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Death Wish, Episode 2.09

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Dean5339	Posted: Dec 4 2007, 05:00 AM
The punk alien Group: VS Moderator Posts: 2,925 Member No.: 490 Joined: 29-November 05	WRITTEN BY: Booser

Dean5339	Posted: Dec 4 2007, 05:01 AM
The punk alien Group: VS Moderator Posts: 2,925 Member No.: 490 Joined: 29-November 05	INT. APARTMENT LIVING ROOM. NIGHT PHILADELPHIA, PENNSYLVANIA... We PAN across a bustling living room in the midst of a student party. "Wonderful Night" by Fat Boy Slim blasts from the radio. The room is filled with your usual young college types, all drinking, laughing and having a good time. We continue to PAN until we settle on two guys in a corner, drinks in hand. Their names are NICK and PAUL. Nick is prattling in Paul�s ear while the latter simply scans the room. NICK So I take it you haven�t been talking to Laura since? PAUL Not so much no NICK Funny story man. I was out walking today and I came across this wooden box on the ground and I thought �man that�s weird� so I picked it up and looked inside and you know what was in it? PAUL Thrill me NICK Your balls man. (beat) Dude it�s been what? Five weeks? That�s over a month. It�s not like she was the love of your life Paul shoots Nick a stare NICK Well... Paul takes a sip of his beer and looks back over the party NICK Look all I�m saying is that there are plenty more fish in the sea. It�s not like you don�t have any bait right? Nick gives Paul a playful pat on the back before leaning in closer, he points someone out in the crowd NICK How about her? You know her? Paul stares ahead. CLOSE UP of a girl at the other end of the room. She has dark red hair and intense green eyes that seem to be boring a hole through Paul. She is intensely attractive. CUT TO: Paul, slowly shaking his head, transfixed NICK (CONT�D) Cos she seems to know you Nick and Paul are interrupted by Nick�s girlfriend CLARISSA, the ditzy when drunk type. She tugs at his arm CLARISSA Nicky........ NICK Yeah baby, just a sec Clarissa puts her head on Nick�s shoulder CLARISSA Nicky I don�t feel too good. Take me home NICK I�ll take you home in a minute CLARISSA I need to go now She whispers something in his ear. Nick�s eyes light up NICK You don�t feel too good huh? CLARISSA (winking playfully) I feel very bad She begins to lead him away. Nick leans back over to Paul PAUL That�s my cue. A good wingman knows when to break off (motioning towards the mystery girl) Have fun with Poison Ivy Paul almost smiles as Nick leaves and the new girl slides up beside him GIRL You look glum PAUL I�m alright GIRL You sure? You don�t look alright PAUL You a doctor or something? GIRL Far from it. My name�s Lily. I�m just trying to be nice PAUL Yeah I�m sorry it�s just - LILY A girl right? PAUL (beat) Yeah. Obvious huh? LILY Obvious when you know what to look for (leaning in closer) You know they say the best way to get over an old girlfriend is to get under a new one PAUL (smiling) I don�t know Lily leans in, kissing him erotically. We hear soft whispering, almost demonic and influential. LILY Yes you do CUT TO: BEDROOM. LATER Nick lies in bed with Clarissa. A THUMP! Wakes him out of his sleep. He sits up and listens intently. THUMP! THUMP! He tries to rouse Clarissa NICK Hey! Clarissa groans NICK You hear that? Clarissa rolls over, obviously not wanting to get up. THUMP! THUMP! Nick gets out of bed to follow the noise. INT. CORRIDOR Nick enters the corridor and heads for the stairs INT. CORRIDOR. 2nd FLOOR Nick continues along the corridor until he comes to the door of Paul�s flat. He presses the door. It�s open and swings inward. Nick looks a bit surprised at this. Curious, he enters. INT. PAUL�S APARTMENT The flat is bathed in darkness, as if nobody is home NICK Paul? He continues inside, looking around NICK Dude you ok? THUMP! He spins around and discovers the noise is coming from the bedroom. He steps towards the door cautiously NICK Paul?....... CUT TO: INT. BEDROOM. REVERSE ANGLE. We see Paul�s feet suspended in the air banging against the wall THUMP!. CLOSE UP of the look of horror on Nick�s face. THUMP! THUMP! SUPERNATURAL - �Death Wish� EXT. PENN STATE UNIVERSITY CAMPUS. DAY Dean and Sam are walking along the campus grounds towards the student accommodation, discussing the case DEAN I�m telling ya man we�re gonna get a break on this case soon. I can feel it SAM Yeah well I hope so. This guy hangs himself from the light fixing in his bedroom? That�s the fourth supposed suicide on campus in almost two weeks DEAN Tell me about it. Whatever this thing is, it�s hiding it�s tracks well. No witnesses, no physical evidence at the scene. SAM I wouldn�t say that. They did autopsy one of the victims on the request of the family. I guess we aren�t the only suspicious ones DEAN Yeah and they found diddly squat SAM They found larger then normal levels of oxytocin in the blood. DEAN Oxytocin? SAM It�s a hormone released during orgasm seemingly DEAN So we have