And the saga continues....


The Beast Within Part One

Awesome first chapter!!! :cheer :cheer I love how the amulet healed the cord around Dean's neck. Absolutely wonderful!

I so wish that people wouldn't kick Dean when he's down, tho. That hurts my boy. :rolleyes: I just can't wait for tomorrow! I'm so glad the season is back!!

Nana

great 1st part!!!
I can't to see how Dean will react to seeing Sam alive!

Great first chapter. I cant wait until tomorrow.

I feel so bad for Dean! I just want to give him a hug. Awsome first chapter. Can't wait till tomorow.

Hmm. Wonder what's gonna with Zack. I hope he is telling the truth about his family. Kind of makes him human. :P

That's a great idea with the leather cord repairing itself! Love it. Gah! Man, poor Dean. Enough, dude! He's been through enough! :cry

Awesome first part!! I cannot wait til he gets out and meet up with Sam and John! Keep it up! :cheer :cheer

Awesome first part guys! Dean was so close to getting the hell out of there, only to be thwarted by that big goon! Damn it! Can't wait for more!

awww my poor deanie! :cry loved this chapter! cant wait to see what happens. Haris is starting to piss me off. :bruce

that was a great chapter! my computer at work died today and i couldn't get to the new chapter until now...i was SO mad! all day i couldn't wait to get home and read the new post and you definately didn't disappoint! i can't wait until tomorrow to see what happens to dean, and if john and sam find him! again, great job! :D

What is the curse???? Can't wait for John & :fire Sam to kick some a** and find Dean.

Thanks everyone for the kind responses. To those of you that think that Dean has had enough - I'm sorry to say that this is just the beginning. :evil Don't hate me - but we've got a story to tell and no one does pain better than Dean. B)

As for the curse- nice that you picked up on that - it is the 10 million dollar question and if you want the answer before we reveal it in the season - well - PM me and I'll tell you where you can send the money. :lol:

Seriously though- we're just getting started - lots of questions, and yes- even lots of answers will be revealed in time. :clap

Thanks again everyone! :wave See you tomorrow!

Dammit Tree! You beat me to it! :P

She's not lyin' guys, all hell's gonna break loose for Dean and Sam and John are kickin' ass and takin names. :angry:

Ta for reading and glad you're enjoying, get your hip waders, the blood just gets deeper from here on...... :fire

Haris can't cut the amulet's cord, that's cool, what a powerful amulet.
Poor Dean all beaten up :(
THE CURSE, what's about it, I want to know.

Terrific work so far :cheer Can't wait for tomorrow to know what'll happen to Dean and if Sam and John'll find him :)

Oh, I loved this opening!

Such a great job, Tree and Terry! :cheer


Dean is back to his defiant self which I love. I now kind of feel sorry for Murzak, even though I really don't want to...


So when will the cavalry arrive for Dean, huh?


Can't wait until tomorrow!

Great first part!
I really like the amulet's tricks!
The leather cord reparing itself, wow!

See you guys tomorrow!

Awesome start to the Beast Within Tree and Terry - and since it's you two, I'm not at all surprised at the Dean whumpage. I do so love Hurt!Dean. Great twists already: Murzak has a reason for betraying them, damn him, and there's a curse???? Had I forgotten that from VS 1? Anyway, I'm loving it, awesome job as usual, see you tomorrow! :skip

Can only read this at work - thank God Dean is back. Thought the amulet was brilliant - how much more blood ? Glad VS is back :cheer

Loved it so far, it is my first time reading it as the stories are posted. I did not realize that it would be one part every day, so that is annoying and exciting at the same time. My compliments to the writers, I am really in awe how you guys can capture our boys like that...great stuff...keep it going and I cannot wait to keep on reading...

Aw...ya'll are so nice. (Blushes and shuffles feet, realizes is standing in blood.....) :blink:

Aw Ceil - what a sweet thing to say! You were right to assume that when Terry and I get together - the result will be knee-deep blood, indescribable pain, a little torture thrown in for good measure and a suitable amount of angst just to keep everybody happy. :fire


And just think - there are still 3 more parts of this story to get through - :evil

Terry! Better break out the hip-waders, I'll be on the phone to the hospital to get the trauma team on standby for the guys - will need transfusions I think at this rate - * does best evil laugh *

Wonderful stuff! :hi5

Just wanna say poor Dean, Sam and John *hugs them all*

Dean HAS to get away but not before he whumps the YED's demonic butt!

