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Title: The Day the World Went Away
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Dean5339 - December 2, 2008 04:26 AM (GMT)
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Dean5339 - December 2, 2008 04:28 AM (GMT)
TEASER

OPEN TO:

BLACK

Hear the sounds of WIND HOWLING. PEOPLE SCREAMING. DEMONIC GROWLS!

FADE IN:

A BLOOD RED SKY. ROTTING CORPSES. DESTROYED BUILDINGS.

Quickly FLY BACK to...

INT. HOSPITAL - SEVENTH FLOOR - NIGHT

Behind DEAN’s back. Dean stares out over HELL ON EARTH. Devastated. The hospital is decaying, rotting away. Paint peels. Ceiling lights hang off balance.

CREAK. Dean turns around and scans the area. Nothing. CREAK. Dean’s eyes dart above to the VENTILATION SYSTEM.

As the ceiling LIGHTS BLINK. The VENTILATION SHAFT is CLAWED open. Dean watches in horror. Silence... Then THREE PYGMY DEMONS charge out.

Dean thrusts his GUN forward, aims... CLICK! Dean’s eyes go wide. The pygmies close in on him. Dean stares down at the gun, he takes off RUNNING.

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The Pygmies CHASE Dean through the halls. Narrowly closing in. Dean takes a HARD LEFT into the STAIRWAY.

INT. HOSPITAL - STAIRWAY - CONTINUOUS

Dean leans against the opposite side of the door. POUND! The door is RAMMED into over and over again! Sweat drips down Dean’s face. He moves away from the door and sprints down.

The door BURSTS open. The Pygmies begin their descent. Some drop down. Some crawl along the walls. Others slink downwards. Their like spiders from hell!

Dean continues on his way. He looks behind to see the Pygmies closing in on him! He reaches the first floor, KICKS the door open and runs through.

INT. HOSPITAL - MAIN FLOOR - CONTINUOUS

Dean glances around the main floor. Dead bodies are sprawled over the ground. Burned to a crisp.

FLASH CUT:
INT. HOSPITAL - MAIN FLOOR - NIGHT - FLASH BACK

Hospital STAFF and PATIENTS run for the exit as they catch on fire. Their SCREAMS OF AGONY flood the halls. They reach out in horror as they fall to their knees.

FLASH CUT:
INT. HOSPITAL - MAIN FLOOR - NIGHT

Dean looks at the stairway door to see the Pygmy Demons closing in on him. One LEAPS and CLINGS to the door, it STARES through directly at him and grins.

Dean runs. He follows the exit signs as the Pygmies follow him. He spots a GLASS CASE next to a FIRE EXTINGUISHER containing an AXE.

Dean GRABS the fire extinguisher. Spins around and fires. WSSHH! Smoke shoots out and covers the halls. Dean RAMS the extinguisher against the glass case. GLASS SHATTERS. He GRABS the axe.

The Pygmy Demons continue to make their way through the newly formed fog. Dean RAMS the axe against one. ERAGGH! It lets out a blood curdling scream. Dean SWINGS again.

The Pygmy Demons are eliminated one by one in what can only be described as a demonic massacre. Dean takes a deep breath, exhales and wipes the sweat away from his forehead. He drops the axe and walks away.

Further down the hall the EXIT DOORS loom over head. Dean slowly makes his way over, pushes the door open and walks out.

EXT. HOSPITAL - CONTINUOUS

Dean witnesses TURNED OVER AMBULANCES, OBLITERATED CARS, and more DEAD BODIES. Dean stumbles out, overtaken by grief.

FLASH CUT:
EXT. HOSPITAL - NIGHT - FLASH BACK

Hospital STAFF and PATIENTS charge out of the hospital screaming in horror. WSSHH! A cloud of BLACK SMOKE thrusts through blowing over cars and ambulances. Pygmy Demons and citizens draped in cloaks close in on them.

EXT. HOSPITAL - NIGHT

Dean’s eyes dart around taking in the entire scene behind the gates. The destruction. The mayhem. The chaos. The Hell.

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END OF TEASER

ACT ONE


EXT. HELL ON EARTH - NIGHT

ROTTING SKULL. We angle up to reveal Dean walking through the ground littered with bones. Dean spots a dead man in his early thirties. He bends down and takes off his shirt.

LATER:

Dean stands back up, fully clothed, his eyes scan the area. He hears a WOMAN SCREAMING. Dean takes off towards the sound.

INT. ABANDONED APARTMENT - NIGHT

The walls are torn apart. The WOMAN is pinned against the wall by a YOUNG MAN in his late teens.

WOMAN
Please, I have a child...

YOUNG MAN
Where are they?

WOMAN
I don’t know! I swear to God! I don’t know.

YOUNG MAN
(Amused)
God? You swear to God? Lady, God doesn’t exist.

DEAN (O.S.)
Hey!

The Young Man turns to see Dean standing in the door way facing him.

DEAN
Let her go.

YOUNG MAN
I’ve never seen you around before. You’re not one of them.

DEAN
One of who?

The Young Man lifts his hand. Dean raises off the ground.

DEAN
Oh crap.

The Young Man FLINGS Dean off to the side. Dean RAMS against the wall. The Young Man turns back to the woman and sneers.

YOUNG MAN
So, where were we?

Dean blinks, hands roam the ground. He discovers a SHARD OF GLASS, picks it up and stands. He CHARGES at the Young Man. Dean STABS the glass shard into his back. The Young Man falls to his knees and plummets over.

DEAN
(To Woman)
Are you okay?

The woman doesn’t reply. Dean checks the young man - dead. The woman walks away.

DEAN
What happened here?

Dean looks back up, the woman is gone. He leaves the building.

EXT. ABANDONED APARTMENT - CONTINUOUS

An OLD MAN dressed in rags hurries over towards him.

OLD MAN
David? David?

DEAN
No, not David old timer.

The Old Man grabs onto him.

OLD MAN
Do you know where David is? I need to find David!

DEAN
No, sorry. I don’t know.

The Old Man walks away. Dean watches on.

OLD MAN
David? David? Where’s David?

Dean turns, eyes dart around the area. He catches a brief glimpse of a WINGED DEMON flying over head. The ground RUMBLES. Dean struggles to maintain balance. He turns to see a giant WINGED DEMON staring down at him.

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Dean runs. The winged demon charges towards him plowing through buildings in its wake.

EXT. TOWN SQUARE - CONTINUOUS

Dean emerges in Town Square, a wide expansive open space. People scatter for their lives. Winged Demons lunge towards them. A winged demon pegs one to the ground while it feasts from his flesh. Others carry their food off with them.

Baby winged demons begin their descent in a cloud of fury. Dean runs through the horrifying scene. A winged demon GRABS hold of him and LIFTS him off the ground.

Dean struggles to free himself from the demon’s grip. His right hand slips lose. He reaches down towards a roof and GRABS onto the VENTILATION PIPES. A pipe breaks off. Dean RAMS it against the winged captor. ERAGH! The winged demon dives. Dean lets go.