students leading an active sex life? Not exactly Weekly World News material, you know if it wasn�t for my trained eye I�d almost go with the official verdict SAM Your trained eye? Who was it that saw the pattern and pulled up the news stories? Dean pauses for a beat, before walking off DEAN Delta house is this way Sam shakes his head INT. NICK�S APARTMENT Dean and Sam sit opposite Nick. Clarissa sits beside her boyfriend, rubbing his shoulder CLARISSA Really I can�t tell you how sorry we are. Nick was the one who found Paul (beat) like that Dean and Sam nod SAM That must have been horrible NICK I try not to remember him like that (sadly) Paul was a great guy you know? DEAN We hadn�t seen him in a while (looks at Sam) But our family is pretty close. We kept in touch NICK (nodding) Right. I�m sorry what�s your names again? SAM Sam and Dean Barry? NICK His cousins (beat) Right........ DEAN Cousin Paul. It�s horrible SAM So everyone is saying that he did this because of his girlfriend. That right? CLARISSA That bitch NICK Who knows I mean... (beat) Who knows what goes on in people�s minds.... DEAN So the girlfriend - CLARISSA Was a slut NICK (scolding) Clarissa! CLARISSA I�m just saying. Paul deserved better NICK (refocusing on Dean and Sam) Paul found out that Laura was cheating on him. They broke up over a month ago. Dude was crushed. I mean they weren�t getting married or anything but he was in it pretty deep if you know what I mean SAM Right.... DEAN So he was depressed? NICK Well yeah, at first but he seemed to be getting better, he even hooked up the night he - Nick pauses before he actually says it. Too painful maybe. SAM Who�d he hook up with? CLARISSA Some slut Dean raises his eyebrows at Clarissa, she sure has a low opinion of other women NICK I don�t know. Never seen her before but she sure seemed to know him SAM Why�s that? NICK Just, you know that �spare wheel� feeling you get when two people only have eyes for each other? It�s weird she almost looked at him like he was dinner or something. Guy always had a way with the ladies but this was something else Sam and Dean share a �we�re getting somewhere� look CLARISSA Probably a - DEAN A slut? CLARISSA Yeah, how�d you know that? DEAN Just a hunch EXT. CAMPUS Dean and Sam are walking away from the building DEAN I think our best bet is to try and hunt down this mystery chick. At the very least she might know something useful SAM She was at the party so she has to show up on the security footage DEAN How do you know this place has cameras? Sam motions back to the doorway. CLOSE UP of a camera, almost hidden in the alcove SAM They have the same cameras in the hallways above the stairs DEAN Looks like we just caught our break INT. SECURITY ROOM. CLOSE UP of a black and white TV monitor. It is playing security cam footage. We can see a long hallway with a series of doors on either side. ZOOM OUT to reveal Dean and Sam seated, watching intently. A security guard enters the frame. SECURITY GUARD Anything else detectives? DEAN This is the night of Paul Barry�s suicide right? SECURITY GUARD Sure is. 2nd floor. That�s his room there The guard points out his room on the monitor. SAM (turning around) Has anyone else looked at this footage yet? SECURITY GUARD No. Why? It was a suicide. What do you think you�ll see? Sam turns back to the monitor SAM I don�t know yet SECURITY GUARD Gimme a shout if you need anything else DEAN Thank you for your co-operation SECURITY GUARD Don�t mention it CUT TO: INT. SECURITY ROOM. LATER SAM Time of death was around 3 a.m. Maybe there will be something soon CLOSE UP of the monitor. In the top left of the screen we see the time says �02:03� DEAN (leaning in) Right on cue CLOSE UP : the monitor shows a young man and woman stumbling up the stairs and moving towards Paul�s room SAM That him? Dean looks down at the photos of the victim DEAN Yup SAM (pointing) And there�s our girl DEAN (impressed) Smokin�. And I thought Salma Hayek in a bikini looked good CLOSE UP : the monitor shows the door closing behind the couple Sam leans in closer SAM What happens next..... DEAN Sam don�t make me break out that birds and the bees speech again Sam shoots Dean a look and presses fast forward. CLOSE UP : we see random people come and go every now and then. Suddenly the door to Paul�s apartment opens. Dean almost leaps off his feet DEAN Woah. Play it Dean and Sam peer incredulously at the monitor DEAN What the hell? SAM That�s impossible Dean gives Sam a weird look DEAN You remember the job we do right? SAM It�s just, I�ve never seen anything like that before DEAN Are you sure no one had already gone in there before Paul and the girl? SAM Positive. Its no shape shifter either, there�s no lens flare from the pupils CLOSE UP : of the monitor. The time is 03:13. It�s frozen on a still of someone leaving Paul�s apartment. They are dressed identically to the girl but as we ZOOM IN closer we don�t see a girl, but the unmistakable face of a man. DEAN (V.O.) Then we got ourselves a gender bender.

