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 Ice cold, first fanfic
Vallana
Posted: Feb 3 2007, 02:52 PM


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Hiya everyone wave.gif I just want to say I have been blow away by all the amazing talent on this board. I wish I could even come close to writing as some you guys. I am pretty new to the boards but I have been reading every fan fic I can get my hands on. *Looks down and shyly pushes her fingers together* I thought I should try my own little fic and give it a wirl. I have never written anything before but I have always wanted to write something. I have never gotten the nerve to actually type anything down. So please let me know what you think of it or any suggestions on how to improve biggrin.gif
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Ch. 1

The hazy sun was just touching down on the horizon as the black Impala came to a tired shuddering stop in front of the Roadhouse. With a weary sigh, Dean turned off the engine and gave the dash a loving pat. “Sorry girl, you sound as tired as I feel”. Raking a hand through his short spiky hair, Dean glanced over at his little brother in concern.

Sam was passed out against the window, but the black circles under his eyes were a glaring sign of his constant battles with his nightmares over the last few weeks. Of course this last hunt of theirs didn’t help much in the sleeping department.
As that thought crossed his mind, a flash of fear touched Dean’s face as the memory of the Banshee resurfaced and how close it came killing Sam.

Shaking his head to rid himself of the memory, he glanced again to his shaggy haired brother. Nothing is going to hurt him as long as I am around thought Dean but now I have to wake him up from some much needed rest. Rubbing his hand over his face, he tried to settle his thoughts, time to put on his game face and be strong for Sam.

With a cheeky smile, Dean leaned over and punched Sam in the arm. “Wakey, wakey sleeping beauty. If you keep it up, I think you might wash that window with your drool” Groaning, the younger brother slowly blinked his eyes at Dean trying to focus on what he was saying. “Huh?” Rolling his eyes, Dean pointed to the drool on the window. “If you keep that up, I’m going to have you pay to get my baby detailed, I won’t tolerate drool stains on her beautiful interior.”

Finally coming totally awake, Sam glanced to the window and noticed the marks. “Dude, why didn’t you wake me up if I was… well” waved his hand at the window “drooling like an idiot.”

Laughing, Dean got out of the car, “Sorry Sammy, it was just too darn cute and well, I just had to get a photo of it. You never know when that might come in handy” With a glare in Dean’s direction Sam stepped out of the Impala, “It’s Sam”. Dean simply snorted at Sam and headed to the door of the Roadhouse. “Ahh nothing nicer than thoughts of a nice cool refreshing beer, huh Sam?”

Still annoyed at his brother, Sam only shrugged his shoulders at Dean as they walked into the dimly lit room. As their eyes adjusted to the dim lighting, the brothers could see that the Roadhouse had a pretty good crowd this early in the evening. Rubbing his hands together Dean scanned the semi populated room. “Hmm, I wonder if I might be able to you know, find someone to share a nice conversation with.”

“Honestly dude, don’t you ever think with your upstairs’ brain?” With a slight huff, Sam left Dean standing there with baffled expression on his face. Walking up to Sam at the bar, Dean groaned as he slowly lowered himself into the chair. At his brother’s sounds of discomfort, guilt and shame course through him. God, how can he be so insensitive when Dean literally placed his life on the line to save his worthless butt. He can never seem to do anything right, constantly having to have Dean save him from one mishap to another.

“Look Dean, I’m sorry. I guess I’m just a little bit tired and kind of snappy.”
Dean raised an eyebrow “a little bit tired? Sam, you haven’t gotten a full night’s rest in what? Three weeks maybe? You have to let me know what is going on in that freaky little head of yours”. Dean tried to conceal the concern in his voice but it was evident in his eyes as he gazed at his little brother.

Sam gave a tired sigh and ran his hand through his long dark hair. “Dean, I’m fine. The last few hunts and well you being, oh I don’t know… a wanted man has gotten me a little stressed out. That’s all, I swear.”

Dean gave Sam a hard stare “Dude, you know you suck at lying right?”

“Give it a rest Dean”

“I won’t, not until you tell me the truth”

“Dean…”

Slam

Both boys glanced up in shock as two bottles of beer were placed in front of them with enough force that they could feel the vibration through the wooden bar. The scowl that awaited them on the face of Ellen caused them to subconsciously lean back in their chairs in hopes of creating a safer distance between them.

