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Posted by: Dean5339 Jan 4 2006, 08:23 PM
This is going to be a preview for the teleplay- since it will be a while since I add the teleplay to here, however there will be various features that I will come up with to hold you off until then. I have just finished the outline- it's going to be great. A definite two-parter, 80 pages at least. Yep, this is going to be a long one. I will post it as a whole, but until then I thought it would be fun if I put in some written special features. So, I hope you enjoy and remember be afraid of the dark, you know what's out there.

And as for the relatively same title as to another werewolf fanfic on here. This was always going to be the title and has an important connection (other than it's connection to the werewolf mythology) in the teleplay.

Posted by: Dean5339 Jan 4 2006, 09:08 PM
THE TEXAS BEACON

MAN IN THE BACK SEAT

Written by: Philip McKenzie

WARNING: This article is not to be taken lightly.

Two nights ago Lindsey Ranbooth, a student over at Austin High,
was murdered while driving home from boyfriend, Jacob Riley’s, house.
Sheriff Addams was deeply disturbed by the incident, “in all my life I
never saw anything like this. On the way home from Jacob’s house,
Lindsey stopped to get gas. We believe that at this time, the killer
got into the back seat of her car without her knowledge and that he
stayed there waiting for the perfect opportunity to strike. We don’t
know exactly what time Lindsey died that night, and I guess we
never will.”

Rumors are speculating that perhaps Sheriff Addams was wrong in
his assumptions, rumors state that this wasn’t a murder but a suicide. In
the car there was no evidence to prove that there was in fact a killer in
the back seat. Some believe that the killer was the ghost of Todd
Lancaster, the most infamous backpack killer of Austin, Texas. Lancaster
would wait in the back seat of a car and kill his victims often through
strangulation; it is also important to note that his victims were typically
girls ranging in age from mid teens to early twenties. Lancaster went on
to inspire other classic killers, such as a similar case that took place in
1964 New York City, as well as the scary camp fire story and urban
legend, “man in the backseat.” Addams believes that this may be a
possibility, but insists that he does not believe it to be a ghost, "a copy
cat killer following Lancaster's murders is very possible. But, Lancaster
back from the grave? I find that highly unlikely."

I recently got a chance to speak to Lindsey’s psychologist, whom she
started to see after her mother died in a fatal car crash. “That event had
a profound impact on Lindsey’s life,” says Psychologist Nancy Borden of
the Austin psychiatric institute, “I tried to help her, but in the end I failed.
I should have saw this coming. In my belief, Lindsey committed suicide.”
This is not an unlikely possibility, some of her friends have reported that
Lindsey was acting stranger than usual in the days preceding her death.

Was this the act of a copycat killer, a ghost or did Lindsey commit suicide?
I guess we will never know. I will keep you posted as more information
becomes available on this story.

If you have any information about the case please contact us at: http://www.thetexasbeacon.com.

Posted by: Jenckles Jan 4 2006, 09:28 PM
I like it! Keep going! smile.gif

Posted by: Dean5339 Jan 6 2006, 04:29 PM
DEAN WINCHESTER WEB BLOG 07/15/06

Well, not much to report on today other than the usual. Elizabeth and I have closed the case concerning the seven gates of hell. But, something doesn’t sit right by me. I don’t know why, but I have this strange feeling that something bad is going to happen very, very soon. It’s something I saw when I had been temporarily engulfed into the hell-like vortex… it’s probably just nothing. But, if I saw things right, Sam is in trouble and needs my help. In the vortex, I saw Sam and I at Stanford University parting ways. Then I see Sam burning alive in his dorm room; his corpse, there lying on the ground engulfed in flames. It’s probably nothing but a bad dream, but I can’t help thinking that it might mean more than that. It has to be. But, yet Sam and I haven’t even talked to each other for a very long time. It has to be a nightmare.

Anyways, I found this kick ass article in the Texas Beacon that went into an investigation currently taking place in Austin, Texas. Seems that “the man in the back seat” urban legend is coming true! Elizabeth and I are going to check it out. Man, this could really be a great case if it turns out to be true. I’ve heard about this urban legend since I was a child and have read up on Todd Lancaster, the man behind the legend. If this is true- if Lancaster is back- then I find it to be my duty to stop this thing before it gets out of hand. Elizabeth and I are talking about possible ways to catch this phantom in action, but it always leads back to one thing. Elizabeth acting as bait, the one thing that even now after a couple of months of working with her I can’t handle. If anything bad was to happen to her, I seriously don’t know what I would do.

As I said before, it's a typical day. Finish a case, drive off and read articles and tabloids- stumble upon a case and eureka off on another hunt. I’ll keep you updated once again as I hunt down the phantom of the man in the back seat. Should make for a very, very interesting hunt; well, as always be afraid of the dark… you know what’s out there.

- Dean Winchester

Posted by: kich Jan 6 2006, 08:16 PM
O snap I love. It's something I would definitly want to read more of...but you hafta post more soon. Please your killing me here! wink.gif

Posted by: Dean5339 Jan 6 2006, 09:47 PM
This isn't the actual teleplay. I am still hard at work on it. But, I've decided to post these pieces- thus far the Texas Beacon article and Dean's web blog- as a sort of fun preparation to release it on here when it is finished. There are many other features to come. Sam actually WILL be in this teleplay, but he won't be in any of Dean's scenes. This is a prolouge through and through to the series. We see Sam, we see Dean and we even see John before the PILOT episode begins. It's making for one really intruging challenge that I have presented myself with and know that I will not fail.

Posted by: Dean5339 Jan 16 2006, 04:17 AM
I decided that I will be launching this teleplay in two parts. As I said earlier, expect this teleplay to be a doozy. Horror film length (around 80-90 pages). Yep, you've got it folks- 80 to 90 pages for one full Supernatural extravaganza. This is my Casino Royal of Supernatural. See how everything began: John goes to Centennial Bridge, Sam's nightmares begin, and Dean's werewolf hunt before heading off to New Orleans.

I will hopefully have the first part completed by Sunday of next week at latest.

I will then work on prt. 2, and then do a tribute to one of my favorite Carpenter films- Christine. Which should really work as a great, fun Supernatural episode.

Posted by: Dean5339 Jan 17 2006, 11:07 PM
FADE IN:

EXT. TEXAS- DESERTED ROAD

An old Ford Truck drives along the dusty dunes of Texas, the sun beating down on the truck below.

INT. OLD FORD TRUCK

At the wheel is ELIZABETH WALKER. Elizabeth is around 23 years old, beautiful, blue eyes and long flowing brown hair. She is currently on her cell phone.

ELIZABETH
No, I keep on telling you silly. I’m not going to be there.

Elizabeth continues to check her rear view mirror. We see TODD LANCASTER walking towards the truck; he has a long grungy beard and is wearing a black poncho covering everything but his wrinkly, eerie face. The man disappears and reappears further along down the road. Elizabeth looks in the mirror and pretends not to notice.

EXT. TEXAS- DESERTED ROAD

A gas station looms overhead. The old Ford Truck pulls into the gas station and parks.

EXT. GAS STATION

The gas station is your regular, deserted, creepy place along the long empty stretch of land. Where anything could happen, girls go missing never to be found again. Elizabeth gets out of the car and walks towards the cashiers center.

INT. GAS STATION

DING. Elizabeth opens the door and walks in. A fat man, who was probably a TRUCKER, looks towards her smiling.

TRUCKER
What can I do for you pretty lady?

Elizabeth grins, twirling her hair back

ELIZABETH
I need to fill my truck up with gas.

TRUCKER
Do you now? Want me to do it… don’t want to get those pretty hands of yours dirty.

Elizabeth smiles, getting her wallet out of her purse, she hands the trucker a twenty dollar bill.

ELIZABETH
No thanks and I’m sure this should take care of it.

The trucker rings it through

TRUCKER
Number 2?

Elizabeth nods

TRUCKER
Alright, should be ready in a second. Sure you don’t want my help now?

Elizabeth smiles

ELIZABETH
No sir.

Elizabeth exits the gas station…

EXT. GAS STATION
And walks over towards her truck, fills it up with gas and gets back into the truck. She drives off.

INT. CHEVY IMPALA
We see DEAN WINCHESTER, sweating under the sun. He loved this car more than anything. He watches the road, waiting… Dean breathes out. Almost more than anything. The old Ford Truck drives past. Dean grins. Show time!

EXT. TEXAS- DESERTED ROAD
The Chevy Impala trails just behind the old Ford Truck.

INT. CHEVY IMPALA
Dean gets out the rock salt gun and loads it. He didn’t know what was exactly behind the recent disappearances- but, he had a feeling it wasn’t human.

INT. OLD FORD TRUCK
Elizabeth cautiously slips her hand in between the seats and feels a hard covered King James Bible.

EXT. TEXAS- DESERTED ROAD
The Chevy Impala drives closer towards the truck.

INT. CHEVY IMPALA
Dean breathes out hesitant. He had told her not to do this, that it would be too dangerous- why didn’t she ever listen! He continues to look forward. Suddenly he sees it. Lancaster sitting in the back seat of the Old Ford Truck, ready to strike. Dean frowns.

EXT. TEXAS- DESERTED ROAD
Dean leans out the window and aims the rock salt gun. Just one chance, one shot that’s all he got. Dean aims… the man in the backseat draws closer and closer to Elizabeth. Waiting… now!!! Dean fires. BANG! The bullet shoots through the rear window of the Ford Truck and hits Lancaster. Lancaster screams in agony as it wretches its arms. Dean spins the Chevy Impala to a stop and rushes towards the Ford Truck. The Ford Truck halts and Elizabeth steps out. She looks towards Dean smiling.

ELIZABETH
What took you so long?

Dean grins, laughing.

DEAN
What took me so long?

Dean raises his eyebrows

DEAN
What took you so long?

Dean looks into the back of the truck.

DEAN
The man in the back seat, finally.

Dean opens the door and glances in. Lancaster stares towards him.

DEAN
You do have the bible right?

Elizabeth holds the bible up in her hands. Dean grins.

DEAN
Time to send this sucker back to hell. You read, I’ll hold him off.

Elizabeth begins to read a passage. Lancaster disappears and reappears behind Dean. Dean notices. He swings around, fires a round… BANG! Lancaster disappears again.

DEAN
Faster! Faster!

Lancaster reappears, Dean begins to fire off round after round. Each shot causing less and less damage. Elizabeth reads the final lines from the bible. Lancaster halts in his tracks and begins to wither away, screaming in agony. Dean grins..

DEAN
Now that that’s over with, what about a kiss?

ELIZABETH
In your dreams.

Dean smiles, laughing.

DEAN
You, me and the Sandman sounds like a threesome.

Elizabeth laughs. Hitting Dean in the shoulder.

ELIZABETH
Grow up.

Dean grins, shrugging.

DEAN
What did I say?
(beat)
Alright… come on. Let’s go.

Dean and Elizabeth get into the Chevy Impala and drive off into the sunset.

Posted by: Dean5339 Jan 17 2006, 11:13 PM
INT. TORTURE CHAMBER (MEANING OF LIFE BY DISTURBED)

The chamber is home to various every day monsters. Spiders and other insects crawl along the ceiling. Underground. A pure grey marble wall surrounds the chamber. The ground is made of black concrete. A group of men in black sunglasses and black suits encircle a naked teenage GUY. We see a tattoo of a wolf on his left shoulder. The guy looks around, nervous… knowing that he would soon become their next meal. We see a handsome, muscular man slowly walking into the room from a far off entrance. The man has a black buzz cut, piercing brown eyes and a stern face. His name is DOMINIC PIER. He wears a long flowing leather maroon over coat with spikes, black leather pants and a spike belt. Dominic looks towards the men in suits and nods. The men in suits back out of the way. Dominic approaches the teenage guy.

DOMINIC
You wanted to become one of us.

The teenage guy gulps.

DOMINIC
You failed us.

GUY
Please, give me another chance.

Dominic grins shaking his head no.

DOMINIC
I’m awfully hungry… what about you boys?

The men in suits grin, fangs showing. Dominic’s stomach growls.

DOMINIC
Your services are no longer required.

Dominic’s eyes become animalistic with a yellow glow. Dominic grins, baring his fangs. Dominic howls, ripping his flesh off. The flesh falls to the floor, we discover that Dominic is a werewolf!!! Dominic walks towards the teenage guy, bends down and looks him straight in the eyes and licks his lips.

DOMINIC
Good bye

Dominic TACKLES the teenage guy and begins to rip him to shreds. The teenage guy screams in agony. Blood spatters everywhere! CLOSE UP as blood lands on one of the men in suit’s faces, the man licks the blood… tasty. Dominic looks up towards the men in suits and backs away. Dominic stretches, his bones contorting and pushing back out. Dominic screams as he transforms back into a human. Dominic stretches his muscles.

DOMINIC
Your turn.

The men in suits grab body parts off of the teenage guy and bite down. Dominic picks up his maroon leather overcoat, backs up and puts it on. We only see Dominic from waist up. Dominic looks back and forth between the men in suits.

DOMINIC
Back to business. And remember… remove his heart when you’re done.

Dominic grins.

FADE TO:
EXT. DINER- NIGHT

Cars drive past an empty driver standing by the corner of the road. In the parking lot is Dean’s Chevy Impala.

INT. DINER
Dean and Elizabeth eat at a far off table in the diner. Elizabeth wasn’t your typical salad girl on a date, she ordered a burger and fries same as Dean. Dean flips through his father’s leather bound pad of the Supernatural.