Dean5339	Posted: Dec 4 2007, 05:03 AM
The punk alien Group: VS Moderator Posts: 2,925 Member No.: 490 Joined: 29-November 05	I personally think this is one of the greatest episodes of the second season, a really great episode that I think everyone in here can relate to. I'm in college right now and can just say, yep- every college student has a death wish. Exams, growing up, etc. It's a really difficult and demanding time that stresses you out- especially during exam week! Booser has captured that perfectly in the episode. Right now I'm on the edge and it's a miracle I've been able to hang on, perhaps that's part of the reason why this is a darker season? So, join us tomorrow for ACT II. This post has been edited by Dean5339 on Dec 4 2007, 05:47 AM

Serenity&Chaos	Posted: Dec 4 2007, 05:56 AM
Awesomeness Incarnate Group: Members Posts: 12,717 Member No.: 5,782 Joined: 1-July 06	Oooh. Niiiice twist there at the end. Got me hooked now.

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Oooh. Niiiice twist there at the end. Got me hooked now.

Yeah one of the main influences for this ep was the X Files episode "Gender Bender" (hence Deans reference). I wanted that image of the security camera showing the woman having changed into a man either in the teaser or at the end of act 1. It was the first thing I thought of.

This ep ties together pretty well I think. There are clues already in the opening act as to what the monster is this week. Its something alot of people have been asking for on the show.

Anyway enough rambling. Hope you enjoy!

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I'm in college right now and can just say, yep- every college student has a death wish. Exams, growing up, etc. It's a really difficult and demanding time that stresses you out- especially during exam week!

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Tell me about it. Been there too often myself!

Oceane	Posted: Dec 5 2007, 03:25 AM
Vampire Group: Members Posts: 4,304 Member No.: 6,519 Joined: 8-July 06	Terrific beginning, loved the twist at the end. Can't wait to know what'll happen next

