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 Evil with a Twist, Fan Fic Challenge
Raven524
Posted: Nov 26 2008, 01:46 AM


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Time for another Fan Fic Challenge!




Write a one shot story:

Choose an episode, doesn't matter what season, then re-write it from the "evil thing's" POV. You can make it seem less like it is evil and more like it sees the boys as evil. And to make it more interesting, no stories on Yellow eyes, Meg or Lilith. In other words, pick something like the scarecrow, the killer clown, etc.

Now on to the rules, right.

Stories should (at most) be the equivalent of about 10 pages in Word, single-spaced. Less is fine.

Please post your finished story in this thread.

Rules:

- Must be PG-13 or lower and comply with all board rules
- One entry per person
- Must be new writing—can’t repost old stuff
- Must be your own work. Plagiarism in any challenge will not be tolerated. (Even though I so stole Grkgrl’s rules wink.gif )
- Please proofread your work so it's easier for people to read. If you'd like someone to proofread it, I've set up a thread to request beta readers for challenges in this forum.

*** At the beginning of your entry, please include the title of your fic followed by “by” <<your username>>. (For example: Evil One by Raven524) This will make it easier to copy and paste the entries into the voting thread. If you don’t want to include a title, then please still include your username at the beginning of your entry. Thank you.

If you have any questions, please feel free to send me a PM.

Deadline: Friday, December 19th at Midnight EST


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DeansDemonBabe
Posted: Nov 29 2008, 06:20 PM


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Okay, here's my entry ... wink.gif laugh.gif


MASTER OF PUPPETS (or FAITH - The Reaper’s P.O.V.) by DeansDemonBabe

I am that shadow that watches over your shoulder. I am the one who passes judgement on no one. I am merely the one who helps souls on their way across the River Styx, seeing things only in shades of grey, never in black and white. Everyone is equal in my eyes - I am unfamiliar with the concepts of good or evil. I go where I please and am rendered unstoppable.

There is no explanation for anything.

There is only me.

You may call me a reaper.

I almost had the soul of the one they call Dean Winchester. I watched on the sidelines as he battled with the Rawhead, stepping in a puddle as he unleashed the power of the taser gun on said Rawhead, but the plan backfired. Dean electrocuted himself.

I was waiting on the sidelines to escort his soul to where it belonged, but his was not mine to take, at least at that moment in time. I would have to wait another month to claim that. But what was a month to me - ageless, patient, infinite?
That was when I felt my powers bound - my body called elsewhere, my will held slave to someone else’s whim - nothing that belonged to me and was rightly my own, belonged to me any more.

It felt as though my body was being guided in the opposite direction to which I wanted it to go - I witnessed myself taking the souls of those too young to be escorted to the other side - in place of those whose time had really come. I was being manipulated by outside forces and I resented the intrusion, for I was used to my own unstoppable will. I could not break the spell on me, for spell I was convinced it was, and I was left, being directed like a puppet, instead of being the master of puppets, like I was destined to be.

I saw no way out of this, until a chain of events was sparked off by a decision made by a young man called Sam Winchester, the very brother of the soul I had been waiting to take, Dean.
I was aware of the situation, just as I am aware of all situations around the world - despite my bound state, I could still feel, I was still aware of life and death around the world. After all, that was my role on this earth. No magical spells could take that ability away from me.

I saw in my mind’s eye young Sam taking his brother to a faith healer, by the name of Roy LeGrange.

I watched as Dean was chosen from the audience by LeGrange in order to be healed, and I knew it was my time to act. I was sent on my way to hunt the unfortunate soul chosen to replace that of Dean‘s, to die in the same manner as Dean would have done - his heart failing in the prime of young adulthood, when there was no right, no need for him to go.

I was so neutral in all matters before, I had rail against what I was forced to do. It was not right, and I am not proud of any of it. I didn’t know what to do in order to free myself from that trap, that vicious circle I was running in.

Nevertheless I returned to the stage to stand behind LeGrange, as life and full health returns to Dean Winchester. This at least pleased me for there was someone who I had faith in that would help me. Dean saw me, with my mysterious smile, leaning over Roy LeGrange’s shoulder, and his eyes grew wide when he saw my face, but he did not show fear, merely confusion.

I know that Dean is a powerful hunter of the supernatural and is good at what he does. This is the closest I have come to respecting a mere human.

I was not wrong.

Within time, Dean, with more than a little considerable help from his younger brother tracked down the controller of my actions, the Master to my puppet - Sue Ann LeGrange - the wife of the so called Faith Healer Roy. Everyone believed he was working miracles, when all along it was me, diverting the course of nature, and visiting death on those who did not deserve it, all because of one small woman. She had bound me when I came for her husband, whose soul I was about to take, preventing her husband from dying, and forcing me to take someone else in his place.

And now here I was, stalking Dean himself, whose soul I was to take in place of Layla Roarke’s - a female with a tumor. I laid my hand upon his head, feeling the pull of his soul through the palm of my hand, passing like a conduit through me to Layla, until I felt something break.

At first I was uncertain as to what it was that had broken, until I realized Sue Ann no longer had the control over me she once had. Sam had smashed the altar, scattered the contents, broken the amulet that hung around Sue Ann's neck that bound me closer to her than I wanted. I let Dean fall away from me, turning away with one last mysterious smile at the brave hunter - before disappearing to dispatch with my former master. The process was quick and painless on my part, before I went on my mysterious and dark path once again, never again to be bound by a mere human and their twisted will.

