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 Littleville, Alabama, What the...?
Saiyuki
Posted: Mar 2 2007, 09:08 PM


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Thanks Rach wink.gif

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Part seven

They exited the car and crossed the street. The motel wasn’t nearly as run down as it had looked just a couple of hours ago, and it was really getting dark now so the three of them headed inside. Indy hit the bell on the check in desk and got a fright as the motel owner suddenly appeared from under it.
“Jesus! Dude you scared the crap outta me!”
“There will be no language like that on these premises, thank you young lady”
“I’m sorry…” Indy looked at Sam with a what the…? Look on her face, he just shrugged
“It’s okay sweetheart just not in future please”
“Yes sir” she said sincerely smiling at the man.

“Welcome to the brand new Littleville Oak street motel. How may I help you?” the man asked

Dean suddenly realised the man was directing this at him
“Oh um, a twin and a single room please” he said looking Towards Indy who smiled back.

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“Ah but wouldn’t the lovely couple prefer a Queen?”

“What?” Dean was confused now, not a good look for him.

The motel owner obviously meant Sam and Indy. He was looking at them as if he were a proud uncle at their wedding.

Indy began “Well actually...” “…They’re very much in love, aren’t you Sammy?” this was too much fun for Dean in Sam’s opinion.

“So you two, are you married?” asked the clerk

“Not if I can help it…” the young woman muttered. “What was that hunny?” Sam said nudging her “I said we’re not married yet” and looking up into Sam’s pretty blue green eyes she continued “…But it’s going to be a beautiful, and very expensive ceremony” her smile dropped as she looked over at Dean, then reappeared as she returned her gaze towards the gentleman manning the desk.

The man took two keys down from their hooks and placed them on the desk in front of him.

“Do you take Master card?” Dean said as he pulled a “Mr Jackles’” card out from his wallet.
“Sure thing”

Indy grabbed the keys while Dean was occupied and walked towards the rooms at a quick pace. Sam followed her but only caught up just as she shut the single room’s door in his face.

“Hey! That’s no fair!” Sam called through the door

“Aww, but you guys look so good together…night Sam”

Her giggles were torture for Sam but he couldn’t help laugh a little too. Just as Sam picked up the Queen rooms door key their new friend had so kindly left them, Dean came rushing towards him.

“Hey Dean, what’s wrong man?” Dean’s face was almost in panic.
“I had to pay the guy with cash. All my credit cards have expired!”
“What do you mean? That’s impossible!”
“Apparently not” Dean produced a rolled up newspaper from his back pocket “Check out the date”

Sam looked quizzically at his brother, then the paper he now held in his hand “May 23rd 2011? What the…?

“Yeah that’s what I thought too. Hey where’s our little buddy?”

“Uh, in her room?”
“Funny, don’t you mean your room?”
“She ah, got ahead of me…?”
“What? Okay…you get the floor then” he grinned
“Dean?”
“It’s your own fault so shut up”
“Jerk”
“Bitch”



Part 8 coming soon biggrin.gif....
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Posted: Mar 3 2007, 09:00 AM


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Part eight

There was soon a frantic knock on the boy’s door. Dean opened it and their companion burst in with a copy of TV week clutched tightly in her hands.
“Oh my god! Guys have you seen this?”

“Yeah, May 23rd 2011 we couldn’t believe it either” Sam told her

“So what does this mean? Sam?”

“I’m not sure…a rift in the space time continuum is the best I can come up with right now” He said shaking his head, it sounded even more peculiar when he said it out loud.

“So…What? We’ve done a Hiro Nakamura?”

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“Man I love that show!” Indy and Sam just looked at Dean in Disbelief
“Shutting up now” he said as he sat on the edge of the bed.

“So do you think it could be a Demon of some kind, y’know somthin’ big and nasty, that we can kill”

“I don’t know maybe” Sam looked worried
“Well, I’m never gonna get to sleep now!”

“Really, is that so?” Dean said before making a hasty retreat to the single room next door.

Indy watched him leave but she didn’t care too much. It seemed that Sam was the only one taking any of this seriously anyway.

“How could we have lost four years? I mean? Gosh are we even four year in the future for you too?”

“Yes, it seems we’re both from 2007, my brother on the other hand? I’d go with Pluto.”

This made her smile “You do know that Pluto isn’t even a planet anymore right?”

“Yeah I heard that”

“Sam, be honest with me, ‘cause I know that Dean was lying out of his ass.”

“Honest about what?”

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“The car, the bug that was here before, that didn’t belong to your cousin did it?”

Sam was rather taken aback by this but somehow felt that he could tell her.

