, their maker. Now it was unrestrained. What a feeling of ecstasy a life without restrictions must be.

The water continued to beat against the rocks below. The smell of fresh spring bounced off the damp rocks, covering the man with a strong sense of peace. His life was lonely, restricted, bound. Not like the flower. Though the petals had once been a flower, now free, they would die. To be free is to die.

One tear fell from his face as he realized, without a doubt, his freedom would mean death. Maybe not physical, possibly, but most definitely mental. The wind snatched the tear from his face, stealing it just like it had stolen the petals. His hazel eyes stared at the suspended orb of water, light reflecting off of the translucent tear brightly. He could see a single petal through the orb, one left alone by its brothers.

The wind stopped suddenly and the petal fell. Fluttering through the open crevice of the cliff, the petal landed in the river. The man watched as the broken flower piece was carried down the stream—a different path from the others. Again free to be alone, but doomed to die without its life’s source.

He had a life source. A man, another like him, doomed to a life with bonds, restrictions, never to be free. But then again, to be free was to be dead. Without this man, his tree, he would surely die. He laughed at fate’s cruel mockery.

He turned around and walked away from the cliff, the sun still shimmering placidly on his head. His feet crunched over the earth beneath him. He turned slowly, and stared at the vast horizon. He made peace with his life, his destiny.

He was never to be free. He was never to be unrestrained. He was Sam Winchester.
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Posted: Oct 17 2006, 04:52 AM


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I am so excited about this third segment!!! I loved the first and second ones, this is looking pretty awesome!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!!! biggrin.gif
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Posted: Oct 17 2006, 04:55 AM


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BIG BRO....FINALLY...... cheerleader.gif
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Windyfontaine
Posted: Oct 17 2006, 05:01 AM


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Ooohh!! Let me be the first to say...Yes, oh hell yes, post it Lo!!!!

Awesome start!!! Love it!!! Need more!!! NOW!!! biggrin.gif

People, I was lucky enough to get a sample chapter to read, and let me tell you, you definitely want to read this!! Tell her to keep going, please!!

*begins to chant* Post, Lo, post! Post, Lo, post! Post, Lo, post! Post, Lo, post! Post, Lo, post! Post, Lo, post! Post, Lo, post! Post, Lo, post! Post, Lo, post!

And did I mention I love it? biggrin.gif

Alisa
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Steffs
Posted: Oct 17 2006, 06:11 AM


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YAYAYAYAYAYAY



MY STAR WARS MOMENT



YAYAYAYAYAYYAY



SHE IS WRITING AGAIN AND POSTING


YAYAYAYAYAYAY



Love you Lord Insidious

Steffs
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Tigress
Posted: Oct 17 2006, 06:42 AM


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So, when does Sam get out his lightsaber??? I take it he is Luke Skywalker, which would make Dean Han Solo? *imagines Dean as Han Solo...does Yoda laugh*

FANTASTIC!!!!!

Keep it up. If you dare say you're not going to post this, I'm going to fly to America, tie you down and MAKE you post it!!!!!!

GOT IT?!!!

Love ya!

See ya! wave.gif
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lottie122001
Posted: Oct 17 2006, 06:49 AM


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FINALLY.....do you know how long I have been waiting for you to post anything? do you? well the answer is TOO LONG!!!!!!!!! oooo Bind just sounds sooooo good so you better post again soon and I mean soon! I am not sure whether I could wait much longer biggrin.gif

oh and incase you couldn't work it out, my answer is "yes, oh hell yes, post it Lo" laugh.gif
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dean_an_sam_rock
Posted: Oct 17 2006, 07:15 AM


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YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWW!

you posted!!! happy.gif

I'M SO HAPPY!!!!!

wonderful start Lo

as always

i love it

OF COURSE IT IS WORTHY OF CONTINUING!!!

i love you

3->

update soon

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solitaire
  Posted: Oct 17 2006, 08:21 AM


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QUOTE (Windyfontaine @ Oct 17 2006, 01:01 AM)
*begins to chant* Post, Lo, post! Post, Lo, post! Post, Lo, post! Post, Lo, post! Post, Lo, post! Post, Lo, post! Post, Lo, post! Post, Lo, post! Post, Lo, post!

god you know what i'm thinking lo.....tis all you're fault too!!! now to comment.

HOLY *censored for content* SHITE!!!! i'm green! completely. seriously. like deadly sin serious. invidia in its true form. run in fear! (minus the spite and resentment cause i love you but otherwise..... wink.gif ) that was beyond amazing. i can't describe how much i loved it and how vivid the symbolism and detailing was. if the rest half as good i shall probably die of my greenness laugh.gif stupefying love!

and now i shall leave you to your genius.... *disappears in a cloud of smoke*
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jared.is.fit
Posted: Oct 17 2006, 08:47 AM


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woo, Lo hun that was beautiful i loved it biggrin.gif
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ziggy
Posted: Oct 17 2006, 09:08 AM


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Please post this story the preface was amazing, you are brilliant at that descriptive stuff. If your other stories are anything to go by this one will be awesome. Update soon please
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Oceane
Posted: Oct 17 2006, 11:03 AM


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What a fabulous start, beautiful.

Please continue to post, I want more already biggrin.gif
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kburch04
Posted: Oct 17 2006, 11:38 AM


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You know, I loved reading the other two stories because I didn't have to wait for updates! I could just read and read and read...and then laugh at everyone's pleas for updates as I clicked the next page and would begin to read...

Now, my pleas will be added...hahahahaha...
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pulpfish
Posted: Oct 17 2006, 11:56 AM


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wow...the descriptions


the vampires


the snow


yup this is your story, can't wait!!!better tie myself to a chair so I don't fall out while reading future chapters
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