It felt good to be the Master of Puppets once again, all because of Dean and Sam Winchester, who realized, finally, that I was not the monster of the piece after all ...
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Raven524
Posted: Nov 30 2008, 02:39 PM


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smileyclap22nx.gif smileyclap22nx.gif smileybow3ya.gif smileybow3ya.gif smileybow3ya.gif Very nicely done! Loved your take on the reaper and the true evil of that episode!

Great job!!! biggrin.gif
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Shannon
Posted: Nov 30 2008, 08:23 PM


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Very good Sarah. i love it. You made him sound so evil, but not evil. Two thumbs up.
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DeansDemonBabe
Posted: Nov 30 2008, 10:48 PM


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laugh.gif Thank you kindly Raven524 and Shannon! hug9in.gif I am so glad you liked - it really is much appreciated!
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trickie
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Great take on the reaper I liked it.

After reading yours I decided to take a stab at the challenge.




So here's my entry....



(Hell House-Mordechai Murdoch's POV)


I Think …Therefore I Am - BY trickie

I opened my eyes to the dark gloominess of this house, I was aware. Where was I before? I couldn’t say. Why am I here? I am unsure.

Glancing around me, I took notice of the strange symbols that adorned the walls. None of which truly meant anything to me. I glided across the floor. Glided? Yes, that was what I was doing, not touching the floorboards; the dust remained undisturbed in my wake. A feeling of unease overtook me. How could I not leave footprints into dust layered thickly over years of abandonment?
Investigating my surroundings, I had a vague sense of déjà vu. I felt like I had walked these rooms before, but no concrete memory took hold.

Seeing a door, which some how I knew, led to the root cellar, I reached to open it. To my shock, my hand went through the doorknob, laws of physics denied. I felt a panic deep inside; as I realized that my heart was not pounding in my confused fear. My heart was not beating at all. I paused I wasn’t breathing either. What was going on?

Needing to find out more about myself and the situation I was in, I strengthened my resolve, and stepped through the closed door. It was eerily exhilarating. I could see the fibres, the very molecules that made up the heavy wooden door. Then I was on the other side, hovering above the stairs.

I should go down and look around, I thought. I was suddenly there. Amazing! I only thought of being in the root cellar, and I appeared there, not taking the stairs at all. Fascinated, I decided to test this ability. I thought of the living room where I had first become aware of myself, and I was there. No need for walking, no need for doors. This was a great ability…so much I could do.

Looking out the grungy window in front of me, I thought about the yard. Testing my ability again. I didn’t move I stayed in my position in front of the window. Hmm…I can only transport within the walls of the house. Strange.

I decided to walk through the door to gain access to the outside world. I was stopped by the solidity of the door, I could not pass through. Puzzled by this sudden change of events, I reached for the doorknob, once again my hand passed through. The door was solid to me, but the doorknob was not. Growing more curious, I tried harder to grip the doorknob before me. I was unable to grasp it, as my hand went through it as if it were a mirage.

Focusing all my concentration on the tarnished knob, I tried yet again. This time it had a liquid-like feeling of substance. With determination, I tried again. This time I visualized the act of grabbing and turning the knob, and I succeeded! I was thrilled! I opened the door, staring at the landscape before me. I moved forward, but I could not pass through the opening. An unseen wall or maybe a force prevented me from stepping from the confines of this house.

I realized then that I could never leave. I was stuck alone inside these walls. For how long? Eternity? Eternity here, no connections, no knowledge of what was outside these walls. Fear and rage enveloped me. I screamed in my desperation. I felt myself being pulled into the wall, falling into an unknowing slumber.


I suddenly became aware again. I did not know how much time had passed. Time seemed to hold very little meaning to me. From my position inside the walls, I could see everything in the house…my prison.

I saw the girl as she walked through the rooms. I felt sadness, but I didn’t know why. I decided to follow her progress. I watched silently from the safety of my hiding place in the walls. As she entered the root cellar I felt a desperation, a feeling I had failed and that I had to make things right.

A deep wretched agony filled my being. I could not allow her to suffer the long pain filled death of starvation. I couldn’t bear to watch my children waste away because of my failure. I knew what I had to do.

Although the pain and shame of what I was about to do invaded my every thought, I determinedly put my plan into action. A single thought placed a coil of rope into my hands. I allowed myself to appear behind her, she turned, and seeing me, fear contorted her beautiful face.

I acted quickly, before I lost my resolve. I threw the rope around her neck, the noose had already been made, and I did not question this. As tears filled my eyes, and sadness filled my soul, I threw the end of the rope in my hands over the beam. Grasping it as it came down the other side, I pulled, tightening the noose around her neck and pulling her from the floor.

Crying I stood watching her final throes as she fought for her life. As she stilled, her eyes no longer seeing, I returned to my walls, ashamed of what I had become.


Once again, my rest was disturbed as two young men entered my home. They were healthy, well-fed…alive. A mockery to what my daughters had endured. Angered I appeared behind them an axe in my hands. Why I had chosen an axe as my weapon, I was unsure. They turned to face me, although their faces held a glimmer of fear, the shorter, lighter haired man took aim and fired a shotgun at me.