ELIZABETH
You carry that thing every where we go.

Dean looks towards her and nods.

DEAN
It’s important to me.

Elizabeth nods ok and looks out the window.

ELIZABETH
How’s Sam doing?

Dean shrugs

DEAN
You know that I didn’t see him for a long time.

ELIZABETH
You keep on talking about him.

Dean takes a bite out of his burger

DEAN
Well, I’m proud of him. Didn’t mean I talked to him recently.

ELIZABETH
You should give him a call

Dean shakes his head no

DEAN
Trust me, knowing Sam. He’d never pick up. He’s got his own life now. College, my brother… a college boy. Stanford nonetheless. So, you want to be the one to tell the sheriff the happy news or should I?

ELIZABETH
Why don’t we both tell him?

Dean laughs, grins and shrugs. He continues to eat.

DEAN
How did I ever stumble into a girl like you again?

ELIZABETH
We were both tracking the lizard man, you got there before I did and acted territorial, then I suggested that we work together and…

DEAN
Here we are

Elizabeth nods

ELIZABETH
More or less. You should call your brother, Dean.

Dean shakes his head no.

DEAN
That’s over. He’s probably long forgotten me by now.

ELIZABETH
You may be surprised.

FADE TO:
INT. STANFORD- CLASS ROOM

A long lecture is currently in session. Sam sits in the middle of the auditorium, dozed off. Sleeping. Sweat pouring down his face. We hear a teenage girl screaming.

SAM (O.S.)
No! Jessica!!!

One of Sam’s fellow STUDENTS wakes him up.

MALE STUDENT
Hey, Sam… wake up. Are you ok man?

Sam looks around, startled.

SAM
Um… yeah, I’m fine. What happened?

MALE STUDENT
Nothing, you just dozed off dude.

SAM
So it didn’t happen?

The student shakes his head no.

MALE STUDENT
Why what is it?

Sam is lost in thought again…

SAM
Oh… nothing, just a… just a dream.
(beat)
A nightmare.

Sam looks down, closes his eyes, breathes out and combs his hair back with his hand… just a nightmare. Nothing more… right? Sam breathes out again. Yeah, just a nightmare.

FADE TO:
EXT. SMALL TOWN SHERIFFS DEPARTMENT- NIGHT

Dean and Elizabeth stand beside the Chevy Impala talking to SHERIFF
ADDAMS.

ADDAMS
So, the killings… their all done now?

DEAN
Yes sir, no more worries about phantom hitchhiker killers coming to these parts of town again.

Addams nods, smiling.

ADDAMS
What can I do to repay you? What you’ve done for this town is…

DEAN
No need to thank us sheriff, just doing our job. You want to repay us? Continue to do yours.

Addams nods ok

ADDAMS
Any money?

Dean looks towards Elizabeth, grins and shrugs. Dean looks back towards the sheriff, raises his eyebrows and calmly asks…

DEAN
Credit card?

Addams reaches into his wallet, pulls out the credit card and hands it to him.

ADDAMS
I’m not to expect any charging for plasma TVs and game boxes am I?

Dean puts the credit card away

DEAN
No sir, only provisions.

ADDAMS
Good luck.

Dean nods. Elizabeth enters the Chevy Impala.

ADDAMS (CONT’D)
And be safe

DEAN
Always am Sheriff, always am.

Dean gets into the Chevy Impala and they drive off into the night.

Posted by: Dean5339 Jan 17 2006, 11:18 PM
EXT. MOTEL- NIGHT
An ESTABLISHING SHOT of the motel. Night. Rain falls from the sky above. Thunder rumbles and lighting strikes the ground.

INT. MOTEL ROOM
We travel along the ground seeing clothes tossed about. We begin to hear passionate kissing as we travel towards a bed. We pass over head and see Dean and Elizabeth laying in bed. Dean looks towards her.

DEAN
What would I ever do without you?

Elizabeth smiles and they kiss. Rain drops onto the base of the outside window. Dean breathes out and looks around the room.

ELIZABETH
What is it?

DEAN
This isn’t right.

Dean sits up in bed, staring out the window. Elizabeth comforts him.

ELIZABETH
I’m here for you.

Dean looks into her eyes, tears roll down his face. Darkness by Disturbed begins…

DEAN
She died tonight

Elizabeth looks towards Dean, curious

ELIZABETH
Who died?

DEAN
My mom.

ELIZABETH
Dean, I’m sorry. Is there anything I can do?

Dean shakes his head no

DEAN
I’m just going to go take a walk

Dean stands up, puts his clothes back on and leaves the room.

EXT. EMPTY STRETCH OF ROAD
Dean walks along the streets of a long empty stretch of road. Rain falls from the sky above. Lightning strikes the ground. Dean breathes out as he continues to walk down the road. Tears falling down his eyes.

INT. STANFORD- SAM’S DORM ROOM
Jessica sleeps soundly in bed. Sam sits on a pulled out chair, watching her. Wondering. Afraid. Sam breathes out, lowers his head into his hands.

INT. MISSOURI HOME
John Winchester looks out the window. He closes his eyes and rests his head against the window. MISSOURI MOSELY watches him, sad.

EXT. EMPTY STRETCH OF ROAD
Dean looks up towards the sky, rain washing over his face.

INT. WINCHESTER FAMILY HOME- DEAN’S BEDROOM- FLASHBACK

YOUNG DEAN looks up towards MARY WINCHESTER. Mary pushes her son’s hair back.

MARY
I’ll always be there for you Dean.

Mary kisses her son’s forehead.

MARY
I love you.

Young Dean hugs her.

YOUNG DEAN
I love you too mom.

Mary smiles and looks up to see John watching them from the door way smiling.

MARY
How’s Sam?

JOHN
He’s ok, he’s sleeping.

Mary nods. Mary rubs her son’s hair back again.

MARY
Good night.

Mary walks out of the room. Dean closes his eyes, falling to sleep. Plugged into the wall is a night light.

INT. STANFORD- SAM’S DORM ROOM

Sam gets into bed with Jessica. Still shaken by his nightmares. Jessica embraces Sam.

JESSICA
What’s wrong?

Sam looks into her eyes, unable to tell her.

SAM
Nothing.

Jessica nods, closes her eyes and continues to sleep. Sam breathes out as he watches her sleep, unable to relieve himself of the pain.

INT. MISSOURI HOME

Missouri comforts John.

MISSOURI
I’m sorry.

John nods and looks towards her, determined.

JOHN
I’m going to find what took her.

Missouri nods, John closes his eyes and continues to look out the window. Seeing a ghostly image of Mary walking towards him from the reflection of the glass. Tears fall down his eyes.

JOHN
I miss you so much.

INT. STANFORD- SAM’S DORM ROOM
Sam’s eyes are closed, sweat pours down his face.

SAM (O.S.)
No!!!

EXT. MOTEL
Dean walks back towards the motel.

INT. MISSOURI HOME- JOHN’S BEDROOM

John sits on his bed staring towards the wall.

JOHN
I love you.

INT. MOTEL ROOM

Dean walks in, soaked. He looks around the dark room. Towards the pinned up images and articles of the man in the back seat. He closes his eyes.

DEAN
Mom…

Dean notices something, he glances back towards the bed. Elizabeth wasn’t there. Dean gulps, shaking his head no. He quickly looks up towards the ceiling- afraid. Dean breathes out, she wasn’t there. He looks around the room, hurriedly.

DEAN
Elizabeth? Elizabeth!!! Where are you!

The bathroom door cracks open. Elizabeth walks out, tears rolling down her eyes. Dean approaches her, relieved, compassionate.

DEAN
What is it?

Elizabeth looks into her eyes and runs into the embrace of his arms.

ELIZABETH
My brother… Dean, we have to save him.

DEAN
We will.

Dean looks into Elizabeth’s eyes

DEAN
I promise you.

INT. SAM’S DREAM
SLOWLY ANGLE UP towards the ceiling and Jessica engulfed in flames.

FLASH CUT:
EXT. ROAD- AFTERNOON

The Chevy Impala speeds along the open stretch of land.

DEAN (O.S.)
Alright, so let me get this straight.

Posted by: Dean5339 Jan 17 2006, 11:21 PM
INT. CHEVY IMPALA

Dean looks over towards Elizabeth, eyebrows raised.

DEAN
Your brother is a hunter and he went after a pack of rabid wolves.

Elizabeth nods

DEAN
Why didn’t you ever tell me any of this?

Elizabeth laughs

ELIZABETH
And you’ve told me a lot about Sam?

DEAN
Um… yeah.

ELIZABETH
Not that much, other than that you’re proud of him and that he goes to college.

Dean shrugs…

DEAN
Well… yeah.

ELIZABETH
What are we going to do?

Dean scratches the back of his neck

DEAN
You want the god’s honest truth?

Elizabeth shrugs –obviously.

DEAN
Well, let’s just recap for a second. Your brother’s a hunter, he went to try to hunt down the “mother” of all wolves and he’s in trouble. Leaving anything out?

ELIZABETH
He infiltrated their group

Dean’s eyes dart back and forth, caught off guard

DEAN
Excuse me?

ELIZABETH
He… well, he joined the pack.

DEAN
(sarcastic)
That’s smart thinking.

Dean breathes out

DEAN
Alright where is he? Your brother?

Elizabeth answers with hesitation

ELIZABETH
Walworth County

Dean breathes out

DEAN
Great, rule number one of hunting- don’t go to the werewolf capitol of the United States alone.

ELIZABETH
He needs our help.

Dean nods.

DEAN
More than you know. Trust me, I’ve ran into a couple of these guys when I was younger. They’re trouble. With their pointy teeth, canine like snout and beady yellow eyes…
(shivers)
Yikes.

Elizabeth smiles, Dean notices and grins.

DEAN
Finally, don’t worry. Nothing’s going to happen to him. I promise.

INT. MISSOURI HOME- JOHN’S BEDROOM

John looks over a bunch of scattered notes around his bed. Missouri walks in and looks towards John.

MISSOURI
Uh-uh, no you don’t.

John looks up towards her, then continues.

MISSOURI
You know it’s dangerous

John shrugs

JOHN
I’m going to find whatever took her.

MISSOURI
You’ll keep searching until it kills you. And that’s exactly why you shouldn’t go John. Dark paths lie ahead in your journey and for your sons too.

John shakes his head no.

JOHN
I’m not going to get them involved in this. Look at this…

John hands Missouri some of his notes.

JOHN
Her name is Constance Welch, she died over on Centennial Bridge. Ever since then men have disappeared along that single five mile stretch of road, ten of them over the past twenty years.

MISSOURI
And you think it has something to do with what happened to your wife.

John shakes his head yes

JOHN
I know it does, I can’t explain it. There’s, there’s demons… everywhere. They’re going to come looking for us.

MISSOURI
Because you were chosen.

John lowers his gaze and breathes out.

JOHN
I’ve looked for this thing for over twenty years. Nothing like it has ever come
up.

MISSOURI
Not that you know of.

John shrugs

JOHN
Better find it, before it finds us. And it’s looking too- you can trust me on this.

MISSOURI
You fear for your sons, particularly Sam.

John looks towards her

JOHN
He’s connected to this, more than I will ever understand. He, he has a gift- but, he’s not able to come to terms with it. The things he can do, I can only dream of.

MISSOURI
Then go to him John, this is too much for just one man to take on. You know this.

JOHN
It’s too dangerous, when the time is right I will. Trust me.

John shoves the documents back into his backpack and walks towards the door.

MISSOURI
Where are you going?

John looks back towards her.

JOHN
You know where I’m going.

MISSOURI
Jericho, but you won’t find your answers there.

John looks towards her…

JOHN
I’ll try. I have to find out if I’m sure about this.
(beat)
That answer lyes in California.

John leaves the room, Missouri nods and looks out the window.

MISSOURI
Such a troubled man… I pray that one day he finds his path.

EXT. WALWORTH COUNTY- AFTERNOON
The Chevy Impala drives along a deserted road, houses that stood to either side have been abandoned over the years. We see a road sign, BRAY ROAD.

INT. CHEVY IMPALA
Dean breathes out.

DEAN
Welcome to Lycan-utopia.

INT. DOMINIC’S OFFICE

Dominic’s office is filled with ornate and expensive furniture and gothic decorations. Dominic stares towards the double entrance doors, waiting. Biting his lower lip. WOLFSBANE, a man with long muddy brown hair and narrow green eyes, enters the room.

DOMINIC
So, what are the results?

WOLFSBANE
Stan Walker is dead, he won’t be bothering us any time soon.

Dominic grins.

DOMINIC
Make sure it stays that way.

Wolfsbane nods ok and exits the room. Dominic grins.

Posted by: Dean5339 Jan 17 2006, 11:24 PM
EXT. STANFORD- AFTERNOON

Sam and Jessica walk around the campus.

JESSICA
So, about the other night.

Sam breathes out and itches the back of his neck.

SAM
I just had a nightmare, that’s all.

JESSICA
Just a nightmare?

Sam smiles, grinning.

SAM
Alright a little pre-law exam anxiety.

JESSICA
You’ll do fine, you always do.

Sam nods

SAM
Yeah, I know. But, it’s just my whole future riding on that one test. If I don’t pass, I don’t know what I’ll do.

Jessica smiles, joking around…

JESSICA
Join the family business?

