This is my first fanfic and I was thinkin this would be a good idea so this is it.
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Chapter one: My Little Girl

Dean paced the hall again and then looked at the clock 10:41 the exact time his father died four years ago.
"Dean!"A voice yelled from behind.
Dean turn around to see two people running towards him.
"Dean it's a girl." the women or Dean's wife said holding his daughter.
"I have a niece." Dean said.
"Her name is Rachel Noelle Winchester." Sam said tears slowly forming in his eyes because he was proud of having a daughter himself.
"Cousin,' Dean's daughter said excitedly.
"That's right Becky," her mother said. They walked to the delivery room.
"That one is her," Sam said pointing at a small girl in the front of the room.
Six Months Later
"I'm going to get the check up," Megan said and walked away as Sam stood and signed in to the hospital.
Sam then walked to the hospital room and knocked on the door to only notice his wife Megan was gone. He walked into the room and looked around and nothing he went out the bed and saw drops of blood falling from the ceiling.
"No,' he said not looking up. "This is not happening again, no it's not true," he repeated and looked up only to she his wife dead.
He ran out as another fire started.
"Dean!" Sam said searching for his brother.
"Dean!" Sam yelled again. "Sam what's going on?" Dean asked.
"Katie, where is she?"
"She went to go to the bathroom with Kady why?"
"The Demon it's here,"Sam said and starting to run towards the closest bathroom.
"Katie you in there?" Dean asked.
There was a muffled voice but nothing else they barged in to find Becky on the floor with blood on her. The drips still coming from above. Dean lifted his daughter and he ran out not even looking above him.
"Sam why now? We tried to give this life up why is it coming back now."
"We've got more work to do,' Sam said holding his daughter close while walking towards the classic Impala.

ok here is chapter 2. no posts... but thats ok I like it!
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Chapter two: The Almost Twins

16 years later
"Wakey wakey Ray-ray," Rachel heard Becky say across the room.
"What!" Rachel asked annoyed from the lack of sleep. "and it's Rachel," she added.
"Dad or your uncle wants to go on a run."
"Well I have a final to study for so I can't."
"Well then I guess I'll go tell our dads and see what they say."
"Ok then go I don't care what they think they can do whatever they want I'm still studying." She said as Becky walked down the stairs to the kitchen.
"Well what did she say?" Dean asked his 19 year old daughter.
"She has a final to study for." Becky replied grabbing bread and puting it in the toaster.
"Like Father like daughter," Dean mumbled.
"What was that?" Sam asked coming down the stairs his hair still wet from the shower.
"Nothing your daughter just wants to study for a final instead of training with us," Dean said.
"Ok? Then let her it's not like it's gonna hurt her she's already smart and she doesn't need training when she's got sports."
"Like is said before," Dean said looking at his daughter now buttering her toast.
"Becky, will you drag your Rachel down so she can have breakfast with us." Sam asked his niece.
"Of course," Becky said running up the stairs with her piece of toast.
"Ray come on we're having breakfast," Becky said walking into there room and seeing her cousin with a labtop and three books in front of her.
"Ok one second," Rachel said still looking st her books.
"Did you even here what I said?" Becky asked.
"What?" Rachel asked looking up.
"Let's go eat breakfast, I mean for a supposed smart person your really stupid," Becky said roughing her litle cousin's hair.
"Will you stop I'm not a little kid." Rachel said pushing Becky's hand away.
"Whatever you'll always be younger than me," Becky said running down the stairs with her cousin close at her heels.
"Girls knock it off," Dean said.
"Yes sir," Both girls said still giggling.
"So Rachel I understand your getting ready to take finals," Her uncle said.
"I'm graduating early," Rachel said quitely.
"What?" her father asked amazed.
"I've got a full ride to Harvard," She said.
Becky and Dean looked at Sam and then Rachel.
"So your going to college?"Sam asked.
"Yes I'm going to live a normal life you said you were going to live." Rachel her confidence growing.
"It's not going to work," Sam said all knowingly.
"Well then I'm going to try not to think about it and I would appresiate it if you guys didn't vist it would be werid and I'm not about werid now."
"When are you leaving?" Becky asked.
"Next week," She said heading back up the stairs.
"Like father like daughter," Dean repeated.
Sam followed his daughter up the stairs.
"So your not changing your mind on this are you?" He asked.
"No it's final dad even our puppy dog look isn't even gonna work," She said walking into the bathroom for a brush.
Sam took the brush and began to brush his little girls hair.
"Why are you doing this dad your just making it harder for the both of us."
"You want to know what your grandfather did when I told him I was going to Stanford?"
"What?" She asked.
"He told me to leave and never come back."
"Oh dad I'm coming back after college it's just gonna be awhile."
"Ray-ray promise me you'll talk to your cousin before you leave she gonna be the one most heart broken in this."
"I promise," She said.
"Becky!" She yelled down the stairs.
Sam got up and went down the stairs as Becky went up.
"What?" She asked.
"Will you keep my stuf so whne I come back I'll have my stuff."
"I'm going to miss you so much."
"It won't be that long swear."

