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Title: Beta Reader Requests


grkgrl88 - November 23, 2005 04:24 PM (GMT)
Beta readers proofread writing before it's posted. They can be helpful in correcting spelling, punctuation, and grammar, as well as giving feedback on plot and characterization.

Some people post their writing as they complete parts of a fic while others want some feedback before starting a thread.

If you're looking for a beta reader for one of your fanfics, please include the following information in a post in this thread:

-Title of fic

-Rating (G, PG, PG-13)- Note that the rating does not necessarily reflect what age group the story is geared to but rather the actual content of the fic.

-Length (as in number of pages)

-One or two sentences stating what the fic is about, just for a general idea.

-Anything specific you want the beta reader to look for: grammar, spelling, punctuation, characterization, plot, etc.

-Time frame: If you need corrections made within a certain number of days, please include that in your request. If it doesn't matter, you don't need to include a time frame.

Then anyone up for the job can reply in this thread and details can be worked out from there. :)

A few things about beta reading:

If you volunteer to beta someone's fic, please send your feedback within an acceptable time, unless you work out something else with the writer.

Please give constructive feedback and do not insult the author. Fanfic is a hobby and should remain a fun past time.

Keep in mind that a beta reader gives input on a story but is not a co-writer. The writer has the final say in what goes into his/her story.


Any questions about beta reading can be posted in this thread. :)

willow2tree - November 23, 2005 05:38 PM (GMT)
I was an English major in college, I'd be happy to proofread for grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc. Content, I will leave up to the author.

Sams_Girl - February 2, 2006 05:15 PM (GMT)
I have a lot of free time on my hands, and I am a writer. I would be happy to Beta read for you. I will beta read stories of ANY content. If you need me, please either e-mail or PM me.

k93r11 - November 27, 2006 08:42 PM (GMT)
I need a beta for a fic im starting.
Irs going in romance and family and is about dean and sam having a middle sister. she is kindof like both sam and dean. Im not sure howlong its going to be yet but i have a page written now. Im mainly worried about spelling and grammer mistakes. I don't need it done in a specific time I just need it checked. It'll be rated PG. I hope that i can get someone to beta for me. I could really use the help.

k93r11 - November 28, 2006 08:43 PM (GMT)
i forgot to mention yesterday. the title is gonna be Stuck in the Middle

Daphne - January 2, 2007 09:08 PM (GMT)
Hello and thanks in advance,

I am just starting a fan fiction story and would like to request the help of some kind soul who can help me out by betaing for me.

Title of fic : Fleeting

-Rating (G, PG, PG-13)- Note that the rating does not necessarily reflect what age group the story is geared to but rather the actual content of the fic.

I would rated it pg - 13.

-Length (as in number of pages)

I haven't started it yet so only a few pages at a time. If you would like a completed fic then it will be a while. I usually write in Chapter format for posting on other sites. Is that alright to do here?

-One or two sentences stating what the fic is about, just for a general idea.

The brothers investigation of an amnesia case with relations to supernatural events.

-Anything specific you want the beta reader to look for: grammar, spelling, punctuation, characterization, plot, etc.

Punctuation, spelling, and grammar are my real weaknesses.


I would really appreciate any help someone could give me. Thank you very much in advance should you chose to help me out with this.

Daphne

cmm14513 - January 7, 2007 01:28 AM (GMT)
-dont have a title yet

-the rating might be rated r or NC-17

-Length I dont have the story started yet so i'm not sure how long it will be.

-this story is going to be a crossover with BTVS and Dean and Willow are the main characters. Dean and Willow have a night stand and after they seperate willow find out she pregnant. Giles finds the a prophecy the baby. The deamon that sam and dean are after wants the child and kidnapped willow.

-grammar, spelling, punctuation, characterization, plot, etc.

-Time frame: I would like to have the chapters when i'm done with them back in a week.

Hopefully some one can help me with story. I really want this story to be my best.

noelle - January 9, 2007 11:57 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Daphne @ Jan 2 2007, 04:08 PM)
Hello and thanks in advance,

I am just starting a fan fiction story and would like to request the help of some kind soul who can help me out by betaing for me.

Title of fic : Fleeting

-Rating (G, PG, PG-13)- Note that the rating does not necessarily reflect what age group the story is geared to but rather the actual content of the fic.

I would rated it pg - 13.

-Length (as in number of pages)

I haven't started it yet so only a few pages at a time. If you would like a completed fic then it will be a while. I usually write in Chapter format for posting on other sites. Is that alright to do here?

-One or two sentences stating what the fic is about, just for a general idea.