It was painful, like a mass of white-hot nettles searing through me. I grew angry, they broke into my home and they had the nerve to shoot me? I thought-moved myself behind them swinging my axe. They quickly evaded my attack, and instead of the axe striking my intended victim, it slammed into the shelves. The shelves crashed to the floor, the few preserves I had left shattered on contact.

They ran up the stairs, and out the front door. I tried to follow, but I was restrained at the door. I could not leave my prison. I glared angrily as my two sacrifices escaped. Sacrifices? Why had I called them that? I backed into the sanctuary of my walls, pondering the latest twist of events.

“What kind of spirit is immune to rock salt?” the taller, dark haired one had said. Rock salt? Is that what they shot me with? It certainly hurt like the blue blazes. And he said spirit. Is that what I am? Is that why my memories are hazy and fragmented?

With the girl, my daughter? I was trying to save her, keep her from a much worse fate. The boys…I wanted to sacrifice them. To whom? I can’t say. I felt like I was becoming someone else, with different desires and memories. Is this what is was to be dead?

Too many thoughts rambled through my mind. I couldn’t pick out a distinct thought or memory that I could truly call my own. It was like hearing stories, and choosing fragments as my life, my memories. This all felt very unreal. Was I insane? Were any of these thoughts in my head memories of my true existence?


Again, I became aware. I opened my eyes, in the safety of my sanctuary in the walls. They had returned my sacrifices had come back into my home. I felt a great exhilaration as I saw two more men with them. They were shorter, much jumpier, and they carried strange things with them. Four to sacrifice, my master would be pleased. Master? I had no time to contemplate my thoughts I had to act.

Wanting to invoke fear into my future victims, I chose to burst through the door, a battle cry exploding from my lips. They shot at me! I couldn’t believe the nerve of these invaders. This time they had smaller weapons, handguns. The projectiles rocketing from the barrels barely stung as they passed through me. However, I was having a hard time maintaining my form. I chose this time to become invisible, escaping into the security of my walls, watching and waiting.

While the two taller, and obviously braver of the four men checked the room their guns held at the ready, the other two were examining an object in their hands. A camera they called it. Tired of their babbling, I stepped forth. Swinging my axe the camera and the smaller of the men was knocked to the floor. Raising my axe, I took aim. Before I could swing, I heard the return of the others, and stepped back into my sanctuary.

They spoke of strange things, posting and servers. Nothing that made much sense to me. But the main point was clear. The taller men, Sam and Dean as I had heard them call each other, had fully expected to destroy me with their pathetic weapons. I was irate! The entered my home, uninvited, and the planned to kill me.

I didn’t understand, I could not leave, I was trapped here. I didn’t go searching for people to sacrifice they came to me. Had they stayed out of my house, they would not be in danger of losing their lives. Don’t spirits have rights too?

Once they realized they could not destroy me with their feeble weapons, they decided to leave. That was going to be easier said than done. It was time to seek revenge, and protect myself. If they escaped, they would be back with new ways to try to destroy me. I couldn’t allow that, besides it has been a long time since I had made an offering.

I stalked the easier of my prey first, the cowardly ones. I had them in my grasps, just seconds away from their destruction, but the dark haired one, Sam, interrupted. He called me an ugly son of a bitch! Me!

I quickly turned, pinning him to the wall with ease the handle of my axe against his throat. I would choke him unconscious, and then chop him into millions of tiny pieces. I smiled gleefully at the image. Yes, this one was a worthy sacrifice, a fighter.

His hands gripped at the handle, pushing back. Alleviating the pressure against his throat. I could feel him start to weaken and I shoved harder, forcing the handle against his throat.

“Dean!” He called out. The lighter haired man entered the room, a canister in his hands. To my surprise, he shot flames at me from the canister. The surprise of the makeshift flamethrower caused me to loosen my grip, and the one called Sam was able to escape.

As they ran to the front door, and their freedom, Dean dropped a lighter to the floor. It was then that the stench of the accelerant invaded my senses. Stalking after them, I swung my axe, determined to stop their flight. Unfortunately, I wasn’t quick enough, and they made it through the door several steps ahead of me.

With the flames leaping around me, hungrily lapping at the aged wood of my home, I stood watching their escape. There was nothing I could do; I couldn’t leave the confines of the house. As they jumped from the porch and ran into the night, I faded into the walls.


In my sanctuary, I could sense all that was happening around me. The flames ate through the walls of my prison, destroying the only home I have known since I had become aware. I flickered out, closing off my consciousness.

Sometime later, I again became aware. I could hear the noises around me; I could sense the rotating red lights, flashing across the trees. Opening my consciousness to my home, I could see the damage. The walls and roof was reduced to ash. Firefighters stood back watching my home burn, only turning on their hoses to wet the surrounding grass and trees.

As the sun rose, the fire was extinguished, the ashes and rubble sifted through and hot spots put out. All that remained was the foundation walls, where I now hide. My prison still in existence, I could not leave. I would never be freed.