Quickly the look of shock was replaced by a cheeky grin as Dean tried to think of what could have caused Ellen to descend upon them like a cat that just found out it was going to get a bath. “Ellen, how are you…”

“Cut the crap Dean, what the hell have you two boys been up too, to get into this deep of trouble?”

Dean’s smile wilted as he took in the arm crossed scowling bartender whose stare would have flayed him alive if she could. “Uh, trouble?” He glanced over at his dumbstruck brother and knew he wasn’t going to get any help from him any time soon.

“Yes, trouble. Does the name Vicky West mean anything to you?” Ellen’s voice trembled with barely controlled rage as she continued to stare both brothers down.

“Ahh, if she is hot, than sure thing…but if not then I will pass” smiled Dean in hopes of lightening up the situation. He grimaced instancely as he realized that was exactly the wrong thing to say as his brother kicked him under the bar while he watched Ellen’s eyes narrowed with rage.

Swallowing nervously, Sam cautiously leaned forward. “Who is this Vicky West, and why has this upset you so much?”

With a small sigh of utter frustration, Ellen turned around and grabbed a small copy of a picture. Frowning down at the copy, Ellen took in a deep breath to steady her nerves. It seemed the boys really didn’t have a clue as to how serious the situation was. It won’t do them any good if she continued to bite their heads off for no reason. Looking back at the two Winchesters, she placed the piece of paper in front of them. She tapped a finger on the photo, “This is Vicky West, one of the best bounty hunters that are out there. Her record is untouchable, every job that she has accepted, she has completed regardless of the outcome, meaning bringing in her mark dead or alive”

Both boys leaned over to get a better look at the photo. It showed a young attractive woman in her twenties leaning up against a royal blue colored sport motorcycle. Her long blonde hair was pulled back in a tight French braid and she held a matching blue helmet that was resting comfortable on her thigh. Letting out a whistle, Dean glanced back up to Ellen. “Dude she is hot, I wouldn’t mind her hand cuffing me for a night.”

Sam quickly backhanded Dean upside the head. “Dean this is serious”. Looking back at Ellen, Sam could see she was just about to implode again on Dean. “Ellen, why are you showing her to us? And why would we know her?” Sam prayed his questions would derail the incoming tongue lashing that he knew Dean totally deserved but from the look on Ellen’s face, didn’t have time for.

Ellen opened her mouth to tear Dean a new one but looking into Sam’s concerned filled hazel eyes, she knew the boys were sitting ducks. “Simple, due to your brother being wanted by the FBI and god knows who else, Vicky has decided to pick up the job.”

The brothers shared a glance that spoke volumes and confirmed Ellen’s worst fears. “Oh, god Dean… what the hell did you do to get on the FBI’s most wanted list?”

Finally realizing how serious the situation was, Dean scooted up closer to the bar. He looked down at his hands for a few moments before glancing over to his concerned brother then back to Ellen. He gave a half smile at Ellen. “Well, it’s kind of a long story.”

Ellen turned around and yelled “Billy, do you mind watching the bar for the next 10 minutes?”

Sam raised his brows at Ellen “Billy?”

Ellen smiled sadly at him. “Well now that Jo has decided to show the world that she can hunt, I kind of needed the extra help” She looked back over at Dean and nodded to the far corner where an empty table sat with three chairs. “Lead the way, I have plenty of time to hear this long story of yours.”

With a sigh, Dean slowly got out of the chair, masking the pain of his abused muscles that had stiffened up while sitting down. God, as if things weren’t bad enough, now he had some blond bombshell bounty hunter hunting him down. Wait what was he thinking, he had some hot girl chasing him. How cool can that be? With a soft grin he grabbed his beer and headed to the back table with Sam and Ellen in tow.


Twenty minutes later

“And that brings us to now I guess” Dean said as he ran his hand through his hair. Rehashing the past 8 months or so was kind of rough. It brought up so many different emotions that it was hard to keep his cool in front of Sam and Ellen. It was bad enough that he was framed for a murder he never committed, but having to remember walking in on watching himself almost killing Sam was infuriating. He was Sam’s protector and yet he had almost let him get killed by something wearing his face. His little brother could have died looking up at the one person who should have protected him. A shudder coursed through his body as his train of thoughts dragged him from that memory to the memory of the fight with the yellowed eye demon and to the fact that their father was dead.

