Summary- There's a ghost haunting a private school so John Winchester sends Sam to the school to get as much infomation as he can. While Sam is attending the school, he meets a very smart and intelligent girl who he falls in love with. But happens when her father was involved with how the ghost died and why the ghost is still haunting. Will she be able to forgive her father?
Characters-
John Winchester
Dean Winchester [20 yrs old]
Sam Winchester [16 yrs old]
Isabella Jones

~Character Profile~
Name: Isabella Jones
Nickname(s): Bella or Bells
Age: 16 years old
Eye Color: Green
Hair Color: Brown [long, natural tight ringlets]
Hobbies/Skills: Drawing, painting, reading, running, gymnastics, cooking, baking, good at school [Math, Science, History, Cooking class ect.], dancing [ballet, jazz and hip hop], figure skating, playing sports [soccer, baseball and football]
Occupation/Job: Works as a busgirl/waitress at local diner
Personal: Mother died in a car accident and Bella was in it with her, can't stand bright lights directly in her eyes (reminds her of the accident), has to be the 'mother figure' for her younger brothers, still has nightmares about the car crash,
Relationship(s): Mr. Curtis Jones [police chief], Skyler + James Jones [10 yr old twin brothers] (not in the story very much), Sam Winchester [friend and later boyfriend]

sounds like it will be good

~Chapter One- New Student in the School~

The bright rays of the morning shone though the thin curtains of Isabella's Jones' bedroom. She moaned in protest as she burried her face in her pillows. Today she felt was going to be a bad day.
"Bells, honey" she heard her father say quietly as he stuck his head into the room "It's time to get up for school. Are you up?"
Again, she moaned "I'm up Daddy."
"Okay, get cleaned up and ready for school" than he was gone.

Isabella got up out of her nice comfortable warm bed and into her bathroom. She started the shower and undressed before climbing into the warm steam in the shower. It didn't take her long to shower, it never did, only 10 or 15 minutes max. She put on clean underwear and a bra before she bushed her hair than blow dried it before brushing it again. She than put on her school uniform: a navy blue pleated skirt that had pleats all around the skirt and just about reached to her knees, a white short sleeved knitted blouse, white knitted knee high socks, black dress shoes and a solid navy blue full make tie. Her uniform also required a navy blue blazer jacket but she didn't really wear it until winter. She tied her long brown hair that naturally curled into ringlets and reached past her shoulders into a high ponytail in the middle of the back of her head.

She was putting her school subject binders and textbooks away in her backpack when her little brothers came into her room. Her brothers; Skyler and James, were identicle twins that were 10 years old. They could both be sweet if they wanted to but they perfered to get into trouble instead. Even though they got into all kinds of trouble, she loved them.
"Morning Bella" they both said at the same time before they hugged her around the waist.
"Morning baby brothers" she hugged them back. Both boys were in thier school uniforms. They were a lot like the uniforms for the girls except they wore pants instead of skirts.

This sounds good, keep it up.

Keep going....sounds interesting.