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 Sacrifice, Can Dean save his family from the Demon?
JeNsEn#No1.com
Posted: Feb 15 2007, 10:58 AM


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Hi everyone grouphug.gif

This is my new FanFic called 'Sacrifice' This story follows after Rewakend my other Fan Fic.


I have made a trailer for this FanFic - Sacrifice Trailer
I hope you guys enjoy this one smile.gif



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Chapter One


The night was dark and cold. It was like the black clouds were the sky itself as they covered the sky. No moonlight shown through. Tall and thick trees formed a circle as they covered the surrounding area.
There were no trees in the circle, just stones and pebbles laid on the ground. Some were covered in something that was dark red. In the centre of the circle was a tall table shaped rock, on top of it was a rusty brass cup and in it was some red liquid.
In the far side of the circle stood a woman, she had black hair which stopped just below her shoulders. She had a long black dress on and around her neck was some sort of pendent in the shape of a skull. She stood there staring at Dean who was standing in front of the table shaped rock. Dean looked at the rusty cup with fear in his eyes, before he lifted his eyes up to look at the woman.

‘If you want to save them, drink.’ The woman said.

‘You sure they’ll be safe?’ Dean replied.

‘Yes. Now drink.’ The woman asked a little louder.

Dean looked back down at the cup. he then raised his right hand over one side of the rusty cup and froze as he stared at the cup as he was having second thoughts.
He then took the rusty cup off the rock then raised it up to his mouth. He closed his eyes before he swallowed the liquid in one gulp. Just seconds after Dean drank the liquid he fell to his knees, he felt pain ripping through his entire body before he fell to the ground.

………………

‘NO!’

Sam woke up with a start, hot and sweating. His eyes moved around the room before he turned to his left to see if he had woken Danielle up, but she hadn't moved.
Sam got out of bed and headed for the bathroom.

He turned on the tap and put some water into his hands before he splashed it over his face, he kept having flash backs from the nightmare he had. Or, he thought it was.
All that was going through Sam’s mind was that his dream was just a nightmare and not one of his visions.

Sam thought back to that day he had left Dean at the hospital. He thought he had done the right thing and left town without his brohter. He just didn’t want to see Dean get hurt anymore.

So, he quit hunting so he could lead a normal life. And lead a normal life he did.
It had been two whole years since the Demon was killed, and through those years he had called Dean five times. Dean had continued to hunt while Sam began to lead a whole new life away from the things that go bump in the night.
He and Danielle got married nine months ago. They had their own house in Indiana. Danielle found a new job working as a bar maid and Sam had just finished his first semester in college studying Law.
Both Sam and Danielle have a beautiful daughter named Mackenzie. She is five months now and looking more like her daddy every day.

Sam kept saying to himself that it was all just a N=nightmare and had put it aside for now. He turned off the tap and headed for the door that connects their bathroom to their bedroom. Sam stopped to see Danielle at the door way.

‘Sam what’s wrong?’ Danielle asked whiping her tired eyes.

‘Nothing. I just couldn’t sleep.’

‘Are you sure your all right?’

‘Yeah. It was only a nightmare.’

‘What was it about?’

‘I cant remember.’

‘Just go back to bed.’ Sam said as he walked up to Danielle and gave her a kiss on her cheek.

Just then a little cry was heard down the hall way. Sam started to head for the hallway but was stopped as Danielle put her hand on his arm.

‘I’ll get her, you go back to bed and get some sleep.’ Danielle said as she let go of Sam’s arm.

‘Alright.’ Sam said as he headed for the bed as Danielle headed down the hall.

Sam laid on the bed, his mind still around the nightmare he had, before he closed his eyes and drifted off to sleep.

….

[Five hours later]

Sam walked down the stairs while putting on one of his favorite shirts.

As he went down the stairs he could smell the bacon that Danielle was making for breakfast.
Sam walked into the kitchen and went over to Danielle and gave her a kiss.

‘Good morning.’ Sam said.

‘Good morning, darling.’ Danielle replied before she flipped the bacon that was in the frying pan.

‘That smells good.’ Sam said giving her a hug from behind.

‘It’s almost ready, could you put out the plates.’ Danielle said.

‘Sure.’ Sam said as he headed for the cupboard. He opened the cupboard and took out two plates, then he walked over to the table and set them out along with two small glasses.