The brothers investigation of an amnesia case with relations to supernatural events.

-Anything specific you want the beta reader to look for: grammar, spelling, punctuation, characterization, plot, etc.

Punctuation, spelling, and grammar are my real weaknesses.


I would really appreciate any help someone could give me. Thank you very much in advance should you chose to help me out with this.

Daphne

i can help u out if u like...i'll send u a PM

Katie - January 10, 2007 11:42 AM (GMT)
Hey there!

So, I've agreed to write for an upcoming issue of a fanzine, and was wondering if any of you great people otu there would be able to help me out?

There will be a couple of fics, but not too many, that will need beta-ing, and none of them have titles yet.

Probably all around the PG & PG13 mark- character death & horror etc.

They'll all be under five or six pages, most around 1/2 - 2 pages long.

Most of them will be oneshots, and it's hard to say what they're about yet, but the on I have on right now is about Sammy's premonitions, and Dean becoming the Demon... *shock horror*

Nothing specific- just general punctuation, spelling and making sense of things, and some feedback on characterisation would be nice :)

Time frame is pretty tight, seeing as the mag comes out shortly, so 1-4 days would be great, if possible.

Thanks in advance to anyone who is considering this, and if you're kind enough to offer me your services, please, please PM me about it :)

Thanks,
Katie

ICantBelieveImNotButter - January 14, 2007 09:42 AM (GMT)
Hello everyone :D this is my first post here (Hooray!!) Anywho I am currently working on my first Supernatural fanfiction and I would really love some help if anyone is interested.


-Title of fic: Whisper Of Angels

-Rating: At the moment I am saying that it is M (15yrs in Australia) But if someone reads it and thinks of another rating that suites it better just let me know

-Length: This is currently a work in progress so I am not sure how long. Or how many chapters will be in it. At the moment there are 13 chapters but some are short.

-One or two sentences stating what the fic is about, just for a general idea: Dean's biggest secret comes out and John sacrifices himself to save Dean, Sam and....Mary

-Anything specific you want the beta reader to look for: grammar, spelling and punctuation




SammyFan17 - January 22, 2007 06:41 PM (GMT)
hello I really like have beta if no problem. ^^ just Pm if want be mine ^^

-Title of fic: Broken Inside

-Rating: rate T
-Length: right now there is olny 2 chapters but will be more as I go along.

-One or two sentences stating what the fic is about, just for a general idea: Well its South Park fanfic. Stan's home life take big change and father left and his mother hits him and he alone and Kyle trying get answres out of Stan too help him before too late.

-Anything specific you want the beta reader to look for: grammar, spelling and punctuation and missing works

thanks :D

OHs4FormerSelves - February 11, 2007 08:07 AM (GMT)
Beta Severely Needed!!

Title: Unnamed right now. Maybe a beta could lend me a hand with the naming. :P

Rating: PG-13

Length: Only 1 page as of now, but trust me it will become a LOT longer.

Summary: Please don't take my idea. I'm going to have a female hunter that used to work with Gordon bump into the boy's. If I told you anything beyond that it would probably ruin the story. I'm still working out some kinks in the plot...

Beta Specifications: Look for grammar, spelling, punctuation, characterization, plot holes. Not afraid to tell me what I did wrong. My beta for my other fanfic is a total hard a** about my tenses and what I did wrong and what I should do to make it better. She isn't afraid at all to tell me if I suck or to redo an entire chapter. I need someone hard core like her, please. I also need someone who can keep a secret and who I can trust completely.

Time Frame: Probably one or two days. I like sending it to my beta late on Saturday or Sunday night, late meaning 2 AM, and getting it back at about 9 PM on Sunday or Monday night. I like things done snappy and quickly, but I'm pretty laid back about when I get it.

Please PM me if you want to help me. Thanks for spending your time reading this! :D I really do need a beta. Beta's and editors shape my stories into something semi-good into something fantastic. And like I said before I need someone I can trust entirely not to spoil the story for others and whom I can share plot details with and make sure my character's aren't completely Mary or Gary Sue-ish.

Toodles!! :jest

The Supernatural - December 19, 2007 10:00 AM (GMT)
Hi! My sister and I are writing a new Supernatural story. We've basically got two chapters complete so far and still going! Only because we've got an adrenaline rush to complete the story and we ain't stoppin!

We're looking for someone who can help proof read (Grammar etc), characterization (mainly for Dean), ideas and honest feedback!

Rated: Not sure...PG but there are some small torture scenes.

Title: 1/4 Inch Tall

Summary: Honey! I think I shot a Winchester!
The brothers arrive at a small, western town to stop over for a night. But what happens when they realise that this quiet little town has a very big problem?

