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 truth or dare, this is continuing with my fic CARLEY
goldielockz143
Posted: Dec 27 2005, 07:17 PM


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its night. we see a kerri an 18yr old girl walking in to her house.

Kerri: mom i'm home!
Mom: hey sweetie did u guys have a good time?
Kerri: yeh kinda... its just not the same without them u kno
Mom: i kno kerri (hugs her) listen u need a good nights sleep. y dont u go upstairs and take one of my sleeping pills.
Kerri: okay (mom kisses kerri on the forehead) luv u mom
Mom: luv u too

CUT TO KERRI IN HER ROOM

she is sitting at her deak looking in the mirror brushing her hair. the pill bottle and a glass of water and the table. kerri stops brushing her hair and looks at the many pics she has on her mirrr and takes one down. in it is her and another girl, whose very pretty with short black hair. kerri starts to cry.while kerri is looking at the pic a piece of paper blows in on to her table through an open window. kerri still doesnt see it but we can see writng appearing on the paper word after word. then kerri sees it and is confused and reads it
I cant take it anymore. every little thing reminds me of my dead friends. i cry everyday. its all too much i cant take it. i'm sorry i'm not strong enough
goodbye,
Kerri



obviously kerri flips and turns around. standing there is the same girl on the pic that kerri was looking at

Kerri: Megan? but u cant be- ur dead
Megan: yeh i kno thanx to u and the others

she quickly grabs the bottle of pills and shoves a crap load into kerri's mouth. kerri strugles to spit the pills out but megan has her hand over kerri's mouth and she is too strong. megan throws her on to the bed.

Megan: dont worry everyone is going to be sad when they hear u killed urself. at first they wont believe it bc u didnt show any behavior that would hint to ur death. but then (grabs the paper) they'll find this. and everyone will just accept it right?

kerri has by now swallowed the pills and slowly her eys start to close.

Megan: kerri, truth or dare? i'll pick for u, lets do dare. u always said dare is more fun. i dare u to (whipers into kerri's ear) die

we see kerri's life less body lying on the floor and megan disappears like mist.
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Jenckles
Posted: Dec 27 2005, 07:28 PM


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ohmy.gif OooH! More, more, more! Really good! cheerleader.gif I just love fanfictions...
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mcguiremag
Posted: Dec 27 2005, 07:39 PM


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that is awesome omg i love it can't wait 4 the rest laugh.gif
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Ghosthunter
Posted: Dec 27 2005, 07:49 PM


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Cool keep it up smile.gif
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goldielockz143
Posted: Dec 27 2005, 07:51 PM


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IN THE IMAPALA. THE SUN JUST SET. GUSTER'S "HAPPIER" IS PLAYING

sam is in the drivers seat and looks in his mirror at dean lying down in the back seat asleep. i cant remember the last time dean was back there. but everything was different now.they had a sister, carley. she had dirty blonde hair and was 16 and she was in the passenger seat next to sam on his laptop singing along with the music. ever since sam found out he had a sister he vowed to keep her safe bc the the women that men in his family luved didnt seem to last every long. he wanted to make sure she knew wat she was getting herself into so he had study and research supernatural stuff on the internet which is wat he had her doing right now. he tried to have dean teach her how to fight and use the weapons but the dean and carley usually ended up fooling around, but lately those to were fight more and more. but sam didnt want to totally change her life so when he saw her everynow and then im-ing her friends he didnt yell at her or anything. right now she was doing exactly that.

Sam: (with a grin on his face) so wat r u doing?
Carley: (quickly x's out of her convo and pulls up another site) o nothing u kno. just checking for new info on the deaths in this Hillside place we r heading to.
Sam: r there any?
Carley: sam as before. tuesday 3weeks ago Megan Reese killed herself by stepping infront of an 18 wheeler, a bunch of her friends saw her do it unforntunately. she left a note. anyway every tuesday since then one of her friends that witnessed this kills themself and they all leave notes. (carley looks alittle confuzzled) sam, i still do get how this is one of our deals?
Sam: keep read, wat does it say about
Carley: (scrolls down) umm it says all the notes were written on the same kind of paper and all in the same handwriting, megan's. okay now thats just creepy

carley looks at sam who looks like crap. she had been on the road with him for wat a week and a half? and during this time she had barely seen him sleep for more thaan 40 mins at a time if at all.

Carley: sam u havent slept like at all. y dont u let me drive for a while so u can get some shut eye
Sam: ur one to talk. u havent slept that much either.

okay he had her there. most of the time when see closed her eyes saw her mother dead on the floor infront of the steps. but some how sam would make her relax and she would fall asleep without seeing that horrible image. he could be like a freaking jedi some times

Sam: besides dean would kill me

then a hand pats sam a the shoulder. its dean who has just woken up

Dean: damn right
Carley: i dont get it y wont u let me drive?
Dean: silly carley driving is for big kids

he rubs carleys head and she smacks his hand. lately dean had been treating her like a little kid. he wouldnt even let her go in a gas station, he'd make her stay in the car. he had nver treated her like this and she didnt kno y he started now.

Carley: god ur annoying! i do have a license u kno. that means i am capable of driving donw these roads that r usyally straight and empty. common sam back me up
Sam: i am sry but i dont think u can handle this car yet
Dean: now go back to playing on Barbie.com

sam smack dean in the arm for being a jackass and carley just sat there pissed. then dean spotted a road sign

Dean: hey look we're here. ( in a cheesy announcer voice he says) welcome to Hillside Utah please keep ur shot guns filled with rock salt at all times. oh sammy look a diner lets stop and get some foodaged i am starving.

