Title: Golgotha
Description: Episode Seven
kittsbud - August 22, 2006 05:09 PM (GMT)
xxsupernaturalfanx3 - August 22, 2006 06:15 PM (GMT)
aww poor sammy, he seems to always be attracted to ghost and spirits. I wonder what the kid wants. Great chapter, cant wait for tomarrow. :D
aurorasky - August 22, 2006 06:24 PM (GMT)
WOW!!
Very powerful start!!
What does the letter from the priest and the kid have to do with eachother?
What is the kid doing to Sam?!
Can't until tomorrow!!!!!!!!!!
samjacklover - August 22, 2006 06:27 PM (GMT)
:cheer
YEAH, IT'S UP, YEAH, IT' S UP!!!
GREAT START GUYS!!!!!
:cheer
Poor Sammy! Just can't get a break can he????????? :evil
witchy - August 22, 2006 06:51 PM (GMT)
I couldn't wait any longer to read the beginning of that seventh episode ! And now, I can't wait to be tomorrow !! :angry:
Sam is in a really bad shape, hope he will be fine soon (but not too soon :P )
NaturallySuper - August 22, 2006 09:32 PM (GMT)
Loved it as always Tuesdays just became bearable.
Just loved the nurse but the name Valerie Harper kills me
Just waiting for the rest of the Hogan clan to venture in lmao
Great job Kitts, really, all kidding aside.
You guys move me lmao
LazyCalm - August 22, 2006 10:00 PM (GMT)
Very nice
Interesting title "Golgotha", the name of the place where Christ was crucified on the cross, the Place of the Skull also translates in English to Calvary I think
Interesting
I'm going to have to really get into these stories once our Virtual Season is finished but so far, from what I've read, they're excellent
Great job guys
Looking forward to the next installment
burstynout - August 22, 2006 10:42 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (LazyCalm @ Aug 22 2006, 10:00 PM) |
Very nice
Interesting title "Golgotha", the name of the place where Christ was crucified on the cross, the Place of the Skull also translates in English to Calvary I think
Interesting
I'm going to have to really get into these stories once our Virtual Season is finished but so far, from what I've read, they're excellent
Great job guys
Looking forward to the next installment |
Hey, kudos for saying Calvary as opposed to cavalry, cuz that's one of my pet peeves. It's insane how many peeps use those words interchangeably.
And, uh, as far as getting into these stories once your VS is done. . .Is a VS ever done? :rolleyes: Haha. I get the distinct feeling these things take on lives of their own. ;)
HT
LazyCalm - August 22, 2006 11:02 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (burstynout @ Aug 22 2006, 11:42 PM) |
| QUOTE (LazyCalm @ Aug 22 2006, 10:00 PM) | Very nice
Interesting title "Golgotha", the name of the place where Christ was crucified on the cross, the Place of the Skull also translates in English to Calvary I think
Interesting
I'm going to have to really get into these stories once our Virtual Season is finished but so far, from what I've read, they're excellent
Great job guys
Looking forward to the next installment |
Hey, kudos for saying Calvary as opposed to cavalry, cuz that's one of my pet peeves. It's insane how many peeps use those words interchangeably.
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Yeah I can imagine. Being English I usually try to keep a close eye on my spelling, making sure it's always right. However the odd mistake will find it's way in heare and thyere (especially when typing at speed) ;)
But I've researching the Crucifixion for my own reasons, which is why I knew about Golgotha
| QUOTE |
And, uh, as far as getting into these stories once your VS is done. . .Is a VS every done? :rolleyes: Haha. I get the distinct feeling these things take on lives of their own. ;)
HT |
Yeah good point. The Virtual Seasons are really an ongoing thing but given the quality of the stories being produced the hours we're all putting into them is proving to be more than a worthy sacrifice :)
burstynout - August 22, 2006 11:45 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE |
Yeah good point. The Virtual Seasons are really an ongoing thing but given the quality of the stories being produced the hours we're all putting into them is proving to be more than a worthy sacrifice
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So, true. I'm tickled to be doing this, and it's good to know y'all are having as much fun on your side of the virtual fence.
:hi5
HT
teneniel2 - August 22, 2006 11:52 PM (GMT)
:bang
I tried to fight the urge with every ounce of my being but I failed. Have you ever tried to fight an addiction? The monkey on your back calls to you. It beckons you to do something you want to do but know you shouldn't. There was a war this evening and I failed this particular battle. :cry
What the heck am I talking about??? The Tuesday release of another episode of the Virtual Season!!! That's what! :angry:
I wanted to wait until Wednesday when there would be two chapters to read. I made up my mind at work today that I would try to find something else to occupy my mind instead of a VS eppy. <_<
Who do I blame for this disaster? Hmmm??? The extremely talented writers, of course! Once again another great and intriguing chapter has appeared and I lost the overwhelming urge to log on, go to the forum section and search for Golgotha.
I loved the threat to the Impala. Only wish we could have seen this on TV. What a low blow but oh-so-perfect! Many, many thanks for continuing the Virtual Season with Golgotha! You did a great job and I can't wait until the next chapter tomorrow.
