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earth_child
Posted: Mar 4 2006, 02:38 AM


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Hey guys, this is my first time I wote a fanfiction so bare with me please. So here it is:

~Chapter One~

Late at night in an old broken down motel, two young men slept in two seperate beds. They were both brothers, Sam and Dean Winchester. Dean, the eldest brother was sleeping like a long. Meanwhile, Sam was tossing and turning in his sleep and speaking out loud. Dean was used to this. His brother has been having nightmares since he was a little kid. He loved his brother to death, but the dreams were getting annoying. Sam's dreams weren't always nightmares, they were somethimes visions that came true, that just freaked Dean out. But, he was the oldest brother, so he had to look out for his younger brother. With that thought in his head, he went over to Sam's bed to shake him wake. Half-way across the room when Dean heard Sam say "We'll find her dad, we'll find her." Find who? thought Dean. He looked at his brother's sleeping form by the moonlight that shone though the window. Sam looked peacefull. He must be having a good dream than, Dean thought. So he crawled into his bed and fell back to sleep.

The next morning Dean woke-up by a pillow being thrown at his head and a voice saying "Well, about time sleepyhead." He opened his eyes and looked at the clock, but couldn't because the numbers were to blurry so he asked Sam instead. "Almost noon" he replied.
"Did you sleep well last night?" Dean asked. There was a brief pause before Sam answered, "You could say that" he answered with a little grin.
"What's so funny?"
"Oh, nothing."
"What are we going to do today?" Dean asked, "Dad didn't leave us co-oordinates."
"Go to New Orleans," answered Sam. From the look on Dean's confused face he continued, "Dad did leave us co-oordinates, I mean he left me them." Sam looked at Dean's confused face again "In my dream, Dean."
"Oh," Dean said "I heard you last night." It was Sam's turn to look confused. "You were talking in your sleep again."
"Oh"
"What did you dreaming about?." There was a pause before Dean got an answer.
"Nothing really."
"That what was that whole 'We'll find her dad' part?"
Damn, that's what Dean heard last night Sam thought. Sam sighed and looked at Dean in the eyes. He looked really tired.
"Okay don't go into shock or anything but," Sam took a deep breath and continued "We have a little sister."

I NEED REVIEWS!, tell me if i should write more.
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sxybabe2_143
Posted: Mar 4 2006, 03:59 AM


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WOWWWW.....POOR DEAN..HIS GONA BE LIKE WTF....A LITTLE SIS..OMG...HAHA..AITE PLZZZZ POST MORE..CANT WAIT
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moony12
Posted: Mar 4 2006, 04:15 AM


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OOOOOHHH! You gotta write more!! I cant wait to read more!!
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ackles_chick
Posted: Mar 4 2006, 04:31 AM


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You have to write more! Great start! I want to see what happens with their sister!
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earth_child
Posted: Mar 4 2006, 05:14 PM


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thanks for ur reviews guys, so here it is:

~Chapter Two~

"What?!" Dean yelled.
"I know Dean, I'm shocked too. Who knew that we have a sister," Sam sat down on the end of the bed "In my dream, Dad told us to find her" he looked up at Dean as he said this. Dean grabbed his coat and his car keys and told Sam to move his ass.

"Are you sure it was a vision and not a dream?" Dean asked.
"It felt so real, like Dad was acually standing right infront of me."
The brothers has been driving for nearly 12 hours and they were almost to thier destination. Sam was driving while Dean was sleeping in the passenger seat. When Sam saw the WELCOME TO NEW ORLEANS sign he woke Dean up.

The town wasn't what Sam imagined it. It was run-down, and old but Sam could feel a wierd presence. It wasn't an evil presence, but scared. Frightned. As if on cue there was a scream of terror. The two brothers sprinted off to where the scream came from. What they saw kind of startled them.

A small group of kids circled around someone. But a lot of them were on the ground, but the kids who weren't, started to back up slowly. They both saw a young girl with straggly blond hair, that was dirty. She was shaking uncontrolably. She was breathing hard and fast, like someone tried to choke her. Dean told the kids to clear off. Sam checked the kids' pulses. Thier skin was cold as ice. They didn't have a pulse. "Thier dead." A gasp came from the girl and the brother saw run to a corner and started to cry. Dean and Sam looked at one another. Sam walked slowly up to the girl and asked if she was okay. She just kept on crying.