After Sam finished setting up the table he turned to look at Mackenzie who was sitting in her high chair.

‘Hiya..’ Sam said as he went over to her and started to play peak-a-boo with her.

Mackenzie started to giggle and laugh as her daddy put his hands in front of his face and opened them up and saying peek-a-boo.

‘Who’s my little angel?’ Sam said as he started to tickle her. Danielle walked over to the table with the pan, she placed two slices of bacon in each plate.

She looked over to Sam and Mackenzie and she couldn’t help but smile at them. Danielle then went over to the sink and placed the pan inside it before she went back to the table and sat down.

Sam finished playing peek-a-boo with Mackenzie before he went over to the table and sat down and started to dig into his bacon.

The sound of a bell was heard and Sam stopped eating and looked towards the front door.

‘Who could that be?’ Danielle asked looking towards the front door.

Sam stood up from the chair and made his way to the front door. He slowly opened the door. As the door fully opened Sam’s mouth dropped to who was standing at the door.

‘Dean.’
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OMG, I can't wait for the next update of this, its incredibly good!!!!

I checked out the trailers too, fantastic!!!!

Now, I'm excited!

When I get back home from school today, god 6 o'clock in the morning is an ungodly hour to be up right now, but when i get home i'll check out Reawakened as well!!!

Can't Wait!!

-Cait
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Hey everyone grouphug.gif


Chapter Two now up biggrin.gif

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Chapter Two


‘Dean? What are you doing here?’

‘Well, I was looking for a beer.’ Dean said with one of his best smiles.

‘Yeah. Sure.’ Sam said as he also smiled before he trailed on. ‘What are you doing here?’

‘Can't I visit my brother?’

Sam gave Dean a brotherly smile as he stood to one side to let Dean passed him. Sam looked behind Dean and saw Joanne walking up towards Dean.

‘Hey Joanne.’ Sam said as she walked up the three steps leading into his house.

‘Hey Sam.’ Joanne replied as she entered the house, as Sam smiled at her he looked down to her stomach.

‘Oh my god, Joanne!’ Sam said surprised.

Joanne stopped and looked at Sam before she too looked down at her stomach and putting her hands on her stomach and then looked back to Sam.

‘Your...your...’ Sam hesitated.

‘Pregnant.’ Joanne finished off his sentence.

‘That’s great.’ Sam said from excitement.

‘Thanks.’

Danielle walked into the living room to see who Sam was talking to. She saw Dean in the middle of the living room.

‘Dean!’ Danielle yelled out as she ran across the room and threw her arms around Dean and hugged him tight. Dean put his arms around Danielle to hug her back.

‘Nice to see you Dean!’

‘Right back at you, Dean.’ Danielle said before she and Dean let go of each other.

Danielle looked towards the hall to see Joanne walking into the living room with Sam.

‘Hey Joanne.’ Danielle said.

‘Hey.’ Joanne replied with a smile. Danielle looked at Joanne’s stomach as she walked in.

‘Oh my god Joanne! You're pregnant!’ Danielle yelled out.

‘Last time I checked, I was.’ Joanne joked still smiling.

‘How long to go?’

‘Three months.’

‘Wow, that’s not long away.’

‘Yeah I know.’ Joanne smiled. Danielle walked up to her and gave her a big hug. Before she turned back around and gave Dean another hug.

‘Congratulations.’ Danielle said as she let go of Dean then turned around to look at Joanne.

‘Congratulations, to the both of you.’ Danielle said with a smile.

‘Would you guys like a drink?’ Sam said as he walked towards the kitchen.

‘No thanks.’ Joanne replied.

‘I’d love a bear.’ Dean replied back as he followed Sam to the kitchen.

Dean stopped as he entered the kitchen and looked towards the little baby girl in the high chair as Sam went over to the fridge and took out two bears.

‘She yours?’ Dean asked.

‘Yep.’ Sam said as he closed the door to the fridge and walked over to Dean.

‘She’s beautiful. She looks a lot like you.’ Dean said as he took the bear off Sam.

‘Thanks.’ Sam said.

‘What’s her name?’

‘Mackenzie’

‘How old is she?’

‘Five months.’

‘Why didn’t you tell me you had a daughter?’ Dean asked as he took a sip of his bear.

‘You haven’t called me for over nine months now.’

‘Neither have you?’

