Title: Ashes to Ashes
Description: Season 3 Episode One
kittsbud - February 26, 2008 06:01 PM (GMT)
Well, here it is after a long wait. I hope you all enjoy!!! We've kept the cliffhanger to a minimum on this part, but don't expect to be spared the rest of the week muhahahaha! Ashes to Ashes Part 1
Rek - February 26, 2008 06:03 PM (GMT)
It's finally here, am now off to read, :cheer :cheer :cheer
irismay42 - February 26, 2008 06:06 PM (GMT)
Ooh look at pretty pictures...... What, I was supposed to be reading too??? :D
Geena - February 26, 2008 06:08 PM (GMT)
Dude Its embarrasing how excited I am. :cheer :cheer Thanks for posting.. off to read!
Rek - February 26, 2008 06:11 PM (GMT)
he he he I'm doing the happy dance, its just gone 7am here in New Zealand and I was first. Sorry doesn't happen often so I'm haaapppyyy :D :D :D
bayre - February 26, 2008 06:14 PM (GMT)
What great pictures....and story!
Serenity&Chaos - February 26, 2008 06:24 PM (GMT)
Yay! It's finally here!! :cheer Love the banter between Sam and Dean in this. Like nothing happened. :lol:
“Hey, maybe we can get you groomed while you’re here, Sasquatch,” Dean teased. “Clip some of that fur you call hair, a little flea-dip, maybe even a couple of those cute bows they put in poodles ya know?”
Sam threw him a dirty look. “Yeah, and maybe they’ll even toss in neutering you for free, Dean. Save the women of the world all the grief of having you chasing them like a dog all the time?”
- :lol: I love that part!
The Wonderer - February 26, 2008 06:43 PM (GMT)
What a great start, love Sam's line about saving women from being chased by Dean by having him neutured.
And I do love Bobby, love that even though they burnt his house to a crisp and have helped that poor man age by a million years, he still offers them a place to stay. By the way what's an Airstream ? Is that a caravan ?
I was so on Dean's side for not liking that vet, he's just beyond friggin weird.
Looking forward to more...when will the next update be ?
Tree66 - February 26, 2008 06:51 PM (GMT)
|QUOTE (The Wonderer @ Feb 26 2008, 06:43 PM)|
Looking forward to more...when will the next update be ?
Tomorrow - Same Bat time - Same Bat Channel!!! :lol: :lol:
Seriously- glad you guys are enjoying it so far- I'm loving your comments- they're making my day!
Although- was anyone surprised about the amulet????? I was hoping that someone out there in VS-land would remember last season and how it was able to 'protect' itself back during Call to Darkness and Beast Within ( oh ye of little faith) Did you really think we'd leave Dean amuletless???? :fire
LillyB - February 26, 2008 07:12 PM (GMT)
great start to the thrid season! i'm so excited that the VS is back! i can't wait till tomorrow to find out what's up with the SUV! :D
Geena - February 26, 2008 07:23 PM (GMT)
What a great start. I'm so thrilled I have something to look forward to while we wait a month and a half for SPN to return. The brothers banter had me smiling like an idiot from beggining to end. :cloud9 I was completely surprised by the amulet! Course everything surprises me.. lol Looking forward to the next chapter.
marjan - February 26, 2008 07:45 PM (GMT)
oh my God, I am too excited to start reading :woohoo
Kay-lee - February 26, 2008 07:54 PM (GMT)
*Sucks in breath*
This first part is amazing, seriously amazing, can't wait for the next chapter. *Squee*
Haha I like the vet :lol: , like him even more when Dean punched him ;)
Loved it when he went on all protective mode towards Sam :wub:
They're of to bobbies, woooooo! Love bobby :)
Sammy..I feel sorry for my baby :(
The winchester's are back :uzi
You can't believe how long iv'e been wating for this, i use to always look forward to tuesday's till VS stopped...and now i love tuesday's all over again :clap
|…they were never yours to protect or save… they were never yours at all…|
Man, don't like the sound of that... :unsure:
Great writting by the way, it's lovely, well done-- :wub:
Anyway...yeah its awsome!!!!
*Lets out breath*
moonie442001 - February 26, 2008 07:56 PM (GMT)
First part is awesome!! I love this line :
…they were never yours to protect or save… they were never yours at all…
pinkphoenix - February 26, 2008 09:10 PM (GMT)
awesome!!!! I can't wait for the next part! I loved the vet! :)
adder574 - February 26, 2008 10:20 PM (GMT)
Awesome start and definitely worth the wait. :cheer
I loved the banter, especially this line “You gotta be friggin’ kidding me? I know he’s a Sasquatch, but seriously, a veterinarian?” he asked in disbelief.
I'm glad you bought the amulet back, and I'm glad there was no deal to save the boys and that Sam figured out Dean needed his amulet.
