Title: Littleville, Alabama
Description: What the...?
Saiyuki - March 1, 2007 04:06 PM (GMT)
*Is being brave*Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters featured in the CW Show “Supernatural” created by Eric Kripke, I have simply borrowed a couple of them for my story, I did however create the character “Indy” although with that I must say that I do not own “Indiana Jones” or any related characters from Lucas films enterprises ;) or NBC’s “Heroes” :lol: Oh yeah, this comes in short easily digested sections, a new part each day, I hope you all enjoy it! :DBe Warned contains Season two spoilers (Episode 10 “Hunted”) and you are going to get Kripke’d by me at every available opportunity :P ___________________________________________Part one“I didn’t mean to do it, I swear!”
“Dean, I’m sorry, okay?
“Dude, I said shut up already, now how am I gonna fix this damn it?”
“I’ll fix it”
“Noooo way! You stay the hell away from my baby!”
“Dean? Don’t you think you’re a little …too attached?”
“Too attached? are you freakin’ kidding me? she’s my baby and I love her! Don’t listen to him darlin’, he just doesn’t understand you like I do”
Sam looked away dejected, the Impala, deans pride and joy, instead getting all of the attention…as usual.
“Look it’s just a little scratch…how was I to know that dog wanted me?”
Sam said smirking and rolling his eyes.
“Yeah he humped your leg good didn’t he, bitch” retorted Dean who then burst out laughing.
“Dude, it’s not that funny!”
“Sure it is Sammy! The best action you’ve had in weeks was with a Chihuahua...”
Sam scowled at his older brothers mock of the week. But couldn’t resist letting a small smile appear on his lips.
“Can’t you...buff it out or somthin’?
Trying to lessen the pain of a scratch on the driver’s side panel was a lot more difficult than the young hunter had expected.
“Yeah, I think that’d do it” Dean conccured.
They both got into the black Chevy, Dean driving, and headed west.
The Winchester brothers had a job in the next town, just forty miles down the highway. Fort Walton Beach, Florida.
The corpse of a seventeen-year-old male, who had been deceased for more than a decade, had mysteriously washed up from the Gulf of Mexico. Both the hands and feet were missing and his head was twisted 180 degrees, it was otherwise normal, for a dead guy.
“So Sammy, this body…”
“Yeah, whatever, this guy, why are we checking it out?”
“His body was last seen being put in his grave back in October of 1993, there were 10 or so witnesses and only 3 of those people are still alive, all that aren’t were maimed and killed by an “unseen assailant”, or so the police reports say”
“...And this happened?...”
“All within the last six days, from the day the body showed up”
“We got any leads?”
“Nothing, at all?”
“Dude I checked everything I could think of! There isn’t anything like it in dad’s journal. I even Google’d it man! we got nothin’!”
“So again tell me, why are we checking into it?!”
“...Because, well…don’t you think it’s a little strange that a mangled body shows up out of the ocean and all their old friends and family start getting killed? The fact that the body was even in the water no one can explain. The burial plot hasn’t been touched. I for one think that it’s worth our time!”
“Yeah…okay, but you touch my car again?”
“I get it, I get it”
Next part tomorrow....
jabukarakija - March 1, 2007 04:12 PM (GMT)
Awesome Jen!!! i loved it!
UPDATE NOW!!! or perish :P
Supernaturally Obsessed - March 1, 2007 04:18 PM (GMT)
Great start Jen! Can't wait to see what happens.
Saiyuki - March 1, 2007 04:24 PM (GMT)
Just for you JJ but you're gonna hate me more, you're officially about to get Kripke'd Jen style
“Where the hell are we?” interjected Dean, whilst his younger brother Sam desperately tried to give out directions.
“I think you missed the turn?”
“I missed the turn? Look who’s navigating?”
“Oh yeah, like you listen to me!”
“I do listen, I just shut off sometimes, y’know when you start spewing out that hippie yoga crap”
“Dean face it we’re lost”
As they drove down a dusty road a large sign came into view…
Littleville, Alabama, 2 mile...
...hand painted on the edge, pop 1,101
“Hey isn’t that where Superman grew up?” Dean remarked with a grin.
“How the hell should I know” Said Sam looking at the sign, “No, I think that was Smallville?”
They exchanged dirty looks and headed for the town. How did they get to Alabama? That’s well over 200 miles in the wrong direction, they couldn’t have taken that many wrong turns? Surely.
Slowly as they progressed down the road, houses began to appear, one or two and first but soon enough, they were in a small suburb with around 30 buildings around a central town square.
Dean pulled up and the boys got out of the car.
The silence was eerie, almost too quiet, it looked as though the town had been deserted for weeks maybe even months, only two cars remained, the Impala and an early 1970’s VW bug.
“Oh my god, that’s Ava’s car!” shouted Sam. Shocked to see the vehicle, he ran over to inspect it.
“Are you sure?” Dean yelled, trying to keep up with his younger, but taller, sibling.
