Title: 4.01 "A New Face" Part 1
Description: Alternate 4x01
Jersey - May 7, 2009 10:55 PM (GMT)
Hey everyone!! :wave
I have a few questions first.
I can put a link to the original site that it's on, right? Then it's in perfect format and anyone can download it too, if you want in PDF.
Is there a center button for posting here? I'd like to center dialouge if there is.
How do I change the font here? It won't let me change it to Courier.
Is this the right place to post? I saw Virtual Seasons as an option. I plan on writing a whole season, so could someone tell me, if it's OK here? Thanx. :D
So, yeah, just thought I'd share some of my writing with you all.
Hope you all like it!!!!
Please comment, either good or bad, it will help me get better. :D
Jersey - May 7, 2009 11:01 PM (GMT)
OK, so this is the link.Script link.
I'm also going to post it here too, of course, but if anyone wants to download it or whatever.
I wrote this write after the Season 3 finale in May just as a writing exercise. Then it wasn't for a few months later, that I thought of writing more. The one thing is, the script on the link is SLIGHTLY different than what I will be posting.
It's only different because I decided to go another way with the story for later episodes. So there's like one or two scenes that are in the link that I won't be posting. Sorry, if it's kind of confusing, the site that it's uploaded on doesn't let you edit. :bang
Jersey - May 7, 2009 11:03 PM (GMT)
Episode #401 "A New Face" Part 1
Based on characters created by
WGA Registered: 1293073
Jersey - May 7, 2009 11:08 PM (GMT)
Supernatural 4.1 ďA New FaceĒ Part 1
Dean making the deal.
Bela getting sent to hell.
Ruby telling Sam to use his powers.
Dean taking the knife.
Ruby turning into Lilith.
Dean being attacked and dying.
Jersey - May 7, 2009 11:10 PM (GMT)
SUPER: 4 Months Later
Dean is in hell. There is fire around him. He is on the
ground moaning in pain. He has burns on his face. He is in
pure agony. He can hear the SCREAMS of the other people there
and the LAUGHS of the DEMONS.
The fire breaks and he sees water! He crawls on his stomach
towards it barely lifting his head. Heís almost there!
Mirage! It was all just a mirage. There is no water, just hot
Dean SLAMS his hand down.
When am I gonna stop falling for
We see the shadow of him. A shadow of a demon with wings and
horns. It opens its mouth and engulfs all of Deanís shadow.
END OF ACT ONE
dmartins - May 7, 2009 11:10 PM (GMT)
Jersey - May 7, 2009 11:11 PM (GMT)
INT. BAR - NIGHT
It is a dive. The kind Sam and Dean often frequent. There is
a jukebox at the back of the bar playing classic rock. There
is a pool table, and dart boards. The bar is not very
crowded. There is only one booth occupied.
Sam is at it. Shots empty and full are in front of him.
(tears in his eyes; to
Four months to the day.
Sam takes a shot and SLAMS the glass down on the table.
Heís never coming back.
Sam takes another shot.
Sam knocks another back.
A shadow appears over in front of the booth. Itís Bobby.
Sam, you have to stop this.
Sam goes to take another shot. Bobby stops him by holding
onto his wrist. He sits across from Sam.
The drinking, boy. The walking
around in a daze. The staying up
until 4 am and sleeping until 2 in
the afternoon. Do you really think
this is what Dean would want?
Dean is dead. Alright? Dead! Heís
never coming back. We looked Bobby
and thereís no way to bring him
back. There is no spell, no little
trick, nothing to bring someone
back from Hell.
Listen, boy, you know as well as I
do that the only possible shot is
to kill Lilith.
Yeah, like thatís gonna happen. We
been trying to find her for the
past four months and guess what,
Sheís in hiding because sheís
afraid of you.
Jersey - May 7, 2009 11:12 PM (GMT)
|QUOTE (dmartins @ May 7 2009, 11:10 PM)|
| Is it the "4.1 9-23-08"? |
If it's the link, then yes.
Jersey - May 7, 2009 11:20 PM (GMT)
She is. She knows your powers. She
wasnít even able to control you in
that house. I think itís time that
you let your powers find her.
Look Bobby, just because I can see
things before they happen, doesnít
mean I can find a demon in hiding.