What did Lucifer mean by this: they were never yours to protect or save… they were never yours at all…
I can't wait until tomorrow.
Scanilla - February 26, 2008 10:27 PM (GMT)
A very good start! I really liked the amulet thing a lot, pretty clever. And Dean punching John's old friend was great, that dude is shady, lol. John driving and boys sleeping, such a sweet imagine! And Bobby is a true friend.
I look forward to the next part :D
kittsbud - February 26, 2008 11:01 PM (GMT)
Thanks everyone for your comments. It's always hard to know if we're getting things right when we plan all this out and try to plot everything so it all interlocks.
Hopefully the ride is only going to get more fun from here! And the cliffies get more evil, of course! :evil
Phoenix_Song778 - February 26, 2008 11:47 PM (GMT)
I'm sooo glad you guys are back!! I need something to tide me over until April 24th and this is the perfect thing to do it! Awesome start...loved the vivid gore of Sam digging into the demon's chest to get the bullet--I should know better than to be eating when I read this stuff :D
Can't wait till tomorrow!
daisymay - February 27, 2008 12:29 AM (GMT)
Great to have you back!! :cheer And I have to say there was some awesome Limp!Sam in that chapter. Not only BloodiedBatteredBruised!Sam but there was Teary!Sam too. *Happy sighs*
That scene of him crying over Dean was heartbreaking. And wonderful. :cloud9 :D
And I adored Protective!Dean fretting over not being able to be with Sam when the vet (LOL!) was working on him.
And John was wonderful too. Oh...that image of the boys sleeping in the car while John drove. Seriously melty indeed. :wub: :cloud9
Just fantastic. :clap
babiigurl_15 - February 27, 2008 12:54 AM (GMT)
YAY! The VS is back!!! Im so happy, LOL I'm doing a dance around my house! ^_^ :skip Ahem. So, off to read.
supernaturalsam - February 27, 2008 01:11 AM (GMT)
Well, Kitts and Tree...you guys already know what I think about this but I am not ashamed to tell you again!
This was a total kick-ass way to start off the season and as usual, you guys never disappoint! I am so happy that everyone is liking this...it just thrills me so much!
Now I'm off to look at the pretty pictures!!! :D
Tree66 - February 27, 2008 01:15 AM (GMT)
|QUOTE (Phoenix_Song778 @ Feb 26 2008, 11:47 PM)|
| ...loved the vivid gore of Sam digging into the demon's chest to get the bullet--I should know better than to be eating when I read this stuff :D |
Gore - vivid gore!!! :evil Sorry Phoenix- maybe we should begin to warn you whenever I'm writing an eppy- (although Kitts is just as bad as I am anymore )- that way you arent eating or doing anything else that might not go well with reading one of these eppys! :o
Thanks soooo much for the warm welcome back - you guys are fantastic - I wish I could go and thank each of you personally but I'd likely eat up the entire page and with the pseudo-Winchester luck that I have - probably crash the site or something stupid..... :blink:
I will take a sec and say a couple of things- the line "they were never yours to protect or save .... they were never yours at all" ---- well, only time will tell what that cryptic message from Lucifer meant.
I'm really pleased that you liked the way we resolved the whole thing with the guys- I know that between Kitts and I especially - we were pretty tired of 'deals' too....
And the amulet... B) yeah... I thought for sure you all would see that coming a mile away...
Finally- I hadnt really considered the impact of John driving off with both boys asleep in the car there at the end ( some of you took that in a slightly different context than I intended but thats totally cool) ... thanks for giving me as the writer a different view of what I wrote- and a kinda warm fuzzy myself....
Again --- you guys sooooo rock!!! Thanks again!!!!
supernaturaliscool - February 27, 2008 01:31 AM (GMT)
Yay!!! Great start to season 3. Can't wait for the next part...
warriorgrrrl - February 27, 2008 01:38 AM (GMT)
Yay!! they're back!!!! and freakin ALIVE!!!!!! aawww... you got brother moments...*sniff sniff* DON'T MAKE ME CRY!!! hahaha... like the vet dude. Bringin him back?
CRAP!!!! THEY'RE BEING FOLLOWED!!!!
NEED MORE!!! NOW!!!!
LOVED IT TO PIECES AGAIN!!!!
Ace33 - February 27, 2008 01:48 AM (GMT)
That was amazing! Can't wait for the next part!
tngmd - February 27, 2008 02:32 AM (GMT)
Yeah!! the VS is back!! Great start.....and the boys are ok!! What did ol' lucifer mean?? And are those his black SUV henchmen?? Keep up the great work!!
And the video for season 3 was AWESOME!!! :cheer
Oceane - February 27, 2008 03:56 AM (GMT)
Dawn, Tree, you got me big time :D What an ingenious way to give back the amulet to Dean and Dean didn't kill Sam, only wounded him :)
The banter is back and the brotherly love too :cheer
There're still tension between Sam and John.