Dean plummets against the roof and rolls to his side. Stands. Dusts himself off. Turns to come face to face with a hovering winged demon. The winged demon DARTS towards him. He jumps to the side.

Dean lowers himself back down to the ground. He watches as the winged demons claim its victims. Dean hides against the corner of a building. He notices a dead body with a MACHINE GUN.

Dean RUSHES towards the gun. Through the scene. He DIVES and GRABS it. ROLLS. A winged demon descends on him. BANG! BLOOD OOZES.

Dean stands back up, spirals around, gun drawn. Survival instincts taking over. BANG! BANG! BANG! Dean fires off rounds of ammunition.

Suddenly more gun shots ring out. Dean turns to see MEN WITH MACHINE GUNS. Their being led by a battle hardened thirty year old LEADER.

LEADER
Take them out!

Dean fights by their side. The winged demons take off for the sky. A couple of men with Machine Guns are ripped to shreds. They shoot the demons out of the sky, their bodies whirl towards the ground below. Finally, they’re all dead.

The men raise their machine guns into the air. Fire. Let out a battle cry. The leader nears Dean. Sizes him up.

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LEADER
What’s your name stranger?

Dean turns to face the leader.

DEAN
Dean.

LEADER
Dean.
(Extends his hand)
I’m David.

David overlooks his men and nods his head.

DAVID
Let’s go home.
(To Dean)
You’re welcomed to join us.

Off Dean trying to make sense of things--

EXT. HELL ON EARTH - NIGHT

David leads his troops over the wreckage. Dean hurries over to David’s side.

DEAN
Where are we going?

DAVID
Back to the fortress. Since the war began I organized the community together underground. I offer them food, clothing on their backs and a safe place to live.
(Beat)
This war is nearly impossible to win. But, if you give up, they win.

The sun begins to rise in the background. David and his men bend down and begin to shovel away at the dirt to reveal a STORM CELLAR DOOR. They open the door and descend into the darkness.

INT. RESISTANCE LAIR - ENTRANCE - CONTINUOUS

More MEN WITH GUNS are stationed at the front. David walks past them and opens a PADLOCKED DOOR. They walk through.

INT. RESISTANCE LAIR - MAIN - CONTINUOUS

A sprawling lair with bustling activity filled with men, women and children.

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David smiles, pats Dean on the back.

DAVID
It gives you something to fight for, doesn’t it?

David walks away. Dean walks through the lair and checks the area around him.

A young MOTHER watches over her two small SONS playing a game of tag.

SON 1
You’re it.

SON 2
No, you’re it jerk!

SON 1
Bitch.

Dean smirks and walks over to an opened space. He sits down and leans against the wall. MARTY, fifteen, sits down next to him.

MARTY
Hey, you went out with them?

DEAN
Hmm? Oh, yeah.

MARTY
How bad has it gotten?

Dean glances over at Marty confused.

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MARTY
I remember the day the world went away, people screaming, dying, the monsters. My parents died. David took me in. I haven’t been on the surface in ten years. Hardly any of us have.
(Beat)
I’m ready. I want to fight, but they say I’m too young. I’m not.

DEAN
Do you remember any of the details of how things happened?

MARTY
I was five.
(Beat)
Don’t you remember?

DEAN
I wasn’t there.

Marty eyes Dean curiously. HENRY, mid twenties, spots Marty and Dean.

HENRY
Is he bothering you?

DEAN
No.

HENRY
Come on Marty, get back to work.

Marty nods his head okay.

MARTY
(To Dean)
I’m ready.

Marty gets up and walks towards the back room filled with guns. Dean turns to face Henry.

DEAN
You don’t let them leave?

HENRY
(Corrects him)
We don’t take risks.
(Beat)
If someone truly wants to leave, we let them go. Otherwise, we’re just keeping them alive.

Henry walks away. Dean stretches back out and closes his eyes.

INT. RESISTANCE LAIR - DAVID’S ROOM - DAY

David sits on a caved in rock staring off into the distance. PATRICK, thirties, enters.

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PATRICK
Are you sure we can trust him?

DAVID
He fought with us.

PATRICK
You heard his name.

DAVID
Dean.

PATRICK
(Nods)
Dean, you think he might be the Dean?

DAVID
I don’t know.

PATRICK
What if he’s in league with Letum? We need to be sure.

DAVID
I’m the one in charge here. Trust me. I would never put our people at risk.

INT. RESISTANCE LAIR - MAIN - DAY

A ball rolls over to Dean. A small BOY hurries towards it. Dean picks it up and hands it to him.

BOY
Thanks.

DEAN
No problem, what’s your name?

BOY
Sam.

DEAN
(Pained)
Sammy.

BOY
(Angry)
It’s Sam.

Dean grins and nods his head. The boy walks away. SAM WINCHESTER, thirty five, walks over to Dean and bends down.

SAM
Dean, where were you all these years?

DEAN
I don’t know.

Sam disappears in a flash. Patrick approaches Dean.

PATRICK
David wants to see you.

Dean stands and follows Patrick.

INT. RESISTANCE LAIR - DAVID’S ROOM - CONTINUOUS

Dean enters. David glances over at him.

DAVID
Take a seat, I have a feeling we have a lot to talk about.

Off Dean’s look of apprehension--

BLACK OUT!

END OF ACT ONE

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INT. RESISTANCE LAIR - MAIN - DAY

David exhales and leans forward, he looks down upon Dean.

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DAVID
I remember when it happened. I was at home, taking care of my children. The alarms blared. It was unlike anything I’ve ever heard before. I ran out to get them, but they were no where to be found. The sky began to bleed. The ground began to rip apart. The sounds, inhuman growls. It was right then that I knew that the world was coming to an end.

DEAN
Did you ever find them? Your children?

DAVID
They were gone. They got them. They got everybody. In an instant we all became an endangered species. Funny huh? Never figured it would happen, at least not in my lifetime.

DEAN
Where did it all go wrong?

DAVID
Letum took control over the country. We all trusted him. By the time we figured out his true intentions, it was already too late.

DEAN
What about the President?

DAVID
Reynolds? I don’t know. Way I figure it, he got played too. Like we all did. That guy was a true American hero, can’t imagine him ever willingly giving in to Letum.

DEAN
I still can’t believe I was gone for ten years.

DAVID
Do you remember what happened?

DEAN
All I know is that when I woke up, the world wasn’t the same.

DAVID
Has a way of getting to you, doesn’t it?

Dean nods.

DAVID
Yeah. After a couple of months I started organizing people together. Alone they could break us, but together there’s always hope. We started to fight back, but truth be told most of the time it seems useless. My men keep dying and we’re no further than we were ten years ago.

DEAN
I lost track of my brother.

David lights up, on guard.

DAVID
What’s his name?