Besides, Dean wouldnít want me to.
Where Dean is, I donít think he
would mind you baking a pie for
Satan himself if it would get him
out of there.
Sam looks disgusted and takes another shot.
(getting angry; protective
Donít you dare talk about Dean like
that. Heís a fighter. Right now
heís probably thinking of a way to
get himself out.
Bobby just looks at him speechless for a second like he canít
believe what he is hearing.
ĎThinking of a way to get himself
Boy, Dean is in Hell, not county
jail. The only thing on his mind is
the pain. Not you, not me, not
finding a way out.
Sam doesnít want to hear this. He leans back in the booth
trying to escape the words.
dmartins - May 8, 2009 03:25 AM (GMT)
Jersey - May 8, 2009 03:54 AM (GMT)
|QUOTE (dmartins @ May 8 2009, 03:25 AM)|
| Is there 4.06 and more? |
Right now, I'm only up to 4.7.
Next Thurs. 4.8 will be up though. :D
Jersey - May 8, 2009 03:55 AM (GMT)
The only thing Dean can concentrate on is his skin searing off.
Sam SLAMS his hand on the table loudly. One of the shots spills over. Some of the bar patrons turn from there stools and look for a second, hoping there will be a fight. After a second and seeing that there will be no fight they turn back around.
Shut up, Bobby! I donít need to hear this!
(leans in; strongly)
Yes, you do. You have to get this through your thick skull. You need to step up and save Dean. He canít save himself. You need to do it. OK? He needs you Sam and what are you doing? Drinking and feeling sorry for yourself?
Bobby looks disgusted.
Bobbyís words start to sink in.
Thatís great. Really great. Iíll tell you one thing; if this was reversed, Dean would be working like a manic bi-polar to save you. He wouldnít be wasting his life and making you suffer more. Heíd be doing everything, and I mean everything.
You mean my powers?
Jersey - May 8, 2009 03:56 AM (GMT)
Bobby takes a sip of his drink. Sam looks at the table thinking for a moment. He takes another shot and looks Bobby straight in the eye.
Iím ready. Letís do it.
Not now boy. When I get back.
EXT. BAR - MOMENTS LATER
Sam and Bobby exit the bar. They start walking in the parking lot towards Deanís car. Sam is drunk and he trips walking off the curb onto the parking lot. Bobby steadies him and they start walking again. Sam keeps tripping.
Good thing Iím driving.
They get to the Impala. Bobby opens the passenger door for Sam. Sam slumps inside. Bobby shuts the door and goes over to the driverís side. He gets in the turns the car on.
The engine REVS.
dmartins - May 8, 2009 03:42 PM (GMT)
I can't find the link 4.06 and 4.7! Could you help me?
Jersey - May 8, 2009 08:58 PM (GMT)
|QUOTE (dmartins @ May 8 2009, 03:42 PM)|
| I can't find the link 4.06 and 4.7! Could you help me? |
Jersey - May 8, 2009 09:00 PM (GMT)
INT. BOBBYíS HOUSE - MORNING
There is very loud BANGING at the front door. The banging continues for a few seconds before Sam opens his eyes and looks blurrily at the clock on the night stand. It reads 10:07
OUT OF SAMíS POV
Sam is in bed sleeping it off. He is sprawled out on his stomach in the same clothes that he was wearing at the bar. The banging continues. Sam lays his face into the pillow mentally willing it away. It continues. Sam forces himself up. He holds his head in his hands sitting at the end of the bed. The banging continues. Sam forces himself up and walks
OUT OF THE BEDROOM DOWN THE STAIRS TO THE FRONT DOOR
The banging is more like SLAMMING here.
Sam opens the door to reveal CRYSTAL (CHRIS) in mid-bang. Her head down; short brown shaggy hair hiding her face from view. She lifts her head up. She is eighteen but looks like a kid, a wise-ass kid. She is very cute, thin (with muscle), and is dressed in skin tight ripped jeans, and a plain black T-shirt with a big black jacket over it (the kind Sam and Dean wear). She has an oversized black Italian leather purse on one shoulder.
Sam takes a second to recognize her. He doesnít look happy to see her; but he doesnít look unhappy either.
dmartins - May 8, 2009 11:57 PM (GMT)
It is very good stories in the link! Thanks!