Dean5339	Posted: Dec 5 2007, 04:55 AM
The punk alien Group: VS Moderator Posts: 2,925 Member No.: 490 Joined: 29-November 05	INT. PAUL�S BEDROOM. DAY Nick sits on Paul�s bed, looking around him, soaking in the memories. In his mind he can still hear the THUMP! THUMP! It makes him flinch. Clarissa appears in the doorway CLARISSA Hey NICK Hey CLARISSA You alright? NICK Yeah, just can�t believe he�s gone you know? Doesn�t feel real. Their attention is drawn to a figure out of focus emerging behind them. It�s LAURA, a pretty blonde about twenty or so. Her presence is causing obvious tension CLARISSA (to Nick) I�ll be downstairs when you�re ready She passes out of the room, glaring at Laura as she goes. Laura shudders NICK Well take a look around Laura. I hope you�re happy LAURA Me?! Nick I - Nick gets up to leave NICK Save it LAURA I still loved him you know. I�ll miss him too! NICK Oh I forgot, it�s all about you isn�t it? Nick follows Clarissa by storming out CLOSE UP of Laura�s face with tears swelling in her eyes INT. BAR. NIGHT CLOSE UP of a shot glass, looks like whiskey. We PAN UP to see Laura drowning her sorrows at the bar. A man appears behind her. We recognize him from the security footage. RAISED BY WOLVES by Agent 51 plays on the sound system overhead. MAN Hi. Can I buy you a drink? Top you up maybe? LAURA (coldly) I�m not in the mood He slides in beside her, the bar light illuminating a hauntingly handsome face MAN That empty glass says otherwise Laura turns to face him LAURA I�m not in the mood for you MAN Oh. It�s like that is it? LAURA Yeah. It is MAN You know what I find sad? That people these days just don�t seem to be held accountable for their own actions anymore We focus on Laura for a beat. She swallows hard MAN (CONT�D) It�s always someone else fault. LAURA What did you say? MAN I guess what I�m trying to say is that it�s not fair to blame other people for what�s wrong in your own life LAURA Maybe some people deserve the blame MAN Like you? (beat) Laura Laura stares at the guy LAURA Who are you? What do you want? MAN The same thing you do Laura grabs her bag from the bar LAURA I don�t think so Hastily she makes her way to the toilets. INT. LADIES TOILETS Laura stands at the sink, trying to compose herself. INT. HALLWAY. We TRACK a shadow on the wall as it passes by some picture frames. We see the reflection of the guy as he passes by two pictures on the wall, however as the shadow passes by the third picture we see the reflection of Lily! She rounds the corner and walks by several other customers making her way to the toilets. People acknowledge her in passing, just another lady on the way to �freshen up�. INT. TOILETS Lily enters the toilets. She glances at the lone cubicle and smiles. The door begins to open. Quick as a flash she moves inside pinning Laura against the wall. The cubicle door latches behind her. Laura struggles LAURA Who are you?! Lily leans in closer to Laura�s face, Laura begins to squirm, her eyes open wide in terror PULL BACK to a shot outside the cubicle we hear Laura scream. INT. COLLEGE DELI. DAY We focus on a table where Dean and Sam are seated amidst a busy deli. Students come and go with trays full of food. Dean chews on a mouthful, trying to swallow it down DEAN Uh, canteen food. And you�re trying to tell me you enjoyed college? SAM The time I had there yeah. I agree with you about the food though. Besides Dean it was your choice to come here DEAN Yeah so much for big brother gets final say Dean sips on a coke DEAN So we know what we�re dealing with, what�s the game plan? SAM Well this thing is attracted to negative emotions, people who may be suicidal even DEAN You�d think it�d be more active around exam time SAM Maybe but there�s still no shortage of bad vibes around here if you look hard enough. Just look around Dean, you have temperamental relationships, exam stress, not to mention the pressure of just fitting in and growing up DEAN And emos. Don�t forget the emos SAM Yeah those DEAN You always struck me as being a bit of an emo yourself Sammy Sam raises an eyebrow DEAN Yeah what with the agonizing expressions, the furrowed brows. I bet you used to listen to Rites of Spring too didn�t you? Sam narrows his eyes, angry. SAM Maybe I just take my job seriously Dean DEAN A little too seriously. I know we don�t exactly have a whistle-while-you-work job but dude you can�t let this stuff get on top of you or it�ll start weighing you down Sam pushes his tray away SAM I�m not hungry DEAN I was only joking with the Rites of Spring bit Sam gets up and leaves the table SAM You�re always joking Dean. That�s the problem. CLOSE UP on Dean, confused as Sam walks away. P.O.V. NORMAL A dinner lady takes away Dean and Sam�s trays DINNER LADY Your friend ok? DEAN Little Miss Sunshine? Yeah he just needs to cool off. He gets like that sometimes Two STUDENTS, a guy and a girl, appear at the table and sit down a few seats from Dean. Dean overhears their conversation GUY So you�ve heard about it huh? GIRL It�s just awful The girl sets her tray down and breaks out the salt GIRL They�re saying she was raped in the toilet. Everyone�s talking about it CLOSE UP on Dean�s face, slightly interested but only just, after all he has heard weirder stuff GUY Can only imagine what she�s going through now that her ex topped himself the other night Dean�s interest is suddenly piqued. It couldn�t be could it? GIRL I think some people are just messed up GUY It�s not really her fault now is it? GIRL What being raped? Nah. But did you hear who she said done it? The guy is chewing on a mouthful of food GUY Who? Aspel probably. I told you the guys a Grade-A creep GIRL Give it a break with Aspel would ya? You�re just jealous he has a motorbike and you can�t even shave. (beat) Anyway she said it was a man who changed into a woman and then back again The guy spits out his food, half in surprise and half in laughter ZOOM IN on Dean�s face. His look of interest has changed to one of deep concern GUY What?! Like Boy George? GIRL No I mean physically changed. When