Sam’s heart clenched in pain as he watched the array of emotions that flashed across his brother’s face. He knew that this was the closest that Dean has ever come to opening up about anything and it hurt him to see the fear and pain darting across his eyes. Glancing over at Ellen, he could see that she was just as affected by Dean’s internal conflict.

“Dean, honey. I know this wasn’t easy but I needed to know the truth.” Ellen placed her hand on Dean’s arm and gave a comforting squeeze. “Maybe if Vicky comes back through here, I can try and convince her that you’re innocent and to give you boys a break”

Sam snapped his head up in shock “Wait, if she comes back? You mean she has already been here?” He quickly scanned the room for any sign of the blond bounty hunter while Dean stared wide eyed at Ellen.

“Look you two, how else do you think I knew about her even hunting you guys or that fact that Dean here is the poster child of every police station’s break room?” She glared at the two young men sitting in front of her. “Vicky is highly capable. Hell, she has even helped out quite a few hunters when her jobs over lap into theirs”

Dean took a quick swig of beer. “So this chick knows about things that go bump in the night then and that Sam and I are hunters considering that she came here looking for any leads on us.” Son-of-a-bitch thought Dean, we are so screwed.

Ellen slowly nodded her head yes “I wish I could tell you boys some better news but Vicky is extremely thorough. Sam here might not be on the most wanted list, but she knows you two are traveling together so both of you pretty much have a giant target painted on your backs.”

“Great, just great!” Sam grumbled under his breath then glanced at Dean. “As if things aren’t bad enough, now we have some bounty hunter tailing us who has never lost her mark”. The panic that he has been trying to suppress, slowly bubbled back up from where he had tried to contain it over the past few months, ever since they narrowly escaped the cops back at the bank. What the hell were they going to do? As if there wasn’t enough things working against them, the demon, his so called destiny with the dark side, Dean being wanted by the FBI and now this girl who could possible take away the one stable thing in his life. With a clenched jaw, Sam quickly stood up from the table, swiping his beer before striding over to the jukebox to gather his thoughts. Ellen looked up in concern as Sam strode away angrily.

Dean gave a tired sigh. “Don’t worry about Sam. He has been pretty strung out lately. I don’t think he has gotten more than a couple hours of sleep each night.” Still looking concerned, Ellen turned back to Dean. “Is it the visions?”

“Naw, I don’t think so. He hasn’t been exactly forthcoming about what has been bothering him. I can only guess at best as to what has been keeping him up late”. Dean made a funny face as he took another sip of beer and realized it had gotten warm before he could finish it.

“Well I can bet you, some of it had to deal with you being wanted by the law. He is probably worried sick that you might be arrested or worse Dean” Ellen softly replied before slowly standing up.

Dean looked up at Ellen with a determined expression. “I am not planning on getting myself shot or thrown in jail anytime soon. Sammy needs me to protect him and I can’t exactly do that while sitting behind some bars.”

Grabbing Dean’s warm beer bottle, Ellen gave him a serious but comforting smile “I know you aren’t planning on anything happening, but the cards are stacked up against you two boys. Just promise me you will be more careful and watch your back?”

Flashing his classic cheeky smile, Dean stiffly got up from the table. “Hey you know me, I will just have to woe her with my good looks and charming ways” Ellen shook her head at the older Winchester, amazed at how quickly he could bounce back to his cocky ways in light of all that has happened. Wandering back to the bar she glanced over at Sam who was still slowly scrolling through the songs on the jukebox. He wore an angry but serious expression and she knew he probably wasn’t even seeing the songs that were flipping by his face. His whole body was practically radiating tension, from the top of his mop of dark hair down to his worn out shoes. His long lean frame looked like a bowstring ready to snap at the slightest tug.

Popping the cap off two more bottles of beer, she plopped one in front of the older brother sitting back at the bar before wandering over to the younger Winchester at the jukebox. Dean raised his bottle in thanks before taking a long drink and watched Ellen move towards his brooding brother.

