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 Out of the Darkness, Dean turn evil!!
JeNsEn#no1
Posted: Jun 4 2007, 10:19 AM


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Hey every one smile.gif

This is my new Fanfic, 'Out of the Darkness' It follows after my other fanfic 'Sacrifice' 15 years later.

I have made a series of fanfics that follow one another they are;


Reawakend

Sacrifice


I have made a wallpaper and banner to 'Out of the Darkness'

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And i have also made a fanfic trailer too. Out of the Darkness


I hope you all enjoy this one smile.gif and i would like to thank Jessie once again for helping me out. grouphug.gif


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Chapter one


It has been fifteen years since the demon, Alicia, took the life of Dean Winchester.
Sam Winchester’s hopes were lost when he had lost his brother and Danielle Winchester found it hard to cope as Dean was gone while looking after her and Sam’s baby girl, Mackenzie. Joanne Collins couldn’t take it that Dean was gone. She didn’t know who to turn to because all she had was Sam and Danielle, and her new baby boy, David, who looked like his father’s double.
All hope was lost in the family until faith had come and brought the family back together.
With Dean’s return, the hope and spirit from Sam, Joanne and Danielle grew.

With Dean and Sam’s hunting days were over, Joanne and Dean got married.
Sam and Danielle had another child named Dylan who is eleven years old. He is his fathers double and he focuses on his studies at school. While Mackenzie, fifteen, grew up to become a beautiful young woman she is popular around her friends.
Dean and Joanne moved across the street from Sam and Danielle in the small town of Illinois.
Joanne and Dean’s son, David, fifteen, is a lot like his dad. The ladies man, and is also protective around his baby brother John, two. Just like Sam and Dean when they were kids, David looks after John with all his heart.


……..


The road was deserted except for one black Ford Mustang driving down the lonely road in the dark of night.

‘’So, Dylan, how was school today?’’ Sam asked, keeping his eyes on the road.

‘’Same.’’ Dylan sighed as he looked out of the passenger side window. Sam took his eyes off the road to look at his son, and then looked back towards the road.

‘’Are you alright?’’

‘’I’m fine.’’

‘’Dylan, what’s wrong.’’ Sam asked again.

‘’ I said, I’m fine.’’ Dylan said as he looked at his dad.

‘’Okay. ‘’

‘’Are we almost there.’’ Dylan asked as he looked back out of the window.

‘’Not far. We’re almost there.’’

‘’Great.’’

Silence took over in the car.

Suddenly from out of no were a black truck came up fast behind Sam. He noticed it in the side view mirror.

‘’What the hell?’’ Sam said as he saw the truck coming closer up from behind.

BANG!

The car swerved but Sam managed to regain control of the car.

‘’Dad.’’ Dylan asked with panic in his voice as he looked behind. ‘’What’s going on?’’

‘’Just sit tight.’’ Sam said as he saw the truck coming towards them again.

BANG!

This time when the car swerved, Sam didn’t notice he ran through a red light.

‘’What the hell is this guy doing!’’ Sam yelled as he straightened the car back up.

Sam looked through the mirror to see if he could see the driver, but it was to dark to see the driver’s face.

Dylan caught a white light at the his right side, he slowly turned his head to see were the light was coming from.

‘’Dad.’’ Dylan said quietly. ‘’DAD!’’ Dylan yelled as the light came closer.

Then an almighty BANG ripped through the car, as a huge lorry had hit the side.
Sam’s car slid across the ground towards the edge of the forest below. The car tipped over to it’s left as it went over the side. The lorry managed to stop at the edge of the forest, but Sam’s car began to pick up speed as it tumbled down the long slope down to the bottom of the forest. The sound of crunching metal was heard as Sam’s car hit trees and rocks. The car finally landed upside down. Silence took over the area.



……..


Mackenzie opened her eyes full of fright. She took her head off her table and rubbed her head.

‘’Hey.’’ A whisper from the side was heard.

Mackenzie turned around to look at her friend in confusion.

‘’Are you alright Kenz?’’

‘’Err, Yeah.’’ She said as she rubbed her head and looked towards the front to see her teacher discussing algebra. ‘’Did I miss anything, Kat?’’ She said as she looked back to her friend.

‘‘Na, just the same old boring stuff. But are you sure your alright? You don’t look too good.’’

‘’I just have a headache.’’ She said before she opened up her textbook.

It wasn’t long before the school bell had gone. Everyone in the class room packed away their things and grabbed their bags and ran out of the room, quick as you can say ‘Go’.



‘’You doing anything for the holiday, Kenz?’’ Kat asked.

‘’Nothing I have planned. You.’’

‘’Nope.’’

As Kat and Mackenzie turned the corner going into there street, Kat ran ahead as she saw the black Chevy Impala sitting in Dean Winchester’s drive way.

‘’Oh my god! Your uncle’s home.’’ Kat yelled in excitement.

‘’He was only away for, like, two days Kat.’’

‘’Yeah, so?‘’ Kat said as she turned to look a Mackenzie. ‘’Do you think he’s at yours?’’ She said as she turned back to look at the beautiful Impala.

‘’You should know Kat, you having a little crush on my uncle is a little uncomfortable to me.’’

‘’Come on Kenz. Look at the guy! Who wont have crush on someone like that?’’

‘’Okay!’’ Mackenzie said with a bit of fright in her voice as she walked passed Kat and towards her two-story house. Kat ran up from behind her.

‘’I’m home!’’ Mackenzie yelled as she opened the front door. She threw her bag on the ground and walked into the living room to see her Dad, Uncle Dean, Aunt Joanne, David, Dylan and little John.