*eh, screw it. no point in fighting it. gonna lose the battle anyway...* ;)
navy21 - August 23, 2006 01:14 AM (GMT)
When is part two going to be added!!!!!
alwaysateen - August 23, 2006 02:15 AM (GMT)
Part two will be add tomorrow, part three on thursday and the final part on friday. Always like that!
Great first part!
I like that you talk about Dean's time in the hospital.
For him to stay still for 4 weeks! Almost impossible!
Poor Snuggle the bear, don't hurt him!
See you guys tomorrow!
supernaturalfan - August 23, 2006 03:29 AM (GMT)
a mann,i am on the edge of my seat.cant wait for part 2,the people that write these stories are very very talented.
daisymay - August 23, 2006 08:20 AM (GMT)
Oooohhh excellent stuff. :cheer Poor Sammy in trouble again...and three cheers for that. I do love seeing Sammy all hurting and angsty. :blush :wub: :ph43r:
jadams04 - August 23, 2006 11:39 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (daisymay @ Aug 23 2006, 08:20 AM) |
| Oooohhh excellent stuff. :cheer Poor Sammy in trouble again...and three cheers for that. I do love seeing Sammy all hurting and angsty. :blush :wub: :ph43r: |
ditto! :lol:
lmao!
moonie442001 - August 23, 2006 02:00 PM (GMT)
A great beginning of the 7th Episode!!
However... there were some errors I noticed...
- "we’re" that needs to be "were" (And what were you doing with that bartender?)
- "ghost’s" that needs to be "ghosts"
Of course I can understand when you're typing so fast, eager to get the story on the site. It wasn't bothering me, I was just pointing it out.
Can't wait for part 2!
~Jan~
Lozzie - August 23, 2006 02:45 PM (GMT)
Ahh won't they ever give Sammy a break.
Love the threat to the Impala, aww poor Dean couldn't live without his baby :car
Keep em' comin
:cheer
Supernaturally Obsessed - August 23, 2006 03:30 PM (GMT)
OMG! Part Two! Where's Part Two!?
samjacklover - August 23, 2006 04:38 PM (GMT)
:o
I just tried to get into the site and it says it's not there!! :cry
Is the site down????????? ARGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :unsure: :( :blink:
:thud
Demonic22 - August 23, 2006 04:46 PM (GMT)
Hey i was just wondering what time u post each part of the episode
im in the uk and sometimes when i go on in the afternoon it hasn't been posted yet!!!
it would be gd to no so i dont log on and get all excited and then find i have to wait for longer!
these episodes are so gd the guys who write it are brilliant! :cheer
xxx
kittsbud - August 23, 2006 04:56 PM (GMT)
Firstly, a big thank you to everyone who is reading this! Comments really are appreciated, thanks :)
For those of you who've asked about posting times, I'm a UK'er and when I'm at work I usually post around 6.30pm my time when I get home.
Tonight, the VS server is unfortunately down. *sighs* Fear not, however, if they haven't gotten us back up in an hour or so I'll rehost parts one and two untill the server is repaired so everyone can still get their fix.
Sorry for the delay, guys, but I'll do my best to get you the episode tonight. :)
Dawn
samjacklover - August 23, 2006 05:07 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (kittsbud @ Aug 23 2006, 11:56 AM) |
Firstly, a big thank you to everyone who is reading this! Comments really are appreciated, thanks :)
For those of you who've asked about posting times, I'm a UK'er and when I'm at work I usually post around 6.30pm my time when I get home.
Tonight, the VS server is unfortunately down. *sighs* Fear not, however, if they haven't gotten us back up in an hour or so I'll rehost parts one and two untill the server is repaired so everyone can still get their fix.
Sorry for the delay, guys, but I'll do my best to get you the episode tonight. :)
Dawn |
:cry
NO problem Dawn, we totally understand!!!
Would you be able to post it to the forum instead like when you were on vacation???
I really think you guys are the best! :bow
Love the stories!
Hope to see chapter 2 soon!!!
kittsbud - August 23, 2006 06:07 PM (GMT)
OKay, guys, we're up and running!
Golgotha Part Two
samjacklover - August 23, 2006 06:33 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (kittsbud @ Aug 23 2006, 01:07 PM) |
OKay, guys, we're up and running!
Golgotha Part Two |
:cheer
YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THANKS! YOU ARE THE BEST!!!! :bow
You guys have us all hooked you know that don't you??????
:evil
WE ARE POSSESSED!!!! :evil :fire
Supernaturally Obsessed - August 23, 2006 08:50 PM (GMT)
Ugh, poor Sammy!