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keep going please

thank you your my first reply i'm soo happy im gonna cry some one actually like my story :cry

I love it! It really is like father like daughter. What a cool idea for a story! :D

thank you so much I got the idea from my two great friends Becky and Rachel hint the characters names.
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Chapter Three: Two Years and Three Phone Calls Later

"Dad?" Becky asked the darkness nothing
"Uncle?" she asked again nothing.
"Well this is great you guys have been gone for three months and no phone calls I'm started to get worried," she mumbled to her self as she walked out to her black ford 150.
"Well at least I know who is gonna help me find you," she said and started to drive.

Harvard Campus

"Do we have to go?" Rachel asked.
"Well there's nothing else to do." Her boyfriend said.
"We could stay here Cameron." Rachel said.
"Yeah that's a good idea," another voice added in.
"Becky?" Rachel asked.
"In the flesh cuz," Becky said.
Rachel went ot hug her when she stepped back.
"Wait why are you here?" Rachel asked.
"This is your cousin the one you told me about?" Cameron asked.
"Oh yeah Becky, Cameron and Cameron, Becky."
"He's hot," Becky whispered to Rachel.
"Well?"
" Oh I'm here to tell you that our dad's are missing."
"So they'll come back eventually." Rachel said rolling her eyes if it was a stupid question.
"Rachel they haven't been home in three months!" she exclaimed.
"Oh," She said suprised, "Um Cameron will you excuse us for a sec."
Cameron walked into there room and closed the door. Becky opened the door to the front porch and lead Rachel to her car.
"Look they told me that they were coming back in a few weeks but I keep getting e-mails prolonging there return till I stopped getting them completely. That's when I got a one saying they were on there way back so I got home and came to nothing. I tried calling and still nothing, see I need your help to find them."
"Well what were they hunting?"
"I don't really now see what happened was I went on my own hunt and they didn't tell me what they hunt just that it was immportant tothe family."
"Then what did the last e-mail say then?"
Becky took out the labtop and brought up her e-mails. It said: Dear Beck your uncle and I are coming home will be there in like a couple of hours so if you want you could welcome us home and if your going to check on Ray don't worry we just did she fiene wiht that guy again. But this hunt was intense tell you bout it la..."
"Why didn't you tell me it was cut off that would of been a hint that something might have happened!"
"Well I forgot ok!"
"Wwll let's just stop fight ok we can't do that rigtht now anyways. Alright do you at least know where they were."
Then Becky's phone beep in the car signaling she had a voice mail.
"Just a sec," Becky said grabbing her phone and listing to the message a shocked look on her face.
"Who was it?" Rachel asked.
"Dad."
"What let me listen!"
"Hy eck e kno we aven't cald n a whie ut omhng as ame p."
Rachel paused the message.
"What's up with it?"
"It's not my phone I have full signal,"
"Then it must be where they are."
She continued the message.
"e r till unting unting ow ealy ut er n oble i ean al of s achel espically protect her also yo ned o fin or uncle he left me."
"Let me try something." Rachel grabbeed the message and streamed it through a wave.
It began to say "Hello girls" over and over.
"That's creepy," Becky said and shuddered.