“Yeah it is…and there’s blood on the seat”
Sam proceeded to open the already ajar passengers door to reveal the dried on blood stains all over the interior to his brother.
“What happened here?” said Dean, moving closer to take a look at the car himself.
“I don’t know” Sam replied “…But we have to find out!”
Next part tomorrow....This time for sure :rolleyes:Bet you hate me now
jabukarakija - March 1, 2007 04:26 PM (GMT)
YOU LITTLE.... I'M GONNA...WHY I OUGHTTA...
ARGH!!! GET BACK HERE!! *runs after Jen*
Supernaturally Obsessed - March 1, 2007 04:48 PM (GMT)
JEN!!!! GET BACK HERE RIGHT NOW!!!!!
Isadora - March 1, 2007 09:52 PM (GMT)
Ok being that I live like 20 miles from Littleville, Ihad to read this...and awesome work so far! Lots of love and well wishes,
Irishgirl - March 1, 2007 11:17 PM (GMT)
You're off to a great start!!! I can't wait to read more!!! :cheer
Saiyuki - March 2, 2007 12:39 AM (GMT)
Thanks Isa and Irishgirl ;)
Isa i did my research on this, and it's a lovely litte town :)
...And as it's now tomorrow where I am... :D
Walking around the town was creepy enough, the fact that Sam could swear they were being followed was making things worst.
“Dude, did you hear that?”
“What? Is your ESP going off or something, Psychic wonder?”
Sam gave Dean a sideward glance but chose to ignore his comment. Then Dean heard something too
Both men spun around on their heels drawing their weapons.
“Who’s there?” Dean shouted, a little loader than he had planned
A hush quickly came from Sam’s mouth as he pointed to a bush besides the path they were walking.
“Come out. We won’t hurt you,” He calmly explained
“Yeah, sure. That’s why you each have a 45 pointed at me” came a female voice from the bush.
Dean couldn’t quite stifle his sniggers that a bush was talking to them.
“You going to come out? Or do we have to start shooting?”
There was a pause.
“Alright, alright, you got me.” A young girl, about nineteen or twenty, emerged from behind the shrubs, arms raised.
Her long dark hair tied scruffily at the nape of her neck, she was tall, for girl, about 5”8 or 9, and very slim.
Sam couldn’t help but notice her eyes, something was off about them, they were a little too green.
“Who are you guys anyway?” the strange young woman asked.
“I’m Sam Winchester and this is my brother Dean. Do you live in this place?”
“No” She answered, “I think I’m here for the same reason you are”
The Winchesters slowly lowered their guns
“And what’s that?” Queried Dean intrigued.
“Oh?” she said, stumped “I was kind of hoping you’d know”
“I’m Indy, by the way” she reached out and shook Sam’s hand with a smile, then Dean’s too.
The brothers looked at each other, what on earth was going on?
The trio made their way back towards the main town square in an awkward silence.
Part 4 coming soon.... ;)
x0thesupernatural640x - March 2, 2007 03:39 AM (GMT)
Saw your story and read...and loved it! :D Can't wait for the next update! I need to get workin' on mine too...heh...whoops :lol: well ummm... C ya around! :)
Saiyuki - March 2, 2007 12:09 PM (GMT)
Thanks Rach! I'm so glad you guys are liking this.
I 've nearly finished it now, It's gotten to be a little longer, and darker, than i'd though it would, i'm really enjoying the proccess :D just have to write "The big Showdown" ;)
Then maybe i could start thinkin' about writing my second ever Fic :P
Reaching the relative safety of standing beside the Chevrolet Sam turned to the newbie and asked her.
“That car, the bug, was that there when you arrived?”
“Yes I, I think so, yeah” She said, nodding.
“Have you seen anyone at all?”
“No just you two, and I think you might know more than me so you better spill!”
Sam looked at his shoes. Trying to find a way of explaining it all, the random disappearance of someone he’d only known for a day, was proving impossible.
“That’s our cousins car”
Sam looked sharply up at Dean, almost thankful that he had come up with the lame cover story instead, the truth always seemed a little too weird at times like this. Although times like this were all too familiar.
“So Indy? What’s your story?” Dean inquired
“Well I was looking for someone…and ended up like a thousand miles away from where I’m supposed to be!”
“1000 miles!? We’re like 200 or 300 miles out of our way, how did you get here?”
Sam was confused, for obvious reasons, how had they gotten to Alabama? That’s a whole state north from where they should be, they hadn’t even been driving long enough to go 200 miles!
Indy looked at Sam Equally confused “I was walking, that’s how I know this is screwed up! A couple of hours ago I was in upstate New York! Then I see a road sign for this creepy little town in feakin’ Alabama! This is just…” “…Friggin’ weird?” Dean said butting in.
Indy glanced over at Dean
“Yeah. And Y’know what else? I’ve seen “House of wax”! I am so the chick that dies first! And I don’t even any of have my…stuff with me!”
