Lorrie's Revenge, Sam and Dean need help, from Lorrie????

Hey guys

I have been moonlighting.

This began as a short just for Lorrie who was poorly but it seemed to grow a life of its own and demanded more and a back story and plot etc. So I kept writing. Then Robin and Lorrie said I should post so here it is.

Its set in the Lorrie 'Pink Bunny Slippers' universe somewhere between 'No EXIT' and 'FIRE EXIT'

For those of you who haven't read No Exit. Lorrie was in hospital recovering from a severe virus when Sam is put in the next room. The long and short is that the Demon makes an appearance and traps them all on the floor of the hospital. Lorrie helps the boys with her magic (She is a trainee Witch) and eventually after much angst, torture and OOPS. They overcome the Demon and the boys say goodbye to Lorrie.

Link to 'No Exit' for those who want to read

http://z14.invisionfree.com/Supernatural/i...=12157&st=0&hl=

There is also an ongoing story 'Fire Exit' link. Here Lorrie has called the boys for help at a Psychics convention in a hotel. They get trapped ......

http://z14.invisionfree.com/Supernatural/i...=15824&st=0&hl=

Steffs


Okay

Lorrie's Revenge



Sam lying face down, felt blood spreading, warm and slick across his skin, slowly seeping, soaking further into the material clinging to his body. Pain followed it, sharp, breath holding pain. Sam closed his eyes willing the sickening waves to subside, so he could move, speak, shout for help but instead it grew overwhelming all sensation, sending him into a merciful black oblivion.

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Hours later the frigid hardness of the floor bit into his chest and hips transfusing a chilling numbness down his legs and through his body. Sam, his mind in a blank fuguelike fog, shifted experimentally, pain spiked afresh slicing hot through cold muscle and he vented air in a condensing cloud, warm moisture filled breath hitting the icy atmosphere around him. “Shit.” His voice sounded thin in the large empty space.

Despite the cold Sam’s body was sheened in sweat, tiny drops ran down his face and he could feel the warm dampness of his shirt cooling. He had to get help.

Carefully he tried moving his fingers, they were stuck. He opened his eyes, struggling to make them focus, knowing that his hand was somewhere near his face. It was lighter than it had been, he noted, having gone someway past that early dawn colour bleaching greyness to a full blown Technicolor brightness. Sam gave up attempting to calculate the approximate time as his brain registered the red/browness covering his hand.

Blood. Congealed blood and it was like glue preventing him from raising his hand from the floor. Screwing up his effort Sam concentrated and prised a finger from the coagulated mass pooled on the floor between his face and his arm. He focused so hard on the achieving the task he had set himself that it wasn’t until he managed to free his hand that he realised with a horrified jolt that the blood was his own and that if he didn’t do something fast he was gonna die.

He forced down a growing panic and tried to think. He had been injured, the pain and the blood were evidence of that but the hurt was too general, too all encompassing for him to identify any specifics. The fact that the blood had become thick and glutinous was good, the bleeding had stopped, he hoped, he prayed.

Slowly, very slowly he moved his forearm, flexing the elbow. The pain flashed but remained at level where he could still think. Next, he moved the shoulder, white hot spikes drove into his torso made worse by his hyperventilation. It hurt, really, really hurt and he stilled, shallowing his breathing to minimise any movement. In the quiet moments between each breath he could hear his heart beating, a steady rushing thump in his ears, he didn’t want to die like this, on a cold concrete floor, god knows where and all alone.

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(SLIPS ON BUNNY SLIPPERS) I'M ON MY WAY BABYYYYYYYYY!!!! NEVER FEAR LORRIE IS HERE....UMMMMMMM OK U BETTER RUN SAM , I MAY NOT BE ABLE TO CONTROL MY HORMONES!!!! AWESOME START MY SEXY BRIT!!! DAMN I THINK WE MAY NEED OUR OWN SECTION JUST FOR MY BUNNY STORIES LMAO


LUVS
LORRIE

Holy crap!!!! Where's Dean? Dean, you get your ass to wherever Sam is and save him. Great start. Please update soon! Waiting patiently. No I'm not!

Cindy.

Bl**dy hell, don't think Sam is actually in a fit state to cope with you and your hormones Lorrie, go easy on the poor guy Steffs has left him bleeding out!

Good grief Steffs, have Sam nearly at death's door why don't you! The poor boy! But never fear, Lorrie will be on her way with her unique brand of TLC Her bunny slippers certainly see a lot of action!

Might have to launder my nurses uniform though, just in case, it is always good to be prepared, after all I may have two patients after Lorrie has dealt with Sam!

Loving it so far hon!

Sarah

Woah immense update
uh oh Sams in trouble as usual...lots of blood and pain loved it
x

You Posted it!


Ok Lorrie, better dust off those pink bunny slippers and pull on you nurses outfit--sounds like Sammy is gonna need a little Lorrie TLC!!!!


Great Start Steffs! Can't wait to see the rest!

Well that is one hell of a start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

So get back here and tell us all where he is. And Lorrie you can't be on your way when we don't have a location yet! Wait did Steffs tell you the location?

Michelle

OK ONE= MICHELLE YES I KNOW WHERE MY BABY IS...I HAVE INSIDE INFO LMAO


TWO= NOW SARAH BABY U KNOW I WILL BE GENTLE W SAM ...WELL AT LEAST TILL HE'S AWAKE LOL, BUT U CAN HELP W THE TLC...SEE I CAN SHARE!!! NA NA!!!


STEFF U CAN WRITE MY GORE SCENES FOR ME...U CAN KEEP IT PG, I CAN'T (SNICKERS)

LUV YA
LORRIE

SNICKERS - isn't that a chocolate bar!!! It is here, we used to call it a Marathon bar but had to convert to the American name for it! Don't mind me I've had a few glasses of wine!

And I can help with the TLC - wow, puts nurses uniform in case and catches the first plane to Ohio, armed with whipped cream, chocolate (Swiss), alcohol and Oreos!

Sarah

OREOS!!!!! OMG WE COULD RUB THE DOUBLE STUFF CREAM ALLLLLLL OVER SAM AND....OH CRAP..NEED A COLD SHOWER NOW!!! SARAH BABY Y DO U GET ME INTO GUTTER MODE!!!! DAMN IT I NEED A DRINK NOW!!!




LUVS
LORRIE (HOT FLASH)

Hey Guys I already have my nurses uniform on but I probably will need it for Dean. OOOOPs what a give away.

Lorrie Hun any time. Just send the gore scenes to me and i will get out my scissors. They will be PG13 ish in no time. If not i will use long words LOL

Glad you guys are enjoying the begining of the story.

Steffs

Get me a drink too hon, I need one after that image of yours! Us gutter girls need to stick together!

Off for my cold shower now!

Sarah

Sam is in big trouble
He's alone, and Dean, where's he.
Terrific start Steffs, I'm looking forward for more

Good start Steffs,

But why isn't Dean there?

Poor Sam, cold, hurt, stuck in his own blood.

Looking for the next post.

Linda

Damn it Steffs, do you want to kill us with the first post?! Or rather, do you want to kill SAM with the first post?!!!

Lorrie, can I put my order in? I'll have a Smirnoff Ice. Red one please.

But you KNOW as soon as I find out Dean's perfectly exceptable reason for not being at his dying brother's side, I'm off to save him! You can all have the nurses outfits, I've got something VERY special for our boys

More soon please Steffs!

See ya!