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truth or dare, this is continuing with my fic CARLEY
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AT THE CABIN carley opens the door. the step inside to a nice sized cabin. it was diffinetly not like the rooms they usually stay in. there were 2 beds, a cott, a small kitchen, tv, bathroom and the coolest thing was the cabin's high ceiling and beams than ran across the cabin.
Carley: i'll take the cott Sam: really? Carley: yeh i dont care. besides i dont feel like hearing certain ppl (looks over at dean) bitch over who gets to sleep where Dean: i dont bitch. i just make my feelings known
they all sit down and eat there food
cut to later that night. dean fell asleep right after he finished eatting. now in order for carley plan to happen she need a miracle to happen. she need sam to fall asleep. ever since they left the diner she had been racking her brain trying to find a away to achieve this. then sam threw her the remote. its was like he was solving all of her problems for her today. with the remote in hand carley flicked on the discovery channel. her plan worked bc within 15 minutes sam was out. she was able to bore him to sleep. carley gets up from her bed and we hear the donnas "everyone is wrong". she arranges the pillows on her cott to make the stereotypical illusion of her being in bed. she heads quitely as possible to the bathroom where she changes her clothes (most noticiably a mini skirt), puts on make up and studies the directions matt gave her on the napkin. before carley heads out she grabs the swiss army knife dean gave her the first day she left her home and puts it in her jacket just in case matt gets to touchy feely and leaves the napkin on the table by the window
on the walk there carley keep thinking that this was her chance. if she could get some good info while at the party she could prove to her brothers that she WAS useful and that she COULD handle herself that she WASNT A FREAKING LITTLE KID. after about 15mins of walking she saw a crap load cars parked on the side of the road and saw a bonfire about 100 feet into the woods. she headed in, there must have been like 50 kids there. she was worried that it was going to be hard to find matt in the crowd but then she hears someone call her name. she turns, it was matt and man does he look wasted. carley didnt mind bc this should make her job alot easier. she just hoped that he wouldnt vomit on her
Matt: hey carley!! i'm so glad u made it! ( hands her beer) Carley: wat u think i would miss this
he leads her over to a group of ppl and introduces her
BACK AT THE CABIN
we see sam still a asleep with his head at the end of the bed and his feet at the head. he's still fully dressed, he even has his shoes still on. dean starts fidgiting on his bed. finally he gives in and gets up and heads to the bathroom. after he comes out he goes to tv turn off the tv. and looks at the screen disgusted
Dean: the discovery channel? i swear i am the normal one in the family
he clicks it off and passes carley cott. he looks at it confused. lets just say carley didnt do a great job of covering the pillows. dean pulls back the covers and obviously she's not there. dean freaksout and thinks the worst. should he dare look up? could it of happened again? would he see carley on the ceiling bleeding then burst into flames? dean looks petrified as he takes a couple of deep breaths then looks up. within in a milisecond of not seeing her up there his look on his face goes from petrified to f***ing pissed. he picks up a pillow from carley's cott and chucks it at sam's head who then falls off the bed. dean doesnt care, and starts getting dressed.
Sam: wat the hell man! (sees dean getting changed) wat r u doing? Dean: carley's gone Sam: (looks around) wat do u mean gone? Dean: as in she is not here as in a i'm going to kick ass
sam goes to the window and looks outside
Sam: atleast she didnt take the car this time
dean takes off his necklace. we see he put the keys to the car on it
Dean: i'm not stupid, i learned from last time Sam: so where do u think she went? sam still by the window, looks down at the table and sees the napkin and picks it up
Dean: i bet she went back to the diner to talk to "mr soon to be dead" Sam: (looking at the napkin) his name is matt Dean: i dont care wat-- wait how did u know his name? Sam: (shows dean the napkin) hope to see u tonite - matt Dean: (dean grabs the napkin) she went to a freaking party!!!
dean storms out the door gripping the napkin
Sam: she wont be there for long
sam follows dean out the door
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Just when things were starting to get exciting, you stop  Carley really is awesome. Write More!!!
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oh this is so awesome seriously keep it coming
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Hey keep it going i love Carly!!!
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Run Carley!! Big brother is on the loose and coming for you...oooooO!  Love it, continue on with it.