“Stuff?” Dean looked her up and down.
“My…guns, Katana, flamethrower...” She grinned, “…You know? Stuff…all I have with me is my Eagle,” She said pointing at the large bulge of a gun in her backpack.
Dean smirked too “You’ve got a flamethrower!? That’s awesome!” his smile suddenly disappeared “Wait! You have a flamethrower?! What are you?”
“I’m an Avon girl! What do you think I am?”
“You’re a hunter?” said Sam sarcastically
“Yes actually! And I could kick your butt any day skinny boy!” she retorted.
The brothers looked at each other, they had to admit, this girl had spunk.
Part 5 coming soon...
x0thesupernatural640x - March 2, 2007 03:07 PM (GMT)
Loved it! :wub: Can't wait for part 5!! :lol:
Saiyuki - March 2, 2007 03:27 PM (GMT)
Warning: You're about to get Kripke'd :P Again :lol:
It was starting to get dark, Sam looked at his watch “Dude?”
“It’s just after four pm, how can it be getting dark already?”
“Four pm? What are you talking about? My watch says ten am!” Indy said looking around at the square “What is this place?”
“I don’t know, but I think we should get out of here!” Dean suggested
“Good thinking Batman, but, um…can I bum a ride?” She smiled at Dean
“Sure, get in” He said pointing towards the rear door of his car.
The girl climbed into the back seat of the impala and the boys got in the front. Dean started her up, the purr of the engine seemed even louder than usual, they had been in this town for at least a couple of hours and had gotten used to the eerie quiet of the town. They headed off out of the town square, back the way they came into it. As they made their way down the dusty road away from Littleville the houses began to disappear into the distance behind them.
“So Indy? Such an unusual name” Sam was fascinated by the new hunter
“Oh ya think?” she smiled “It’s actually short for Indigo…what can I say? My parents were hippies, well my mom anyway. Actually my dad was a big George Lucas fan and he wanted to call me Indiana…” she began to laugh “My second name is Jones…he thought it’d be cool, whatever…any way my mom? My mom wanted to call me Blue! Indigo was a compromise. Dad got to name me after his hero and Mom could call me a colour” by this point the car was filled with laughter, until a sign appeared at the side of the road.
Littleville, Alabama, pop 1,101, 2 mile
Dean slammed on the brakes and the car screeched to a halt
Indy looked at the sign “Guys that’s the sign on the way into town”
“She’s right Dean, it’s definitely the same one that we passed earlier”
Dean pondered this for a few seconds…
“Hey, I’ve just had a disturbing thought” Said Dean turning to his passengers “What if…we’re not supposed to leave?”
“Yeah, that is a disturbing thought,” agreed his passengers in unison.
Part 6 coming soon...ish :P
Saiyuki - March 2, 2007 06:51 PM (GMT)
Have they driven round in a big circle? or is something playing tricks here? <_<
Dean put his foot on the floor and they headed back towards town, again passing the same houses as they had before only this time there were cars in the driveways.
Sam saw a cat jumping over a fence then a curtain twitching in a nearby house.
As they drove back into the square, where they had been not too long ago, there were people seemingly going about their day as if everything were normal.
“Okay this definitely rates a seven-point-o on my weird ’o’ meter “ Exclaimed Dean
“Hey, Ava’s car is gone?”
“Sam? Maybe it was never there? Everything else is suddenly very here, but the bug…I don’t know but just maybe somthin’ was trying to show us something?” explained Indy trying to calm Sam’s nerves.
“What are you talking about?” Asked the driver, as they pulled up in the exact spot they had earlier.
Indy then tried to tell the Winchesters about something she had seen as a child, something that still confused her to this day.
“When I was seven, maybe eight, the woman that owned the Chinese remedy store in my home town suddenly died. In the week before that she had been telling everyone that something had happened to her. She said that a god had shown her a future without humans, instead full of Demons and vengeful spirits. Of course everyone just thought she was crazy, which, by the way, she kind of was, but that’s not the point, the point is she said the town had been deserted then everything was fine again after an hour or so…maybe this is what she meant and....it’s starting?”
“Anything else you can tell us about the creepy old Chinese lady?” asked Dean
“Yeah, she wasn’t Chinese for a start, and one day I found a photograph in her store, with me in it, looking really sad, except that it wasn’t the little girl I was then. I looked as though I was about fifteen. I kept the photo and forgot about it, until I was nearly sixteen and some Demon son of a bitch killed my Mom. That’s why I believe her story, and I don’t know, but could that be what’s happening now? A deserted town, suddenly full of life, it fits her story…”
“Yeah, scarily, it does. Got a theory Geek boy?” dean asked looking toward his brother.
“Actually, I think I do, but I’m hoping that we don’t find the word Croatoan etched somewhere…”
“Croatoan? That thing where all the towns people vanished overnight?”
“Yes, how’d you know that?”