Sam’s eyes bulge out and he bites his upper lip.

SAM
Anything but that.

JESSICA
I don’t get it, what can be so bad about your family?

SAM
Trust me. You’d never understand.

JESSICA
Try me.

Sam smiles

SAM
I’d rather not.

JESSICA
Come on, what’s the worst that could happen?

Sam thinks for a second, what had happened to all the rest of the girls he told… “yeah, right” “you can’t be serious” “are you insane?”… all leading up to an inevitable separation.

SAM
A lot. So…

TJ, an African American friend of Sam’s rushes over towards them.

SAM
Saved by the bell.

TJ
Hey man, you ready for the test?

Sam shrugs

SAM
Yeah. You?

TJ
Studied all night long.
(yawns)
Which might not have been such a good idea after all.

Sam grins, laughing, shaking his head no.

SAM
Guess not.

JESSICA
We were just in the middle of a conversation…

TJ looks towards her curious- Jessica rushing him away, this was a first. TJ looks towards Sam hitting his hand against his forehead…

JESSICA (CONT’D)
Did Sam ever tell you anything about his family? Anything at all?

TJ thinks…

TJ
Not that I recall, why?

Sam looks between them.

SAM
Come on, I don’t really want to talk about it. I came here to escape that life, not to go back to it. Trust me, my past…
(beat)
It’s over, it’s done. It’s never coming back…
(breathes out)
Never.

TJ looks towards Sam, taken aback.

TJ
Well, ok man… catch you later.

TJ walks away. Jessica looks towards Sam.

JESSICA
What is it?

SAM
Nothing, just… just forget it. Please, I have a lot on my mind right now.

Jessica nods ok. Sam breathes out. It was no use, that image of Jessica would never leave his mind. Her on the ceiling, engulfed in flames reckoning back to stories that he was told by his father. Sam brushes it aside, it was nothing but a bad dream.

Posted by: Dean5339 Jan 17 2006, 11:26 PM
EXT. BRAY APARTMENT COMPLEX

The Chevy Impala pulls to the side of the road and parks parallel to a Victorian looking apartment complex. Dean and Elizabeth get out of the Chevy Impala.

DEAN
How the…

Elizabeth grins

ELIZABETH
Let’s just say we helped the Gates family with an artificial intelligence glitch.

Dean nods in approval

DEAN
Amazing

Dean glances up towards the luxurious apartment complex, we…

FADE TO:
INT. BRAY APARTMENT COMPLEX- STAN’S APARTMENT

The apartment is disheveled, furniture is torn to shreds and paperwork is flung all over the room. We see a puddle of stained blood against the hardwood floor. Dean KICKS the door open, gun held out in front of him. Elizabeth follows close behind. Dean looks around.

DEAN
Stan!

Dean enters the room, Elizabeth stops in the door way, looking around. Sick. Dean kneels and examines the blood, he nods his head.

DEAN
They got here first.

Elizabeth nods. Dean looks towards her, sympathetic. Elizabeth begins to walk away, Dean hesitates and then decides to follow her.

INT. BRAY APARTMENT COMPLEX- HALLWAYS

Elizabeth walks down the hall, wanting to get away as soon as possible. Dean follows her.

DEAN
Where do you think your going!

Elizabeth stops and looks towards him, tears falling down her face.

ELIZABETH
My brother is dead Dean, I need some time alone.

DEAN
So, we’re just going to leave? After all this?

ELIZABETH
What do you expect me to do?

DEAN
I don’t know. Not this. You leave, they’ve already won. Your brother’s death would have been for nothing.

ELIZABETH
What are you saying?

Dean breathes out

DEAN
Your brother, he was working a job. Something he believed in. I say we pick up where he left off, we end it. In his memory.

Elizabeth wipes her tears away, she nods her head.

EXT. WALWORTH COUNTY- PARK

Dean and Elizabeth walk along the park, around them children are playing and other couples are holding hands while talking about business, school, or the greatest conversation starter of all- weather. But, as for Dean and Elizabeth they weren’t like the others. Elizabeth hands Dean a crime scene photograph of a mutilated man on a street corner.

ELIZABETH
This was one of the first victims we noticed.

Dean looks at it. Flesh peeling off of the body, in some cases the flesh was completely torn off. Eyes have been viciously yanked out and bite marks were evident. Dean nods.

DEAN
Your regular werewolf victim. Flesh tears, bite marks and torn limbs.

ELIZABETH
Not quite.

Dean looks towards her suspicious.

ELIZABETH
See that mark on his left shoulder.

Dean looks towards what seemed like a tattoo of a… wolf. Dean winces.

DEAN
Wait… you can’t expect me to believe…

Elizabeth hands Dean an identical picture, same tattoo.

DEAN
So, what are we dealing with? A werewolf entourage?

ELIZABETH
Kind of. It’s a cult. Rare, but there are known cases of it. It originated in Romania. Similar to vampires, those who wanted to become one would have to go through certain trials.

DEAN
Let me guess, those that failed were sacrificed to the “great wolf spirit”?

ELIZABETH
Yeah, in all cases there was one particular body part missing.

Dean looks towards Elizabeth intrigued.

ELIZABETH
The heart.

Dean nods, picking up the rhythm

DEAN
Which is where some cultures believe is the resting place of the soul.

Elizabeth nods

ELIZABETH
Exactly.

DEAN
Alright, so where does it all lead to?

Elizabeth hands Dean the picture of an underground night club.

ELIZABETH
The La Luna Nightclub, but the local name for it is The Full Moon.

DEAN
A place where the tamed can run wild. So, who’s in charge?

Elizabeth hands Dean a photograph taken of Dominic.

ELIZABETH
He goes by Dominic Pier.

DEAN
What’s his real name?

Elizabeth shrugs.

ELIZABETH
I don’t know. But, that’s only a recent picture of him. I did some digging and was able to come up with this.

Elizabeth hands Dean an older photograph, a black and white, taken in Germany. Dean looks towards her.

DEAN
Well, that answers that age old question. Werewolves actually are immune to aging. So, this guy is what a hundred years old?

ELIZABETH
Well, maybe more than that.

Dean breathes out

DEAN
Great. Alright, so where do we start?

Posted by: Dean5339 Jan 17 2006, 11:30 PM
INT. BRAY APARTMENT COMPLEX- STAN’S ROOM

Elizabeth sits on a bed waiting. Dean walks out of the bathroom wearing a suit and tie.

ELIZABETH
Never saw you with a suit and tie before, looks cute.

Dean raises his eyebrow.

DEAN
I don’t know about this.

ELIZABETH
You know of any other choice?

Dean’s eyes dart back and forth, thinking… it’s no use, she had a point.

DEAN
Man! I’m really going to regret doing this.

Elizabeth giggles.

JUMP CUT:
EXT. THE FULL MOON NIGHTCLUB- NIGHT
The Full Moon Nightclub is an underground nightclub situated where an old subway station used to be. Stairs lead down towards it. A BOUNCER, fat, long brown hair and sharp fangs guards the door. Dean and Elizabeth are up next…

DEAN
(whispering)
I’m not sure about this.

ELIZABETH
(whispering)
Just play the part you’ll be fine.

Dean breathes out and nods ok. He looks towards the bouncer.

DEAN
Jacob…

Dean glances around noticing a skeleton decoration…

DEAN
Bones… Jacob Bones.

Bouncer looks down towards his list.

BOUNCER
Don’t see your name.

DEAN
No? Man, see the point is. I really want to be a werewolf, you know what I mean… I’d give everything just to be one. I heard that this was the place to go.

Dean takes out a hundred dollar bill and presses it into the bouncer’s hand.

DEAN
So, come on… brother… let a fellow wolf in huh?

The Bouncer looks towards Dean, Dean grins.

BOUNCER
Fine, you can go in.

The bouncer moves out of the way, Dean walks in.

BOUNCER
But, the lady stays.

Dean stops and looks back towards Elizabeth.

ELIZABETH
Go, I’ll meet up with you later. Go wake the dead.

Dean howls and grins. Elizabeth walks away. Dean opens a wooden entrance door into the nightclub and enters.

INT. THE FULL MOON NIGHTCLUB- MAIN ROOM

Dean looks around, taking it all in.

DEAN
Here goes nothing.

Dean walks further into the nightclub. Dean walks over to the bar, the
BARTENDER looks towards him.

BARTENDER
So, what will it be?

Dean looks towards him and slaps a twenty onto the table.

DEAN
I’m looking for somebody.

Bartender looks towards him suspicious

BARTENDER
Oh?

DEAN
Yeah, you see I have this friend who wants to be a werewolf. Problem is, this friend, doesn’t know where to look. He’s hungry, restless and he can’t help thinking about the taste of human flesh and the full moon.

BARTENDER
So, this “friend,” he a convert?

Dean grins

DEAN
Bless the mighty wolf spirit.

The bartender nods, looks around.

BARTENDER
Alright, if your friend really wants to become “one of us;” I’d suggest he talk
to Dominic.

DEAN
Dominic?

The bartender nods

DEAN
Where could he find him?

BARTENDER
Office, top floor… he won’t miss it.

Dean nods and walks away. A young male TEENAGER walks towards the bar.

TEENAGER
Blood… fresh, particularly a virgin

Bartender grins, and just as though he would take a drink order began to fill a shot of virgin blood.

BARTENDER
One Bloody Mary coming up

The teenager takes the shot glass and gulps it down.

TEENAGER
Tasty… another one…

Dean looks back towards the scene and shakes his head- what has this world came to?

FADE TO:
INT. THE FULL MOON- GROUND LEVEL

Dean walks through a narrow, cobwebbed hallway. Men and werewolves pass by him on both sides. Dean notices a regal door, lavish and ornate.

DEAN
This must be the place.

Dean walks towards the room.

FADE TO:
INT. DOMINIC’S OFFICE

Dominic stares at a portrait of a younger Peter Stubbe. The first werewolf, Dean enters the room. Dominic turns his head and looks towards Dean, eyes narrowed.

DEAN
I don’t want any trouble

DOMINIC
What do you want?

Dominic walks back towards his desk and picks up a goblet of blood, he drinks it.

DEAN
To become like you

Dominic looks up towards Dean.

DOMINIC
Like me?

DEAN
One with the great wolf spirit

Dominic nods

DOMINIC
What’s your name Sapien?

DEAN
Jacob, Jacob Bones.

Dominic nods and looks back towards the portrait

DOMINIC
Bones, you know who this is?

Dean looks towards the portrait and shakes his head no.

DOMINIC
The past, name was Peter Stubbe

Dean nods

DEAN
The first werewolf

Dominic grins

DOMINIC
You know your history

DEAN
Who can forget? When he was 12 he sold his soul to the devil. He made a pact that he would recruit “lost wanderers,” and in return he would be granted with the powers of a wolf.

Dominic grins, baring his fangs

DOMINIC
Let ye, know what so be est’ this day. A terror alike, young and old; melt the bullet and make me a man eater, a woman eater, a child eater. Make me…

Dean chimes in, following along.

DOMINIC AND DEAN
A werewolf

Dominic looks towards Dean, he nods.

DOMINIC
A werewolf strong and bold; are you willing to sacrifice everything?

Dean nods

DOMINIC
Including your life?

DEAN
Including my life

Dominic extends his hand. Dean takes it.

DOMINIC
Welcome to the wolfpack… brother.

Dean half heartedly grins.

DEAN
Great

DOMINIC
Come with me…

INT. THE FULL MOON- TORTURE CHAMBER

Dominic and Dean enter the torture chamber. Dean looks around, blood stains are everywhere.

DOMINIC
Since the beginning, there has always been an initiation ritual. An act that one must accomplish in order to be fully accepted into the pact.

DEAN
Howling towards the moon?

Dominic laughs, grinning.

DOMINIC
You want to be one of us? First, you must loose all of your humanity in order to fully accept and welcome the great wolf spirit.

DEAN
What is it you want me to do?

Dominic grins, baring his fangs.

DOMINIC
Patience. All in due time. This way…

Dominic leads Dean down a dark hallway that seemed to go forever. SCREAMS and YELLS OF AGONY can be gradually heard getting louder, and louder. Dean clenches his teeth in horror.

DEAN
What’s going on?

DOMINIC
This ritual has survived for over a hundred years.

DEAN
A hunt?

Dominic nods

DOMINIC
Exactly. The times have evolved since then. We’ve had to go through different measures to get our food. Oh, with all the cops and the works. It’s made it hard for us. So- we adapted. We no longer go to the meat, but instead the meat comes to us. It’s hard finding an adult virgin today, oh with their new found “pleasure” seeking and all.

FADE TO:
EXT. THE FULL MOON NIGHTCLUB- BACK ENTRANCE- NIGHT

We see a beautiful teenage GIRL, holding the hand of a teenage BOY and urging him into the back entrance. He couldn’t have been more than 18.

BOY
You sure about this?

The girl nods her head.

GIRL
I’m ready when you are.

The boy grins.

BOY
Heck, yeah I’m ready.

The girl grins, beckoning for him to walk in.

GIRL
Then go on in.

The boy grins, nodding. He opens the door to walk in. The girl hums, as she stands outside.

BOY (O.S.)
What the…

Silence. The silence is soon cut off by a blood grueling scream. The girl smiles.

INT. THE FULL MOON- TORTURE CHAMBER

Dominic and Dean look towards teenagers, boys and girls, shackled to the wall. Dean looks towards Dominic, taken aback.

DEAN
What’s going on?