DEAN
Sam Winchester.

David shivers, he exhales and closes his eyes. He shakes his head.

DAVID
Can’t say I’ve seen him.

Dean sighs. He stands up and pats himself down.

DEAN
This fight. I’m in. Whatever it takes, I’m in.

Dean leaves David’s room. David watches him go.

INT. RESISTANCE LAIR - WEAPONS ROOM - DAY

MUSIC: "BORN TO RAISE HELL" MOTORHEAD


A dusty concave of a room filled with weaponry ranging from Medieval swords to guns. The room is worked by teenage guys ranging from fourteen to nineteen years old. Some arrange and take care of the guns, while others forge swords. The music blares from a cassette player.

Sparks fly as Marty forges a sword. He’s pushed aside. Marty stops and turns to see CRAIG LARKIN. Larkin’s the classic grade A jerk.

MARTY
What do you want Craig?

CRAIG
Who says I want anything? Stop taking up breathing space, orphan.

Craig moves past Marty. Marty clenches his teeth, his face turns red.

DEAN (O.S.)
He’s just a jerk, don’t let him get to you.

Marty turns to face Dean, embarrassed. He continues to forge the sword.

MARTY
Like you’d understand.

DEAN
(He smirks)
I would, actually.
(Beat)
What are you working on?

Marty picks up the sword, swings it around, hands it to Dean.

DEAN
Pretty good workmanship.

MARTY
Pretty good? I’m the best.

DEAN
I hear you there. I used to work all the time in my father’s workshop.

MARTY
(Interested)
Yeah? What’d you do?

DEAN
Melt silver into bullets. Put together weapons. Same old, same old.

MARTY
You fought these things back then?

DEAN
My whole life. Motorhead, huh?

MARTY
Motorhead? Is that a comic book character?

Dean chuckles, amazed.

DEAN
The music. Motorhead.

MARTY
Oh. We just listen to whatever tapes are found out there on the surface. Have a lot of them.

DEAN
Looks like primitive technology does come through.

MARTY
Hmm?

DEAN
Never mind. Can I see those tapes?

MARTY
Yeah, sure.

Marty hurries away, Dean follows close behind.

INT. RESISTANCE LAIR - DAVID’S ROOM - DAY

David paces around the lair. Patrick enters.

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PATRICK
He’s him, isn’t he?

David nods.

PATRICK
What are we going to do?

DAVID
I don’t know. I’ll figure something out.

David reaches down and picks up a dagger.

PATRICK
Our men just returned with a report from the outer rims.

David glances up at him.

DAVID
And?

PATRICK
There’s an old weapons cache out near Letum’s Fortress. It’s loaded.

DAVID
Then we’re going before it gets dark. Gather all the men together.

PATRICK
What about Dean?

DAVID
He’s coming with us.

David slides the dagger into his pocket.

DAVID
It will give me more time to asses the situation.

INT. RESISTANCE LAIR - EQUIPMENT ROOM - DAY

MUSIC: "WAITING FOR DARKNESS" OZZY OSBOURNE


The room is filled with scraps and various equipment. Light fixtures hang from the ceiling providing a dim brightness. Dean and Marty hunch over a cassette player blasting music. Cassette tapes are lined up next to it.

DEAN
I can say one thing about the future, at least the good music has remained instead of all of that new age emo crap.

MARTY
Emo?

DEAN
Never mind, different time. So what do you do if you’ve never left?

MARTY
School and work.

DEAN
They still make you learn?

MARTY
Yeah, total waste of time if you ask me. I mean it’s not like any of that stuff is ever going to impact our lives. Besides, all it does is reinforce what we don’t know, the world we’ll never know. Kinda sucks.

DEAN
I’m sorry.

MARTY
For what? It wasn’t your fault.

Dean flips through the cassette tapes.

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DEAN
I’d like to believe that was true. But, I made way too many mistakes in my life. And now I’m paying for it.

Marty glances to the side to see ELIZABETH, a fairly attractive teenage girl, he smiles as he watches her pass by.

DEAN
You two a couple?

MARTY
Hmm? Oh no. No way. She doesn’t even know I exist.

DEAN
I could give you some pointers.

MARTY
Really? You’d do that? Thanks.

DEAN
No sweat. You seem like a cool kid.

Marty smiles, looking up to Dean. Patrick enters.

PATRICK
Winchester.

Dean glances over at Patrick.

PATRICK
Come on, we’re moving out.

DEAN
Where?

PATRICK
Just follow me.

Dean nods, gets up and follows Patrick out.

MARTY
Hey...

Dean stops and looks back at Marty.

MARTY
When you get back, can you tell me what it’s like, out there?

DEAN
Sure thing.

Dean leaves. Marty glances over at the cassette player.

INT. RESISTANCE LAIR - MAIN - DAY

Patrick guides Dean towards David’s Room. Soldiers file in. Families watch as they pass by.

INT. RESISTANCE LAIR - DAVID’S ROOM - DAY

David stands strong as he overlooks his men. He notices Dean and Patrick, nods in their direction.

DAVID
As some of you might have heard, we just got word about a weapon’s cache in the outer rims. It’s loaded and god knows we need to re-stock on our ammunition. We’re going now, so we can get there before night falls. You know the drill men, load up, we leave in five.

INT. RESISTANCE LAIR - GUN ROOM - DAY

The soldiers walk through the weapon room and equip themselves with the weaponry. The teenagers watch on in awe and respect. Dean grabs a gun and dagger. David stops beside him.

DAVID
Ready for this Winchester?

Dean nods his head, born ready.

EXT. HELL ON EARTH - WRECKAGE - DAY

The soldiers trek along the wreckage. The sun shines in the distance scorching the land below. Pygmy demons scavenge the area for dead humans and fight amongst themselves.

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DAVID
They have poor eye sight. They’ll only truly sense your presence if you show fear in your eyes. They’re just as afraid of you as you are of them. It’s the big ones you need to worry about.

DEAN
You mean these things get bigger?

DAVID
Not pygmies, the other creatures that lie within hell.

EXT. HELL ON EARTH - TOWN - DAY

The soldiers travel through a ruined decaying town. There’s signs of little life. Dean takes everything in.

DEAN
Why don’t they live-

DAVID
It’s their choice. Some of them are deserters. Others just never wanted to let go, even if meant their own survival.

An African American soldier stops and peers around the corner. This is MITCHELL.

MITCHELL
Sir, there’s a a couple of mutants up ahead.

DEAN
Mutants?

MITCHELL
People with powers. Haven’t you ever read the X-Men before?

Dean moves through the pack and stops up ahead. He leans against one of the buildings as he watches a group of powered beings approach. One rides atop a black steed. The horseman jumps off of the horse and nears a town house. A small boy and his parents are dragged out of the house.

DEAN
We need to do something.

DAVID
Dean, stay back.

DEAN
What? They’re going to kill them!