I hope they figure this out soon!
daisymay - August 23, 2006 09:06 PM (GMT)
Oh crap!! Aaagghhh!!! Sammyyyyy!!!! Noooooo!!!!!!! :o :o *Bites fingernails*
Oh I love this. :cheer Supreme Sammy hurt/angst, another 'special' kid connecting to Sam, mega worried/protective Dean. Just perfect. :clap :clap
blueberry - August 23, 2006 10:16 PM (GMT)
No Sammy, dont go off with that boy :o (though please do as it will lead to more angst for you no doubt :evil )
Really enjoying this story, loving all the Sammy mental and physical torment (does that make me sound bad :unsure: )
Also I love the title "Golgotha" (the place of the Skull). Got me intrigued before I read it.
Kaisa - August 23, 2006 10:30 PM (GMT)
awesome first two parts. ;-)
Question: how long are the episodes? (Like how many words long are they?) Just wondering... (Strange, I know.)
can not wait until tomorrow. (Even though I'm more of a Dean!fan, I like Sammy too. And it's hard not to like an episode when it's not just any episode, but a VS episode! :-P)
kittsbud - August 23, 2006 10:46 PM (GMT)
Hiya
I don't know about word count, but they usually range from about 40 to 60 'Word' pages. Usually averaging somewhere in between. Golgotha is 55 pages. :)
And would you believe, I'm a Dean gal? Golgotha just happened lol! I'm going to make up for it later in the season I promise muhahahahaha :evil
Thanks everyone. I'm glad you're enjoying!
Dawn :)
aurorasky - August 24, 2006 04:57 AM (GMT)
WOW!!!
Excellent part!!
I like that the boys are meeting more 'chosen' ones!
Can't wait until tonight!
nikki03273 - August 24, 2006 05:12 PM (GMT)
wow great second part! i hope sammy will be okay. i can't wait until tonight to see what happens next! :lol:
kittsbud - August 24, 2006 05:48 PM (GMT)
Hi, guys!
If I've done my job correctly, the next part should hold a surprise lol! If not, you can kick my butt. ;)
Hope ya'll enjoy!
Golgotha Part Three
Supernaturally Obsessed - August 24, 2006 05:51 PM (GMT)
It's not working for me! :bang :rant
kittsbud - August 24, 2006 06:09 PM (GMT)
OKay....our host is down yet again, which is actually beginning to get very annoying...
For now I've rehosted the first three parts of the story so you can have your fix!
Part 1Part 2Part 3Sorry....
witchy - August 24, 2006 06:10 PM (GMT)
[QUOTE] it doesn't work at home neither !! can you post it here ?
Supernaturally Obsessed - August 24, 2006 06:15 PM (GMT)
mich0203 - August 24, 2006 08:46 PM (GMT)
hahahahahah :lol: --using a picture of Sean Connery for the old man in the grave yard!! Now all my hunky babes are here!! Great story, can't wait for the conclusion.
Kaisa - August 24, 2006 10:01 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (kittsbud @ Aug 23 2006, 10:46 PM) |
Hiya
I don't know about word count, but they usually range from about 40 to 60 'Word' pages. Usually averaging somewhere in between. Golgotha is 55 pages. :)
And would you believe, I'm a Dean gal? Golgotha just happened lol! I'm going to make up for it later in the season I promise muhahahahaha :evil
Thanks everyone. I'm glad you're enjoying!
Dawn :) |
about the legnth, do you use the norm font/point type? (Times, 12 point type?) Okay, I'm sounding like a geek now <_<
You're a Dean!fan too? That's awesome! But even when I'm writing big Dean stuff, sometimes Sammy moments pop out too. hehe :D
"I'm going to make up for it later in the season I promise muhahahahaha :evil "
YAY!! :evil
anyway, on the episode....
Dean, upon seeing the old man in the graveyard: "Hey you! Aren't you James Bond?!?"
what was with that dude, anyway? :huh: Hmmm.... Interesting.......
Oh, so I was thinkin' about this the other day... When are we gonna meet up with Johnny again? It seems like it's been so long since we've seen him! Wait, don't tell me exactly when, just tell me if it's soon! :)
Can't wait 'til tomorrow! :cloud9
kittsbud - August 24, 2006 10:16 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE |
| about the legnth, do you use the norm font/point type? (Times, 12 point type?) Okay, I'm sounding like a geek now |
I don't know about the rest of the crew, but yes, I use Times New Roman 12 point. Hope that helps!
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| You're a Dean!fan too? That's awesome! But even when I'm writing big Dean stuff, sometimes Sammy moments pop out too. hehe |
Yeah, I felt Sam needed his fair share, so Golgotha kind of happened. Then I felt I had cheated Dean, and something else happened. :evil That something won't appear in the season till much later, because we have major mid season arc episodes to come first, but it should be fun, espeically for me to write muhahahaha....
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| Oh, so I was thinkin' about this the other day... When are we gonna meet up with Johnny again? It seems like it's been so long since we've seen him! Wait, don't tell me exactly when, just tell me if it's soon! |
Daddy Winch? Hmmn...yeah, you'll be seeing Daddy Winch. Soon? Well, that depends on your idea of soon lol. If I blab too much my co-writers might lynch me and then...well, who knows what might happen lol! ;)
Thanks for the feedback!
Dawn :)