Skin created by chawk. Find more great skins at the IF Skin Zone.




InvisionFree - Free Forum Hosting
Free Forums. Reliable service with over 8 years of experience.

Learn More · Sign-up for Free
Welcome to Supernatural. We hope you enjoy your visit.
You're currently viewing our forum as a guest. This means you are limited to certain areas of the board and there are some features you can't use. If you join our community, you'll be able to access member-only sections, and use many member-only features such as customizing your profile, sending personal messages, and voting in polls. Registration is simple, fast, and completely free.

Join our community!

If you're already a member please log in to your account to access all of our features:

Name:   Password:


Pages: (185) [1] 2 3 ... Last » ( Go to first unread post )

 The Caverns, TERROR IN THE DEPTHS BELOW
charmed1of2
Posted: Aug 20 2006, 01:15 PM


Never trust any Vampires holding Lasagna
Group Icon

Group: Super Moderator
Posts: 9,076
Member No.: 5,794
Joined: 1-July 06



wub.gif OK GUYS I'M STARTING MY SECOND ONE LOL

BEFORE I DO I WANT TO THANK THOSE THAT READ MY FIRST ONE I DIDN'T EXPECT OVER 3000 LOL

ALSO I WANT U TO KNOW MY KIDS ARE LAUGHING NOW CALLING THEM THE TORTURE TWINS BUT THEN THEY COME TO ME AND SAY HEY MOM DO THIS TO THEM LOL

THIS STORY IS VERY DIFF FROM MY LAST SO I HOPE U LIKE IT,ALSO I HAVE A LITTLE HELPER TO TWEAK ANY CHAPTER I'M NOT HAPPY WITH, EVERYONE GETS A COOKIE IF U GUESS CORRECTLY LOL OK HERE WE GO



THE CAVERNS

CHAPTER 1

The Impala pulled into the gravel lot and screetched to a halt. Dean looked at the row of tents stretched out in front of him and scowled.

"Are you sure this is the right place?" he asked glancing over at Sam.

Looking down at the newspaper article, Sam nodded" Yeah, this is it. Doesn't look much like a headquarters but what did you expect way out here?"

Getting out of the car, Dean pulled his jacket tighter around him. The frigid cold air was biting out in the open with no cover up. He shrugged "Not a bunch of tents , that's for sure."

Sam got out and looked around at the different size tents in front of them. "Well, I'm betting the large one is where we'll find Dr. Markingham , and we don't want to be late , so lets go."

Dean just grunted and followed Sam into the large tent. "Hope they have heat." he muttered.

Looking around, they saw the tent had been equiped with the best state of the art survailence equipment and had computers and maps on almost every table.

A man in his sixtys walked over "You must be Dean and Sam Wilcox, we're happy you could join our team."

Shaking his hand, Sam smiled "We're glad to be here Dr. Markingham. Has there been any word on the other group?"

Shaking his head sadly the doctor waved them over to a table against the back of the tent.

"No, and frankly I'm getting worried. It's been three days sense the last contact with Murphy."

Sitting down, Dean glanced at his brother. Facing the doctor again, he watched the play of emotions that crossed his face.

"So what time is everyone leaving in the morning?" Dean asked.

Picking up a map, Dr. Markingham replyed "The group is meeting at seven to get the equipment, it will be about an hours drive to the site."

Showing the area of the site on the map, Dean listened carefully as the doctor relayed the last information that Murphy had given them before losing contact.

Sam stared at the red mark on the map, and suddenly felt dizzy, his head started to ache.

Rubbing his temple,he glanced over at Dean, "Hey Dean, I need to get some of our equipment out of the car, I'll meet you out there."

"Yeah, I'll be out in a sec Sam."

Sam nodded to Dr. Markingham and made a haisty retreat out of the tent.

Trying to focus where he was going, he got as far as the car before the blinding pain ripped through his skull.

Dropping to his knees, Sam bent over clutching his head "Oh God!" he groaned.


