Title: BROTHERLY LOVE
Description: LAST SEQ TO THE CAVERNS
charmed1of2 - April 1, 2009 12:40 PM (GMT)
HEY GANG, BEFORE I START POSTING I HAVE A FEW THINGS TO SAY. I KNOW I HAVE BEEN ABSENT FROM THE THREAD, THOSE OF YOU THAT KNOW WHATíS GOING ON I KNOW YOUíRE THERE FOR ME THROUGH THIS TOUGH TIME AND I REALLY DO LOVE YOU GUYS FOR THAT. WHEN I FIND THE TIME I WILL POST REPLIES ON YOUR STORIES, LIFE IS JUST A LITTLE BUSY RIGHT NOW AND IíM NOT AT HOME, BUT IíM WHERE I NEED TO BE RIGHT NOW.
NOW, THIS IS THE LAST SEQ TO THE CAVERNS AND BAPTISM OF FIRE. IF YOU HAVE NOT READ THAT YOU WILL HAVE NO IDEA WHAT IS GOING ON, BUT I WILL PM YOU IF YOU WANT AND GIVE YOU THE STORY PLOT OF BOTH OF THEM , THE THREAD FOR THAT IS WAY OVER 170 PAGES AND YOUR BUTT WOULD GO NUMB TRYING TO GET THROUGH IT ALL. ALSO THIS TOOK PLACE DURING SEASON ONE SO SAM STILL HAS VISIONS AND THE BROTHERLY BOND IS STILL THERE, BELIEVE ME I HAD TO WATCH SEASON ONE JUST TO GET BACK INTO IT WITH HOW THINGS ARE BETWEEN THEM THIS SEASON.
I AGAIN WOULD LIKE TO TAKE THE TIME OUT TO THANK ALL OF YOU THAT HAS NOMINATED AND VOTED FOR MY STORIES FOR THE PAST YEARS . I ĎM GLAD YOU ENJOYED THEM.
NOW, I AM PUTTING A WARNING ON HERE, THERE IS GORE BUT I HAVE TONED IT DOWN AS MUCH AS I CAN SO IF THATíS NOT YOUR THING JUST BACK OUT, DONíT WORRY IT WONíT HURT MY FEELINGS. WE ALSO HAVE SWEARING, DRUG WITHDRAWL, HUMOR (YEP YOU READ THAT RIGHT) AND THE RETURN OF A CERTAIN PERSON WHO I REALLY AM ENJOYING THE WAY I CHANGED HER. WHEN A CHAPTER IS POSTED WITH GORE I WILL PUT UP A HUGE RED WARNING SO YOU KNOW .
NOW FOR ALL THE HATERS THAT EMAILED ME OR SENT ME PMíS IN THE PAST. THIS IS FICTION, A STORY, YOU KNOW NOT REAL..I HAVE CHANGED MY EMAIL AND GOTTEN THE GREEN LIGHT FROM MY SISTERS( YEP THE MODS WHICH ACTUALLY ONE THREATENED TO KICK MY BUTT IF I DIDNíT CONTINUE WITH THE LAST INSTALLMENT*COUGH LO* )SO PLEASE DONíT BOTHER SENDING ME HATE OR BASHING PMíS, JUST DONíT READ IT. ALTHOUGH MY PERSONAL FAVORITE IS WHEN YOU CALLED ME A CULT LEADER THAT IS CORRUPTING THE GANG LOL,YOU REALLY DONíT KNOW THE TRUE ME, IF YOU DID YOU WOULD KNOW HOW SILLY THAT REALLY IS.