‘’Hey all.’’ Mackenzie said as she walked in, followed by Kat behind her.

‘’Hey sweetie. How was your day?’’ Sam asked.

‘’It was okay.’’ She said as she walked in.

‘’Hey Kat.’’ Sam said as he saw Kat coming into the living room.

‘’Hey Mr. Winchester.’’

‘’For the last time Kat, call me Sam.’’ Sam said with a smile.

‘’Where’s mom?’’ Mackenzie asked.

‘’She’s in the kitchen preparing dinner.’’ Sam replied.

‘’Hope were not getting her famous tuna casserole.’’ Mackenzie said sarcastically as she took a set in between Dean and Joanne.

‘’Hey.’’ Kat said, as a smile appeared across her faces she looked at Dean.

‘’Hey Kat, how’s it going.’’

‘’Great!’’ She replied with a huge smile.

‘’Hey Kat, why don’t you stay for dinner?’’ Sam asked.

‘’That’ll be great. Thank you.’’ She replied.


Later that night, after dinner, Mackenzie went with Kat as they went for a sleep over at Kat’s house.
David, Dylan and John were up stairs, leaving the adults down in the living room.

‘’Thanks for dinner Danielle. Best I’ve had in a long time’’ Dean said.

‘’Thanks.’’

‘’Why do you think I married her?” Sam joked.

All three laughed, then Dean took a drink from his beer, but he stopped half way as a shooting pain ripped through his head. Dean put his beer down and put his other hand onto his forehead as he gave a moan of pain.

‘’Dean, you okay?’’ Sam asked confused as Dean clutched his head in pain.

Joanne placed her hand on Dean’s back ‘’Honey, what’s wrong?’’

‘’I-I’m fine. Just a headache.’’


‘’A headache coming on that fast? You sure you not coming down with something?’’ Sam asked.

‘’Na, just tired. That’s all.’’ Dean replied.

‘’I think we should call it a night.’’ Joanne asked.

‘’Yeah.’’ Dean said as he stood up. Joanne stood up along with him and supported him as he stood up. Sam and Danielle stood up too.

‘’David!’’ Joanne yelled. ‘’Come on’’

Seconds later David came down with John in his arms.

‘’See you guys tomorrow.’’ Danielle smiled.

‘’See you later.’’ Joanne said as she opened the door.

‘’Bye.’’ David said to Danielle and Sam as he walked up to the door.

‘’Bye, bye.’’ John said cutely as he waved before David left the house.

‘’See you later Sam, Danielle.’’ Dean said as he took his black jacket.

‘’See you later Dean.’’

Joanne took her coat and left, Dean left after her and closed the door behind him.

That night Dean laid there on the bed turning his head rapidly from side to side, sweat all over his face as he kept mumbling something in his sleep.

‘’Dean’’ an eerie voice appeared in his head. ‘’Dean.’’ It repeated.

Dean kept turning his head back from side to side, like as if he was having a nightmare.

‘’It’s time Dean.’’


‘’NO!’’ Dean yelled as he shot up in bed.
He looked around the room, eyes wide as he began to shake with fright, his head pounding.

‘’What the hell is happening to me?’’ Dean said confusingly.
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Posted: Jun 5 2007, 12:35 AM


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Ok read all of your stories and I love them!!! Keep up the great work!!!! Can't wait for more!!!!
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great start
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Posted: Jun 8 2007, 05:46 PM


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Chapter Two

Dean slowly opened his eyes as the Saturday morning sun shown through the window, the smell of fried bacon filed the air. He slowly sat up with a moan and looked around the room with his half closed eyes.
He swung his leg over to the edge of the bed and sat there, before he placed his hands on his head as his headache from last night was still there.
Dean let out a sigh before he stood up off the bed and headed into the hall.

Joanne flipped the last of the bacon in the frying pan.
David sat down on one of the four chairs at the breakfast table, eating his breakfast as John sat on his high chair playing with his plastic spoon and bowl.
Joanne took the frying pan off the burner and walked over to the table and put the bacon onto David’s plate. She then looked towards the stairs to see Dean in his PJ bottoms, topless and barefoot walking down the stairs.

‘’Why aren’t you ready?’’ Joanne asked before she put the frying pan on the worktop and turned off the gas.

‘’And morning to you too.’’ Dean said as he took one of the sets at the table. Joanne turned back around and looked at Dean in concern.

‘’Sweetie, you don’t look too good.’’

‘’I’m fine.’’ Dean said as he gave a small smile.

Joanne could tell that Dean was lying. ‘
’You sure?’’ Joanne said before she walked over to Dean. She placed her hand on Dean’s forehead.

‘’Your burning up.’’

‘’Come on, I’m fine. I just have a headache and a little tired.’’ Dean said as Joanne let go of Dean.

‘’So, you won’t be coming to the fair with us then.’’ David asked as he took a sip of his orange juice.

‘’Of course I am.’’ Dean replied.

‘’No, Dean, your staying home today.’’ Joanne said.

‘’What?’’ Dean said as he turned around to look at Joanne. ‘’Why?.’’

‘’Dean, you have a temperature. You should rest.’’

Dean stood up and walked over to Joanne. ‘’I’m fine, Joanne.’’ Dean said before he kissed her.

‘’Uhhh, dudes.’’ David said as he stood up. ‘’I do not want to see this!.’’ He said as he left the room. John gave a giggle at his mom and dad as they kissed.

……….

‘’You got everything.’’ Sam said as he put on his jacket.

