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This is my new Supernatural fan fic... Thanx to everyone that enjoyed reading my other fan fic's... 'Aftermath' and 'Silver Bullet'. I hope you guys enjoy this story A banner i did for the fanfic. ReawakendChapter OneJoanne Collins is a hard working student, she always thought her studies came first, she loves hairdressing and wont change anything else in the world, It’s her last year at college until she graduates. She has silky brown hair that just passes her shoulders, her eyes were as blue as the sky, she was about 5ft 6in and she was a quite girl who always stayed at home studying. She lives with her father who loves her very much, her mother died when she was just a baby, her dad never spook about her that much. She was an only child, no brothers, no sisters. She also had a part time job as a waitress at Fridays, it was the worst job anyone could have. Her boss Greg is a pain!, he makes his workers work day in day out. Joanne is doing part time but it feels like she works there full time. She hated her job. Joanne stepped out of the college doors and made her way down the stairs and towards the car park. She walked up to her black Mustang, she opened the back door and through her bags in the back seat then made her way to the drivers seat. She started the car up and drove out of the car park and headed down the road. Fridays weren’t that far from college, about a 12 minute drive. She parked her car next to a red Corsa, she went out of the car and opened the back door of the car, she took her bags and through them over her shoulder and made her way to the back door of the restaurant. ‘Your late Joanne?’ Greg said to her without even looking in her direction. ‘I had an test to do at college and had to finish it before I left.. Plus I ran into traffic, So, sorry I’m late?’ Joanne said. Joanne’s boss stopped from what he was doing and walked up to her. ‘I don’t want your excuses Joanne. Now get to work…’ Joanne did what he asked as she was too tired to argue, so she took her bags and made her way up stairs to get changed. After she changed into her working cloths she headed to the lockers to put her bags in. The lockers were small so she tried to force them in. ‘Damm Lockers… Can my life get any more worse that this?’ Joanne said while trying to stuff her bags into the tight locker space. She managed to get her bags into the locker and closed it before her bags came back out, then she headed for the stairs. She walked down them towards the kitchen, she picked up one of the note pads and went out of the kitchen. She stood waiting till someone came in. Two young men around her age came in they sat at the table near to the far side of the room. Joanne walked over to the table were they were sitting at, ‘Hi there, I’ll be your server today. So what can I get you today ’ Joanne asked the two young men with a smile. The man on the right side looked up then gave a huge smile to her. ‘Hell Yes!!!..’ He said still smiling until the smile faded away as a loud yell can from him. ‘Ahhh!!! What the hell was that for’ he yelled as he turned back at the man sitting in front of him. ‘You deserved it Dean!!’ He said, he then turned to face Joanne. ‘We’ll have two Cheeseburgers..’ He said. ‘Hey! Sam I don’t want a cheeseburger I want a Ham sandwich!’ Dean stated. Sam looked at his brother then back at Joanne. ‘Make that one Cheeseburger and one Ham sandwich..’ Joanne looked down at the note pad and wrote down 1xCheeseburger and 1xHam sandwich. She looked back up to the two men. ‘Would you like any drinks with that?’ ‘Yeah, make that two beers.. Please.’ Sam said. ‘ok, it wont be long.. And I hope you have a nice day.’ Joanne said with a smile before she headed back to the kitchen. Dean leaned over a bit to cheek her out… ‘Sweet…!’ Dean said to him self as he raised an eye brow. Sam looked at his brother then shook his head. Joanne walked up to the desk and placed the order on the try. She went towards to the re-fridgerator to get the beers, Until someone grabbed her arm. Joanne turned around to see Greg. ‘Joanne go help Kate with the dishes..’ ‘But I’m with a customer?’ ‘I’ll deal with that, you get in there and help with the dishes.’ She glared at her boss, before she entered the kitchen. She headed towards Kate who was washing the dishes at the sink.. ‘What do you want me to do?’ Joanne asked. Kate stopped from what she was doing and handed Joanne a stack of dishes. ‘Put them away..’ Kate asked and then turned back to continue washing the dishes. Joanne started walking towards the cupboards.. She didn’t see the wet mark on the floor, she fell backwards and all the dishes fell out of her hand. She hit the floor with a huge bang, then the sound of plates smashing. She sat there starring at the smashed up plates. Until Greg came into the kitchen. ‘WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON IN HEAR!!’ Greg yelled. Joanne looked up at him… a now tempered boss. He looked down at her, his face went even redder now. ‘Joanne… I might of known it was you?’ Joanne stood up without moving her eye’s away from Greg. ‘I sorry.. I’ll get this cleaned up.’ Joanne said as she turned around to go towards the cleaning cupboard. ‘If you cleaned this mess up in the first place, you wouldn’t be in this mess right know?’ Greg said as he looked at the wet floor and the smashed plates. Joanne stopped and turned around to face her boss. ‘What!!’ Joanne asked with a confused look on her face. ‘You were to clean up this mess!’ Greg said as he pointed at the mess on the floor. ‘You never said anything of the sort!!’ Joanne said as she was getting angrier by the minute. ‘Do you think I’m a magician?.’ ‘What are you on about Joanne?’ Greg asked. ‘Do you think I can take orders, clean up dishes and clean up water spills.. All at the same time?.. I mean I only have two hands!!’ Joanne yelled as she raised her two hands. ‘No!! but….’ Greg said before he was cut off. ‘NO!! buts… Greg! I’m am sick of this. You treat me like shit!!’ Joanne yelled at the top of her lungs,.. ‘I have one word for you Greg!! I… QUIT!!!’ Joanne yelled out even louder than the last one. The next thing she knew Greg was thrown through the air towards the other side off the room. He hit the wall so hard that he dented the wall, he landed on the ground with a loud noise. All the other workers ran towards him, Greg looked up to look at Joanne with fear in his eyes. Joanne stood there with her mouth half opened as she stared at Greg also with fear in her eyes…
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Sorry for the long wait.... I had college work, but i found time to do the next chapter. I would like to thank my cuz Danielle and my good friend Joanne for helping with the story.. Thanx guys I hope you like this chapter.. I try and not leave it too long next time Hears Chapter Two Chapter Two.. Joanne looked at her boss wondering what the hell just happened. The other workers helped Greg to his feet, he yelled in pain as he stood up. Joanne shook her head as she closed her eyes and ran out of the kitchen. ‘What the hell was that??’ Dean asked curiously as he looked towards the kitchen. Sam looked at his brother. ‘It’s none of ower business Dean..’ Sam said. Dean looked at his brother for a second before he looked back towards the kitchen again. He saw Joanne, the waitress that served them, she then ran out of the restaurant. Joanne ran to the side of the wall, she leaned against the wall until she slid down to sit on the ground. Joanne placed her hands on her face and began to cry. ‘Why is my life so,…Fucked up!!’ Joanne asked herself. [Back in the restaurant] Dean stood up, but then felt Sam tug at his arm. ‘Were you going Dean?’ Sam asked. Dean looked down at his brother and yanked his arm away. ‘I’m going to see is she’s alright?.. She looked pretty upset to me..’ ‘Dean … You don’t even know her?’ ‘Yeah!.. Well. It looks like she needs someone right now..’ Dean said before he walked towards the door. Dean exited the restaurant and stopped in the car park, he looked right, then left, until he heard a noise coming from around the corner of the building. Dean headed in the direction of the noise, as he turned around the corner he saw Joanne sitting on the ground leaning against the wall. ‘Hey.. You alright’ Dean asked as he walked up to her. She looked up at him with her watery eyes. ‘Y..Yeah. I’m.. fine..’ She said as she looked away from him. Dean sat down beside her. ‘I’m Dean..’ Joanne looked at him,.. She gave him a confused look.. Nobody has ever been nice to her before, nobody cared about her before??… but this guy!.. This guy cared about her, her sad face was now replaced with a smile. ‘I’m Joanne….’ ‘No offence, but.. Why are you hear?’ Joanne said.. Dean gave her a little smile. ‘You looked upset.. No one went to see if you were ok?.. So I thought… I would cheek, to see if your alright?’ Dean said with his most charming smile. Joanne smiled at him then took her eyes away from Dean to look back at the ground. ‘So, err… What happened in there?.. There was a lot of noise back there??’ Joanne’s eyes were drowned with fear as she remembers what happened in the restaurant. Then she turned around to look at Dean. ‘You will think I’m crazy?’ Joanne said as she shook her head a little. ‘Try me?… I mean, I’ve seen a lot of crazy stuff in my life.’ Dean said with a smile. Joanne looked at Dean with a puzzled look on her face. Then she thought for a moment, to think what she was going to say. ‘Well…. I. I, emm, I was arguing with my boss…. I was so angry with him!.. I was shouting at my boss, and the next thing I know he…… he was at the other side of the room… It was as if someone through him across the room,.. But there was no one?.. No one touched him??’ Dean looked at her, Joanne looked up at him to see what his face was like, but he stayed calm. ‘Yeah.. I know… It sounds so stupid?.. But I know what I saw..’ Joanne said. ‘I believe you…. Like I said I see crazy stuff every day?…’ Dean trailed on. ‘When that happened.. Did you fell any cold spots, or anything out of the ordinary?’ Joanne looked at him confused as if he was crazy right know. ‘What do you mean by that?’ Joanne asked confused. ‘There was no cold spots or anything weird?’ Joanne asked. ‘It doesn’t matter… I was curious that’s all.’ Dean asked as he shook his head a little along with a smirk. Joanne stood up from were she was sitting. ‘Well… Dean… I have to get going, It was rally nice to have meet you..’ ‘It was rally nice to have meet you too, Joanne.’ Dean said as he stood up. ‘Thanks for the comfort Dean.’ Joanne said along with her best smile. ‘No problem..’ Dean said as he scratched his head along with a smile. ‘Well I better be off…. Cya some other time I hope.’ Joanne asked. ‘Yeah.. Hope we will’ Dean said. Joanne smiled before she walked over at her car. Dean watched Joanne drive out of the car park and drove down the road until the car disappeared. After Dean watched the car drive off he headed back to the restaurant. Sam was reading a paper that he got earlier that morning while he was drinking his beer. Dean walked up to his brother. ‘Hey Sammy…’ Dean said as he walked up to the table. ‘Wow!.. Your back already…. That was fast?’ Sam said without looking away from the paper. ‘Sam!…. Listen.. Were going out on a.. job tonight..’ Dean said as he laid his hands on the table. Sam looked away from the paper to look at his brother. ‘Yeah!… Where?’ ‘Right hear.’ Dean said with a smile. Sam paused for a moment and looked around the restaurant. ‘What?…. Hear.. In the restaurant?’ Sam asked looking back at his brother, as Dean nodded his head. ‘Yup!.. The waitress….Joanne.. Said that something made her boss fly across the kitchen..’ Sam paused for a moment to think, before looking back at his brother. ‘A Poltergeist?’ Sam whispered. Dean nodded his head. ‘Exactly what I thought!.. Come on we better get ready for tonight..’ Sam nodded and stood up, both brothers left the restaurant and went to the Impala, then drove off. [Latter that night] Dean parked the Impala in the car park at Fridays… Both Winchesters got out of the car and made there way to the trunk of the Impala. Dean opened the trunk, then Sam got the stuff they needed. Dean followed Sam and got the rest of the gear. ‘Is that everything Dean?’ ‘Yeah… Come on, lets go.’ Dean said as he closed the trunk, then put the bag on his shoulder then headed to the restaurant, as Sam followed his brother. It was late so the restaurant was closed for the night.. It was much better than having to hunt in a packed restaurant.. Dean stopped as he reached the entrance of the restaurant, Sam walked up from behind him and took his bag off his back and opened it up. He took out what looked like a pin, Sam walked up to the door and started picking at the lock with the pin. After Sam heard the click he pushed the door opened. Dean walked in first as Sam picked up his bag and followed Dean into the restaurant. Dean took out the EMF and started scanning for any cold spots or any activity. ‘Lets take a look in the kitchen..’ Dean said as he headed for the Kitchen. Sam nodded his head and entered the kitchen with his brother. ‘Got anything yet?’ Sam asked as he looked around the kitchen. ‘Nope.. Nothing.’ ‘You sure she was telling the truth Dean?.. Maybe she was seeing things, or something else?’ Dean stooped what he was doing to look at his brother. ‘I’m sure she was telling the truth..’ ‘But we’ve got nothing Dean.. There’s no Poltergeist activity hear?’ Suddenly there was a noise of smashing glass coming from the bar area. Both brothers headed for the doors and opened them slightly, just enough to look though. They could still hear the noise.. Was it the poltergeist?.. Or was it something else? Suddenly a figure appeared, the brothers couldn’t make him out.. But he kept smashing glasses and plates all over the place. ‘Ahhh… I’m gonna get shit for this.. I failed BIG time…’ The figure yelled out. The man suddenly stopped yelling as another sound appeared, the man looked across the room.. The brothers couldn’t see but they listen.. ‘I’m sorry… I’m sorry?.. It wont happen again!!’ ‘One easy little job you had?.. Just one little job!!.. And you failed??’ another voice said. ‘Please just give me one more chance!!..’ The man pleaded. ‘It was one girl.. Just one GIRL!!!’ the other voice grew louder. ‘You have no use for me anymore…. AWAY WITH YOU!!!’ The man yelled out as he turned into black smoke and disappeared. It was silence once more.. ‘Useless… utterly useless, if you can’t get anyone to help you.... You just do it your self..’ The man said silently until a wind noise appeared and the man was gone. The brothers opened the doors and walked into the bar area.. Both confused.. ‘What the hell was that?’ Sam said. ‘Honestly Sam… I’m not sure?’ Both brothers looked about the restaurant just to make sure those guys, or whatever they are… were gone. ‘Well, Sam… There’s no poltergeist hear?.. But were dealing with something else? ‘Yeah.. 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Hey guys.. sorry about the long wait again!!.... This chapter isn't that good? not sure why... It's not one of my best Chapters??..... I'll try my best to get the next chapter up.. Hears Chapter Three. ........................................ Chapter Three[the next day] The music was blaring out loud as the Impala drove through the small town of Florida. Sam was looking out of the car window, still thinking about last night at the restaurant.. Who were those guy’s?, and what did they mean my failing a job,.. They were talking about some girl?.. But who!…Sam snapped out of his little day dream as Dean parked the car at a small parking lot. Dean opened the door of the car and then walked around to the front of the Impala with a little smirk on his face. Sam looked at his brother before opening the door, he walked up to his brother with a confused look. ‘What is it?’ Dean gave Sam another smile as he walked towards him, then he looked towards a barber store at the corner of the street, that was behind Sam. Sam turned around, then he looked back at his brother, with his eyes opened wide. ‘What are you thinking Dean??’ ‘Your going for a trim… I mean, come on! Haven’t you seen your hair lately?’ ‘I don’t need a hair cut!!.. My hair is just fine!’ Sam said as he placed his hands on his head. ‘Your getting a hair cut Sam… Now come on!’ Dean said as he walked towards the barbers. Sam ran up to his brother. ‘Dude… Dude, please…. We have more things to worry about, than a mere hair cut?’ Dean didn’t listen as he walked into the barbers. Sam shook his head a little then walked in after him. Inside the barbers was quiet, there was no one around?.. ‘Hello!!.. Any one hear?.’ Dean yelled. Someone came through the curtains, she had long blond hair and bright green eyes. She was small, but not too small. She came out and walked up to the brothers with a huge smile. ‘Hello there..’ ‘Hey!’ Both Winchester’s said at the same time. ‘What would you like?’ ‘Just a trim..’ Dean said. ‘Both of you?’ ‘Just my brother!’ Dean said as he looked at his brother. She looked up to Sam, as her smile grew bigger.. ‘Right this why..’ She asked as she pointed to one of the chairs. Sam took of his jacket and through it over to Dean. Sam walked up to the chair, he sat down while looking at the mirror. The girl put a towel around him, as Dean walked up to one of the sets at the window, he sat down and help him self with the magazines. ‘So… How much do you want off?’ She asked as she started to play with his hair. ‘Just a trim…. Not too much!’ ‘Sure..’ She picket up the scissors up and started cutting. ‘So…. Ermmm…’ ‘Danielle… it’s Danielle..’ ‘Danielle…. So…. How long have you been doing this for?’ Sam asked. ‘Years!!… It kind of runs in the family. Sam looked at her in the mirror, as he thought back to his childhood, far back he could. He never had a normal life, never even had a childhood!.. He tried his best to get away from it all, but nothing would make his life normal.. Hunting Demon’s and Spirits are the family business. ‘So….’ Danielle asked to get Sam out of his little trance. ‘Yeah…’ Sam said quietly. ‘What do you do for a living?’ Sam raised an eye brow, and gave a little laugh to him self. ‘Well… Ummm, It’s kind of a family thing?’ Danielle looked at Sam in the mirror giving him a little smile. ‘Well, your all done..’ Danielle said before picking up the little mirror on the small table. ‘How’s that?’ Danielle asked as she showed Sam his hair at the back. ‘Yeah.. That’s great!.. Thanks a lot.’ Sam said as he smiled. He stood up and followed Danielle to the counter to pay. Dean walked up from behind Sam. ‘It doesn’t look like anything has been done?’ Dean asked. ‘It was only a little trim Dean!!’ Sam said as he turned around. ‘What ever!’ Dean said as he turned around to head for the door, suddenly he bumped into someone that came through the door.. The girl fell to the floor with a thud. ‘Sorry..’ Dean said as he bent down to pick up the stuff that she dropped. The girl sat up on her knees as she helped picking her stuff up. ‘It’s Ok.. I’m a bit of a cluts anyway!’ She said, as she looked up at Dean her mouth fell opened. Dean looked up from the ground and his eye’s grew bigger then gave her a huge smile. ‘Dean…’ She said happily. ‘Joanne..’ Dean trailed on. ‘What are you doing her?’ ‘Seeing a friend… What about you?’ Dean nodded a little and gave her a little smile. ‘Hear with my brother..’ ‘Dean.. Are you ready!’ Sam asked as he walked towards his brother. ‘Ready for what?’ Dean asked as he stood up. ‘To go… what else?’ ‘Oh, Yeah!’ Dean said to him self. ‘So, errrr… Joanne, I’ll see you some other time then?’ ‘Wait!… That’s Joanne?’ Sam said to Dean a little loud than he expected. Dean looked at his brother and nodded his head a little. Sam looked over at Joanne, as she stood up. He walked over to her. ‘Hi, Joanne.. I’m Sam.’ ‘Nice to meet you Sam.’ ‘Sam, we better be going.’ Sam nodded his head a little then looked back at Joanne. ‘See ya latter Joanne.’ Dean said as he headed for the door. ‘See ya..’ Joanne said as she watched Dean leave. Sam walked up to Joanne. ‘It was nice to meet you Joanne…’ Sam hesitated for a moment before trailing on. ‘Joanne…… Be careful?’ Joanne looked at Sam confused, Then Sam gave her a little smile before walking over to the door. Sam walked up to his brother who was sitting on the back of the Impala waiting for his brother. ‘Dean… That girl?… She’s the girl from the restaurant right?’ ‘Yeah… Why?’ ‘Do you remember those guy’s, or what ever they were.. Last night?’ ‘Yeah…..!’ ‘They mentioned a girl.. That one of them failed on something?… Well I think they were talking about Joanne?’ ‘What??’ ‘Dean… She said to you that her boss was thrown through the air…’ ‘Yeah… a Poltergeist!!’ ‘No, Dean.. There was no traces of a Poltergeist?…… It was Joanne… She made her boss fly across that room!’ ‘What!!… you mean,…. Like - ’ ‘Me!!.. Yeah!, she’s like me…and everyone else that’s like me.. And those two guys at the restaurant last night… I think they were Demons…’ .......................... What do you guy's think??... good?, Bad?, Oki?....