I guess the real question would be....how much damage can a human body sustain and still survive? :melt

Let alone the mental stuff.... :blink:

You know...I'm afraid one of these guys may not make it, now I think about it. :cry

(psssst....Did we have anything in the VS story policy about not killing main characters? Could we have missed a memo?) :unsure:

Oh wait!! Silly me.....we have no policies about VS writing. :lol:

ANYTHING GOES!!!!! :fire

Quit scaring me with these allusions to killing one of my boys :cry :cry and post the second part already!! :bang

I'm dying here! :thud :thud

Just don't kill him, that's all I ask! Oh, and please, post the second part!

Okay guys, time to be put out of your misery...

The Beast Within Part Two

Aw Jeez, you guys are a bloodthirsty lot! If I wasn't so goddamn squeamish I think I might have to consider severing some Winchester arteries in my story...

wow...that's gotta be worse than any physical tourture that harris could do to dean. i wonder how dean is going to take it and what he's going to do! i hope this doesn't break dean :( and i wish sam and john would get a move on saving him already...hehe! i can't wait for the next chapter tomorrow....this one was awesome! :)

Dudes! All I can say to the Dean hurt is NO MORE!! But that's seems to have fallen on deaf ears, am I right? <_< And Sam and John just better hurry the hell up!

Grr... what's the curse?! I have a feeling that John is gonna find his way around it when Sam asks. :bang He's shady like that.


So the Yellow Eyed Demon works for a bigger Demon. Little fish follow the big fish.


Can't believe this is only part 2 and it's torture leaving us hangin like this. I guess this means you guys are doing your jobs as writers. Bravo! :clap Just hurry up with part 3...and save Dean. :cry

you guys are brutal, how long am i going to suffer like this? *sniff*

Hang in there Dean!! Defiance of evil is one of the things you do best.

I can just see Haris' face when Dean chose to communicate in...ahem...sign language rather than give him the amulet....and he almost made it out the door.

I hope Dean doesn't give in....he can't give in.....not now. Hang in there, dad and Sammy are coming!!

Poor boy has been beaten, mentally and physically tortured and is fighting possession..........(Dean just kicks booty!!) And still manages his trademark grin and smirk as well as a well chosen finger. Hehehe!

Dean may think he has lost his family, but if he gives in he'll lose more than that. All he has left is his soul and he can't trade that for anything. Death is preferable to living and losing your soul. If he gives in to save one innocent, he will only be used to destroy many, many, more innocents with his own hands and Dean should know this......it's not his fault these poor people are dying.....it's the demons. As always.

Keep your game face on Dean....the cavalry is coming!!

Awesome chapter!!!! Can't wait for part 3 (Poor boy is going to need more than a bandaid after this......)

Seriously, Terry and Tree great stuff! Although I'm starting to feel a little bloody and bruised myself! If John and Sam don't get their asses in gear and help out my boy I might start screaming! You guys rock! See ya tomorrow!

excellent second part!!!

Damn, Haris had to figure out what made Dean tick... thought for sure he was going to give up the amulet. How is he ever going to manage all that guilt??? :cry

Oh my God!
Poor Dean!
He's gonna be ready for the Psychiatric hospital after this!
I hate this Haris guy! What a jerk! Sorry, bad word but he deserve it and much more!

When Sam and John gonna arrive and rescue him?
Does he have to rescue himself or what?

See you guys tomorrow.

[QUOTE=Tree66,Apr 11 2007, 02:56 PM] You were right to assume that when Terry and I get together - the result will be knee-deep blood, indescribable pain, a little torture thrown in for good measure and a suitable amount of angst just to keep everybody happy. :fire


Hee hee. You guys certainly deliver, but if anyone is going to need a transfusion Tree, it's likely to be your readers - this particular one, at any rate! Dean is a big damn hero 24/7, but even more so when he is is in pain - that's why what you and Terry have written is so gut-wrenching. There are probably other reasons why Dean twists me in knots, but we won't go into that here! Fantastic job, see you tomorrow!

Speechless - fantastic episode. :blink:

OMG!What Dean is going to do. Two women died and Haris is ready to continue until Dean gives him his amulet :o
Sam, John, hurry the hell up!!!

What an intense story so far. Terry, Tree, great work :cheer

Oh man how much more can Dean take. John and Sam you better hurry up. Dean really needs you.

Awesome second chapter terry and Tree. I can't wait for part three,

You guys are rocking this like none other. Just when I possible think I can't hate Haris anymore, you guys prove me wrong. Grrrr.... :bang



This is a high quality episode and you should be so proud of what you are doing!


Now, get the next update out already!


Please... :D

Cannot wait for the next part...