NOW, FOR ANY NEW READERS OF MY WORK. YOU WILL SOON REALIZE MY THREAD CAN BE CRAZY. WE HAVE HAD EVERYTHING FROM PEPSI VRS COKE WARS, KIDNAPPING PLOTS FOR THE GUYS, WHO IS GETTING THE BACK SEAT WITH DEAN FIRST AND YES I WILL FIGHT TO THE DEATH TO NURSE SAM(AND I DO FIGHT DIRTY AND CAN KILL WITH ANYTHING WITHIN MY REACH LOL JUST ASK SARAH). ALSO PICTURES HAVE BEEN POSTED OF OUR LAST GET TOGETHER WHICH WAS AWESOME, ALTHOUGH ONE WAS PUT UP BY MISTAKE *SNICKER MY SEXY BRIT SIS NUMBER ONE* BUT IT WAS ALL GOOD. OH THAT REMINDS ME, THOSE THAT ARE COMING THIS YEAR, IF I DONíT HAVE YOUR INFO ON FLIGHTS, OR IF YOUíRE DRIVING PM ME SO I CAN WRITE IT BY YOUR NAME. I WILL BE MAKING SOME CALLS TO SOME OF YOU TO SEE IF YOUíRE STILL COMING. REMEMBER IT IS IN AUGUST OF THIS YEAR, CINDY, CASSIE I HAVE YOUR INFO. YOUíRE ALL SET.
AS I HAVE SAID, IíM NOT AT HOME. IíVE BEEN IN UPSTATE NEW YORK THE WHOLE MONTH OF MARCH AND REALLY DONíT KNOW HOW LONG I WILL BE HERE. MY SON DUSTIN (OKAY STOP DROOLING SOME OF YOU) HAS BEEN TYPING UP THE CHAPTERS I HAVE WRITTEN IN MY NOTEBOOK AND HAS EMAILED THEM TO ME, IíM CHECKING THEM OUT FOR ANY MISSING PARTS PLUS HEíS BRINGING ME MY NOTES WHEN HE COMES NEXT TIME SO I CAN CONTINUE WHEN I HAVE TIME TO WRITE (WHICH WILL BE LIKE AT 3 IN THE MORNING). I AM DEDICATING THIS LAST INSTALLMENT TO MY SISTER SHELLY AND MY MOM. THOSE OF YOU THAT KNOW WHAT IS GOING DOWN ,SOME HAVE ASKED WITH WHAT IíM GOING THROUGH HOW I CAN STAY SO POSITIVE.
THE ANSWER I BELIEVE IS THAT POSITIVE THINKING IS A CHOICE. WE ARE CAPABLE OF CHOOSING OUR ATTITUDES, SOMETIMES IT IS EASIER THAN OTHERS. THERE ARE MANY THINGS LIKE MY MS OR ANY ONE OF US WITH A DISABILITY OF SOME SORT THAT LEAVES US WITHOUT A CHOICE ON SOME THINGS BUT OUR ATTITUDE IS NOT ONE OF THEM. ON THE ROUGH DAYS (LIKE WHAT IíM DOING NOW) I HAVE TO GIVE MYSELF A MENTAL TALKING TO, TO STAY STRONG, I CAN NOT CHANGE WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN, I HAVE NO CONTROL OVER THE OUTCOME. JUST BEING HERE AND DOING WHAT IS NEEDED GIVES ME THE PEACE OF MIND AND CONTENTMENT THAT WHAT I AM DOING IS RIGHT. A POSITIVE ATTITUDE IS IMPORTANT NOT JUST FOR OURSELF BUT IT ALSO MAKES US MORE PLEASANT TO BE AROUND AND MAKES LIFE MORE FULFILLING FOR OUR LOVED ONES AND FRIENDS, FOR YOU NEVER KNOW WHAT THE NEXT DAY WILL BRING. I CHOOSE TO HAVE A POSITIVE OUTLOOK BECAUSE THAT HELPS ME LEAD A BETTER LIFE, MY ATTITUDE IS A CHOICE I WILL ALWAYS HAVE..SO I SAY WHAT I WANT, IíM LUCY WHO GETS INTO TROUBLE, AND I MAKE PEOPLE LAUGH AND PULL PRANKSÖI NEVER TAKE PART IN THE SAM VRS DEAN WARS , I ALWAYS WELCOME NEW MEMBERS AND ENCOURAGE NEW WRITERS.. THAT MY FRIENDS IS WHO I AM AND I WILL NEVER CHANGE AND IF ANY OF YOU HAVE READ ROBINíS STORIES *NO EXIT AND THE SEQ*OR STEFFíS *LORRIEíS REVENGE* THEY KNOW ME TOO WELL AND THAT REALLY IS THE WAY I ACT AND TALK LOL YEP I SAY WHATEVER AND