“No, that car doesn’t belong to our cousin Rodney or even our uncle Fred, it’s…it belonged to a friend. A girl called Ava.”

He then told her all about how he’d met Ava, how she’d saved his life because she had seen his death
Although rather conveniently he left out the part where he had visions too.



Part 9 coming soon...
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Posted: Mar 3 2007, 11:52 AM


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Prepare to get Kripke'd...again tongue.gif

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Part nine

According to the clock in their room it was now nearly 3am. Indy had been right she couldn’t sleep, too many thoughts and theories were clogging up her mind.
Sam on the other hand, after discussing what could be going on for over two hours, had fallen asleep on the bed.

Bored Indy decided to Borrow Sam’s computer for a while. She visited Google and typed in “Littleville, Alabama”

Nothing came up, well except that it was the perfect little town, with a great police force and awards for outstanding standards in education.
She put her face in her hands.
“Well I thought this town was small but that’s just ridiculous, nothing bad at all? No murders or suicides, nothing?”
Sam stirred behind her, she turned to see him now lying on his stomach.

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“You know? You’re pretty cute for a geek…” she smiled to herself and went back to the screen.

This time she did a search for the name “Samuel Winchester”

She was shocked at what came up…after the two gun sites a Government site appeared on the list.

Considered armed and VERY DANGEROUS :
Wanted in twenty-nine states for robbery, grievous bodily harm, actual bodily harm, Credit fraud, Identity theft, kidnapping and the murder of two police officers and eighteen innocent bystanders.


Indy turned around to look at the 23year old man peacefully sleeping on the bed.

“My God Sammy, how could you do these things? What are you going to become?”

Sam stirred again but this time was different, he rolled onto his back then began to toss and turn violently as if having a bad dream.

“Sam! Sam wake up!”

Indy grabbed his arms trying to hold him steady. His eyes opened and he was still again, but he wasn’t looking at Indy. It was as though he was looking right through her.

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“Sam? What is it? Sam you’re scaring me”

Suddenly the door opened

“Dean, thank god”
“What happened?”
“I don’t…” he pulled Indy out of the way.
“Sam? Sam! What did you see?”



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Supernaturally Obsessed
Posted: Mar 3 2007, 12:13 PM


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Okay Jen, now that I'm all caught up you better get your butt back here and update!

Great story so far, can't wait to find out what's going on. smileyclap22nx.gif
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Posted: Mar 3 2007, 01:11 PM


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Thanks Jen wink.gif

I'm glad i posted it now, and from here on it gets a bit darker evilhands.gif
Enjoy biggrin.gif


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Part ten

Sam was sat upright on the end of the bed now.
Indy was shaking as she handed Sam a glass of water and an Aspirin. She’d seen a lot of things in her time, but never something like that.
She sat beside Sam on the bed as Dean crouched down in front of him.

“I saw us, all three of us, in a house, one of the ones off the main square I think. There was a Demon of some kind attacking us. Then Indy you…”

“I what Sam? Tell me…Please.”

“I’m not sure, I think you were…Possessed? Your eyes, they were…red.”

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Indy was speechless.

“It’s okay, we won’t let that happen to you” said Dean now trying to calm two people at once.
“Sam what did this Demon look like?”
“I don’t know, I…I don’t know, all I can say is I don’t usually see myself in my visions” Sam was exhausted and frustrated at not being able to give more information.

“It’s okay Sam…” Said Indy putting her hand on his shoulder “Maybe you should try and get some more sleep, ‘cause, well no offence or anything, but, you kinda look like crap” She smiled sweetly as he turned to her.

“She’s right y’know you do look like crap” Dean agreed

Sam smiled finally “Gee, Thanks everyone”

It was at this point Sam noticed that his computer was on.

“Did you find anything Indy?”

She looked at him with that innocent smile “No, this towns cleaner than my grandmothers toilet, and that’s a difficult feat to accomplish.”

He smiled again “Sleep? Sleep sounds good” pushing himself back on the bed and laying down again.

“That goes for you too” Instructed Dean, handing Indy the key to the next room.

“But what about…?”
“I’ll watch him…He is my little brother after all”

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Indy turned towards the door, looked back at the man on the bed, and then his big brother, and then left the room.



Part 11 coming soon...
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Posted: Mar 3 2007, 04:38 PM


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Have completed the story, I'm really happy with my ending...you have to wait a while for that though (Part 20 rolleyes.gif)
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Part eleven

As morning broke Dean raised his head from the dresser and looked around the room.