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Chapter Four, hope you guys like it. ............ Chapter Four.‘Sam are you positive about this?’ ‘Positive Dean..’ Dean walked back and forth, then decided to head for the drivers side of the Impala. Sam walked up at the passenger side and faced towards Dean. ‘But, I’m not sure she knows?’ ‘Know about what?’ ‘That she has powers.. You seen how scared she was when she ran out of that restaurant..’ Sam said before trailing on. ‘Dean.. If that Demon is after Joanne.. We have to protect her.’ ‘Your right!’ Dean looked back at the barbers were they came out of.. Sam looked at the barbers then back at Dean. Dean turned back and opened the door of the Impala, Sam followed Dean into the car. Both brothers sat in the Impala, waiting for Joanne to leave. Hours latter Joanne left, She walked around the corner and headed to a parked black Mustang. She then drove off down the street, as she pulled out of the car park Dean started up the car and followed Joanne down the street. About 30minutes latter she stopped at a house just out of town. Dean parked the car away from the house, far enough that she wont notice them. The Winchesters waited for another couple of hours until a Red Corsa stopped in front of the house. A woman came out of the car, she had long blond hair and was wearing a black dress. ‘Sweet!!!’ Dean said as he cheeked out the girl. Sam looked at his brother before looking back at the girl, he looked closely enough at her when she turned around. ‘Danielle?’ ‘Who?.. That chick that cut your hair?’ Dean said as he turned back around to look at his brother. Sam looked at Dean before looking back at the door of the house. The door opened and another girl appeared, she had brown hair, and was wearing a red dress. Dean’s eye’s focused onto the other girl as he raised an eye brow. ‘I guess that’s Joanne!.’ Sam said quietly. Both girls headed for the Corsa, Danielle took the drivers set and Joanne took the passenger set. They then drove off, Dean started up the car and followed them. Dean stopped the car quite a bit away from Danielle’s car. Both girls went out of the car and headed for a bar across the street. ‘Wow!.. There sworty girls!’ Dean said. ‘Come one..’ Sam said as he opened the door of the car, Dean followed his brother out of the car. ‘And were are we going?’ ‘Into the bar!… we have to keep an eye on her.’ Dean raised an eye brow as he gave a smile then laughed. ‘Man.. What on earth happened to geek boy!!’ Sam gave Dean an angry look, as he shook his head and headed for the bar. Dean followed Sam into the bar. Both brothers entered the bar, the place was packed, people dancing, people at the bar, people crowded around the tables. Dean and Sam walked up to the bar and got two beers. ‘So were are they?’ Dean asked as he took a sip of his beer. Sam looked around the bar to see if he could spot them, but they were no sign of them. ‘Can I have two vodkas, please.’ a voice said. Dean turned around and saw Danielle. ‘Sam….’ Dean whispered. ‘Sam.!. I think I found them?’ Dean said before taking another sip of his beer. ‘Were?’ Sam asked as he turned around. Danielle turned around and saw the two Winchesters looking at her. ‘Why, hello boys!’ Danielle said. ‘Hi…’ Sam said with a smile. ‘Hey,… ermm, Danielle.. Where’s Joanne?’ Dean asked. ‘She didn’t feel so good, so she went out for some air… She isn’t a night life person.’ Danielle said. Dean stood up and headed for the door as quick as he could. Sam and Danielle watched Dean before he disappeared through the door. ‘Was it something I said?’ Danielle asked as she turned around to look at Sam. Dean looked around the outside of the bar, but she wasn’t around. He looked across the street and saw her sitting on a bench in the park. Dean then walked towards the park and headed to were Joanne was sitting. ‘Hi there.’ Joanne looked up to see Dean standing, she then gave him a smile. ‘Hey Dean.’ ‘This set taken..?’ Dean asked with a smile. ‘No..’ Joanne said as she gave a little laugh along with a smile. ‘I really have to ask you something Dean…. Why do you keep comforting me?’ Dean gave her one of his best smiles, as he sat down next to Joanne. ‘ I don’t like seeing anyone alone?’ Joanne gave Dean a little smile and then looked towards the water. ‘Thanx..’ Joanne said before trailing on. ‘I didn’t catch you second name?’ ‘It’s Winchester..’ ‘Winchester…’ Joanne said happily before trailing on. ‘My name is Collins… My family isn’t that big, It’s just me and my Dad.. My mum died when I was little. ‘ My mum died when I was little too..’ Dean said sadly. ‘Sorry..’ Joanne said as she lowered her head. ‘It’s alright….. It’s just me and my brother now.’ ‘ Your brother…. Is that the guy from the barbers.?.. Sam.’ ‘Yeah.. We travel a lot these days.. He’s all I have left, and I just don’t want to see him get hurt?.. ‘That’s sweet.. Your just too sweet Dean..’ Joanne said as she gave Dean a smile. ‘Thanx..’ Dean said as he looked towards Joanne. They stared at each other, then Dean laid his hand on her cheek and rubbed it gently. Then he leaned in and kissed her.. ‘Awwwww, now isn’t that sweet!!’ A voice said. Dean and Joanne jumped back and saw someone standing in front of them, They couldn’t see him properly, it was pretty dark.. ‘Who are you?’ Dean finally asked. ‘Hahaha.. I’m surprised at you Winchester!’ ‘How did you know that my name is Winchester?’ The man ignored Dean and turned his attention on Joanne. ‘Joanne.. You’ve grown up beautifully!’ Joanne leaned in closer to Dean as she was getting very frightened, that this guy seems to know there names.. The man walked closer towards them. ‘It’s time Joanne!!’ ‘T.Time for what??’ Joanne asked with fear in her voice. ‘Time will tell, young one!’ The man turned around to look at Dean. ‘And it’s time for Sammy too!..’ The man said before he raised his head, Dean backed off further into the bench as Joanne sat starring into the man’s eye’s with fear. ‘You!!..’ Dean said.