FLASH; Darkness surrounded him. He could barely see and the dim light he was holding in his hand was proving to not assist in his current situation very well.

Sam watched as the man screamed. The horrifying creature ripped off long strips of flesh eating and sucking on them.

The bloodied muscle flesh smacked loudly as the creature devoured it.

Staring at the creature, Sam saw sharp horns at the sides of its head, and red markings on its chest.

The claws of the monster were ripping bits and chunks out of the victims skin. The man's ear piercing screams had ceased, as he lay there surrenduring to his gruesome fate.

The creature grabbed the victim's arm and ruthlessly ripped it off. The monster messily chewed on the arm like a rabid dog would if given a turkey leg.

Dean walked outside, the cold carried thru the wind mercelessly, and he searched around for Sam. Walking closer to his car, he heard a moan.

He quickly ran over to the other side of the car, and immediatly spotted his brother.

Sam was laying on the ground, his hands gripping the sides of his head firmly, he was in pain.

TBC biggrin.gif wub.gif

Jump to Chapter 2
Top
aworland
Posted: Aug 20 2006, 01:31 PM


SAMMY FAN


Group: Members
Posts: 1,212
Member No.: 1,702
Joined: 25-January 06



very good start

plz add more
Top
penguita38
Posted: Aug 20 2006, 02:14 PM


AKA: Penguita38
Group Icon

Group: Retired Admin
Posts: 4,337
Member No.: 3,995
Joined: 19-April 06



Would it be fair if I guessed who it was? Lol. Just kidding.

That chapter was awesome! ! ! I am enjoying this story. When you sent me chapter five... I was so lost, but that is because I need to read the ones in the middle! ! !Lol.

So hurry and update so my mind doesn't have to guess anymore!

I am not going to threaten you today... but maybe on the next one... I will give you a break for now! ! !

That creature sounds awful and ruthless! Yikes!

Update soon, Lorrie! ! !
Top
lottie122001
Posted: Aug 20 2006, 03:36 PM


Fire Demon


Group: Members
Posts: 6,433
Member No.: 5,293
Joined: 28-June 06



Brilliant start biggrin.gif I'm loving this fic already tongue.gif
Top
blink182rule
Posted: Aug 20 2006, 03:52 PM


Will you dance with my cheese???


Group: Members
Posts: 519
Member No.: 3,064
Joined: 8-March 06



this is really good can't wait for an update!
Top
Steffs
Posted: Aug 20 2006, 10:47 PM


Steffs
Group Icon

Group: Forum Moderator
Posts: 4,114
Member No.: 2,741
Joined: 24-February 06




EEEWWWWWWEEEEEEWWWW!!!!!

Its a good job i've eaten my dinner. Bring on the gore.

On no not again, poor Sam, come on Dean, Sick, Loved it, want more.


Luv


Steffs
Top
lcaron3
Posted: Aug 20 2006, 10:48 PM


lcaron7055


Group: Members
Posts: 1,500
Member No.: 469
Joined: 28-November 05



Great 1st chapter.

Please post more soon.
Top
hellokitty001
Posted: Aug 20 2006, 11:21 PM


Advanced Member


Group: Members
Posts: 46
Member No.: 5,814
Joined: 1-July 06



Great story cheerleader.gif
Top
qsmkitten
Posted: Aug 21 2006, 06:38 AM


Tech Steff Super Genius- COMPTIA A+ Jan 22nd 2009


Group: members
Posts: 3,715
Member No.: 4,782
Joined: 22-May 06



Good chapter. Poor Sammy with his visions. I love the guy getting his arm ripped off and eaten off.
Top
SUPERFAN#1
Posted: Aug 21 2006, 06:43 AM


Wendigo


Group: Members
Posts: 702
Member No.: 5,596
Joined: 30-June 06



Wow, you've got me hooked already! I love Sam's visions, they always seem to make the stories more intense!!! Update soon!!!!!!! laugh.gif
Top
candycane
Posted: Aug 21 2006, 03:01 PM


Come with us now on a journey through time and space!