‘’Yeah.’’ Danielle replied as she packed a small see-through box filled with ham sandwiches into a rucksack.

‘’What about Kenzie?’’ Sam asked.

‘’We’ll meet her and Kat at the fair.’’ Danielle replied as she finished packing.

‘’Dylan, time to go.’’ Sam yelled as he walked towards the bottom of the stairs.

Seconds later Dylan appeared at the top of the stairs.
‘’Do I have to go?’’ Dylan asked as he started to walk down the stairs.

‘’Yes.’’

‘’But I don’t want to go.’’ Dylan said.

‘’Come on, it’ll be fun.’’

‘’Yeah, maybe for you.’’ Dylan said as he reached the bottom of the stairs.

‘’Dylan what is wrong with you?.’’

‘’Nothing.’’ Dylan said as he walked passed his father and left the house. Sam watched as the door shut loudly.

‘’What’s wrong with him?’’

‘’I don’t know. He’s been acting like that for a few days now.’’

‘’Do you think it’s something to do with school?.’’

‘’Don’t know.’’ Danielle replied before she picked up the rucksack and walked over to a worried Sam. ‘’He’ll be fine once he gets to the fair, that frown will quickly turn to a smile.’’

‘’I just hope he’s ok.’’

‘’Sam, don’t worry. Come on let’s get going.’’ Danielle said as she left the house followed by Sam.

Dylan was already sitting in the car, Sam looked across the road to see Dean, Joanne, David and John leaving the house and heading to the Impala. Sam headed to his black Ford Mustang and sat in the drivers seat. Danielle went into the passenger side as Sam started up the car and drove out of the drive way.
Dean started up the Impala and followed behind Sam to the fair.

…………..

The ride to the fair took 30 minutes when both cars pulled into the busy parking lot.
They managed to find two empty spots close to each other.
The seven people left their cars and they got the things they needed out of their cars. Dean, David and Joanne, and little John, who was in his stroller, walked over to them.

‘’Hey, Dean. How you feeling?’’ Sam asked as he closed the trunk.

‘’Okay, I guess.’’

‘’Hey guys.’’ Danielle said as she walked over to Joanne, David and John.

‘’Hey.’’ Joanne replied as Danielle knelt down in front of John in his stroller.

‘’And how is my little nephew?’’ Danielle said as she began to play with John.

‘’I think we should go in line and get tickets.’’ Sam said.

‘’Yeah.’’ Danielle replied as she stood up.

They headed towards the entrance to the fair.

‘’Two adults and two kids, please.’’ Dean asked at the desk.

The woman over the desk handed over four tickets to Dean. ‘’Have a nice day.’’ She smiled. Dean smiled back.

‘’Thanks.’’ Dean replied.

As the group walked through the gates all there faces lit up, except for Dylan.

‘’Now this is a fair.’’ Dean said.

‘’Dad.’’ A familiar voice came from their left.

Sam turned to see Mackenzie and Kat next to the basketball hoops.

‘’There’s the girls.’’ Sam said.

The group walked over to the basketball hoops.

‘’Hey, girls.’’ Sam said.

‘’Hey, dad.’’ Mackenzie replied.

‘’Hey, Dean.’’ Kat said as she toiled her hair.

‘’Hey.’’

‘’So, where we going first?’’ Danielle asked.

‘’The Rollercoaster.’’ David replied as he looked at the big red coaster.

‘’The Rollercoaster it is then. Come on guys.’’ Sam said as they all walked to the coaster.

‘’Guy’s I’m going to go to the petting zoo with John. Have a great time guys.’’ Joanne said.

‘’But don’t you want to go on anything?’’ Dean asked.

‘’No, I’m not all that into rides anyway.’’ She explained.

‘’Okay.’’ Dean said before he knelt down next to John. ‘’Have a great time with the animals.’’ Dean said as he stroke his cheek gentle. John replied with a smile followed by a giggle.

…….

‘’I want to go in the front.’’ David said, as they were next to go on the coaster.

‘’Sure.’’ Dean said when he saw the joy in David’s eyes.

Sam looked over to Dean, who was staring at the red train as the people in front of them moving upwards up the hill.

‘’Dean, you okay?’’

‘’What.’’ Dean said as he looked at Sam. ‘’Oh. Yeah, yeah I’m fine.’’

‘’Dad, come in with me.’’ David said.

‘’What?!” Dean exclaimed. “In the front?’’

‘’Yeah.’’

‘’Err, alright.’’

Sam couldn’t help but smile at his brother. The red train appeared and stopped in front of them. As the people left the train, the gates opened up in front of them. David went into the set of seats at the front of the train. Sam and Danielle took the sets behind Mackenzie and Kat and Dylan took the one behind them. Dean stood frozen staring down at the empty set next to David.

‘’Dad.’’ David said looking up at his father. ‘’DAD!’’

‘’Y-yeah.’’ Dean stuttered.

‘’Dean, just sit down.’’ Sam said.

Dean gulped before he sat down beside David and buckled up tight.

‘’Don’t worry Dean. It’s not that high.’’ Sam said from behind.

‘’Why don’t you try to shut up?’’ Dean replied.

Seconds later the train started to move, Dean gripped the bar that was in front of him tight.
The train moved up wards, it went higher and higher.
Dean looked over to his right arm and realized how high he was getting. His eyes widened.

As the train reached the top, David, Sam, Mackenzie and Kat raised their arms up, and Dean sat back up straight. He looked in front of him, the train faced downwards about to go down hill.

‘’Son of a B-’’ Dean yelled short as the train picked up speed down the hill. “-ITCH!” He yelled all the way down.