Just stumbled upon this and I really like it. Please keep up the great work. Can't wait to read more!

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Hey, cool! I really like it so far!!! It is REALLY cool!!! (sorry, I'm new...) I do like it!!!

:o Hehe, that was akward...

sorry for the wait i'll post a little later around Christmas is a heck tick time and also thanks for the reviews I always feel loved when I get them!

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Well I've finally got time to post and so here it is.
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Chapter 4:Now Do You Belive Me?

"Please tell me you heard that too?" Rachel asked.
"Now do you belive that there in trouble?" Becky asked shoving her phone back in her pocket.
"Yeah I do and I'll help as long as you swear to get me back by Thursday."
"What's on thrusday?" Becky asked raising and eyebrow.
(Supernatural of course! lol)
"Mine and Cameron's two year aniversery."
"So your really serious about this guy?"
"Since the day I met him."
"Well does he know about our life?"
"Your life not mine. That was the past he doesn't need to know about." Rachel said walking to her room to go pack.
"So your cousin comes and tells you that your dad's are gone and you jump up and are ready to leave?"
"Cameron they are family even if they didn't approve me to go to school."
"Well will you be back by Thursday?"
"Of course how could I miss something like that."
"Swear," He asked leaning in to kiss her.
"Swear," she said kissing him.
Becky cleared her throat in the background.
They broke apart and looked at her and she tapped her wrist to signify that it was time to go.
"I got to go," Rachel said running after her cousin.
When they got to the truck Becky started it and suddenly Justin Timberlake's "My Love" filled it.
"Wait to ruin a moment!" Rachel yelled over the music and turned it down.
"Well we need to start and with you two love birds we would've been there till thursday." Becky said turning it back up.
"Oh god help me now," Rachel said laying her head against the window.
Two Hours Later
"How are going to find them?" Becky asked.
"Well I think I might be able to track your dad's phone call back to where it was when he called you. All I need is your phone."
Becky handed Rachel her phone and turned the music up as Three Days Grace " The Animal I Have Become" up
"I can't consintrait with that stuff on," Rachel said turning it back down.
"It's not stuff it's great music." Becky argued.
"Well the call came from a town called Penryn in California."
"How long till we're there?"
"Counting getting gas about a day."
"This is gonna be fun." Becky said turning the music up and reving her engine as they went dow nthe deserted highway.

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Well here's the next chap I'm adding a younger version of me in this story so it's gonna be fun. Hint: my name starts with a M...
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Chapter 5: A Small Town Called Penryn

Three Weeks Before the Winchester Girls Arrive

"Binx come on this is gonna be fun," James said to the 13 year old girl.
"She'll do whatever she wants James leave her alone," Megan said pushing aside and looking at the supposed hanuted house of the town.
"I told you two I'm not going in there." Bianca said crossing her arms to signify she wasn't going.
"See Megan I told you she was gonna chicken out pay up," James said holding his hand out for the money.
"Look what you did now Bianca I have to pay him 15 bucks cause your scared to come in a freakin house," Megan said reaching in her pocket for the money.
"Fine I'll come but if any thing happens I'm blaming you two for forcing me," Bianca said walking towards the up the stairs towards the house.
"Ha I had faith in her," Megan said pushing James and holding her hand out for the money.
"She's not inside yet," He said punching her lightly.
"Um yeah she is." Megan said pointing at her friend who was waiting for them with the door wide open.
"Damn it," he said grabbing his wallet and putting the money in her hand.
"Guys hurry up!" Bianca yelled.
They walked to the stairs and looked up them and it was dark.
"You brought the flashlights right?" Megan asked James.
"Nope," He said and grinned as he walked upstairs.
They follwed him closly alot more then before.
"Dude where do you think Haley and Johnny disapeered?" Bianca asked Megan.
"Wherever James went," Megan said point ahead but when she went to look back at Bianca knowone was there.
"Great," Megan said running down the stairs before anything could get her.
She ran out the door and an unseeble force slamed it close.