San angrily punched the buttons to the jukebox, not even noticing the pages of songs flashing before his eyes. He dimly acknowledged the clacking sounds of the plastic pages flapping by at an amazing pace. “So what did that jukebox ever do to you, honey?” said a familiar voice that handed him a new cold beer. Looking up sheepishly, Sam gave a small smile at Ellen. “I am sorry, Ellen. I didn’t mean to take out my anger on the machine, it’s … just well” Sam looked around the room in utter defeat before resting his wide puppy dog hazel eyes back on Ellen. “I just don’t know how we are going to get out of this mess. I mean… “ He waved his hand in Dean’s direction. “How do you avoid everything that has decided to come after us, because you know Dean isn’t going to take this sitting down. He is going to want to continue hunting and as much as I hate to admit it, I do too. I just wish we could catch a break once in awhile” Sam sighed, as he leaned onto the jukebox and rested his head against the glass. Turning his head, he looked at Ellen through his mess of brown hair. The pain, fear and guilt that she found in his eyes about crushed her heart. She had to resist the urge to softly brush his wayward strands of hair out of his eyes and curb her motherly instincts that screamed at her to protect him and pull him into a hug. These poor boys have been through so much, but she would be damned if she would let anything happen to them under her watch.

“Sam, you know me, Ash and the Roadhouse will always be here for you two boys. Heck, you know Jo would be there in a flash if you two boys needed help. As much as it scares me to admit that” Ellen gave a tired laugh and leaned up again the other side of the jukebox. She stared out into the crowd of customers and other hunters before looking back over to Sam. “You just have to take each day as it comes, Sam. I can’t tell you that it will get easier, hell, I can probably tell you it will get worse if this so called war is about to rip open around us. But as long as we stick together, we can get through this” Ellen stared intently into Sam’s eyes. “We might not be blood related, but we are still family and we look out for our own.”

Sam smiled back at Ellen and this time the smile touched his eyes. “Thank you Ellen, that really means a lot.” He took a big breath and pushed himself away from the jukebox. Flashing Ellen a grin he nodded over at his brother who had found the one girl in the bar and seemed to working up to getting her digits. “Seems like nothing gets him off his game”

Ellen laughed at the antics of the older Winchester before becoming serious again. “Look, I know you two probably wanted to relax and unwind here for a little bit, but considering that Vicky wasn’t here that long ago....” she left the statement hanging in the air as she watched the humor slowly slip out of Sam’s face to be replaced fear and concern for his brother once more.

Sam looked at his brother who was oblivious to the serious conversation occurring between him and Ellen. He glanced back to Ellen, “Well, I guess we should probably hit the road and maybe lay low for a bit, heck maybe get a few states between us and here.”

Ellen nodded in agreement as they both walked back over to the bar and the flirting brother. “So maybe we can catch dinner sometime soon?” asked Dean pulling out his famous cheeky smile unaware that his brother was standing right behind him.

“Ah, Dean?” Frowning, Dean glanced over his shoulder at his taller brother.

“What? Can’t you see that I am busy here talking to umm” Dean quickly frowned as he scrambled to remember the buxom brunette’s name. “This lovely intelligent woman here?” He flashed another stunning smile at her before turning back to his annoying brother.

Sam gave the girl a weak smile before giving his brother the “we need to go look” and nodded towards the door. Sighing in annoyance, Dean turned back to the girl. “Look, I guess we’ll just have to continue this at another time? Mind if I grab your number to give you a call later?

The girl about dove into her purse to fish out a pen and began to write her number down on the bar napkin. There was no way she was going to let this drop dead gorgeous man leave without her number. Heck, his brother was pretty hot too. Maybe when he called she could drag a friend along for a double date. With a quiet sigh, she handed Dean her number and watched him and his brother walk out the door. Goodness, they were both nice to watch leaving too.

Outside the brothers quietly bickered while Dean fished out the keys to the Impala “Dude, why are you always crashing my game, huh man?”

“Look Dean, if Vicky was just here recently, we could easily be within her radar. We can’t risk running into her just because you wanted to get a little booty.”

Dean rolled his hazel green eyes at his brother before stepping off the porch. “You need to loosen up some there geek boy, maybe you wouldn’t be so stress out all time if you simply had some extracurricular activities.”

Sam glared at his brother in annoyance “Extracurricular activities? Dude, we do enough chasing around ghosts and other big bad creatures.”

Standing by the driver side of the impala, Dean turned and pointed at Sam, “See, that is exactly my point Sammy, you need to prioritize some of your activities”. Dean opened the door and slid into the Impala leaving Sam standing there with his mouth hanging open in shock. Dean leaned over to the passenger side of the car, “Are you going to stand there all day catching flies, Sammy?”