they told her that no one had seen a guy follow her in she said it was actually a woman who turned into a man (chuckles slightly) Can you believe it? Makes you wonder if she was raped at all GUY Sounds more like an attention seeker to me Dean rises off the chair in haste and hurriedly laves the canteen. FOCUS on the couple for a beat, watching him leave with surprise. GIRL What�s his problem? EXT. TRAIN STATION. DAY P.O.V UNKNOWN We make our way through a crowded platform. Eventually we see Nick at a ticket booth. He turns to face us. A look of recognition and surprise in his expression NICK You? P.O.V. NORMAL Nick is talking to Lily. She looks down at the ticket in his hands. LILY Just one ticket Nick? Don�t you want your pretty girlfriend to come along? She leans in close and kisses him on the lips. Nick pulls away, shocked LILY (smiling) Once a cheater, always a cheater He picks up his bags and pushes past her NICK Leave me alone LILY That�s not what you said to Laura Nick stops in his tracks and turns around NICK What? LILY How very manly of you to let her take the blame for what happened. After all it takes two to tango NICK (realizing) You were at that party..........you told Paul! LILY That his girlfriend was banging his best friend? Actually in hindsight that would have been a lot of fun. NICK Bitch! If you tell Clarissa... LILY You�re a coward Nick. But relax. I�ve no intention of telling her NICK How did you know? She leans in whispering seductively LILY I know everyone�s dirty little secrets NICK What do you want? LILY Nothing She runs her fingers through his hair LILY I just want you to know, that I know Nick pulls back hurriedly, his grabs his bags and backs away NICK You stay away from me LILY (winking) If you want Nick begins to make his way through the crowd towards the edge of the platform, glancing back over his shoulder as he goes. P.O.V. NICK We see the woman, as people pass by she seems to change into a man with a cruel smile. P.O.V. NORMAL Nick gasps P.O.V. People cross his field of vision, it seems she has turned back into a woman. Is his mind playing tricks on him? P.O.V NORMAL Nick is almost in a panic, he rushes forward, glancing back nervously CLOSE UP of the woman�s mouth. She playfully mouths the word �jump� Nick continues to back towards the edge of the platform. He is glancing around for the woman, unaware as he trips and falls onto the line. He screams as a train hurtles down the line towards him! The screen blurs as the train flies by the camera. CLOSE UP of blood splattering the edge of the platform. We focus on the woman smiling as people scream (O.S.) INT. BATHROOM Camera TRACKS along the floor. We pass by a woman�s shoes and clothes lying on the floor. The cries and weeping of someone in great distress can be heard. We also hear the sound of a shower. CUT TO: SHOWER We see Laura hunched in the corner of the shower crying. She is covering herself with her hands, almost as if she is trying in vain to clean something off herself. She continues rubbing her skin becoming more and more frustrated as she imagines herself still dirty. EXT. COLLEGE CAMPUS We TRACK Sam as he walks through the campus. He watches the people go about their daily business, running to classes, chatting with friends etc. He stops and watches a young couple embrace on a stone bench. CLOSE UP of Sam�s face. His expression one of sadness mixed with envy. This was the life he had, the life he wanted, the life he SHOULD have. Despondent, he walks away. EXT. STUDENT ACCOMODATION, COURTYARD. We see Dean from a distance, he is passing through talking to various people along the way. We don�t hear what is said, we can only see people shaking their heads. Eventually one guy begins nodding at points at something off screen. Dean seems to be thanking him before walking off. INT. APARTMENT COMPLEX. Dean enters the main foyer of the apartment complex. He looks up and begins to walk up the stairs. INT. CORRIDOR We TRACK Dean walking down a corridor. He stops outside a door and acknowledges the number. He knocks. DEAN Laura? (beat) Hello? No answer. Dean finds the door is open and so he enters. INT. LAURA�S APARTMENT Dean glances around. He hears the sound of the shower running (O.S.) and walks cautiously towards the noise. DEAN Laura, my name is Dean. I�ve just come to talk (beat) You ok? He tips the bathroom door open and looks inside. INT. BATHROOM The shower curtain is drawn, slowly Dean makes his way over. He takes a breath before pulling it back to reveal - nothing. Laura isn�t here. Dean�s attention is drawn to a sound he hears in another room. He exits the bathroom to re-enter INT. LIVING ROOM He sees Laura walk slowly across the floor almost in a zombie state. She is wearing a shower robe but has made no attempt to dry herself. She drags her feet as water drips on the floor. DEAN Laura? Is that you? Laura doesn�t even acknowledge Dean�s presence. She continues walking to the balcony...... DEAN Laura my name�s Dean. Laura glances across at Dean. Her eyes look almost dead, devoid of emotion. She stands on the balcony overlooking the campus. She glances behind her, as if looking at the people down below. Her voice trembles... LAURA They think I�m crazy. I can hear them. I guess that does make me crazy doesn�t it? Dean edges forward cautiously DEAN You�re not crazy Laura. I believe you LAURA Even I don�t believe me! I can�t! (beat) I�m insane Dean begins to get nervous as Laura backs ever closer to the edge DEAN Ok Laura, I�d like it if you�d just come away from the balcony and we can talk. That alright? LAURA I don�t want to talk DEAN I know what happened to you. LAURA I'm dirty. I can't get clean Dean extends his hand DEAN I know. If you'll let me I can help Laura�s eyes swell with tears LAURA You�re too late Suddenly Laura backs over the railings plummeting to her death. DEAN No!!!! Dean rushes forward and peers over the railings P.O.V. DEAN Several stories below we see Laura�s broken body on the pavement, people crowd around the body while others panic and scream.

