"A Killer Valentine", 2nd attempt.Lol.

Little early for Valentine's but I just can't wait!


Summary: A high school girl professes her love for this popular guy at her school two weeks before Valentine’s day. She pursues him and kindly asks if he would be her Valentine when the day comes. Unfortunately, he coldly brushes her off which leads to her suicide. One by one...girls who are asked to be his Valentine mysteriously dies. Dean and Sam must find a way to stop this heart broken spirit before she kills the guy until he stops asking and be her Valentine forever....

ACT ONE

FADE IN:

COLUMBUS, INDIANA

2 weeks before Valentine’s Day...

EXT.STATIONARY STORE-AFTERNOON

We see two high school girls wearing their overloaded backpacks wandering around the tiny store. They go to the greeting card station and browse through the racks of Valentine’s day cards. One of the girls sees an eye catching card that has an image of two little kittens sleeping in a basket that says, “Be mine...forever”.

PHOENIX:
(Smiles and shoves it to her friend’s hand)
Here...this would be perfect.

JEN:
(Glances at the card for a minute)
What are you talking about? I don’t even have a Valentine.

PHOENIX:
(Stares at Jen knowing that Jen likes somone)
I thought you always wanted Randall to be your Valentine. Here’s the perfect opportunity...so far...I heard he isn’t taken just yet.

JEN:
(Puts the card back on the rack)
There is no way he will look at me twice.

PHOENIX:
Don’t knock it until you’ve tried it!

JEN:
He likes cheerleaders and those millions of other bimbos in the “I need makeup” club. Why would he pick me?

PHOENIX:
(Laughs)
Damn! You are harsh.

JEN:
I’m just saying. He doesn’t even know I’m alive!(Pauses for a minute) Well...except for those plenty of times he asked me for my notes and homework.

PHOENIX:
(Disagrees)
Just give it a try! You will regret it if you do not ask him and not find out.

JEN:
(Eyes the card and bites her lip)
You sure I should?

PHOENIX:
Yes! If I’m wrong...ice cream is on me.
(Goes over to the rack and takes out one card. She gives it to Jen)

JEN:
(Smiles)
(Jen and Phoenix walks over to the counter and pays for the card)

Jen and Phoenix are waiting at the bus stop. Phoenix moves forward a little to the road to look for her bus. The bus is driving up and it pulls over to the curb.

PHOENIX:
Okay. This is my bus. I’ll see you tomorrow at school.(Boards the bus)

JEN:
(Waves)
Bye.

INT.JEN’S HOUSE-NIGHT

Jen walks into the kitchen and she lays her backpack on the counter. Her mom is occupied at the stove making spaghetti and meatballs.

MOM:
(Pouring the boiled spaghetti into a large glass bowl)
Hey,honey...how was school?

JEN:
It was fine.I’m going to go up to my room and change first.

MOM:
Don’t be too long. Dinner is almost ready.

Jen grabs her backpack off the counter and walks up the stairs to her room.
She sits at her desk and takes out the Valentine card. She thinks for awhile and begins to write in the card. At the end of the card she signs, “You are always in my heart. Love,Jen.”

EXT.SCHOOL-MORNING

Phoenix boards off her bus and she notices Jen walking towards the entrance of the school.

PHOENIX:
(Walks over to Jen)
Morning, sunshine! Are you going to ask him today?

JEN:
(Nervous)
Yeah, I am. And I am trembling inside and out!

PHOENIX:
Just be yourself and let it flow.

JEN:
I’ll try to.

They enter the school hallways and they see Randall near the lockers talking to his buddies.

INT.SCHOOL HALLWAYS

PHOENIX:
Speaking of the devil! I’ll see you later...tell me how it goes.(Walks to the bungalows)

JEN:
(Takes a deep breath)
See ya!

Jen slowly moves her way towards Randall as she takes the card out from her bag. Randall turns around and notices her standing behind him.

RANDALL:
(He smiles at her and flashes his pearly whites)
Hey....

JEN:
(She looks at the other guys and they stare back at her)
Listen...can we talk alone?

RANDALL:
Is this important? I am kinda in the middle of something with the guys.

GUY:
(Closes his locker door)
We can catch up with you later.

RANDALL:
I’ll meet you guys in the gym.

The guys grab their sports equipment and leaves Jen and Randall alone.

RANDALL:
So what did you want to see me about?

JEN:
I was wondering if you have asked anyone to be your Valentine yet?

RANDALL:
Not that I know of. Why?

JEN:
(Holds her card out)
Would you be my Valentine?

RANDALL:
(Looks at the card awkwardly)
Ooh...I don’t know what to say. I think you are a nice girl and all. But you aren’t really my type. I like girls who are those model types and can dress themselves better.(Indicating her vintage floral dress). I’m sure some other guy would be interested.