Time Frame: A week is fine but if the beta is able to beta-read quickly then that is great.

Anyone interested to Beta read please PM!

Thanks!

P.S. We've got the story all planned out, so basically we need to simply write it and get it uploaded.

hobbleit - December 29, 2007 05:59 PM (GMT)
Hi, my beta for my last story has been having some computer problems and I have a new fic which i s completed and needs to be beta'ed.

Title- Living in the Past

Length- can't remember, maybe about 50 pages. It's 11 chapters long.

Rating- PG-13? I'm not really good with American ratings.

Summary- after a hunt goes wrong Dean wakes up in the past just before his mother dies.

Anything specific you want the beta reader to look for- characterisation, someone to tell me when I start going off on tangents, making sure it makes sense.

If anyone's interested them PM me.



gypsy4ever - February 7, 2008 02:37 AM (GMT)
Reposting this here, since I was blind and didn't see it before. So sorry.

I'm wondering if anyone out there is willing to beta for me?
I need someone who can clean up my spelling, I'm really kinda bad at that. Also someone who can tell me where I am going right and wrong, and to keep me motivated to keep going.
I have started a story, and am halfway through the second part, but I always seem to get so far, and then loose interest, don't want to do that this time.
The story I've started is the first of a whole series. I know what I want to happen, I just really have trouble getting what I see in my head on paper.
I suppose it would be something of an AU, as I am ignoring the whole 'Dean sells his soul' aspect, and the series works better is the YED is still kicking.
It's about a journalist who, after a personal experience, goes out on the road and writes about the paranormal. During one of her stops to research a story she runs into Sam and Dean...or should I say, she stitches Dean's head back together after a werewolf runs into him. She makes them a deal, they let her write about their hunts, they get part of the money. So, they end up working together. She's does NOT become a tag-a-long with them. She travles on her own in a souped up motor home, and she has the most adorable dog named Georgie.
Her name is Jace, by the way. Jace Nicholes. I even have a blog site set up for her.
I'm trying not to make her a dreaded Mary Sue, and I need someone to help me make sure she does not become one.

This series will also feature several cross-overs with other fandoms. Doctor Who, anyone? I'll also be using characters from the F. Paul Wilson series of novels 'Repairman Jack', so if you know those books it would be great.

Anyone interested, please PM me. Thanks.


xxJOxNxx - February 11, 2008 10:15 PM (GMT)
Hiya :wave I need a beta reader, it's not my first time writing since i wrote fanfics before that, but didn't go too well, i've nearly finished writing a book. But i'm concentrating on the fanfics as i have too many idea's. It is my first time putting it on a website, so i'll be really greaful to get one :).

Title of fic: The good Within

Rating: Not too sure

Length: 50 odd pages

It's about how the winchester go to a town and find them selfs in love with two best friends and also find them selves facing a complete new Demon (As a twist to it) the Winchesters also learn that their not alone at hunting and with their past.

Anything specific you want the beta reader to look for: Spelling, punctuation, everything really, also would love know if i need to change anything or add anything, it be much appreciated. :)

Time frame: Its a finished one so aslong as they need :)

Please PM me if you will.

Joanne :rolleyes:

lianimal - February 18, 2008 08:02 PM (GMT)
hello my names lianne, im a pisces who enjoys pinacoladas and getting caught in the rain. i'm looking for a beta reader with similar interests and who has a fondness for crappy jokes.

lol kidding! seriously though, first time publisher of fan fiction and all round idiot at working forums, being technical or creative, so a beta reader would be really appreciated for the usual grammar, and just overall feeback.

the title is undergoing, always like to leave the title till the end.

the story isnt finished, but the theme is a female companion for the boys, really just trying to incorperate another personality into the show without insulting anyone too much.

shouldn't be too lengthy

id say pg- 13 to be safe.

what else? erm, oh who knows, if i've left anything else out, feel free to pm me.

thanks a lot

lianne



exdemon1120 - February 26, 2008 05:14 AM (GMT)
Hi first I want to volunteer for anyone who may need a beta reader. I love helping out. Funny thing is I'm better at editing other people's stuff then my own. Mostly because I have mine in my head and don't see the errors because I know how I had it pictured. But I am good at helping to spot grammar or awkward stuff in things I don't write.

Any way if anyone needs any help please let me know. (Easier to get me with a PM)


Also I wanted to ask if anyone might have time to look at a script I am nearly finished with.