‘I did.. I tried to call you when she was born, and called you when I got married. But you never picked up.’

‘Your married?’ Dean said as he lifted up his eye brows.

‘Yeah. For, like, nine months! That’s when you stopped calling, so I stopped trying.’

‘I have been busy.’

‘Doing what?’

‘Doing what we do. Hunting.’

‘You know I don’t hunt anymore Dean!’

‘Yeah I know.’ Dean said as he looked over to Mackenzie.

Sam watched Dean looking at Mackenzie.

‘Wait. Dean, are you here about a hunt?’ Sam asked.

‘No’ Dean said as he turned back to look at Sam.

‘Dean.’

‘Sam I’m not hear about a hunt. Can't I see my little brother, as I haven’t seen him for, like, two years. Who do you think I am coming all this way about some hun-? Alright, alright. Yeah I’m here about a hunt.’ Dean said.

Sam put his bear down on the table before he looked back at Dean.

‘Dean, I -’

‘I know, I know. You’ve quit hunting. I know.’

‘Then why do you want me to go with you one this hunt?’

‘Because Ian't do this my self Sam.’

‘Why? You’ve been on many hunts that you did yourself.’

Dean turned his head and looked down to the floor before he sat down on one of the chairs around the table.

‘I just thought if I came back would go on hunts again like what we used to.’

Sam’s thoughts went straight back to the dream he had about Dean before he sat down.

‘Dean,I have a family now. A new life. And your expecting a kid yourself. When it’s born, will you continue to hunt?’

‘Well yeah. Sam, I do want to live a life without spirits and Demons, but a lot of people out there needs us. Need our help. Sam I’m asking you just one more hunt, and anyway this hunt needs the two of us.’

‘Alright Dean. Just this one, alright.’

‘Alright.’ Dean replied.

‘So what’s the hunt?’

‘Well there has been mysterious disappearing around a diner just outside of Indiana.’

‘Why is that ower kind of problem?’

‘Well there is a crossroads out side of the dinner.’

‘A crossroad? Were there any aero flowers?’

‘Yes.’

‘When do we go?’

‘This afternoon.’

‘Why not now?’

‘Well, first things first.’

‘What’s that?’

‘Get something to eat. I’m starving.’

Sam gave Dean a smile as Dean gave a smile back.

‘What you guys talking about?’ Danielle asked as she walked into the kitchen with Joanne.

‘Nothing.’ Dean replied.

‘She’s gorgeous.’ Joanne said as she walked up to Mackenzie.

‘She’s our little angel.’ Danielle replied.

‘Isn’t she precious Dean?’ Joanne said as she looked over to Dean.

‘Yeah. She is. Cant wait to see our little one.’ Dean replied back.

‘Me too.’ Joanne said as she placed her hand over her stomach.

‘Anyone like some breakfast?’ Danielle asked as she walked over to the fridge and took out some eggs.

‘Yes please.’ Joanne said.

‘Me too.’ Dean said.

Danielle cracked the two eggs into a pan.

‘So what’s everyone doing today.’ Danielle asked as she turned around to look at everyone at the table.

‘Well Sam nda I are going out.’ Dean replied.

‘Where you going?’ Joanne asked.

‘Just to catch up with something.’ Sam said.

‘Okay.’ Danielle said as she turned around to finish off breakfast.

[5 minutes later]

Danielle washed up the dishes as Joanne sat on the couch with baby Mackenzie on her knee. Dean was out at the Impala sorting out their bags.

‘We won't be that long Danielle.’ Sam said as he gave Danielle a kiss.

‘Alright. But don’t be too long.’

‘We won't.’ Sam said as he gave her another kiss before he left the kitchen and then left the house.
Sam closed the door behind him and headed for Dean.

‘You ready?’ Dean asked.

‘Yeah. Lets go.’ Sam said as he entered the passenger side of the Impala, as Dean went into the drivers side of the Impala. Dean started up the engine then he dove down the road heading out of town.

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awesome
can't wait for more
update soon
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Where have I been??

I totally missed the update!!

Well, I read it now, that's the important thing I guess.

So now, I just have one question:

When's the next one???

LOL

The update was awesome, Dean is going to be a daddy!!

I don't think he should keep hunting though. It really isn't the safest career choice, you know?

Anyway,

I can't wait for the next update!