……….

‘’That was awesome!’’ David yelled as the seven walked out of the rollercoaster. ‘’Let’s go again.’’ David asked.

‘’No!’’ Dean said in a panic.

Sam and Danielle started to laugh.

‘’Okay, then where to now.’’ Sam asked as he took Danielle’s hand.

‘’Lets play some games.’’ Mackenzie asked.

‘’Yeah, alright.’’ David replied.

‘’How you feeling back there Dylan?‘’ Sam asked as he turned his head around to look at his son.

‘’Not bad.’’ Dylan replied as he kept looking around, like if he was looking for someone.

‘’Who you looking for?’’

‘’No one.’’ Dylan said as he looked back at his father.

‘’Well, you having fun yet?’’

‘’I guess.’’

Sam turned back around and continued to walk.

‘’Hey what about this one?’’ David said pointing to the ring toss.

‘’Sure.’’ Mackenzie replied.

The group stopped at the game. ‘’Okay, how do you do this?’’ Dean asked as he got the four rings.

‘’You throw them and try to get the hoops over the bottles.’’ David said.

Dean threw one of the hoops and missed the neck of the bottle. ‘’Dammit, missed it.’’ Dean said.

‘’Here, let me try.’’ Sam said as he took one of the hoops from Dean. He then threw it towards the bottles. It landed on top of one of them.

‘’That’s how you do it.’’

‘’Thank you captain obvious.’’

……………


‘’Look John, look at the little baby sheep.’’ Joanne said as she pointed at the baby lamb in the pen.

John giggled as the animals walked passed him.

Joanne looked down at her son and couldn’t help but smile at him. She went to look back to the animals but something else caught her eye.

At the end of the pen, a woman around 27 years old, with short blonde hair stared straight at her and John.

‘’Come on, John. I think we better get back to the others.’’ Joanne said as she stood up and took John out of the pen. She went over to his stroller and strapped him in, she looked back to see were she saw the woman still staring at her.

Joanne walked away from the pen and headed back towards the center of the fair were everyone else was. She went through between two large tents, isolated from everyone else, but she kept looking back to see if she was being followed. She then turned back around but stopped dead, to see the woman from the pen standing in front of her.

‘’W-who are you?’’

‘’The child.’’ She said in the most high eerie voice.

‘’W-what?’’ Joanne said with fear building up in her voice.

‘’The child.’’ She repeated as she began to walk towards Joanne.

‘’N-no.’’ Joanne said as she walked backwards.

‘’Give me the child.’’ She said. As she did Joanne felt herself being thrown threw the air and hit the ground hard.
The woman continued to walk towards the helpless John.

‘’No, no. John.’’ Joanne muted as she saw this woman, or what ever, she was walking closer to her son. ‘’Don’t you dare touch him!’’ Joanne yelled.

The woman reached her arms out towards John. ‘’Now-.’’ She began but stopped short as a pain appeared in her chest. She looked down to see a knife sticking through her body.
She turned around to see a young man around his 20s with black hair and brown eyes and had a gun in his right hand, staring at her.

‘’You think that was supposed to hurt me.’’

‘’Well, actually no. I just saw the knife and you, and at that moment, I thought you both make a perfect pair.’’ The young man replied sarcastically.

‘’You think your funny.’’

‘’Nah, I think I’m irresistible.’’ He said with a sly smile, before he raised his right arm and pointed the gun towards her. ‘’But this will hurt.’’

He pulled the trigger and the silver bullet flew across the air and hit the girl in the head.
She shot her head back from the force of the bullet then jolted her head back and gave an evil glare at the man.

‘’I’ll get you, and when I do I’ll rip your flesh off your bones.’’ She said before she turned around to look at Joanne on the ground. ‘’Both of you.’’ She said, her eyes quickly changed to an evil green color, as her body began to shimmer into a green glow.
Where the woman once stood, there was a deep green cloud in her place.. Joanne looked on in fear as it floated for a second then disappeared through the sky.

John’s cry’s entered Joanne’s ears. She stood up and ran towards John. ‘’John.’’

She knelt down next to him. ‘’It’s okay. Everything’s fine.’’

As John saw his mother his cry’s became more quiet.

‘’You guys okay.’’ The young man asked.

Joanne looked up into his brown eyes. ‘’Yes.’’ Joanne said as she stood up.
‘’How could I ever thank you?’’

‘’No, it’s okay.’’

‘’What was that thing?’’

‘’That there. That was a Supernatural creature called a Drake.’’

‘’A Drake.’’ Joanne replied confusingly. ‘’What a Dragon? Like a flying, fire breathing Dragon?’’

‘’Yeah, but there preferably called Drakes.’’

‘’Wait, how do you know all this?’’ Joanne said as she looked at him. ‘’Are you a hunter?’’ Joanne asked.

‘’Yea-. Wait. How do you know I’m a hunter?’’

‘’Well, first off, you know how to hurt that Drake. And you know about Supernatural creatures.’’

‘’And how do you know about those things?.’’

‘’My husband and my brother-in law are ex-hunters of the Supernatural.’’

‘’Really?’’

‘’Yeah.’’ Joanne said before she continued. ‘’Sorry, I didn’t catch your name.’’

‘’It’s John. John Bach.’’

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Chapter Three

Dean, Sam, Danielle, Mackenzie, Kat, David and Dylan walked away from the basketball hoops. Mackenzie and Danielle were both holding huge pink teddy bears, both having won the ring toss and the basketball hoops.

‘’Dude, I can’t believe you beet me at both games.’’ Dean said as he looked at Sam.