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THE GUYS IN THE CAR
dean is soo freakin pissed. he cant believe carley would do something like this. he is driving like a maniac, has extreme bed head and looks a little crazy
Sam: um dean u might want to slow down Dean: yeh right (just pushes down on the petal even more) i dont get y carley would do something as stupid as this?! Sam: my guess is she is rebeling Dean: wat do mean rebeling ms cleo? wat does she have to rebel against? Sam: us.. mostly u Dean: wat have i done to her that has been so horrible?! Sam: well for one thing we dont let her help much and wats with u being such an ass to her the last couple of days? Dean: there hasnt been much for her to do. and dont call me an ass bitch Sam: we could let her drive, or help us ask around. se probably feels useless Dean: k we talk about this stuff after i kill her please Sam: fine. but seriously wats with ur attitude towards carley nowadays? Dean: I have mmy resons just leave it at that
wat were dean's reason? same as sam's. he wanted to protect bc is seemed that every woman a winchester man loved died. at first he started traing carley so she could protect herself, and she was really good. but then dean thought wat if none of the weapons, moves she learned or him could keep her safe. there could always be a moment where none of it could protect her and he could lose her. dean figured the best way to keep her safe was to keep her away from all of this, but she didnt have anyone else to live with. so he's trying to keep her out of everything even if that meant being an asswhole. it hurt him inside to do it bc he luved her but he was doing it with his best interests for her at heart
dean spots a bunch of cars on the side of the road and figures that this is the place, pulls over and they both get out. sam starts to talk towarsd the bonfire then he sees dean opening the trunk
Sam: wat r u doing? dean throws the duffel bag at sam's feet.
Sam: ur joking right? we wont need anything that is in here.
sam tosses it back in the trunk
Dean: u dont know wat we r gonna face in there and we r here on a job dean grabs the duffel bag and swings it over his shoulder and starts to walk but sam stops him
Sam: they r called hormones dean and nothing in here can fight against them. and our job is to kill wat ever is causing these kids to killed themselves. its monday moring so watever it is wont be hurting anyone right now
in the back ground megan appears out of now where but neither of the guys see her. she's heard wat they said then she disappears
Sam: listen ur acting like wat i like to call " crazy dean" right now. that means u arent thinking straight and the last thing we need is for u to shoot someone with rock salt Dean: no thats ur job
ouch dean that was a low blow, and he knows it. sam takes deans comment and tries to look past it, but we can see sam's hurt
Sam: just let me go and get her please. if i am not back in 5 minutes come in
sam starts walking towards the bonfire
Dean: just dont call me "crazy dean" anymore it makes me-- Sam: (shouts back) crazy? Dean: u could atleast come up with a sexier name
CUT TO THE BONFIRE carley is still talking to matt. he's all over her but she deals with it so she can get some info. then she sees sam and thinks "oh sh!t"
sam pushes through a couple of ppl and finally gets to carley. carley stands up and so does matt who keeps trying to put his arm around her but she brushes it off.
sam doesnt want to make a scene so he tries to act as calm as possible even though he wats to sceam and her and matt
Sam: carley lets go Carley: sam its not wat u think
again brushes matt's arm off her. he is soo smahed
San: i really dont care right now lets go before de-
in marches dean who obviously doesnt and about ccausing a scene. and yes he brought the duffel bag so ofcourse a bunch of ppl turn to see wats going on
Dean: CARLEY! Sam: i said 5 minutes Dean: yeh well my watch is fast.
dean shows sam his wrist. thers no watch on it
Carley: u've got to be kidding me
to top it all off carley still has that beer matt gave her in her hand
Dean: (pointing to the beer) i was going to say the same to u. so wat u snuck out to come to a keg party?
carley is freaking out
Carley: yes and no... i mean- Dean: we'll talk about this later Carley: DEAN! will u ju- Dean: (pointing to the direction of the car) ASS- CAR-NOW! Matt: we were just talking man
dean goes to walk towards matt but sam stands between them
Dean: how old r u? Matt: i'm 20 Dean: well shes barely 16 Matt: she fooled me
matt looks carley up and down then slaps her ass. carley just stands there shocked while dean and sam both go to punch him but sam is closer so he hits matt and matt hits the ground.
carley cant believe wat she just saw
Sam: lets go carley common
dean heads in to hot matt but sam pulls him back. dean throws the duffle bad over his shoulder
Dean: ur so lucky i didnt hit u
the 3 walk to the car and again we see megan but they dont
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that's so funny i'm suprised dean's head didn't blow up  = dean
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IN THE IMPALA carley gets in them dean then sam. dean doesnt start the car and we can see megan near it, she is listening to wat is going on in the car
Carley: i cant believe u!