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Chapter Five Hope you guys like it ............................. Chapter Five.His evil yellow eye’s just stared at Dean then gave him a smile, before turning back to Joanne. ‘Soon my dear!.. Soon!.’ The Demon said before he disappeared in black smoke. ‘Dean!… What the hell was that!!’ Dean kept staring at were the Demon once stood, then he thought about what the Demon had said to them. Dean turned around to look at the bar, before turning back to look at Joanne. Joanne looked at him waiting for him to say something.. ‘Long story, Short time!… Come on!!.’ Dean said as he took Joanne’s hand and ran towards the bar. Dean ran into the bar Joanne close behind, Dean looked around the bar to see where Sam was.. He was still at the bar with Danielle. Dean headed for the bar, as Joanne followed him. ‘Sam!’ Sam turned around and saw Dean and Joanne standing in front of him. ‘Hey Dean!.. What’s up?’ Sam said before he turned back around to Danielle. Dean grabbed Sam’s jacket and pulled him out of his seat. ‘Sam listen.!… We ran into, some trouble?’ Dean said. ‘What kind of trouble?’ ‘Demon trouble?’ ‘What!!.. Are you hurt?’ ‘No!. Were fine..’ ‘How did you get away?’ ‘He just disappeared… but it said that it’s time?.’ ‘Time.. Time for what?’ ‘Don’t know?’ Sam turned over to look at Joanne who was scared stiff her face white and trembling with fear.. Sam then turned back to Dean. ‘We better go..’ Dean said as he looked over at Joanne. ‘And she’s coming with us!’ Dean demanded. Sam nodded his head a little, then he headed up to the bar. ‘Danielle..’ Sam said, as Danielle turned around. ‘Yeah..’ ‘I gotta get going now…’ ‘Sure.. I’ll see you some other time then?’ ‘Yeah, bye Danielle.’ ‘Bye Sam..’ ‘Joanne..’ Dean said as he walked up to her. ‘Yeah?’ ‘Were going now, and I was wondering if you wanted to come with us..’ ‘Why?’ ‘Well, I don’t want you to be left alone.. As that D… that thing in the park is out there some were?’ Joanne nodded her head a little, then looked up at Dean. ‘It will be better if I’m with you two..’ ‘Good..’ Dean said as he gave her a smile. She gave him a smile as she couldn’t resist his smiles. Dean turned around to see Sam walked up to them. ‘Lets go..’ Dean said as he Sam and Joanne headed for the door. All three of them headed for the black Impala, Dean walked up to the Drivers side and got in the car. Sam took the passenger seat and Joanne to the back seat behind Sam. Dean started up the car then drove off. It was a 20 minute drive from the bar to the motel. Dean parked the car in one of the empty drive ways. The three of them went out of the car, Dean went around the back of the Impala to collect there things from the boot. Sam went to the receptionist desk to get the key for a motel room. Joanne helped Dean with a bag, Sam left the receptionist and headed for one of the motel rooms, as Dean and Joanne followed. They entered to motel room, Dean dropped the bag near to the door before taking his jacket off and through it on one of the beds. Sam walked up to the table and took out the laptop, Joanne stood in the middle of the room, as she laid the bag on the floor next to the entertainment unit. She stood there still thinking about that thing in the park.. ‘You ok?’ Dean said as he laid his hand on her shoulder. Joanne turned around to look at Dean. ‘No, I’m not?’ Joanne said still frightened, before she trailed on. ‘How did that guy know me?’ ‘Well… He aint a guy?’ ‘What do you mean by that?’ Dean turned around to Sam who was searching the net on the laptop, but now he was staring at his brother, Dean turned back to Joanne. ‘It was a Demon..’ ‘A Demon?.. You mean like the Devil??’ ‘Not like thee Devil!.. There are a lot of different Demons out there?’ ‘Exactly how do you guy know about this?’ ‘It’s kind of ower job!’ ‘Who would want a job like that??’ ‘We were kind of brought up on that?’ Sam said as he stood up to join the two. ‘How?’ ‘Well, ower mum died in a fire 24 years ago.. And ower Dad saw her pinned to the ceiling before the fire started… Since then ower Dad has been training us to find the thing that killed her… and it was a Demon..’ Dean said. ‘Sorry…’ Joanne said sadly before trailing on. ‘Wait!.. What this go to do with me?’ ‘Your Mum died the same way!… am I right?’ Sam asked. ‘Well, she died in a fire when I was just a baby.. But my Dad never saw her pinned to the ceiling?…. But why did it kill ower Mums??’ ‘For us!!’ Sam said. ‘Us?… What do you mean?.. what do’s it want with us?’ ‘Me, you… we have these powers?’ ‘Powers?.. I don’t have any powers??’ ‘That day at the restaurant.. That your boss was thrown through the air?…. That was you Joanne!..’ Sam said. ‘What?… how??’ ‘We don’t know that yet?..’ Dean said. Sam walked back up to the computer to continue searching. ‘I.. I could have killed him?…’ Joanne said as she began to show tears. ‘I… I, caused m. my Mum’s death!..’ Joanne managed to say before she let out more tears. Dean walked up to her and gave her a hug. ‘No you didn’t!!.. you didn’t cause your Mums death..’ Sam caught something on the net, it was a newspaper article of missing persons. The first one was a boy, Tom, 9years old, it said that the last time they saw him was in the garden playing with his friend. His friend said that a man came up to talk to them, he offered them sweets and toys, he said that he had something very special behind the fence Tom went around to see and he took him, then they both disappeared in black smoke.. The boys Dad says that it was a kidnapper, and that Tom’s friend might have been so scared that he saw what he saw… ‘Dean!..’ Sam said still reading the article. Dean walked up behind Sam to have a look.. Joanne followed behind Dean. ‘What..’ ‘There’s this article, It says that a little boy, Tom, was kidnapped from his garden, his friend that was with him saw the kidnapper, he said that the man offered sweets and toys before he took Tom and disappeared… In black smoke..’ Sam said as he turned to Dean as he said ‘black smoke’. ‘Black smoke…. Wait!.. That thing in the park disappeared just like that?’ Joanne said. ‘Yeah that’s right… what do you think a Demon wants with a kid?’ ‘Not sure?… but there are more, other people disappeared without a trace, all different age’s.’ ‘Well we better go an investigate..’ Dean stated. ‘Wait?.. What about Joanne?.. We just can’t leave her alone?’ ‘Well, I’ll come with you guys?’ ‘No, It might be dangerous..’ Dean said as he put on his caught. ‘Sam.. You stay hear with Joanne, and I’ll cheek it out..’ ‘Sure Dean…’ Dean looked at Sam then at Joanne before he left the motel room. Sam and Joanne heard the noise of the car leaving. Sam and Joanne stared at each other. ‘So..’ Joanne said. ‘So…..’ Sam said as he gave a little smile. ‘What shall we do before Dean gets back?’ Joanne asked. ‘Search for some other clues about the kidnapping.’ ‘cool….’ Joanne said as she sat on one of the bed’s. Hours have went by, Joanne took a nap on the bed as Sam continued to search. It was quite, except for Sam typing. Sam looked at the clock on the bed side table, 10:34. Sam closed up the laptop, he then stood up from the chair until he felt a gust of wind , the window wasn’t opened?.. So, how was there wind.. Sam quickly turned around to see a man standing near to the entertainment unit. ‘Who are you?.. And how did you get in hear??’ The man smiled at Sam before another gust of wind appeared, Sam turned around at the door and saw another man.. ‘It’s time Sam!..’ the man at the entertainment unit said as his eye’s changed to dark black.. Joanne began to wake up, the first thing she saw was a man looking down at her. She began to scream but the Demon put his hand over her mouth to prevent the screaming. Sam turned around to see one of the Demons grabbing Joanne out of the bed. ‘Let her go!!’ Sam shouted. ‘No!!’ One of the Demons came towards Sam. Sam dodged him and headed for Joanne. ‘SAM!!.. HELP!’ Joanne yelled out as she managed to pull away the Demons hand. Suddenly a mallet appeared in one of the Demons hands, he waked it across Sam’s head. Sam felt pain through his head as he fell to the floor, the next thing he saw was darkness. .....................................