JEN:
(Her eyes are getting red and she begins to have a tear coming out of her eye)
Oh! I understand. Sorry to bother you. (Drops her card on the gorund and runs off)

Randall doesn’t seem to care. He just picks up his stuff and walks to the gym direction.

INT.JEN’S HOUSE-NIGHT

Jen is all crouched up in her bed crying her tears out. The phone on her nightstand suddenly rings and she picks it up.

JEN:
(Sniffs)
Hello? I can’t talk right now.

PHOENIX:
It’s me, girl! So how did it go?

JEN:
(Wiping her tears)
He turned me down.

PHOENIX:
(Surpirsed)
What? That son of a b****, what a bastard!Are you okay? You sound different.

JEN:
I’m fine. I just need some space.

PHOENIX:
Fine. I’ll leave you alone.Bye.(She hangs up the phone and sighs)

INT. SCHOOL HALLWAY-MORNING

Jen is dressed way different from the way she is normally dressed. She is wearing low ride tight dark blue jeans, red high heels, and a low cut black halter top. Her hair appears like it is done professionally and it looks silky smooth.

JEN:
(She sees Randall at his locker alone and she approaches him)
Hi!

RANDALL:
(Looks at her outfit from bottom to top)
Jen, what did you do to yourself? You look so different.

JEN:
(Smiles)
I did it all for you. You said you like model girlfriends, right? So here I am.

RANDALL:
(Sighs)
I’m very sorry, Jen. I appreciate that you did all this for me. But we are impossible, I just see you as a good friend.

JEN:
(Serious tone)
Good friends? Do you know how much I care about you? I liked you since junior high and you still don’t even notice that! How could you?

RANDALL:
I’m sorry.

JEN:
(Pulls a gun out of her coat)
Sorry doesn’t help!!!

RANDALL:
(Shocked)
Jen! Put the gun down. Let’s talk about this!

JEN:
(She sticks the gun to her head)
We’re already done talking! (Pulls the trigger)

Everybody in the hallway hears the loud band and they start running in different directions. Randall is looking down at his sports coat with blood splattered on it. We see Jen laying on the ground with dark and thick blood running out of her head and she has a semi-smile on her face with her eyes wide open.
Phoenix is just passing through her classes and she watches the people running.

PHOENIX:
Wh-at the?(Pulls a boy aside) What’s going on? (Confused)

BOY:
(Frightend)
A girl just shot herself in the head while she was talking to a guy.

PHOENIX:
(Concerned)
What girl? What did she look like?

BOY:
I don’t know. I just saw her back and all of a sudden I hear a bang and I see her on the ground dead!

The boy runs off and Phoenix slowly looks for the scene of where it happened. She turns at a corner and we zoom in on Jen’s body. Phoenix drops her books and screams.

cant wait to hear or is it read more?...either way keep going!!!!

What do you mean by is it read more? Is it because of my habit of stopping midway? I'm trying to cut the habit.
And there's no Cassie in here cause I got stuck w/what to do with her in my other story. I will just stick w/Dean and Sam in this story until I get my head straight. Practice makes perfect!

Sorry if I made a bad description of the case...I did make this up.Lol.

ACT TWO:

FADE IN:

INT. DEAN’S IMPALA-MORNING

Dean is sitting in the driver’s seat looking through his cassette tape collection. He pops one into the cassette player and turns up the volume. The volume is blasting out of the speakers like crazy that can cause someone to go deaf.

SAM:
(Looks at Dean)
Hey, do you mind?

DEAN:
(Bopping his head to the rock beats)
Remember what I said, Sammy? Driver picks the music. Shotgun shuts his cakehole! (Smiles)

SAM:
(Rolls his eyes)
I’m trying to read here.

DEAN:
(Sighs)
(Turns down the volume a little)
Okay…not because you told me to but because you are my little brother and I respect you.

SAM:
Thank you! (Continues to read an article from the laptop)

DEAN:
(Trying to read over the laptop)
What kind of lifeless freak are we dealing with this time?

SAM:
One week ago…Jen Moore, a student at Columbus High shot herself to death in front of her crush because he turned her down for Valentine's Day.She shot herself in the head right then and there. And then days later…his supposed Valentines start dying in mysterious ways with their heart ripped out and next to their dead bodies, they find a burnt black rose. Police questioned Randall Larez if he had anything to do with those deaths but he had no motive. Why would he kill somebody he just asked to be his? It makes no sense. So I’m thinking it’s Jen Moore…she died of heartbreak and anger so she must be coming back to kill those girls so Randall will never be happy with a Valentine again. Then after she’s through will all of them…she’s probably going to kill him on Valentine’s Day so they can remain to be one of those sick ghost couples.