The Winchesters have arrived!

"So, that's what happened?" Becky asked.
"And those are all four of your friends?" Rachel asked.
"Yep we were all just messing around and I havn't seen them since and it's been tree weeks."
"Has anyone else came to see you about this?" Backy asked.
"Yeah actually two men one taller than the other one. One had longer hair and the other a sandy blonde brown."
"Thanks for your time we'll come back if we have anymore questions." Rachel said following Becky out the door.
"Well we know they were here." Becky said.
"Yeah but how's that gonna help us your dad probly already left." Rachel said.
"Well we don't know if your dad left yet because my dad said that he left me not the town."
"Your right," Rachel said thinking things over.
" You better be putting you college brain to full us in this case."Becky said starting her car and going to find a motel.

At Megan's House

"Thank you Megan for not telling them I was here."
"No problem Sam as long as you find my friends we'll be even," Megan said.
"You know I will," He said turning around and looking out the window.
"And why did Dean want you to do this anyways?" Megan asked looking at Sam who was turned around.
"The demon is coming soon a friend of ours told us we need to protect Rachel from it."
"Then stay as long as you want."
"They'll be back, there just like Dean and I on there first mission together."

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Here's the next post and to let you know there is goning to be two parts to this one and man do I so wish that Sam was actually hiding from his daughter and niece in my house!
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Chapter 6: One Haunted House, Two Winchesters, Three Spies and Four Missing Teenagers
Part One

Dean Winchester watched his daughter and niece enter the haunted house checking his surroundings he noticed a teenager following them.
"Well I see you went far," A voice said behind him.
"Sammy what are you doing here?" Dean asked pretending he didn't know that his little brother was still in town.
"Well the same thing as you of course," Sam replied stepping over the bush blocking him from his brother.
"So you sent a 13 year old after them?" Dean asked.
"Dude Megan for your information has powers and belive me she has them under full control."
"Isn't she the one that almost took us out and then she wanted her friends to go look at the house,so she pretty much got the captured and got money from the guy because they bet on there friend."
"Yep, that's the one."
"God there going to see her in seconds."
"Not really," Sam said grinning.
"Um yeah they will."
"Well do you see her right now?" Sam asked.
"No there's knowone outside," Dean said looking around to makesure he was right.
"Dude she's invisible," Sam said pointing at nothing.
"That's not my only power," A voice said in front of them.
"Ok that's just freaky." Dean said as a girl appeared in front of him.
"Sam you said that you guys checked that house up and down."
"Yeah we did," Dean said.
"Well your daughters just found a trapdoor." Megan said rolling her eyes.

Inside the house
"Rachel!" Becky yelled.
"What?" Rachel asked going over the walls with an EMF detector.
"I've got something," Becky said running her hands over the ground to find and trapdoor.
"Whoa,"Rachel said looking how old it was.
"Help." Becky said trying to reach and open it.
They grabbed the door and tried to open it. They yanked once then twice and with a loud creak it opened with alot of dust.
"Youngest first," Becky said pointing the flashlight down the creepy dark hole.
"Jerk," Rachel said climbing down the stairs.
"Bitch," Becky replied climbing after her.
They reached the bottom and found it filled with alot of old and differnt wepons used for tourture.
"Ah that's sad,"Rachel said.
They looked around the room there was signs of recent movment and there was tons.
"I'm guessin an evil angery spirt," Becky sugguested
"Me too."
"Let's go talk to that girl Megan she might beable to tell the legend of the house."