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Sorry for not updateing... I've been busy with college.. This chapter isn't that long.... Hope you guys enjoy it?.. Chapter Six .................................... Chapter Six.Dean drove the Impala into the car parking lot at the motel. He exited the car and headed to the Motel room were Sam and Joanne were. Dean took the key for the door to the room, he opened the door and entered. The room was dark, so Dean turned the lights on to find no Sam and no Joanne, the place was a mess, it was like someone trashed the place?.. ‘Sam!!…. Joanne!!.’ Dean yelled as he looked around the room for them, but there were no sign of them.. Dean spotted the spear keys on the table in the far side of the room. They didn’t leave?.. The door was locked?.. And the place was a mess??… The first thing that came to Dean’s mind was ‘The Demon’… ……………………………… Sam slowly opened his eye’s, his head killing him. He couldn’t make anything out in the room as it was too dark, Sam looked around his surroundings and noticed he was surrounded with four walls. Sam soon realised he was in a cage.. He thought back to what happened at the Motel.. ‘Joanne!!’ Sam said to him self as he looked around the room, he could now make out other cages around him most of them had someone inside them.. He then turned to his right and saw Joanne in the next cage. ‘Joanne….. Joanne!..’ Sam said a little louder.. Joanne began to move a little and then opened her eyes… ‘S. Sam..’ Joanne said a little hastily.. She looked around her and noticed that she was in a cage. ‘Were…Were are we?’ Joanne asked turning back to Sam. ‘I’m not sure?..’ Sam said as he looked around again. Suddenly the sound of a door opening, both Sam and Joanne looked towards the noise. In the far side of the room was an old rusty door it looked identical to the walls.. The door opened fully and revealed two dark figures, they were hiding there faces.. One of them were carrying something, the other walked over to an empty cage, it raised it’s hand and waved a little over the lock and the door to the cage opened. The other one went over to there cage and put, what appeared as a little boy into the cage… They closed the door, and one of them waved it’s hand over the lock once more and locked it. One of them turned around and looked in Sam’s direction.. Both of them walked over to Sam.. Sam backed off further in the cage as the two figures came closer.. ‘Well, well, well… Look what we have hear!..’ One of them said. ‘The famous Winchester boy!’ The other said. ‘Who are you?… and what do you want??’ Sam asked. ‘I’m surprised you don’t know who we are Winchester!!’ One of them said as he raised his face as he opened his eyes.. His eyes were as dark as night it’s self.. ‘What do you want with us!’ Sam yelled as he now notices that these two are Demon’s who are standing in front of him.. ‘In time Winchester..’ One of the Demon’s said. ‘He will tell everything soon!’ The other said before both of the Demons left closing the door leaving the room dark once more.
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Sorry for not updateing.. I was busy with college and stuff. Hears Chapter seven Hope you guys like it? ................................................ Chapter SevenThe Impala turned around the corner at high speed with Dean behind the wheel. All that was going through Dean’s mind was Sam, was he hurt? And where did the Demon take him?. Dean stopped the Impala in a small parking lot near to a local park. Dean turned off the engine took his bag from the back seat and took the Journal out, he flicked through the pages back and forth. Suddenly someone knocked on the car window. Dean turned around to his left with a jump of surprised, to see Danielle standing at the window with an angry look. She gave Dean one more look before walking around to the passenger side of the Impala, Dean watched her walking around the Impala before she entered the Impala. ‘Hi, Dani..’ Dean said in his charming way with a grin on his face. ‘Don’t you Dani me?…’ She said as she closed the door to the Impala before trailing on. ‘Where’s Joanne?’ Dean just stared at her as he was trying to find out what to say. Danielle turned her head to look out at the window as she did Dean slowly hid the journal behind him before she turned back. ‘Where is Joanne… I saw her leave with you and Sam last night, so where is she Dean!’ ‘She. Err, She.. She left and went back home?’ Dean said as he gave an innocent smile. ‘Joanne never came home last night.. I phoned her Dad, he said she never came home last night!… So, if you don’t tell me where she is. I’ll go to the cops.’ Dean looked at her. Then thought for a moment on how he was going to tell her that Sam and Joanne were kidnapped by a Demon!. ‘Well… I’m not sure were she is?.. And I’m not sure were my brother is either?’ Danielle looked at Dean confused. ‘Wait?.. What do you mean you don’t know were they are?’ ‘I think, they were taken.’ ‘They were Kidnapped?.. By who?.. Have you been to the cops.’ Danielle said in shock. ‘What?.. No!.. Me.. going to the feds.. No, no way. I can find them my self!’ ‘What?.. Dean they could be in danger.. You have to get the cops to find them.’ ‘Cops are no good for this kind of kidnapper?’ ‘Huh?.. What are you taking about Dean?..’ ‘I’m saying that I have to find them.. The feds don’t have the man power for this thing!’ ‘What!!. Dean you could get hurt…. Wait… What thing?? ‘Well, emm… me and my brother.. Were hunters.’ ‘Hunters of what?’ ‘Demons, spirits, Monsters, the whole works!’ Danielle couldn’t but smile and laugh, as she looked around the Impala. ‘Yeah right!.. Your crazy, you know that’ ‘Think what you think, but I have to find my brother, and Joanne before it’s too late. So if you don’t want to help, then that’s fine.’ Danielle calmed her self as she looked at Dean’s direction. ‘Your not joking, are you?’ ‘No, I’m not.. So will you help me or not.’ Suddenly the sky went dark and the wind started to pick up, both Dean and Danielle looked at the sky as the sky went darker and darker. ‘Wow.. That came on fast..’ Danielle said as she kept looking at the black sky. ‘It’s hear!’ Dean said Danielle turned to Dean as he started up the car. ‘What’s hear?’ ‘The Demon!’ Dean drove out of the parking lot and drove down the long road heading into the storm.. ‘Dean!.. Where exactly are we going?’ ‘To tell you the truth. I’m not sure?’ Dean said before trailing on. ‘You know this town right?’ ‘Yeah, I do.. Why?’ ‘I have to know.. Do you now anyone with an infant, that is six months old today?’ ‘Why?’ ‘Do you now anyone!?’ Dean said a little louder. ‘Yes!.. Mrs Kurt and Mr Kurt has a boy that turned six months today, there good friends to my Mum. Why?’ ‘Were do they stay!’ ‘There a few blocks from were I stay?’ ‘Ok, then that’s were we are going!’ [10 minutes latter] Dean stopped the car just out side of the Kurt’s house. Dean turned the engine off before he went out of the Impala and headed to the trunk, Danielle followed Dean to the back of the Impala. ‘So.. What are we going to do?’ Danielle asked as Dean opened the trunk and took out a bag and filled it with guns, a bottle of holy water, a cross pendent and some old books. ‘Were going to give the Demon a little visit’ Dean said before he closed the trunk, then he headed to the front door. Danielle followed Dean to the front door. ‘Exactly how are you going to get in?’ Dean took out a small metal stick, what looked like an opened pin. ‘With this!’ Dean said as he started to pick the lock. The door opened with ease. ‘This is breaking an entering Dean!’ ‘Yeah.. Well, I don’t think the Kurt’s wont mind?..’ Dean said as he entered the house, Danielle followed him inside. There was a noise coming from up stairs, someone walking. Dean crept up the stairs with a gun ready. He saw Mrs Kurt heading to the tots room, as she opened the door Dean could just see another figure standing inside the room. Dean then ran up the stairs and headed to the room at the end of the corridor. As Mrs Kurt entered the room she stopped Dead then gave a scream as she was sent flying to the wall. Dean barged into the room to see the Demon over the baby’s cot. Dean raised his gun towards the Demon. ‘Were is my brother!’ Dean yelled. The Demon turned around to face Dean, then turned his eyes onto Mrs Kurt as she started to raise off the ground, as she gave got a cry. Dean turned around to her as he lowered his gun a little. Then turned back to the Demon and raised the gun a second time. ‘Let her go!.’ Dean yelled. The Demon then turned back to Dean and stepped forward a little. Dean felt an almighty blow as he was flown onto the wall . The Demon then turned back to the infant and raised his hands over the cot. Suddenly there was a loud bag from a gun, then the Demon disappeared. Both Dean and Mrs Kurt dropped from the wall as the force from the Demon had disappeared. Dean turned to the door way and saw Danielle at the door with a gun. She just stood there frozen with fear with the gun still raised. Dean walked up to her and slightly took the gun off her, as Mrs Kurt ran to her baby in the cot, she picked him up and looked towards Dean and Danielle. ‘You ok.’ Dean said ‘What.. What was that thing?’ ‘That there.. That was the Demon’ Mr Kurt came running up the hall way as he heard the gun shoot. ‘What the hell!..’ Mrs Kurt walked up to them with the baby. ‘These two saved us Bill.’ Bill looked at Dean then Danielle. ‘What happened?’ He said as he looked at his wife. ‘We were attacked’ ‘What!.. Are you and the baby fine.’ ‘Yeah’ ‘Well, sorry to barge in like this but we better be going, and best if you two book a motel room, just in case it shows up again.’ Dean said. ‘Thanks again.’ Dean and Danielle smiled at the couple before leaving the house. Dean walked up to the Impala as Danielle followed. Dean stopped then turned to Danielle. ‘You did good in there… Where did you learn to use a gun?’ ‘I’ve never used one before.’ She said before trailing on. ‘That thing there.. Is that what took Joanne..’ ‘Yeah.. And Sam.’ Dean said as he entered the Impala, and Danielle entered the passenger side. Dean started up the car and drove off. ‘Why?.. Why did it take them?’ ‘Well, Sam has these visions.. They started out as nightmares, then he has them through the day?.. The Demon needs Sam and the others for something, but I’m not sure on that yet?.’ ‘Wait.. Visions?.. What do you mean, visions. Is he like a psychic or something?’ ‘You could say that.’ ‘What about Joanne?.. Why did that thing take her?.’ ‘Because she’s one of them.’ Danielle turned her head to look towards the road. ‘Were to now?’ Danielle said as she turned back to Dean. ‘Not sure?.. All I know that we have to find the Demon.’ Danielle looked out the window towards the road, something caught her eye. A dark figure standing in the middle of the road not moving, it was like he was waiting for the car to hit him. ‘WATCH OUT!’ Danielle yelled.