Sam tried again, this time he asked what happened. He was sitting besider her now. In a low shaky voice she said "I.. I... I killed them." Dean and Sam looked at each other again, confused. "What do you mean?" Dean asked, who was kneeling infront of her now. She wipped her tears with the back of her hand and for the first time she looked up at them. Her bright blue eyes were bloodshot. Dean acually felt sorry for her.
"I did a.. a spell" she replied.
"A spell" both brothers said at the same time.
"Why are you talking to me?" she asked politely. Dean looked at his brothe. It was his vision after all. Sammy took a deep breath and looked right into her sad blue eyes said "We're your older brothers."
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earth_child
Posted: Mar 4 2006, 06:15 PM


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~Chapter Three~

She just stared at Sam like he had two heads. "I don't understand", that was all she could say.
"What's your name?" Dean asked.
"Little Messalina or just Messalina for short" she replied. Suddenly sierens from ambulences and police cars went off. Messalina's eyes went wide. "C'mon" said Dean and Sam grabbed her wrist and followed Dean to the car. Messalina ran as fast as she could, but Sam was to fast and she couldn't keep up. She started to slow down, suddenly a hand grabbed her upper arm and pulled her along. Finally the reached the car. Dean and Sam left the door unlocked when they heard the scream from thier lost sister. The three of them climbed into the car quickly, as the sierens got louder and closer to the crime scence, and they drove to the motel.

When the three of them were back at the motel, Dean asked Messalina "What spell did you do?" Messalina just looked at him confused. "Oh, well." Should I tell them? she thought. Well they are her brothers after all. Messalina sighed and pulled her knees to her chest. "I'm a witch."
"A witch?!" exclaimed both Dean and Sam. Messalina nodded.
"I don't believe this" Sam said as he threw his hands up in the air in disbelief.
"You should. We killed vampires, werewolves, and demons" repled Dean. A sharp intake of breath came from thier sister.
"Y..y.. your gonna k.. k.. kill me?" and with that she ran to the bathroom and locked the door behind her. Sam gave Dean a ferious look and swatted him in the back of the head" Nice going, Dickhead."

In the bathroom Messalina sat by the bathtub and started sobbing. Through the sobbing, she could hear a voice saying "Messalina, are you alright? Can I come in?" It was Sam's voice. With a twrist of her wrist the door opened. And in walked Sam. She saw the concerned look on his face. She wipped her eyes again. Sam knelt down infront of her and asked "Why do you think we are going to kill you?"
"You killed things before."
"We killed them because they were hurting other people."
"I hurt people."
"When?"
"I just killed like seven guys tonight."
"You did that out of self-defence, that's different."
"How is that different?"
"How else were you supposed to fight a group of kids like that?"
"But Dean will still kill me thought."
"No, I'll make sure he doesn't."
"You promise?"
Sam gave her a big hug and said "I promise, Why don't you get cleaned up alright?" Messalina nodded and gave a little smile.

*!KEEP CHEKING IN FOR MORE CHAPTERS!*
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earth_child
Posted: Mar 5 2006, 05:14 PM


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~Chapter Four~

When Messalina stepped out of the shower, she found the clothes that she was wearing folded up and clean. She put them on than went into the bedroom. Sam was sitting at the desk researching something.
"What are you researching?"
"Just strange happenings that happened here in New Orleans."
"A lot happens here" Messalina giggled nervously. Finally, Sam looked away from the computer screen and looked at her. He noticed the nervousness in her voice.
"Messalina, Dean doesn't want to kill you, he's your brother." Sam could see her perfect slender body. And he could see how skinny she was.
"Do you want something to eat?" Sam asked her.
"No, thank you"
"Where did you live?" There was a brief pause.
"On the streets" from the corner of her eyes she saw a figure. It was Dean with a shock look on his face.
"You were living on the streets?" asked Dean. She nodded, she was ashamed.
"Were you always on the streets?"
Messalina shook her head no, "The town kicked me out when they found out that was a witch"
"How old were you?" Dean asked.
"Six."
"How did you eat?"
"I stole food from stores."
"Wow." Dean never felt sorry for in his life, but this, his own sister. On the streets at six.
"I brought dinner, here." Messalina just shook her head and told them that she was tired and that she was going to sleep.
"Uh, Messlina. That's the bathroom" Dean announced.
"I know."
"Where are you going to sleep, the bathtub?"
"No, the floor" and she layed by the tub and fell asleep.