‘’Sorry Dean, guess I’m a natural.’’

‘’Dean, don’t worry. You might win at the next one.’’ Danielle said.

‘’Who said we’re going to do another one?’’ Dean replied as he stopped.

‘’If were not going to play any more games then why don’t we go back on the rollercoaster.’’ David asked as he stopped.

‘’What?’’ Dean said quietly as he looked at David. ‘’ Games it is then!’’ Dean said as he started to walk on.

The group walked through the crowed looking for the next game stall.

Joanne stood at the sides looking for the rest of her family through the crowd as John stood beside her and baby John was in his buggy fast asleep.

‘’There around here somewhere.’’ Joanne said as she looked at the crowd walking passed her.

‘’Maybe I should go.’’ John said.

‘’What? Why?’’ Joanne said as she looked at John. ‘’I thought you need some help?’’

‘’Well, yeah. But -.’’ John replied.

Dean’s voice meet Joanne’s ears, she turned around to see the group.

‘’There they are.’’ Joanne said as she looked at John. ‘’Come on.’’ She said as she took the handles of the buggy and headed towards the group. John looked at the group for a second then to Joanne who was trying to get through the crowd.
He then followed Joanne.

‘’I’m starving.’’ Dean said.

‘’Me too.’’ David agreed.

‘’Okay, we’ll find some were to eat.’’ Sam agreed.

‘’Dean.’’ A familiar voice was heard over the crowd, the group stopped to see Joanne and baby John.

‘’Joanne.’’ Dean said as he started to walk towards her, the others followed.

‘’Dean.’’ Joanne said as she stopped in front of Dean.

‘’Hey Joanne. Did you have a good time?’’

‘Unlike you, Dean.’’ Sam said as a smile grew on his face as he looked at Dean.

‘’Hey come on! That rollercoaster was very high up..’’

‘’It wasn’t that high.’’ David said.

‘’It was high to me.’’ Dean replied.

‘’Hey, guys.’’ Joanne said to get their attention.

‘’What?’’ The three said at the same time.

‘’I would like you to meet someone.’’ Joanne said as she turned around as John came up from behind her. ‘’Everyone, this is John.’’

The group stared at John for a second as John stared back at them.

‘’John, this is Dean, Sam, Danielle, David, Mackenzie, Dylan, and Kat, Mackenzie’s friend.’’ Joanne said as she pointed to each one as she said their names.

‘’ Hey.’’ John said.

‘’Something also happened.’’ Joanne said.

‘’What?’’ Dean asked.

‘’I-I was attacked.’’

‘’Attacked? By what.’’

Joanne looked at John then back at Dean. ‘’A Drake.’’ She said.

‘’A -.’’ Dean turned around to look at the kids before he walked closer to Joanne. ‘’A Drake.’’ He whispered.

Joanne nodded.

‘’Come on. A Drake?’’

‘’Yes, a Drake. And I need you and your brother’s help.’’ John said.

‘’Our help? Sorry, but, we’ve quit hunting all together.’’

‘’Dean.’’ Joanne said.

‘’No, Joanne. I don’t want my family to get hurt.’’

‘’But Dean, it had already attacked me and little John.’’

‘’What?’’ Dean said as he looked at Joanne and then to a sleeping John in his buggy.

‘’She asked for the baby. She almost got him, ‘til John here helped me.’’

‘’Your family is in danger Dean, and it’s not just the Drake that is after you guys.’’ John said.

‘’What do you mean ‘that Drake is not the only thing after us‘?’’

‘’A new evil has come, and you and your family are on top of it’s list.’’

‘’How do you know all this?’’ Dean asked.

John looked at Dean with guilt. ‘’Well -.’’ John said sort.

‘’Well?’’ Dean asked.

‘’I-I cant tell you.’’

‘’Why?’’



‘’Hey dad, what are they talking about?.’’ Mackenzie asked.

‘’I don’t know sweetie.’’ Sam said as he looked at the trio.

Dylan felt something hit him on the back of his head he turned around to see two young boys around his age with stones giving him glares. One of them throw another stone, this one hit Dylan’s right leg. Starting to walk backwards, he turned around to face his father.

‘’Dad.’’ Dylan asked.

Sam looked down to his right to see a shaken Dylan looking up at him.
‘’What’s wrong son?’’

‘’I don’t feel too good. Can we go home.’’

‘’Are you sure you want to go home?. We have about another two hours to spare.’’

Dylan quickly turned his head to see the two boys staring at him before they turned around the corner. He turned back around to look at his father. ‘’Yes, please can we go.’’

‘’Okay son. Let me go talk to your mother for a minute.’’ Sam said as he walked over to Danielle.

‘’Hey, Danielle. I’m going to take Dylan home, he’s not feeling to good.’’

‘’Okay sweetie.’’ She said as she turned around to her son. ‘’Are you okay sweetheart?’’

Dylan shook his head. ‘’No.’’

‘’Hope you fell better soon.’’ Danielle said as she took Dylan into a hug.

Sam walked over to Dean, Joanne and John.

‘’Hey Dean.’’ Sam said as he stopped next to Dean.

Dean turned around. ‘’Yeah.’’

‘’I’m going to take Dylan home. He’s not feeling good.’’

‘’Alright. Tell him to take care for me.’’

‘’Will do Dean.’’ Sam said a he gave a smile as he looked at Dean then to Joanne and to John.

The group watched Sam and Dylan head to the exit towards the car park.

…….

The road was quit all but a black Ford Mustang driving down the lonely road in the dark of night.