DONíT CARE IF PEOPLE STAREÖLIKE WHEN I WAS WEARING MY BUNNY SLIPPERS AT THE GAS STATION AND PEOPLE WERE LOOKING AT ME FUNNYÖAND I DID TRY TO SALT AND BURN THE HAUNTED ELEVATOR THAT ATTACKED MY PARTNER IN CRIME ROBIN AT THE CONVENTION LAST NOVEMBER, NO ONE ELSE TRIED TO HELP HER I HAD TO DO SOMETHING LMAO, HEY I HAD THE DEANIE MARTINIE AND WAS STEALING THE SALT SHAKER FROM ROOM SERVICE, ALREADY HAD THE LIGHTER. I THINK THE GUYS WOULD HAVE BEEN PROUD OF ME, MAYBE NOT THE HOTEL THOUGH *SNICKER* , WE WILL SEE HOW THINGS GO DOWN THIS NOVEMBER RIGHT ETHEL??? AND NO, IíM NOT GOING AROUND PLACED IN A PLASTIC BUBBLE TO KEEP OUT OF TROUBLE. YES I KNOW, YOU CANíT TAKE ME ANYWHERE BUT YOU GOTTA LOVE ME LOL
OKAY, IíM DONE BORING YOU NOW. I WILL BE POSTING MY PROLOGUE IN A FEW DAYS, AND YES I DID MAKE THAT POOR BANNER FOR THE STORY BUT HEY AT LEAST IíM TRYING SOMETHING NEW LOL. I HOPE YOUíRE READY FOR A WILD RIDE AND FOR ANYONE NEW HERE, WELCOME AND IíM REALLY NOT INSANE ITíS THE MEDS.OKAY IíM INSANE ARE YOU HAPPY NOW? THE BAR WILL BE OPEN SOON SO YOU CAN LINE UP FOR DRINKS, OR IN SOME CHAPTERS MAYBE A BARF BAG :lol:
LOVE YOU ALL
lcaron3 - April 1, 2009 06:17 PM (GMT)
Thank God your back.
Missed you lots. :D
Can't wait for your new story to start.
mizpah - April 1, 2009 11:19 PM (GMT)
Sarah was just asking me the other day whether I knew when this was being posted, so I will tell her to keep an eye out. We've both been waiting eagerly for this sequel.
Thoughts are with you, sis, and when the bar opens, I'll have a scotch & dry - make it a double.
Have this on alert now, so I won't lose track of it.
cindy123 - April 2, 2009 03:23 AM (GMT)
:D Hey sis! Glad to see you back on the thread. Am waiting anxiously to start reading! Love and prayers to you and your family! I bow to you, oh exhaulted cult leader! LOL Love you tons hon!! :wub:
charmed1of2 - April 2, 2009 09:36 AM (GMT)
:wub: AWWWWWWWWW THANKS GUYS, HEY LINDA MISSED YOU TOO!!! JULES MY SEXY AUSSIE SIS *HANDS OVER A DOUBLE, YOU WILL NEED IT ;) * YEP I'M BACK KIND OF, GOTTA CATCH UP READING BUT THINGS ARE KIND OF CRAZY STILL....CINDY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OK REPEAT AFTER ME MY LITTLE FOLLOWER *YOU JUST HAD TO GO THERE HUH :lol: **** TOWELS AND CLOTHES ARE EVIL, WE WANT NAKED AND OILED SKIN ONLY ON THE GUYS*** NOW KEEP CHANTING IT AND MAYBE KRIPKE WILL HEAR US :lol: :evil :drool1
LORRIE :evil :hug:
Oceane - April 2, 2009 11:10 AM (GMT)
Lorrie, it's great to see you on the boards :cheer
I'm looking forward to the last installment of your amazing trilogy :)
ziggy - April 2, 2009 11:38 PM (GMT)
Raven524 - April 3, 2009 12:34 AM (GMT)
:cheer Lorrie's back. I've missed you! What is Ethel without her Lucy? :cry
But I"m glad you got things started. The
is about to begin! I've ready for the bar to open
and I'm ready to
to the genius that is all you.