DOMINIC
You want to become one of us.

Dean nods.

DOMINIC
Then pick, and rip the flesh of a virgin.

Dean hesitates, stepping away.

DOMINIC
What are you afraid of? You wanted this.

Dean stares him in the eyes

DEAN
I won’t kill a kid.

Dominic nods, he walks over towards a SQUEAMISH GIRL.

SQUEAMISH GIRL
No… no… please, no…

Dean holds his breath.

DOMINIC
Then I will.

Dominic YANKS the girl off of the shackle, blood spills to the ground below. The rest of the shackled captures try to pull away from the wall, horrified. A
TEENAGE GUY looks towards Dominic.

TEENAGE GUY
Let me do it.

Dominic looks towards him and grins

TEENAGE GUY
I’m too young to die man, I’ll do whatever you want. Just let me go.

The squeamish girl looks back towards him, afraid.

SQUEAMISH GIRL
What are you doing?

The teenage guy shrugs

TEENAGE GUY
Sorry babe, a guy’s gotta learn how to survive.

Dean looks back and forth between Dominic and the teenage guy. Repulsed. Talking as if the girl was mere cattle. Dominic laughs.

DOMINIC
You sure about this?

The teenage guy nods. Dean steps forward. CLOSE UP on a knife in his pocket.

DEAN
Let me do it.

Dominic looks towards him, he grins.

DOMINIC
Finally…

Dominic hurls the squeamish girl across the room.

DOMINIC
Eat.

Dean kneels down over her.

DEAN
I’m sorry.

CLOSE UP Dean plunge’s the knife into her. The squeamish girl dies. Dean looks up towards Dominic, unable to act.

DOMINIC
Well, what are you waiting for? EAT!!!

Dean breathes out- you’ll get yours soon enough. CLOSE UP on the terrified faces of those captured, except the teenage guy doesn’t even flinch. CLOSE UP on Dominic grinning, barring his fangs sadistically, fire dancing in his eyes. CLOSE UP on Dean looking up towards Dominic, blood drooling down his mouth.

DOMINIC
So, how was it?

Dean struggles to speak…

DEAN
Delicious.

Dean gulps back the puke. Dominic grins.

DOMINIC
You are now one of us. You see these men around me.

Dean looks up towards the men in suits

DOMINIC
They all serve me, to earn their place among the world of Lykens. You shall do the same. And when you are ready… you will finally realize what it means to be “one of us.”

Posted by: Dean5339 Jan 17 2006, 11:34 PM
INT. BRAY APARTMENT- STAN’S ROOM

Dean walks in. His suit is covered in drying blood. Elizabeth looks towards him.

ELIZABETH
What happened?

Dean sits down on the bed, taking off the suit coat.

DEAN
I don’t really want to talk about it.

ELIZABETH
Did you get in?

Dean breathes out and looks towards her.

ELIZABETH
That bad?

DEAN
If today was any sign of what’s lying ahead- kill me now.

ELIZABETH
So, what was it?

Dean looks towards her

DEAN
I ate…

Elizabeth gulps, shaking her head no- not able to take it.

ELIZABETH
You have to be… oh, god no… you… couldn’t

DEAN
I had no other choice.

Elizabeth looks towards Dean, holding something back.

ELIZABETH
Excuse me.

Elizabeth runs into the bathroom, closes the door. We hear her puking. Dean breathes out and nods. He takes off his shirt and puts on a plain white T-shirt.

DOMINIC (V.O.)
You want to be one of us? First, you must loose all of your humanity in order to fully accept and welcome the great wolf spirit.

Dean breathes out; bring his hands to his face. Today sure wasn’t easy- on anyone.

INT. STANFORD- EXAMINATION ROOM

Sam stares towards the Law SAT. He had spent years, working to reach this moment. But, part of him knew that it would never work. He wasn’t like any of his friends. He witnessed his mother’s death, he fought monsters that weren’t supposed to exist, and he saw people die. Witnessed tons of supernatural events up close, things that no would ever believe. Possibly call it a “bed time story.” No one can ever leave the past. It comes back. It never leaves. Never. This is one thing he knew for certain. It was the truth of life that haunted him. He was “cursed.” Another part of him refused to believe any of this. Refused to believe that there was anything beyond ‘reality.’ Dreams of becoming a high accomplished lawyer, marrying Jessica, having children and a white picket fence to go along with it- the American dream. A false dream that somewhere inside he knew could never work- perhaps that’s what made this a whole lot more difficult. His refusal to accept who he was, his refusal that there was nothing out of the ordinary about the world and that the dreams about Jessica caught on fire on the ceiling. They could be nothing, but nightmares right? Just really bad dreams; that would never rest. Sam looks down towards his scantron, every bubble filled in. He looks around discovering that he was the last one. DING! The bell rings. Sam’s PROFESSOR walks towards the front of the room.

PROFESSOR
Times up.

Sam nods and walks the paper down to him. The professor takes it.

PROFESSOR
So, how did you think you did?

Sam shrugs

SAM
I think I passed

PROFESSOR
Well, if you didn’t. Remember Sam, there is always more to life than academics.

Sam breathes out. There are only academics. He had spent his whole life hiding behind a book. Hiding from himself, but he couldn’t manage to bring himself to tell the professor of his past. So, like always- he lied.

SAM
Yeah, I know.

Sam walks away.

INT. BRAY APARTMENT COMPLEX- STAN’S ROOM

Dean lays in bed staring out the window. He looks over towards Elizabeth sleeping. He closes his eyes.

EXT. DENSE FOREST- NIGHT- DREAM

A handheld camera is running furiously through the woods. Heavy breathing and the sounds of the runner crashing through the foliage. The camera runs for a while then suddenly stops short near a tree. Dean abruptly enters frame, animal-like, the tenseness of a startled cat. His head makes sudden movements, looking about. CLOSEUP of his flared nostrils and perked up ears accenting his animalness. Dean takes off and now we run with him. He runs fast and gracefully, taking long strides and leaps. We run with him faster and faster sharing in his exhilaration. We see him completely as the animal, study his movement and grace as if watching a gazelle. He comes out upon a clearing in the dense forest. He hears a woman’s voice screaming out his name. Dean crouches and stares forward, sniffing the air. He grins, baring his fangs. Dean RUNS through the DENSE FOREST and towards the voice. As we get closer, we realize that the voice belongs to Elizabeth.

ELIZABETH (O.S.)
Dean! Dean!!!

EXT. CLEARING- NIGHT- DREAM

Elizabeth stands on a grassy hill, looking around. The full moon behind her. We hear rustling through the trees. Elizabeth quickly turns to look towards the dense forest.

ELIZABETH
Dean!

We zoom in as we see Dean standing perch on top of a boulder looking down towards her. Studying her every move. His eyes light up yellow. Sweat pours down his face. Hunger. Giving into his instincts. Dean licks his lips. Elizabeth notices him.

ELIZABETH
Dean?

Dean crouches on all fours, tilts his head. We see that he isn’t able to understand her. All he can think of is his hunger. The unquenchable hunger for human flesh. Dean CHARGES towards her. Elizabeth screams and runs off. Dean follows close behind.

JUMP CUT:
EXT. FLORIDA EVERGLADES- NIGHT- FLASHBACK

Dean walks through the forest, gun raised. He looks around.

DEAN
Come on, where are you…

Dean looks and hears splashing of water.

DEAN
I know you’re out here.

Dean walks towards the water and sees a lizard-like humanoid creature swimming through the water. Dean begins to follow it. A rustle in the bushes, distracts him. He looks around. Elizabeth walks out of the clearing.

ELIZABETH
Don’t shoot

Dean looks towards her, suspicious

DEAN
Who are you?

ELIZABETH
Just like you, I’m a hunter

Dean nods

DEAN
Well, I got here first.

ELIZABETH
You can’t hunt this thing alone.

Dean looks towards her, eyebrow raised

DEAN
Hey, you know nothing about me.

ELIZABETH
Come on. You don’t want to be lonely all your life. I can help you.

Dean thinks about it. She was right.

DEAN
Alright, yeah sure…

Dean and Elizabeth share a smile

JUMP CUT:
EXT. DENSE FOREST- NIGHT- DREAM

Elizabeth runs through the forest, PANTING and running out of breath.

POV. DEAN
Dean chases after her, picking up his speed. Faster, and faster. Elizabeth looks back, frightened.

CUT TO:

DEAN
Shots showing the muscles in his legs and shoulders tensing.

CLOSE UP
Of Dean’s eyes.

CLOSE UP
Of Elizabeth, running, frightened.

CUT BACK TO:

CLOSE UP
Of Dean’s eyes.

CUT BACK TO:

ELIZABETH
as she is leapt upon, her terrified face leaving frame as Dean forces her down. Dean's head reenters frame, his face and hands covered with blood. He howls in triumph.

INT. BRAY ROAD APARTMENT COMPLEX- STAN’S ROOM

CLOSE UP on Dean’s eyes snapping open. Dean breathes out. Sweat pours down his face. It was just a dream. Dean stands up and walks over to the window. He looks up towards the moon, tears fall down his eyes. Dean falls to his knees, the pain inside becoming unbearable. He continues to cry, tears falling down his face.

DEAN
What have I become…

Dean rests his head against his hands. We begin to move away. Gradually distancing ourselves from him. From the expression on Dean’s face, we can see that he is mentally falling apart under the pressure.

Posted by: sxybabe2_143 Jan 17 2006, 11:48 PM
ur really gud...u have to write more..plzzzzz...or was that the end of it?

Posted by: Dean5339 Jan 18 2006, 12:03 AM
Thanks and I forgot to include:

TO BE CONTINUED

There's also a THE FULL MOON PRT. 2 which is going to be another 40 pages! Yep, this is two-parter. After finishing The Full Moon, I will be writing a episode based around a very similar concept as Steven King's CHRISTINE. Just because, I need a break from the darkness that takes place in THE FULL MOON. So similarly from the very dark Goat Man transition to the fun and light GOLD, expect a similar transition to CHRISTINE. The title for the next teleplay however is unknown at this time.

I don't know when exactly I will be finished with Prt. 2. Since I just finished the first part tonight, maybe in two weeks?

And I should have INSIDE THE LEGEND: FAITH up by Sunday at the latest.

Posted by: Dean5339 Jan 21 2006, 05:03 PM
Unfortunately, the second part will take me a bit longer to write- since I need to finish up an episode of SPIDER-MAN: THE SERIES that I am working on since "winter break" ends this week. So, I'll be tied up with that for a little bit. And then I'll come back and finish Full Moon and then the untitled-Christine-teleplay. You can expect prt. 2 by early Feburary at the latest and sorry for the delay.

Posted by: Dean5339 Jan 25 2006, 01:35 AM
EXT. THE FULL MOON NIGHT CLUB- NIGHT

The full moon shines down towards the underground nightclub. The city is quiet. The wolves are on the prowl.

INT. THE FULL MOON NIGHT CLUB- DOMINIC’S OFFICE

A beautiful Liken woman sits on Dominic’s lap. Their noses rub together. Dominic grins, baring his fangs as they begin to make out. Two wolves in the heat of the… KNOCK! KNOCK! KNOCK! Dominic glances towards the door- what now!!! Wolfsbane enters.

DOMINIC
What is it?

WOLFSBANE
I found her

Dominic arches his eyebrows, intently.

DOMINIC
She’s here?

Wolfsbane nods, grinning.

WOLFSBANE
It is time to take the next step

Dominic shakes his head no. Wolfsbane looks towards him, narrows his eyes.

WOLFSBANE
It is time.

DOMINIC
Not yet. She wouldn’t have come here alone.

Wolfsbane catches on…

WOLFSBANE
She does know better than that, my lord.

DOMINIC
I want you to keep a close eye on her. Find out everything. And then you can kill
her.

Wolfsbane licks his lips.

WOLFSBANE
Sounds like a plan… my lord.

Wolfsbane exits the room. Dominic looks back towards the Liken woman.

DOMINIC
So, where were we?

FLASH CUT:
INT. JERICHO, CALIFORNIA- MOTEL ROOM

John sits down, rapidly flipping through the pulled files. The answer has to be somewhere… a connection… John stops. Maybe he was looking too deep. John looks towards the files again; none of the men were single. But, it had to be more than that… didn’t it? Wait… all men, none single. John looks towards the information gathered on each man, all of them were unfaithful… the woman in white, it has to be.

FADE TO:
EXT. HYATTSVILLE PARK- AFTERNOON

Dean and Elizabeth sit on a bench staring up towards the mountains looming above.

DEAN
They’re going to come looking for you.

Dean looks towards Elizabeth, concerned.

ELIZABETH
I’m not going to let them scare me- I had practice.

DEAN
Not enough. Werewolves are dangerous. Their fast, agile and their only instinct, is to
eat.

ELIZABETH
After all this- you don’t think I’m ready? After all we’ve been through? Heck, Dean we’re both as strong as the other.

DEAN
You’re too emotional.

ELIZABETH
By brother died, how do you expect me to be?

Dean bites his lower lip

DEAN
I can’t explain it… I just, I just have this feeling that I can’t get out of the back side of my mind.

ELIZABETH
This is about last night isn’t it?

Dean shakes his head no

ELIZABETH
What aren’t you telling me?

DEAN
Nothing, it’s just a hunch.

ELIZABETH
If you were right there, Dean. Where you could sense, feel the thing that killed your mother. Would you back away? Just because it might be a little dangerous?

