Oooh now whatever can be in that hole...


Hole In The World Part One

ooh gonna go read!!

:woohoo can´t wait to start reading :skip

Holy Hole full of Holes, Batman!! :car

I really like when he channels his inner Dean.

“You can’t win this, boy. I’m stronger than you.” The voice had changed slightly, subtly. Had even more of a frosty edge to it.

“No you’re not. You’re just annoying. I get death visions and was touched by a demon when I was a baby. You really want to get into a pissing contest with me?”

That made me laugh, go Sammy.

I just hope that Dean is okay, and that his amulet will help protect him.

I really can't wait until tomorrow.

:hi5 Iris - nobody writes em like you do! As always- I stand in awe- no matter how many times I read it!

:o NO!!!!!!!!!!!!! DEAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

great job on the chapter! i really think it's interesting how you are setting this up so far...it should be an exciting story! i wonder what just tried to take over sam's body? i can't wait to find out! :D

oh, and since i am a massachusetts native...i have to say that the superbowl reference was a nice way to rub salt in the wound left behind by the new england patriots defeat this year...thanks a lot for that! :angry:

just kidding...hehe! :lol:

can't wait for tomorrow!

Iris--no one writes Dean snark like you do. Laughed out loud more than once. And now Sam is getting in on the action...it was kind of hot when he told that skanky demon where to get off :lol:

Dean tapping his fingers to Matchbox Twenty....he allowed that to be played in his car?? I totally would have thought he'd dismiss it as Sam emo-crap. Had to chuckle when I read that!

Looking forward to tomorrow!

DEAN!!!! :o :o *picks up rope, flashlight, backpack, and Peanut M&M's*
Hang in there!!! I'll save you!!!! *dashes off speedily* :ph43r: :bruce

Lilly, in my defence I'm English so I probably know as much about American football (yeah, we don't just call it 'football' here!) as the SN writers know about an English accent. (Snigger.) I consider myself suitably chastised... ;)

Phoenix, all I can say is that Little Brother's emo crap must be rubbing off on Dean! Actually I saw it as a sign that I hadn't heard that song in aaaaaages and then got their 'best of' CD for Christmas just as I was trying to think of a song to fit in there!

Glad you're not all hating it too much anyway. It really is lousy with cliffies this one...
:fire

omg
wow
that was intense
great update
great to see Sam being a smart ass
love it
oh kno Dean

Oh wow!! Just flipping awesome!! :clap

Loved Sam telling that demon where to go, and that he was so proud of himself afterwards. Atta boy, Sammy!! :lol:

But it still went all pear-shaped for him and cliff hangery for us... :o

Fab cliffie though. :lol:

wow. thats all i can say. wow.

that was so damn good...

Sam showed that demon, but maybe he shoulda listened to her...

GET DEAN BACK!!!!! NOW!!!!!!!! :jacket

I am also one in awe of you, Iris! I know you hear that all the time from us, but we calls it as we sees it!


Seriously though, I love the way you write the boys and I love Sam telling that thing how it is. I love it when he's tough like that! :bruce

It's great!

ACK! Dean!! :o

Eh!! Hurry with part 2! :bang

Awesome Chapter! Can't wait for what's next. Poor Dean!!

Always love me some Rambo!Sam!! ;)

Nice start ;) Poor Dean... Little brother to the rescue, I hope! Can't wait for the next part!

Time to find out what's happening...but will Sammy find Dean?

Hole In The World Part Two

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Irismay42, you have the 'torturing of the boys' thing going on! poor boys! they never get a break now do they?

Aw, I only torture them a little bit... And it's not like I stick red hot pokers in them or anything...! I'm all for the angsty torture myself! :evil

Oooh red hot poker...now THERE'S an idea :P

Oh god... Kitts has a red hot poker idea... Be afraid...be very afraid....! :lol:

Wow, great job irismay. This whole thing is very intriguing. And Sam found Dean but now they're both in trouble. Damn, I was so glad when Dean suddenly remembered Sam... I guess I was relieved way too early.

I want to read the next part right now :blink:

that was an awesome chapter irismay! i'm really glad that sam found dean, :D but now they are in the bloody river...that's not good :unsure:

and it seems as though the crazy preacher wasn't affected, so maybe if they get out of the river he can help sam fix dean...hehe. :P

anyway, can't wait till tomorrow!

;)

Wonderful chapter and wonderful cliffie once again. :clap Loved Sam's hyper-speed search for Dean and his frantic attempts to get through to Dean when he found him. And I really loved it when he called himself 'Sammy', that was just awwww.... :wub: :D

Had to laugh though when he got slapped by Brenda. Poor Sammy! :lol:

Hmm...that preacher dude has me thinking...why is he not affected...is he "special" like Sam in some way? Well, if Sam and Dean make it out of the river more or less in one piece Sammy may want to look that guy up.

You know, when Sam was wandering around and everything was deserted, it made me think of "I am Legend" or Romero's zombie flicks...I figured the town's inhabitants were somewhere...it was a matter of what they had become.

I'm also really interested to find out "who" has taken over Dean...sounds like they've visited the inferno... :fire

:o OMG! youe making new nervous, this eppie rocks! please update soon. They had better be ok. I love this new VS so far :wub: im a bit klate coming in and I had to catch up on the past too.

Another great part to the story!

Great work on both parts Iris!

*bounces happily in seat* You guys got me suspense! This is soooo good! :cheer

Totally loved the eye contact bit just before they fell off and into the water....i think it's my twisted mind but i found that quite funny.... :lol: ...sorry.... :blink: ..hehe.....

So far this season has not been disappointing....I wonder how you guys are going to keep it up.....is going to make for interesting times methinks... :P

Kitts darling....forget the pokers.......really....forget them...... :o

Vicki

wow...what more can i say iris...wow...

oh btw...

is it tomorrow yet??

well it is according to my watch, so hurry up post it now...
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i'm waiting !!

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Oh man, this one is awesome! That final scene on the bridge was so well written, I felt like I was right there with them! I don't think I took a breath until I'd finished it :D

Can't wait for more :cheer

Hmmm, but are Sam and Dean still breathing after it...??? :fire

I guess it's time to find out!!!!


Hole In The World Part Three

yay!!!!