DAVID
We can’t take them head on, there always needs to be a plan. They’re too powerful. Five of them alone is an entire battalion. Especially when they have -

David stops in his tracks. Dean notices.

DEAN
Have what?

Dean’s eyes dart back over to the family and powered beings. The horseman steps closer coming into view - it’s SAMUEL! Dean’s eyes widen with shock.

DEAN
No. It can’t be.

A scar runs down Samuel’s face, long hair blowing in the wind. Filled with darkness. The boy whimpers, his parents beg for mercy. Samuel puts out his hand. The boy begins to choke, he grasps at his neck as air is sucked out of his lungs.

DEAN
No.

The boy’s lifeless body plummets. The parents cry as they hold onto their son. Samuel turns and gets onto his horse. Powered beings brutally torture the family. The black steed rides off.

DEAN
Please tell me that I didn’t just see that.

David rests his hand on Dean’s shoulder.

DAVID
I’m sorry.

Dean narrows his eyes, conflicted, and trudges on. The soldiers turn to David. David sighs and nods his head. The soldiers continue onwards.

EXT. HELL ON EARTH - WRECKAGE - DAY

Fly over Hell on Earth, seeing the soldiers traveling across the ruins and human remains. Patrick and David stay off to the back.

PATRICK
What do you think he’s going to do? Now that he knows?

David doesn’t answer. Patrick nods, leaving it alone.

INT. APARTMENT COMPLEX - MAIN - NIGHT

The apartment is sprawled out with gaps in the walls. Cobwebs hang from the ceiling, everything’s covered in mold. Eerie whispers emanate from the darkness. The soldiers wander through, guns trained everywhere. Mitchell motions ahead.

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MITCHELL
It’s just a little further.

HENRY
This place sounds like it’s infested.

Dean turns to face David, quizzically.

DAVID
Once these things find a nesting ground, they stay there.

Mitchell pushes two double doors open.

INT. APARTMENT COMPLEX - BALL ROOM - NIGHT

The Ball Room is expansive and grandiose. Long since abandoned with a chandelier hanging from the ceiling. Shadows dart across the walls. David puts out his hands, signaling for his men to be quiet. Scampering footsteps can be heard circling around the room. The soldiers aim their guns.

DAVID
Get ready...

Dean aims his gun, not knowing what to expect. Shadows creep out across the curtains of the stage. The tablecloths ruffle in the wind. REEARGH!!!!

DAVID
Whatever you do, stay together.

The soldiers circle around each other. Suddenly SPIDER DEMONS spring towards the soldiers baring their fangs. One of the soldiers shoots. Too late. The spider’s claw away and eat him alive.

Another soldier opens fire. A LONG SLIMY GREEN TENTACLE whips out from underneath a table and pulls him under. Bullets shoot out from his gun and hit the CHANDELIER. It plummets to the ground and SHATTERS upon impact. Soldiers dive for cover.

The man brutally screams as blood gushes everywhere. Spider Demons lay siege upon the separated soldiers. Bullets whiz through the air.

The tables lift off the ground and topple over. Tentacles arc everywhere as a gigantic demon arcs up. It looks like a star fish from hell. It bares it’s bloody fangs, multiple sets, like a human meat grinder.

DEAN
What the hell is that thing?

DAVID
Lay fire!!!

BANG! BANG! BANG! The starfish growls in agony. Suddenly foot steps scatter across the room as thousands upon thousands of spider demons rush towards them from all sides.

DAVID
Run!

The soldiers run for the exit. A couple are pulled back and fall to the ground. Henry opens fire, clicks dead.

HENRY
Ah hell.

Henry equips his SWORD and swings at one of the spider demons cutting it in half. Blood oozes and the spider demons descend upon it’s fallen.

INT. APARTMENT COMPLEX - MAIN - CONTINUOUS

The remaining soldiers exit the ball room and close the double doors behind them. David notices a rusting metal bar. He picks it up and SHOVES it through the door handles. He turns to Mitchell.

DAVID
Is there another way?

DEAN
Wait, you’re still going to go through with this?

DAVID
We have no other choice.

MITCHELL
It’s narrow, a maze, we won’t stand a chance.

DAVID
Lead the way.

David and Dean lock eyes. Mitchell leads the soldiers further down the hall.

INT. APARTMENT COMPLEX - NARROW HALLS - NIGHT

The halls are torn apart with rubble and decay. Human skulls align the ground along with rotting corpses. Flies buzz around one of the dead bodies. David, Patrick, Henry, Mitchell and Dean storm through the halls with their guns raised.

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PATRICK
They’re here.

DEAN
How can you tell?

PATRICK
One used me as a vessel couple of years ago, ever since then I could sense their presence - everywhere.

The lights turn off throwing the halls into pitch black. Sounds of demonic creatures closing in. Heavy breathing. Soldiers running. Dean equips the light on his gun. Circles around, no one’s in sight.

DEAN
David?! Patrick?! Henry?! Mitchell?!

Dean hears the sounds of their voices calling out to each other from a distance. Everyone’s separated!

HENRY:
Walks through the halls, Sword raised, light shines across. A shadow darts by behind him. Henry spins around. Nothing. A DEMONIC GORILLA, bearing the same features as the Spider Demons, leaps out and tackles him to the ground.

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PATRICK:
Hears Henry’s screams. He spins around, aiming his gun in every direction. The demonic creatures begin to call out to each other as though communicating.

DAVID:
Listens in. Fear shines clearly across his eyes.

MITCHELL:
Wanders through the halls. He stops at a crossroads in the path. Sounds of demons at every corner. Mitchell gulps, sweat pours down his face. DEMONIC GROWLS. A figure CHARGES towards Mitchell. Mitchell opens fire. Blood splatters. The figure plummets.

Mitchell shines the light down to reveal HENRY’S CORPSE.

DEAN:
Runs through the corridors. A shadow darts just ahead. Dean rounds the corner and aims his gun. The creature is no where in sight. Suddenly the demon appears behind him and CHARGES.

BANG!!! Dean spins around to spot the dead demon. David holds the smoking gun.

DAVID
Always watch your back.

DEAN
Must be getting rusty.

DAVID
No, you’re getting emotional.

A tense stand off. Dean breaks it off.

DEAN
Have you seen Patrick?

Another gun shot ECHOES throughout the halls. Dean and David scan the area. Patrick appears approaching them from the far end.

PATRICK
I think that’s the last of them.

DAVID
And our men?

Patrick doesn’t answer. They turn to see Mitchell.

MITCHELL
Henry didn’t make it.

DAVID
Are you sure he’s dead?

MITCHELL
Positive. I saw his rotting corpse. Still want to find that weapons cache?

David exhales, bites his lower lip and nods. Mitchell walks past him.

MITCHELL
Then follow me.

As Mitchell walks by his eyes flash black!

BLACK OUT!