Jersey - May 13, 2009 09:37 PM (GMT)
|QUOTE (dmartins @ May 8 2009, 11:57 PM)|
| It is very good stories in the link! Thanks! |
So glad u like it!!! :D
Jersey - May 13, 2009 09:39 PM (GMT)
Wakey wakey eggs and bacey. Hey Sammy, how you been, huh?
Sam has his eyes open only to a squint and looks very much hung over.
(looks him over)
Whatís the matter? Too much to drink last night, huh? Thatís a shame.
Chris slaps him on the shoulder and pushes her way in. She looks around the house. Sam closes the door. They turn and face one another.
Crystal? What are you doing here itís been like --
Five years, yep. Long time.
What are you doing here?
Well, believe it or not cuz, Iím a hunter too now and --
Youíre a hunter?
Yeah, why is that so hard to believe?
I guess itís not, Chris. After all, you always used to follow me and Dean around and copy us.
Yeah, well, actually, I was following Dean around.
I know. Youíre like a smaller version of him. You know without the five oíclock shadow or the weiner.
They both LAUGH a little. It breaks some of the tension.
Why did you start hunting?
Jersey - May 13, 2009 09:40 PM (GMT)
Friend of mine got possessed. Total ďExorcistĒ. Anyway, the guy who did the exorcism was short his partner that day and asked me to help. You know, turn pages, sprinkle holy water, stuff like that. After my friend was back the guy takes me aside and tells me about hunting and tells me how I can make money doing it and I was like, Ďyeahí. Too bad he was lying about the Ďmoneyí thing. But, whatever.
How did you find out about us being hunters?
Are you frigging kidding me? You guys are like legends in the hunting circle. Sam and Dean. Dean and Sam. The Winchester Brothers.
Sam starts getting uncomfortable hearing about Dean. It makes him miss Dean even more.
Jersey - May 13, 2009 09:59 PM (GMT)
Youíve been hunting by yourself?
(full of herself)
Where have you been hunting?
Mainly Florida. Gotta love the
You came pretty far.
Yeah, well, I needed a change of
scenery. Plus I needed to get out
of dodge fast. Angry ex-boyfriends,
owe lots of people money; you know.
Uh huh. How did you find us?
I met your friend Ellen on a job.
She told me you were probably here.
Said she hadnít talked to you in
over a year, but this was your
friendís place. Bobby or something.
Jersey - May 13, 2009 10:00 PM (GMT)
Yeah, Bobby. Heís a hunter too.
Heís left for a job this morning in
(couldnít care less)
She walks into the
Sam follows her.
Chris walks over to the couch drops her purse on it and plops
down. She puts her feet up on the coffee table. She grabs the
(starts flipping channels)
Hey, what channel is Lifetime? I
want to watch ďFrasierĒ.
She finds the channel.
Niles is in the stairwell. He says to Daphine that the spider
isnít in his corner. Chris mutes the TV.
Niles is such a spaz. What a stoop.
Afraid of a spider.
(turns around to Sam)
Itís like you and that stupid fear
Sam walks around the couch and stands in front of the TV.
Hey, so whereís Dean?
Jersey - May 13, 2009 10:00 PM (GMT)
Before Sam can even open his mouth.
Chris turns around, still sitting, to face the stairs.
(yells up stairs)
Dean! Dean, wake up you lazy ass
The words cut Sam like a dagger.
Chris spins her head back around.
(in shock; tears forming)
Four months ago yesterday.
Oh my God.
Chris stands up and hugs Sam, showing real compassion.
This must be so hard for you. Iím
so sorry, Sam. I know you guys got
close. Come on, letís sit down.
Chris leads him to the couch. They sit next to one another.
There is SILENCE for a few seconds.
Jersey - May 13, 2009 10:01 PM (GMT)
Dean made a deal.
What kind of deal?
A deal to bring me back. I died.
I thought you were supposed to get
ten years. When did he make it?
The deal was for one year.
So, let me get this straight. You
died. Dean couldnít handle it; so
he made a deal, an incredibly
crappy one, and what the year came
and he went poof? Didnít you guys
even try to save him?
Sam gets angry and stands.