“Apparently you’re not the only geek in this car”
Dean looked at his little brother then over his shoulder towards the new girl “aww gee you two, get a room”
“Not a bad idea Deany boy, and that motel over there looks a bit more inviting now don’t ya think?”
Part 7....soon :P
x0thesupernatural640x - March 2, 2007 07:35 PM (GMT)
Hey, I'm Chinese! Well, partly anyways... :lol: Two updates in one day! Yay! Now, I feel like a slacker... <_< Oh well...I'm seriously lovin' your story! Can't wait for part 7! :D C ya! :wave
Saiyuki - March 2, 2007 09:08 PM (GMT)
Thanks Rach ;)
They exited the car and crossed the street. The motel wasn’t nearly as run down as it had looked just a couple of hours ago, and it was really getting dark now so the three of them headed inside. Indy hit the bell on the check in desk and got a fright as the motel owner suddenly appeared from under it.
“Jesus! Dude you scared the crap outta me!”
“There will be no language like that on these premises, thank you young lady”
“I’m sorry…” Indy looked at Sam with a what the…? Look on her face, he just shrugged
“It’s okay sweetheart just not in future please”
“Yes sir” she said sincerely smiling at the man.
“Welcome to the brand new Littleville Oak street motel. How may I help you?” the man asked
Dean suddenly realised the man was directing this at him
“Oh um, a twin and a single room please” he said looking Towards Indy who smiled back.
“Ah but wouldn’t the lovely couple prefer a Queen?”
“What?” Dean was confused now, not a good look for him.
The motel owner obviously meant Sam and Indy. He was looking at them as if he were a proud uncle at their wedding.
Indy began “Well actually...” “…They’re very much in love, aren’t you Sammy?” this was too much fun for Dean in Sam’s opinion.
“So you two, are you married?” asked the clerk
“Not if I can help it…” the young woman muttered. “What was that hunny?” Sam said nudging her “I said we’re not married yet” and looking up into Sam’s pretty blue green eyes she continued “…But it’s going to be a beautiful, and very expensive ceremony” her smile dropped as she looked over at Dean, then reappeared as she returned her gaze towards the gentleman manning the desk.
The man took two keys down from their hooks and placed them on the desk in front of him.
“Do you take Master card?” Dean said as he pulled a “Mr Jackles’” card out from his wallet.
Indy grabbed the keys while Dean was occupied and walked towards the rooms at a quick pace. Sam followed her but only caught up just as she shut the single room’s door in his face.
“Hey! That’s no fair!” Sam called through the door
“Aww, but you guys look so good together…night Sam”
Her giggles were torture for Sam but he couldn’t help laugh a little too. Just as Sam picked up the Queen rooms door key their new friend had so kindly left them, Dean came rushing towards him.
“Hey Dean, what’s wrong man?” Dean’s face was almost in panic.
“I had to pay the guy with cash. All my credit cards have expired!”
“What do you mean? That’s impossible!”
“Apparently not” Dean produced a rolled up newspaper from his back pocket “Check out the date”
Sam looked quizzically at his brother, then the paper he now held in his hand “May 23rd 2011? What the…?
“Yeah that’s what I thought too. Hey where’s our little buddy?”
“Uh, in her room?”
“Funny, don’t you mean your room?”
“She ah, got ahead of me…?”
“What? Okay…you get the floor then” he grinned
“It’s your own fault so shut up”
Part 8 coming soon :D....
Saiyuki - March 3, 2007 09:00 AM (GMT)
There was soon a frantic knock on the boy’s door. Dean opened it and their companion burst in with a copy of TV week clutched tightly in her hands.
“Oh my god! Guys have you seen this?”
“Yeah, May 23rd 2011 we couldn’t believe it either” Sam told her
“So what does this mean? Sam?”
“I’m not sure…a rift in the space time continuum is the best I can come up with right now” He said shaking his head, it sounded even more peculiar when he said it out loud.
“So…What? We’ve done a Hiro Nakamura?”
“Man I love that show!” Indy and Sam just looked at Dean in Disbelief
“Shutting up now” he said as he sat on the edge of the bed.
“So do you think it could be a Demon of some kind, y’know somthin’ big and nasty, that we can kill”
“I don’t know maybe” Sam looked worried
“Well, I’m never gonna get to sleep now!”
“Really, is that so?” Dean said before making a hasty retreat to the single room next door.
Indy watched him leave but she didn’t care too much. It seemed that Sam was the only one taking any of this seriously anyway.
“How could we have lost four years? I mean? Gosh are we even four year in the future for you too?”
“Yes, it seems we’re both from 2007, my brother on the other hand? I’d go with Pluto.”
This made her smile “You do know that Pluto isn’t even a planet anymore right?”
“Yeah I heard that”
“Sam, be honest with me, ‘cause I know that Dean was lying out of his ass.”
“Honest about what?”
“The car, the bug that was here before, that didn’t belong to your cousin did it?”