As long as the walls stand, I will be here, within the confines of the square. It will only be a matter of time before curiosity would bring people here. In time, scavengers will come to scrounge through the rubble. Until then I will wait, in blissful unconsciousness, until I again become aware. I smile as I enter my mindless slumber. Yes, I will be here. I will wake when the time comes, I will get my revenge.
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Shannon
Posted: Dec 1 2008, 05:58 AM


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Very good Trickie. I liked it. Here's mine. It's not as near as good as both of yours. embarassed.gif If the beginning with Matt is to dark, feel free to tell me. I can change it. I didn't get the challenge quite well so I hope this works.

(Children Shouldn't Play with dead things - Angela Mason's POV)

You can't bury the truth by Shannon

As I sit in Neil's basement, I begin to ask questions that I know Neil can provide for me. He's always been there. Even when things get rough, I can count on him. He'll never lie to me. That's why I love him so much. I wasn't mad when he brought me back. I wasn't confused because I could see how much he missed me. I was relieved. My life shouldn't have ended like it did. I was too young and there was still so much I had to do. I smiled, thinking about my dad. Maybe I could see him. No, why No?

"I think he'd be so happy to see me again."

"No!"

He's hurting. I can feel it. He needs me. I think I can speak for myself. You're yelling at me. "Neil, why are you so upset? I don't understand."

"I can't loose you again."

Again. Neil, I'm back and I'm not going anywhere. I take in everything Neil has to say. Wait, I can never leave. I did nothing but nod at what he was saying. Neil knew what was best for me. He always did and if he didn't want me to leave I won't argue. I walked up to him and gave him a kiss goodnight before I watch him head up the steps. Looking around once I hear the click of the door and the lock I spy a basement window. Sorry Neil. I apologize before going to the window and popping it open. This is something I have to do. I climb out of the window and damage my white dress, but I keep on walking. That's when I stop and turn. I see Neil at his desk. He's so exhausted. I get closer to the window and touch the glass. It's cool on my fingers. Neil's staring at a picture of us. Tears are in his eyes and mine as well. I touch them and pull my hand away. I'm feeling something in me now that I never felt before. I love you Neil, I whisper. I can see everything now. Neil has been in love with me for years. How did I not see this? He brought me back just to be with me. I turned with anger in my eyes. I know just where to go. I storm off and in minutes I'm outside his house. Matt Harrison. I ball my fist as I see my ex boyfriend drinking his guilt away. He's not in pain over my death. I know it, Neil knows it, and he knows it. Finding a window, I sneak in and look around the place. As usual the house isn't clean, and the sink is filled with dishes and the counters are buried under trash. I roll my eyes and make my way around the corner, to the living room where he is. Careful not to step on anything, I peer in at him and my eyes widen. He's watching me. He's watching a video of us. I remember that day. We were at the park, having a picnic and he kept recording me, telling me how beautiful I was. My eyes darken as the memory flies pass me. Am I still beautiful? I walk into the room, staying back to the wall, as he watches us on tv. I freeze up, hearing the sniffles he's letting out. Is he crying? Why is he crying? This is all his fault. My eyes go straight to the beer bottle in his hand. Jerk. I should be alive right now. I should be with Neil. I want to scream at you, make you see what you did. You care now, but you didn't then. I was your girlfriend. You can't change the past, only the future. I didn't have a choice or a say in anything. Now I do. Now, I'm gonna make you pay. I walk closer to the couch, taking in his pain, but I don't care. He didn't care when I was in pain. As I get closer, he pauses the video. He's just staring at me. Stop it. I wanna scream, but I came here for one reason. I see my image reflect off the screen and I see him turn, the fear in his eyes, hidden with disbelief. I smile slightly, letting him know I'm real, before I come toward him. My eyes are locked on his. I don't want his apology. I just want him to know what it's like dying. You can't feel nothing at all. He's trying to get away but I leap on him and slice his throat. How does it feel to die?

Blood goes everywhere and his body goes limp. I back up in fear now. What did I just do? I have to get back to Neil, let him know what I did. Maybe he'll forgive me. I turn and run back to the window, jumping out into the night as I run as fast as I can back to Neil's. I'm back and I slip into the house. He doesn't know. Now, how do I get this blood stain off my dress?

It's morning and Neil hasn't come to check on me yet. My dress is all clean. I still know what I did was wrong but what he did was worse. I try not to think about it and focus on something else. I do. There's strange men outside, talking about Matt's death to Neil. Maybe he thinks it's me. He doesn't say anything though and they finally leave. He still doesn't come down. I decide to sit awhile. He'll come. He has too. If he loves me, he'll come.

He does. I turn to him and smile. He doesn't say anything. Just stares at me. I walk toward him and put my hands on his cheeks. "I missed you." I lean in and kiss him and pull away, seeing what he does. To my surprise he kisses back.

The next morning he takes me upstairs, but he's very quiet. All I want to do is to be with him. I follow him into the living room and sit on the couch. Is something bothering you? He's pacing back and fourth and I remember those men. I try to stay calm but that has to be it.

"It's about Matt."

I fake a smile, pretend I did nothing as he stands there. He thinks I did it. I know he does. That has to explain why he's acting like this. I try and relax him. Sit down. He hesitates but he comes. He can't resist me. That's why he brought me back. I look at him and he asks me if I got out. Will he stop thinking about Matt and focus on us? I lie to him. He doesn't know. This is good. Then, why is this bothering him? I tell him I'd never do that to him but he's not sure what to believe. He thinks I'm different and he's right. I am. I'm in love with you. Is that so wrong?