As for the possible gore...bring it on
Just try to post after I'm done eating this time okay?
Can't wait for you to get back here in November, ready to round up those two Winchester hunks?
At least there is one for each of us :D
Seriously, you try to relax and remember, I'm just a phone call away if you need a shoulder...
Luv ya Sis!
Lo - April 3, 2009 12:49 AM (GMT)
As you can tell, Robin has been emoticon-happy lately. <_< She found them and now is in love. I for one cannot wait until this is posted! Long awaited - yes! You're writing inspires, so I think this addition to the arc will be one that has so many wanting more of your delicious story telling.
Awesome. I'm excited. Thank you for the phone call this week. I was so happy to hear from you.
I'm going to go dance now.
charmed1of2 - April 3, 2009 10:49 AM (GMT)
:rotfl :rotfl OMG!!!! MY SEXY BRIT SIS NUMBER TWO YOUR SMILIES ARE SO DAMN AWESOME :rotfl ...OK YOU KNOW THE BOWING ONE REMINDS ME OF HOW THE GIRLS SAVED THE DAY AND YOU GUYS FINDING THE DOLL HOUSE WITH THE STUFFED RATS HOLDING SIGNS OF HAIL LORRIE :rotfl :rotfl ....HERES YOUR DRINK BABY, YOU WILL NEED IT, AND SORRY SEXY BUT THE RUBBER BRA WON'T HELP YOU HUN :lol: YOU KNOW ME WAY BETTER THAN THAT, I CAN FIND A WAY :rotfl
ETHEL!!!!!!!!! AWWW THANKS MY PARTNER IN CRIME :wub: YEAH THERE IS NO ONE WHO CAN TRY TO KEEP MY LUCY PERSONALITY UNDERCONTROL BUT YOU TRY ...WELL OK I GET YOU INVOLVED IN CRAZY SH*T BUT HEY IT IS ME :rotfl ..AND YOU TOTALLY LOST IT AT WALMART WHEN I YELLED OUT AT KAT AND THAT OLD LADY JUST ABOUT DROPPED ON THE GROUND :rotfl ...BUT YOU DID HAVE MY PURSE STRAP CAUGHT IN YOUR TRUNK THAT ONE TIME AND WAS GOING TO TAKE OFF DRAGGING ME TO GOD KNOWS WHERE :rotfl LOVE YOUR SMILIES TOO, DAMN I HAVE TO GET SOME OF THOSE...HERES YOUR DRINK BABY!!!
OCEANE!!!HEY SIS, GLAD TO SEE YOU TOO!!! HOPE YOU'RE READY FOR THIS ONE, I KINDA CHANGED A FEW THINGS :evil
LOOOOOO!!!!!! ARE WE DANCING IN THE MOONLIGHT???? YESSSS MY LOVER *SNICKER* I'LL TRY TO BE GENTLE :rotfl ....AWWW THANKS BABY, IT WAS GOOD TALKING TO YOU ALSO, YOU GUYS ALWAYS HELP WITH JUST LISTENING YOU REALLY HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH THAT ALONE HELPS....AND YES YOU TALKED ME INTO POSTING :rotfl ...WE ARE GETTING TOGETHER IN AUGUST AND HEY I NEED MY BATHROOM BUDDY HAPPY *JUST DON'T FALL IN THE TUB THIS TIME* :rotfl HOPEFULLY WE WON'T SET THE SMOKE ALARMS OFF :rotfl
LUV ALL OF YOU :hug:
LORRIE :evil :fire
Steffs - April 3, 2009 04:10 PM (GMT)
YAY Lorrie's posting :skip
*Rushes around getting everything ready*
Cover's sofa with rubber
LARGE DRINK ......check.... and nuts...
Dean Cushion.... check
Sam Cushion.... check
Barry Manilow CD..... check (For Alisa)
Sick Bucket .....check
BRAND NEW nurses uniform complete with plalstic cover-all in a fetching blue.