Sam was rather taken aback by this but somehow felt that he could tell her.
“No, that car doesn’t belong to our cousin Rodney or even our uncle Fred, it’s…it belonged to a friend. A girl called Ava.”
He then told her all about how he’d met Ava, how she’d saved his life because she had seen his death
Although rather conveniently he left out the part where he had visions too.
Part 9 coming soon...
Saiyuki - March 3, 2007 11:52 AM (GMT)
Prepare to get Kripke'd...again :P
According to the clock in their room it was now nearly 3am. Indy had been right she couldn’t sleep, too many thoughts and theories were clogging up her mind.
Sam on the other hand, after discussing what could be going on for over two hours, had fallen asleep on the bed.
Bored Indy decided to Borrow Sam’s computer for a while. She visited Google and typed in “Littleville, Alabama”
Nothing came up, well except that it was the perfect little town, with a great police force and awards for outstanding standards in education.
She put her face in her hands.
“Well I thought this town was small but that’s just ridiculous, nothing bad at all? No murders or suicides, nothing?”
Sam stirred behind her, she turned to see him now lying on his stomach.
“You know? You’re pretty cute for a geek…” she smiled to herself and went back to the screen.
This time she did a search for the name “Samuel Winchester”
She was shocked at what came up…after the two gun sites a Government site appeared on the list.
Considered armed and VERY DANGEROUS :
Wanted in twenty-nine states for robbery, grievous bodily harm, actual bodily harm, Credit fraud, Identity theft, kidnapping and the murder of two police officers and eighteen innocent bystanders.
Indy turned around to look at the 23year old man peacefully sleeping on the bed.
“My God Sammy, how could you do these things? What are you going to become?”
Sam stirred again but this time was different, he rolled onto his back then began to toss and turn violently as if having a bad dream.
“Sam! Sam wake up!”
Indy grabbed his arms trying to hold him steady. His eyes opened and he was still again, but he wasn’t looking at Indy. It was as though he was looking right through her.
“Sam? What is it? Sam you’re scaring me”
Suddenly the door opened
“Dean, thank god”
“I don’t…” he pulled Indy out of the way.
“Sam? Sam! What did you see?”
Part 10 soon ;) ....
Supernaturally Obsessed - March 3, 2007 12:13 PM (GMT)
Okay Jen, now that I'm all caught up you better get your butt back here and update!
Great story so far, can't wait to find out what's going on. :clap
Saiyuki - March 3, 2007 01:11 PM (GMT)
Thanks Jen ;)
I'm glad i posted it now, and from here on it gets a bit darker :evil
Sam was sat upright on the end of the bed now.
Indy was shaking as she handed Sam a glass of water and an Aspirin. She’d seen a lot of things in her time, but never something like that.
She sat beside Sam on the bed as Dean crouched down in front of him.
“I saw us, all three of us, in a house, one of the ones off the main square I think. There was a Demon of some kind attacking us. Then Indy you…”
“I what Sam? Tell me…Please.”
“I’m not sure, I think you were…Possessed? Your eyes, they were…red.”
Indy was speechless.
“It’s okay, we won’t let that happen to you” said Dean now trying to calm two people at once.
“Sam what did this Demon look like?”
“I don’t know, I…I don’t know, all I can say is I don’t usually see myself in my visions” Sam was exhausted and frustrated at not being able to give more information.
“It’s okay Sam…” Said Indy putting her hand on his shoulder “Maybe you should try and get some more sleep, ‘cause, well no offence or anything, but, you kinda look like crap” She smiled sweetly as he turned to her.
“She’s right y’know you do look like crap” Dean agreed
Sam smiled finally “Gee, Thanks everyone”
It was at this point Sam noticed that his computer was on.
“Did you find anything Indy?”
She looked at him with that innocent smile “No, this towns cleaner than my grandmothers toilet, and that’s a difficult feat to accomplish.”
He smiled again “Sleep? Sleep sounds good” pushing himself back on the bed and laying down again.
“That goes for you too” Instructed Dean, handing Indy the key to the next room.
“But what about…?”
“I’ll watch him…He is my little brother after all”
Indy turned towards the door, looked back at the man on the bed, and then his big brother, and then left the room.
Part 11 coming soon...
Saiyuki - March 3, 2007 04:38 PM (GMT)
Have completed the story, I'm really happy with my ending...you have to wait a while for that though (Part 20 :rolleyes:)
As morning broke Dean raised his head from the dresser and looked around the room.
“Note to self, do not fall asleep in a chair ever again” he stood up and cricked his neck to one side.
Sam was still sleeping quietly on the queen size bed.
“Wow, well done little brother you’ve made it passed...” he looked at the clock on the wall which told him it was 6:45 in the morning “…six am? …Those visions really do take a lot out of you don’t they?” concern crossing his expression.
He had a quick shower, got dressed, then made his way out of the room where he bumped straight into Indy.
“I come bearing breakfast” she beamed handing Dean a coffee.
