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 "Love hurts like hell", Telling Cassie the truth
JensensMistress
Posted: Jan 12 2006, 08:26 PM


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Okay, I changed the shaved hair to "Strands of her hair has been lost". The demon does need something of hers to become exactly like her,IMO.
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JensensMistress
Posted: Jan 13 2006, 06:26 AM


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ACT FIVE

FADE IN:

INT. GREENWOOD INN MOTEL-5AM

Dean is gaining consciousness in and out. He is lying naked on the motel bed with masses amount of stitches and John bandages up the wound. The woman storms out of the bathroom with a vile overflowing with thick liquid in her hand.

WOMAN:
(Sits on the bed)
Drink this.

DEAN:
(In pain)
Where am I? (Moves his head up slowly and drinks the liquid)

WOMAN:
(Wipes his sweat)
You're safe.... for now.

The woman stares up and notices Cassie at the doorway with the gun in possession of her hand.

WOMAN:
(Aggressive manner)
Who are you?

Cassie is in shock to answer her. She drops the gun and burst in tears. The woman looks on while Cassie continues to painfully smile at Dean.

CASSIE:
(Rushes to Dean)
Oh my god.... Dean. I thought you were dead. I’m so glad to see you!

DEAN:
(Smiles back)
Cassie, I’m glad you are okay too. I thought I lost you to that thing!

JOHN:
(Interrupt Dean)
Cassie! Did anyone follow you here?

CASSIE:
(Shakes her head)
No, I held this paramedic hostage and I threatened him to drive me here. But I made sure he drove off without seeing which way I went!

JOHN:
(Looking at Cassie’s wounds)
My god! What happened?

CASSIE:
(Explains)
I don't exactly remember but...
Dean and I went back to the cabin after we went fishing and I decided to cook him dinner. But I smelled like fish so I decided to change. Dean was glued to a picture he saw on the wall so I decided to leave him alone and go change. I went upstairs and I heard like a growling noise from one of the rooms. I followed the noise and I saw like a human figure flaming with fire standing in the center of the room. I wanted to run but I was immovable gaining some slight dizziness and I passed out. I woke up in a dark cellar with all these wounds that I do not even recall how it happened.
I attempted to escape but the door was extremely heavy and it locked by itself. Is that place haunted?

WOMAN:
(Sarcastically)
Of course it’s haunted!! Do you even need to ask?

JOHN:
It’s very hard to explain everything to you right now, Cassie. But you need to keep whatever you know to yourself and I mean nobody needs to know this except for the four of us.

CASSIE:
I understand, sir!

DEAN:
(Dean begins to look stronger like he wasn’t even stabbed. He removes his blanket and sits on the bed)
Cassie, I didn’t mean to drag you into this. If I knew I was going to put you in so much danger…I would have made it less painful for you and just keep you in the dark. But I couldn’t keep any more secrets from you. I wanted everything between us to be solid and lie free.

CASSIE:
(Concerned)
Danger? Why would you be putting me in danger?

DEAN:
What I do…I’m not a construction worker. I’m a--------

CASSIE:
(Confused)
Wait a minute…. It’s coming back to me now.

JOHN:
(Intensely)
What is, Cassie?

CASSIE:
I heard it all in the cellar….

DEAN:
My confession…?

JOHN:
(Interrupts)
How is that possible? We all know it wasn’t her you were talking to when you got stabbed.

WOMAN:
Stupidly….

CASSIE:
(Hesitantly continues)
It was like I was down there…my mind. But physically I was up there. I could hear everything he was telling me through this spirit. It was relaying the conversation to my mind. But all I could do was listen and suck it all in. What did it want with you, Dean?

DEAN:
I don’t know.

WOMAN:
It wanted his life. Hello?

CASSIE:
It’s because you told me what you did…ghost hunting? That’s why they are coming after you?

JOHN:
That might not be the case. It might have millions of motives. It’s hard to predict what evil wants and how they plan. That’s why I have taught Sam and Dean everything they have to know about the supernatural so they can at least protect themselves for the time being.

CASSIE:
(Touches Dean’s face)
I’m sorry about your mom, Dean. If I had knew…. I would have been there for you when you needed a shoulder.

DEAN:
(Hugs Cassie)
It’s already done and in the past now. I’m just glad you’re okay. (Squeezes Cassie’s hand)

WOMAN:
(Rolls her eyes)
Now that Romeo and Juliet are done. Can we flash now? Because we have a lot of company.

John walks to the window and he notices police cars are driving up.

DEAN:
(Stands up and holds Cassie’s hand)
We’ll never make it.

WOMAN:
Not if I can help it!

CASSIE:
What are you guys going to do?

WOMAN:
You’ll find out when they get through that door.

