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 Stay Alive
wolf_freak96
Posted: Feb 12 2008, 11:26 PM


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Okay, I was watching the movie and started writing this. I'll post the first chapter and see what you guys think, k?

Chapter 1
A Brutal Death

“I’d rather get my brains blown out in the wild than wait in terror at the slaughterhouse.”
~Craig Volk, Northern Exposure
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Staring at the computer screen, the words GAME OVER gleamed red across his character’s dead body as it hung from the rafters of the building, gently swaying from side-to-side. Unable to pry his gaze away from the screen, the phone next to him rang, startling Bausten from his trance. Reaching over, he lifted the phone off the cradle and placed it to his ear.

“Well, how was it?” It was his cousin Angel DaSilva. Bausten gulped, wiping cold seat off his forehead with the back of a shaking hand.

“It was creepy, man. I mean, really creepy. The whole time I was testing it, I felt like I was being watched.” A crack of thunder shook the apartment.

“Really? Wow. I mean, everyone said that it was worth playing…”

“Where’d you get it from, anyway?” Bausten asked, cutting her off. Angel was silent for a few minutes before speaking again. "Angel?"

“My friend, Penny. Well, she got it from her brother before he died, but then she gave it to me and I knew you liked testing out new, underground videogames, and you know the rest. Why?”

Out in the hallway, Bausten thought he saw someone walk by the doorway as lightning illuminated the room.

“Hey, is anyone out there?” He asked.

“Bausten, are you okay?” Angel asked her voice concerned.

“Yeah, just tired, but you know what they say, you start playing the game too long, you start seeing shit and start having seizures.”

“Games couldn’t cause seizures.” Said another voice on the same line. Bausten heaved a sigh. It was Angel’s boyfriend, Swink.

“Swink, honey, Bausten and I are talking.” Angel said and Bausten gave an amused smile.

“Right, sorry.”

“Anyway, take it easy, okay, Bausten? You still coming over tomorrow?”

“Yeah, yeah, I’ll be there.”

“See you tomorrow, then.”

“Yeah. Bye.” Once he placed the phone back on the cradle, Bausten saw the figure again and sighed. “Todd, is that you man?” When he didn’t receive an answer, Bausten stood up and decided to investigate.

Walking out into the hallway was like walking into a cemetery. The place was too quiet for Bausten’s liking. As he continued walking down the hallway, lightning illuminated the place and he felt the floor vibrate…just like in the game.

Before he could say or do anything, he felt an invisible force pull his feet out from underneath him and drag him to the edge where the staircase was. Bausten felt the chain wrap around his neck and soon his body was hanging from the rafters, his own body swaying gently side-to-side.

In Bausten’s apartment, the words GAME OVER still gleamed across the character’s body.

What do you think? Please r &r!!
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Kay-lee
Posted: Feb 12 2008, 11:40 PM


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Oh God Make Me Shiver Why Don't You, tongue.gif, I Would Defo Carry on smile.gif, Plus I Love Flashbacks You Better Be Ready Cause' I'll Be posting Alot Cause' This Story's Gunna Be Good biggrin.gif

Great Job--xO
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wolf_freak96
Posted: Feb 14 2008, 01:27 AM


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Yay, thank you for replying! Here's chapter two...

Chapter 2
Game

“Death is nothing to us, since when we are, death has not come, and when death has come, we are not.”
-Epicurus
***
Angel DaSilva glanced up at the clock for the umpteenth time that day, wondering if the English class would ever end. As her the English teacher, a plump, grey-haired man named Andrew McKayes, walked up to the chalkboard, the secretary’s voice came over the P.A.

“Mr. McKayes?” He grunted. “Could you send Angel DaSilva down to the office? She can bring her books with her.”

“On her way.” Well aware that everyone was watching her, Angel gathered her books and, exchanging a confused look with Swink, exited the room. Turning back to the class, Mr. McKayes continued speaking.

“Romeo and Juliet, a tale of two, star-crossed lovers…” the class went back into its usual stupor, including Swink.

The office was just like any other office at a high school, except this one had olive green walls, decorated with photographs of previous principles that had come and gone. When Angel walked into the office, she saw her foster mother standing there, a solemn look on her face along with the principle and secretary. Once the door was closed, Angel knew this wasn’t good.