Fuming, Sam opened the car door, “It’s Sam” but his reply was drowned out by the blaring of Metallica coming from the speakers. Shooting a seething glare at his brother who conveniently ignored him, Sam focused his gaze out the window and watched the Roadhouse pull away and become another dot on the horizon.


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Upon on a hill not to far from the Roadhouse, a young woman watched the Impala slowly fade from the view of her scope. She smiled softly to herself as she leaned back from her hiding spot. Way to easy, watching the two brothers walk out of the Roadhouse through her scope. If she wanted to, she could have taken the shot on the older brother but something held her back. The job was specific about Dean being brought in dead or alive and that he was extremely dangerous, but watching the two brothers interact made her hesitate on the trigger. Frowning, Vicky began to dismantle her rifle and place it back inside its special case. Plus there was something about that taller dark haired brother, which she just couldn’t place her finger on.

Chewing on her lower lip, Vicky stood up and walked down to her bike which was hidden from view and strapped down her rifle case. From a side pocket, Vicky pulled out the small notes that she had complied on the Winchester brothers. Shuffling through the facts of this Dean Winchester murdering innocent people, Vicky’s face became stone cold once more. This man won’t escape to commit another horrific crime. She won’t hesitate again. Narrowing her deep blue grey eyes in determination, Vicky placed her helmet firmly on her head before kick starting her bike.

With a twist of her hand, she gunned the royal blue bike down the road after the distant black Impala. Dean Winchester, consider yourself a marked man thought Vicky. Tonight will be your last night as a free man, dead or alive.



TBC


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Wooo okay, there it is. My first chapter that I have ever written. Oh my did it take awhile but once I started, I didn't want to stop in fear I couldn't get rolling again. I hope you guys enjoyed it and please let me know if you want me to continue along with the story. I do have the whole story plot in my head, it just needs to get written. biggrin.gif


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candycane
Posted: Feb 3 2007, 03:02 PM


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Wooooh....liking it so far.

And wow, 1st fic eh?....well done!

i hope to read many more updates soon wink.gif
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That was great for a first fan-fic. Cant wait to read more! (oh...and I love how the Impala was the first character introduced in you story)
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Posted: Feb 3 2007, 06:09 PM


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the first thing you have every written, wow that was fantasstic. Great job you clearly have writting talent, cant wait for more of the story the boys are in deep ..... Look forward to more.
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Raven524
Posted: Feb 3 2007, 06:14 PM


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Great Start and your first Fan Fic too!!!

Cant' wait to see were you go with this...poor Dean, hunted by a hot chick LOL How ill he survive?

Update soon!
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Posted: Feb 3 2007, 09:04 PM


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WOWZA, glad i caught this. its fantastic. great job for your first story!!!
update soon! *coughNOWcough*
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Posted: Feb 3 2007, 10:05 PM


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oki i just caught up...and i LOVE IT!!! YOU GOTTA UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!!!

PLEASE UPDATE!!! THIS IS AWESOME!!!

but will sammy fall victim to her? cause...um...that would be (GREAT) bad lol
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Posted: Feb 3 2007, 11:35 PM


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Not bad for a first fic!! Not bad at all. biggrin.gif

So she sees Dean and forgets about the "bad" thing's that "he's" done (lol) but who wouldn't forget everything once they looked at him?

And she sees something in Sam...wonder what that could be?

Well, I guess you better give us another update. smile.gif
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Loved it! biggrin.gif
Totally great! highfive.gif
Can't wait for the next chapter! smileyclap22nx.gif smileyclap22nx.gif
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Vallana
Posted: Feb 4 2007, 07:03 AM


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Hey guys! Thank you all for the great encouragement. biggrin.gif biggrin.gif It is so exciting to actually place an idea down on paper and watch it become something real. I doubt my next updates will be anywhere close to as long as the first one. But I will try my best to keep the story rolling. Will be writing the next chapter tonight so it should be up sometime tomorrow. Will Vicky catch up do the boys? guess we shall all find out evilhands.gif

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Vallana
Posted: Feb 4 2007, 09:35 AM


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Well, I couldn't really wait to post it, so here it the next update! Sorry it isn't as long as the first, but i thought a little is better than none I hope. wink.gif

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Ch. 2

Humming along to the beat of his overplayed Metallica tape, Dean watched the white lines of the blacktop flicker by over the miles. It wasn’t until the fourth hour of driving into the night that he realized he had no idea where the hell they were. Peering forward over his baby’s steering wheel, he spotted an upcoming sign saying, Cheyenne Wells 30 miles. Glancing at the clock, Dean noticed that it wasn’t really that late, but they should pull into the town around 9pm and find some place to crash for the night.