The police break down the door.

POLICE:
All of you freeze! (Aims gun forward)

WOMAN:
(Sly smile)
Whatever you say! (Drops a grenade shaped bottle and the room fills with mist)

All of a sudden Dean, John, Cassie, and the woman appear to be in an unknown building.

DEAN:
(Suspiciously)
How did we get here and what did you just do?

WOMAN:
(Laughs)
What is up with all these questions? Aren’t you just glad we escaped?

DEAN:
Dad, tell me who she is and why is she helping us?

JOHN:
(Reluctantly)
She’s your aunt…

CASSIE:
(Turns to Dean)
You have an aunt?

DEAN:
(Disbelief)
You never mentioned this to me! (Confronts John)

John turns his back on Dean and takes a few steps forward.

WOMAN:
You know why? Because he is a selfish bastard that didn’t want me near you boys.

DEAN:
(Tears fill up his eyes)
Why…dad?

JOHN:
(Deep sigh)
Because she isn’t human and she is dead.

Cassie and Dean are about to look at the woman again but she is gone.





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JensensMistress
Posted: Jan 13 2006, 06:36 AM


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I think I'm wearing out this Cassie & Dean story. *Sigh* banghead.gif
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goldielockz143
Posted: Jan 13 2006, 12:10 PM


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dead! trust me u cant be wearing them out bc in my fic their married with one kid and twins on the way
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JensensMistress
Posted: Jan 13 2006, 05:40 PM


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QUOTE (goldielockz143 @ Jan 13 2006, 04:10 AM)
dead! trust me u cant be wearing them out bc in my fic their married with one kid and twins on the way

Yes, dead. I didn't want to make her human and say she's a witch or whatever. That's been used so many times. I'm ending it soon so I can't explain eveything down to the last bone. Lol. Maybe she will pop up again.Hehe.
That's what script writers ususally do from what I researched on. Just try to put it in short and explanatory detail but not too long that will bore the audience.
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JensensMistress
Posted: Jan 13 2006, 05:43 PM


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I've started on so many FanFics as you could probably see on the boards...but this is the only one I have interest in finishing. I'm just writing this story to pass time during lunch hours.
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Posted: Jan 13 2006, 05:45 PM


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QUOTE (JensensMistress @ Jan 13 2006, 06:36 AM)
I think I'm wearing out this Cassie & Dean story. *Sigh* banghead.gif

I don't think that your are I think its cute the way Dean is acting. and goldielockz143 is right you only have then dating and she aas them mirred witch is os cute!! but don't worry your not wearing them out.
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JensensMistress
Posted: Jan 13 2006, 09:19 PM


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I wrote the beginning without really thinking about an end to it. Lol. I don't often write Fics so I'm like, "Now what should I do?"
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goldielockz143
Posted: Jan 13 2006, 10:25 PM


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i usualy figure out the begnning and end but i have trouble figuring out how to get there
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JensensMistress
Posted: Jan 14 2006, 12:15 AM


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ACT SIX

FADE IN:

INT. BUILDING-MORNING

Cassie and Dean walks around the bricks of walls to look for the woman who appeared to be his aunt. Dean had zero knowledge about her until the day he almost died. They search behind the exit doors, between the rows of cars, and she was nowhere to be seen.

DEAN:
(Raises his hands above his head in frustration)
(Zones in on his dad)
She’s not dead. You’re just making up another one of your impassable lies that I am getting sick of already! Where is she?

JOHN:
(Looking through his baggage)
I did tell you the truth.

DEAN:
Is it really? Because I am numb from your lies and I honestly don’t know when to believe you.

JOHN:
(Looks over to Cassie)
Cassie, do you think we can have some time alone? We need to sort things out. Will you get home okay?

CASSIE:
(She is standing by a wall and she slowly goes to Dean)
I’ll let you guys talk. (Kisses Dean on the cheek)

DEAN:
She’s hurt, dad! I need to take her to a hospital.

CASSIE:
I can make it there on my own. I’ll just take a taxi or something.

DEAN:
(Wraps his arm around Cassie’s back)
I’ll help you out.

Dean pushes the exit door open and he slams it with a loud bang.

JOHN:
(Thinking in his mind)
This is for the best , son.

John picks up his duffel bag filled with all his hunting tools and he searches for a car to steal. He opens the door to a truck and jumps in. He struggles with his heavy bag and his journal slips out and it drops on the ground. We see him drive off through the parking gates.

EXT. BUILDING

A taxi pulls up to the curb. Dean opens the door for Cassie and she goes in.

DEAN:
(Ducks through the door)
You sure you’ll be fine?

CASSIE:
(Smiles)
I’m sure. We’ll have time to talk. Your dad is more important right now.
I’ll see you later.