Big hugs Lorrie and although you deny it you ARE a special person....special to me and to lots of other people too. Hang in there and you know that my thoughts are with you.
PS....Send my love to my adoptive Son....Hey Dustin!
demon hunter - April 4, 2009 03:44 AM (GMT)
EKKK!!! i don't know what compelled me to come here, b/c i haven't been in this forum in a while, but EKKKK!!!! the sequel!! i will be back later to read it, (got shivers) when the kiddies go to bed.....whenever that will be!!!!
Lo - April 4, 2009 03:48 AM (GMT)
Of course, Lorrie. I love you dearly, so it is always my pleasure. And YES we are frolicking underneath the moonlight next full moon. Be there.
Boo-yah, Robin, I have some, too (even though Robin showed me where they were and how to put them on...but I take credit because I can).
Maybe these will make you smile, Lorrie. Steffs, come and look.
This is my favorite animal of ALL times. So cute. :) Sorry, random, yes, but this is awesomely awesome.
And Hello Kitty!
And, of course, this is too awesome. I mean, c'mon, could this be geared more toward my writing?
(Red converse!) and this one...
This is the guy who plays the music for our moonlight dancing, Lorrie.
And this is what you look like.
And here is what we will look like once you see this random post.
And here is the best one for me... This is me, swooping down on you. Mu ha ha ha!
jared.is.fit - April 4, 2009 08:05 AM (GMT)
Good to hear from you
Hope u feel better soon
Hope the family is all good :D
Can't wait for the new story
Lots of Love
Steffs - April 4, 2009 08:15 AM (GMT)
*Runs up and smooooooshes LO"
See I knew I would need the rubber cover for the Sofa .......CUTEY !!!! :rotfl
Fangs for the rasberry sauce....*LICKS* ....mmmmmm interesting flavour!!!! Slightly salty
Pulls up Robin to join in the dancing ... we're gonna do this new one its called
THE IMPALA !!
*Hummmssss do the Impala* *Does a twirl*
I hope Kitty has her collar....*BLUSHES*
charmed1of2 - April 4, 2009 09:47 AM (GMT)
FAYEEEEEEEEEEEE HEY GIRL, HOW YA DOING??? MONAAAAAAAAAA HOWS IT GOING GIRL??? OKAY EVERYONE GOT THEIR
UM ETHEL GET OFF THE FLOOR WE HAVEN'T FINISHED SINGING YET!!!! YEP SARAH GAVE ME SOME SITES SO
...OKAY I'LL DO WHAT THE MOVIES DO
IN THIS PROLOGUE NO
WAS HURT IN ANYWAY IN THE WRITING OR MAKING OF THIS STORY :rotfl ...ALL ERRORS ARE MINE AND YOU WILL FIND SOME BECAUSE I'M
....HOPE YOU ENJOY!!!!
The sweltering sun cast the neighborhood in a muggy haze. The reflection on the concrete roads added to the smothering heat, but Ray didnít move from his rocking chair on the front porch of his home and business establishment, since it was a Sunday and his gas station was closed. Ray smiled and took a long drink of his ice tea as he gazed at the cobblestoned plaza crowded with buyers and vendors lined along the sidewalks. The interweaving colors made the square resemble an intricate colorful blanket as men and women in vibrant clothes bargained over food and crafts.
Ray gazed over at the play area of the elementary school as children of various ages filled the yard. Chains on swings clashed with squeals of laughter. High pitched voices rose like musical bells, happy and carefree despite the heat.
Ray frowned as Sergeant, his black and tan German shepherd stood up and started pacing, the dogís agitation sending an uneasy feeling to his master.
ďWhat is it boy?Ē Ray stood and looked out into the town square.
Serge barked, moving to stand at the edge of the porch. He whined as his nose sniffed the air, barking again as a cluster of birds took flight overhead. Ray put his hands on the wooden railing. Tuning out the sounds from the crowded plaza, he cocked his head and listened. No sound was heard for the first minute or two except for a low muffled underground rumbling and a slight rustling of trees as if nature was holding its breath. Then suddenly came a tremendous roar, the sound deep and broad, as if the earth was a living creature and had at last found its voice.
