HI guys, i read sooo many fan fics now i thought it was about time i wrote my own...Please be nice and review and thanks you guys coz all your stories have inspired me... the story will get better, i have plans mwa haha.... here is the first chapter... tell me wot u think btw claire the first bit is for you

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“Is everything ready?”
“Yes, everyone is in place as you requested it, but I’m”
“Don’t question me Tommy .”
“It’s just I don’t want anything to go wrong.”
“I assure you Tommy nothing will; I’ve been planning this for too long, Oh and Tommy .”
“Yeah”
“Yes what?”
“Yes master.”
“That’s better, I do not appreciate insolence Tommy , don’t forget your place, I’m not in the mood for killing anyone today.”
“Sorry John I won’t forget again”
“Do you value your life Tommy ?”
Tommy gasped as a sharp pain exploded in his head, “Forgive me master” he stammered but John had already gone.

Sam groaned and stumbled out of bed, his head was pounding again and he knew from experience that a vision was coming, he put his hand out to the wall to steady himself against the ever predictable wave of dizziness that was brought by his visions.
Sam sucked in a sharp breath, “What in hell?” Sam muttered…

Flash

Sam saw himself enter his and Jesses room, lie down on the bed and close his eyes. Then the vision jumped to the same scene but viewed from outside the window and to Sam’s horror he saw the blood drip from the ceiling onto his forehead, Sam screamed out loud reliving the dreadful moment and trying desperately to pull out of the vision before he saw the worst part. Sam moaned and sank to his knees as he saw the flames rage across the ceiling and himself cowering helplessly on the bed and he knew he would have stayed there if Dean hadn’t of raced in and dragged Sam out as the flames engulfed the room.

The scene flickered and moved away from the window and began quickly down the alleyway behind his apartment, the view jumped around as if Sam was seeing through someone else eyes. What made it worse was the whole vision was devoid of sound, as if someone had pressed the mute button on the remote, Sam could hear his own breathing increase as he relived the worse day of his life.
The vision flickered again and Sam saw a man with black hair and black coat race down the alley dodging trash cans and heading for the back streets, he rounded the corner and disappeared into a black mist.

“Sam, Sammy, come on man open your eyes.”
Sam groaned and shook his head trying to shake off the disturbing vision. He pulled himself upright and leant heavily against the wall, breathing hard.
“Woah Sam, you okay buddy? You wanna sit down? Coz you know if you fall over I aint picking your heavy ass up.” Dean said trying to lighten the moment but concern evident in his voice.
Sam nodded and let Dean lead him over to his bed, he was still trying to understand what he’d seen, why had he seen Jess’s death? Anyway it was in the past and he only had visions of the future, his head was spinning with unanswered questions, who was the man in his vision and who were they running from, and were they the ones behind Jess’s death?

Sam didn’t know the answers, but he planned to find out…


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YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I LIKE LIL SIS BUT QUIT YELLING AT TOMMY LMAO KEEP IT UP




















LUV YA LORRIE OH DUST SAYS HEY SEXY THING LMAO

Great start and what a cool idea that Sam is outside the window watching Sam.


LOVE IT

Pressure now to update



Steffs

lol well i hav written the next chapter already so its kk i will wait till people threaten me to update lol


x faye x
lol signed in as bugs again

Ok threats you want.


Oi You freak Post Now or i wil (Mumbles threat in ear) snhehsnineh OK


Steffs (OOO what a give away)

haha steff u make me laugh
well i will wait till more than just u and lorrie hav read it

oh threatening well I am willing to start threatening if you do not update soon!!!

TOMMY IS IN A STORY AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Tommy is speechless and is very honoured.......so is Claire!!!!!!!!

lol guys... il update 2nite

OK I HEARD WHAT UR DOING TO MY KID LMAO THERES A THREAT FOR YA LMAO

















LUV YA LORRIE

so where's this update we were promised...I think I do need to start threatening!

Me>>>> <<<<<you

that was only a mild threat, but if you don't update there will be trouble

yes.....mild indeed

ok ok, the threats worked i will post but that will be it for a while coz this is all ive written haha lorrie i couldnt resist...

Sam and Dean sat in a smoky booth in a crowded diner. The chatter and noise was making Sam’s head pound and he silently cursed Dean for making him go out to eat.

Sam hadn’t explained the vision to Dean, as he didn’t really understand it himself, he was still shaken after seeing Jess’s death again after so long, he knew one thing, he never wanted to see that again. Sam wondered how he would discover who the man in the alley was, although it was a long time ago if there had been a supernatural presence in the alley Sam knew it would leave residues that the EMF should pick up, he planned to take a look in the alley as soon as Dean let him out of his sight.

Sam’s plans were interrupted as Dean’s phone rang. Dean picked up, “Hello”
“Dean its me, I…”
“Dad is that you?”
“Dean I need you to do something for me”
“Anything Dad”
“I need you to investigate something, there’s been a string of disappearances in Ohio, I need you to see if you can dig anything up.”
“Yes sir”
“Bye son” said John and he put the phone down.

Sam looked and Dean’s shocked face. “Dad?” he guessed
Dean nodded, “He wants us to go to Ohio to investigate some disappearances.”
“We don’t have to do what he says Dean, just don’t go” replied Sam simply
“But what if there are people in danger Sammy, we can’t just let them die.”
“I know” sighed Sam “Its just I hate taking orders from Dad.”
Sam got out his laptop and searched the FBI missing persons database, a newspaper clipping flashed up, along with a list of names of the most recent disappearances. Sam glanced down the names: Dustin age 17
Ashley aged 20
Jaye aged 15
Nothing seemed to connect the victims except they were of a similar age and lived in the same area. Sam sighed and moved on to the newspaper report, he skimmed through it with practiced ease, all the victims had disappeared at night and a trail of blood had been found leading up to a big standing stone at the edge of the forest, apart from the blood no evidence had been found. Sam closed the screen and pushed the laptop away, “There’s not much to go on Dean, 3 kids disappeared at night, left a trail of blood by a big rock and never seen again” Sam chuckled, he knew it wasn’t funny but he wasn’t in the mood for hunting, he just wanted to find out who the man was.

Dean decided they should check it out because it sounded like their kind of gig but Sam seemed reluctant to go. “Lets go Sammy boy, get in.” Dean said signalling the impala with his head.
Sam took a deep breath, “Dean, look man, there’s something I need to check out back in Kansas,” he paused waiting for Dean’s outburst but none came so he continued, “Ermm, well maybe I could go back to Lawrence whilst you check out those disappearances in Ohio,” Sam crosses his fingers hoping Dean would agree, but no such luck. “No way Sammy, No way am I letting you go off on your own to Lawrence, especially when you’ve had one of your visions, what if you have another one and there’s no one around to help you?”
“Look Dean I’ll be fine, I’m 23, you don’t need to be with me all the time, I can look after myself”
“What, like when you looked after you and Jess?” Dean knew that was uncalled for but he was angry that Sam wanted to go off on his own.
Sam paused, the strain showed on his face as he struggled to suppress his anger “Don’t you talk about her Dean, Don’t you dare.” a single tear rolled down Sam’s face as he turned away and picked up his bag.
“Sammy” Dean called into the night, but Sam had gone…


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Brilliant and get writing pronto so you can update soon

I really like this story so far.

Keep going.


Update now please.




Linda