END OF ACT TWO

Dean5339 - December 4, 2008 04:51 AM (GMT)
ACT THREE

INT. RESISTANCE LAIR - MAIN - DAY

David, Patrick, Dean and Mitchell enter the Main Compound of the Resistance Lair with guns and ammunition slung across their backs. The women and children search for their fathers, they’re no where in sight. The teenage guys approach them and solemnly take the equipment. Dean bumps up against David.

DEAN
(Under his breath)
You and me, we need to have a little talk.

Dean walks away. David follows him.

INT. RESISTANCE LAIR - DAVID’S ROOM - CONTINUOUS

David enters and pulls back the curtain. Dean turns around.

DEAN
When were you planning on telling me?

DAVID
When we knew that you could be trusted.

DEAN
I asked you very specifically if you had any knowledge of brother’s whereabouts and you flat out lied to me.

DAVID
Did you get a good look at what he’s become when you were gone?

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Dean storms over to David.

DEAN
You want to say something, then say it.

DAVID
All I’m saying is your brother, he’s not the same guy any more. And the sooner you realize that. The better. He’s one of them.

DEAN
No. He’s not. I can save him.

DAVID
I’m sorry to be blunt here, but you were gone for ten years. Where were you for all that time? Taking a leisurely vacation while the rest of the world went to hell?

DEAN
I didn’t ask for this!

DAVID
No. But, you didn’t do a damn worth to prevent it either. When Samuel was growing up...

DEAN
It’s Sam.

DAVID
Not anymore. When Samuel was growing up, weren’t there any signs that just maybe there wasn’t something right with your brother? In the head. That he might just go coastal one day and decide to help bring about the end.

DEAN
That’s not the Sam I knew.

DAVID
He and his band of mutant freaks go from town to town killing every first born male son.

DEAN
Why?

DAVID
Because they can grow up, become strong, fight back. Win. He’s killed thousands since the war began. Legend has it that he had a brother, Dean, that one day he just vanished and Sam gave into the dark side because he couldn’t take it anymore. No one knew who this Dean character was or what side he was on. We didn’t know if we could trust you.

DEAN
No? Now what do you think?

DAVID
I think you’re a good fighter, beyond that, I’d say you’re a danger to yourself and others. You’re honestly telling me that it never crossed your mind to check to see if there might be some demon lurking behind you or did you just not care if you lived or died?

DEAN
That’s not fair.

DAVID
No what’s not fair is that a large part of this is your war. Samuel, your brother, helped bring the world to its knees. He was an orchestral part of the plan. And you did nothing to stop him.

DEAN
I’m back and I intend to do something now.

DAVID
It’s too late.

DEAN
I know, but maybe things can change.

DAVID
Then you’ll kill him.

DEAN
No. There’s still a way to get through to him. There has to be.

DAVID
Sometimes for the betterment of humanity, you need to be ready to make sacrifices. I’ve made mine. When the time comes, can you?

DEAN
I don’t know.

DAVID
Then, I think we’re done here.

David leaves the room. Dean sighs and takes a seat. Alone.

INT. RESISTANCE LAIR - GUN ROOM - DAY

Mitchell enters the gun room, sweat pours down his face as he watches the teenage guys and young men put the guns away. His eyes flash black. He topples over and falls to his knees. Screams in agony. The guys rush over to his side.

TEENAGE GUY
Mitchell, are you okay?

Mitchell begins to laugh. His bones protrude out of his skin.

MITCHELL
Just fine.

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Mitchell stands and GRABS the teenage guy by his throat. He twists the neck and the guy falls to the ground. The flesh explodes off of Mitchell’s body revealing a large demonic creature.

The teenage guys rush for the weaponry, within seconds the demon charges straights towards them. The demon snaps another guy’s neck... then he senses it... a small boy hiding underneath the weaponry... the demon snarls. Suddenly, he’s hit by a rock. The demon turns around to see Elizabeth!

ELIZABETH
Get away from my brother.

The demon snarls as it CHARGES at her.

INT. RESISTANCE LAIR - DAVID’S ROOM - CONTINUOUS

David leaves a room, he looks over at Elizabeth and notices the demon. The demon nears it’s target. Marty LUNGES at Elizabeth and they slide across the ground. The women and children scream in horror. Dean and Patrick quickly enter. David aims his gun at the demon. BANG!

The demon topples over, blood spills out. Marty takes several deep breaths as he holds onto Elizabeth. He loses his cool. He helps her up.

MARTY
Are you... uh... you know... okay?

ELIZABETH
Yes. Thank you...

MARTY
Good, so I’ll uh, see you around.

Marty weakly smiles and shyly walks away. David approaches the gun room and looks in. Two guys are dead. David rams his fist against the door.

DAVID
God damn it!!!

David slides the gun back into his pocket and approaches his room. Rattled. He passes Dean, whispers into his ear.

DAVID
See the war you’ve put into our hands.

David enters his room, slides the curtains in place. Dean glances over in the direction Marty went.

INT. RESISTANCE LAIR - EQUIPMENT ROOM - DAY

MUSIC: "TOO LATE" BLACK SABBATH


Marty listens to the cassette player. On edge.

DEAN (O.S.)
Hey.

Marty jumps, glances over to Dean.

DEAN
Took quite a hit back there, are you going to be okay?

Marty shrugs his shoulders, nods.

MARTY
I’ll be fine.

Dean looks to his side. He sees Elizabeth entering the room. Dean glances back at Marty and smirks.

DEAN
Well, I gotta get back to work.

Dean turns and leaves the room. Elizabeth sits down across from Marty.

ELIZABETH
Thank you, for saving my life.

MARTY
It’s no problem, really.

Elizabeth and Marty move in for the kiss. Dean watches on, he grins.

DEAN
Way to go kid.

Dean walks away.

EXT. HELL ON EARTH - CEMETERY - DAY

A cemetery cuts through a narrow woods filled with dead trees. Samuel rides atop the black steed as he makes his way through the cemetery. The grave stones diverge into a path leading to a mountainous gateway.

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A metallic demonic beast spreads across the face of the mountain out lining the gates of hell. Samuel jumps off of the horse and approaches the gates. As he nears, the gates slowly open.

INT. LETUM’S FORTRESS - CORRIDOR - CONTINUOUS

The corridors are aligned with images of mutilated corpses and men nailed to upside down crosses. A carved skull rests a top an altar filled with blood. Samuel dips his hand into the water and crosses himself in reverse. He continues on his way.

Men walk through the halls in freshly tailored business suits. Naked women clad in skin tight bikinis follow them around. Some of them are chained slaves seemingly straight from a rock cover album. “It’s too late.”

INT. LETUM’S FORTRESS - OFFICE - CONTINUOUS

The office is huge with a magnificent view over Hell on Earth. A huge upside down cross hangs from the ceiling. Samuel enters the office. Letum stands, wraps his arms around Samuel and pats him on the back.

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LETUM
It’s good to see you again son.

SAMUEL
Father.

They sit down.