Carley: lets hope they have a booster seat and kiddie menu for me
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sxybabe2_143
Posted: Dec 27 2005, 08:01 PM


i will always love u..near or far


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hey thats great.......i love your title.......keep up the gud work and write more soon.........i'll be waiting
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mcguiremag
Posted: Dec 27 2005, 08:29 PM


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i love this story i'm still dying 2 no the end
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Jenckles
Posted: Dec 27 2005, 08:37 PM


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laugh.gif Nicely done! I love that last line! Great job...must have more! evilhands.gif
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kich
Posted: Dec 27 2005, 09:09 PM


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laugh.gif laugh.gif LOL I loved "booster seat and kiddie menu" line, that was priceless!! Im in love with the fic keep going will you! I wanna read more ASAP. Please.
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goldielockz143
Posted: Dec 27 2005, 09:49 PM


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OUTSIDE THE DINER

sam and carley get out of the car. she slams her door and when dean goes to open his she slams that closed too. dean finally gets out

Dean: alright sam lets order some food and mayb ask a fews questions while we wait.

carley looks ready to go in and start asking questions but dean stands in her way

Carley: so wat do u want me to do?
Dean: ah i need to to go in, find a booth and sit. u can handle that right?
Carley: y cant i ask around?
Sam: sry carley but no one is going to want to talk to a 16 yr old

sam knows wat he said sounded really harsh but it was true

Carley: fine

they walk in the diner

carley: table for misery coming up

sam and dean head ovr to the counter and say their order and while they wait the start talking to ppl around them. carley meanwhile sits with her feet on up on the booth. she feels so useless y wont they let her do anything. wat do they think she is not apable of doing wat they do. she was and she was going to prove it. now she just needed a way to show them. Carley looks up from the table and sees a group of teenagers in the corner of the diner and one of them was looking at her. the guy was hot and then carley realized something. who would kno more about wats going on with teenagers in a small town than other teenagers there. carley gloated on the fact that she thought of this before her brothers. she knew hot guy would be her way in but now she just needed a reason to go over and talk to him. then if luck would have it a waitress set a small plate of french fries down in front of her

Carley: i sry but i havent ordered anything
Waitress: i kno ur brother of there told me to give u this (walks away)

carley looks over to the counter at sam who gives her a small wave and she smiles back at him. now thanx to sam see had a reason to approach hot guy. bc how was a girl to eat frech fries without ketchup? carley makes some wardrobe "adjustments" and then heads over to him with here flirt meter cranked up to high.

Carley: hi, i was wondering if a could borrow ur ketchup
Hotguy: um sure (he quickly grabs it from his friend who was cleary using the bottle and hands it to carley)
Carley: *playful giggle* thanx, i'm carley by the way
hot guy: i'm matt, ur not from around here r u?
Carley: no i am just here for a couple of days with my brothers
Matt: well if u arent doing anything, u should come to a party we r having in the woods tonite. (he writes the directions on a napkin for and hands it to her and she quickly pockets it)

carleyknows that if she goes this party she will get all the info on the ppl that died that they'll need

dean looks over towards carley and see her talking to matt. so ofcourse he reacts how any older brother would react, he over reacts. he marches over to carley and grabs her by the wrist

Dean: lets go
Carley: (smiling at matt) thanx, bye ( still smiling) ow dean ur hurting me

sam watched this whole thing unfold but couldnt do anything bc he was stuck talking to some old guy was on a rant but the youth of today.

Dean: (while walking out with carley in tow) sam we r leaving grab the food

Sam:(to old guy) sry but i have to go. its was nice talking to u

sam grabs the food and runs out outside and gets in the car. carley is in the back seat rubbing u wrist and dean is in the drivers seat

Sam: and wat was that about?
Carley: nothing dean flipped bc i was talking to a guy
Dean: u were throwing urself at him. (in a girly voice)"thanx bye"
Carley: watever, did u guys get any new info?
Sam: no we got nothing
Dean: and neither will that guy u were talking to
Carley: omg! did u seriously just say that?!
SaM: yeh i dont want that image in my head
Carley: god ur an ass. di u guys atleast find a place for us to sleep
Sam: the waitress said there arent any motels nearby but we can rent a small cabin its basically the same price. its right down the road
Dean: same price meaning 50 bucks more
Carley: its either this or sleep in the car dean
Dean: fine

the impala drives down the road to find the place this cabin renting place
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mcguiremag
Posted: Dec 27 2005, 10:00 PM


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i love how dean overreacts and says that that guy isn't getting any that was hilarios i wish my brother was like that can't wait for more blink.gif
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kich
Posted: Dec 27 2005, 11:23 PM


Oh my Impala :D


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laugh.gif laugh.gif LOL this is great! I love how big-brother-over-protective Dean is acting like. Don't stop now continue. O and let her go to the party with the hoy guy Matt. wub.gif
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Marra88
Posted: Dec 28 2005, 01:11 AM


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Hilarious, Hope they actually have something like that on the show. Carley is awesome. wub.gif
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inuyasha132191
  Posted: Dec 28 2005, 02:25 PM


born to be weird


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does he really have a sister? dry.gif
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goldielockz143
Posted: Dec 28 2005, 10:05 PM


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not that i kno of. me a some ppl at another web site started talking about wat would happen if they added a girl to the show. everyone basically said only chick they wanted would have to related to them in some way so it wouldnt ruin wat the brothers had bc a girlfriend would cause too many problems. so we came up with the idea wat if she they had a half sister named carley and some just started writing fan fics involving her.
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