Rain, Rain, Go Away!, Dean love story!Please read!!!!!!!!

[Dean's_Girl]

I was only a little girl the night my mother was taken by the demon, my father commited suicide two days after and it was just me and Joshua. Here's my story.

"Stay here." I told Josh as I packed my bags. "Why?" he asks stubornly. "Because it's to dangerous for you." I says sharply. Josh gives me these puppydog eyes that no one can ever say no to. "Fine." I agree.

We were driving down the road when we came to a roadhouse. The owner's name was Ellen, she had a daughter named Joann and a friend named Ash. Ash was the one I intended to see. "Stay here." I say to Josh before I got out of my silver Firebird and headed into the roadhouse. When I walked in I saw the finest peice of ass I had ever seen!


Dean's POV

Sammy and I were at the roadhouse having a few with Jo and Ash when this tall, leggy brunette walked in wearing some tight jeans, a brown leather jacket over a black tanktop, and some sneakers. Her hair was shoulder length and wavy. She had big blue eyes and fair sized breasts. She saw me staring and looked away.
"Well, well, well. If it isn't Bryce Carver herself." Ash said getting up and walking over to her. "In the flesh." she replied giving him a hug and a peck on the cheek. Her voice was sweet and easy to listen to and she had a southern accent. "Well I'll be damned." Ellen says giving Bryce a hug also. Jo didn't seem excited to see her. "Hello Bryce." she said rudely. "Joann." Bryce said in the same tone. "Bryce, this is Dean and Sam Winchester." Ash said introducing us. "Winchester?" Bryce says curiously as she shakes my hand. "Your father wouldn't happen to be John Winchester now would it?" Bryce asks. "Yep." I reply as casually as possible condidering my father was dead. "How is John?" Bryce asks. "Uh....he died a couple months ago." I inform her. She looks at me with sympathy in her eyes. "I'm sorry." she says. "It's okay." I reply.


Hope you liked it so far! Bye!

[EmSyd]

Great start.

[Dark fairy]

good. your grammar is a little off though. sorry. i'm an editor of stories for my friends and i tend to do that. it's good. i like it.

[Sammyluvr83]

awesome!! i wanna read more!

[Dean's_Girl]

*Bryce POV*

"I'm sorry." I said, feeling bad for asking. "Thanks, it's okay, I guess." Dean said. I furrowed my brow and stared at him momentarily before turning back to Ash. "Um...Ash, I need a favor." I said. "Anything you want sweetheart." he replied. I rolled my eyes. "I need you to do some research on a case I'm working on. Something doesn't seem right about it." Ash nodded and said he'd return in a moment. I sat on the nearby bar stool and asked Ellen for a beer. She handed me on and went to tend to another customer. Jo came over and leaned across the bar to me. "What are you doing here, Bryce?" she asked in a low tone. "Oh, you didn't just hear me? I need Ash's help. Now if you don't mind I would like to finish my beer in peace." I replied. She narrowed her eyes at me. "Are you seriously going to just waltz in here expecting help?" she asked. I was taken back. "Well, aparently I do, and I barely come for help so when I do I would apreciate being able to get the info I need without your bull." I said, leaning in closely. She backed up but kept her determined expression. "You know, I don't really like your attitude. I think you should leave." She said. I laughed. "Fortunately, you don't get to make that descision(sp?)." She glared at me and went to get another hunter a drink. I smiled to myself and took a swig of my beer. "What was that about?" Dean asked. "Jo and Bryce have been like that since forever!" Ellen said, walking over. "Why?" Dean asked. "Jo liked a guy and Bryce dated him knowing full well she did." she explained. "He was 5 years older than her! You won't let her date that much older and she knows it." I cut in. Ash returned and set his laptop down. "Give me the deets, babe." he said. I smiled and told him what I was working on. "Okay, I'll call you with the info." he said. "Thanks, how'd you know Josh is waiting in the car?" I asked, bewildered(sp?). He laughed. "I have ways." Smiling, I stood and said goodbye. As I headed out to the car, Jo glared at me. "Remember, Jo, it takes 42 muscles to frown but only 4 for me to hold up my middle finger and tell you to go f*** yourself!" I replied, holding up my middle finger. I heard Dean and Ash snicker and I left the bar.


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