Of course we did! What you think I
would just let my brother go
without a fight?
No, but youíre certainly acting
like it wasnít worth it.
Jersey - May 13, 2009 10:02 PM (GMT)
Sam gets more angry.
What do you mean Ďacting like it
wasnít worth ití!? How can you say
Sam, itís been four months and what
are you doing with your life?
Nothing! On my way up here, I ran
into some hunters and we got to
talking. I brought up you and they
said how you havenít hunted at all
in the past four months. They
didnít tell me why, maybe they
didnít know or didnít think it was
any of my business. I donít know. I
donít care. But the thing is,
Sammy, this isnít what Dean had in
mind when he sold his soul. He
didnít want to be burning in Hell
while you lived like a stupid-ass
bum. It wasnít worth it. God, itís
like he did it for nothing.
Jersey - May 13, 2009 10:02 PM (GMT)
Sam gets very and angry and in one quick fluid movement,
harshly yanks Chris off the couch, by her jacket, and holds
her up, making them face to face.
Take it back.
No. Look, Sam, you canít hit me if
you want to, but Iím not gonna lie
to you. You know as well as I do
that this isnít what Dean wanted.
He did it for you and you screwed
him over by living like this.
Sam throws Chris back on the couch. He walks away into the
(yells after him)
You know Iím right!
Sam returns holding a now open bottle of beer. He sits on a
chair next to the couch.
Great, itís not even 10:30.
Sam glares and takes a defiant swig.
You donít know what Iíve been
Youíre right I donít. But youíre
just making excuses now.
What do you want me to do?
Fight for him, Sam! He canít fight
for himself. You do it.
Now, who holds his contract?
Lilith, Lilith? Or some random
demon named Lilith?
Alright. This is gonna be harder
than I thought. We need to kill
Sheís in hiding.
Then we find her.
Itís not that easy! God, Chris, not
everything is cut and dry. Me and Bobby have been looking for
her for the last four months.
Then you keep looking, you donít
give up. Dean needs you now, Sam.
Someoneís gotta go after her.
Thatís what Iíve been doing for the
past four months!
Jersey - May 13, 2009 10:05 PM (GMT)
Yeah, and howís that working out
Listen, Sam, I think you
need some more help. You know a new
Let me guess, you.
We donít even get along that well.
So, look Sammy, weíll either learn
to get along or one of us will kill
the other. And since youíre like
Sasquatch I think Iíll have to
watch my back.
Sam grins back. He sits up and leans towards Chris.
Thereís something I gotta tell you.
There might be a way to find
Chris gives him full attention looking him straight in the
I have these powers, theyíre like
(grins; smart ass)
Then you should start your own hot
line. Like Ms. Cleo.
Crystal, shut up and listen to me.
Chris stops grinning.
Jersey - May 13, 2009 10:08 PM (GMT)
I can see things before they
happen. There are other people like
me out there. Iíve met them and one
thing that we all can do is control
demons if we work on our powers.
When you say control you mean like
use a force field against them to
hold them somewhere. Like the way
they can do to us by like holding
their hands up?
Yeah. And maybe more. I can break
out of their holds too. Right
before Dean died Lilith was in the
room with us. She tried to use a
force field to hold Dean and me
away. But I broke out. I was about
to kill her when she flew up
through a vent.
How come Dean died, then? If she
left the two of you.
Dean was already dead. Hell hounds.
So, Iíve decided to use them. As a
Whyís it a last resort? Why didnít
you use them from the start?
Youíre new to this arenít you? The
powers arenít exactly good.
As a matter of fact theyíre evil.
Me and the rest of the people were
supposed to lead an army of demons
for the end of the world.
And so you donít want to turn all
Yeah. Pretty much.
Jersey - May 13, 2009 10:21 PM (GMT)
Makes sense. For what itís worth I
think this is our only shot.
Chris gets up goes into the kitchen. She returns with an open
beer. She walks over to Sam.
You shouldnít drink alone.
She plops back down on the couch and takes a sip.
So, whatís your plan? Just sit in a
dark and try and channel her.
That part I havenít figured out
END OF ACT TWO
Jersey - May 13, 2009 10:28 PM (GMT)
INT. BOBBYíS HOUSE - DAY
Sam and Chris are sprawled on the couch. There are about six
empty bottles of beer in front of them.