Megan's house
"Hello again,"Megan answered.
"Hey we want to know why the house is haunted." Becky said getting straight to the point.
"Come in, want anything to eat."
"Umm..." Becky said thinking.
"No we don't," Rachel said elbowing Becky so she stopped thinking about it.
They sat at the table and Megan began.
"It was 1903, there was a man named Stephen Kilson his wife had just died along with his son and daughter. They say he went crazy and started going through the town searching for the perfect son and daughter between the ages of 12 and 16 because he wanted kids so badly.So everytime he saw a teenager he would take them to his house and lock them in the supposed cells under the floor of the first story. He would keep them and make them do things around the house like clean and perform for him. And if they didn't listen he would tourture them till they did.Then he supposedly started to tourture them instead of actually using them. He then suddenly died but before he did he vowed to find the perfect childern and he now haunts the house waiting for them to come. But that's just a legend."
"Yeah of course," Becky said looking at Rachel who was looking towards the end of the hall.
"Well thank you for telling us I guess we should go," Rachel said getting up and going towards the door.
The two walked out towards the car.
"What did you see?" Becky asked.
"Nothing I was just seeing things," Rachel said looking back at the house to make sure it wasn't true her uncle wrapped in a towel going into a room.
She shook her head that's just werid she thought as they left the house to go find a nice motel if there was such a thing.

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Thax for the post guys I really need to know if I should continue this so tell me if you want me to thank you!
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Chapter 6:One Haunted House, Two Winchesters, Three Spies and Four Missing Teenagers
Part Two

Under the creepy haunted house

"I totally told Megan and James that something was going to happen why don't you and Megan ever listen to me!" Bianca complained again.
"Will you just shut up!" The three missing teenagers yelled at her.
"You know I noticed something you want to guess what it is?" Bianca asked the other three.
"No Bianca please enlighten us." Johhny said.
"Well it's just that why did we get captured and Megan is totally not."
"Yeah I noticed that too," Haley said.
The boys rolled there eyes.
"Why doesn't anything bad ever happen to her you know I'd think you'd be sad all the time with your mom dead but she seems to be livin the life," Haley and Bianca pouted.
The boys looked at eachother they hand noticed tht but they also just heard a noise outside.
"Time to play kiddies," A raspy voice said and a man appeared outside the cells.
The girls screamed and backed away from the doors.
"You two first," The decaying hand pointed to Haley and Johnny.
"Um why can't they go first?" Johnny asked.
The spirt suddenly appeared in their cell.
"Are you not listening to me boy?" The spirt said grabbing Johnny by the collar.
"n..oo no sir," Johnny muttered.
"Good cause I don't like boys who don't listen to me." The spirt said taking Haly by the hair and draging her and Johnny out of the room.

The "Nice" Motel

"I swear I saw your dad in a towel going into one of those back rooms," Rachel said laying back on the bed lookingat the ceiling.
"Well that's pretty much impossible,"Becky said throwing the brush at Rachel so she could brush her hair.
"How do you know that? Owww!" Rachel asked as the brush hit her head.
"Sorry," Becky said turned around.
Rachel tackled Becky and they fell to the ground wrestling.
"Dude get off me!" Becky said throwing her little cousin off of her and laying on top of her.
Rachel then grabbed the brush and hit her head with it.
"What the heck!" Becky said grabbing her head.
"You threw it at me and that's where it hit me!"Rachel said moving her cousin.
"So this was all because I hit you with a brush!" Becky yelled.
"Yes," Rachel said getting back on her bed.
"Ugh Ray for a college kid your not that smart."
A shoe came flying at Becky and she ducked.
"It's Rachel and I'm not a kid I'm an adult."
"Sure don't act li..." Becky didn't finsh her phone began to ring.She flipped it open and answered.
"Hello?" She asked.
"Yeah."
"Ok well be over there in a second," Becky said grabbing her jacket and keys.
"What now?" Rachel asked.
"There was reported screaming at the house and Megan wants us to check it out."