Ray stepped off the porch, the strange motion and rumbling could not be mistaken as the shocks were so violent and varied, succeeding one after another. The townís people began running, trying to balance themselves on the pavement as if on a deck of a ship among large turbulent waves. Vendor carts overturned, sending the commodities flying onto the street, useless and damaged. Children on the playground screamed in terror, calling out for their parents as the swingsets and other equipment in the yard tilted dangerously from the vibrations underneath their feet as the ground buckled and areas crumbled, leaving small sinkholes where the surface had collapsed inward.
Ray moved swiftly, ignoring the pain in his arthritic joints as he pushed through the terrified disorderly crowd. Avoiding the fallen sparking electrical wires, Ray rushed into the yard pulling children away from the unstable facilities. His gaze swung to the old schoolhouse as it shook on its foundation, the glass windows exploded, sending the shards blasting into the air and littering the ground.
Herding the children to an area away from the building Ray felt the tremors ease underneath his feet. Serge licked his hand, emitting a soft whimper before he trotted to the fence.
ďSerge stay!Ē Ray ordered as he heard the old church bell still ringing above the cries of the injured villagers. Wiping his brow, he walked over to the fence and mentally prepared himself for the destruction and devastation that was left of his small hometown.
2 Miles north
The sun beat down on the blanket of desert sand, the area dotted with cactus and skimpy patches of grass shifted with the force of the tremor. Spiky, stunted leafless shrubs tumbled and dropped while snakes and other creatures emerged from underneath small rocks sensing the danger. In the shallow valley, a large outcropping of rock jutted out of the earth. The mountain trembled, followed by a sudden jarring horizontal thrust, twisting in upward jolting movements.
Nature then created a new set of features, simply by giving the mountain a shake as boulders fell, pouring to the desert floor in a free curve luminous from friction. In the midst of the stupendous roaring rock storm a large crevice opened on one side of a sheer fronted rock. The opening chafing, grating against the smallest of boulders still falling, clouds of dust particles floating through the air like a thick fog.
A sudden hush fell over the valley as the earth once more stilled, the only sound heard were small pebbles still drifting down the sheer face of the rock formation. A small prairie dog crawled slowly from his hiding place, his nose twitching at the unfamiliar scent that hung in the air. The inquisitive rodent scurried over boulders and rubble until it reached the gap that was now open, its nose still twitching rapidly as it slowly moved into the darkness in front of him.
After a few seconds a piercing scream shrieked from the mouth of the den, the agonized, tormented cries echoed off the stone walls only to die off into a haunting silence. The scent of blood and death had infused in the air. A glossy sheen of small skeletal bones were tossed out onto the dry sand, the blazing sun quickly evaporating the thick saliva still clinging to the clearly stripped remains.
A guttural growl emitted from the darkness, crimson red eyes blinked rapidly against the sudden sunlight as raptor like claws reached out and grasped the edges of the rock and pulled its form free from his prison. The beast inhaled and smiled a grotesque parody of a smile. He could smell the delicious fear and panic floating in delightful layers upon the air. Yes, first he needed to feed, to regain his strength. Then he would reunite with his baby brother and never allow anything to separate them again.
LORRIE :evil :fire
Steffs - April 4, 2009 10:32 AM (GMT)
Fantastic start Lorrie
I could feel the vibrations....your writing is awesome...never disbelieve!
HE IS FREE !!!!!! *Shivers*
OH and how you torture us
COLD TEA YEUGGGGGGGGgggggggg and EWWWWWWWWWwwwww
jared.is.fit - April 4, 2009 12:29 PM (GMT)
WOW cool monster who made a mini earthquake WOOP
Great start Lorrie!!
:jawa :yoda :jawa2 :yoda2 :phoenix :tardis
haha i have never used any of these random new things b4
take it easy! :hug
im gd thanks...im at dance college at the moment...just doing 1 year and broke up yesterday for easter break :D how r u?
lcaron3 - April 4, 2009 02:04 PM (GMT)
Great start Lorrie :cheer
New monster! Causes little earthquakes ooohhhhhh interesting.