Sam looked over to Dylan who was looking out of the window. ‘’How you feeling.’’

‘’Bad.’’

‘’So, how is school doing?’’

‘’Same old.’’

‘’Dylan, are you alright? You’ve been acting like this for a while now.’’

‘’I’m fine.’’

‘’Dylan, what’s wrong?’’ Sam asked again.

‘’ I said, I’m fine.’’ Dylan said as he looked at his dad.

‘’Okay. ‘’

‘’Are we nearly there yet?’’ Dylan asked as he looked back out of the window.

‘’Not far.’’

‘’Great.’’ Dylan sighed.

Silence took over in the car.

Suddenly, from out of nowhere, a black truck came up fast behind Sam.

Sam noticed it in the side view mirror.

‘’What the hell?’’ Sam said as he saws the truck coming closer up from behind.

BANG! The truck rear ended them

The car swerved but Sam managed to straighten it back up.

‘’Dad?’’ Dylan asked with panic in his voice as he looked behind. ‘’What’s going on?’’

‘’Just sit tight son.’’ Sam said as he saw the truck coming towards them again.

BANG!

This time when the car swerved Sam didn’t notice he ran through a red light as the car swerved.

‘’What the hell is this guy doing!?’’ Sam yelled as he straightened the car back up again.

Sam looked in the mirror to see if he could see the driver, but it was too dark to see the driver’s face.

Dylan caught a white light at the his right side, he slowly turned his head to see were the light was coming from.

‘’Dad.’’ Dylan said quietly. ‘’DAD!’’ Dylan yelled as the light came closer.

Then and almighty BANG ripped through the car, as a huge truck hit the side.
Sam’s car slid across the ground towards the edge of the forest below. The car tipped over to it’s left as it went over the side, the truck managed to stop at the edge of the forest, but Sam’s car began to pick up speed as it tumbled down the long slope down to the bottom of the forest. The sound of crunching metal was heard as Sam’s car hit passed trees and rocks. The car finally landed upside down, silence took over the area.

Dylan slowly opened his eyes, he tried to move but pain took over his right arm as he yelled out. With his left hand he managed to unbuckle the seatbelt and as he did, he fell onto the roof of the car. He sat on his knees and put his left hand on his right arm to support it as the pain was too much.

‘’Dad?’’ Dylan said as he looked at the drivers side, his father was no were to be seen.

‘’DAD!’’ Dylan yelled as he began to cry.

Dylan managed to crawl out from underneath the car, he slowly stood up and looked around his surroundings to see if he could spot his father.

‘’Dad!’’ Dylan yelled as he walked around the forest.

He stopped to see someone lying near to a tree. ‘’Dad!’’ Dylan yelled out as he ran over to his father body.

As he reached to his father he fell to his knees, he looked at his father’s body, Sam’s head covered with blood. Dylan took his left hand and shook his dad slightly.

‘’Dad.’’ Dylan said as tears began to fall down his face. ‘’Daddy.’’
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I have my theories

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plz plz add some more soon

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Hey guys grouphug.gif

Okay, first sorry for the long wait hear.. and also i'm going away for two weeks on the 10th of this month, so i'll have one more update after this one biggrin.gif

I have also made a music video to all three fanfics; Reawakend, Sacrifice and to this one 'Out of the Darkness' >> Supernatural Fanfiction music video


and i have made another trailer to Out of the Darkness, but this time it's an intro to a new character that i'll add soon in the fanfic >> Trailer (Seth Intro)


Now hears the next chapter cheerleader.gif hope you all like it smile.gif


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Chapter Four

Dean and Danielle rushed through the double doors and continued to run down the long corridor while Joanne stayed with John, Mackenzie, David, Kat and the baby in the waiting room.
It was two hours earlier when Dean, the girls, John and the kids found out what had happened to Sam and Dylan. As soon as the got the terrifying news, they had raced to the hospital.

Dean and Danielle slowed down as the saw the doctor walking towards them. Both stopped dead as they reached the doctor.

‘’M-my brother, where is he?’’ Dean asked.

‘’He’s being checked over in.‘’

‘’And Dylan, my son?’’ Danielle asked.

‘’He’s resting.’’

‘’Will they both be alright?’’

‘’Dylan has a broken arm and has a few cuts and bruises. You can see him if you like.’’

‘’Doc, what about my brother!?’’ Dean demanded.

‘’He suffered a massive blow to the head, a broken leg and a few broken ribs. His condition doesn’t look good Mr. Winchester. He’s been unconscious since he was recovered from the accident. We are trying our best.’’

Dean and Danielle felt speechless as their eyes began to fill up with water. They couldn’t believe what they were hearing.

‘’C-can I p-please go s-see my son.’’ Danielle managed to say.

‘’Sure, follow me.’’ The doctor said as he started to walk down the hall followed by Dean and Danielle.

The doctor stopped at an opened door. ‘’You can take all the time you want.’’

‘’T-thanks doctor.’’ Danielle said, turning into the room, followed by Dean.
As they entered the room, the door behind them slowly closed. Dylan was sitting up straight in his bed, holding his broken arm staring in front of him. He didn’t look at his mother or his uncle.

‘’Hey, sweetie.’’ Danielle said as she sat on the edge of the bed. She placed her hand onto her son’s head and rubbed his hair back and forth gently.

‘’Hey sport, how you felling?’’ Dean asked.

Dylan didn’t move he focused his eyes on wall at the end of the room. A single tear escaped his right eye.

‘’Son, what’s wrong?’’

‘’I’M SORRY!.’’ Dylan yelled as he turned and looked at his mother as his tears fell down his face.