Outside The Motel
"Dude my daughter was totally kickin your daughters ass," Dean said grinning at Sam who was looking at Rachel. He was thinking not even paying attention to what Dean was saying. Rachel was so pretty like her mother. Her shoulder length brown hair it was filled with natural blonde highlights and her brown eyes hinted with a gleam of hazel. He smiled working with this girl Megan reminded him of is wife that was what attracted him to her the most.
"Dude," Dean snapped his fingers infront Sam.
"Dude there going back to the house," Dean said pulling Sam so the girls couldn't she him as they excited the motel.

hahaha my daughter was so kicking your daughter's ass lol funnie

i loved it

Here's the next chapter!
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Chapter 7: Dude That's My Dad

"Oh come on Sam,"Dean said trying to drag his brother.
"I told you I'm not going in there while there in there." Sam said walking back to the car.
"It's not like they would really see us we'd be in and out before they even knew it."
"But somehow it never really works like that does it?" Sam asked.
Megan wasn't really listing to the brothers aruge but she was focusing on something when Sam came up to her and she didn't say anything.
"Megan are you ok?" Sam asked her.
She nodded but her eyes still looked far off.
"Come to me to save your friends come and get them," The voice said in her head.
She started to walk to the house then the boys finally noitced she wasn't listening them.
"Megan come on," Dean said walking at her side.
"I'm going to save them she said going invisible so Dean couldn't see her.
"Oh totally not fair." He whined.
Sam grabbed her and tried to take her back to the car but she threw him off with the flick of her wrist. Sam got back up and grabbed the gun from his pants and hit her in the head with it.
"Didn't know you could be so mean Sammy." Dean smirked and follwed his little brother to the car.
"We should take her to that one motel, don't wanting her dad to be supicous." Sam said laying Megan in the back.
"Dude your just scared of her dad,"Dean smiled.
"Oh and your not?" Sam asked with a raise of his eyebrow.
"Ok he is kind of scary," Dean agreed pulling into the parking lot.
"Dude it's my dad,"Megan laughed for a second then passed out again.
They brought her back to the room and layed he on one of the beds.

Megan's House

"Dude she's not home," Becky complained.
"Yeah well she said she was gonna meet us here so something must of happened." Rachel said looking around the house.
"Come on we'll just go see the house for ourselves maybe kill the thing on the way."
They got to the house and walked inside.
A voice then entered Becky's thoughts.
"Bring the girl to me she is needed and is wanted," the voice said.
"You thinkin' bout' Megan?"Rachel asked her dazed cousin.
Becky didn't respond but began to walk to her truck.
"Oh come on where are you going?"
Becky started her truck and Rachel hopped in with her. They drove to the motel and Becky got out. Rachel followed and looked around her there was the Impala.
"Ok maybe our dads are here," Rachel said following Becky to one of the rooms.
Becky then broke down the door.
"Whoa." Her uncle said.
Becky imeaditaly raised the gun.
"She went to the house," Sam said to Dean.
Rachel looked at Megan who was knocked out on the bed. Becky imeaditly ran over to Megan still pointing her gun at her father and uncle she grabbed Megan and lifted her over her shoulder.
"Oh no you don't," Sam said holding her where she was pschicly.
"Are you going to stand there or help us?"Dean asked his niece.
Rachel imeaditly took the gun from Becky as her father knocked her out and put the two knocked out girls on the beds. After that Rachel imeaditly went to her room and shut and looked the door.
"Rachel will you let me in please?" She heard her dad ask.
"I'm going to take a shower," She said through the door and left to the bathroom.
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o i would b mad too

I absolutely love it. Udate soon.

OMG I love this story! You so have to update soon!

plz update! this is good! The girls are so gonna kick some ass!! :wub: :car :phoenix

Please tell me you haven't given up on this awesome story. I hope that you are working extra hard on the next part, so you can post it soon.

PS-If you have Writers block don't feel bad...It too shall pass. I've had for about a year and a half on one of my stories...so I know how tough it can be. :D