-Title of fic: Consequences (working title - willing to take suggestions)

-Rating: Teen

-Length: just under 10,000 words when finished. (double spaced it's close to 50 pages in doc format.

-Summary: The brother's come off a hunt, but before they can rest Sam has a vision. It leads the Winchesters back to their hometown of Lawrence, Kansas. Now they must save an innocent girl. Meanwhile Sam is confronted with his past actions, and must come to terms with them.

-Anything specific you want the beta reader to look for: Grammar is slight issue. Mostly I want someone to look over the dialog. I have a hard time thinking of ways to work in pop culture references so help with that would be great. Also I will take any suggestions that add to a scene or the story. Like if I should add or remove scenes, move things around whatever tips or suggestions you have.

-Time frame: I'd like to have it back within a week at most. The sooner the better.

JenniferKaos - May 18, 2008 01:31 AM (GMT)
I am looking for someone to beta my fan fic "Renewing The Fires and Building New Flames". The story is Rated R and it's mainly about the two boys. Sam grew up with a girl named Liz and they separated when his dad drug him away. He decides to pay her a visit again. Just PM me if you are interested.

http://z14.invisionfree.com/Supernatural/i...showtopic=33117


hobbleit - June 4, 2008 09:39 AM (GMT)
I need a beta :D

-Title of fic Through the Looking Glass

-Rating (G, PG, PG-13)- oh hell I don't know I don't undestand American ratings (I'd put it at about a 15 in England to be safe)

-Length (as in number of pages) 64

-One or two sentences stating what the fic is about, just for a general idea. The fic is about a witch who gets trapped in a mirror and is stealing peoples souls so she can escape

-Anything specific you want the beta reader to look for: grammar, spelling, punctuation, characterization, plot, etc. I need someone to tell me when I'm rambling on. Also there are some areas in the fic I'm not sure about and would lik some help fleshing them out

-Time frame: As quickly as possible

Just pm me if you're interested

DragonTush - June 9, 2008 05:13 PM (GMT)
Hi. In need of a beta.

I already have the first chapter up but feel that it would benefit from being beta'd as well so I will be sending that as well as the next chapter.

Title of Fic...Facing Hell.

-Rating..PG to G

-Length.. only a few pages so far. Two chapters and their fairly short.

What's the story about...-Dean in hell and what happens to him. How Sam deals with Dean in hell.



-I want the beta reader to look for: grammar( I know I'm weak in this department), spelling, punctuation, characterization, plot, etc. Double check I am within Canon as well.

-Time frame: A few days is fine.

I really prefer brutal honesty. Not all out mean but I want my writing to improve and ignoring obvious flaws in style, content etc will not make for a good story. I have a thick skin and take critisism well.


Thanks to anyone who is interested.

Rosebud08 - June 28, 2008 05:56 PM (GMT)


Hi, I am getting back into the swing of writing fanfiction again. However, I think my writing skills have gone a bit rusty, and I would love for someone to beta a particular story of mine.

-Title of fic: November's Secret

-Rating: I haven't decided yet.

-Length: Around thirteen thousand or more

-Summary: Dean Winchester gets an urgent call from Bobby Singer, asking him to protect a child. Unknowing, the child happens to be Ben Braeden from a year ago. So, now it gets highly interesting to see where I'm going with the story. :) And right below is a link to take you to the first chapter. However, the rest of my chapters I hope to have a Beta look them over.

http://z14.invisionfree.com/Supernatural/i...showtopic=34682

-Anything specific you want the beta reader to look for: Grammar, punctuation, spelling, usage of words and sentences. I need someone whose going to give me good critism (SP?) and tell me when I'm out of character and how I might be able to get them back into character. Basically, I need someone to be honest with me and tell me what they think of the plot, each chapter, and all that good stuff. I'm in serious need of a Beta.

-Time frame: Two days at the most.

Raven524 - July 5, 2008 04:30 AM (GMT)
I'd be happy to help you out! Just PM me if you want me to look your chapters over.

I did comment on your first paragraph already in writing cafe. You've got a great start so far! :D

QueenBee - August 10, 2008 04:01 AM (GMT)
- Title: No Name... I haven't even gotten the first chapter written yet...

-Rating (G, PG, PG-13)- Not sure what the rating will be yet, either...

-Length: four to five pages per chapter on good days

- It's a Teen!chester Fan Fiction. There's a Boo Hag involved, but I may switch the idea to an original creature of mine. There is also a Limp!Sam in there and protective John and Dean.

-Anything specific you want the beta reader to look for: Grammar, spelling, punctuation, characterization, plot, etc. <- All of that works for what I'm looking for. However, I'm in need of a beta that can also help me out with describing a particular scene for the first chapter... I'm just at lost as to how to describe the first scene in the first chapter without it being confusing. After help in the area I should be good to go.