-Cait
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Wow! This is awesome! Keep up the good work!
Dean's gonna be a daddy wub.gif
When's the next update? I cant wait for more smile.gif

Jen xox
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Hi eyeryone grouphug.gif

The next Chapter is up.. Thanks for the great comments guys, love them biggrin.gif



Chapter Three
Dean pulled over just outside of Bernie’s Diner. The drive from Sam’s house took over an hour. Both brothers got out of the car and headed towards the crossroad.

‘Do you think people are actually making deals with a Demon?’ Sam asked as he followed Dean towards the middle of the crossroad.

‘People will do anything these days, I wouldn’t put it past them.’ Dean said as he stopped in the middle.

‘Maybe it’s not a Demon.’ Sam suggested stopping next to his brother.

‘What makes you think it’s not?’ Dean asked as he turned around to look at his brother.

‘You said it yourself Dean. People were leaving the dinner and vanishing without a trace. Doesn’t sound like Demon material to me. Maybe were dealing with something else. Phantom Attacker?’

‘Don’t Phantom Attackers steal people from there beds? Besides, why are you denying that were dealing with a Demon here?’

‘I don’t know Dean. Something just doesn’t fit. Don’t deals only work if your wanting to trade something for another, which always results in death?’

‘Well yeah. If your wanting fame and success then yes.’

‘Don’t you get to live the fame for at least a year before arriving at Death’s door? If these people made a pact with a Demon, then where are they? Didn’t you say that their car, wallets and other stuff belonging to them, were found along the crossroad. If these people made a deal-.’

‘Then why would their belongings be scattered along the crossroad?’ Dean finished.

‘Yeah. Where’d they go? They didn’t leave in their car and I don’t think they would walk miles to the nearest town in the dark.’

‘Well there’s only one way to find out what’s going on.’ Dean said as he looked towards the dinner.

‘Ask the people at the diner what they know.’ Sam said as Dean turned back.

Dean nodded his head and headed towards the diner. Sam followed.

Both brothers entered the diner and headed up to the bar.
‘Two.’ Dean said as he walked over to the bar and sat down on one of the tall red chairs. Sam sat on the chair next to Dean as man over the counter took two beers out of the fridge and opened the beers before he placed them onto the table in front of the boys.

‘So what brings you two here?’ The man said as he started to dry a glass.

‘Road trip.’ Sam said as he took a drink of his beer.

‘Hey, I heard that a few people have disappeared around these parts.’ Dean said as he took a drink of his beer.

‘Yeah. Someone disappeared a week ago, his wallet and everything was found. Everything but him. It was like he just vanished off the world\’

‘What’d you mean by that?’ Sam asked.

‘He just left the diner and -’ The man trailed off.

‘And what?’ Dean said.

‘After he left, a few people heard screaming coming from outside. We went out to see what had happened, he was gone.’

The brothers exchanged a glance.

‘Well thanks for your time.’ Sam said as he stood up.

‘And the beers.’ Dean said as he took out some money and placed it down next to the beers before he stood up.

The man smiled at them as he took the two glasses off the table and headed to the other side of the bar.

Sam and Dean left the dinner and headed towards the Impala.

‘Well, that sure explains a lot. Definitely not a Demon.’ Sam said as he opened the door to the passenger side.

‘What if it was? What if this Demon takes random people? As Demon’s just want death and destruction for it’s own sake, maybe this is a Demon that kills for the fun of it.’ Dean said before he entered the driver’s side. Sam looked over to the diner before he entered the Impala.

‘Anyway it is getting late. We should head back.’ Dean said as he started up the engine.

Dean pulled out from the side walk and drove back down the road they came from.

It took about another hour before Dean drove onto the street were Sam’s house was. Dean drove into the drive way and stopped in front of the garage. Sam got out of the Impala and headed for the house, Dean followed.

Dean stopped and looked up to the sky and noticed the dark black clouds above them.

‘Guess were going to have a wild night.’ Dean said looking back at Sam.

‘Yeah, this storm looks like a big one.’ Sam said looking up to the sky before proceeding to the door. ‘Come on.’ Sam said, opening the door. Dean looked back up to the sky before walking towards the house.

Sam took off his coat and placed it onto one of the separated hooks on the wall.

‘We’re home.’ Sam said as he walked into the living room. Dean closed the door then took off his jacket.

