It's that time of week again happy readers! :)

No Excuses Part 1

Wow, talk about a serial murder spree from beyond the grave. The Winchesters are going to have an uphill battle if the doctors took the upper dermis, corneas, and bones besides the internal organs for transplantation. OMG - killer hair plugs! :lol:

“And you said that’s when the spike in murder-suicides began?”

Sam smirked. “Look who’s been paying attention in class.”


I just love that banter... is there anything better than when Sam's snark makes an appearance....

:hi5 chica!

Great start. I can't wait until tomorrow's update.

Awesome start so far! I can't wait to see what happens next, you've definitely got me hooked here. Funny how this episode almost seems to fit in w/several of the recent episodes on the actual series. :lol:

Amazing introduction as well, that scene in the prison cell was so vividly written it was easy for me to imagine the way everything played out.

Better warn the audience if Elton John tours again! (Snigger.)

Steph! Your episode finally "aired"!!! Considering you wrote this about three hundred years ago (slight exaggeration), your patience is finally rewarded!!!

Now, come on, Iris...it was more like 299 years ago! :lol: :lol:

Thanks, everyone!

I am so happy that you are enjoying this and I am so happy for you guys to be reading it. I've been on pins and needles all day, just waiting till I got home so I could see what you guys thought!

Thanks a lot and I hope you enjoy part two tomorrow! :wave

Serial killer's body parts possessing people, creepy :o
I enjoy so much the banter between the brothers, always make me smile :D
What a cliffhanger, so dramatic.
Terrific start Steph, you get me already hooked, I can't wait for tomorrow.

oooohhh, this ep looks to be sooo awesome!!! I can't till thursday for the next update - In Aus, the second installment always comes on thursdays, unfortunately - but hey, it's VS and well worth the wait, I love this ep so far, well don SnSam!!!!

And here is part 2!

No Excuses Part 2

Nice chapter so far! Man are those awesome cliffhangers so far, one can only imagine what Mia has planned this time. But judging by the age of Hines' victims I'd say Sam is in serious danger. Not to mention that Mia's back in town & screwing w/Dean, meaning that she obviously has something horrible planned for the both of them. :fire

Sam figured out who was the donor but unfortunately people're still dying and now they must dealing with Mia who's back with a vengeance.
Terrific episode so far, can't wait to read more.

i luv it when the boys tease each other its so cute n funny

mia has done it now u do not threaten to hurt sam n u definitely do not touch the impala unless u r looking for an ass kicking by dean winchester

Wonderful!!!! :P
No excuses Part 3


:rolleyes:

Thanks!!! :clap

And more muhahahaha.... :evil


No Excuses Part 3

oooooooooo me likey very interetsing
OMG Sammmmmm
lol
can't wait for more
OMg mia is Back
eppppp
wonder what she is up to
I love protective Dean when he is talking to mia

hehehe
i luv how dean could easily piss mia off

but sam :o
noooooooooooooooooooo :melt

Awesome...what more can I say really?

OMG Sammmmmm :thud
Excellent !!!!
please, please,please, no excuses part 4
:rolleyes:

:evil :clap

Wow, thank you so much guys! :D :D :D


I am so happy you are still enjoying this! It really brightens my day to know that you guys are responding so well to this. I want to thank everyone who is leaving a comment and those who are just reading!

I really appreciate it!


And yes, I know I've been leaving you guys with some bitch of cliffhangers but look at the brightside...it all wraps up tomorrow! :lol: :roll :rotfl

Tell me Erin didn't just shoot Sam? :o This has gotta be one of your most agonizing evil-cliffhangers yet! A bitch of an evil cliffhanger? Heck, yeah! This one practically takes the cake in that department. :fire Good job, I you really have me hooked now!

Any chance that I can bribe you to post part four sooner? :halo

I heartily agree, and as for the bribe, brilliant idea, I mean, take pity on us, I know I'm DYING to see what happens next!!! Can't wait for the last part!!!!

go SnSam, you rock!! :bow Great writing!!

Sam? :o :o :o
Can't wait for the last part.

I hope Sammy's all right. I can't wait until chapter 4.

And here it is! The much awaited chapter four!!!


No Excuses Part 4

Terrific finish SnSam. It had to be hard for the boys losing Erin to Mia. I can't wait for the next episode.

Thanks, Adder!

I am so happy that you enjoyed this episode! I had so much fun writing Mia as a total bitch and I had a sick pleasure in killing a completely innocent victim. Can we say Winchester angst and guilt, anyone? :lol: :lol:

THAT WAS AWSOME :clap WELL DONE

mia is such a evil scary, bitch the boys so have to kick her ass n hard
(ew dirty)

:clap Wonderful
congratulations :thumb Great end sup :cheer :bow
:bouncy I will be waiting for more episodes, please ok!

:wave

holy crap
OMG
wow
OMG
wow
yeah that is al i can come up with

OMG!Mia killed Erin, what a stunning finale :o
Riveting story, Steph, you got me captivated start to end, you did a terrific work :cheer
Can't wait for the next episode :)

Thanks again, everyone!

I am so happy that you enjoyed this episode. And yeah, I have to have Mia kill Erin because it just wouldn't have been her if she didn't. We all know what a total bitch she is... :fire

Plus, it's the one true way to make the boys feel like total crap about themselves...


All I can tell you guys is to brace yourself for next week...It's Irismay's Heaven and Earth and it is one hell of a ride she's gonna take you on!

Why is everyone always picking on those poor boys??? :cry

Great story. Once again, I couldn't stop reading once I started. But I couldn't believe that you killed that Erin!! That Mia is such a demonic bitch!!!!! Please tell me that payback is coming her way this season cause I so want to see that bitch gutted. Errrrrrrr.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Awesome Story.