I think thatíll work.
We make a good team.
Chris hold the palm of her hand out. Sam SLAPS it.
The shadows of the demons LAUGH. Another shadow appears,
bigger than the rest, more horns on it.
LILITH transforms into a beautiful womanís shadow. And we see
her at that. No longer a shadow, now a beautiful woman.
Jersey - May 13, 2009 10:33 PM (GMT)
EXT. BOBBYíS HOUSE - DAY
Sam and Chris leave the house. Deanís Impala is blocked in
the driveway by another car. A black 2008 Audi A4 2.0T.
They walk to the Impala.
Youíre blocking me in.
Thatís your car?
Now, that makes more sense. Good
choice in color.
Chris gets in the Audi. She starts it. The engine REVS. She
rolls down the window.
(yells out the window)
Had it suped up. You like?
Sam smiles a little.
She backs the car out of the driveway and runs up to the
No wonder you owe so much money to
people, when you go out and buy a
car like that.
Yeah, well, for your information; I
bought the car back when I thought
you actually made money being a
They both LAUGH and get in the car.
Jersey - May 13, 2009 10:55 PM (GMT)
INT. IMPALA - DAY
Sam is driving. Chris is riding shotgun.
Sam LAUGHS to himself.
Alright. I was just thinking about
how when we were younger how youíd
follow us around. You know the few
times Dad took us to your place,
cause he was gonna be gone for like
months and Dean was too young to
take care of me for that long. You
Man, I never thought youíd turn out
to be a hunter. A small time crook
maybe, but not a hunter.
They both laugh.
Yeah, well, itís in our blood; cuz.
Jersey - May 13, 2009 10:56 PM (GMT)
EXT. ABANDONED HOUSE - NIGHT
Sam and Chris walk outside of an abandoned house. There is a
crossroads in front of it.
Sam pulls out a medallion for Chris to wear. He gives it to her.
Wear this. Itíll protect you from
Chris puts it on.
OK. You go wait inside.
Chris walks into the house.
Sam walks to the middle of the crossroads and places the box
in the middle of the roads. He closes the hole and waits.
There is SILENCE. No demon, nothing.
Sam stands. He looks around for the demon to show.
The DEMON, a male, shows up behind them. He looks human. He
is about 20 and average looking, with black hair. He has the
Sam stands with his back to him.
BLACK HAIRED DEMON
Sam spins around.
BLACK HAIRED DEMON
What do you want?
Uh, this is kinda uh, embarrassing.
BLACK HAIRED DEMON
Come now. You can tell me.
His eyes flash red.
Uh, maybe I could tell you in
(points to abandoned
BLACK HAIRED DEMON
I told you itís embarrassing. Look,
Iím not gonna do anything out here
in the open, where anybody could
hear me. So buh-bye, then.
Jersey - May 13, 2009 11:00 PM (GMT)
Sam waves, turns around, and starts walking towards the car.
The Black haired demon looks at him, hesitates and then.
BLACK HAIRED DEMON
Sam smiles and turns around to face the demon.
INT. ABANDONED HOUSE - NIGHT
Sam leads the demon into the
BLACK HAIRED DEMON
What is it that you want? What you
want to be a woman or something.
The demon enters the Key of Solomon.
Nope. I just want you to
The Black haired demon looks at him quizzically and looks up.
The Key is big but doesnít encompass the whole room.
Chris walks out of the shadows.
Sam and Chris give each other five.
The black haired demon gets a smug look on his face.
BLACK HAIRED DEMON
The demonís eyes flash red.
Youíre not my type.
BLACK HAIRED DEMON
What do you want?
Lift up your left arm up and touch
BLACK HAIRED DEMON
Sam puts his fingers to his temple and concentrates.
The Black Haired Demon looks at him questionably. He LAUGHS.
After a second or two the demonís left hand starts to shake
and slowly, but surely, he ends up touching his head.
Sam stops concentrating and the demonís arm drops down.
BLACK HAIRED DEMON (CONTíD)
Oh, youíre one of them. I see.
Jersey - May 13, 2009 11:04 PM (GMT)
Sam extends his hand out. Chris hands him the Colt. He aims
and FIRES. The demon dies.