DEAN:
(Eyes wide open)
Wow! Girls these days…they get more and more dangerous for love.

SAM:
Yeah tell me about it.

DEAN:
But how do you know if it really is her spirit? Maybe it was something that possessed her to kill herself and now it is killing the others?

SAM:
Like a cupid on a rampage or something? (Laughs)

DEAN:
Hell yeah! It could happen.

SAM:
We have to go to Jen’s house and talk to her parents and find out what kind of person she was. If she was suicidal….

DEAN:
(Interrupts)
Psycho gone wild….

SAM:
(Concentrates back to the laptop)
I’ll look up more stuff on the net to see if there were similar cases like this and you keep an eye out on the road.

DEAN:
(Turns on the engine)
First…can I ask you something, Sammy?

SAM:
Yeah?

DEAN:
Will you be my Valentine? Cause I get oh so lonely at night! (Jokingly)

SAM:
(Playfully hits Dean on the arm)
Shut your ass up and drive!

Loool!
Too good!
They should film this FF!^^
Cause its Sam and Dean style in perfection!

Hey Its good keep it up it can't wait for more you are doing a really good job!!!!

DEAN:
(Turns on the engine)
First…can I ask you something, Sammy?

SAM:
Yeah?

DEAN:
Will you be my Valentine? Cause I get oh so lonely at night! (Jokingly)

SAM:
(Playfully hits Dean on the arm)
Shut your ass up and drive!

that is so funny lol

Thnx! I had to think really hard to see what funny things they should say. I'm not a funny person usually so it's hard.

Okay....here's....

ACT THREE:

FADE IN:

EXT.JEN’S HOUSE-AFTERNOON

The impala pulls up to the curb with the music still blasting out from the stereo. Sam and Dean gets out of the car. They are dressed like high school boys with their sports jackets and rock t-shirts. Dean opens the trunk and tosses over the textbooks and backpacks to Sam.

DEAN:
(Tugging at his shirt)
So who do you want to be, Beavis or Butthead? (Cracks up)

SAM:
You can be butthead anytime! (Laughs)

DEAN:
You moron!

SAM:
Come on...hott girls love buttheads! (Winks his eye at Dean)

DEAN:
(Picks up a tiny rock from the ground and flicks it at Sam)

Sam and Dean walk to the door and ring the doorbell. They look around at the beautiful exterior of the house and someone opens the door. The woman expresses a bitter look, like she has been crying non-stop, 7 days a week..

JEN’S MOM:
(Sniffing her nose)
Can I help you?

SAM:
(Friendly smile)
Hi, you’re Jen’s mom?

JEN’S MOM:
Yes. Who are you? (Eyeing Sam and Dean)

DEAN:
We were classmates of Jen... we just wanted to stop by and pay our condolences.

JEN’S MOM:
(Leaves the rest of the door open)
Come on in....

INT.JEN'S HOUSE

Dean follows Sam into the house and he wanders his eyes around the living room. Jen’s mom stops at the couch and she sits down.

JEN’S MOM:
(Looks at Sam & Dean)
Don’t be shy...sit.

Dean and Sam sit down and they put their textbooks and backpacks on the floor.

SAM:
We’re very sorry to hear about Jen. She was always so positive in life and we could always depend a smile from her no matter what.

JEN’S MOM:
(Staring at the photos of Jen displayed at the fireplace)
Yeah...she was. ( A tear begins to fall down)

DEAN:
Do you know what would have pushed her to do this?

JEN’S MOM:
I have no idea. One day...she was telling me about her day at school and how great it was. And the next day..I get a call from the police saying she is dead. How am I supposed to deal?

DEAN:
I’m sorry to ask. It’s just that we all miss her so much and we just wanted to know why she would want to leave a lot of people who loved her. We wanted to find out if it was....

SAM:
(Interrupts)
Actually...we wanted to find out when the funeral is. We would like to attend and see her one last time if that is okay.

JEN’S MOM:
It’s tomorrow afternoon at Fishers Brothers Funeral home(Takes a card from the coffee table and gives it to Sam)

SAM:
(Receives the card and reads the information)
Thank you for letting us come and get some rest. Jen wouldn’t want to see you like this. She would want you to move on and let her live in your heart.

JEN’S MOM:
(Slight smile)
You are so kind to say that. But it will take awhile.

DEAN:
(Gathers all the boys belongings)
We’ll show ourselves out, ma’am.

Sam gives Jen’s mom a comfort hug and he walks to the door.

JEN’S MOM:
Jen was so lucky to have friends like you.