Waiting for the next part. :skip
trickie - April 4, 2009 04:26 PM (GMT)
Great start Lorrie,
Hmm...this monster...he is connected to the first monster yes?
I loved the first two installments of this trilogy, and was anxiously anticipating this follow up.
ziggy - April 4, 2009 10:51 PM (GMT)
:cheer The final part of the trilogy has started , and what a great first chapter! :D
OMG he is free and wants to feed!
Hope your pink bunny slippers are turbo charged for this story sis! And love the smilies you have used :rotfl
Take care hon :hug
charmed1of2 - April 5, 2009 09:45 AM (GMT)
Oceane - April 5, 2009 08:23 PM (GMT)
Chilling start Lorrie :o
I'm already hooked, I can't wait to read more :)
demon hunter - April 6, 2009 08:42 PM (GMT)
|QUOTE (charmed1of2 @ Apr 4 2009, 03:47 AM)|
| MONAAAAAAAAAA HOWS IT GOING GIRL??? |
Looooorrrrrieeeee!!! :lol: :lol:
how are you?? I hope everthing is alright!! I'm PMing you after i post!!!
Oh i can just imagine big bro's going to react when he finds out that his little bro is dead!!! :fire :evil :fire <---oh how i miss those emoticons!!!
what did you think of the monster at the end of the book eppy, i loved it!! :bouncy :skip
off to read that chapter again!!! :bow
Lo - April 7, 2009 01:51 AM (GMT)
Wow. This prologue was simply amazing. The first two sentences of the story, well, they just put me in awe. I love your writing. The imagery in this alone:
|The sweltering sun cast the neighborhood in a muggy haze. The reflection on the concrete roads added to the smothering heat, but Ray didnít move from his rocking chair on the front porch of his home and business establishment, since it was a Sunday and his gas station was closed.|
The first sentence was so pure, so wonderful. I could imagine everything you said with those words.
And then here, too:
|No sound was heard for the first minute or two except for a low muffled underground rumbling and a slight rustling of trees as if nature was holding its breath. Then suddenly came a tremendous roar, the sound deep and broad, as if the earth was a living creature and had at last found its voice.|
The descriptions are so amazing! You should never doubt yourself, because look at what you produce. This was so beautiful. I loved the metaphors, both were awesome.
And the ending of this prologue is so ominous. I can only imagine when he finds out what happened to his brother... :( That isn't going to go over well, I assume.
:hi5 You did it!
Raven524 - April 7, 2009 01:44 PM (GMT)
and the earth Shakes!!!
So the newest monster is ready to break out
I can't wait!!
Wonderful job Lorrie, seriously you awe me with your ability to describe a scene.
Now Lucy, get back here--Ethel needs her drink before you post the next one!
charmed1of2 - April 11, 2009 08:56 AM (GMT)
HAPPY EASTER EVERYONE!!!! I WILL BE POSTING CHAPTER ONE SOON, FOR SOME REASON WHEN I COPIED IT ON MY WORD ON MY LAP TOP I'M LOOKING AT A BUNCH OF STUFF UNDERLINED WITH GREEN
SO I'M GOING THROUGH IT TRYING TO FIX THINGS, STILL TRYING TO GET USE TO VISTA ON MY LAP TOP, DAMN THING DOESN'T WANT TO OBEY ME
...I'LL GET IT UP THOUGH ;) OH AND I WANT A CHOCOLATE COVERED SAMMY FOR EASTER SO SOMEONE DO A DROP OFF FOR ME
LORRIE :evil :fire :cloud9
jared.is.fit - April 11, 2009 09:07 AM (GMT)
lol Lorrie... ill send you one no probs but i want one too :D
there we go ;)
Have a great easter!
ziggy - April 11, 2009 09:09 AM (GMT)
Happy Easter Lorrie, hope the Easter bunny delivers a chocolate covered Sammy, but think he might be getting ready to go to Australia with Jensen to see Jules at the OzCon! :rotfl
Not sure if there is time to work out an elaborate kidnap plot and deliver him to you instead! You would have to share chocolate covered Sammy with me though, as there would be far too much chocolate for one person to lick off!