Later that night, I know what I have to do to be with Neil. My revenge isn't over yet. I sneak out when he's not home and find my old place. I find her. She's home. I see her. She's staring at my picture, but she's staring at Matt. She loves him. I can see it now. If she loves him, why don't she go be with him? Now she can. I sneak into the house and watch her get off the couch, making her way to the door. I come up behind her and wait. I grab her but she slips underneath me and runs. I turn and go after her. She's at the back door, with nowhere to go. I grab the scissors from the counter and glare at her. "You know what you did." I come toward her and hear her beg, but it's too late. I raise the scissors and scream at her, but she ducks and they go through the glass. I turn and swing at her. She hits the floor and kicks me at me. I fall next to her and lay stay, hoping to fool her, as I hear her move. She checks me and turns my body, seeing the scissors stick in me. Lindsey assumes I'm dead and starts crying all over again when I open my eyes and grab her. I sit up, gripping her tight and get to my feet, dragging her backwards as I get ready to kill her. She can beg as much as she wants but she can't take back what she did with Matt. My eyes are burning now with hatred. I want her out of my life. I see the fear in her eyes when something hits me. I feel it and my body shakes. It hits me again and I identify it as a gun. I drop the scissors and turn when some guy shoots me again. I turn and run through the dining room window. I glance back and see the man come after me and I hide. I have to get back to Neil and let him know someone's trying to hurt me.

I get back to Neil's and he hides me. I can't explain what's going on yet but he does it because he loves me. I wait in the closet when I hear those men from before. They're talking to Neil. Telling him that I'm some monster. I'm not the monster. I'm just trying to live my life again. Matt and Lindsey are the monsters. They don't deserve to live. I do. I stand and wait for them to leave and Neil opens the door. He's mad. I can see that, but I did everything out of love. How can he not see that? "They're trying to kill me."

At first he doesn't want to do it but then he does. He leaves to go get the car but I know they got through to him. I'm mad. I thought he loved me. I follow him and confront him at his car. I can see he's all nervous and the way he looks at me. It's like he sees me as a monster too. There's only one thing I can do. I snap his neck. I won't let anyone take my life away again. I head to the cemetery, to where they are. I don't need Neil. I don't need anyone.

I watch the young mans every move. He has a gun. What do I do? Thinking, I step out and he turns to me, raising the gun up. "Please." I panic but he knows I'm lying and shoots me anyway. The bullet hits my forehead and my head snaps back, which only makes me angry. He gets scared and I chase him. He's fast but I'm faster. I grab him and we both hit the ground. I'm pinning him and lift his head up when someone shoots me from behind. I fly forward and look over to see the other one. Forgot about him. Damn, this must be a trap. I stare at the man and he shoots me three more times, sending me backwards until I fall. I look around and see that I'm in my grave. Someone jumps on top of me and I see the man, holding a silver stake. He's trying to push it into my stomach and I panic. "Don't" but it's too late. It goes in and I can't feel anything. Not hate, nor love.
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Posted: Dec 1 2008, 11:34 AM


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Thankies trickie! wink.gif It's much appreciated! laugh.gif

Awesome entries, trickie and Shannon! Good work - and I thought the beginning to yours is great how it is, Shannon!! wink.gif biggrin.gif
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Posted: Dec 1 2008, 06:25 PM


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Thanks Sarah.
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Posted: Dec 1 2008, 10:05 PM


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Shannon your story is great the way it is ...don't change it.
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Posted: Dec 1 2008, 11:39 PM


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Posted: Dec 2 2008, 01:44 AM


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Thanks Drew. I'm sure yours will be great too.
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Raven524
Posted: Dec 4 2008, 12:06 AM


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smileyclap22nx.gif smileyclap22nx.gif smileyclap22nx.gif Very nicely done Shannon and Trickie!!!

unsure.gif I'm wondering if we should be worried about how well everyone is getting inside the minds of the 'evil' doers in SN?

Great job all! smileybow3ya.gif
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Lo
Posted: Dec 19 2008, 07:35 AM


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I chose Luther. He was interesting to me, and he is a vampire. biggrin.gif When I watched the episode, he was so adamant about leaving, that revenge wasn't worth it. And, well, since we don't see him again until Kate is taken, I made up my own version of what went down beforehand. I hope everyone likes it.


Vampires Bite When Bitten by Lo


I flipped a Zippo lighter in my hand back and forth, my movements lazy, only masking my current mood. Frustrated would be a pleasant feeling to the anger that was rolling inside me. I told her, told her that revenge wasn’t worth it. My chair creaked loudly as I leaned back, my legs kicking the dirt ground.

“What about the others?” Kate said. I paid no attention to her. She didn’t deserve it right now.

It had been an hour or so since the hunters left, crashing my nest and killing some of my family. A petty few died. But that petty few made the mass of us less—a dying breed we were. At least Daniel Elkin’s was dead. Kate did right by that. One less warm body in the world wasn’t enough, though, compared to the thousands of cold ones that lay slain at Daniel’s hand.

“Hunters, Luther! Dammit, are you listening?”