‘’What?’’ Danielle asked with shock as she heard the fear in his son’s voice.

‘’I’m so-so sorry mom. I really am.’’

‘’Sorry for what Dylan?’’ Dean asked.

‘’For Daddy.’’

Dean and Danielle exchanged glances.

‘’Son, it’s not your fault your dad got hurt.’’ Danielle said as she looked back to her son.

‘’Yes it was. If I didn’t talk back he -.’’ Dylan said short.

‘’He what, Dylan?’’

‘’He would have noticed the black truck.’’ Dylan said as he looked at his uncle.

‘’Black Truck? What black truck?’’ Dean asked.

‘’It rammed into the car and made us go off the road.’’

Dean looked at Dylan while Danielle grabbed Dylan into a hug.

‘’Ouch! Mom, too tight.’’ Dylan said as he closed his eyes tight from the pain from his arm as his mom hugged him.

‘’I’m just happy your okay, son.’’ Danielle said as she let go of Dylan.

‘’Yeah, but dad wasn’t so lucky.’’ Dylan said.

The door slowly opened, Sam’s doctor appeared into the room.

‘’Doctor. my brother…’’ Dean said as he began walking towards the door.

‘’Your brother has suffered sever head injures and there was internal bleeding in the kidneys, that we had to operate on. He has slipped into a coma. I’m sorry.’’

‘’What?!’’ Dean yelled in shock to what he was hearing.

‘’A-a coma!. He’s slipped into a coma!.’’ Danielle said as tears fell from her face.

Dylan looked at the doctor in shock.

‘’I’m so sorry, but we have tried everything. We’re giving him a 20% chance to pull through.’’

‘’Your giving my brother a freaking 20% chance to survive!?’’ Dean yelled.

‘’Dean calm down.’’ Danielle said as she looked at Dean. ‘’Can we see him now, please?’’ She said as she looked back at Sam’s doctor.

‘’Yes you can, follow me.’’

‘’Okay, Dylan. We’ll be right back.’’ Danielle said as she stood up.

‘’Okay.’’ Dylan replied.

Both Dean and Danielle left the room and followed the doctor down the hall.

Danielle didn’t let her eyes leave Dean because some how, he was acting different today.

The doctor stopped out side of a room that was at the end of the corridor.

‘’You may take as much time you need.’’

‘’Thank you.’’ Danielle said as she entered followed by Dean, both stopped dead to see Sam’s body lying on the bed. There were tubes everywhere. So many, in fact, you couldn’t see his face.

‘’Oh my god.’’ Danielle said as tears fell from her face as she walked over to Sam. She took the chair next to the bed and took his hand.

‘’Sammy.’’ Dean said as he couldn’t help but let his tear fall. Dean stood there with fear as he saw his baby brother lying there, not knowing if he’ll make it till the night. He had failed to protect his baby brother.

Just then Dean’s head began to split with pain. This time it was much, much worse than the following day. He put his hands on his forehead and closed his eyes tight.
Danielle looked over to Dean with her teary eyes.

‘’Dean, are you okay?’’

Dean yelled out in pain before he ran out of the room.

‘’DEAN!’’ Danielle yelled.

Dean ran down the corridor with one hand on his head, running towards the staircase.
He stopped when he ran through the front door.

‘’W-what’s…g-going…o-on!?’’ Dean tried to say before he fell to his knees.

All types of voices appeared in his head. ‘’The time has come Dean. The time has come.’’

‘’N-no!’’

‘’Yes.’’ the eerie voice in his head continued. ‘’Now, let me take over.’’

Dean opened his eyes slowly revealing dark deep red eyes took over his green eyes.

He closed his eyes once again. ‘’NO!!.’’ Dean yelled out for one last time, before he collapsed to the ground.
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Posted: Jul 5 2007, 03:07 AM


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yay an update, very very good

I really hop sm gets better even with 20% chance he has to pull full
and what going on with dean

add more soon
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Posted: Jul 5 2007, 06:08 PM


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OMG what is gonna happen to Dean
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Posted: Jul 6 2007, 09:49 AM


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Hey guys biggrin.gif

Okay, this is the last chapter till i come back from holiday.. Hope you all enjoy this one cheerleader.gif
I've also answered a bit from what had happened at the end of 'Sacrifice' and i left this chapter to a bit of a cliffy >_<

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Chapter Five

It felt like the hours went by slow waiting to hear the news on Sam.
Joanne stood at the window looking out to the sky above. John leaned against the wall arms folded while David, Mackenzie and Kat sat in the seats that were available in the room. Little John had fallen asleep in his stroller.

‘’I better get going.’’ Kat said as she stood up. ‘’Mom might be getting worried.’’

‘’Would you like a lift?’’ Joanne asked as she turned around to look at Kat.

‘’No thanks. I’ll call my mom.’’

‘’Ok, Sweetie.’’ Joanne agreed.

‘’I’ll call you tomorrow Kenz.’’ Kat said as she picked up her bag. ‘’Hope your Dad and brother get better.’’

‘’Thanks, I’ll see you later.’’ Mackenzie said as she gave a week smile.

Kat walked up to the door and turned around and gave a smile to the small group in the room. Mackenzie watched Kat leave before she turned around to look at her Aunt.

‘’Aunt Joanne, when can we see my Dad?.’’

‘’I don’t know.’’

‘’Dylan?’’

‘’I don’t know, Kenz.’’

As the room became quite once again, it wasn’t long until three nurses, one with a stetcher, and a male doctor rushed passed the door.

All four looked at the door.