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Thanx you guys glade your likeing the story so far Hope you guys like this chapter ......................... Chapter EightThe car swerved to try and avoid the man, the car turned to it’s left and stopped with a halt at the edge of the road. Dean got out of the Impala to see if the man was alright, he stopped at the end of the Impala and looked around, the man was no were to be seen. Danielle got out of the car and headed for Dean. ‘Is he alright?’ Danielle said ‘Not sure?’ ‘Huh?.. What do you mean.’ Danielle asked before she looked around. ‘Were.. Were did he go?.’ Danielle said before she trailed on. ‘Did we hit him?’ she said a little scared. ‘No, I don’t think we did?’ Dean said as he looked towards the woods. He saw someone or something movieing through the woods. ‘There!’ Dean said as he headed towards the trees. ‘Stay hear’ Dean said turning back to look at Danielle before heading into the woods. Dean past though tall, thick trees, pushing branches away to make room for him to move through the woods. At the end of the woods there was a wall blocking the woods and the town on the other side. He saw the man near to the wall, Dean ran over to the end of the woods and stopped. He saw the man trying to climb the wall. ‘Hey!’ Dean yelled as he ran over to the man. He grabbed the man’s jacket and turned him around. ‘What the hell were you thinking standing in the middle of the road like that, you could have been hurt… or someone else for that matter?’ ‘I..I.. I didn’t mean to hurt anyone’ ‘Then what hell were you doing out there!’ ‘I.. I was trying… to kill my self?’ ‘What?… Why?’ Dean said as he let go, who he thought was a man but a young adult around 19-21. ‘I wanted the noise’s to stop!’ ‘noise’s?….noise’s made you want to kill yourself?’ ‘Yes… the noise’s in my head.. I want them to stop.. He keeps telling me to do bad things?’ ‘What kind of bad things?’ ‘Your gonna think I’m crazy.’ Dean gave out a little laugh ‘Yeah, already know you’re a little crazy?’ The boy locked down to the ground then back at Dean. ‘I. I can do stuff?.. And this man keeps telling me to do things with it... Bad things?’ ‘Woooo, wait, wait a minute there kido?’ Dean said butting in as his first thought to the kind is that he could be a kid like Sam. ‘Are you telling me you have some sort of an ability?’ ‘Yes!..’ The boy said before trailing on. ‘I can, read minds…. But not just that!.. Sometimes I can cause people to go crazy?.. All with my mind, I give then some sort of a really bad headache…’ The boy said before he paused before trailing on. ‘But last night…. I.’ ‘Last night you what?’ ‘I… I.. I killed my Dad!’ ‘What?’ ‘I was angry with him and something inside me burst, then he put his hands on his head and he yelled out in pain.. I just stood there and watched him die… I didn’t mean it.. It was that voice in my head.’ The boy said with tiers in his eyes. ‘The voice.. What did it tell you to do exactly?’ ‘He kept saying that I have to kill… one time he visited me, it was about a year ago, he said that he had planes for me?’ ‘This man that visited you, did he have yellow eyes?’ ‘Yeah, how did you know that?’ Dean turned around and put his hand over his mouth thinking what to do and how will he find Sam? Dean turned back around to the boy. ‘I know you’ve been through a hell of a lot. I’ve been through the same.. But I now you wont take all this in on what I’m about to say to you, but.. That yellow eyed man is a Demon!’ ‘A Demon?’ The boy said before Dean butted in once again. ‘Yes.. And my brother, Sam can do stuff like you.. And The Demon is connected Somehow.’ ‘Ok…you’ve lost me?’ The boy said in confusion. Dean looked around then looked back in the direction were he left Danielle with the car, then turned to look back at the boy. ‘Oki, errr?’ Dean asked then paused. ‘It’s Chris’ ‘I’m Dean.. Oki, Chris. Come with me and I’ll tell you everything while going into town. ‘Aright?’ Dean walked back into the woods to head back to Danielle and the Impala with Chris behind him. …………………….. ‘Sam.. Sam..’ Joanne said trying to speak up through the pitch black. Joanne heard a little moan from the opposite cage. ‘Yeah..’ Sam said trying to wake up, just to find him self in more darkness. Sam and Joanne have been in the pitch black for almost two days now, with no food, no water and no light. ‘How you felling?’ Joanne asked. ‘Not bad you?’ ‘A bit tired, but I’m fine.’ ‘Did you get any sleep?’ Sam asked. ‘A little… I couldn’t sleep in this cage?.. And this smell is just terrible.’ ‘Yeah your right, has anything happened?.. Any of those things come back?.’ ‘No..’ ‘I cant take any more of this.’ Sam said as he stood half up, as the cage was pretty small. ‘What you doing?’ ‘Gonna get out of this place!’ Sam said as he laid his hands on the bars and started to find a way to get out. ‘But we have already tried that Sam.’ ‘We haven’t tried everything.’ ‘So. What else is there?’ ‘You..’ ‘Me??’ ‘Yeah..’ ‘What can I do?’ ‘You can move things right. With your mind.’ ‘I don’t know how?’ ‘That day in the restaurant, you made your boss fly across the room.’ ‘Yeah.. But.. I have no clue how I did that?’ ‘What did you feel that day?’ ‘Well.. I…. I was angry.’ ‘Angry at your boss?’ ‘Yeah..’ ‘Ok.. Just think of your boss while at the same time try thinking about getting out of hear.’ ‘Alright..’ Joanne said as she closed her eyes and focused on her bosses face. She started to feel the anger building up.. Then she began to think on getting out. Suddenly a little creaking noise came followed by a click. Then the door to the cage were Sam was in opened, as it did she opened her eyes slowly and at the same time Sam looked in front of him and realized she opened his cage and not hers. ‘Joanne?.. Why did you opened the cage that I’m in?.. I meant yours.’ ‘I thought you’d be a hell of a lot better out there than me?.’ Sam looked at Joanne then looked in front of him were the cage door was, he let out his hands and reached outside the cage. He went out of the cage and stood in front of it and looked around. He could make out the cage’s but mostly everything was in darkness. ‘Sam.. Go find the lights.’ Joanne said as she moved to the front of her cage. Sam took a step forward followed by another then another and made his way in the direction were the door was, when those Demons came in he could remember were the location of the door was. He took another step until the lights went on, Sam stopped then looked about wondering who turned the lights on, he was the only person standing in the room. ‘Sam.. Did you do that?’ Joanne said as she looked in the direction were Sam was. Everyone else in the other cage's looked around puzzled to wonder who or what turned on those lights. ‘No.. I didn’t.?’ Sam replied confused. The noise of foot steps were heard, Sam turned around to look at the door. Joanne looked in the direction of the door as well then looked towards Sam. ‘Sam.. Get back in the cage!’ Joanne said quietly as she didn’t want to let who ever is on the other side of the door to hear. Sam stood there dazed staring at the door, as the door began to open.