Dean remains silent. Elizabeth nods.

ELIZABETH
I can’t leave. This is something I have to do.

DEAN
Then just… be careful. More is going on here that we’re not even aware of.

ELIZABETH
What?

Dean shrugs

DEAN
I don’t know. This whole place is off the charts. Trust me on this.

ELIZABETH
Off the charts? As in town conspiracy? Or is it more the town gathers to help these things a la Chainsaw Massacre?

DEAN
The ladder, after what I saw last night…

Elizabeth nods.

ELIZABETH
You did the right thing.

Dean looks towards her, taken aback.

DEAN
How? I killed an innocent teenage girl.

ELIZABETH
We don’t deal in absolutes. If you hadn’t have killed her, he would have. You saved her from the pain. There was no way that she could have left that place alive. One way or another, she was going to die Dean.

Dean nods, but still doesn’t believe it.

DEAN
I’m going to put an end to this thing- before anyone else gets hurt.

Dean looks up towards the sky. How could he tell her? I had this dream, I was a werewolf and I tore you to shred. Sigmund Freud once said that dreams are the truth in disguise. If that was true- hopefully the dream never comes to pass.

INT. STANFORD CAFETERIA

Sam stares towards his plate, loss in a trance. Jessica sits down.

JESSICA
Sam, what is it?

Sam looks into her eyes… the only thing he can see is the vision from the dream. The fire. The pain. The torture. Death. But, what was causing it? Why now?

SAM
Nothing… just a bad dream.

JESSICA
That’s what’s been bothering you isn’t it?

Sam nods.

JESSICA
What’s it about?

Sam looks away. How could he tell her? I saw you against the ceiling, caught on fire and I couldn’t do anything to save you. Jessica was a psychology student, she’d dig. And then she’d find out the truth. The only possible choice is to lie.

SAM
Nothing, just nightmares concerning my family.

JESSICA
What is it?

SAM
My past

JESSICA
Well, what’s it about?

Sam shrugs

SAM
I forget every time I have it, it’s getting harder every day now. More frequent.
(beat)
No matter what happens to me. I want you to know that I’ll always love you.

Jessica nods

JESSICA
I know.

It was just a dream. It had to be.

INT. CENTENNIAL LIBRARY

John quickly types keyword searches into the computer and comes up with an article titled “SUICIDE ON CENTENNIAL”. This was it… John reads over the article from 1981.

JOHN
Constance Welch, a local 24 year old mother of two jumped off of Sylvania Bridge committing suicide. Her body was found floating in the water, drowned to death by the raging rapids. An hour before they found her, she called 911, reporting that she had left her two children alone in the bathtub. When she returned, they weren’t breathing. This might have been the event that led to her death. “Our baby’s were gone and Constance just couldn’t bear it,” said husband, Joseph Welch.

John nods; first thing he had to do was find the husband. Then… burn the corpse. This was a woman in white, she fit the profile. Perhaps, there wasn’t a trail here. Maybe he was looking too deep, too long. He might never find the thing that killed Marry. He shuts down the computer, he breathes out. No, he’d find it, in due time.

Posted by: sxybabe2_143 Jan 25 2006, 01:51 AM
U HAVE TO WRITE MORE...UR GOIN GREAT

Posted by: Dean5339 Jan 25 2006, 02:01 AM
I'll add another segment of the teleplay Friday, and every other two days. Thus, I can keep it going at a somewhat continous pace as I complete the teleplay. Then after this I'm heading straight into DRIVE which is inspired by Stephen King's Christine.

Posted by: Dean5339 Jan 27 2006, 10:42 PM
EXT. DENSE FOREST- NIGHT

Dominic and Dean walk through the dark forest.

DOMINIC
As a Lyken, you get to live life to the fullest. It’s the most profound experience that one could ever have. To hunt. It awakes something animal inside of us, something that has always been there. The “curse” of the wolf, does not bring out a new entity- it brings out our inner selves. Inside we are all wolves, all beasts and monsters of the night. Fighting to emerge. How else could you describe lashing out of anger? Murders, rapes and child abuse? All of the evils of the world have a cause- remember what we came from. Cavemen, primitive beings, who knew little of language and today’s social standards. If you wanted something, you would hunt for it. If you wanted a woman, you would kill for her or kidnap her. If there was a rivalry, you would viscously murder your rival. Becoming “cursed,” is really only awakening our inner being… our primitive side of nature. And believe me, once we open ourselves up- only then are we truly free. The other night you panicked, why?

DEAN
She didn’t deserve what happened to her.

DOMINIC
And why not? We are all put on this earth for a reason. Some are meant to do great things, while others are meant to wither away and becoming nothing.

DEAN
You’re talking as though she’s cattle.

Dominic nods

DOMINIC
Cattle. Maybe she is “cattle.” That word has been used and reused on derogatory effect many of times. But, has anyone ever thought that perhaps… maybe… they were destined for what happened to them?

DEAN
Destined to become your food?

DOMINIC
Not just my food.

Dominic looks around the forest

DOMINIC
Our food, we are all one with the beast. We are all animals. Killing is in our blood, it is our natural instinct.

DEAN
It’s not right…

Dominic laughs

DOMINIC
Of course it’s not… you’ve been programmed like the rest of the world. Why else do you think you see children and teenagers committing heinous acts? Date rape? Columbine? Or those far and in between cases of children, murdering others for another’s affection. It’s who we are. Inside we are all still that caveman lurking the caves, giving into our basic instincts. And to deny those instincts is the true crime being committed.

DEAN
You believe this?

Dominic nods

DOMINIC
I know how difficult this might be to hear. But, it’s the truth as you will find out soon enough. Once you are free to do anything you want, you become who you truly are. You give into your instincts more capably, more freely. Because you know, you can finally be yourself- and no one will ever judge you. No one.

DEAN
When did you become one with the wolf spirit?

Dominic grins, his lips parting revealing his fangs.

DOMINIC
A long time ago; it’s better this way. Trust me, I would know.

DEAN
So, Dominic… that your real name?

Dominic laughs

DOMINIC
I won’t tell you… we all have to run from something

DEAN
What do you have to run from?

Dominic stops, his eyes light up on fire.

DOMINIC
Aggression, misunderstandings, banishment. I was never like the rest, a part of me always knew there was more out than this… than all of this. That there was an aspect of humanity, capable of being tapped into. If only I would give it a shot to reach out to be, touch me with it’s icy cold fingers and bring me into a world I never thought possible.

DEAN
It must get lonely.

Dominic looks towards Dean, suspicious.

DEAN
Living alone… for all these years.

Dominic laughs

DOMINIC
Love? There is no such thing as love… my parents abandoned me, my first lover tried to kill me. I have learned many lessons throughout the years. One of them is do not trust love, it doesn’t exist. It’s merely a fascination of the mind, love comes and love goes. It is ephemeral. If you love someone, eventually your heart will be broken. It’s an inevitable part of life. There is no such thing as a true love. Now pleasure, on the other hand, is real. Sex, passion, arousal those have always been the feelings of our ancestors. Did our ancient ancestors believe in such a thing as love? In the very first of days, cavemen only took women to make them feel aroused. Heck, look at the age old story of Adam and Eve. Two people created by God, who can’t help but go against them, following in their natural instincts of pleasure… of sex and temptation of the "fruit", if you look at the scriptures it is all there. We can’t help but defy who we truly are, giving into our innermost desires. If you’re hungry, who cares who gives a rat’s ass- you’ll eat. No matter what, you’ll eat. Same thing here, we hunger- we lust for human flesh and blood. That’s the only thing that maintains us, keeps us alive. And in that, their life is rightfully ours to take. We each have a life cycle, a predestination of where and when death will come for us. We eat humans, they eat wolves, and then the wolves thus in turn eat their own particular prey. It’s the way life works. No one else, but humans care. So, they hunt us- call us evil. But, we’re not evil, only an aspect of this world that they could never understand.

The more Dean listened; he couldn’t help but begin to buy into what Dominic was telling him. All of it seemed to make sense. Dean pushes the thought away. But, perhaps there is a grey area to the whole controversy.

DEAN
But, we’ll make them understand.

Dominic looks towards Dean, grinning. He laughs and shakes his head no.

DOMINIC
And cause attention to ourselves? It’s perfect just the way it is. The Universal monster tradition has robbed people of the very notion of werewolves’ existence that they disregard the notion that we may very well exist. We’re safe, we’re free. Besides, if we were to start an all out war- not one, but both sides would lose. Our world, our way of life has been in balance for hundreds of years- there is no reason to end that now.

Dean nods- well, that trap didn’t work.

DOMINIC
All we want is to be understood. Seen as we truly are.

Dean looks towards Dominic, curious.

DOMINIC
A higher form of life.

DEAN
You believe that?

Dominic shakes his head yes.

DOMINIC
That’s what the demon told Peter when they made the eternal exchange. “You will become the ruler of heaven and earth, you will guide those of the civilized world into darkness, for you will be a higher form of life.”

DEAN
Become the ruler? I thought you said that there wasn’t going to be a war.

Dominic nods, grinning.

DOMINIC
You catch on fast. If we were to have a war, no sides would win. But, if we were to convert people into our way of life then the wolves truly will rule supreme.

Dean looks towards Dominic

DEAN
Where’s Stubbe now?

Dominic shrugs

DOMINIC
Legends say that he died. That the townspeople murdered him in cold blood

DEAN
What if the legends got it wrong? What if that wasn’t the full story?

Dominic grins, laughing.

DOMINIC
Then I’d sure as hell like to meet him.

Dean nods

DEAN
So would I.

Dominic tenses and then looks around the forest.

DOMINIC
After you

Dean looks towards Dominic, curious.

DEAN
What’s going on?

DOMINIC
Your first trial… tonight we hunt.

Dominic’s eyes light up as he bares his fangs, baying at the full moon above.

Posted by: Dean5339 Jan 31 2006, 06:15 PM
PREVIEW FOR SUPERNATURAL: DRIVE!!!

This teleplay is based on Steven King's CHRISTINE. I am still working on The Full Moon. And this will be my next teleplay. Thought you might be interested. So, here's the preview for Supernatural: Drive!!!

INT. IMPOUND LOT- GARAGE

KYLE MOSLEY, 17 years old, works on a 1958 Plymouth Fury. Fixing it up, finding new parts and polishing the exterior.

KYLE
We’ll show them, right?

Kyle reaches out and GRABS another rag from a bucket of water. He RUBS the car with the rag, cleaning off any sign of decay. Kyle continues to softly rub the car, with the rag… VROOM!!! The engine FIRES up, almost in response to Kyle’s actions. Kyle backs away and looks towards the car. He breathes out, walks away and looks back. The Plymouth sits, unmoving. Kyle slowly walks back towards it, inspecting the car. He breathes out.

KYLE
Man, either I’m tired

Kyle looks around the pitch dark warehouse, rolls his eyes.

KYLE
Or…

The headlights fire up, ILLUMNIATING more of the warehouse. Kyle quickly looks back towards the Plymouth, his eyebrows arched- curious.

KYLE
You can understand me?… Honk your horn; please tell me I’m not crazy.

Silence, Kyle waits. Part of him wants it to be silent, the other part urges for something more. HONK!!! The horn sounds, STARTLING him. Hairs stick up on end. Kyle approaches the car, nervous.

KYLE
Alright, at least I’m not delusional.

Kyle approaches the Plymouth. He gulps.

KYLE
Christine huh?

Kyle approaches her, nervous but he is no longer afraid. Rather more aroused by the notion of a living, breathing automobile; Kyle rests his hand against the door. He smiles.

KYLE
That’s your name right?

The headlights blink. Kyle grins, taking notice. Kyle slowly opens the door and gets into the Plymouth.

INT. CHRISTINE

Kyle sits in the passenger seat. His hands rub up against the steering wheel, feeling Christine over.

KYLE
We’ll do this together. I fix you up, you fix me up. We’re a team.

Kyle pats the steering wheel, feeling gradually more and more intimate with Christine.

KYLE
No one can stop us. Not when we work together. Never.

The camera PANS over and we are now able to see the backseat. A shadow lurks in the background, it gradually moves CLOSER and CLOSER towards the front seat. Finally we can see it! Its eyes are wild and cruel, it’s teeth fixed into a sadistic grin. The rotting away, grotesque corpse of a middle aged man, ARNOLD BARON, sits in the back seat leaning over Kyle’s shoulder!!!

ARNOLD
Together we can make them pay.

Kyle’s eyes dart back and forth.

KYLE
Make them… pay…

Kyle grins, he likes the sound of that.

In the book, there is a talking corpse in the backseat. This is the angle I wanted to go from, the Carpenter film didn't go this route. But, it's the trail I plan to take with the episode. It also fits in with the overall Supernatural Series. A ghost is usually behind it, one way or another- if it's "possesed". Another thing that I wanted to do was maintain Carpenter's vision of the relationship between Arnie (Kyle) and Christine. Thus, as Kyle's arc progresses he becomes more and more in tone with Christine forming an awkward 'romantic' relationship. Other than just a guy's obsession with his car.

Posted by: Dean5339 Feb 2 2006, 10:27 PM
EXT. JERICHO, CALIFORNIA- JOSEPH WELCH’S HOME- EVENING

John stands outside of the house. Waiting. JOSPEH WELCH answers the door.

JOSEPH
Can I help you?