she punches dean head rest
Dean: i'm sry were u just scolding us? Sam: werent u the one who snuck out to come to a party? Carley: yes but would u like to kno y i did Dean: i kno y- to drink, party, hang with that asswhole and god knows wat else Carley: for ur information i was working Dean: yeh working it
he points out wat she is wearing
Carley: WILL U JUST SHUT UP FOR 5 SECONDS! Sam: everyone calm down!
he stares mostly at dean ofcourse
Sam: carley, at do u mean u were working
carley takes a deep breath to control herself, and so she would stab dean with the swiss army knife she had in her jacket
Carley: ever since i hit the road with u guys u havent let me do anything except for up stuff on the internet. i felt... useless
sam glares at dean. he way of saying "i told u so"
Carley: anyway i wanted to prove to u guys that i was useful then i saw my chance when we were at the diner. u guys were asking adults about teeenagers instead of asking teeenagers who would definetly knew more. i saw matt and his friends sitting in the corner so i went over to talk to them and he invited me out tonite. i just knew if i came i could get information about the suicides.
sam is just staring at carley in amazement and dean well, he doesnt kno how to react.
Dean: ur kidding me? Carley: y r u surprised ur little carley could think up such a thing? Sam: y didnt u just tel-- Carley: tell the two of u? right right. first of all would u of listen to me or even belivied me? secondly i knew that if u did, the two of u would've been watching me like a hawk back there and that dean would punch matt anytime he got close to me. i think u would sam. Sam: well the guy was a dirty bag
carley smiles at her big brother
Carley: well thanx
dean clears his throat bc he realizes that he has made a huge but cute ass out of himself
Dean: so did u get any knew info Carley: yes i did
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awesome i love it i can't wait 2 see wat that girl megan is gonna do
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Carley: so the two deaths since megan reese were her friends dom and kerri who saw megan die right. it turns out that night dom, kerri, MATT and megan were playing truth or dare. megan chose dare so they told her that she had to run across the road just as a truck was coming Dean: wat ever happened to making someone do a prank call. Carley: anyway megan went on to the road but she just stood there. kerri tried to pull her off the road but megan wouldnt budge then swish Sam: so one minute she was playing truth or dare then the next she says to herself hey i want to die? that doesnt sound right Carley: thats wat i thought so i asked matt, who it turns out was megan's boyfriend, if she had been acting differently before died, u kno depressed or anything but he said no. he said the same for dom and kerri. dom apparently didnt make the wrestling team but he wasnt surprised bc he never did and kerri was a little stressed about college. and sure they both lost a friend but niether seemed suicidal Dean: apparently they were, they left notes Sam: yeh that were written on the same kind of paper in megan's handwritting. it has to be megan's spirit, she killing everyone that she play truth or dare with that night Dean: then y make them look like suicides. Carley: i dont kno but i felt like matt wasnt telling me everything Dean: well if the megan chick is causing all this lets burn her Carley: sry pyro but she was ceremated. but i do have some good news about megan for u. its seems megan's parents were so distraught that they r currently grieving with family in California. the house is empty Dean: so on out to do list: get a copies of those notes dom kerri and megan left and we should check out her house. and u kno no pressure its not like its wat around wat
dean grabs sam's wrist and checks his watch
Dean: 2am monday or anthing Sam: well we kno megan is going to go after one more person ,matt right bc he was the only other person there. so if we cant find some way to destroy megan by tuesday then we just have to keep matt alive for 24hrs Dean: u kno we dont have to save matt. we let megan off him then she's gone Carley: he might be a scumbag but we arent going to leave him to be hung
sam looks at his sister. he cant believe she found out all this by her self and that she is even going to try to save the guy who was gropping her the hole night
Sam: i'm sry carley. u did a great job... i am really proud of u Dean: diddo Carley: i'll take ur diddo as ur way of saying "i'm sry i was an ass, treated u like a little kid, and made u feel useless. in fact i am soo sry that u can drive the car for a week" Dean: see u were right up until that last bit about that car Carley: i figured as much. so am i an official ghostbusters Egon? Dean: close to right now ur just that dorky guys with the glasses that follows them
carley laughs and playfully hits dean
Carley: i have one request Sam: name it Carley: can we just get some rest before we start working?its tiring trying to keep a drunk guy off u Dean: we all need some sleep right, sam? Carley: dont worry i'll just put on the discovery channel and he'll be out like a light again Sam: haha very funny Carley: it worked didnt it?
dean turns on the car and speeds away. megan is still standing there watching them drive down the road. she is not very happy with wat carley, dean and sam said... u kno the whole thing of destroying her
Megan: looks like i have some knew players
she disappears
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oo u r the queen of suspense i can just imagine a commercial coming on rite at the end of that part of the story can't u
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