irisheyes	Posted: Dec 6 2007, 02:59 AM
Vampire Group: Members Posts: 4,587 Member No.: 7,004 Joined: 17-July 06	Wow!!! What the heck could this "thing" be? I'm sure they'll find out soon enough. Can't wait.

Dean5339	Posted: Dec 6 2007, 05:08 AM
The punk alien Group: VS Moderator Posts: 2,925 Member No.: 490 Joined: 29-November 05	INT. MOTEL ROOM Dean enters and sighs wearily DEAN Sam? No answer DEAN (angrily) Sam! Dean looks at the two beds. Dean's bags and equipment lie strewn across his bed while Sam�s is neatly made, what�s more there is no sign of Sam�s stuff. DEAN Ah christ Sammy....... Dean walks over and picks up something on the bed. It�s a folded piece of paper. CLOSE UP of the outside. It simply says �Dean� Dean opens it and scans it. He folds it away in his pocket and sighs heavily DEAN I�m gonna kill him! INT. MOTEL RECEPTION. NIGHT Sam approaches the desk, he gives the receptionist, a guy in a sweaty T-Shirt behind the desk an insincere smile. The receptionist looks him up and down RECEPTIONIST Let me guess. One night huh? SAM Uh, yeah. How�d you know? RECEPTIONIST I�ve seen your type before son Sam hands over a credit card RECEPTIONIST Just promise me you won�t clog my toilet like the rest? He hands the card back to Sam SAM I�ll do my best INT. MOTEL ROOM Sam steps into the room and looks at the single bed. He sits down and flips open his phone. He pauses for a beat before sighing , he puts his phone on �silent� and slides it back in his pocket. EXT. ROAD. NIGHT We see a beaten up old Chevy glide through the twists and turns of a country road. This isn�t the Impala however but a Chevelle SS. INT. CHEVELLE Bobby has his phone to his ear BOBBY Dean, I wasn�t expecting to hear from you. Been a while INT. MOTEL ROOM Dean is sitting on his bed, some research books in front of him. He has recently been reading DEAN Bobby, you haven�t heard from Sam have you? BOBBY (O.S.) No. I rarely even hear from John these days, what�s wrong? DEAN Sam�s gone Bobby. He�s gone and I�m afraid he might do something BOBBY Something, what kind of something? DEAN Something stupid BOBBY You have another fight? DEAN I (beat) I don�t know anymore Bobby. Feels like I can�t say anything to the guy without putting my foot in my mouth about something BOBBY Why did he leave? DEAN I wish I knew. I just thought maybe he would have talked to you see we�re on this hunt....... BOBBY What kind of hunt? DEAN Incubus, looks like. We caught something on a security cam shifting shape from female to male but it didn�t pull the old deer caught in the headlights trick so it ain�t no shape-shifter. BOBBY You have a rash of apparent suicides too I�ll bet DEAN That�s what drew us to the case BOBBY And you know why that is? DEAN Haven�t really figured that part out yet. It�s a kind of learning on the job deal at the minute BOBBY It�s because incubi and succubi feed on negative emotions. You get a bunch of hormonal teenagers together and it�s like red flagging a bull DEAN We are on a college campus....... BOBBY These things are dangerous Dean, they�re demons in the flesh, real old fashioned medieval stuff. If you get a visit from one sooner or later you�re a gonner DEAN These things use people for what? For sex? BOBBY Usually. Sex is just their modus operandi, it unlocks strong emotions. It�s how they feed DEAN So it drains them..... Dean looks up from the book. A news report is playing on the television. The caption on the bottom reads �Suspected suicide as teen throws himself under train�. A picture of Nick flashes up on screen BOBBY (O.S.) It drains them alright, leaving them in an even worse state then they were before. They�re like psychic vampires. You gotta be careful Dean, you and Sam - CLOSE UP on Dean�s face BOBBY, CONT�D (O.S.) You�re prime targets DEAN Bobby I gotta go INT. CHEVELLE BOBBY Dean? Hello? Bobby puts away his phone. Frustrated EXT. STREETS We TRACK Sam walking down a street, hands in pockets. It�s not exactly an up-market part of town. He passes by a bar and watches a drunk couple stagger out, arm in arm. He eyes them up before continuing down the street REVERSE ANGLE: on Sam as we see a pair of headlights approaching from behind him. The car pulls in and stops beside him FEMALE VOICE Need a ride handsome? SAM (shaking his head) I was just... Sam peers inside the car SAM Actually yeah that�d be great Sam opens the door and gets in. INT. CAR We Focus on Sam first before PANNING across to see Lily! LILY You goin� anywhere in particular? SAM Not really LILY I didn�t think you were SAM Why�d you say that? LILY You looked like you were thinking of something important. You don�t do that if you�ve someplace to be in a hurry SAM You could tell all that just by seeing me walk down the street? LILY I suppose you could say I can read people She glances across at Sam, smiling LILY (CONT�D) It�s a gift EXT. STREETS We watch the car drive off into the distance INT. MOTEL ROOM Dean continues to scan the pages of their research books. He mumbles to himself DEAN Devils in the flesh.... He rubs his weary eyes and refocuses on the text DEAN (reading to himself) Incucus from the latin �in-cubo�. �I lie above�. (beat) �Sub-cubo� - I lie below. According to the Malleus Maleficarum exorcism is one of the ways of destroying the succubus along with the sacramental confession, the angelic salutation, and �excommunication of the attacking entity� (beat) Isn�t that just exorcism? He ponders this for a second before picking up his phone INT. CAR Sam feels his phone vibrate in his pocket. He takes it out and looks at the number LILY Friend of yours? SAM Nah He switches his phone off SAM It�s no one LILY (jokingly) Then I guess you�re all mine SAM I guess so CLOSE UP of Lily's smile EXT. MOTEL. LOT The car pulls into the parking lot outside a run down motel. LILY The good old Sleep Easy SAM Thanks for the ride LILY Is that it? SAM You�re not hustling me are you? LILY (laughing) A classy girl like me? I was just wondering if you really wanted to be alone tonight? Pause on Sam�s face for a beat. Thinking. INT. BEDROOM. The door opens. Sam and Lily enter. She turns to him, draping her arms around him SAM You�re very forward LILY Told you I was classy She kisses him on the cheek and walks towards the bed LILY I like your room SAM This is about as classy as I get LILY Well then it�s a good job it�s not your room I�m interested in She sits down on the bed. Instantly she reacts as if hit by a current of electricity LILY Oh no you didn�t PAN DOWN : FLOOR LEVEL - we see a Devil�s Trap drawn under the bed! Sam paces across the room LILY Let me guess. A Devil�s Trap? SAM Good guess LILY Well then you�re quite the artist, and obviously a hunter. Ever get the feeling you�re wasted in this job? SAM Not really. A wall tack, a length of string and a pen is all it takes. Never leave home without it. Oh and speaking of going home..... Sam produces a book, the Rituale Romanum LILY So you�ve got me trapped you think you can do what you want with me? (beat) Kinda kinky SAM I wouldn�t be joking if I were in your position. You�ve killed too many people already LILY I haven�t killed anyone. I may have seduced one or two, but that�s just my nature (smiling) I am a sexual predator after all, isn�t that what you call it these days? SAM You�re a parasite LILY You really know how to hurt a girl (beat) I hope you were nicer to Jessica Sam looks surprised LILY Told you I could read people Her eyes turn demonic. Unlike other demons this particular one has purple pupils, something Sam has never seen before LILY I know all about you Sam. Did you ever stop to wonder how I choose my partners? It�s more then just random booty calls you know. And I knew all about your little stunt here too. Unfortunately for you it�s not gonna work INT. MOTEL ROOM Dean continues his research. CLOSE UP of a page showing a demon in a trap, a priest appears to be trying to exorcise it without success DEAN (reading) Sinistari stated that succubi "do not obey exorcists, have no dread of exorcisms, show no reverence for holy things, at the approach of which they are not in the least overawed� Dean looks up from the page DEAN Make up your goddamn minds A look of realization crosses his face as he flips back through the pages DEAN Oh crap INT. MOTEL ROOM Sam stands before Lily who sits on the edge of the bed SAM I don�t think you�re in any position to bluff LILY I never bluff She steps off the bed, walking through the Devil�s Trap! Sam recoils in shock SAM How? LILY Devil in the flesh She approaches Sam, slowly getting closer LILY Different rules apply sugar

Oceane	Posted: Dec 6 2007, 11:57 AM
Vampire Group: Members Posts: 4,304 Member No.: 6,519 Joined: 8-July 06	Sam is in big trouble How Dean is going to find him, time is running out. Can't wait for the last part.

irisheyes	Posted: Dec 7 2007, 02:59 AM
Vampire Group: Members Posts: 4,587 Member No.: 7,004 Joined: 17-July 06	Uh oh! Hurry up, Dean! Sam is so screwed!