-Time frame: Up to three days.

I just really need a beta badly... someone to give me a little courage whenever I have doubts about a chapter or something. Just send me PM if you're interested. I'm a good writer, I know I am... I just need that special someone to give me a second opinion and help me out a little. I've suffered from writer's block, so I'm trying to get back into writing.

dangermouse00 - August 19, 2008 05:06 PM (GMT)
Two friends of mine urgently require a beta reader. They are willing to have seperate ones if one person cannot take on the both of them. Their stories are posted on www.supernaturalville.net. It would be ideal if someone that replied was also a member on there. They don't really need help with plot although a little content/description is sometimes helpful. I would do it myself, but I already beta for two people and cannot take on anymore as my workload is going to increase in the next few weeks. This is just Supernatural fanfic in general. Their usernames on www.supernaturalville.net are Supernaturalfan15 and Naturalbornwinchester. Mine is dangermouse00. Interested parties can contact me on there or you can reply to this message.

fearlessgoddess2 - August 21, 2008 11:48 PM (GMT)
I'm available as a Beta reader. If you'd like to see some of my stories I've written, you can check them out on fanfiction.com, same screen name, fearlessgoddess2.

fireball87 - September 4, 2008 03:19 AM (GMT)
Hi everyone I am doing a story over at fanfiction.net and I need a bata really badly so if anyone wants to help my username is winchester87. so just go over and read what I have and if you like it send me a pm thanks B)

dixiehellcat - September 16, 2008 01:08 AM (GMT)
hi! Anybody brave enough to take on an SPN n00b's first attempt at fic? Not my first fic per se, as I have written tons of fic going way back (Miami Vice & X Files, anyone? hehe) so my command of grammar & such is fine. I'm more in need of someone who knows SPN canon better than I do though, as I have only been into the show since July :o (what took me so long???? :bang )

The fic is not overly long, about 13,000 words, I think...set right now, as in, between NRFTW & the new season. It deals with Sam on his own on a case while still dealing with the aftermath of Dean's death, and encountering someone who helps him along. Please give me a holler if you are available & interested. Thanx! :)

trickie - February 6, 2009 01:42 AM (GMT)
Hi, I am looking for a beta...uh, the fic is in bare planning phase, i have started the first chapter.
I'm not sure which thread it will be going into or the rating. This will be my third fic, but I thought a little help cleaning up the chapters from outside eyes would be great.

The story will be about Dean remembering hell, as well as a hunt or two along the way...
The title is Echoes of Hell.

If anyone would be interested (although I know I haven't given out much on it) Please PM me and I can give you the first little bit so you can decide if you want to beta for me.

Thanks,

~Trace~

dona - April 30, 2009 08:12 AM (GMT)
Hi guys,
A great friend of mine let me knew about the Beta here so I'm so glad to find it so if I need someone to check on my story It would the beta here.
http://z14.invisionfree.com/Supernatural/i...4389&st=0&#last
Here is the link for three chapters of my story, I would be glad if you correct for me the Grammar, spelling, punctuation.
With the new chapters I will send them to you before post them but this three were before I knew there was a beta here.
Hope you reply to me & tell me about everything about the story.

supernaturalfreak8 - May 5, 2009 03:42 AM (GMT)
Since I am going to take a crack at writing (I've never wrote a fic before), I know that I'll probably need a beta to look over my stuff so if you don't mind helping out a newbie, then please let me know ;).

The story will be about Dean making another deal to get out of the one that he was in at the end of season 3 and he has to take Sam along for the ride. It's going to be like House on Haunted Hill, Supernatural style :). So it will be set at the end of season 3. I'm not sure how many chapters it might go, but I wanna take a shot at it to see if I can write this story.

Katie - May 1, 2010 01:31 PM (GMT)
Just in search of a Beta-Reader for my upcoming 'fic. I am planning on putting a few in some zines, so it would be great if they were to help me there, too. :)


Working Title: "Oasis"

PG 13 - Language

10 pages as a word document so far, I'm not finished yet, but it will be under twenty.

Stupidly, it's about a unicorn. But it's not a crackfic. Go figure.

I just want someone to check for the basics, grammar etc, and because I haven't written in a long time, my characterization is a bit rusty too.

Please PM if you're interested, any help is madly appreciated :)

Sparkle - October 2, 2010 05:36 AM (GMT)
last two posters, ill be happy to be a beta for you :) any beta available? working on a fic and could really use one




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