And here we go...

Writhe Part One


Writhe Part Two


Writhe Part Three


Writhe Part Four

EVIL! :stir i thought it was up! :lol:

ETA: okay you just put it up so sorry.... :rolleyes:

WOW!!!
It sounds like a really interesting case! kind of like a Black Widow!
Can't wait until tomorrow!

You've got my attention! And now you're making me wait. I should just plan to read these at the end of the weak so the anticipation isn't torturing me. :bang

Aah, anticipation's half the fun... But I'm only saying that because I've read the next part already * laughs evilly *.
:fire

Yeah me too I can't wait for tomorrow's part !! i can't wait to know what's the matter with dean, 'cause I don't believe in that poisoning story.... too easy for the winchester boys :D

see you tomorrow for part two !

:blush : in memory of Dean being deasy !!

Oh that's cruel! How could you tell me that!? Oh, why I 'aughta! :rant

It's okay though, because tomorrow. Tomorrow will be the next page. :P


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Great first part. I'm wondering about Dean's illness and that girl Ashley, I don't trust her. Can't wait for tomorrow :)

:o

hmmm, interesting...very interesting indeed....

*remembers happier days when she could watch the whole episode and not be left hanging for a whole day :bang* (But then again, it gives me something to look forward to for the rest of the week....)

it's great so far, keep up the good work.

The minute i read the hot and steamy ghost/demon of the week part I knew Dean is going to be involved .. and then reading the end of this part , I suspect that there's more to Ashly than meets the eye , and Dean liking her is giving me the chils...

but interesting idea for a story ;)

This reminds me of a Charmed ep or maybe it is just me
well anywho
I like it alot
I can't wait for more

Great Episode! So get the feeling this is not going to go well for Dean. Can't wait until tomorrow. :unsure:

Its a succubus!! Right? Right? And Ashley is her human form or doppleganger. This waiting is torture! giggle

kepp up the good work
Amy

yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyy cheer :cheer that was awsome cant wait for the second page i love it when people tell the stories with one of the brothers looking after eachother awsome fanfic xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Ashly got my spidey senses going......

as always - excellent start.

Here we go, gang...


Writhe Part Two

RE: Part two

I've got the feeling that Dean is in big trouble.

I got a baaaaaaaad feeling about this....

hehe, can't wait til tomorrow.

SAMMM Go save your brother! hehe Poor Dean, i think he's in trouble!

I so want to be Ashly right now LOL ...

at least only in this part .. i'm sure in the next part i'm gonna hate her cause i have a hunch that she's bad news ..

*sigh* :cloud9

Great part!!!
Dean does seem to be in BIG trouble!!
Can't wait until the next part!

Poor Dean! Thank goodness he wasn't kissing her when he vomited. Trust me not a very good thing. Not that I would know. :D

Okay Dean's in trouble - not good ! Can't wait until the next episode.

I really wish I'd not read that while I was eating............
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

I read that too, I couldn't think of anything to say. Did you know that most people who get CPR vomit in their rescuers mouth? Makes you think twice. :o :blink:

I guess I need to find another fetish to inflict on Dean.

Bouh !! where's part 3 !!! I can't wait any longer !! It should be online at this time, no ?

Anyway, well done for this story ! I like it ! Except for the vomit part 'cause I'm pregnant since one month and I am in that phase of feeling sick all the time, so Dean reminds me those bad times !!

Hi guys, sorry I'm a lil' late. Car trouble! UGH...

Anyhow, on with the show...

Writhe Part Three

Kitts you need to get that wheelcover! It'll protect you.

It's being made right now lol. Had confirmation of order today, and delivery date is expected to be Sept 28th...how bizarre...

Not Bizarre, FATE! B)

very good episode! can't wait for part 3 and 4

Great part!!
I can't wait to see how the guys finally figure out who Elena really is!
I am not so sure if Ashley fits into the whole sucking soul scheme, but I enjoy that there are clues that point out that she might be more than she seems!

This was the best part yet! Now I realllllly can't wait until it's concluded tomorrow! *yay!*

If Dean isn't careful he's going to be the next victim of that snake woman. Great story so far, can't wait for the final part.

Great episode. Poor Dean he really likes Ashley. Looking forward to the final part.

Final part hehehe


Writhe Part Four

Kitts - you turned Dean / Jason / Jensen's shirt from white to black... That's Demon Persil, right?
:D

Hey iris, this is Terry, Silver4456 is my name on here, I have no idea why I used that. I changed the color of Dean's clothes because Kitts was nice enough to let me before it posted. Is she terrific or what? Anal I know, but it made me happy. Love that shot of him on the floor.

By the way, as if I didn't know, who added "Keeper of the barf bags" to my name?

a great ending to an exciting episode!