“Note to self, do not fall asleep in a chair ever again” he stood up and cricked his neck to one side.
Sam was still sleeping quietly on the queen size bed.
“Wow, well done little brother you’ve made it passed...” he looked at the clock on the wall which told him it was 6:45 in the morning “…six am? …Those visions really do take a lot out of you don’t they?” concern crossing his expression.

He had a quick shower, got dressed, then made his way out of the room where he bumped straight into Indy.

“I come bearing breakfast” she beamed handing Dean a coffee.
“Wow, thanks”
“So how…?”
“He’s fine.”
“Good, that’s…good”

Dean sipped his cappuccino as Indy watched him in silence

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“Okay, awkward” He then turned to her “So…Indy. Is that your real name?”
This line of questioning stumped the young woman.
“Um, well it’s funny you should ask that ‘cause actually it’s…Annaleese”
“Annaleese?”
“Yeah, Annaleese Indigo Jones. I have my drivers licence and death certificate handy if you wanna check?”

She looked up at him, grinning.

“What? What do mean Death certificate?” his face dropped “You’re not a vengeful spirit of somethin’ are you?”
“Not last time I checked” said Indy shaking her head
“Well I? How? You look pretty damn alive from where I’m standing”
“It’s kind of a funny story, you see I was in Las Vegas last year and my dad, my “Real dad”, who is a total nut, tried to kill me. Which was sortta fun of course, he hit me with his freakin’ Lamborghini, which was a surprise as the repair bill for one of those baby’s is ridiculous, any way he hit me and…”

“Hey guys” Sam poked his head out the door.

“…Maybe another time”

“Mornin’ sleepy head” Dean said as he ruffled Sam’s hair.

“How you feeling Sam?” Indy asked with genuine concern in her voice.

She had even shocked herself with this one, she never liked to get close to fellow hunters, as it so often goes wrong with devastating consequences.

“Okay I guess” He replied

The three of them headed out to explore the town…again



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Posted: Mar 3 2007, 05:01 PM


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eep! Jen come back here!!! Update now!!!!

I bet Indy has healing powers or something....for some reason I don't trust her.
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Tobes, you know that im not the type to fold, to give you what you want just because...okay here you go rolleyes.gif

[spoiler]for part Part 16 [spoiler]You sure you wanna know?[spoiler] Dean realises that he doesn't trust Indy biggrin.gif[/spoiler][/spoiler][/spoiler]
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Part twelve


It had changed so much. There were children laughing as they made their way to school, Birds singing in the trees above them, Like nothing bad could ever happen there.

Suddenly the loud screeching of car tyres filled the air, followed quickly by a smashing sound and a dull thud.

Sam was first to head towards the noises, Indy and Dean pursued closely.
As they turned the street corner the car that had made the sound came into view.

An early 1970’s VW bug…

Sam couldn’t believe what he was seeing, was it really her? “Ava?” He yelled

Sam rushed toward his friend as fast as he could, until he noticed the blood on the ground.
Ava had hit someone in her haste.
Indy and Dean stayed on the sidewalk as Sam stood in the street watching the blood pool make it’s way towards a nearby drain in the gutter. Ava was still in the car it was her!

Sam finally unfroze himself and walked steadily over to the drivers’ window.

“Ava? It’s me Sam…do you remember me?”

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The woman in the drivers seat was Ava but not as he remembered her. She had aged four years, looked tired and agitated.
She rolled down her window.
“Sam…that… you can’t, it’s impossible. You’re dead!”

“Ava? No I’m not look” He leaned in towards her, reaching in through the open window, he grabbed her right hand and placed it on his chest. “See? I’m as real and alive as you are”

“Then you have to help me, It’s coming! It’s coming and it’s going to kill us all!”

“Step away from the vehicle” shouted a man from behind Sam.

Sam dropped Ava’s arm and turned to see the towns Chief of police pointing a shotgun at him.

“Get out of the way son”

Sam stepped to one side as the officer moved in on Ava. “There will be no murders in my town Damnit!” he yelled, as he shot her in the head…



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Posted: Mar 3 2007, 06:17 PM


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LMAO! For some reason I found Ava's death funny....iunno why. *cough* But anywho...she totally should have taken advantage of Sam putting her hand on his chest. I know I would've!!

*pouts* I really want an update!!! And now I want to get to part 16!!! Jen don't leave me like this!!!
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Posted: Mar 3 2007, 07:31 PM


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not sure if we'll get to part 16 tonight tongue.gif sorry hun sad.gif
By the way are you ready for a shocking revalation? ohmy.gif


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Part thirteen

By this point a crowd had begun to gather. As the body lay in the street, Ava’s in her own car, the town’s people began to panic.
Just one or two at first, but soon enough the small town was full scared innocent people.
A few screams from the surrounding witnesses began to permeate the silence that Ava’s death had brought.