Dean sipped his cappuccino as Indy watched him in silence
“Okay, awkward” He then turned to her “So…Indy. Is that your real name?”
This line of questioning stumped the young woman.
“Um, well it’s funny you should ask that ‘cause actually it’s…Annaleese”
“Yeah, Annaleese Indigo Jones. I have my drivers licence and death certificate handy if you wanna check?”
She looked up at him, grinning.
“What? What do mean Death certificate?” his face dropped “You’re not a vengeful spirit of somethin’ are you?”
“Not last time I checked” said Indy shaking her head
“Well I? How? You look pretty damn alive from where I’m standing”
“It’s kind of a funny story, you see I was in Las Vegas last year and my dad, my “Real dad”, who is a total nut, tried to kill me. Which was sortta fun of course, he hit me with his freakin’ Lamborghini, which was a surprise as the repair bill for one of those baby’s is ridiculous, any way he hit me and…”
“Hey guys” Sam poked his head out the door.
“…Maybe another time”
“Mornin’ sleepy head” Dean said as he ruffled Sam’s hair.
“How you feeling Sam?” Indy asked with genuine concern in her voice.
She had even shocked herself with this one, she never liked to get close to fellow hunters, as it so often goes wrong with devastating consequences.
“Okay I guess” He replied
The three of them headed out to explore the town…again
Part 12 will be up soon ;) ....
cry_wolf - March 3, 2007 05:01 PM (GMT)
eep! Jen come back here!!! Update now!!!!
I bet Indy has healing powers or something....for some reason I don't trust her.
Saiyuki - March 3, 2007 06:10 PM (GMT)
Tobes, you know that im not the type to fold, to give you what you want just because...okay here you go :rolleyes:
[spoiler]for part Part 16 [spoiler]You sure you wanna know?[spoiler] Dean realises that he doesn't trust Indy :D[/spoiler][/spoiler][/spoiler]
It had changed so much. There were children laughing as they made their way to school, Birds singing in the trees above them, Like nothing bad could ever happen there.
Suddenly the loud screeching of car tyres filled the air, followed quickly by a smashing sound and a dull thud.
Sam was first to head towards the noises, Indy and Dean pursued closely.
As they turned the street corner the car that had made the sound came into view.
An early 1970’s VW bug…
Sam couldn’t believe what he was seeing, was it really her? “Ava?” He yelled
Sam rushed toward his friend as fast as he could, until he noticed the blood on the ground.
Ava had hit someone in her haste.
Indy and Dean stayed on the sidewalk as Sam stood in the street watching the blood pool make it’s way towards a nearby drain in the gutter. Ava was still in the car it was her!
Sam finally unfroze himself and walked steadily over to the drivers’ window.
“Ava? It’s me Sam…do you remember me?”
The woman in the drivers seat was Ava but not as he remembered her. She had aged four years, looked tired and agitated.
She rolled down her window.
“Sam…that… you can’t, it’s impossible. You’re dead!”
“Ava? No I’m not look” He leaned in towards her, reaching in through the open window, he grabbed her right hand and placed it on his chest. “See? I’m as real and alive as you are”
“Then you have to help me, It’s coming! It’s coming and it’s going to kill us all!”
“Step away from the vehicle” shouted a man from behind Sam.
Sam dropped Ava’s arm and turned to see the towns Chief of police pointing a shotgun at him.
“Get out of the way son”
Sam stepped to one side as the officer moved in on Ava. “There will be no murders in my town Damnit!” he yelled, as he shot her in the head…
Part 13...soon...ish :P
cry_wolf - March 3, 2007 06:17 PM (GMT)
LMAO! For some reason I found Ava's death funny....iunno why. *cough* But anywho...she totally should have taken advantage of Sam putting her hand on his chest. I know I would've!!
*pouts* I really want an update!!! And now I want to get to part 16!!! Jen don't leave me like this!!!
Saiyuki - March 3, 2007 07:31 PM (GMT)
not sure if we'll get to part 16 tonight :P sorry hun :(
By the way are you ready for a shocking revalation? :o
By this point a crowd had begun to gather. As the body lay in the street, Ava’s in her own car, the town’s people began to panic.
Just one or two at first, but soon enough the small town was full scared innocent people.
A few screams from the surrounding witnesses began to permeate the silence that Ava’s death had brought.
The man who had shot and killed her started trying to take control of the situation
“It’s okay everyone...” He began to yell to the crowds. The screams dissipated as the onlookers listened to him “The threat has been taken care of, so please, if you could just all calmly make your way back to your homes, lock your windows and doors until further notice. Do not open your door to anyone unless it is either my self or the Deputy”
Because this was such a small town, where everybody knew everyone else, they appeared to trust this man. The crowds slowly dissipated into surrounding buildings or down off-shooting streets, to do exactly as he had asked of them.
Dean grabbed Sam by the arm, he had to literally drag his brother away from Ava’s corpse, still sat in the drivers seat of her Bug.