“Angel, have a seat.” Of all the times she had been to the office, the principle had never sounded so sad before. “Your cousin Bausten, he’s dead.”

When someone cuts straight to the chase, it hits hard. The words stung Angel’s heart before she could even absorb everything that Principle Kenny had said. Bausten dead? That couldn’t be true. She had spoken with him the night…

“Angel?” Angel looked up to find her foster mother, Naomi, watching her. Finally, Angel managed a small nod. “You okay, sweetie?” Another nod. Naomi looked at the principle. “I think we’ll call it a day for her.” Deciding not to argue, Principle Jones nodded. Walking to his desk, he tore a piece of paper, wrote something on it and then handed it to Naomi. Wrapping an arm around Angel, the two walked out of the office. Principle Jones shook his head as he watched the two.
***
Later that afternoon, the sound of a bell twinkling caught Bela Talbot’s attention and looked up in time to see Angel enter the small antique shop. As Angel dropped her backpack onto a chair, Swink walked up to meet her from working on the computer.

“Hey, Angel. We heard about Bausten. It…” he hesitated, thinking of a word. “…sucks.”

“Thanks,” Angel said, a faint smile on her face as they embraced each other.

“Hate to break up the scene, guys,” said a voice behind them. Turning around, Angel watched as Dean walked out from behind the counter. “But you do realize that I’m standing right here.”

“Of course, how could we not recognize that smart ass mouth of yours, Dean Winchester?” Angel replied as she sat down. That’s when the bells twinkling caught the group’s attention and they looked at the door to find Sam walk in.

“Hey, Angel, someone gave this to me to give to you.” He said as he walked over to her and handed her a field bag. Curiously, Angel opened it. Inside were three videogames, some movies, books and other material. She looked up at Sam.

“Thanks.” When Dean pulled out a lighter, he flipped it open.

“Lighter works.” As the flame glowed brightly, Angel flinched and Dean closed it. “Sorry, Angel.”

“Don’t worry about it. You can have it.” Swink placed an arm around Angel as Sam slapped Dean’s arm and gave him an annoyed look. Looking in the bag, Dean pulled out a videogame. It had a red cover. “Stay Alive? Never heard of it.”

“That was the game that Bausten…” Angel’s voice trailed off and Bela spoke.

“Well, since the police aren’t finding anything, I think we should why everyone is so scared to even play that game. I mean, what’s the worse that could happen?”
***
Lightning illuminated the sky, a crack of thunder following after. As Angel finished the dishes, there was a knock on the door. Since Naomi and Ryan were out for dinner, Angel had invited the gang over to her place to test the game. Placing the cup in the rack, Angel walked over to the door. Looking through the small hole, a familiar face appeared.

“Hey,” Angel jumped back, cursed under her breath and then opened the door slightly. “Can Angel come out and play?”

“Swink, you scared the crap out of me, honey.”

“Why, yes, I’d love to come in, thank you for asking.” Angel sighed and unlocked the door that led into the apartment.

No sooner had Swink entered the room, Dean, Bela and Sam entered. Once everyone was seated and ready, Angel started the game. When a leather-bound book with cursive writing appeared, words also appeared on the screen.

“Damn thing won’t let us get to the menu.”

“Maybe you’re supposed to read that prayer right there.” Bela said as she pointed to the book.

“Voice-activated? No way, that’s advance technology.” Swink said and Bela rolled her eyes.

“Come to me, clouds.” The words began to vanish as Angel read them. Everyone was shocked.

“No way.” Bela said and Angel sighed.

“Come on, let’s read it together.”

Come to me, clouds. May you rise as an evil storm born to rip them open. Let the cover of night bear witness and destroy those who resist so they shall harm me not. Let the blood of many cleanse me, preserving beauty eternal, I pray you.”

Once they had spoken the words, the words vanished and the book closed. While they chose their characters for the game, a demonic voice told them the story of the Blood Countess. When that was complete, the game had begun.

Chapter three on the way! biggrin.gif
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Shannon
Posted: Mar 5 2008, 08:45 PM


It's Craztagious!
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oh I love this movie. Can't wait for more of the story!
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