When Sam heard the rythmic breathing of Dean, he walked to the bathroom door and turned the doorknob. Surprisingly it opened. The moonlight that came through the window in the other room, shone on his sister's sleeping form. He picked her up, put her into his bed and tucked her in. She looked so peaceful and carefree. He knew he wouldn't get much sleep anyways, so instead he kept researching on the town.

The next morning Messalina awoke with being hit with a pillow and Sam saying "Dean, you should have let her sleep."
"It's okay" she replied sleeply. She noticed that she wasn't in the bathroom anymore, "How did I get here?"
"Sam gave you his bed last night" Dean answered.
Messalina looked at Sam "Thanks."
"No problem, I don't really sleep anymore."
"Why?"
"Cause he get nightmares" Dean put in.
"Nightmares?"
"Dean, they are not nightmares."
"That why do you wake up screaming?"
"Not all of them are dreams."
"What do you mean?" Messalina asked.
"Sometimes he gets visions" Dean said.
"Visions?!"
"Yeah" said Sam.
"Past or future?" asked Messalina.
"Future" replied Sam.
"I sometimes get visions, they are mostly from the past-"
"Wait. Wait Little m, you get visions too?" asked Dean.
"Yeah," she looked at him "Rarely though."

After a long silence Messalina asked her brothers where Mom and Dad were. Sam and Dean looked at each other. Sam took her into the bathroom. She was sitting on the toilet lid, looking at him.
"Messalina, I hate to tell this but, Mom died."
"What do you mean Mom died?"
"She died in a house fire."
Right at that time Messalina started to have a vision. And a painfull on at that.

She heard a baby crying. She was in a nursery. A man was looking up so she looked up too. And she saw her mother on the celing and bleeding from her stomache. In the distance she could hear someone call for her eldest brother, Dean. It kind of sounded like Sam but it was to far away.

Sam was holding onto Messalina's shoulders now and calling for Dean. When Dean arrived Sam asked him what he does when he has visions. "Keep calling her name," was all he said.

Messalina saw the look on her mother's face as she watched the fire comsume her. She could smell her mother's burning flesh. Messalina started screaming.

"Dean, she's starting to sweat and shake" Sam said to his brother. Dean noticed the panic in his voice. He grabbed a face cloth from the towel rack and put it in cold water. Sam patted the wet cloth on Messalina's face.

Suddenly Messalina felt something cold on her forehead and it snapped her out of the vision, bringing her back to reality.

Messalina was still shakng but she did stop sweating. She was sitting on Sam's bed now and in her own world. Dean and Sam looked at her with concern. Very quietly she asked "Why was Mom on the ceiling?" This time Sam looked at Dean.
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earth_child
Posted: Mar 7 2006, 01:59 AM


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~Chapter 5~

Dean had to lie, but he didn't like it, but he had to "We don't know."
Messalina sighed and headed for the door but Dean stood infront of her, "And where do you you think your going?" he asked sternly.
"Out" she replied.
"I don't know... I mean..."
"If you let me go, I'll tell you what's wrong with this town."
"Let her go out Dean, she does have a way to protect herself" Sam put in. Dean gave a huge sigh and stepped away from the door.

After about 5 minutes after Messalina left, Dean asked why he let her go? Sam had to admitt it "Even though she is out sister. There's something she isn't telling us," he looked at his brother "C'mon."

The brothers have been following Messalina for about half an hour now. She led them to an old banged up factory, and they followed her inside.

Suddenly Messalina heard a noise. It sounded like a bar falling over. She turned sharply, but didn't find anyone. Still, she went to where the sound came from.
"Sam," she called quietly. No response, so she tried again "You can come out now, guys."

Sam had no choise but to come out of hiding, so he slowly got up. "How did you know we were following you?"
Messalina gave a little giggle "Because I can sence you, why did you follow me?"
"You didn't tell us what's going on in this town" said Sam.

With a sigh she told them "On the street I met a friend and he was like me, well kind of, he has been killing people just by thinking about it," she looked at her brothers and continued "He has been getting me to kill people as well." There was a pause.
"The boys that died the other night..." Dean started.
Messalina nodded "I was ordered to kill them."
"Was he looking after you?" Sam asked.
"Even if he was looking after me, I still have to stop him" and she ran up the stairs with Sam and Dean close behind.