Dean watched his brooding brother out of the corner of his eye and gave another quiet sigh. His brother’s profile hadn’t changed all too much over the last few hours. Sam had continued to glare out the window into the pitch-black countryside. His baby brother seemed to be really pissed off about this whole bounty hunter gig. Groaning to himself, Dean leaned back further into his seat and focused back onto the road. It wasn’t like he planned on being wanted by the law. All he wanted to do was hunt down the demon that had torn his family apart little by little over the years and wipe him from the face of the earth. He couldn’t help the rise of anger at the thought of the demon that had taken away practically everyone he cared about. Unconsciously, Dean’s hands began to clench on the steering wheel in front of him, turning his knuckles white as anger consumed him. He vowed silently that the yellow-eyed hell spawn wouldn’t touch his baby brother, not as long as he had breath in his lungs. It would have to step over his dying body before that would happen. Glancing once more over to Sam with a silent promise in his eyes, Dean gunned the Impala down the road, heading closer to their next night’s sleep.

Sam was oblivious to the internal turmoil of his older brother. His own was enough to keep him gazing out the window into the dark moonless night. He couldn’t seem to stop the vicious cycle of thoughts and emotions that tumbled through his mind. Guilt racked him as he thought back to how much pain he had caused Dean, physically and mentally, over the years, including this most recent year. A few years ago, he had left his brother to pursue what he had considered to be a normal life. But he’d been horribly wrong, and it only ended up getting the woman he loved killed by the very thing that wanted his soul.

Tears pricked Sam’s eyes as he tried to bring his overpowering emotions in check. It was just all so hard to continue on, knowing that somewhere, at some point in the future, he might become the very thing he hated. Swallowing down the pain, Sam looked down at the rubber lining of the Impala’s window and absently traced its joint to the car door. Now, on top of all this pressure, Dean had some bounty hunter hunting him down and he was acting like it was no big deal. Anger began to resurface, pushing down his guilt. Narrowing his eyes, Sam once again stared out the dark window and noticed that they were pulling into a small, sleepy looking town.

Dean pulled up to the first motel he could see, which ended up being a motel 8. Throwing the Impala into park, Dean grinned over at Sam. “Well looks like we have finally arrived at our lovely estate.” Sam’s only response was a quick flicker of his eyes at Dean before getting out of the car to grab his stuff.

Concern filled Dean’s eyes as he watched Sam jerk his duffle bag from the trunk of the Impala before heading into the lobby to book them a room. “Damn, he really is still pissed at me,” mumbled Dean as he retrieved his own bag from the trunk before shutting it.

Five minutes later Sam reappeared and nodded to the far side of the building. “Our room is 166, all the way at the end.” Squinting down the way Sam was pointing, Dean picked up his bag and began to head to the room. “Soooo, do you think you could have picked a room any further away?” Dean asked while raising an eyebrow at his brother.

Sam rolled his eyes at Dean. “Look, it wasn’t like I had a choice. It was the last room with two double beds, unless you wanted us to share a king.”

“Oh hell no, it is bad enough people think we are a couple sometimes. The last thing I want to do is encourage them,” remarked Dean. As Dean readjusted his bag strap, he could see that Sam had a small smile finally gracing his lips at Dean’s last comment. Ah ha, he thought, finally he was getting through to his brooding brother.

Sam opened up the room and set his bag down on the edge of the far bed. He glanced around, his gaze taking in the different shades of yellows and browns gracing the walls and furniture. Well, they had stayed in worse rooms before and the smell of this one wasn’t as moldy as the last one, which was a miracle in itself. Sam began to sort out what he needed for his shower when he heard Dean clear his throat. Looking up at Dean, he noticed his older brother was looking at him with a question in his eyes. Preparing for the worst, Sam stopped all activity. “Yeah?”