“Sam, I’m sorry man” Indy said, desperately trying to console the young hunter.
Sam stared unblinkingly at the floor ahead of him as dean pulled him back into the queen room at the motel.
“She was trying to warn them” Sam whispered to himself sitting down on the bed once more.
Indy came in moments later and closed the door behind her. “Sam?..” she began.
“I’m okay” Said Sam quickly
“Well we all know that that’s a whole other pile of dookie” She continued “but that wasn’t what I was going to ask you anyway.”
She had both boys’ attention now.
“In your vision, you said you saw yourself and that’s never happened before, right?”
“Well maybe…I don’t know, maybe…it was Ava’s vision you were having, and not necessarily your own? Does that make sense?”
She could tell by the look in his eyes as they darted side to side before focusing on his hands, which lay in his lap, that he did understand and realised that she was right.
Dean finally cottoned on to what the girl was saying.
“So what Ava was yelling right before she…y’know…she’d had the same vision as Sam and was just trying to warn the town?”
Dean could see where this was going, it was heading towards the one thing he feared most, more than being alone
The “Big Bad”…
…The Yellow eyed Demon!
Part 14 soon ;) ....
Supernaturally Obsessed - March 3, 2007 07:37 PM (GMT)
:o You killed Ava!
cry_wolf - March 3, 2007 07:39 PM (GMT)
Oh noes!! The suspense!!!
OMG! *cries harder* I have a hard enough time trying to remember fanfics I've started to read. You're gonna have to PM me when you update this.
x0thesupernatural640x - March 3, 2007 08:06 PM (GMT)
OMG! I can't believe you killed Ava! :o And poor Sammy! :cry I'm glad I'm caught up now...Can't wait for part 14! :lol: C ya! :wave
Saiyuki - March 3, 2007 08:10 PM (GMT)
I'm aiming to get the whole thing posted by tomorrow night :D 6 more parts to go ;)
“Dean? What was she warning us about? Did I miss the memo or something?”
Indy was getting agitated now, not getting the answers she needed was starting to make her head spin. She sat next to Sam on the large soft bed and glared up into Deans hazel green eyes, searching, waiting.
“We’ve spent pretty much our entire lives hunting down this son of a bitch, here’s our chance to kill it!”
“Dean? Do you really think it’s him?” said Sam, panic in his tone
“Calm down Sammy, we can handle it this time”
“With what Dean?” he yelled as he stood in anger “We don’t have the Colt how do you suppose we kill it? Have you even got a plan?”
“I’m working on it” dean explained squaring up to his taller sibling.
“Yeah sure Dean, whatever”
“You guys? Will you quit bickering? Gee wiz, it’s like watchin’ a pair of eight-year-olds fight over which is the best power ranger. It was Trini, the Yellow one from the original series, so you can drop it and tell me what the hell you two are yelling about! …I’m waiting!”
She was standing as well now, slightly flustered, staring the boys down one at a time.
The brothers looked at each other, then Sam began. “A Demon, a Demon with yellow eyes…It’s destroyed our lives, our family…”
“It killed our mom, probably our dad too, and Sam’s girlfriend”
At the mere mention of his girlfriend, Jessica’s demise, Sam sighed and looked away from the conversation.
“Wait…Sam? It…it killed your girlfriend? Was it…um…” She struggled to find the words “…A freak fire?”
Sam turned back to face her “How’d you know that?” his voice croaking slightly
“Because some thing, made of pure evil, pinned my boyfriend to the ceiling and then murdered him with fire”
She began to well up but managed to push back her emotions with a sharp sniff.
“When did this happen?” Said Dean cutting into the tension.
“That doesn’t matter…what matters is that I know how to kill the bastard!”
Part 15 coming soon....
xgetawayxcar09 - March 3, 2007 08:42 PM (GMT)
WHY DIDNT YOU TELL ME YOU HAD A FANFIC OUT JEN
gawwd and its so GOOD TOO
ava is dead
YED is back
and i like INDY!
Saiyuki - March 3, 2007 09:02 PM (GMT)
Sorry Shannon :unsure: , Glad you're liking it though :D
Dean couldn’t quite believe what he was hearing “What do you mean, you know how kill it?”
Indy smiled at him, the first smile that room had seen all day
“You remember that woman I told you about? The one that owned the Chinese medicine store”
“Yeah, so?” Dean said
“Well, this is most definitely what she was talking about all those years ago.”
“I’m sorry I don’t follow” Sam said, looking rather perplexed to say the least
“She said that a God showed her! That’s the key!”
She was getting exited, the two men just watched her while they got more and more confused.
“Indy please can we have that in layman’s terms, y’know…for Dean. What do you mean? The key?”
Before Dean had realised what his little brother had said she continued explaining her theory, thus getting Deans full attention once more
“First we find who ever the hell that pile o’ turd is possessing then, well, you’ve heard the expression ‘To fight fire with fire’ right? I’m thinkin’, maybe that’s exactly what we got to do!”