Serenity&Chaos	Posted: Dec 7 2007, 04:00 AM
Awesomeness Incarnate Group: Members Posts: 12,717 Member No.: 5,782 Joined: 1-July 06	Sammy! Dean hurry up!

Dean5339	Posted: Dec 7 2007, 05:13 AM
The punk alien Group: VS Moderator Posts: 2,925 Member No.: 490 Joined: 29-November 05	INT. MOTEL ROOM Sam continues to back away SAM This isn�t right. You�re a demon! LILY True. But we�re not all the same. Unlike the others we can recreate ourselves, procreate, reproduce (beat) We�re different SAM That�s what you use us for LILY We use you to feed. But you also come in handy for other needs too (laughing) You�re our personal in-vitro clinics! SAM So you harvest the sperm from men as a succubus, then impregnate woman as an incubus LILY The perfect crime huh? SAM So what do you call yourself? The mommy or the daddy? LILY That�s funny Sam. You�re thinking we�re some kind of freak, but we�re born from flesh just like you SAM Are you looking for sympathy? LILY Of course not. Just understanding SAM I understand enough about you, and your kind She advances towards him placing her hands on his face LILY Baby you don�t know the half of it (whispering) Yet CLOSE UP of Sam�s face succumbing to the powerful demonic influence EXT. MOTEL PARKING LOT. The Impala screeches to a halt. Dean jumps out, slamming the door. He glances down at Sam�s note. It reads �Nite Owl Motel�. CAMERA PANS up following Dean�s vision to reveal a sign saying �Nite Owl Motel� INT. MOTEL. RECEPTION Dean approaches the receptionist RECEPTIONIST Wow, busy night DEAN I�ll bet. You have a guy come in here earlier on, tall, long hair? Maybe looked like he didn�t know what he was doing? RECEPTIONIST Sure. I remember him DEAN What room is he staying? RECEPTIONIST You a friend of his? DEAN I�m his brother RECEPTIONIST Your brothers quite the ladies man. No sooner had he gone out then he came back with a young lady. Hell of a rack on her too, You should have seen her DEAN Trust me I know all about her RECEPTIONIST Room 42 if you�re planning on spoiling the fun DEAN (walking off) I intend to RECEPTIONIST (to himself) Killjoy INT. MOTEL ROOM. Dean bursts in DEAN Sam!? PAN AROUND the room. Its empty. Dean walks forward, kneels down and looks under the bed. We see the edge of the Devil�s Trap DEAN Dammit INT. RECEPTION Dean rushes to the desk DEAN My brother where is he? RECEPTIONIST He isn�t in his room? DEAN No shit Sherlock he isn�t in his room. Did he leave? Did you see him leave? RECEPTIONIST No, why is there a problem? Dean rushes off DEAN Your damn right there�s a problem RECEPTIONIST Want me to call the police? Dean looks back as he reaches the door DEAN God no EXT. BRIDGE. NIGHT We see Lily�s car pull up on a deserted bridge. The river sparkles from the street lights far below. INT. CAR LILY You know what to do Sam sighs SAM (reluctantly) I don�t want to die Lily kisses him on the lips LILY It�ll be ok. It�s for the best Sam gets out of the car. EXT. BRIDGE Sam walks over to the edge. Lily appears beside him LILY I�ll help you if you want Their forms are illuminated by a bright light and a familiar rumble. The Impala! DEAN (O.S.) Sam! Lily and Sam spin around. We see Dean walk towards them, his gun trained on Lily DEAN Don�t do anything stupid Sam. Talk to me SAM Dean (beat) How�d you find me? DEAN Good job some folks at the motel saw you leave shortly before I came. Wasn�t long before I was able to follow you He glares at Lily DEAN Women drivers huh? LILY Be as misogynistic as you want, it doesn�t matter to me DEAN That�s right. Guess I can�t call you a woman now can I? LILY I can be all things to all people (beat) That�s the beauty of it DEAN Neat party trick, but we�ll see how beautiful you are when you�re dead LILY (laughing) This is more fun then I imagined. I never saw myself as a threesome kinda gal DEAN Nice try but your charms can�t work on me, not from over there LILY Maybe not. But you�re not the only one with a gun Lily produces a REVOLVER from her pocket LILY Amazing the things you find under people�s pillows DEAN Why does a demon need a gun? LILY Call it �insurance� Lily hands Sam the revolver. Almost zombie-like Sam takes it and points it at Dean DEAN Put the gun down Sam SAM No LILY Boys will be boys DEAN This isn�t a game. I�m not going to shoot you Sam Dean holds up his gun and throws it over the side of the bridge DEAN See? It�s just you and me Sammy. Don�t listen to her, fight it man SAM Who says I want to fight it? CLOSE UP on Dean�s face. Shocked SAM Let�s play a little game Sam opens the chamber emptying it of bullets. He picks one off the ground and places it in. CLICK! The chamber closes DEAN Sam what are you doing? LILY Now this is good. If only I brought the popcorn DEAN Shut up bitch LILY Language (beat) Do it Sam Sam points the gun at Dean DEAN Sam CLICK! Dean winces as the chamber is empty LILY You win round one! (beat) Your turn Sam Sam presses the gun under his mouth DEAN No! Dean moves