Dean got the last word with Garrett :)
Who's in the suv that's following the impala.
...They were never yours to protect or save ...they were never yours at all...
could be the tag for season three.
So exciting start to season three :cheer
shila - February 27, 2008 04:45 AM (GMT)
lol..the journey has started & the days seem soooooooo sooooooooo ssssslllllllllooooooowwwwwwww!!!!
is it tomorrow yet?
cant we jus speed things up..
i dont think i can survive another boring days without the Winchesters
is there a djinn somewhere who can grant me the wish??
winchester73 - February 27, 2008 01:26 PM (GMT)
The boys are back!!!!!! :cheer Like No offence - None taken and Wade's conversation with Dean's fist. Brilliant. The cliffie is evil but can't wait. Thanks :skip
The Wonderer - February 27, 2008 06:22 PM (GMT)
Gone 6pm here dude, where's my chapter.... :P
Got to admit, I didn't see the amulet thing coming at all...but then again what did you expect from the likes of me :lol:
kittsbud - February 27, 2008 06:28 PM (GMT)
I'm coming, I'm coming lol! Had to take my car in and the taxi back was late picking me up :rolleyes:
Anyhow, thanks again for all your wonderful comments! Daisymay, you're either gonna love or hate where this one ends muhahahaha.... :evil Ashes to Ashes Part 2
pinkphoenix - February 27, 2008 07:19 PM (GMT)
whose this mysterious girl that the demons are looking for? the questions are piling up :lol:
LillyB - February 27, 2008 07:20 PM (GMT)
holy crap! :o how's sammy gonna hunt with only one arm? this can't be good...definitely not good. :unsure: there's got to be something somebody can do!!!
anyway, great job with the chapter...i really enjoyed reading it...it was pretty action-packed! i can't wait until tomorrow!
kittsbud - February 27, 2008 07:58 PM (GMT)
I will warn you all, the next two cliffies are even WORSE hahahahaha!
Geena - February 27, 2008 08:01 PM (GMT)
Holly Crap is right. Poor Sammy.. poor boys. They never get a break. Excellent chapter! Already stressing for the next installment. You guys are awesome! :)
Serenity&Chaos - February 27, 2008 09:04 PM (GMT)
|QUOTE (kittsbud @ Feb 27 2008, 07:58 PM)|
| I will warn you all, the next two cliffies are even WORSE hahahahaha! |
I'm getting a bad feeling about that. :blink: How worse? Or do I even want to know?
Gah! Poor Sammy! How are they gonna fix that! Oh they got to figure out someway to fix his arm!
Okay now I'm intrigue with this chick that the demons are searching. Hmmm. <_<
warriorgrrrl - February 27, 2008 09:51 PM (GMT)
NO!!!!! SAMMY!!!!!! YOU CAN'T NOT TO HIM!!!!!! :cry oh baby, what are we gonna do?! LOVED it!!! cant wait till tomorrow!!!!
The Wonderer - February 27, 2008 10:05 PM (GMT)
Poor old Sam, to learn that he'll never be able to use it again, that's a blow. Would love to have seen a scene with Dean and Dr. Vet, I so did not like that guy....
*sighs* I still love Bobby, falling for the boys squabbling routine just to get a beer out the old man. Loved seeing a softer side to John, now for only a hug with Sam and Dean possibly bring up his lunch..that would be perfect.
As for the new girl *coughs* hope it's not a Mary-Sue...nah, just kidding, you guys are better than that.
Great chapter, looking forward to the next one.
daisymay - February 27, 2008 10:10 PM (GMT)
|QUOTE (kittsbud @ Feb 27 2008, 06:28 PM)|
|Daisymay, you're either gonna love or hate where this one ends muhahahaha.... :evil |
Oh dear...this sounds slightly ominous. Let me go and make a cuppa first before I sit down to read this. And maybe get some emergency chocolate rations, just in case... :lol:
ETA...OMG!! Sammy!! Oh, my poor boy. What's he going to do now?? :o
I absolutely loved this chapter. I loved Dean being all big brothery and protective; I loved Sam trying to make Dean feel better about the amulet; loved Sammy dropping that wall on John's foot :lol: ; loved the John and Sam bonding moment...I love fics that show John as a caring father; loved Bobby being completely played by Sam and Dean; the fight scene was really intense and so well written; Latin!Sam had me all of a quiver and the Hurt!Sam was just perfect! Some pretty awesome Limp there. :lol:
Oh...shallow moment here but I loved the pics too. Especially ELAC!Sammy :wub: and Towel!Sammy :thud . Oh, Sammy...you certainly wouldn't ruin my appetite. :fire