LETUM
Do you remember the name Dean Winchester?

Samuel shrugs his shoulders and leans back, hoping it was all in the past.

SAMUEL
Unfortunately. He was holding me back. Just like good ol’ Johnny boy.

LETUM
He’s back.

SAMUEL
I thought you told me you disposed of him.

LETUM
For a time. But, now it’s your duty to finish it. I want you to kill him. I believe you’re up to the job.

SAMUEL
Nothing would give me as much pleasure, sir.

LETUM
Good to hear it.

SAMUEL
I’ll leave now.

LETUM
No.

SAMUEL
Why not?!

LETUM
He’ll come to you.

Samuel snorts, not liking the sound of putting it off.

LETUM
That’s all, your dismissed.

Samuel stands and leaves. Letum grabs a GOBLET off his desk, filled with blood, and takes a sip.

INT. LETUM’S FORTRESS - CORRIDOR - CONTINUOUS

Samuel stands outside of the office, thoughts rushing through his mind. He snarls and chuckles, swipes his hair back and walks away. “Can you feel the touch of evil, it’s too late.”

INT. RESISTANCE LAIR - DAVID’S ROOM - DAY

CLOSE ON a map sprawled across a hard wood table. David, Patrick and a couple of remaining men peer down on it. Dean enters.

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DEAN
What’s going on?

DAVID
We’re moving out. The demon was able to relay word of our location. We have to attack first, hope to catch them off guard, before they attack us.

DEAN
We’re going to need more men.

DAVID
We’ve got our fair share.

David glances over at the teenage guys working the gun room.

DEAN
What about the next generation being our chance for hope? They haven’t even been in a fight yet. Couldn’t handle one demon, what makes you so sure that they can handle an entire battalion?

DAVID
We have no other choice. If we don’t attack, they’ll come here and we’ll be outflanked. We all knew the possibility that this war would come and now it’s here.
(To Patrick)
Patrick, get them ready. We leave in five.

Patrick leaves the room. Dean exhales, at a loss.

INT. RESISTANCE LAIR - EQUIPMENT ROOM - MOMENTS LATER

MUSIC: "BLITZKRIEG" METALLICA


Marty sits alone in the room, concentrating on home work. Dean enters.

DEAN
Guess things worked out with, you know...

Marty blushes and nods his head.

DEAN
That’s good. That’s real good.

MARTY
Is everything alright?

DEAN
David’s gathering men together to go fight.

Marty lightens up, excited.

MARTY
Then I’m in. Without a doubt. I’ve been waiting for this for a long time.

DEAN
I want you to stay here.

MARTY
What? Why?

DEAN
You have your whole life ahead of you. You’re still young. Go spend some time with that girl you like, listen to music, do homework. Be a kid.

MARTY
Those things killed my parents, since the day it happened I’ve been waiting to get revenge. It’s all I can think about sometimes.

DEAN
Trust me, I know how that feels. More than you’d ever know. But, this is the right decision. Staying back. It’s going to be a suicide mission. You could die. Please, just stay back in the ordinary world where it’s safe. God knows I’ve already dragged enough people into my problems.

MARTY
I’m sorry, but, I can’t do that.

Patrick approaches them. He sizes Dean up, then looks over at Marty.

PATRICK
Marty, Dean, go suit up. We’re getting ready to leave.

Patrick walks away. Dean sighs as he glances over at Marty, then follows Patrick. Marty hesitantly stands and leaves.

INT. RESISTANCE LAIR - GUN ROOM - MOMENTS LATER

Teenage guys and men arm themselves with weaponry.

INT. RESISTANCE LAIR - MAIN - MOMENTS LATER

The soldiers gather in the main room and begin their departure as families watch on.

EXT. HELL ON EARTH - WRECKAGE - TIME LAPSE

The soldiers travel across the wreckage. Dean stays back, keeping a close eye on Marty.

EXT. HELL ON EARTH - WOODS - NIGHT

Mountains overlook the woods and cemetery below. The gates of hell are in plain site. The wind howls through the night sky. David peers down over the fortress. Dean approaches him.

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DEAN
This is my fight. I’ll go alone. Maybe there’s a chance that I can get through to him. Just let me talk to my brother. If I’m not back in ten, then do whatever it is you need to do.

DAVID
It’s suicide.

DEAN
Maybe, but it’s the only choice I have and I have to do something. So, what’s it going to be?

David glances around at his men, back at Dean. Hesitant. Exhales.

DAVID
Okay, but if you’re not back in ten-

DEAN
I understand.

Dean starts down the mountain. Marty watches on from his perch, he slowly gets up and follows Dean.

EXT. HELL ON EARTH - CEMETERY - MOMENTS LATER

Dean wanders through the cold and dark cemetery. Marty keeps to the trees. Dean takes a couple of deep breaths as he stares at the demonic emblem. The gates begin to open.

DEAN
(Under his breath)
Please be in there Sammy...

Dean enters the fortress. Marty runs to catch up. The gates close behind them.

INT. LETUM’S FORTRESS - MAIN HALL- CONTINUOUS

The main hall is eerily abandoned. It carries the presence of a grand cathedral. The only light source emanates from a couple of wax candles. Bats flutter across the ceiling. Dean exhales, breath clearly visible. The gates slam shut behind him. He turns around to see Marty.

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DEAN
What are you doing here?

MARTY
This is my fight too.

DEAN
Everyone was to stay back with David. This is no place for you to be.

MARTY
I’m not a kid, I can take of myself.

DEAN
I never said you couldn’t. I just don’t want to see anything happen to you because of me.

MARTY
Nothing will, so, where are --

Marty inhales, exhales. Breathes heavily, grasping at his throat and gasping for air. He begins to rise. Dean reaches out for him. No use. A shadow passes across the wall. Dean spins around to come face to face with Samuel.

SAMUEL
Hey Dean.

Dean’s eyes widen in horror. Samuel smirks.

BLACK OUT!