DEAN:
We will take a walk on the beach when we are done. Okay?

CASSIE:
(Stares down at her leg)
With this leg?

DEAN:
Umm…. yeah…not such a good idea. I’ll ring you up later.

CASSIE:
(Moves forward from her seat and hugs Dean tightly)
I love you!

DEAN:
(Half smile)
I love you more!

Dean closes the door and blows a kiss to Cassie while she is looking back in the taxi. The taxi drives off and Dean turns around to the building and walk in.

DEAN:
(Loud voice)
Okay! I’m ready to hear what you have to say!

Dean notices his dad isn’t there anymore. He roams around the area to see if he was hiding from something but nothing. He comes across the journal his dad dropped earlier and he picks it up.

DEAN:
(Looking around)
DAD!

INT. TAXI

TAXI DRIVER:
(Talking on his cell phone)
Where to again?

CASSIE:
481 Cypress Lane.

TAXI DRIVER:
Okay. Be there in 20 minutes.

The taxi driver focuses on the road and he continues his conversation on the cell phone. Cassie’s cell phone rings and she answers it.

CASSIE:
Hello?

DEAN:
(Worried)
Cassie, it’s Dean!

CASSIE:
What’s wrong, Dean? Did something happen?

DEAN:
My dad is gone! I looked everywhere for him and he is gone. I don’t know where he went.

CASSIE:
(Moves up from her seat)
Did you check the motel? Maybe he went back there to get something.

DEAN:
(Frustrated)
Yes! I already did and he’s not there. Where are you right now? You might be in danger.

CASSIE:
(Lying)
I’m just getting out of the hospital and I’m going to head home.

DEAN:
Stay right there. I’ll be there in thirty minutes.

CASSIE:
Okay. Love you and don’t worry too much. I’m sure he is fine. Maybe he went for a walk.

DEAN:
(Looks at the journal in his hand)
I don’t think so.

CASSIE:
(Puzzled)
Huh?

DEAN:
Nothing. I’ll see you later.

CASSIE:
Alight, bye.

Dean and Cassie hang up their cell phones.

EXT. 481 Cypress Lane-NIGHT

Cassie walks out of the car and the taxi drives off.

CASSIE:
(Opens the front door)
(A man appears from the dark)
Who’s there?(Looking around)

INT. CASSIE’S HOUSE
MAN:
(Evil voice)
You really think I wouldn’t find you?

CASSIE:
(Runs to the door)

The door slams shut and she attempts to run but she cannot move.

What do you want from me? I gave you all I knew about Dean Winchester.

MAN:
Did you?

CASSIE:
You told me to lure him to the cabin and I did. You didn’t say you were going to kill him! I thought you wanted me to get closer to him so he can lead us to Sam Winchester!

MAN:
Plans have changed!

He breaks Cassie’s arm with his powers.

CASSIE:
(Painfully)
Please…. don’t do this. I’ll do anything you ask me to do.

MAN:
(Laughing)
You really love this man? Then you would die for him!

CASSIE:
(Crying)
No…

EXT. CASSIE’S HOUSE

Dean arrives in front of the door and he knocks.

DEAN:
Cassie, are you there? Let me in.
(He waits for an answer but there is none. He kicks the door open and he rushes in)

CASSIE:
(Steps out of a room and looks like she was never injured)
Hey, honey!

DEAN:
You sure heal fast don’t you? (Surprised)

CASSIE:
The doctors took care of me. (Forced smile)

Dean and Cassie go over to a couch and they sit down.

DEAN:
(About to speak)

CASSIE:
(Interrupts with an evil look but Dean does not notice)
Dean…. I think we should stop seeing each other.

Dean stares at Cassie in disbelief.
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goldielockz143
Posted: Jan 14 2006, 12:59 AM


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ahhhh!!!!
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JensensMistress
Posted: Jan 14 2006, 01:01 AM


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You wanted her to live, huh?
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goldielockz143
Posted: Jan 14 2006, 01:03 AM


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it doesnt matter to me as long as dean is okay
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JensensMistress
Posted: Jan 14 2006, 01:08 AM


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And you will have to forgive me if I do something wrong w/the characters because I am a bad storyteller. Lol. But might as well finish it since I have gotten this far. At least I am not resolving to lame and cheesy scenes....I've seen a lot of bad movies like that. laugh.gif
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goldielockz143
Posted: Jan 14 2006, 01:13 AM


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ur story is awesome u've done a great job. i also try to stay away from chessy stuff. sometimes i'll write something and i go "my god that sounds like it should be in a soap opera or a disney movie" then i delete it lol

yeh finish ur story i cant wait to see wat happens
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