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 Blood At The Root, Season 4 Episode Five
kittsbud
Posted: Dec 8 2009, 07:22 PM


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And now, everyone, it's Cal's VS writing debut!!! And what a cracker it is, too!

Sit back, put up your feet and enjoy...if you dare hehehe!


Blood At The Root Part One
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irismay42
Posted: Dec 8 2009, 10:37 PM


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QUOTE
“Okay, Princess. I’ll be at the car while you fix your hair.”


*Snigger*

Congrats on the debut, Cal! cheerleader.gif cheerleader.gif cheerleader.gif cheerleader.gif
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calUK
Posted: Dec 8 2009, 11:04 PM


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'Nuff said. heh
Ta hun!
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Oceane
Posted: Dec 9 2009, 12:47 AM


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Terrific start calUK smile.gif
Hmmm...Some tension between DEan and Sam.
No!Sam is going to be the next victim of that curse that killed five people ohmy.gif
I'm already captivated, can't wait for part two smile.gif
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Sparkle
Posted: Dec 9 2009, 05:19 AM


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oooh Im sensing phychic link be tween sammy and this past guy that was hanged? im loving it so far! highfive.gif excellent work Cal. Your already blwoign me away and I lo ve your use of description and imagery. Cant wait for more smile.gif
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phantom_causes
Posted: Dec 9 2009, 05:59 AM


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So far this story has me intrigued, brilliant start. Seeing Sam's dream of being attacked from 1st person perspective was truly haunting. Although parts of it had me a bit confused at first. Something about all the shadowy figures, and the perspective gave it a sense of mystery. All of those scenes in the dinner were very vivid, and frightening. Such a shame for Dean not to recognize Sam's obvious distress, and believe him about being hurt in the dream.

Something about that glint of moonlight, seems to foreshadow Sam's immediate peril.
Only one chapter, and already you've got me hooked.

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lindi
Posted: Dec 9 2009, 10:08 AM


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It`s great! Can`t wait for next chapter. Hate the tension between the brothers, but I understand why it is so. But I dont like it.

And now I have to be patient and wait for next chapter rolleyes.gif I can do that. I think....
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kittsbud
Posted: Dec 9 2009, 05:43 PM


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And now for some more Winchester excitement from Cal!


Blood At The Root Part Two
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Oceane
Posted: Dec 10 2009, 03:42 AM


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What's going on, they salted and burned the bones and it didn't work.
The spirit is attacking SAm only when he's sleeping but they can go like this without sleep much more longer.
What's going to happen next, can't wait to know.
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kittsbud
Posted: Dec 10 2009, 06:48 PM


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Part Three coming up...


Blood At The Root Part Three
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Oceane
Posted: Dec 11 2009, 03:34 AM


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Gripping chapter and what a cliffhanger, I can't wait to know how all this'll end.
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Lily_Kat_89
Posted: Dec 11 2009, 08:08 AM


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wow. ok, this episode is rapidly making its way to the top of my list of favorite episodes! smileyclap22nx.gif

cal, you are an incredible writer. i love your attention to detail and descriptions! and then there's the storyline itself! more than once i've found myself literally unable to tear my eyes from the screen! it is absolutely riveting! smileybow3ya.gif

sooooo can't wait for the last part! very well done, and keep up the fantastic work! thumbsup.gif
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kittsbud
Posted: Dec 11 2009, 05:28 PM


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And now, for the conclusion....

Blood At The Root Part Four
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calUK
Posted: Dec 11 2009, 08:46 PM


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Whoa, okay, so the notification thingie wasn't working. banghead.gif
Thanks to all of you for the welcome! cloud9.gif
Oceane - hope you like the ending, and that the wait wasn't too long.
Lindi - from a reader's point of view, I hate tension between the boys, but as a writer it's sooooo much fun. But all will be resolved! Sort've...
PhantomCauses - hope the dreams are less confusing in hindsight - they were never meant to be 100% crystal right from the start, but they should make a little more sense as the story goes on.
Lily-Kat - thank you! There's no greater joy for me than hearing I've managed to pin someone to the screen, so you really made my day!
Hmm.
Turning into Halle Berry here. (yeah, i wish...)
Thanks all!
Cal
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Huntergal
Posted: Dec 11 2009, 11:13 PM


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Fabulous job, Cal! A very warm welcome to the VS. Loved the detailed descriptions of everything in the episode - the boys' feelings, fears as well as all the things they were doing/seeing. The tension kept me glued to the screen. This is definitely one of my favorite episodes - dealing with killer dreams and spirits/curses from long ago. Great job.

Again, thanks to all the writers for bringing back the VS. I've really been enjoying the episodes and am looking forward to seeing where they will take us.
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