She walks behind them and closes the door.

EXT. DEAN’S IMPALA

DEAN:
(Dissapointed tone)
Now what college boy?

SAM:
What’s with the attitude?

DEAN:
(Rolls his eyes and gets into the driver’s seat)
I thought you wanted to investigate around the house but after a five minute interview with Barbara Walters...you decided to bail.

SAM:
Can’t you see she was torn up about it? You don’t wanna upset a woman with a broken heart. You should know better.

DEAN:
Well, you could of at least say, “Can I use your bathroom? And if you don’t mind...snoop around your dead daughter’s bedroom...”

SAM:
(Sighs)
I already have the information here.(Gives Dean the card)

DEAN:
(Reading the card)
What are we going to do with a card, Sammy?

SAM:
We are going to go to the funeral tomorrow, wait until nightime, lurk around her grave, and burn her into dust.(Grins)

DEAN:
You sure that would work, smartass?

SAM:
That’s what we normally do to evil spirits, don’t we? Why are you being so difficult this time?

DEAN:
I’m not saying it works every time. Remember with “I know what you did last summer?”

SAM:
Look...if burning her bones doesn’t work. We’ll figure something else then, okay? (Nods)

DEAN:
You’re the bookworm and I’m the con artist. 2006's Bonnie and Clyde....you’ll be Bonnie. (Throws the keys to Sam)

* I don't know if I should have done it like this...lol.

Should I continue this or is it getting too lame? I need some feedback. Thank You.

hey ur doin great..keep it up...plzzz...write more

I'll post more later.

Yes you are doing great!! this is getting good you should definately write more=)

Yeah...I wanna see how it ends!

ACT FOUR:

FADE IN:

INT.FISHER’S BROTHERS FUNERAL HOME- 12P.M.

DEAN:
(Notices the room is full of pretty girls sitting in the front row)
(Whispers to Sam)
I could die happy if a bunch of hot girls came to my funeral.

SAM:
Sit your ass down!

DEAN:
What? It could happen…. Just hire a group of Pussycat dolls and have them mourn for me. (Smiles)

They walk over to the last row of seats in the back of the room and sits down. The funeral begins and the funeral director runs the program. Jen’s mom and a few others get up to the podium and release their emotions about Jen, what kind of person she was and how she changed their lives.

Few hours later….

DEAN:
(Close to falling asleep)

SAM:
(Shoves him in the arm)
Hey…!

DEAN:
(Snaps out of it and sits up)
What?

SAM:
Stop falling asleep. It’s almost time.

DEAN:
It was just for a second.

Two men carry the casket outside of the room. A bunch of people follows them outside and they get into separate limousines and cars. Dean and Sam jumps into their Impala and drive along with them.

EXT.CEMETERY-NIGHT

Dean and Sam are sitting inside the Impala looking out from the window.

DEAN:
(Watches as Jen’s family and friends drive away from the cemetery)
I thought they would never leave. Geesh! Think we’ll see Buffy come out and kick some vampire ass?

SAM:
(Opens the door)
I doubt it.

Sam gets out of the car. He opens up the trunk and takes out the shovel and gasoline. Dean flicks his lighter on and off to make sure it is working properly. They head off to the gravestone and start digging through the layers and layers of dirt. They get to the end of the layer and hit the top of the casket with the shovel.

SAM:
(Wipes off his sweat)
Finally! I have a joke for you. How many layers of dirt does it take to get to the center of a rotting corpse?
(Laughing)

DEAN:
(Stares at Sam)
Very funny….

Dean reaches for the cover of the casket and opens it. He covers his nose and feels like barfing from the smell of the dead. He kneels down to take a look at the body.

DEAN:
Fresh, huh? (Looks up at Sam)

SAM:
You want me to do it?

DEAN:
And let me miss the honors? No way!
(He takes out his lighter)

SAM:
(Pours huge amounts of gasoline and rock salt over the body)
Sleep tight, honey.

DEAN:
(Lits the body on fire)
Goodbye, Valentine! Here are a few candies to hold you over. (Drops those valentine heart shaped candies into the coffin)

SAM:
What you do that for?

DEAN:
What? She must be hungry from staying in there for days.

SAM:
(Shakes his head)
Whatever, dude.

The body burns up into dust. They hose down the flames and shuts the coffin. Dean and Sam re-bury the coffin and gather their tools to leave the cemetery. They walk to the Impala but they hear a loud scream coming from the cemetery. They run back inside to the cemetery and they see a girl standing next to a dead body. The body is also shown dead like the other Valentines. The body is burnt to a crisp, heart ripped out with pools of blood, and a black rose on the ground next to it.

DEAN:
(He expresses a fed up look)
Man…!