JOHN
I’m a reporter writing an article about your wife’s death out on Centennial. I was hoping that I could ask you a couple of questions.

Joseph nods

JOSEPH
Come in.

Joseph steps out of the way and John walks in.

FADE TO:

INT. JOSEPH WELCH’S HOME- KITCHEN

John sits down at the table.

JOSEPH
So, what do you want to know?

JOHN
So, why did you move?

JOSEPH
If you had kids you would understand, I don’t want to grow up in the house they died
in.

John nods

JOHN
I understand, ever marry again?

Joseph nods his head no

JOSEPH
No way. Constance, she was the love of my life. Prettiest woman I ever known.

John nods.

JOHN
Happy marriage huh?

JOSEPH
Definitely

JOHN
So, where is she buried?

Joseph looks towards John, taken aback.

JOSEPH
Why do you want to know that?

JOHN
For the paper

Joseph arcs his eyebrow.

JOSEPH
I buried in her in a plot behind my old place on Breckenridge

John nods

JOHN
Next to anything? Or where around is she buried?

JOSEPH
Why are you concerned about where she was buried?

JOHN
Details, I’m sorry but I have to find out as much information as I can… half of it,
actually never makes it to print.

Joseph looks towards John suspicious, and then gradually buys into the lie. He nods.

FLASH CUT:
EXT. DENSE FOREST- NIGHT

We see several cuts of action: Dean running after an antelope, Dominic following close behind. We instantly cut to: Dean kneeling over a bleeding antelope, his mouth covered in blood. Dean looks towards Dominic.

DOMINIC
So what do you think?

Dean grins

DEAN
Exhilarating

Dean struggled holding it back. The thoughts that there might be more to this life than he thought; he wanted to be a… no… Dean quickly pushes the thought aside. Keep cool man, keep cool.

DOMINIC
I thought you would think that. It’s in your blood; it’s in all of us. We all yearn for excitement, adrenaline and there is no better way than to give into our animalistic urges and leave everything else behind. If you thought this was fun, wait until you hunt a human.

Dominic grins. Dean looks towards him, taken aback.

DOMINIC
Don’t worry. In due time, you will yearn for it. We all do.

Dean wipes the blood away from his mouth and stands back up. Dominic nods in approval.

DOMINIC
It’s time to go home. By the way, where is your home?

Dean looks around, Dominic laughs.

DOMINIC
You do have a home don’t you?

Dean nods.

DOMINIC
Well, where is it?

DEAN
I checked into a hotel today.

Dominic looks towards Dean, suspicious.

DOMINIC
Which one?

Dean looks towards Dominic, for the first time in his life he was frightened.

DEAN
Bray Road.

Dominic grins, tilting his head. He nods.

DOMINIC
I’ll be seeing you soon. You are free to leave.

Dean walks away. Dominic stays behind. A wolf walks towards Dominic, upon closer glance we can see that it is larger than any wolf- it is a werewolf. The werewolf gradually transforms back into the human form of Wolfsbane.

DOMINIC
Keep a close eye on him. I have a feeling there is something he isn’t telling us.

Wolfsbane nods and walks off. Dominic remains behind, he breathes out.

DOMINIC
What are you hiding…

FADE TO:
INT. BRAY ROAD APARTMENT COMPLEX- STAN’S ROOM

Dean walks in, he looks towards Elizabeth sleeping. Elizabeth yawns and looks towards Dean staring towards her, eyes afire. Something was different about him, something she couldn’t put her finger on. Elizabeth sits up in bed.

ELIZABETH
Where were you?

Dean frowns.

DEAN
It doesn’t concern you

ELIZABETH
Dean, come on. Where did you go? Is it about Dominic? What happened?

Dean breathes out, bites his lower lip and stares towards her.

DEAN
Can you just shut up about it already!!! I was out, big deal. Leave it alone.

ELIZABETH
We’re here trying to find what killed my brother. This case is personal to me.

DEAN
Yeah well, he’s dead Elizabeth and nothing you do is ever going to change that. He’s ripped to shreds laying under ground in a tomb. We all die- sooner or later.

ELIZABETH
What’s wrong with you?

DEAN
Nothing.

Dean walks towards her. Elizabeth backs away. Dean notices.

DEAN
Don’t be afraid of me!!!

Dean rips the curtains off of the bed. Elizabeth gulps. Dean breaths out, heavily.

DEAN
This case it’s become more than your brother.

Elizabeth looks towards Dean, frightened. Dean grins.

DEAN
It’s become an awakening.

EXT. FOREST
Wolfsbane stares towards the Bray Road apartment complex. His lips part forming a grin.

FADE TO:
INT. THE FULL MOON NIGHT CLUB- DOMINIC’S OFFICE

Dominic is currently nosing a hot woman, she is also a werewolf. Wolfsbane enters and looks towards him.

DOMINIC
What is it?

WOLFSBANE
I followed him liked you asked

DOMINIC
And?

WOLFSBANE
He is working with Elizabeth.

Dominic stands up snarling, the woman falls to the ground.

DOMINIC
The one thing I hate most is a traitor… send Jacob to keep a closer eye on them.

Wolfsbane nods

WOLFSBANE
Yes sir.

Wolfsbane leaves the room.

FADE TO:
INT. JERICHO, CALIFORNIA- MOTEL ROOM
John flips through his notes concerning the Woman in White. At the end of the notes we come across a crude drawing of Mary stretched along the ceiling burnt to a crisp.

INT. BRAY ROAD APARTMENT COMPLEX- STAN’S ROOM
CLOSE UP on Dean sleeping. His eyes SNAP open. We hear rustling coming from outside. Dean sits up out of bed, grabs a pistol of silver bullets and runs out of the room.

EXT. DENSE FOREST
JACOB, young, handsome, watches the apartment from afar. He stretches his muscles. The full moon shines above.

Dean loads the pistol as he ascends up the hill. He sees Jacob in front of him.

INT. JERICHO, CALIFORNIA- MOTEL ROOM
John stands up and looks at the documents stretched across the room. Behind the curtains through shadow we can see something walk across.

EXT. DENSE FOREST
Jacob growls as he sees Dean nearing him. He takes off into the dense forest. Transforming as he runs.

INT. JERICHO, CALIFORNIA- MOTEL ROOM- BATHROOM
John splashes the water from the sink onto his face… he closes his eyes. But, he can’t get the image out of his head.

FLASH CUT:
INT. WINCHESTER FAMILY HOME- FLASHBACK
Mary peers down from the ceiling above, mouth agape. Silent at first. Then a fire-like light begins to spread across her until the ceiling surrounding her catches on fire and engulfs the entire room.

FLASH CUT:
INT. JERICHO, CALIFORNIA- MOTEL ROOM- BATHROOM
John opens his eyes, he breathes out.

JUMP CUT:
EXT. DENSE FOREST
Dean prowls through the forest on the hunt. He looks around. Taking in every sign of life and every sound around him. He inches further and further into the dense forest. His eyes dart back and forth. He crouches and looks around. Finally he hears it. The sound of paws scattering against the dry leaves. He runs after the noise until he comes across a…

EXT. FOREST CLEARING
He continues to run off towards the noise. He spots a wolf running off through the forest. He chases after it. It disappears. Dean stops and looks around. It was no where in sight!

INT. JERICHO, CALIFORNIA- MOTEL ROOM
John types keywords into the laptop. A noise of wind rushes into the room. He stops, glances behind his back. Nothing. He goes back to work. All of a sudden the room is engulfed in a fiery glow. He looks, we can only see the expression on his face. Fear, relief, anger, determination. He knew he was getting close.

EXT. FOREST CLEARING
The werewolf watches salivating as Dean looks around. It CHARGES towards him. Dean notices and instantly swings around just in time to fire one shot… BOOM! We hear a yelp. He got it.

INT. JERICHO, CALIFORNIA- MOTEL ROOM
John breathes out. Whatever it was is now gone. Salt and cat eye shells are scattered around the room.

EXT. FOREST CLEARING
Dean approaches the dead werewolf. The werewolf transforms back into Jacob. Dead. Dean nods and looks up towards the shimmering full moon above.

FADE TO:
INT. THE FULL MOON NIGHT CLUB- BAR
Dominic is at the bar, gulping down a drink. Wolfsbane approaches him.

WOLFSBANE
Jacob is dead sir.

Dominic looks towards him, furious.

DOMINIC
What?

WOLFSBANE
They must have found out. He’s dead.

Dominic snarls…

DOMINIC
Send Elizabeth an informant, luring her to us. Tell her that her brother is still alive.

Wolfsbane looks towards him, cautious.

DOMINIC
And not to tell anyone or the deal is off.

WOLFSBANE
What about Bones?

DOMINIC
Leave Jacob Bones to me. I’ll make sure that he remains uninvolved. Do you
understand me?

WOLFSBANE
Yes.

DOMINIC
And when she comes here, it is time for your final step. She will be sacrificed.

Posted by: Dean5339 Feb 2 2006, 10:29 PM
TO BE CONTINUED

And, what does everybody think so far? There have been fewer comments on this teleplay, than on the others that I wrote. I know it's a departure from what I usually write. So is it good? Not as good? Just, tell me what you think.

Posted by: Dean5339 Feb 3 2006, 01:39 PM
INT. BRAY ROAD APARTMENT COMPLEX- STAN’S ROOM

Elizabeth is sleeping. Dean climbs back into bed and goes to sleep. He looks towards her. A tear falls down his eyes. He breathes out, what had got into him earlier that night… then he understood, he was changing.

INT. BRAY ROAD APARTMENT COMPLEX- STAN’S ROOM

Dean closes his eyes.

INT. MOTEL ROOM- FLASHBACK

Dean and Elizabeth are at the Texas Motel Room. Notes of the Backseat killer are tacked to the walls. Dean and Elizabeth look towards a map, Dean looks towards her smiling. How did he get so lucky.

ELIZABETH
Alright, so from what we can gather… the killer has been known to appear along here and… here of Death Road.

Dean nods

DEAN
So, I say we go out there. Try to find the corpse. Then, burn it.

Elizabeth shakes her head no.

ELIZABETH
That would be like searching for gold in the sewers of New York.

DEAN
Alright, so what’s your plan?

ELIZABETH
We set a trap, we capture it in the act and we read a passage from the bible.

DEAN
You know that doesn’t always work- right?

Elizabeth shrugs

ELIZABETH
It’s worth a shot.

Dean nods ok

DEAN
So, what’s the trap?

Elizabeth looks towards him. Dean backs up.

DEAN
Wo, no… agh-agh. No way, we’ll find some other way.

ELIZABETH
It’s our only chance.

Dean breathes out

DEAN
No Elizabeth, we’re not going to do this.

ELIZABETH
It only attacks girls Dean, I have to. If we don’t do this it’s going to kill again and we
don’t know how soon.

Dean looks towards her. She had her mind determined.

DEAN
Fine… we’ll go with your plan. I’ll be driving behind you in the Impala. I see it, I’ll shoot. Then you dunk as fast as you can.

Elizabeth nods ok

DEAN
I really hate this.

ELIZABETH
We don’t have any other choice.

Dean breathes out.

DEAN
Alright, tomorrow Philip Lassen is good as gone.

Dean looks into her eyes- cautious, afraid. Elizabeth notices. They kiss. Elizabeth looks towards him.

ELIZABETH
Hey it’s going to be alright, you won’t lose me. I promise. I’d never leave you.
Never.

INT. BRAY ROAD APARTMENT COMPLEX- STAN’S ROOM

Dean’s eyes SNAP open. Wide awake.

INT. THE FULL MOON NIGHTCLUB- MAIN FLOOR

Dean and Dominic sit at the bar.

DOMINIC
So, ever since then I am who I am today.

DEAN
So, you’ve been like this for 25 years

Dominic nods

DOMINIC
And I haven’t wanted it to be any other way since. This life. There’s something about it, something empowering… other worldly… something unique. It’s dangerous, it’s exciting, it’s…

DEAN
Breath defying?

Dominic laughs, he nods

DOMINIC
Yes… exactly. You won’t ever have second doubts again. At first you’re nervous. A little jittery about the whole notion of a new life style. But, trust me it’s worth it. Immortality. Everything you could ever want. And more.

Dean takes a sip out of his drink, and nods.

DOMINIC
So, tell me… Bones, anyone special in your life?

DEAN
Me? Nope… never. One nights stands the way to be.

Dominic grins

DOMINIC
You catch on fast. Love doesn’t exist. Pleasure is the true nature of life.

Dean nods

DEAN
Exactly

DOMINIC
You wouldn’t be hiding something from me now would you?

Dean shakes his head no

DEAN
What gives you that idea?

Dominic grins. Baring his fangs.

INT. BRAY ROAD APARTMENT COMPLEX- STAN’S ROOM

Elizabeth sits on the bed flipping through history books about the town. RING… RING… RING… Elizabeth picks up the phone. A man’s voice is heard over the phone, this is the INFORMANT.

INFORMANT (O.S.)
I know where your brother is.

ELIZABETH
That’s impossible- my brother is dead.

INFORMANT (O.S.)
That’s what they wanted you to think. He is alive and well.

ELIZABETH
Where is he?

No answer

ELIZABETH
Who is this?

INFORMANT (O.S.)
You’re brother is at 203 Wayview Drive.

ELIZABETH
How am I to know this isn’t a trap?

INFORMANT (O.S.)
You don’t. But, if you ever want to see your brother again. Come alone.