"Your job is done," he said when Messalina came in "Your new assignment. Two young men came into town a couple of days ago and I want you to kill them."
Messalina gasped and said in a firm voice "No."
"What did you say?" he asked firmly.
For the first time in her life she stood up to someone. She took a big step forward and said "You heard me."
Suddenly a wave of pain took over Messalina. She doubled over and grabbed her stomache. She didn't know her brothers were behind her until she felt Sam's hands of her shoulders.

"You son of a bitch!" yelled Dean and he headed for the demon.
"Dean... No" she gasped. Sam took his brother's arm and brought his siblings to hind behind a thick metal pole.
"He's to powerful, we need a plan" Messalina said.
"Okay, Sammy you distract him and than when he's not looking, I'll shoot him." and they went to it.

"Hey, Shithead!" called Sam. No, Messalina thought to herself, Your gonna get your selves killed. The demon was advancing on Sam quickly. She looked everywhere but couldn't find Dean anywhere. The demon had him cornered now. She looked franticly for Dean, but he was no where in sight.

"Dean, Dean!" Sam called to his brother despertly.
"Oh, don't worry about him, I took care of him" said the demon and a cruel demonish smile appered on his face. Than the demon attacked Sam visiously. Sam screamed in agony. A distant call came from Messalina's left, she looked despertly and she found him, on his hands and knees gasping for air. The demon didn't see Messalina looking for her brother, he was sitll focused on Sam. The demon got ready to put his sharp demon-like nails into Sam's heart.
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earth_child
Posted: Mar 7 2006, 02:43 AM


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~Chapter 6~

Sam closed his eyes tight and waited for death to come. Instead of feeling the creatures nails go into his flesh, he felt a huge gust of wind. He opened his eyes and saw the creature wasn't there anymore. Sam looked where the gust of wind came from and found Messalina standing out in the open.
"What the hell are you doing, your supposed to be hiding" he said as Messalina came up to him.
"It doesn't matter, we have to get Dean."
"Where is he?"
"Over here" she replied has she lead him to thier brother.

"Where do you think your going?" the demon asked angrly, throwing her against the wall. "Why did you refuse an order from me?"
"I don't want to kill anymore" she replied weakly.
"Just so you know, you can't kill me."
Messalina started to crawl away from him, but she felt a hand on her leg and than she was being dragged. "Like I said before, you can't kill me" the demon said to her. She was on her back and looking right into it's eyes. Than the demon starting choking her.
"Watch me" she replied between gasps. She grabbed onto it's arms ans started whispering a spell "Kedadatu." The demon screamed in agony and pain.

The creature stubbled backwards, blood pouring out of wholes that formed in it's flesh. It's knees buckled and he fell to the ground. If Messalina hadn't moved it would've fell on her. Sam and Dean just started at her in amazement.
"Wow, remind me not to get on your bad side" Dean said, who was still gasping for breath.
"Well, no one messes with my family and gets away with it" she replied as she brushed herself off.

Back at the motel room, Dean was in the shower and Messalina was tending to Sam's injuries. He had quite a few of scratches, but they were deep. She pressed a damp towel on hes deepest wound on his chest. Sam breathed in a sharp breath. Messalina could tell it hurt.
"Sorry."
"It's okay."
"Thank you."
"For what?"
"Finding me" she said as she stitched up the deep cuts on his arms and chest.
"No problem," before Sam knew it, the stiches were done "How did you get them done so quickly?"
Messalina gave him a forced smile "Let's just say, I'm always stitching myself up." Sam looked at her couriously. "Nevermind, it's not importent."

There was a long pause. "Does Dean always take this long in the shower?" Sam just nodded "Well, it's time to change that, Freezius." Suddenly Dean screamed, and Messalina broke down in a giggle fit.

"What the hell was that?" Dean asked when his head pocked out of the door. Messalina laughed harder. "She had something to do with it, didn't she?" Sam nodded and tried to hold in the laught that was coming out. "Your lucky I'm naked right now, cuz I'm gonna kick your ass." In the end all three siblings were laughing.

END.
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earth_child
Posted: Mar 7 2006, 02:45 AM


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WHAT DID YOU GUYS THINK OF MY FANFIC? I HAVE A SEQUEL BUT I DON'T KNOW IF I SHOULD PUT IT UP OR NOT. LET ME KNOW IF I SHOULD!!!
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