The man who had shot and killed her started trying to take control of the situation

“It’s okay everyone...” He began to yell to the crowds. The screams dissipated as the onlookers listened to him “The threat has been taken care of, so please, if you could just all calmly make your way back to your homes, lock your windows and doors until further notice. Do not open your door to anyone unless it is either my self or the Deputy”

Because this was such a small town, where everybody knew everyone else, they appeared to trust this man. The crowds slowly dissipated into surrounding buildings or down off-shooting streets, to do exactly as he had asked of them.

Dean grabbed Sam by the arm, he had to literally drag his brother away from Ava’s corpse, still sat in the drivers seat of her Bug.

“Sam, I’m sorry man” Indy said, desperately trying to console the young hunter.

Sam stared unblinkingly at the floor ahead of him as dean pulled him back into the queen room at the motel.
“She was trying to warn them” Sam whispered to himself sitting down on the bed once more.

Indy came in moments later and closed the door behind her. “Sam?..” she began.

“I’m okay” Said Sam quickly

“Well we all know that that’s a whole other pile of dookie” She continued “but that wasn’t what I was going to ask you anyway.”

She had both boys’ attention now.

“In your vision, you said you saw yourself and that’s never happened before, right?”
Sam nodded
“Well maybe…I don’t know, maybe…it was Ava’s vision you were having, and not necessarily your own? Does that make sense?”
She could tell by the look in his eyes as they darted side to side before focusing on his hands, which lay in his lap, that he did understand and realised that she was right.

Dean finally cottoned on to what the girl was saying.

“So what Ava was yelling right before she…y’know…she’d had the same vision as Sam and was just trying to warn the town?”

Dean could see where this was going, it was heading towards the one thing he feared most, more than being alone

The “Big Bad”…

…The Yellow eyed Demon!



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Posted: Mar 3 2007, 07:37 PM


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ohmy.gif You killed Ava!




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Posted: Mar 3 2007, 07:39 PM


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Oh noes!! The suspense!!!

OMG! *cries harder* I have a hard enough time trying to remember fanfics I've started to read. You're gonna have to PM me when you update this.
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OMG! I can't believe you killed Ava! ohmy.gif And poor Sammy! tissue.gif I'm glad I'm caught up now...Can't wait for part 14! laugh.gif C ya! wave.gif

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I'm aiming to get the whole thing posted by tomorrow night biggrin.gif 6 more parts to go wink.gif

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Part fourteen

“Dean? What was she warning us about? Did I miss the memo or something?”

Indy was getting agitated now, not getting the answers she needed was starting to make her head spin. She sat next to Sam on the large soft bed and glared up into Deans hazel green eyes, searching, waiting.

“We’ve spent pretty much our entire lives hunting down this son of a bitch, here’s our chance to kill it!”
“Dean? Do you really think it’s him?” said Sam, panic in his tone
“Calm down Sammy, we can handle it this time”
“With what Dean?” he yelled as he stood in anger “We don’t have the Colt how do you suppose we kill it? Have you even got a plan?”
“I’m working on it” dean explained squaring up to his taller sibling.
“Yeah sure Dean, whatever”

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“You guys? Will you quit bickering? Gee wiz, it’s like watchin’ a pair of eight-year-olds fight over which is the best power ranger. It was Trini, the Yellow one from the original series, so you can drop it and tell me what the hell you two are yelling about! …I’m waiting!”

She was standing as well now, slightly flustered, staring the boys down one at a time.
The brothers looked at each other, then Sam began. “A Demon, a Demon with yellow eyes…It’s destroyed our lives, our family…”
“It killed our mom, probably our dad too, and Sam’s girlfriend”

At the mere mention of his girlfriend, Jessica’s demise, Sam sighed and looked away from the conversation.

“Wait…Sam? It…it killed your girlfriend? Was it…um…” She struggled to find the words “…A freak fire?”
Sam turned back to face her “How’d you know that?” his voice croaking slightly
“Because some thing, made of pure evil, pinned my boyfriend to the ceiling and then murdered him with fire”

She began to well up but managed to push back her emotions with a sharp sniff.

“When did this happen?” Said Dean cutting into the tension.
“That doesn’t matter…what matters is that I know how to kill the bastard!”




Part 15 coming soon....
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Posted: Mar 3 2007, 08:42 PM


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WHY DIDNT YOU TELL ME YOU HAD A FANFIC OUT JEN
gawwd and its so GOOD TOO
oh noes
ava is dead
YED is back
and i like INDY!
wheee
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