END OF ACT THREE

cooldudet - December 4, 2008 06:20 PM (GMT)
I am somewhat confused
what happend to Dean
and when did ten years pass by
I mean
I understood that Samuel took over in the last one
but the ten years
I need help can you send me a pm
am confused
unless if it is going to be explained in the next xhap

irisheyes - December 4, 2008 11:25 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (cooldudet @ Dec 4 2008, 11:20 AM)
I am somewhat confused
what happend to Dean
and when did ten years pass by
I mean
I understood that Samuel took over in the last one
but the ten years
I need help can you send me a pm
am confused
unless if it is going to be explained in the next xhap

So am I.
Did I miss something from the last episode?
~~~~~~~~~

I'm still enjoying this episode, though. :D

Sam451823 - December 5, 2008 03:32 AM (GMT)
This is definitely my favorite Multus Tempestas episode thus far! Great work, Dean!

Dean5339 - December 5, 2008 04:53 AM (GMT)
ACT FOUR

INT. LETUM’S FORTRESS - MAIN HALL - NIGHT

Samuel circles around Dean. His eyes lit a fire with glee.

SAMUEL
It’s been a long time.

DEAN
I’m sorry Sammy. I failed you. I was too caught up in my own problems, that I didn't stop to realize what was happening to you, till it was too late.

SAMUEL
I was told that you died. He wants me to kill you. But, I have a better option. You can join me.

DEAN
What?

SAMUEL
Think about it Dean, you and me, we can rule over this world. Letum’s not fit to run things any more. I’m stronger than him and with your help we can over throw him. Rule as one.

DEAN
Sam, listen to yourself, I know this isn’t you.

SAMUEL
You never knew me Dean. Besides, you were gone for ten years. A lot can happen. I’ve had a long time to think about this.

DEAN
Letum’s messed with your mind.

SAMUEL
No, I chose this life. I’m the master of my own destiny Dean, like you’ve always told me. But, that destiny was never to help people. I’ve been granted these abilities, this unlimited power. And with it, together, imagine the things we can do. Mankind is inherently weak by it’s very nature. They don’t deserve this world. We do.

DEAN
I’ll never join you.

SAMUEL
That stings Dean, really. I thought we could go back, just like it was in the old days. Brothers. Family.

DEAN
It can go back, just not like this.

SAMUEL
If you’re not with me, then you are my enemy.

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Dean begins to choke, he grasps at his neck.

SAMUEL
I never wanted it to come to this. But you give me no other choice.

Dean stares into Samuel’s eyes. His mistake.

DEAN
I’m sorry.

Samuel tosses Dean aside. Dean rams through a couple of pews and slides against the ground. Dean weakly reaches out as he chokes out blood.

SNAP ZOOM IN on Dean's closing eyes.

TRANSITION TO:
INT. HOSPITAL - DEAN’S HOSPITAL ROOM - NIGHT

CLOSE ON Dean's closed eyes as he lays on a gurney, a respirator hooked across his mouth along with cords patched across his chest. He’s in critical condition. A DOCTOR, mid thirties, stands over him distressed. Snow can clearly be seen through the windows.

INT. HOSPITAL - HALLS - NIGHT

People scatter around the hospital. Hard at work. Sam leans against the halls next to a door. Deeply troubled, sweat drips down his forehead. The doctor leaves the room next to Sam.

SAM
How is he? Is he going to be okay?

DOCTOR
I’m sorry Sam, what’s going on with your brother. We’ve never seen anything like it before. We’re doing the best we can.

Sam sighs and nods okay. The doctor continues on his way. Sam enters the hospital room.

INT. HOSPITAL - DEAN’S HOSPITAL ROOM - CONTINUOUS

Sam stares across at his brother. Tears stream down his face.

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SAM
Dean, I'm sorry. Ever since you brought me back, I've been a constant burden. Nothing good has come from it.
(Harsh realization)
I don't deserve to live...

Letum enters the room. He glances over at Sam.

LETUM
Samuel.

Sam spins around and points his gun. Letum chuckles.

LETUM
Do you really think you can kill me with that?

SAM
What do you want?

LETUM
He’s tired of waiting. You know what’s inside of you. The war’s beginning. It’s time to take up your rightful place by our side.

SAM
I’ll never join you.

LETUM
I beg to disagree.

Dean’s heart monitor begins to beep. Getting dangerously low.

SAM
Stop. What are you doing to him?

Sam rushes up to Dean’s side.

LETUM
You can save him.

SAM
How?

LETUM
Simple. His life is in my hands. Always has been. If you join us, Dean will live.

SAM
And if I don’t?

The heart monitor speeds up the descent.

SAM
I’ll do it.

LETUM
I always knew you’d make the right decision.

Sam places his gun on the bedside table next to Dean.

MUSIC: "THE MAN COMES AROUND" JOHNNY CASH

Sam bows before Letum. Letum nods in approval. “And I heard as it were, the noise of thunder. One of the four beasts saying…”

LETUM
Rise Samuel.

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SAMUEL stands. They lock eyes. Master and student.

EXT. HELL ON EARTH - WOODS - NIGHT

The Resistance Fighters CHARGE at the Demonic entities as their bodies hit the ground like flies. One by one. “There’s a man going round taking names.” David watches on in horror. “And he decides who to free and who to blame.”

SWSSH!!! A dagger SLICES through David’s neck. His head slowly tumbles off of his body and hits the ground below. It rolls along the wasteland. “When the man comes around.”

INT. LETUM’S FORTRESS - MAIN HALL - NIGHT

Dean is on the ground. BLOOD OOZES. Samuel stands over him with a wicked smirk.

DEAN
Sam, don’t do this! Don’t. I know you’re still in there somewhere! You have to be!

SAMUEL
The name’s Samuel and it’s your time, brother.

Dean grimaces in fear. Samuel moves in for the kill. “Or disappear into the potter's ground.” FLASH! A White light ENCOMPASSES the fortress. “When the man comes around.”

INT. HOSPITAL - DEAN'S ROOM - NIGHT

The HEART MONITOR spikes! “Hear the trumpets, hear the pipers.” Dean's eyes flutter. He EXHALES. “One hundred million angels singin'.” Dean bolts up in bed, GRABS the CORDS and YANKS them out. “Voices callin', voices cryin'.”

A NURSE rushes into the room. She eyes Dean. Shocked. “Some are born an' some are dyin'. It's Alpha's and Omega's Kingdom Come.”

DEAN
Where's Sam?

NURSE
Who?

DEAN
The guy who was here with me, where is he?

NURSE
He left a while ago with a man…

DEAN
(Horrified)
What does he look like? I need to see the security footage.

NURSE
I’m sorry sir, you don’t have-

Dean takes Sam’s GUN and aims it at her.

DEAN
I need to see what’s on it. Now. Take me there.

Dean escorts the nurse out of the room.

INT. HOSPITAL - HALLS - NIGHT

“Till Armageddon, no Shalam, no Shalom.”

Samuel and Letum stroll through the hospital. Activity runs rampant around them.

“The wise men will bow down before the throne. And at his feet they’ll cast their golden crowns. When the man comes around.”

INT. HOSPITAL - SECURITY ROOM - NIGHT

