Woo hoo and we get closer and closer to the finale...


Sins of the Father Part One

Sins of the Father Part Two

'Dad?' :o :o :o

Oh...let it be tomorrow...NOW!!!

Ohohoh!! John.... :wub: *Sighs happy sad sighs*

Great start. I can't wait for tomorrow.

yay, it's Johnny!

and hm, those boys better stop getting on eachother nerves before someone gets hurt...

i wonder what's going on in this place... hmmm

lol. Wha a great way to start this ep with another prank war!! Had me laughing my butt off! :lol: Can't wait for part 2!! :cheer

I enjoyed so much this first part. Great start Tracer :)
The banter between the brother, hi-la-ri-ous :lol:
Dad is there in that little tiny place waiting for his boys, what a surprise.
Now, I'm very intrigued, can't wait for part 2 :)

The boys are back - fun opening - love the banter. Can just see Dean's face when they see Dad. Can't wait for part two. : :lol:

Glad you guys are enjoying the jokes and stuff. Thanx so much for reading!

:cheer YEAH! DADDY IS BACK!!! :cheer


But for what reason????? :bruce :fire


Can't wait until chapter 2!

OMG! awesome! LMAO oh my Gosh Sam and Deans joke thing really cracks me up. Can't wait for more! :cheer

the writers of the show should take note and add some of this in an episode.it was so funny, especially more sheets for poor sammy lol.
becs xxxx

Part two time!

Sins of the Father Part Two

Oh John!! What are you going to do??? :o I just love, love, love fics with John in as well as the boys, especially ones where Sammy is being gloriously stroppy and snarky. So this chapter was perfect.

And...all the Sammy!Hair talk too. Although my poor boy's beautiful hair comes in for some teasing. :lol:

Oohh...Sam's flicky, sticky out hair...Just gorgeous!! :wub: :cloud9 :melt

*Is happy*

Who is John talking to? Why can't it be tomorrow already.

LMAO love the jokes between John and the boys! can;t wait for part three! :cheer

ooh, Johnny better not do something unwise and end up being killed... i can't see that poor guy die again.. and who was he talking to?

AND BROKEN CELLPHONE MY EYE! tsk tsk tsk, John...

I can't wait until tomorrow's part! :)

I think I see a pattern emerging in recent VS episodes... Namely oodles of Sam!Hair!Fetish and Sam!Big!Feet!Fetish and Sam!Big!Hands!Fetish... There's probably a name for that, but I haven't worked out what it is yet.
;) :D

LMAO! WELL, you know what they say about guys with big feet *winks* as for big hands, Im sure its the same as the feet. I wouldnt doubght it! :wub:

Why does he always do it to the boys ??? Can't wait 'til tomorrow :car

What John is up too <_<
Captivating read so far, can't wait for part three :)

And here it is!

Just a little word in advance that tomorrow's part might be a little later being posted. I have to work later and won't get to see Hunted even until tomorrow soo...but rest assured, it will go up. ;)

Sins of the Father Part Three

This is so good. Thank you for all your hard work Tracer.

wow, that was really good. poor Dean the health freak.... he really needs to get Sam back for that one, lol.

tomorrow is the last part, hurray!

LOL!! Poor Dean being given the fruit for breakfast - nice one Sam!! :lol: :lol: :lol:

Such a good chapter and I love the brotherly Daddy angst at the end. Can't wait to read the last chapter tomorrow. :)

Um, nope, there's no such pattern. I dunno where y'all got that idea. :rolleyes: :P

healthy food for Dean :D
Sam is so going to pay for this :rolleyes: :D
Awww....hate the tension between the brothers, it's often happened when they talked about their father.
Only one part, can't wait to know how the story'll end.

Gotta admit that was a good one :D What is John up to . Really looking forward to the next part :cheer

HUH?! - eloquent as usual my dear Tracer - :hi5

Can't wait till tomorrow to read the rest - great job - of course! :bow

Well you know me! lol , thank you guys for the kind words and for reading! Hope you enjoy the ending!

I want the rest :bang :bang

Loved it! LMAO the whole Sam kaing Dean eat health food cracked me up. Don't be too long on the rest!

well kitts has to work a bit later today, so it prolly will be posted later this afternoon! Glad you guys are liking it.

:o

ARGH!!

Well will just have to wait on pins and needle Tracer!

Love it!!

:cheer :wub: :cheer

Hi everyone, I think you may want to bash us for where this leads, but trust me...you'll love the finale muhahahahaha...


Sins of the Father Part 4

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haha dont warn em. Thanx for getting it posted chica!

Talk about endings this one takes the biscuit!!!!!!!!!!!! So how long do we wait for the virtual season to continue?

AHHHH TALK ABOUT CLIFF HANGER FROM HELL! &*glares* get your butts back and add the rest. this was soo good! LMAO dean making sam lsiten to a song about clowns. talk about mean! :cheer

not long. Next week is the finale!

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Aaaagghhh!!! John!!! Again another cliffhanger with John!!!! Love it!! :lol: :clap

And that was a great payback by Dean - poor Sammy. :lol: :lol:

I can't believe it's the finale next week. I remember working out the dates and thinking that by the time this all finished S2 would be just about to start here...and that that was ages away. And now it's not...