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Hi everyone.. next chapter is up Hope you guys are liking the story so far. ........... Chapter NineSam stood in the one spot staring at the old rusty door opening slowly, to Sam it felt like a life time. ‘Sam..!’ Joanne said trying to get through to him, but Sam never moved. The door opened and revealed a tall dark figure wearing a long black coat. It moved forward towards were Sam was standing. Sam stood in the spot staring at the dark figure. ‘Sammy, Sammy, Sammy..’ the man said as he walked up to Sam, as he lifted his head to reveal his evil glowing yellow eyes. Sam’s expression changed from fear to anger. ‘You..’ ‘In the flesh..’ ‘What do you want with us?’ ‘I think you know Sammy..’ The Demon said walking closer to Sam, as Sam began to move backwards. ‘Know what?’ ‘You.. And all the other children. Will help me.’ The Demon said as he looked around the room. ‘Help you?.. Help you on what’ Sam said as he finally stopped walking backwards as his back hit the wall in the other side of the room. ‘The war.. And you will help me!’ ‘Never!’ ‘You have no choice!’ The Demon said as he gave an evil smile. The Demon then placed his right hand over Sam’s forehead. Sam gave out a cry of pain as it felt like his head was about to explode. ‘It’s Time..’ ……….. ‘So. Let me get this straight.. You and your brother hunts these things?’ Chris said trying to understand what Dean was telling him. ‘Yeah, and this Demon has taken Sam and Joanne?’ Dean replied before trailing on. ‘And this Demon could be after you too.’ ‘What?.. What do’s the Demon want with me?’ ‘Your like Sam and the others. You all have some sort of ability?’ ‘Oki, okay..’ Chris said walking back and forth, before he stopped. ‘I.. I have to go!’ Chris said as he started to walk to the door. ‘I cant take anymore of this, first you say you hunt these. These things, now your telling me that this Demon wants me for something?… I just cant take .. I’m going home!’ Chris said as he opened the door. ‘I hope you find your brother and your friend.’ Chris said before he left the motel room and closed the door behind him. ‘Your just gonna let him leave?’ Danielle said as she turned to look at Dean. ‘No.. the Demon might be after him too?’ Dean said as he took a step towards the door, he stopped to the sound of someone yelling. Both Dean and Joanne looked at each other for a second before Dean ran to the door and opened it. When he opened the door he saw a man standing holding a lifeless body in his arms, when Dean looked closely he saw that the man had black eyes, The Demon gave Dean an evil smile before disappearing in black smoke along with Chris. ‘No!’ Dean yelled, Danielle ran out as Dean yelled. ‘What happened?’ ‘Chris. He’s gone.’ ‘What..’ ‘A Demon took him.’ Danielle looked on towards the road then back to Dean. ‘Now what?’ ‘Were finding this Demon. That’s what!’ Dean said as he turned around and went back into the motel room. ‘Wait.. How we gonna do that?’ Danielle asked as she too entered the motel room. ‘Truth is.. I’m not sure?’ Dean said as he turned around to face Danielle. ‘Dean how are we gonna find them?. I mean if we don’t find them soon, they could be…’ ‘Don’t say that!’ Dean said butting in. ‘I don’t want to believe it more that you do?.. But think about it, why do’s this Demon want with them?’ Dean looked at Danielle for a second before letting his eyes off her and headed for his bag. He took out his Dad’s journal and started to look through it for some answers to find Sam. Danielle just watched Dean. His face full of worry, all he wanted was Sam to be safe. Suddenly a car alarm went off followed by another, Danielle turned around to the window and opened one side of the Curtin to see what all the fuss was. Her face feel to what she saw. Danielle turned back to Dean who was still looking through the journal desperately for some answers, then she turned back to look outside. She couldn’t believe what she’s seeing. Around ten people crowded together and walking slowly, they were acting like Zombies? As they walked past cars the alarms went off, and the lights in the streets started to flicker too. Among the crowed was Sam. The light in the room began to flicker, Danielle closed the Curtin and looked up at the flickering light at the same time so did Dean. Dean closed the journal and through it onto the bed as he walked up to Danielle. Dean opened the Curtin but at the same moment Danielle stopped him from opening it and stood in front of the window. ‘Danielle what are you doing?’ ‘Nothing..’ ‘Why do you want to look out the window?’ ‘Well if you haven’t noticed that the lights started to flicker and car alarms are going off, that’s some of the signs when a Demon appears.’ ‘Well…. Ermm. That could be anything, a shortage in the wiring and some kids causing the alarms to go off..?’ ‘Danielle.. What are you hiding?’ Danielle looked around the room then back at Dean. ‘Well… I.. I think I’ve found Sam..’ ‘Really.. Were?’ Dean said as he tried to pass by Danielle. He stopped trying and looked at her before he headed to the door. Danielle left her spot and ran towards the door. ‘Wait. Wait, wait.. Wait!’ She said a little louder as she stood it front of the door. ‘Dani.. What the hell are you doing?. You said Sam’s out there, so why aren’t you letting me go see him?’ ‘Well…’ Danielle said as she paused. ‘Well, what?’ ‘I don’t think Sam is himself?’ ‘What?.. What the hell do you mean?’ Dean said, as he said that Danielle stood to one side to let Dean by. Dean looked at her worried face before he opened the door, as he did he stood frozen as he saw Sam. ‘Sam..’ Dean said looking over to were Sam was. Dean ran up towards Sam and the others. ‘Dean. Wait!’ Danielle yelled out to stop Dean, but it was no use. Sam stopped as he saw Dean running to him. ‘Thank god your alright Sammy.’ Dean said with a smile. Sam just stood there staring at him, like he didn’t know who Dean was. Dean’s smile slowly began to fade as he realised Sam wasn’t acting like.. Sam? ‘Sam..’ Suddenly Sam’s eyes turned an evil black colour. Dean’s face quickly turned to fear, suddenly Dean felt an urge of energy pushing him through the air. Dean landed on the ground with a thud as he hit the hard pavement. Dean slowly looked up and looked towards were Sam was, who gave him a smile before walking back towards the group. ‘DEAN!’ Danielle yelled as she ran over to Dean, who was lying on one side staring at Sam. ‘Dean you ok?.’ Danielle asked as she sat down next to Dean, then she turned to look towards Sam and the others, as Dean was looking on helplessly at Sam heading into town. ‘Sammy…’
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Hi guys, chapter ten is now up.. Hope you guys like it Chapter TenDanielle helped Dean to his feet, Dean gave out a moan of pain as he stood up. But Dean never let his eyes off Sam and the others. ‘Dean what are we going to do?’ Dean stood in the spot looking towards Sam and the others still fear in his eyes. Sam and the others disappeared around a corner, as they did Dean took a step forward. ‘Dean were you going?’ Danielle asked as she grabbed Dean’s blue jacket. ‘I’m gonna get Sam back!’ ‘Dean.. Sam just hurt you?’ ‘That wasn’t Sam!. He would never hurt anyone.. He wouldn’t even hurt a fly?.. He’s trapped in there some were.. And I’m going to save him.!’ Dean said as he struggled away from Danielle’s grip and turned to face her. ‘But how?’ Danielle asked. ‘I have no idea?.. I’m just planning this as I go along.’ Dean said as he gave a shrug. Dean ran towards were the Impala was sitting, Danielle stood for a moment watching Dean run to his car, she shook her head before she too ran up to the Impala. Both Dean and Danielle went into the Impala, Dean started up the engine and pushed his feet on the peddle and drove out of the car lot at the motel and headed into town. As Dean entered the town it looked like the place was untouched? ‘Where’d everybody go?’ Danielle asked as she looked around the street. ‘Something doesn’t feel right?..’ ‘What do you mean?’ Danielle asked as she turned over to Dean. ‘Were did they go.. Ten people couldn’t have just disappeared like that?’ Dean said as he parked the car at the edge of the road. Dean stopped the engine and got out of the Impala, as Danielle followed. ‘Okay. We spilt up.’ Dean said as he turned around to Danielle. ‘What?’ ‘Would be better that way.. More area to cover.’ ‘Alright..’ ‘Oki, you go that way, and I’ll go this way.. We meet back at the car in an hour.’ ‘Right’ Dean turned around and walked on, Danielle headed down the straight to the left side. Dean walked up the long deserted road, the street looked almost like a ghost town. Dean stopped as he saw an ally why it was deep and dark, it got darker the further it went in. Dean decided to go into the ally way to see if Sam or any of the others went that way. Dean walked deeper and deeper into the ally way, he stopped by the sound of foot steps coming from behind. Dean turned around to see Sam. ‘Hey Sammy..’ Dean said as he started to walk slowly towards were Sam was standing. ‘Sam I know your in there some were.’ Just as Dean said that Sam raised his arm, as he did Dean stopped as he saw a sliver dagger with red markings on it. Sam through the knife towards Dean, before Dean knew it he was pined to the wall as the dagger went through his jacket, and at that moment Sam through another dagger towards Dean but this time the dagger went through his jacket and right through his left arm, Dean gave out a cry of pain as the dagger went through. Dean started to revolve around the pain, then realised he was pined to a wall. Dean looked over towards Sam who just stared at him, before he started to walk on out towards the ally. ‘Your not going to leave me hear like this are you?’ ‘Sam!.. SAM!!’ Dean yelled out just before Sam disappeared around the corner. ‘Great!.. This is just great!.’ …. Danielle walked and walked but still no sign of anyone. She decided to head back to the car, just as she turned around she felt someone trip her to the ground. Danielle sat up and looked up to see Joanne behind her. ‘Joanne..’ Danielle said as she stood up. ‘Your alright..’ She asked but Joanne stood there looking at her angrily. ‘Joanne?…. Your one of them??’ Joanne gave her a smile just as she did Danielle was thrown through the air, she hit the ground on the other side of the road. She tried to get her self up as she did Joanne started to walk towards her. Danielle stood up and began walking backwards, suddenly from out of no-were a rock was thrown through the air and landed next to Danielle, she looked up to Joanne, then a rock close to Joanne began to move it raised off the ground and speed through the air towards Danielle. Danielle manage to dodge it. ‘Joanne what the hell are you doing?’ Joanne never replied, she just kept thronging things through the air towards Danielle. ‘Joanne I’m warning you!.. You don’t want to see a side of me that you haven’t seen before!’ Danielle said to Joanne, just as she said that a dagger flew past her. Danielle looked behind her then back at Joanne, who was still walking towards her. Danielle gave her a smile as she began to walk backwards again. ‘Guess this is the part were I start running know?’ Danielle said before she ran down the street that she walked up. …. ‘Now isn’t this nice.. Nice and relaxing’ Dean joked to himself still pined to the wall. Dean heard people screaming, he turned to his left to see three people running down the street. ‘Hey..Hey, a little help hear?’ Dean yelled towards them, but they never heard him or noticed him, they just continued to run. ‘Alright… Now what?’ …. Danielle ran as fats as she could towards were the Impala was sitting. She looked back to see if Joanne was still behind her, she then turned back to the car but Dean wasn’t there. Danielle then turned back towards Joanne before she ran down the street were Dean went down. Danielle saw an all way, at the moment as she saw it she ran in the ally, she ran as fast as she could down the long ally way.. ‘Hey!’ Danielle stopped then turned back to see Dean pined to a wall. She walked up to him and stopped in front of him. ‘Your in an awkward possession aren’t you.’ Danielle said with a smile. ‘Very funny.. Get me down from hear.’ Danielle took the dagger out from his jacket on his right arm as she got it out, Dean tried to get the dagger out from his left arm, as he took it out he gave out a yell of pain. ‘We better get going Dean..’ ‘Why?’ Dean said holding his arm. ‘Well, I brought a visitor along.’ ‘uh?.’ Dean said, just before a dagger hit the wall right next to Dean’s head. Dean looked at the dagger then back at Danielle. Danielle looked down the ally way, as Dean turned to look to see Joanne walking towards them. ‘So.. What’s the plan?’ Danielle asked looking back at Dean. ‘I have one.’ ‘What’s that?’ ‘Run.!’ Dean said as he looked back at Danielle, both of them ran out the ally as fast as they could. They ran towards the car, Danielle turned around to see if Joanne followed them but there was no sign of her. ‘Now what?’ Danielle asked as she turned to look at Dean. ‘Not sure?’ ‘How are we going to save Sam and Joanne?’ ‘There is one way.. But it’s total suicide. ‘And what may that be.?’ ‘Summon the Demon’ ‘Su.. Summon the Demon.. That yellowed eyed one?’ ‘Yeah.. It’s the only way to save them.’ ‘Who the hell is going to summon it?’ ‘I will.’ ‘What?.. But, Dean you said it’s total suicide!.. No.. no way I’ll never let you do that?’ ‘Then what Dani?.. what are we supposed to do?’ ‘Something..’ ‘Dani.. There is only one way to help them, and that’s to summon this Demon.’ Danielle looked at Dean then started to think. ‘ok.. So what.. How are we going to summon the thing?’ ‘First things first we need t find a spot were no one else would interfere.’ ‘Dean.. There’s nobody hear?’ ‘Not really.. I saw a few people..’ ‘Were?’ ‘They ran out of town.’ Dean said as he walked over to the back of the Impala. Dean opened the trunk and started to get things out of the trunk and putting them into a bag. ‘What are we going to do when we actually summon the thing?’ ‘Exercise it.’ ‘Alright.. Will it kill it?’ ‘Well not really?..’ ‘What do you mean not really?’ ‘It sends it back to hell.. So. I’ve found this certain Exorcism that sends them into hell for one last time.. Which technically kill’s it.. But It’s really complicated.’ ‘How complicated?’ ‘Well first we have to summon it.. Then say the first half of the exorcism, then pour holly water on it which will make it week, then we say the second half. Then comes the hard part, we need some kind of item that is associated with the Demon, then we have to cover it with holy water then dig it into it’s heart.. that’s if those things actually have hearts.. Well, anyway. Then the last part is to say the last part of the exorcism.’ ‘Ok.. That is complicated?.. When do we start?’ ‘Right now..’
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I got really board and thought i'd wright another Chapter.. I have about two chapters left after this one.. I hope you guys are likeing the story so far?.. Chapter ElevenDean grabbed everything that he would need, holy water, candles, knife, chalk, some dirt, match sticks, a small bowl and his dad’s journal. He put all the items into a bag and thrown it over onto his back. Dean closed the trunk and headed back down the street were they came running up from, Danielle was close behind. Dean headed back into the ally way to do the summoning. ‘Hears fine..’ Dean said as he dropped the bag to the floor. Dean bent down to rumble through the bag, he took out three candles, a bowl, a knife, some dirt, holly water, a peace of chalk and lastly the journal. ‘Hold this..’ Dean said as he raised the journal towards Danielle. Danielle took it off him, Dean took the chalk and started drawing a symbol onto the ground, He then turned around and started drawing another symbol, but this time he drew it a little lighter on the ground. ‘Dean what are you doing?’ Danielle asked. ‘You’ll see.. No time to explain.’ Dean replied without stopping. He then turned back to the first symbol that he drew and took the three candles. Dean started to set then up, he put one on the left and one on the right directly from the each other, then he took the third candle then placed it at the top as he made a pyramid shape. He took the small bowl and put it in the middle of the pyramid, he then poured some of the dirt into the bowl. ‘The journal..’ Dean said to Danielle. Danielle nodded a little before she gave him the journal. Dean took no time to haste as he looked through the pages to find the summing spell. ‘There it is..’ Dean said as he lay the journal onto the ground, he sat down and crossed his legs and began saying the summing spell. ‘accio exspecto mox expello expectoro incomium…’ Dean paused as he took the knife and made a cut in his right hand, he screwed up his eyes by the pain but tried his best not to let that hurt him, the blood dripped into the dirt that was in the bowl. Dean put the knife down and picked up the a match stick he scraped it along the ground and it light, he raised it above the bowl then began saying the next half of the summing spell. ‘nox expello impero…’ Dean finished, as he dropped the match into the dirt as it did a spark appeared then disappeared. Danielle looked around to see if anything had happened, as Dean stood up from the ground he too looked around. ‘What’s supposed to happen?’ Danielle asked looking at Dean. ‘Well the Demon should appear?.’ Dean said turning to look at Danielle. ‘Guess it didn’t work?’ ‘No… It worked..’ Dean said staring behind Danielle to see something move in the shadows. Danielle turned around to see yellow eyes starting to appear. ‘Dani.. hide!’ Dean said.. ‘What?.. But what about you?’ Danielle asked as she turned around to look at Dean. ‘Danielle just hide!!’ Danielle looked at Dean for a second then back at the shadowy figure appearing. Danielle went behind some card-board boxes that were stacked up near to the wall, she hid behind them as she watched the figure appearing through the darkness as Dean looked on towards it. ‘I’m surprised?’ an evil voice crept over the shadows. ‘Yeah… you should be..’ Dean said, as the Demon walked out of the shadows with it’s bright evil yellow eyes staring at him. ‘Why did you summon me hear?.. I have some things to take care of… I have no time to deal with you Winchester.’ ‘You know why..’ ‘I know what?… oh, that’s right your brother.’ The Demon said with an evil smile slowly raised. ‘What have you done to him?’ ‘Nothing… He’s just simply having fun.’ ‘Fun.. Fun.. You think that all this is just a game?’ Dean yelled out a little louder. ‘Why yes!.. life it’s self is just a game .. Sammy, and the other children are having plenty of fun, having fun killing people too.. Just what they were born to do..’ ‘SAM IS NO KILLER!!’ ‘Correction.. He is..’ The Demon said as he gave one of his evil smiles towards Dean. ‘No he’s not!..’ ‘Last time I checked he was.. He killed a lot of things.. And so have you Dean..’ The Demon said as he started walking forward towards Dean. ‘That’s different..’ Dean said as he took a step back. ‘How is that different?.. ‘ The Demon asked walking closer and closer to Dean. ‘You kill for your own sake!.. All you things want is pain and destruction.. Me and Sam hunt you evil sons of bitches to save people’s life’s..’ ‘True.. True.. So tell me Dean, way summon me hear?’ The Demon said as Dean began to walk backwards as the Demon was walking towards him. ‘To bring my brother back!’ ‘I don’t think that’ll happen..’ ‘Why..?’ Dean said as he felt his back hit the wall behind him. ‘Because.. You wont be hear to save him..’ Dean looked into the Demon’s yellow eyes and thought back to were they saved there dad from the Demon, just when they realised there dad was possessed and that the Demon inside his dad began to rip out his heart. Dean shot back to reality, and saw the Demon walking backwards this time then it slowly lower its head. Dean remembered the pain he felt that day, the pain of the thought of losing Sam and his dad that day, the pain of his heart being ripped out. The day that he was broken.. The Demon slowly raised it’s head and his yellow eyes as evil as before. Dean felt the familiar pain shot through his body and straight towards his heart.
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