Have a great Easter sis and big hugs :hug from across the pond!
charmed1of2 - April 11, 2009 11:31 AM (GMT)
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG THAT TUB PIC!!!!!
STAND BACK I'M GOING IN!!!!!
HMMMMMMMMMMM THIS MIGHT TAKE AWHILE!!!!! HE'S GOT A LOT OF BODY TO LATHER UP..*COUGH* YEP I'LL JUST .....
OK GUTTER THOUGHTS :thud
LORRIE :evil :fire
Steffs - April 11, 2009 09:01 PM (GMT)
EASTER IS .................
cindy123 - April 11, 2009 10:36 PM (GMT)
:o Wonderful start Lorrie! So happy to see the next story. Very scary. That poor little critter though. :( Can't wait for more.
ziggy - April 11, 2009 11:35 PM (GMT)
Steffs - April 12, 2009 01:49 AM (GMT)
*Steffs peaks behind the shower curtain*
"You done with Sammy yet Lorrie I have a Dean here just waiting for me to...
HEY BLAME SARAH !!!!
Robin care to join??????
ziggy - April 12, 2009 10:40 AM (GMT)
|QUOTE (Steffs @ Apr 12 2009, 02:49 AM)|
| *Steffs peaks behind the shower curtain*|
"You done with Sammy yet Lorrie I have a Dean here just waiting for me to...
HEY BLAME SARAH !!!!
Robin care to join??????
charmed1of2 - April 12, 2009 11:41 AM (GMT)
:rotfl :rotfl YEP YOU CAN OFFICIALLY SAY THE SMUT HAS STARTED LMFAO
NOW WHAT DID I SAY ABOUT TOWELS AND CLOTHES ARE EVIL :evil ....DAMN NOW I HAVE TO ADD NOOO FLAGS ON DEAN TOO :rotfl YOU ARE ALL UNDER MY SPELL, YOU FEEL VERY SLEEPY, YOU WANT TO SEE SKIN...TOWELS, CLOTHES AND NOW FLAG COVERED DEAN ARE EVIL!!!!! :rotfl
AND I'M SORRY STEFF BUT I'M NOT DONE IN THE TUB, SARAH LATHER SAM'S BACK WILL YA??? OHHH DEAN JUST SAID HE'D GO TO THE :car WITH YOU STEFF...HURRY BEFORE ETHEL GETS HERE!!!!!
TAKE YOUR TIME MY SEXY BRIT NUMBER ONE, I JUST RAN ETHEL OVER IN MY WHEELCHAIR AGAIN...OOPS :rotfl ...SORRY ETHEL!!!! :rotfl :rotfl
LORRIE :evil :fire
ziggy - April 12, 2009 11:51 AM (GMT)
Pass me the soap sis and I will lather him up (think we can do that in more ways than one!) Think I missed a bit, pass me the sponge again hon
Think you need to give Ethel a shot, she's writhing in pain after you ran her over Is it safe to give Steffs a free run with Dean though! :rotfl
Steffs - April 12, 2009 12:06 PM (GMT)
:thumbsup THANKS LORRIE
*All steamed up and ready to go..... :car .....CENSORED*
:wave bye Ethel "I'll bring Dean back .......later.....much later......much much later.
charmed1of2 - April 12, 2009 12:46 PM (GMT)
OK HOLD ON, COME HERE ETHEL!!!
THERE STEFF THAT SHOULD BUY YOU SOME EXTRA DEAN TIME :rotfl
SARAH I LOST THE SPONGE GUESS WE HAVE TO RESORT TO
LORRIE :evil :fire
Raven524 - April 12, 2009 03:24 PM (GMT)
:melt :cry I missed all the fun :cry :cry
Wait! *opens trunk of Impala and pulls out inflatible doll* This should work as a distraction! Oh Steffs, Dean's waitng for you in the front seat :car :D
Now Dean, about kissing it and making it better--Lucy's chair left a lot of owies for you to uhm fix :woohoo