forward. LILY One more step Dean and Sam takes a swan dive into the Delaware. You know I can do it Dean stops dead in his tracks. Hopeless. LILY (to Sam) Don�t keep us in suspense baby Sam pulls the trigger. CLICK! Sweat pores down his face. Suddenly with resolve he aims once again at Dean. DEAN Dude. Fight it, you�re stronger then this CLICK! DEAN (relieved) God damn....... Sam presses the gun under his chin again. CLICK! LILY Well. Looks like we�re going to sudden death. It�s a shame I only got to bed one Winchester eh Dean? DEAN I can live with that LILY Will you though? Sam aims at Dean. DEAN I know you won�t shoot me Sammy CLOSE UP of Deans face. His eyes screwed shut. CLOSE UP of Sam�s face, we can sense an internal struggle but he still seems resolved at the same time CLICK! Empty! Sam stares down at the gun in his hands DEAN (shaking his head) Oh no. Dean realizes the last bullet is for Sam and frantically tries to think of something. Anything. DEAN Shoot me Sammy! CLOSE UP on Sam, taken aback. His steely resolve seems to melt a little bit DEAN You heard me. (forced smile) Big brother always gets final say remember? That last bullets mine. SAM Dean....... LILY Uh Oh, sorry guys gotta play by the rules. But don�t worry you�ll get your turn Dean. Lily turns to Sam. LILY Hard luck Sammy. But I guess we�ll always have Philadelphia. It really is the city that loves you back, right? SAM Right. Sam presses the gun to his chin. Dean gasps, suddenly Sam spins around in an instant pointing the gun at Lily�s head. BLAM! PULL BACK SHOT of the bridge from a distance. We see a body plummet from the bridge in silence into the river. EXT. BRIDGE Sam stares over the edge of the bridge. EXT. RIVER CLOSE UP of Lily�s face. A bullet hole neatly bored into her forehead. She slowly sinks into the depths out of sight. EXT. BRIDGE Dean swallows hard and approaches Sam cautiously. DEAN Sam, you ok? Sam stares back at Dean, his face a blank canvas. CLOSE UP on Dean. He doesn�t know what to say. INT. BEDROOM. NIGHT Clarissa twists and turns in her sleep before waking with a start. She glances at her sheets, soaked in sweat before sitting on the edge of her bed. She holds her head in her hands, in pain as we... FLASHBACK : Clarissa is kissing the male incubus as he lays her down in her bed. CUT TO: Clarissa and the incubus, writhing between the sheets in the midst of passionate sex. CLOSE UP of Clarissa�s face, almost pained. CUT TO. BEDROOM. NORMAL Clarissa gets up off the bed and walks to her bathroom. INT. BATHROOM. (CUTE WITHOUT THE 'E' (ACOUSTIC VERSION) BY TAKING BACK SUNDAY) She pulls the light switch and walks to the cabinet before opening it. She takes out a long package. CLOSE UP : it says �Pregnancy Test�. EXT. MOTEL The Impala parks outside. INT. IMPALA We see Sam is asleep in the passenger seat. Dean shoots him a concerned look before exiting. CUT TO. EXT MOTEL. PARKING LOT Dean is carrying bags out of the Impala while talking on his cell phone. He glances back at Sam, still asleep. DEAN I don�t know Bobby it was weird I mean, it�s like she was controlling him but not controlling him BOBBY (O.S.) Well was he under the influence or not? DEAN I ..... (beat) I can�t tell. Hell maybe it was all a ruse and Sammy is a hell of a lot smarter then even I give him credit for. Even had me fooled. But I tell ya Bobby Dean turns the lock on the door and enters the motel room INT. MOTEL ROOM DEAN (CONT�D) Playing Russian Roulette with your brother is not something I�m in a hurry to do again you know what I mean? BOBBY (O.S.) I can imagine DEAN You know sometimes it�s like the guy has a death wish or something BOBBY It�s probably nothing. Sounds like he was under her spell alright. You�re lucky he was strong enough to snap out of it DEAN Maybe BOBBY (O.S.) And the succubus? DEAN Dead. At least that�s how I figure it. BOBBY (O.S.) Devil�s in the flesh.... DEAN Right. BOBBY Did anyone, you know... DEAN What? Get knocked up by this thing? To be honest Bobby it really isn�t what bothers me right now BOBBY (O.S.) Let me guess DEAN Yeah... INT. IMPALA FOCUS on Sam, still sleeping DEAN (O.S. CONT�D) It�s Sam INT. BATHROOM Clarissa stares down at the result of her pregnancy test. Her eyes begin to swell and she starts to cry CLARISSA No CLOSE UP of the test. It�s positive We FOCUS on Clarissa sitting on the toilet, weeping and PULL BACK as we DISSOLVE TO : INT. IMPALA Sam wakes with a start and catches a glimpse of himself in the rearview mirror. His expression is almost one of fear. [FADE TO BLACK]

Dean5339	Posted: Dec 7 2007, 05:28 AM
The punk alien Group: VS Moderator Posts: 2,925 Member No.: 490 Joined: 29-November 05	NEXT WEEK!!! EPISODE TRAILER This post has been edited by Dean5339 on Dec 7 2007, 05:29 AM

JarAck27	Posted: Dec 7 2007, 05:21 PM
smartass comment Group: members Posts: 5,984 Member No.: 17,856 Joined: 12-March 07	nice twists

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