‘Hey honey.’ Danielle said as she walked out of the kitchen. She walked over to Sam and gave him a hug.

‘So, where about did you boys go to?’ Danielle asked as she let go of Sam.

‘Just catching up with things.’ Dean said as he sat on the couch.

‘Are you hungry?’ Danielle asked as she headed for the kitchen.

‘Yeah.’ Sam replied.

‘Where’s Joanne?’ Dean asked.

‘She’s putting little ‘Kenzie to bed.’ Danielle said as she entered the kitchen and started dinner.

‘So. About these crossroads.’ Sam said as he sat down on one of the arm chairs. ‘We’ll head out in the morning to get more information about these disappearances.’

‘Alright.’ Dean said as he took the remote and turned on the TV.


[3 hours latter]

After a lovely meal, Danielle and Joanne caught up on things while Dean and Sam watch the Dallas/Tampa game. After a long night of catching up Sam and Danielle headed for bed.
Dean and Joanne took the spare room but stayed awake so they could talk.

As Dean was getting ready for bed, Joanne was lying on the bed rubbing her stomach, as she began to think. She couldn’t wait to become a mom, she always loved kids and now she is having one of her own, she couldn’t help but smile.

‘I cant wait for it to come.’ Joanne said quietly.

‘Me neither.’ Dean said as he sat down on the bed next to Joanne, he leaned over to her and placed his hand on her stomach beginning to rub it.

‘Hey in there, little guy.’ Dean said as he gave a smile. ‘Have you figured out a name for it yet?’ Dean asked as he sat up straight.

‘Well, I do like the name Natalie.’

‘What if it’s a boy?’

‘I like the name David.’

‘What do you think it’ll be?’

‘I’d love a little girl. What do you think it’ll be?’

‘I ‘d like both.. A girl or a boy.’

Joanne smiled as Dean smiled back.

A noise of floor boards moving made the two look towards the hall.

‘What was that?’ Joanne asked.

‘Maybe Sam or Danielle checking on the baby?’ Dean said as he looked back at Joanne.

‘But what if it’s not? What if it’s a burglar?’

‘I’ll go check.’ Dean said as he went off the bed.

He headed down the hall, he slowly opened Sam and Danielle’s bedroom door to find the two asleep. He heard the again and Dean looked back down the hall towards Mackenzie’s nursery. He slowly opened the door and stopped as he saw a man standing next to the crib
.
He had a long black cloak on, his face was so dark Dean couldn’t make out. He placed his hands on the crib and looked down at Mackenzie.

‘HEY!’ Dean yelled out. The man turned his head to look at Dean.

Dean’s face fell as he saw the man’s eyes.

Those familiar eyes. Those evil bright yellow eyes glared at him.

‘S-Sam! SAMMY!’ Dean yelled out. Just then the Demon turned around to face Dean. The next thing Dean knew, he was pined to the wall, he felt his feet leave the ground.

Joanne ran out into the hall as she heard Dean scream, she ran into Sam’s room and woke him up.

‘Sam! Sam!’ Joanne yelled.

‘What is it?’ Sam said as he sat up.

‘Dean’s in trouble!’

‘What!’

Suddenly Sam heard Dean call his name. ‘Joanne you stay here with Danielle.’ Sam said as he got out of bed and headed to the nursery.
As Sam entered the nursery the first thing he saw was the Demon standing at the crib, he then turned to his right and saw Dean half way up the wall.

‘Sam! Get the baby!’ Dean said.

Sam looked over at the Demon in shock. He found the courage deep i nside and ran towards the Demon. As he did the Demon leaned over the crib and took Mackenzie out.
Before Sam reached the Demon, it vanished along with Mackenzie in a cloud of black smoke and quickly dispersed thought the darkness.
Dean fell to the ground as the Demon vanished.
Sam stopped as he looked in horror were the Demon just stood.

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OMG, NOT SAMMY'S BABY!!!!

WHYYYYYYYYY!!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

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OMFG!!! Not Sammy's little grrl!!! Ahhh!! Update A.S.A.P.!!!!

