one of you?, a hunters circle...

[nanoks]

here is my latest story...a hunters circle wants dean to join them. will dean leave sam to fight the greater good? please leave comments.

Dean threw all his weight against the door. Sure enough on the third try the door swung open. Dean didn’t wait for the pain in his side to ease. He was barely able to see with the small flashlight he had in his hand. He ran threw the hallway of the warehouse. He was sure that this was the place. This had to be where they were keeping Sam. He came to a stop as he looked left and right. The main hallway split off into two other hallways. Great, dean thought. Which way, which way? Dean started to go left then stopped as he thought he heard something. He listened closely again and sure enough he heard it. The sound that he would know anywhere. Sam was crying. Dean took off full force toward the sound. He ran halfway down the hallway and came face to face with another door. He put his ear against the door. Dean’s heart raced. He could hear Sam’s crys louder now. Dean turned the knob, expecting it to be locked but the door opened with ease. Dean lost the last part of his breath as he was Sam lying in the middle of the room. Dean ran over to Sam, falling to his knees. “Sam! Sam.” Dean placed a hand on Sam's shoulder, gently turning him over. Dean winced at the sight of his brother. Sam’s face was caked with dried blood. He had bruises on his face and what looked like the outline of someone fingers on his neck. “Sam can you hear me? Come on bro!” dean said as he pushed Sam’s hair out of his face. “Dean?” Sam asked weakly. “Yeah, it's me. You ok? Can you walk?” dean asked trying to pull Sam into a sitting position. Sam pulled on deans jacket, trying to push him away. “You got to get out of here. They know you would come for me.” Sam said. Dean saw Sam grab his side and pushed up Sam’s shirt. Sam’s side was a dark purple, almost black. Dean knew Sam had a few broken ribs. “Wow. Impressive.” Deans head whipped around seeing a man standing in the door way. Sam pushed at dean, saying “go. go.” dean’s eye widened at the sight of the man. Dean knew this man. “It’s you”

let me know..sould i keep going??

[dianacp8]

off course you should continue, that was great!!!!!
it's always good to se the boy's taking care of each other.
and who is the man who has been hurting Sam, Dean will kill him.

please write ASAP!!!!

[nanoks]

here is the next chapter..

“Dean!” dean heard Sam scream his name as he went flying threw the air. ‘Yes this was going to hurt’ dean thought. He slammed into the wall. ‘Yep’ dean thought, groaning. He looked over at the dog. If you could call it a dog. The thing was about 300 pounds, razor claws and about 65 needle pin teeth. Dean saw the dog standing over Sam, who was on the floor, on his back. Dean raised his shotgun and unloaded round after round into the dog, which was only pissing the thing off. Sam had his shotgun under the dogs chin, trying to keep the teeth from taking his face off. Dean took his knife from his boot and charged at the dog. He got right to it and it tossed its head, knocking dean threw the air again. Sam’s arms were weakening, as he tried to keep the thing back. The dog’s teeth were getting closer to his neck. The dogs tongue came out and licked the side of Sam's face. Sam cringed. Sam heard a sound and he wiped his head to the side. He was a women about 5’6 with red hair, holding a crossbow. She whistles again and Sam saw an arrow sail threw the air. The dog turned its head and the arrow hit the thing right between the eyes. The dog reared back and growled. Sam took the chance to back away from the dog and get to his feet. He looked over at dean who was trying to get to his feet. He ran over and pulled dean up.

“Come on big boy!” dean and Sam looked over and saw a man about dean’s height sailing threw the air. He landed on the dogs back who instantly started to buck. The guy had tattoos all over his arms and he was hanging on by the creature’s fur.” Yes! Whoa!” the guy had the biggest grin on his face. The guy was obviously enjoying him self. The guy pulled a sword from his jacket and rammed it into the dog’s neck. The dog went down in one hit and let out a dying grunt. Sam and dean just stared at the sight. The girl ran over to the guy saying “you are insane!” the guy just nodded” yep. Let’s do it again!” “Like hell you will” Sam and dean turned to see another guy a little shorter walking their way. The guy had sort spiked hair and walked right past the boys not even looking at them. “I told you to wait!” the guy yelled at the tattoo guy. “I got tired off waiting for your slow ass, bro” The tattoo guy said turning to look at Sam and dean. The other guy did the same and so did the girl. Both groups just looked at each other for a moment then the guy said “oh sorry. Didn’t mean to be intrude on your hunt but we have been looking for this bitch for a while” the guy said pointing to the now dead animal on the floor. the three walked over to dean and Sam and the guy held out his hand saying “I’m Derek” dean shook the guys hand. “that‘s my brother, Jax.” He said. The other guy, jax, just nodded putting his gun into the waistband of his pants. “And that’s Sonya” Derek nodded to the girl.

She stepped up to Derek’s side. She looked at Sam and smiled saying” you ok their stud? You got something on your cheek.” Sam fumbled to wipe the spit off his cheek from the dog. Dean lightly poked Sam in the side, giving Sam the ‘she’s-checking-you-out look. Sam just looked at Derek and said “so you guys are hunters?” Derek nodded. “Yep, like I said, we have been looking for that thing for a few weeks. We lost its trail but then we heard you two. Thanks for holding it for us.” Dean just snorted saying “any time.” Derek laughed and dean pointed to Sam saying this is my bro, Sam and I’m dean.” “Great. Well we always grab a drink after a hunt. Would you two like to join us? There is a bar down the block.” Sam was about to make up some excuse but dean clapped his hands and smiled.” Sounds great. I could use a beer.” Dean and Derek took the lead with Jax and Sonya behind them. Sonya took a few steps then saw that Sam wasn’t following. She ran back to Sam and threw her arm threw Sam's arm, joining elbow and started to drag him off saying “come on, handsome. You can dance with me.” Sam let himself be dragged by her. He wasn’t sure why but a nagging feeling was telling him this was a bad idea. He pushed the idea way. ‘I’m being stupid.’ He thought, following the rest off the group.

[dianacp8]

Reallly good!!!!!!

please write soooooooon!!! i can't wait to know what's going to happen with the boys

[cutiedean]

cool story hope you update soon