Clearing his throat again, Dean broke eye contact with his baby brother. “I am going to step out really quick to grab something to eat. You hungry?” Dean subtly tensed, waiting for the explosive veto of him even leaving the room. To his surprise, Sam blinked back at him with quickly covered relief.

“Actually that sounds like a good idea. While you’re gone, I think I might try and dig up any dirt on this Vicky girl. The more we know about her, the more we can figure out how she works and beat her at her own game.” As Sam spoke, he began to pull out his laptop and plugged it in.

Dean laughed as he headed to the motel’s door. “I know I kept you around for a reason, Geek boy.”

Sam flashed Dean a small smile before turning on the computer. “Yeah well, someone has to keep your technologically inept ass out of trouble.”

Dean faked a look of hurt as he stepped out of the door. As the door swung shut, Dean’s voiced carried through, “Bitch.”

“Jerk,” replied Sam with a laugh as he sat down at the table and began to search for any information on the bounty hunter named Vicky West.



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From around the corner, Vicky watched the older Winchester leave the motel room with a laugh and a smirk plastered across his handsome face. She still couldn’t believe how easy it was to actually follow the brothers. Heck, something about this whole job rubbed her the wrong way. She had repeatedly gone over all the information her contact had supplied her with, along with some facts she had picked up along the way. Things were just not adding up right and she had been in this business long enough to trust her instincts on this one. She knew these guys were hunters, which meant that they could be extremely dangerous even without the warning that came along with the contract. But her instincts were practically screaming at her that there was more to this gig than what she had been given.

Once again Vicky let Dean wander from her sights before she trained her blue-grey eyes back onto the doorway of room 166, where she knew the other brother had stayed behind. Sliding her .45 from her shoulder holster, Vicky approached the room with every intention of gathering the truth from the younger brother, even if she had to get a little rough with him.

A soft smile flittered across her face as she as recalled the younger brooding brother. If only her job allowed her to actually meet guys this good looking without some sort of criminal record, then she would have been on cloud nine. With a shake of her head, Vicky mentally kicked herself to get her mind back onto the job, her face once more becoming a smooth, emotionless mask.

Vicky was halfway across the parking lot when she grimaced in pain and had to support herself on a neighboring SUV. ‘Ugh, this is so not the time and place for this,’ thought Vicky as she rubbing her throbbing head. Vicky’s gaze became unfocused for only a few moments before she shook her head clear. After scanning the parking lot for any spectators during her lapse, Vicky quickly resumed her path towards the room containing the lone Winchester; even more determined than before to get to the truth.


TBC

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I hope you all enjoyed this most recent update. I promise things will get more exciting for out troublesome boys after this update. Just had to set the scene a little bit more.

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kburch04
Posted: Feb 4 2007, 10:22 AM


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Damn girl, you're doing good!! Glad she's going with her instincts.

But what's up with the sudden thingy of pain? I thought she was gonna have a vision...but nope.

Really interested to see where you go with this! wink.gif The length is alright...as long as you make the next one longer...lol.

Jk.

But seriously.
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xgetawayxcar09
Posted: Feb 4 2007, 03:34 PM


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yeah i totally thought she was going to have a vision too. i was like AHH PSYCHIC GIRL! lol.
so she thinks sammy's the hot one. Good taste in men eh? Lol, its all good, that means i get Dean XD
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Dolly
Posted: Feb 4 2007, 04:47 PM


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I hope Viky listens to her instincts and see's Sam and Dean aren't bad. biggrin.gif
Loved the update, you definetly have a gift for writing. smileyclap22nx.gif
Can't wait for the next update. highfive.gif
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Vallana
Posted: Feb 5 2007, 02:00 AM


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Thank you all for the reviews! I have been contemplating the how to put down the next chapter and ooooo the fun that is in store evilhands.gif

Dolly: Aye Vicky needs to definitely follow her instincts, those boys are just to cute to harm..... well maybe just a tad

xgetawayxcar09: well since Dean is currently away, you can have him until the next chapter, then i will need him back tongue.gif

kburch04: ahh that is the question, did or didn't she have a vision. Only time will tell. Will try and make this next chapter a little longer for ya!

I have some downtime coming up so will see if i can at least get started on it. If all goes well I might be able to post something later tonight. After that, updates might be sporadic until i get my new work schedule figured out, but I promise to at least get some in during the week.

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