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I NEED AN UPDATE

I NEED AN UPDATE


I NEED AN UPDATE

I LOVE THIS FAN FIC


PLEASE UPDATE SOON

THIS IS REALLLY GOOOOOOD

AND THE TRAILER ROCKED TOOOOOO
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Hi everyone next Chapter is up grouphug.gif

Hope you all are enjoying the story so far.. smile.gif

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Chapter four


Sam felt like his heart was being ripped out of him. He felt anger and pain rip through his body.
He fell to his knees and couldn’t stop the tears streaming down his face.
Dean stood up and headed for Sam.

‘Sam.’ Dean said quietly.

‘Why, why, why! Why her? My little angel.’ Sam said though his tears.

‘We’ll get her back Sam.’

‘I thought you said that thing was dead!’ Sam said as he stood up and faced Dean.

‘I thought it was dead! I saw it die!’

‘Did it look dead to you? It took Mackenzie!’

‘Sam, we will get her back!’

‘What happened?!’ Danielle yelled out as she ran into the nursery with Joanne close behind.

‘Danielle, I-’ Sam tried to say through his tears.

‘Sam. What happened?’ Danielle asked calmly walking towards Sam.

‘Mackenzie -.’ Sam said looking towards the crib.
Danielle looked at the crib before walking towards it. ‘Mackenzie! Where’s the baby?’ Danielle said as she turned around to look at Sam.

‘The Demon. He-he took her.’

‘What? But, I thought we killed that thing!’ Danielle said as she started to cry.

‘So we all thought.’ Dean said.

‘But why did it take my baby?’ Danielle asked looking towards Dean then back at Sam.

‘Well, we know that the Demon takes children on there six month brithday.’ Dean said.

‘Oh my god! Mackenzie just turned six months old today.’ Danielle said through her tears before she trailed on.

‘But why? Why did it take Mackenzie on the day of her six month birthday?’

‘Because-’ Sam said quietly. Danielle turned around to look at Sam.

‘Because it takes children with abilities, like it tried to take me when I was Mackenzie’s age.’

‘Are you saying Mackenzie can do stuff. Stuff like you and Joanne?’ Danielle asked.

‘Yeah.’ Sam replied.

‘Wait! Will my baby have powers?’ Joanne asked as she put her hands on her stomach.

‘Maybe.’ Sam replied.

‘Don’t worry honey.’ Dean said walking up to Joanne and gave her a hug. ‘That Demon won’t go anywere near our baby. And I’ll make sure of that by killing that son of a bitch, and getting Mackenzie back.’

‘I know Dean, and I know you will get Mackenzie back.’ Joanne said as Dean let go of her.

‘How are we going to get Mackenzie back? Danielle asked.

‘Going to track down this son of a bitch.’ Sam said walking towards the door. Dean followed behind Sam.

‘Hey Sam.’ Danielle said stopping the boys leaving.

‘Yeah.’ Sam said as he turned around.

‘Bring Mackenzie back safe, and that includes you two.’

‘I will.’

‘You girls stay here. If it shows up again, call us.’ Dean said.

‘Alright.’ Both Danielle and Joanne said.

Dean and Sam went down the stairs and Sam picked up his jacket from the hook. Dean took the brown bag with their gear it that was lying on the floor underneath the coats. Then took his own jacket and followed Sam out of the house and headed for the Impala.
Before Dean opened the door he look towards the black sky.

‘Hey Sam. How are we going to track this thing down anyway?’

‘Best guess is to follow the storm.’ Sam said as he entered the Impala.

‘Alright.’ Dean said as he went into the Impala and threw the bag towards the backseat before he started the car up.
He drove out of the drive way and drove down the deserted road towards the storm.

[4 minutes latter]

Dean drove down the road through the heavy rain fall and heavy winds.
Suddenly the radio went on, it kept jumping though the channels along with static through it.

‘Dean stop the car.’ Sam said looking at the radio. Dean stopped the car at the edge of the road and looked out of the window.
Ahead of them was the towns shopping mall.

‘You think the Demon is in there?’ Dean said turning his head to look at Sam.

‘Yeah.’ Sam said looking towards the mall.

‘What would the Demon want in a mall? To do some shopping?’ Dean asked sarcastically.

‘C’mon.’ Sam said as he opened the door and went out into the rain. Dean took the bag from the back seat and followed Sam.

Sam and Dean ran towards the mall. They stopped at the doors and Dean took out his lock pick from his pocket. He put it in the lock and began to move it around until he heard the click. After Dean took out the lock pick Sam opened the door and entered. Dean followed.

