Title: No Second Chances
Description: Season Four Episode Thirteen
kittsbud - September 7, 2010 03:04 PM (GMT)
Time for this week's new episode, folks! :) No Second Chances Part One
irismay42 - September 7, 2010 05:13 PM (GMT)
We finally get the boys to England! And in a Corsa! Who-hooo! (I'd pay real money to see those two try and fit into a car that size!)
tngmd - September 8, 2010 04:34 AM (GMT)
I love that the boys are across the pond!! Great start! Although Dean's in peril, getting pulled away somehow/where......I still had to smile at the "To infinity and beyond"......talk about Dean getting "Buzz'd" LOL
By the way.....the "comments" link at the end of chapter 1 took me back to the Refraction comments, in Nov.09. I found my way here.
kittsbud - September 8, 2010 02:55 PM (GMT)
I'm having some real issues with these pages! They're ridiculously longer than needed and no matter how I alter the code, they stay that way! Apologies for the weirdness of it...
But anyway, here is the second part... No Second Chances Part Two
irismay42 - September 8, 2010 05:35 PM (GMT)
|QUOTE (kittsbud @ Sep 8 2010, 02:55 PM)|
| I'm having some real issues with these pages! They're ridiculously longer than needed |
Are you saying I write too much?? I don't really think 67 pages for an outline is excessive, do you...?? :lol:
kittsbud - September 8, 2010 06:05 PM (GMT)
Not at all. It's not your outline, it's my coding hehehe! :P I need my Dreamweaver, my brain isn't working.
Oh, wait, neither is my Dreamweaver...
OKay, folks, writers mad moment over with. You can resume the story now hehehe. ;)
Oceane - September 9, 2010 02:20 AM (GMT)
Gripping first two parts. So an intriguing gig.
Talk about cliffhanger, two for the price of one, what's going to happen to Sam and Dean :o
Kittsbud, you've me at the edge of seat, I'm waiting for your next shot.
tngmd - September 9, 2010 03:28 AM (GMT)
Whew! Doozy of a chapter! I think I was holding my breath while reading both of the cliffhanger parts! :blush
Lily_Kat_89 - September 9, 2010 08:43 AM (GMT)
|QUOTE (tngmd @ Sep 8 2010, 07:28 PM)|
| Whew! Doozy of a chapter! I think I was holding my breath while reading both of the cliffhanger parts! :blush |
I know! Me too! What with Dean plummeting back down to earth, and Sam choking to death, I'm going crazy over here! :jacket Lol! Very good episode so far, but now I must have part 3.
kittsbud - September 9, 2010 04:12 PM (GMT)
Glad you're enjoying folks!
And here is part three to give you another um...cliffhanger hehehehe :evil No Second Chances Part Three
tngmd - September 10, 2010 04:32 AM (GMT)
UhOh!! I fear I may know who this is! :hide
Another deadly cliffie........it's so hard to wait for another chapter!!
(BTW....link went to "Refraction", again)
Lily_Kat_89 - September 10, 2010 08:04 AM (GMT)
Oh crap...I got a bad feeling about this...I have a horrible feeling I know who it is...I'm praying I'm wrong though. *gnaws lip* :unsure:
Oceane - September 10, 2010 11:13 AM (GMT)
I've a little idea who it is and if I'm right, Dean and Sam're in big trouble :unsure:
kittsbud - September 10, 2010 12:50 PM (GMT)
Time to find out if you guys are right! :evil No Second Chances part Four
tngmd - September 11, 2010 05:27 AM (GMT)
Great story! I'm glad the Scot turned out to be a decent guy. And no, I didn't guess the baddie, but she was a big one, huh! With a hellhound and all! :fire Good job, Dawn!!
Lily_Kat_89 - September 11, 2010 07:31 AM (GMT)
Whew! I'm soooo glad I was wrong about the bad guy this time around. I was terrified, (and I'm sure I'm not the only one to think this) that Mia might've come back somehow. *shudder*
But moving on, great episode! Very well done! :clap
irismay42 - September 11, 2010 11:23 AM (GMT)
|QUOTE (Lily_Kat_89 @ Sep 11 2010, 07:31 AM)|
| I was terrified, (and I'm sure I'm not the only one to think this) that Mia might've come back somehow. *shudder* |
I still have nightmares about that too! ;)
kittsbud - September 11, 2010 04:58 PM (GMT)
Nah, I wouldn't make ya'll suffer Mia again ;)
Thanks for the comments everyone. After a really bad week, they've really cheered me up :)
Oceane - September 11, 2010 05:38 PM (GMT)
I was wrong, I thought about Lucifer himself but not the old lady :)
Dean and Sam're realizing that they open gates when they created the paradox, it's an impossible task to close all of them. Billy was a great help to Dean and Sam. Lot of sadness and guilt from Billy during his conversation with Dean, I feel for him.
That was a terrific story start to end, Kittsbud, you did an amazing work with this one, thank you :cheer
justannanow - September 12, 2010 09:58 PM (GMT)
I really enjoyed this story although I didn't think I would care for them being in England. But it was fun to imagine Dean in a compact car, driving on the opposite side of the road.
My only problem is that I'm unclear just what paradox was created at Stull. I know they encountered a variety of alternate realities but I don't understand just what paradox was created.
LillyB - October 25, 2010 11:15 PM (GMT)
Great job on the story! i really enjoyed reading it! the image of dean in uniform fighting in WWII was neat...and i love how everything comes back to Stull. it's really interesting where you guys are taking the stories. i can't wait to read more!