To be honest, no I wasn’t, but I put on a fake smile and nodded nevertheless. She didn’t understand how much of a bitch she could be. Always whining about something. I didn’t survive for over a hundred years by moaning my way through life—or un-life, I should say.

I closed the Zippo with a hard snap. My tone was just as biting as I said, “Shut up for a minute, Kate.”

I watched her eyes drop as her lips twitched down into a frown. She huffed, aggravated, but didn’t dare question my authority. None of them did—would. I was the leader. That much was clear by my stance, my voice—all of it screamed power. Kate soothed her crinkled brow and stalked toward me. I couldn’t deny that I wasn’t entranced by the small piece of flesh poking from beneath her overly tight shirt and jeans. The way her hips swayed when she walked. I didn’t choose her for my mate for nothing.

Her fingers curled in my hair, her full lips pouting seductively out as she brushed them over my cheek, my mouth. She intertwined her legs around mine as she sat on my lap. “I didn’t mean to make you angry, baby.”

The reason why I was angry with her was suddenly frozen in the back of my mind, the cold chill in her breath fluttering across my skin the culprit to my immobile state. “I can make it all better, Luther. Please give me another chance.”

I would give this woman anything she wanted right now. I wouldn’t have minded. Really. But I couldn’t give in. I couldn’t become the hypocrite to my own words. It took more strength than it should have to push her body off mine. “I told you that revenge isn’t worth it, Kate.” I hardened my weak voice. She made me weak. “No.”
“But—.”

“No,” I said. My tone stated the finality of the conversation. She wouldn’t dare counter it. Or perhaps she would. Kate was different from the others. Her self-defiance was one reason I chose her, and it was also the one thing that irritated me at the moment. I was the leader. It was a turn on, when done at the right moment—and now wasn’t one of them.

“I’m hungry,” I said.

“The hunters let some of the food go. There’s still some, but…” Kate whispered.

My eyes narrowed as I watched Kate’s tiny fingers curl around the handle of a small knife. She meant to feed me. On any other given day I would have given up and lunged at the opportunity to silence the dull ache in my gut, but not now, not when we all needed our strength. They could and would come back to finish us off. We needed to leave. Now.

“We’re leaving.” Again, no one in the barn argued my order, none but Kate. Typical. I watched as her eyes flicked to Bo. He was another annoyance of mine. I should just send him to the hunters and be done with him finally. The young vampire was more rogue than family. I could see his questioning eyes, even now, whenever I spoke of a matter he disliked. Was I dense enough to not see Kate and Bo together behind my back, as well?

No.

But vampires weren’t loyal like humans. We didn’t share the same morals that flesh and blood—well, warm blood—carried. I didn’t necessarily care that he was screwing my mate. But his bigheaded attitude toward it made me want to snap his little neck, feast on his blood until he was nothing but a dry corpse. And I still might do that, if we made it through this alive. And I would make it through it alive.

“Bo can go track the hunters down,” I said. This shocked the pack more than I expected. Did they not see how much I disliked him? But the grin Kate wore unnerved me more than it should. She was planning something.

“I’m going, Luther.” She demanded more than asked.

Dread filled the hungering ache in my stomach as she said that. No, Kate. I can’t let you go. You can’t leave me.

I waved my hand at her and shook my head. “No, Kate. You’re staying here.”

“Bo will just get his puny little ass killed if he goes alone.”

She had me there, but that was what I was kind of hoping for.

“Please, Luther. I messed this up in the first place. I killed Daniel for Christ’s sakes. Killed him. C’mon. I won’t let anything happen to me, or to Bo.” She added that last part in to piss me off. And it worked. Didn’t women understand that they don’t usually get their own way when they piss off their mate? What was I supposed to say? Sure, go with your boyfriend to slaughter a few hunters. But make sure you’re back in time to warm my bed.

I growled as my eyes locked with the young vampire. I wanted to pull his already torn jean jacket over his head and snap it off. I raked my hands through my hair and let out a hard breath. I needed some air, badly. I turned on my heels toward the barn door.

“Where are you going, baby?” Kate asked, making no move to stop me, though.

“Food,” I snapped.

I didn’t wait to hear what her reply was and stepped into the cold night air. The dark sky was a warm blanket to my cold body, the moon a familiar light to my pale skin. My feet crunched over mountains of dead leaves as I walked at a human pace toward the surrounding woods. My throat burned, but not from the dry air, from the gnawing hunger tearing at my stomach.

Leaving was an excuse to get away from her, I knew that deep down. But it was also necessary to Bo’s survival. Another minute there and I would have happily torn out his throat and drained him dry. That would have at least satisfied my hunger. But it would have crushed her. I continued walking as I gazed at the nighttime canopy above me. I couldn’t do anything to hurt her. She knew this and used it against me. Bitch.

The border of the forest swirled a scent around me, sweet yet musky—the hunters. Their smell was imprinted on the trees they had touched, the leaves they had kneeled on, and the air that had encompassed them. Their aroma was now embedded in my mind. If I wanted to find them, I could. I was too engrossed with the dilemma to even pay mind to it back at the barn—too caught up with Kate to care. Not now. Now I had them.

Maybe she was right. What if we hunted them down and killed them? Destroyed all evidence. But the risk to my pack could cause great devastation. No, I couldn’t risk that. My mind was made up by the time I reached the city limits, a run down bar in my vision on the horizon.