Why does that gun kill them?
It was made by Samuel Colt.
The famous hunter?
Yep. Glad I got it back.
Well, who had it before you?
Chris gives him a look like ďwhoĒ.
Jersey - May 13, 2009 11:06 PM (GMT)
So, how many more demons we gonna
do this to till we get Lilith?
Dean is standing in front of Lilith.
(smug look on his face)
What? You got sent down here like
me? Ha! Iíd tell you I told you so
No, thatís where youíre wrong, dear
boy. Iím making a lot of deals and
the boss gives me free range to
come and go. So, I thought Iíd pay
you a little visit.
Lilith, what do you want? You got
me. Iím here! Just leave me the
hel... just leave me alone!
Now, Dean, Iím surprised at you.
What you thought that youíd come
down here and we wouldnít even have
any fun together?
She walks over to him and kisses him. He pushes her away.
Fine. Weíll play your way, then.
Lilith puts her hand on his chest.
Dean crumbles to the ground in agony. She continues touching
his chest for a few seconds while Dean SCREAMS and flops
around. She finally removes her hand.
Dean remains on the ground on his hands and knees, his head bent
down, gasping for breath.
Jersey - May 13, 2009 11:07 PM (GMT)
Oh and by the way, youíre a demon
now, even if you donít want to
admit it. You should really think
about helping us. Itíll make the
pain easier here.
Yeah, right. Iíll never, bitch.
Lilith places her hand on him again. This time itís on his
head. Dean crumbles in pain. She removes her hand after a few
How about now?
Go to Hell.
Now come on Dean, what are you
doing, huh? What are you still
holding out thinking baby brother
is gonna save you? Is that it?
Dean glares at her with hatred in his eyes.
Cause he canít! No one can. Get it?
Dean, look around! Youíre in Hell.
This is it! You and Sammy couldnít
do jack to save you before you died
and he canít save you now.
Wow, you are one stubborn jack ass.
You gonna help me or not?
Lilith touches his chest again. This time Dean does not fall,
in fact he almost seems to be enjoying it. Lilith gets very
close to him
(whispering in his ear)
See Dean, it doesnít have to be
that bad here. Granted youíre still
in pain, but not as much, right?
It can be like this, if youíll just
help me. So?
(comes out of it;
Never! Iíll never help you cause
Iím never gonna be like you! Iím
never gonna gonna --
ďGonna gonnaĒ what? Youíre already
No, Iím not.
Donít be so sure.
Lilith picks up what appears to be a broken piece of a mirror
and shows Dean his reflection. Dean looks at it. We canít see
it. Dean stumbles away from it, scared.
No! No! Thatís a trick! I donít
look like that!
Jersey - May 13, 2009 11:08 PM (GMT)
(holds hands out in front
My hands arenít all burned up, my
fingernails arenít razors.
My my face isnít all rotted and
theyíre no horns anywhere.
Dean, you donít change on the
outside down here for a very long
time. But thatís how you look on
the inside. Youíre just like me.
No, Iím not, you bitch!
Canít you come up with anything
better to call me?
Yeah. How about motherf --
She places her hand on his face and he crumbles again.
Not now, later. Now I want an
answer. Yay or nay?
She removes her hand.
Go f --
SIGHING she places both hands on him and he falls to the ground in
worse pain than ever before.
After a moment --
That was fun wasnít it?
Dean says nothing.
Dean says nothing. Glaring. Lilith kicks him in the crotch.
Dean turns to one side holding himself.
(through gritted teeth)
Jersey - May 13, 2009 11:09 PM (GMT)
I know what Sam has planned for me.
Honestly Dean, would you go back
and change it?
Thatís sweet. Too bad Iím gonna
have to kill Sam. Tell you what,
Iíll bring him back here and you
guys can have a little reunion.
Lilith bends down and kisses Dean deeply. He tires to push
her away with tears streaming down his face. She leaves after
a few seconds.
Jersey - May 13, 2009 11:11 PM (GMT)
Dean slams his fist into the floor.
A shadow appears over Dean. Itís a huge demon. Dean looks
(looks up; swallows hard)
Holy mother of God.
END OF ACT THREE