‘’What’s going on?’’ David asked as he turned to look at the others.

‘’I’m not sure.’’ Joanne replied as she walked over to the door and looked in the direction to were the staff had ran to. Suddenly the door at the end of the corridor opened as the nurses and the doctor came rushing out of it. This time, the stretcher they had wasn’t empty.

As they rushed up the corridor towards Joanne, her eyes widened to what she saw laying on the stretcher.

‘’D-Dean.’’ Joanne stuttered in shock as she saw Dean. Joanne stood aside to let them pass her, then she ran along side with them. ‘’Dean.’’ She said again. ‘’What happened?’’ Joanne asked.

‘’Miss, you have to stand aside.’’ One of the nurses said.

‘’No! That’s my husband.’’

‘’Please, miss.’’ The nurse asked as she stopped Joanne as the other nurses and the doctor went into a room with Dean.

Joanne watched in tears as they closed the door behind them.

‘’Please god. No.’’

‘’Mom, what’s going on?’’ David asked as he saw his mom enter the waiting room.

Joanne didn’t answer as she looked down at the floor.

‘’Mom?’’ David asked once again.

‘’It’s-it’s -’’ Joanne tried to say. ‘’It’s your Dad.’’ She said as she looked at the group.

‘’What?’’ All three asked.

‘’What happened?’’ David asked.

‘’I-I don’t know.’’ Joanne replied as tears started to fall down her face.

‘’Will they tell you anything?’’ John asked.

‘’No.’’

John looked at Joanne, before heading out of the waiting room.

‘’I got to do something.’’ John said as he looked back into the waiting room.

‘’Now?’’ Joanne replied.

John looked at her, then to the kids before he walked away down the hall and left.


In the Restitution room


‘’All clear?’’ The doctor said as he placed the paddles to the deliberator to Dean’s chest.

‘’Clear.’’ One of the nurses yelled.

As the electricity went through Dean’s body, his top half raised a little off the bed, then back down.

‘’Still no pulse.’’

‘’Come on.’’ The doctor mumbled. ’’Ok, lets go again. 360.’’ The doctor said as he placed the paddles back onto Dean’s chest. ‘’Charging. All clear.’’

‘’Clear.’’ one of the nurses said.


Some were out side of Illinois, Dirt roads.


John walked towards a set of Crossroads in the middle of the dirt road. He stopped in the center and looked around.

‘’Come on.’’ John whispered, as he looked in all directions. ‘’Come on out you son of a bitch!’’ He yelled.

‘’Alright, alright.’’ A woman’s voice appeared.

John turned around to face into a set of deep purple evil eye’s that was ahead. The eye’s belonged to Alicia.

‘’You called?’’ Alicia asked with an evil grin.

‘’What have you done?’’

‘’What I have done?’’ Alicia laughed. ‘’I’ve done nothing.’’

‘’I’m not in the mood for your games.’’

‘’Games? Who said I was playing any games?’’

‘’Let’s just get down to the point here.’’

‘’And what may that be, Johnny boy.’’

‘’Dean.’’

‘’What about him?’’

‘’You did something to him and Sam. I know that was you.’’

‘’Okay, Sammy’s little accident didn’t have anything to do with me.’’

‘’Then who?’’

‘’Now that’s a mystery.’’ Alicia said as she gave an evil laugh.

‘’And Dean?.’’

‘’Oh, yeah. Dean.’’ She said as she gave an evil grin and walked over to John. ‘’Now that was fun. All those many long years ago.’’

‘’What the hell did you do to him?’’

‘’Why do you care? Oh, wait. I forgot. That’s why you’re here in the first place, to save him and his pathetic family.’’

‘’The Winchesters are not pathetic.’’

‘’To all demon’s they are.’’

‘’Tell me what you did you him!’’ John yelled.

Alicia looked at John and saw the rage and anger building up inside of him, and she knew that he was itching to let it all out on her.

‘’Fifteen year ago, all those long, long years ago. When I gave Dean that poisoning of darkness.

‘’Poisoning of darkness?.’’

‘’The evil of all evil which is called the Darkness. Made up with blood and bones of the most powerful demons ever.’’

‘’Why Dean? Why did you give it to him.’’

‘’I needed a puppet to take on the Darkness, and Dean was the perfect human to contain it.’’

John felt the rage inside him grow even more now at each word that left Alicia’s lips.

‘’And when the Darkness takes over, it will be the end of Dean.’’

‘’You son of a bitch!’’ John yelled out as he pulled out a gun from his back and pointed it to Alicia.

Alicia gave an evil laugh. ‘’You think that will stop something like me?’’

‘’Well, I wont know until I pull the trigger and then we’ll see if it’ll do any damage.’’

‘’If you shoot me, you wont know the truth about your life.’’

‘’What?’’ John asked as he lowered the gun.

‘’It’s funny. Your keeping a secret from the one’s your protecting, while there keeping a secret from you.’’

John looked at Alicia before she disappeared into a cloud of black smoke and soon vanished through the sky.


Back at the hospital in the, Restitution room.


‘’Still no pulse.’’ A Nurse said.

‘’Okay, lets go once more. Charging. 360.’’ The doctor said as he placed the deliberators onto Dean’s chest. ‘’All clear?’’

‘’Clear.’’

The doctor let the voltage go as Dean’s body rose up a little off the bed and then back down again.

‘’Still no pulse.’’ One of the nurses said as she looked at the doctor.

‘’Alright, I’ll call it.’’ The doctor said as he looked at the clock at the far side of the room. ‘’Time of death, 6:06pm.’’
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