The phone clicks dead. Elizabeth hangs up the phone. A lump in her throat. Fright and anticipation. Was this true? Elizabeth stands up and leaves the room.

INT. THE FULL MOON NIGHTCLUB- MAIN FLOOR

Dean looks towards Dominic.

DEAN
Enough talking about me. Same question, are you hiding anything?

DOMINIC
Me? What have I to hide?

DEAN
People have gone missing over the years. One in specific.

DOMINIC
Are you sure it isn’t just another convert?

DEAN
Positive. His name was Stan Walker. Ring a bell?

Dominic shakes his head no

DOMINIC
Can’t say I have. Why?

DEAN
Just an old friend, a college. Gone missing a couple of weeks back. Hot on his trail.

DOMINIC
Is that the man found murdered in his apartment building? No corpse recovered?

Dean nods

DOMINIC
I remember reading about it. That’s all.

DEAN
You sure?

Dominic nods

DOMINIC
Absolutely.

EXT. BRAY ROAD

We see Elizabeth hailing a cab. A taxi pulls over. She gets in.

INT. TAXI

The DRIVER looks back towards her.

DRIVER
Where to?

Elizabeth remains quiet… still deciding.

ELIZABETH
203 Wayview Drive.

DRIVER
You sure mam, that place has been abandoned for many years.

Elizabeth nods. The driver shrugs and grins baring his fangs.

DRIVER
Whatever you say mam.

EXT. BRAY ROAD

The taxi drives off.

INT. THE FULL MOON NIGHTCLUB- MAIN ROOM

Dominic gulps down his drink and turns towards Dean.

DOMINIC
You are ready.

Dean looks towards Dominic

DOMINIC
The ceremony will be tonight. Hail the great wolf spirit.

Dean looks towards Dominic, hesitant.

DEAN
Hail, hail.

EXT. 203 WAYVIEW DRIVE

The Taxi pulls to the curb. Elizabeth exits and looks towards an old abandoned brick
building. Cobwebs sprawled all over. She hands the driver the money and enters.

INT. ABANDONED BRICK BUILDING

Elizabeth walks in. The building is almost pitch black.

ELIZABETH
Hello… is anybody in here…

Elizabeth continues to walk forwards. The windows are nailed shut. The stairs leading towards the second floor are broken. Light seeps through the cracks hitting certain parts of the room.

ELIZABETH
Hello…

We see a man walk towards her, stepping into the light. It is Wolfsbane. Elizabeth isn’t frightened. Tears roll down her eyes.

ELIZABETH
I thought you were dead.

Wolfsbane walks towards her. This was STAN WALKER!!!

Posted by: Dean5339 Feb 3 2006, 03:18 PM
STAN
No, it’s me. Still me.

Elizabeth walks towards him and rests her hand against his cheek. Stan takes it and holds it. Feeling her warmth.

ELIZABETH
I was so afraid, that something happened to you. That phone call… how did you escape?

JUMP CUT:
INT. MOTEL-FLASHBACK

Elizabeth CAUTIOUSLY walks towards the phone and answers it.

ELIZABETH
Hello…

STAN (O.S.)
Elizabeth. I need your help, things are really getting out of hand.

We can hear howling in the background. A door CREAKS and RIPS open. Elizabeth listens, motionless.

STAN (O.S.)
No… no… no!!!

The line clicks dead. Tears roll down her face.

JUMP CUT:
INT. MOTEL-FLASHBACK

Dean walks in, soaked. He looks around the dark room. Dean notices something, he glances back towards the bed. Elizabeth wasn’t there. Dean gulps, shaking his head no. He quickly looks up towards the ceiling- afraid. Dean breathes out, she wasn’t there. He looks around the room, hurriedly.

DEAN
Elizabeth? Elizabeth!!! Where are you!

The bathroom door cracks open. Elizabeth walks out, tears rolling down her eyes. Dean approaches her, relieved, compassionate.

DEAN
What is it?

Elizabeth looks into her eyes and runs into the embrace of his arms.

ELIZABETH
My brother… Dean, we have to save him.

DEAN
We will.

Dean looks into Elizabeth’s eyes

DEAN
I promise you.

INT. ABANDONED BRICK BUILDING

Stan nods, bites his lower lip.

STAN
I adapted.

Elizabeth looks towards Stan, frightened.

STAN
We were wrong Elizabeth. So wrong. They’re different than us. That’s all. I learned to embrace their life. Become one with the great wolf spirit.

Stan grins, baring his fangs.

JUMP CUT:
EXT. DARK FOREST-CLEARING-NIGHT- FLASHBACK

We zoom into a dark forest. The full moon shines in the night sky above a clearing. Werewolves encompass a naked Stan Walker wearing nothing but a belt made from the skin of a wolf. He stands in the center of a carved circle encompassing the ground beneath him. To his side stands Dominic, grinning and nodding towards him. Stan closes his eyes, fearful.

DOMINIC
Say it, let it bask over you. The thoughts, the feelings… the hunger for human flesh.

STAN
Hail, hail, hail…

The wind picks up speed and begins to whirl around him. The coldness of the air, the body heat emerging off of him. The trees sway in his direction.

STAN (CONT’D)
Great wolf spirit, hail.

Stan looks down towards the container he holds in his hand, he opens it. Air rushes
out towards him. Stan pours the material out of the container and onto his hands. He begins to rub his body with the slimy substance.

STAN (CONT’D)
A boon I ask thee, mighty shade!!!

The werewolves around him howl towards the moon. Basking in the full moon, relishing the ritual. Stan opens his eyes, we see his eyes glare animalistic yellow for a second. Stan grins, enjoying it. Not afraid, but now eager. Very eager. Hungry for human flesh, saliva drips down his mouth. He bends down and begins to draw two circles into the ground.

STAN
Within this circle I have made. Make me a werewolf strong and bold. The terror alike of young and old.

Stan looks up, grinning. Yes, it was fun to be a wolf. Stan glances towards Dominic, who nods proudly, and hands him the ingredients to pour into the cauldron over a stack of wood within the circle. Stan pours the material into the cauldron and begins to stir. Vapor shoots out of the cauldron, Stan lights the fire and grins. Flames LEAP out of the cauldron and begins to swarm around the engraved circle enclosure.

STAN
Elect of all devilish host, I pray you send hither, the great gray shape that makes men shiver. Come! Come! Come!

Stan opens up another container and pours a hallucinogenic salve onto his body. He begins to rub it, spreading it over his body. Stan slowly walks towards the cauldron. It is time. Stan grins as he inhales the fumes from the cauldron. Stan falls to his knees and raises both of his hands towards the moon.

STAN
I beg, I pray, I implore thee-thee unparalleled Phantom of Darkness-to make me a werewolf--a werewolf!

Stan’s skin begins to peel off of his body. Stan withers in pains and screams in agony as the transformation takes effect. Dominic grins as he watches.

STAN (IN AGONY)
Make me a man-eater. Make me woman eater. Make me a child-eat. Make me a werewolf!

WEREWOLF STAN is now completely transformed. He gets up on all fours and breathes. Yes it is fun to be a wolf.

WEREWOLF STAN
Melt the bullet, blunt the knife, rot the cudgel, strike fear into man, beast and reptile so they may not seize the gray wolf, nor tear his from his warm hide. My word is firm, firmer than sleep or the strength of heroes.

Werewolf Stan looks towards Dominic, bares his fangs. Dominic grins, baring his.

DOMINIC
Welcome… brother.

FADE TO:
INT. ABANDONED BRICK BUILDING

Stan looks towards Elizabeth, sadistically tilts his head.

STAN
And so here I am. Your sweet, dear brother.

Elizabeth stares towards him, afraid, repulsed, saddened. She backs away.

ELIZABETH
It doesn’t have to be like this. We can find a cure.

Stan shakes his head no, violently.

STAN
No!!! Life is better this way. I opened myself up to an awakening. I’ve found who I truly am inside. Finally free, finally able to be me…

Stan grins. Elizabeth looks towards him.

ELIZABETH
You’re not making any sense. I know you, this isn’t you.

STAN
Until a man showed me the way. Gradually introduced me to their world. I was afraid, at first. And then came the ceremony. After that I ended my life as Stan Walker, and began again as Wolfsbane.

Stan walks towards Elizabeth.

STAN
I couldn’t have done it without you.

Tears roll down Elizabeth’s eyes, as she breathes out and shakes her head no.

STAN
But, as part of the ritual… I’m afraid now you must be sacrificed to the great Wolf Spirit.

Stan bares his fangs, grinning. His eyes light up animalistic yellow. Elizabeth looks towards him. Afraid.

STAN
Come now, it won’t be that painful. Besides it is for the better good.

Elizabeth PUNCHES Stan. She runs off. Stan grabs his jaw, readjusting it.

STAN
That wasn’t very nice now was it!!!

Elizabeth runs towards the door. It won’t budge. She bangs on it. She looks around. Frightened.

STAN
Elizabeth! The fun and games are over. It is your time.

EXT. 203 WAYVIEW DRIVE

We hear screaming coming from inside. Everybody walks past. Not paying any attention. This is Walworth County, Bray Road. The werewolf capital of the USA.

Posted by: Dean5339 Feb 3 2006, 08:14 PM
INT. BRAY ROAD APARTMENT COMPLEX- HALLWAYS

Dean walks through the empty hallways towards the apartment room. He walks in…

INT. BRAY ROAD APARTMENT COMPLEX- STAN’S ROOM

Dean walks in. He looks around.

DEAN
Hey, Elizabeth. We got them. Right where we want them.

No answer. Dean rushes in. We see the whole room now. Torn apart. In the corner blood is stained on the ceiling. Tears fall down his eyes.

DEAN
No…

Dean RUSHES over to see Elizabeth laying on the ground. Dead. Bleeding. Her heart torn out. And the mark of the wolf on her shoulder. Dean holds her in his arms, crying.

DEAN
No… no… don’t do this to me…

Dean looks around the room. He can’t stop the tears. It was his fault. The dream had come true. Dean looks back down towards her.

DEAN
No… don’t die on me… please…

Dean breaks into tears as he buries his head on her chest.

DEAN
I’m sorry… I’m so sorry…

FADE TO:
EXT. CEMETERY- RAINING/ EVENING

Dean stands alone in the cemetery watching Elizabeth’s coffin being lowered into the ground. Rain falls down from above. LATER Dean kneels next to the marked grave. ELIZABETH WALKER APRIL 5, 1981-JANUARY 6, 2004: SHE SHOWED ME HOW TO LIVE. Tears roll down his eyes. He stares up towards the sky above. The full moon. If only he had been there, with her, he maybe could have prevented this. LATER Dean is still at the cemetery, crying. Unable to get over his guilt. He breathes out. It was time to end this.

Posted by: Dean5339 Feb 3 2006, 08:15 PM
EXT. DARK FOREST-CLEARING- NIGHT

We zoom into a dark forest. The full moon shines in the night sky above a clearing. Werewolves encompass a carved circle encompassing the ground in front of them. Stan has taken Dominic’s role in the ceremony. He looks around. Dean is no where in sight.

STAN
Where the hell is he…

EXT. DARK FOREST
Dean looks down over the ceremonial setting from his outlook above. He takes out a pistol and loads it with silver bullets. His eyes stare forward. Angry. Vengeful.

STAN
Well…

Dean JUMPS down from his perch and lands in the clearing.

EXT. DARK FOREST- CLEARING

Stan looks towards Dean, tilts his head. Dean raises the gun. Stan grins.

STAN
Is that what you really want? This life is worth sacrifices.

DEAN
No… it never is.

STAN
He can give you everything. Like he did for me.

DEAN
It’s not right.

STAN
That’s because you were brainwashed.

Dean shakes his head no

DEAN
No, because it’s wrong.

Stan walks towards Dean, transforming as he walks.

STAN
Don’t you think I miss her too?! She was my sister. But, that’s over now. I embraced who I truly am. Wolfsbane! Now it’s your time.

Stan transforms into his werewolf self. Wolfsbane stares towards Dean. Dean shakes his head no. Dean clenches his teeth. It was always a trap.

DEAN
Never.

Dean raises the gun. Wolfsbane growls, he CHARGES towards Dean. Wolfsbane TACKLES Dean to the ground.

WOLFSBANE
If you won’t join us, you’re an enemy.

DEAN
That’s what I always was.

Wolfsbane STRIKES Dean with his claws. Dean’s shoulder begins to bleed. Dean squirms in pain.

WOLFSBANE
It is such a shame. We could have used a man like you.

Dean ROLLS away, under Wolfsbane. He stands back up and RUNS towards the fallen pistol. Wolfsbane chases him, hot on his trail. Dean CHARGES towards it, hits the ground, reaches out and GRABS it. He quickly swerves around. Aims. Wolfsbane RUSHES towards him. BAM! The silver bullet shoots out of the gun and hits Wolfsbane in the heart. Blood begins to pour out. Wolfsbane clutches his wound. He looks towards Dean. Swerves and collapses. Dean stands back up. He looks towards the angry ten werewolves crouching above. They CHARGE towards him in a rush of slow motion. Dean fires off rounds. BAM! BAM! BAM! BAM! The bullets soar through the air and hits the werewolves. One WEREWOLF remains. Dean fires. Out of bullets. Dean gulps as he runs off.