A SECURITY GUARD sits in front of an array of SECURITY MONITORS. The door is KICKED open. The Security Guard jolts. Dean aims the gun.

DEAN
I need to see your tapes. Room sixty six. Now.

The Security Guard hesitates. Dean’s finger nears the trigger. Threatening.

DEAN (CONT’D)
Now.

The security guard sets to work. “Listen to the words long written down. When the man comes around.”

EXT. HOSPITAL - NIGHT/ SNOWING

“Hear the trumpets hear the pipers.” An AMBULANCE drives into the hospital parking lot. “One hundred million angels singing.” Samuel and Letum eye it with interest.

INT. AMBULANCE - FRONT - CONTINUOUS

The Ambulance driver puts the car into park. Suddenly he grasps at his throat as oxygen escapes from his body. “Voices callin’, voices cryin’. Some are born an’, some are dyin’.”

INT. AMBULANCE - BACK - CONTINUOUS

PARAMEDICS open the back door and carry the GURNEY holding a SICK MAN out. “It’s alpha and omega’s kingdom come.”

EXT. HOSPITAL - CONTINUOUS

Letum winks and snaps his finger. The ill man catches on fire. “And the whirlwind is in the thorn tree.” The paramedics panic.

Samuel TELEPATHICALLY lifts the gurney off of the ground and flings it into the distance. “The whirlwind is in the thorn tree.” The paramedics spontaneously burst into flame! “In measured hundred weight and penny bound.”

INT. HOSPITAL - SECURITY ROOM - NIGHT

Dean leans in to see the SECURITY FEED of his HOSPITAL ROOM.

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Sam bows before Letum, Samuel rises. Dean watches on in horror. “And I heard a voice in the midst of the four beasts.”

EXT. HOSPITAL ROAD - NIGHT/ SNOWING

The AMBULANCE speeds away from the Hospital.

INT. AMBULANCE - CONTINUOUS

Letum is in the driver’s seat, Samuel is in the passenger’s side.

In the back window we see a HUGE EXPLOSION!

BLACK OUT!

TO BE CONTINUED

Dean5339 - December 5, 2008 04:54 AM (GMT)
DEAN'S NIGHTMARE

Since the beginning of the season, I set out to have this season be as much about Dean as last season was about Sam. Thus, we really saw everything through Dean's eyes as Sam broke around him. Leading into a confrontation between Cain and Abel. Sam, or should I say Samuel, was born to raise hell.

I've never seen any series on Sc-Fi, thus my only knowledge for the genre in the terms that help come from PLANET OF THE APES, TERMINATOR, and REIGN OF FIRE. You might be able to see various inspirations drawn from those films throughout the episode. The character of Marty was based around the young guy in 'Planet Of the Apes' who felt a responsibility to take part in the fight. The whole battle grounds and ultra-action came from Terminator. While the underground base idea was drawn from REIGN OF FIRE.

I wanted the audience to see the episode clearly through Dean's eyes, thus I had to fool the audience into believing that we jumped the shark through what I stated in my 'blog' and the previous episode promoting "the war is here." To promote it as jumping the shark, hopefully that worked.

I wanted every character to be fully fleshed out as though they have their own roles in the mythology because the more established these guys are, the more the audience would relate to them and think of them as new supporting characters.

Samuel I wanted to keep at an emotional distance from the audience, therefore having the audience go through the same horrifying realization Dean does upon first seeing his brother. Then their ultimate confrontation in the episode.

Since this episode is all in Dean's head, I wanted Dean to come out through various elements in how the future was represented. It's a nightmare, but notice how it's inherently Dean... a lot of the imagery was inspired straight from classic rock albums. Hell, the only surviving music is Dean's cassette tape collection in a sense.

I'd say the part that gave me the most challenge while writing was the ending. Originally the forth act was going to jump back and forth between the present and Dean's envisioned future. But, what I found was that if I revealed it was all in Dean's head it really negated his whole confrontation with Samuel - there was no longer any visible threat. Thus, in order to avoid this I made it linear. The fight with Samuel, followed by Letum's confrontation with Sam.

I really loved 'The Man Comes Around' by Johnny Cash and feel that it's the perfect song for Letum. Also in that Letum translates into meaning 'Death.'

I'm afraid I can't say any more. Sam has become Samuel. Letum has the upper hand. Has Dean died? YIKES!!!!

Hope you guys "enjoyed" the nightmare, took me a while to decide how to craft in hopes that I'd confuse every reader out there to the point that they have no idea what's going on. Dean didn't know and I didn't want the audience to know any more than he did until the very end.

MUSIC VID: EPISODES 3.01 - 3.10

FACEBOOK VERSION

YOUTUBE VERSION

SOUNDTRACK LISTING

1. "SILENT LUCIDITY" Queensryche
2. "JOURNEY" Jason Manns
3. "HOW TO SAVE A LIFE" The Fray
4. "COUNTDOWN'S BEGUN" Ozzy Osbourne
5. "IF YOU COULD READ MY MIND" Johnny Cash
6. "GET BORN AGAIN" Alice in Chains
7. "HOUSE OF THE RISING SUN" The Animals
8. "MR. WRITER" Stereophonics
9. "ANGELS OR DEVILS" Dishwalla
10. "HOW TO DISAPPEAR COMPLETELY" Radiohead
11. "IN THE CROSSFIRE" Starsailor
12. "FALLS ON ME" Fuel
13. "BEHIND BLUE EYES" Limp Bizkit
14. "DARKNESS" Disturbed
15. "RING THE BELLS" James
16. "DIE DEAD ENOUGH" Megadeth
17. "WHY ME" Styx
18. "SHAPE OF THINGS TO COME" Audioslave
19. "THE UNFORGIVEN" Metallica
20. "GOODBYE CRUEL WORLD" Pink Floyd
21. "SILENT NIGHT" Sinead O' Connor
22. "TOO LATE" Black Sabbath
23. "THE MAN COMES AROUND" Johnny Cash
24. "I WAS SCARED" Rivers Cuomo

HAPPY HOLIDAYS FROM THE MULTUS TEMPESTAS TEAM!!!

RETURNS JANUARY 13TH. 2009

cooldudet - December 5, 2008 05:06 AM (GMT)
OMFG
OMFG
OMFG
OMFG
OMFG
OMFG
OMFG
OMFG
OMFG
OMFG
____________________________________________ :melt

I kinda undertand
letum tricked Sam
am I right
and Dean was in some sort of coma
right
OMFG
holy crap
:bang

cooldudet - December 5, 2008 05:07 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Dean5339 @ Dec 4 2008, 11:56 PM)


HAPPY HOLIDAYS FROM THE MULTUS TEMPESTAS TEAM!!!

RETURNS JANUARY 13TH. 2009

are you trying to kill me
lol

Dean5339 - December 5, 2008 04:16 PM (GMT)
Yep, that's what happened. But, Letum wasn't tricking Sam - he did have control of Dean's life. If Letum blinks his finger, Dean's heart monitor would have stopped completely. But, Letum - perhaps - did end by killing Dean.... YIKES!!!

irisheyes - December 5, 2008 07:43 PM (GMT)
Ya know, a while after I posted my response on being confused I had a thought...."what if it's a dream, a nightmare that Dean was having?"
No longer confused and absolutely loved this episode.

Great job!!!

Dean5339 - October 2, 2009 01:49 AM (GMT)
With Supernatural's new episode thought I'd BUMP this episode due to their similarities.

Sam Winchester Fan - February 24, 2010 03:31 PM (GMT)
Enjoted this story very much.




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