“Fight a fire?”
“No Dean, that’s just stupid! …We gotta summon a God!”
Part 16 tomorrow...Sorry Tobes :unsure:
Supernaturally Obsessed - March 3, 2007 09:06 PM (GMT)
Part 16 NOW, not tomorrow.....NOW.
*crosses arms and taps foot.*
x0thesupernatural640x - March 3, 2007 09:10 PM (GMT)
OoOoOoOo! :o Can't wait to see what happens! :lol:
Saiyuki - March 3, 2007 09:42 PM (GMT)
I'm too good to you lot :P
Oh yeah, you're gonna get Kripke'd again :rolleyes:
The room fell silent
Dean looked at Indy, then Sam and back at Indy. This wasn’t the time for jokes.
“A god? Are you freaking kidding me?”
Indy’s child like smile faded from her lips. “Well I...”
“How do you suppose we summon a god? Huh?”
“Don’t worry,” she explained, “I think I’ve got that covered”
She was straining his patience and Dean was getting angry. He’d only known her for twenty-four hours, he realised he didn’t really know her at all.
Sam felt the air thicken in the room “We have to get these people out of town before we do anything Dean.”
“Sam’s right, we can’t risk all these innocent lives” Indy concurred
Suddenly screeching car tyres and revving engines could be heard coming from outside. All three of them turned their heads towards the door.
“What the…?” Dean exclaimed as he made his way over to the door, opening it the noise entered the room even louder.
“They’re leaving already? I guess they didn’t wanna stick around to find out what was coming, they’re just getting out of its way” Indy mused
“Sure makes our job easier though, right?” Dean remarked, closing the door. “Okay, so who’s the Demon possessing?”
Indy’s hand shot into the air.
“NO! Stupid” She rolled her eyes “I think it’s the cop”
“Dean you know that makes sense. He’s an authority figure, he practically controls the whole town. He could tell them to do whatever he wants”
“Except that they didn’t listen to him, did they Sammy?” he said gesturing towards the noises outside.
“Then who Dean” Indy interjected “Can you enlighten us, please?”
He pondered this for a moment before a terrifying thought occurred to him. “It’s the Motel clerk!”
“Well done Dean” came a voice from the door as it creaked open.
It was the motel owner but his eyes shone yellow in the dull light of the room.
“You’re daddy would be so proud”
Part 17 tomorrow... :lol:
Supernaturally Obsessed - March 3, 2007 09:49 PM (GMT)
Arrrrrrrggggggghhhhhhhhhh No!!! You can't leave it til tomorrow Jen! You can't!
Irishgirl - March 4, 2007 12:09 AM (GMT)
Just got caught up. I'm loving this story! I can't wait for more!!! :cheer
So if they're 4 years ahead does that mean that they get to see Rush Hour 5?
x0thesupernatural640x - March 4, 2007 12:20 AM (GMT)
Gaaaaah! I wanna know what happens! I can't wait for tomorrow! <_< Gaaaah! *Stays up all night, staring at computer screen then realizes it's only 7:00* :unsure: Well, I'm still waiting for the next part! :lol:
jj'sgirl - March 4, 2007 01:36 AM (GMT)
hey this is really good. It is such a neat twist to the whole yellow eyed demon story. Great job so far. And I gotta tell you that I loved that last line. "You're Daddy would be so proud." :unsure: Bet that's gonna tick Dean off to no end. Great job. Can't wait for the next one.
cry_wolf - March 4, 2007 03:20 AM (GMT)
Eep!!! *dances* I'm so loving this!!! Sorry I'm late in reading but I had to go shopping!!!
GAH!! Tobes wants part 17 now pweese :P
Saiyuki - March 4, 2007 09:27 AM (GMT)
Wow! :blink: thanks everyone, i really wasn't expecting this kind of response :blush by the end of this you are going to either love me :wub:, hate me :rant or wish you had my keen intelect :lol:
Parts 17 and 18 are pretty short so they will be appearing soon after eachother ;)
The three hunters had their wide eyes fixed on the Demon standing by the open door.
“You know I could have sworn I’d destroyed every last one of you Winchesters. Oh, and Anna? Nathan says hi”
He said mocking her with a little wave.
“You son of a…”
“Now, now. What have I told you about your language?”
“Um, excuse me sir” came a quivering voice from outside “You shouldn’t be out, it’s not safe”
It was the police officer from earlier.
The Demon smiled at the hunters then turned and headed out towards the cop. The door closed behind it.
Indy heard the door’s lock click over. “Bathroom window. NOW!”
Sam and Dean grabbed their handguns and quickly tucked them in their jeans. Indy opened her backpack and tipped its contents onto the bed. As they heard the screams of the officer from outside she grabbed her piece plus a small black, leather bound, book and headed after the Winchester brothers and into the bathroom.
Part 18 coming very soon ;) ....