The mall was really dark and they couldn’t see many things. Dean took out two small torches out of from the bag and gave one to Sam.

‘Okay, how we going to find it?’ Dean said turning on the torch and looking around.

‘I think it’ll be better to split up.’ Sam said as he turned on his torch.

‘Alright. I’ll take this level and you take the top.’ Dean said.

Sam nodded and headed for the stairs, Dean walked on and looked around the ground floor..
Dean walked and walked around the mall and still no sign of the Demon or Mackenzie.

He decided to head back to were he left Sam. Dean stopped as he saw Sam walking down the stairs.

‘Find anything?’ Dean asked.

‘Nothing. You?’ Sam replied as he walked towards Dean.

‘Nothing. The place is deserted Sam, no sign of the Demon.’

‘We’ll just have to keep on looking.’ Sam said.

Suddenly a noise was heard near towards the entrance. Sam and Dean both turned around and shown their torches in the direction of the noise.

‘Who’s there?’ Dean said.

A small figure appeared from behind the tall plant. Both Sam and Dean tried to look closely at the figure. Dean lowered his torch as he kept his eye on it.

‘Joanne!’ Dean said.

‘Hey.’ Joanne replied as she moved closer to the boys.

‘Joanne what the hell are you doing here?’ Dean asked.

‘I wanted to help.’ Joanne replied.

‘You can’t, this is too dangerous!’

‘Where’s Danielle?’ Sam asked.

‘She fell asleep on the sofa. I left her a note before I left.’

‘You need to go back.’ Dean said.

‘Why? Why cant I stay and help.’

‘Joanne, your six months pregnant. You should be resting.’ Dean said.

‘I’m not letting pregnancy be my excuse for not hunting with you guys? Plus, I’ve been with you to other hunts before.’

‘Yeah, but you weren’t pregnant at the time. And this hunt is a lot more dangerous.’ Dean said. ‘Please Joanne, just go back home. I don’t want you or the baby to get hurt’

‘I’ll be fine Dean.’

‘Joanne, please.’ Dean asked.

‘Alright.’ Joanne said with a sigh.

Joanne looked at Dean before her eyes caught something move on the stairs.
The figure was tall and dark and seemed to be carrying something.

‘Uhh, guys?’ Joanne said quietly as she pointed to the stairs.
Both Sam and Dean turned to see the figure running up the stairs. Sam quickly notices what it was carrying.

‘Mackenzie!’ Sam said as he headed for the stairs. ‘HEY!’ Sam yelled out as he ran.

‘Sam!’ Dean said as he ran after Sam. Dean stopped suddenly as someone suddenly appeared in front of him. He fell back and looked up to see a woman, she had black hair that just went past her shoulders. She wore a black dress and around her neck was a skull pendent. Joanne ran over and help Dean to his feet.

‘Dean, you ok?’ Joanne asked.

‘Who are you?’ Dean asked looking at the woman.

‘I'm your worst nightmare.’ She said as she gave an evil smile before she raised her hand. Dean felt his body being pulled through the air, he hit the wall with force and landed on the ground.

Sam stopped half way on the stairs to see Dean lying on the floor near to the entrance. Then, he looked towards Joanne, who was standing with a woman. Sam looked closer at the woman and recognized her instantly. The woman from his dream. He froze in the spot.

‘W-Who are you?’ Joanne asked as she took a step backwards.

‘You don’t want to know, my dear.’ The woman said just as her eyes turned an evil deep dark purple, deeper than dark it‘s self.

The next thing Joanne knew she felt two arms around her neck. Joanne tried desperately to get the woman off her. The woman let one hand go, and opened her hand. Suddenly a small dagger appeared in her hand, she raised it over Joanne’s chest,
Joanne stared at the dagger in horror before it plunged into her chest.

Joanne’s life stood still for a moment, she heard shouting in the background.
She felt her body shutting down, she heard her heart beats getting slower and slower. Then she felt the dagger being pulled out before she fell to her knees. As she fell the woman vanished as quick as she appeared. Joanne looked towards the ceiling of the mall until she fell to the ground and slowly closed her eyes and then everything went silent.
Sam looked at Joanne’s body in shock. As Dean looked on towards her lifeless body, his heart felt like it just shattered in a million peices.
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Posted: Feb 24 2007, 12:26 AM


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Posted: Feb 24 2007, 01:21 AM


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