EXT. DARK FOREST

Dean rushes through. Hurtling over fallen branches and trees. The werewolf charges towards him, jumping from tree to tree to gain extra speed. It continues to charge towards him. Dean glances behind his back, out of breath. He looks forward. Finally. We see the Chevy Impala parked in a dead end road leading to the forest. Dean rushes towards it. He hits a button and the TRUNK OPENS. Dean glances behind his back. Only seconds before he would become the werewolf’s next victim. He reaches the trunk, grabs the silver bullets and loads the gun. BAM! He fires. The werewolf screams in agony as its body hits the Chevy Impala and crashes to the ground. Dean breathes out and nods. Only one more stop. Dean gets into the Impala and drives off.

Posted by: Dean5339 Feb 3 2006, 08:17 PM
INT. THE FULL MOON NIGHT CLUB- TORTURE CHAMBER

Dominic paces through the dark chamber. Alarms go off. Sounds of gun fire above. The flashing alarms light the chamber red. The gun fire stops. Dominic stays, waiting. Dean enters the room.

DOMINIC
Part of me hoped you would see the light.

DEAN
There is no honor in what you do.

DOMINIC
This life is honorable. The devil refused me. So I gained my own followers. Made my own breed. Over time, Lucifer will eventually see things my way. I’m not just a kid. I’m a man eater, a woman eater.

Dean looks towards Dominic taken aback.

DEAN
Peter Stubbe…

PETER (CONT’D)
I’ve turned everyone’s worst nightmare into reality. Eventually he will join the pack. The mark of the beast.

Dominic glares towards Dean. Angry.

DEAN
It was you, wasn’t it. You’re the first.

DOMINIC
I had hoped that you could have joined us.

JUMP CUT:
EXT. BEDBURG- STUBBE HOME- FLASHBACK

We see YOUNG PETER, a 12 year old, standing next to a fire. He stares towards it. The flames dancing in his glaring eyes.

YOUNG PETER
I offer up my soul to become one with the beast. Lead the world to damnation. Kill. Destroy. Maim. Rape. Massacre. Gain followers, devour the world in it’s evil. Bring about the revelation.

The fire remains, not moving. Young Dominic clenches his teeth.

JUMP CUT:
EXT. DARK WOODS- FLASHBACK

We see a handsome teenage guy, TEENAGE PETER, around 17 years old, running through the woods. Kneeling over a wolf, shredding it. LATER Teenage Peter stares forward. Wearing only the wolf skin girdle. Teenage Peter rushes through the woods.

EXT. BEDBURG TOWN FESTIVAL- FLASHBACK

Teenage Peter stands away from the festival. Towns people gather, talk, and laugh together. Teenage Peter’s eyes wander off until he notices a beautiful teenage girl, she is TEENAGE SARAH. He gulps. Afraid. He approaches her.

TEENAGE PETER
Hey.

Teenage Sarah looks up towards him.

TEENAGE SARAH
Hey.

Teenage Peter extends his hand.

TEENAGE PETER
Peter… Peter Stubbe.

A guy’s hand wraps around Teenage Sarah’s shoulder. His name is MARK. Teenage Peter stares towards them, angry.

MARK
Still trying to contact the devil Pete?

Teenage Peter glares towards him.

MARK
Go, you don’t belong here.

Teenage Peter walks away, angry, a tear falls down his eyes.

EXT. BEDBURG TOWN- STREETS- RAINING/NIGHT- FLASHBACK

Mark walks through the town. Rain falling down over him. We notice Teenage Peter watching him from afar. Wearing only the wolf girdle. His eyes piercing with anger. Mark was all alone. No one for miles. Teenage Peter CHARGES towards him. Mark turns around. Teenage Peter tackles him to the ground. We see through shadows Teenage Peter ripping Mark to shreds. Killing him. Teenage Peter howls towards the full moon above.

FADE TO:
EXT. BEDBURG BURIAL GROUNDS- MORNING- FLASHBACK

Teenage Sarah pays her last respects to Mark. A hand wraps around her shoulder. We pull back to reveal that it is Teenage Peter. They kiss.

EXT. COLONGNE TOWN- AFTERNOON- FLASHBACK

SARAH, 25 years old, walks with ANDREW. Flirting with him. PETER, 26 years old, watches from afar. His heart breaks. There is no such thing as love.

JUMP CUT:
EXT. COLONGNE TOWN- WOODS- FLASHBACK

Andrew, another man and one woman walk through the woods. Talking.

PETER (O.S.)
Andrew…

Andrew glances all around. We fade off as we hear screams.

JUMP CUT:
EXT. COUNTRYSIDE- OLD BARN- AFTERNOON- FLASHBACK

Two little GIRLS watch over their sheep. We hear a growling noise coming from the woods. They run off, frightened. WEREWOLF PETER charges towards them.

JUMP CUT:
INT. STUBBE FAMILY HOME- FLASHBACK

Peter stares down towards his SON. He picks him up.

PETER
Come on, there’s something I want to show you.

JUMP CUT:
EXT. WOODS- FLASHBACK

Peter wears only the wolf girdle. His five year old son looks towards him, curious. Through shadows we see Peter overpower his son. Crack his skull. And devour the contents of his son’s brain.

JUMP CUT:
INT. THE FULL MOON NIGHT CLUB- TORTURE CHAMBER

CLOSE UP of Peter staring forward. Memories flooding through. He turns his attention back towards Dean. He glances towards Dean’s gun. He cracks a grin.

PETER
You seriously think you can kill me. Van Helsing tried. He failed. I doubt you could do
any better… Bones.

DEAN
We’ll see.

Dean loads the gun. Peter grins.

PETER
It’s your funeral.

Peter runs off. Dean walks through the torture chamber looking back and forth. Peter was no where in sight. Dean further wanders in, gun pointed outwards. Searching.

POV. WEREWOLF PETER
We see Dean in front of us.

POV. NORMAL
Dean looks around. Nothing. Growls come from behind him. He stops and looks. Werewolf Peter CHARGES towards Dean!!! Werewolf Peter stares down towards Dean.

WEREWOLF PETER
Good bye. Dean Winchester.

Dean looks around. CLOSE UP Dean’s wound from his encounter with Stan earlier that night.

DEAN
Not yet…

Dean’s eyes blare yellow. Dean screams in agony as he transforms. WEREWOLF DEAN stares towards Werewolf Peter. Werewolf Peter grins.

WEREWOLF PETER
You are now one of us…

WEREWOLF DEAN
Not for long.

The two werewolves CHARGE towards each other. Clawing. Werewolf Dean gains the upper hand, he CLAWS Werewolf Peter. Werewolf Peter steps back. Werewolf Dean CHARGES towards Peter and TACKLES him to the ground. Werewolf Dean grabs werewolf Peter by his head, Werewolf Peter attempts to fight back. He can’t. Werewolf Dean RIPS werewolf Peter’s head off and throws it away.

WEREWOLF DEAN
Good bye.

Werewolf Dean PLUNGES his hand into Werewolf Peter’s chest and RIPS out his heart. Werewolf Peter transforms back into his human form. Werewolf Dean steps back, growls in agony as he reverts back into his human self. Dean looks down towards Peter. It’s done.

Posted by: Dean5339 Feb 3 2006, 08:18 PM
EXT. CHURCH

Dean walks into a church. Makes the sign of a cross.

DEAN
Forgive me father, for I have sinned.

Dean walks towards the holy water. He looks down towards his reflection. The piercing yellow eyes and fangs. A PRIEST walks towards him. Tears roll down his eyes.

PRIEST
You are safe now my son, in the house of the lord.

Dean looks towards him.

DEAN
I need your help father. Cure me.

The priest looks towards Dean sympathetically.

PRIEST
Come.

The priest leads Dean into another room.

FADE TO:
INT. CHURCH- BACK ROOM

Dean stands in the middle of a circle, 9 feet and 4 feet in diameter, lit candles encircle him. Dean watches the priest as he prepares a remedy. The priest walks towards Dean, Dean growls. The priest draws three drops of blood.

PRIEST
It’s alright my son. It’s alright.

Dean looks towards him, pain reflected in his eyes. The priest hands him a goblet of salt water.

PRIEST
Drink.

Dean drinks the salt water. The priest salutes Dean with the sign of the cross.

PRIEST
Agnes… agnes… agnes…

We hear frogs cry out from the remedy. The priest walks over towards it. He picks up the medium sized cauldron and pours the water down upon Dean. We see Dean’s body having physical effects as he is drenched. It was working. The priest smiles.

PRIEST
Foul spirit release this persons' soul, return to the great unknown!

Dean growls out in agony. His eyes pierce yellow and he bares his fangs. Dean transforms.

PRIEST
Foul spirit release this persons' soul, return to the great unknown!

Werewolf Dean lashes out towards the priest. But is unable to get past the magical blockade.

PRIEST
Foul spirit release this persons' soul, return to the great unknown!

Werewolf Dean growls out in agony as he transforms back into Dean. Dean looks down towards the holy water. There was no more reflection of the evil within.

PRIEST
You are free now my son.

Dean looks towards the priest, appreciative.

Posted by: Dean5339 Feb 3 2006, 08:21 PM
INT. STANFORD UNIVERSITY- DEAN’S OFFICE

Sam walks in. The dean of the school, ANTHONY, looks towards him, smiling.

SAM
You wanted to see me sir.

Anthony nods.

ANTHONY
You passed the Law SAT. Best in your class. I just wanted to congratulate you
personally.

Sam nods.

SAM
Thank you sir.

ANTHONY
You have a bright future in front of you Sam, the window of opportunity is open. Don’t pass it up.

SAM
I won’t sir.

FADE TO:
INT. BRAY ROAD APARTMENT COMPLEX- STAN’S ROOM

Dean walks in, he grabs his bags and walks away.

FADE TO:
EXT. CENTENNIAL- ROADS- NIGHT

John drives along the road.

INT. JOHN’S CAR

John picks up his cell phone and dials a number…

DEAN (O.S.)
You have reached Dean Winchester… if it’s an emergency leave a message.

John sighs out.

JOHN
Dean, something is starting to happen, I think it’s serious. I need to try to figure out what’s going on.

The Woman in White appears in the backseat.

WOMAN IN WHITE
Take me home…

John continues to drive.

JOHN
Be very careful Dean, we’re all in danger.

John hangs up.

EXT. CENTENNIAL- ROADS- NIGHT

John continues to drive, fading off into the distance.

EXT. CEMETERY- RAINING/ EVENING

The Chevy Impala is parked outside of the cemetery. We see Dean through the windshield, staring forward.

DEAN (V.O.)
There are aspects of this world that we may never understand, hidden beneath a cloak of darkness.

FADE TO:
INT. STANFORD DORM ROOMS- SAM’S DORM ROOM

Sam stands over the bed, looking down towards Jessica. A tear falls down his eyes.

DEAN (V.O.)
A cloak we create to tell ourselves that everything is alright, that everything will be better. That nothing is lurking in the darkness of the night. Waiting to strike. And take everything we hold dear in this life.

FADE TO:
EXT. CEMETERY- RAINING/ EVENING

Dean looks down towards Elizabeth’s grave, paying his last respects.

DEAN (V.O.)
But evil does exist, there is nothing we can do to hide. Sooner or later, the truth strikes whether you are ready for it or not. My name is Dean Winchester.

Dean walks back towards the Impala.

DEAN (V.O.)
Ever since I was young I knew that we were not alone.

FADE TO:
INT. CENTENNIAL MOTEL- JOHN’S ROOM

John looks in towards his motel room, notes sprawled around. He nods. He was getting closer to the truth. He turns of the lights.

DEAN (V.O.)
My mom was one of the many casualties in the ever raving war between good and evil.

John closes the door and walks away.

FADE TO:
INT. IMPALA

Dean stares forward. Starts the ignition.

DEAN (V.O.)
It is my mission to save people. To ward off the evil that infests this world.

RING… RING… RING… Dean answers his phone.

DEAN
Dean Winchester… slow down… where is this?… I’ll be there right away.

EXT. CEMETERY- RAINING/ NIGHT

The Impala drives off towards New Orleans.

DEAN (V.O.)
It is my job, my life… who I am. A hunter.

THE END

Posted by: Dean5339 Feb 3 2006, 08:56 PM
So, hopefully you guys liked this teleplay. It was a different route for me. I wanted to tell an overall darker story. A perfect lead into the PILOT. Whether I accomplished that or not is up to you. Hope you liked it. Tell me what you think.

This episode used alot of information that I gathered while doing research for the teleplay. The cure used, the ritual of becoming a werewolf, Bray Road and the life of Peter Stubbe. There will be an extra edition of INSIDE THE LEGEND that deals with everything you heard and discovered in this teleplay.



Posted by: Dean5339 Feb 5 2006, 08:00 PM
As I promised before, I have made a special INSIDE THE LEGEND focusing on all the aspects of this teleplay. I usually just put the information on the site, but since there's litterally alot of cool werewolf sites out there I decided to do a "special" on it. So, here it is:

http://www.supernatural.tv/reviews/legends/fullmoon.htm

Posted by: atram Feb 17 2006, 01:06 AM
i loved it!!! loved it loved it. not ashamed, i cried when Elizabeth died great job

Posted by: Dean5339 Mar 15 2013, 04:00 AM
This is now on its way to becoming a feature length movie. Not the exact story, but the overall premise of it. I'm working on it with the son of an academy award winner for special effects. This is just one project lined up out of many that I see taking off within the next couple of years. So those who have read and liked the route this took -- be ready, because the film will be coming your way sometime soon.

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