I sucked in a large breath, capturing the lingering human scents in the air, before pushing open the door and stepping into the crowded room. At least fifty mortals were surrounding me, their visible throats enticing me as a large vein on every one pulsed against the thin layer of skin. I could see, smell, and hear their heartbeats, their blood.

A young girl brushed up against my leather jacket. She wore nothing but a halter-top and a skirt that could have been a washcloth judging by the size. Humans were so stupid. They did all of these things, calling me to them—welcoming death. The more skin, the more veins throbbing beneath their flesh, the deeper the hunger in me cried. This little blond girl deserved to die. Hell, she was practically asking for something to ravish the lush peach flesh. Who was I to deny stupidity?

I reached out, reflex mostly, and caught a beer bottle she dropped from her hand. I flashed a charming smile. “I think you dropped this, sweetheart.”

Her blood rushed to her face, beating red in embarrassment. “Oh…thank you.”

She was one of the idiots. Good for me, bad for her.

“Not a problem. What’s your name?” Damn. That was a bad move. Never ask your meal for a name. Wouldn’t anyone freak out if their steak answered ‘Joe’? That was my point. Never familiarize with the cattle.

“Julie,” she said to me, her blush still staining her cheeks. “You?”

“Luther.” Now I was talking to my food. Great.

I had screwed myself over from the moment I said ‘name’, but it was my mess to clean up, and I did. I talked her to death over her likes and dislikes—I even hugged her once. But it all paid off when I smashed both of my hand against the brick wall her body was leaning on, trapping her head in the barrier of my arms.

She felt turned on, obviously. She snaked her fingers around my neck and pressed her warm lips against mine. I complied with her kiss. It would have been rude not to, right? Her mouth moved against mine more urgently, her desire being made quite clear. I could feel her heated breath beat against my cold skin as she broke away. I made my move. I traced her face with my mouth, a wet, heated trail left as I worked my way to her neck. I coiled my hand in her blond locks, slightly pulling her head to the side to give me better access.

Nipping at her already reddened skin, I felt my fangs fall into place. The throb against my gums was almost unbearable as I gazed at the hot skin waiting for me. She didn’t cry out right away when I sunk my teeth into her neck. I said not right away, so when she did finally realize what exactly was happening, she let out a terrified shrill. The alley caught most of the sound, but some escaped into the open streets.

To me, and this was the most awkward part, your food shouldn’t scream. She had practically begged for me in the bar! Didn’t she bring this down on herself? I half thought she did, half thought that I was too tired to start rationalizing my meals now.

Her body went limp. Her screams had turned into soft mewls against my neck, where her head was being cradled in the curve. And then silence. I let my arms loose and her body hit the concrete with a thud. I whipped my lips clean and sighed. I felt warm now, full, and better able to handle whatever nonsense Kate still wanted to discuss.

I made the trip back to the barn in a matter of minutes. Time was important—well, it wasn’t usually important to me because I had an eternity, but the hunters would be on their way soon. I had a family of my own to consider.

The second I walked into the barn, the dirt hazing around my steps, I noticed something was wrong. More than half of the pack was gone, and noticeably a certain brown haired mate and a scrawny punk, and Hank, too.

“Where are they?” I screamed.

Everyone cowered. Typical. The sound of a speeding car barreling down the driveway caused my head to whip to the door. In an instant, I was outside, the car’s headlights staring at me. Bo fumbled out of the car out of breath. I could see Emily’s cowboy hat in my peripheral vision. I hadn’t noticed she had left, too. Damn, I slipped up. That wasn’t good.

I wasn’t stupid. I knew where they had gone. I got right to the point. “Any sign of those three?”

Bo was shaking. His words trembled out of his mouth just as badly as his body when he said, “No. Something else. They cut off Hank’s head! What’re we gonna do?”

What are we going to do? I wondered. No, Bo, you messed this up. As I was plotting all of the possible ways to decapitate the idiot painfully, a truck came speeding down the side road in the distance. The wind blew a familiar scent straight to my nose, hitting my gut hard with a painful twist. I walked a few steps, barely hearing Bo ramble on about Kate being in the truck. Another smell swirled around my nostrils. I inhaled deeply—the hunters.

“Kate,” I whispered. “She’s in that truck.” With barely a glance at the pack, I circled back around and started barking orders. “Emily, Steve and newbie, you come with me.”

“Luther! C’mon. You g-gotta l-let me help y-y-you out,” Bo stuttered.

I raised a hand to his plea. One hand was all it took to silence his nonsense. “Bo, if you’d be so kind as to stay behind with the others.” I didn’t ask him, I told him. And the defeat in his eyes was apparent as he stepped back toward the opening of the barn. He didn’t say anything else. I knew he wanted to go because he had developed some kinds of feelings for Kate when they screwed, but I didn’t care. She was mine, and mine alone to get back.
On the ride there, I kept wondering if it was a trap. Hell, I knew it was probably a trap. Why else was the hunter risking a nighttime cruise next to my nest? He wanted my attention. Unfortunately for him, he got it.