Group: Members
Posts: 1,740
Member No.: 2,400
Joined: 14-February 06



already gt me interested!!! biggrin.gif
Top
charmed1of2
Posted: Aug 21 2006, 10:30 PM


Never trust any Vampires holding Lasagna
Group Icon

Group: Super Moderator
Posts: 9,076
Member No.: 5,794
Joined: 1-July 06



wub.gif HERE U GO I HOPE U HAVEN'T EATEN YET LOL



CHAPTER 2


"Sam!" Dean yelled worriedly as he dropped to his knees and grabbed his brother's shoulders.

FLASH; Sam watched as the demon like creature nibbled on tiny morsels of bloodied flesh. The victim had been stripped clean, the only thing remaining on the ivory white bones were specs of red leftover muscles and tendons.

The beast bent over and searched the victim for any pieces of flesh that were hidden on the bare bones.

Raising its head, it sniffed the air. The creature caught the scent of something, something fresh, someone new.

It turned his head slowly and stared directly at Sam. It smiled wickedly at the young hunter.

Its sharp teeth nowfully exposed. The things eyes were glowing red, a bright cardinal red.

The red in the creatures eyes matched the blood that was dripping from its chin.

"I can smell you Sam, and I know I'll see you soon." the creature mocked, preparing itself for its next carnage, and that was Sam.

Jerking back Sam opened his eyes, trying to pull air into his heaving lungs. He became aware of Dean grasping his shoulders.

"Sam, you okay?" Dean's look of concern written all over his face.

Pushing Dean away, Sam crawled over a few feet and started heaving up his breakfast he'd eaten earlier.

Dean grimiced as he watched Sam throwing up until he was just dry heaving.

Putting his hand on the back of Sam's neck, Dean could feel the tremors shaking through Sam's lanky form.

"You okay now Sammy?" he whispered.

Spitting a few more times on the ground, Sam straightened back up whipping his sleeve across his mouth.

Drawing air slowly into his lungs, Sam looked at his brother "Yeah,I'm fine Dean."

Knowing when his brother was lieing, Dean grabbed his shoulders "Don't bull me Sam!"

Sighing, Sam slowly pushed himself up, swaying on his feet Dean grabbed his arm to steady him.

Brushing Dean's hand away, Sam opened the trunk and sorted through the weapons.

Standing beside him, Dean sighed "What are we getting ourselves into Sam?"

Sam stared into the trunk, not looking at his brother. "They're dead Dean, and we're going to need some major weapons when we go down there."

Dean looked at Sam , then stared into the trunk "Damn, I had to ask , didn't I " he muttered.


TBC biggrin.gif

Jump to Chapter 3
Top
sheilabes
Posted: Aug 21 2006, 10:52 PM


sheilabes


Group: Banned
Posts: 1,644
Member No.: 618
Joined: 6-December 05



Great,start. I love it . I can not wait for more.!


Please update soon, I'm going to read your other
Top
SUPERFAN#1
Posted: Aug 21 2006, 10:59 PM


Wendigo


Group: Members
Posts: 702
Member No.: 5,596
Joined: 30-June 06



Oh, very suspenseful! I can't wait to see what happens next, please update soon!!! biggrin.gif
Top
blink182rule
Posted: Aug 22 2006, 11:12 AM


Will you dance with my cheese???


Group: Members
Posts: 519
Member No.: 3,064
Joined: 8-March 06



this is so good, i can't wait for more biggrin.gif
Top
DealsFor.me - The best sales, coupons, and discounts for you

Topic OptionsPages: (185) [1] 2 3 ... Last »



Hosted for free by InvisionFree* (Terms of Use: Updated 2/10/2010) | Powered by Invision Power Board v1.3 Final © 2003 IPS, Inc.
Page creation time: 0.2712 seconds | Archive