Our cars came to a halt. We were waiting for him to come this way, which I knew he would be at any minute. My tracking was far better than everyone else. I would bet he should be here in about one minute. If I could perspire, I would have. I was nervous as hell. The last hunter I’d faced off was back in 1940. I barely made it out alive. They are dirty mongrels that don’t like to use honor in a fight. Spar me one and one and see what the outcome would be.

Fifty-four seconds and a truck screeched its tires to a stop at my barricade. Six seconds off. Damn, I was messing up a lot tonight.

Me and the three other vampires stood firmly in place, watching as the older contemplated stepping out of the car now.

“Get out!” I yelled.

He listened. With a rope coiled around his hand, he stepped from the truck. We stared at one another for a few seconds before I asked, “Who are you?” Kate’s scent was killing me. I could smell her all around, and it was so hard to not rip his freaking head off. But I needed to remain calm, and civil, until I figured out her condition.

“Name’s Winchester,” he said. His voice was low, gruff. He was aged with years of experience, years of fighting. He was good. I would have to keep my guard up. I knew there were two others, and their scents were nowhere near right now.

“Where’s your friends?” My eyes narrowed. I think I already had figured it out before he said, “Cleanin’ out your nest.” Bastard. At least Bo was probably gone. The other vampires were a shame, though. I’d have to rebuild my nest when this was over. I firmed my stance once more. “Where’s Kate?” Stupid question, really. I knew she was in the truck, but I needed to steer our conversation in that direction.

He reached back into the truck, wrapping more rope around his worn hand. “Come here, sweetheart,” he whispered. I was going to rip his head from his thick neck.

My heart tightened when he pulled a knife to Kate’s throat. But more than that, the paralyzing scent of Kate’s blood washing over me hit my stomach with a hard punch. That bastard hurt her. I tried to keep my voice calm as I asked, “Kate, you alright?”

She struggled weakly. Something was wrong. “Dead mans blood.”

My teeth clicked hard against each other. “You son-of-a-bitch.”

The hunter had the upper hand. “I want the colt, Elkin’s gun. Trade.”
The bastard had the audacity to demand a trade, not question one. And to think that the idiot wanted a gun? I would have thought it would have been revenge for Elkin’s spilled blood. Oh well. “Is that what this is all about? We’ll kill you.” I was curious.

“It isn’t for you…” I heard part of what he said. The rest of his rambling was filled with Kate and mine’s silent speaking. I turned her long ago. We did this often when needed. I wordlessly told her to punch the bastard when she had a chance. She winked back. Oh, crap, he was done talking.

“Alright,” I said, unsure. I hope that was the right thing to say. I set the gun down.

It was, the idiot smiled widely before motioning with his head for me to back up. “Back up further,” he voiced. Geez, he was picky, but I obliged. I watched as he moved cautiously to the gun. Still holding Kate, he reached down and grabbed the piece quickly.

Now I had him. I shook my head and grinned. “That’s a nice move,” I taunted. “You almost made it.” And with one wink back to Kate, she ripped free and elbowed the bastard in the jugular.

He didn’t have time to recover before, with vampire speed, I hit him square in the jaw. He hit the truck door, shattering the glass into hundreds of pieces that fell over his fallen body. I smirked. Idiot.

Swish!

Out of the corner of my eye, I saw Emily’s cowboy hat fall as she grabbed an arrow sticking from her chest. Damn, I didn’t even smell them coming! Another arrow cut through the air and landed in Steve’s chest. I spun around, seeing the flash of one of the hunters at my side. I grabbed him, wrapping my arm tightly around his throat. His choking pleas were satisfying, almost as much as the feral glare the other, protective hunter gave when his eyes landed on his friend.

The shorter-haired hunter bent forward, a sharp machete in hand. The blade was covered with Bo’s blood. The idiotic vampire’s blood wasn’t hard to filter out from the others. He dared to step forward. “Don’t! I’ll break his neck.” I firmed the grip I had on the taller hunter. “Put the blade down.”

Of course he listened to me. He cared a lot for the kid I had in my arms. I could admire that, and I could use that to my advantage. This whole situation pissed me off. “You people. Why can’t you just leave us alone! We have as much right to live as you do.” We did. And I hope Kate understood now what happened when you messed with their kind. They were ruthless, unforgiving, and didn’t see reason. Now she would realize why I just wanted to leave.

The eldest hunter muttered something in response. I turned, a little afraid for once, as I my eyes locked with the hollow barrel of the colt. My vision could easily see the moments—too quick for a human to process—as the gun moved back in his thick fingers, a silver object hurling through down the shaft.

Crap.

Instantly I felt it. Instantly my hands were numb, my body paralyzed. And instantly I regretted coming out here. I felt my head fling back a little. Something electric sparked in my forehead. My eyes hung open and wouldn’t close. I wanted to say something, speak, but the liquid running in my veins wasn’t my own anymore, my body wouldn’t listen to reason. My chest heaved as my legs lost feeling and collapsed. I think I felt my knees hit the pavement as my arm moved out to catch my weightless body. It felt like my head was on fire. That was the only sensation I could feel.

Kate, I thought. I knew I was dying. I had never known fear as I did then. For over a hundred years I wanted nothing but to be left alone, wanted nothing but a family. Then, in an instant, everything was stripped away from me. Please, I begged whoever, don’t let it end like this.

A white almost blue light sparked in front of me, then everything went black.
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