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Title: Tick Tock
Description: Times running out


xJared-P.loverx - January 27, 2006 09:42 PM (GMT)
now I have finally came up with a another idea seeing as my brain has had time to think.

Chapter 1:Pleading

"Please you have to a cure,"Dean pleaded looking at the Indian chief,who was sitting quietly staring at Dean.Dean watched him.The chief couldn't just sit there so still like nothing was wrong.Madly Dean grabbed the edge of the table that was in front of the Indian chief,and he flipped it over.Things crashed all over the floor,but the chief just kept staring softly at him.Then quietly he spoke,"so you think by crashing my belongings you're gonna get the help you need?"

"You have to help him!" Dean yelled walking around the room and grabbing an old looking vase,crashing it down on the ground.As it crashed to pieces Dean fell to his knees in tears.

The Indian chief got slowly to his feet and walked over to the weeping Dean.He put his hand on Dean's shoulder and carefully stood him up."You must stay strong!Would your brother want you crying,and acting around like a beast?His soul is still strong,so you must keep strong to."

Dean wipped his tears from his face and looked at him,"there must be a way to help Sam?"

The Indian chief headed out of the tent,and outside of the door,waiting for Dean to join him.When Dean did he led him over to a fire that had just got started burning."There is one way that we know of," the chief said his gaze on the fire now,"to kill the werewolf that has bit your brother."

Dean's mind raced back to were Sam and Dean had been when it happened.They had at last made it to Brownton Lakeford,but with a huge price to pay.They had been working on the clue of how the people were going missing,and soon come to find that ,with a bit of Sam's smarts,it was a werewolf taking out the people in the town.But not a normal werewolf it was like a mix with the black dog itself.Once it bit a person they only had four days to live.Each day would get worse for the person,which would soon cause the body to shut down.An just the other night while looking for it they split up in search for it.Next thing Dean knew was that he heard the cry of the wolf,and one other call that had nearly scared the life out of him.Sam's yells of pure pain.He remembered running back to find Sam laying there.The bite had been so unreal to Dean,and it was something he had never saw before.An this is why he was here now.There was only two days left for Sam,well at least that's what their dad's journal said anyway.He had heard of the Indian tribe and come to ask if there was anyway they could help Sam.

"But how am I gonna pull this stunt off?" Dean asked looking at the chief then at the now roaring fire.

"I have faith in you that you can do this," the chief said reaching down into his pocket and pulling out a little black bag.Dean watched as he opened the bag up to what appeared to be red fine powder.The chief grabbed a pinch and flicked it at Dean then he turned,and threw another pinch into the fire.A puff of smoke went up then some of the smoke floated toward Dean.It turned into a tiny figure of what looked like a werewolf,and ran toward Dean.Dean made to grab it,but it vanished just as he touched it.

The chief turned back to Dean,"you will find the wolf in the woods that Sam got bit,but you must watch yourself...if you get bitten also then there is no help for your brother,or yourself."

Dean nodded his head,"don't worry I won't fail."

The chief nodded then he pulled from his pocket a little size box."My family has passed this on and on through their time and I think it should now be passed on to another."He opened the box,and inside was a solid black dreamcatcher.

Dean raised his eyebrows,"a dreamcatcher?I don't think i'll be sleeping on this job-"

"We do believe that this dreamcatcher was made to protect those who are in need of help." The chief took it out and placed it in Dean's hand."Watch yourself Dean Winchester for your job here on earth is not over with."

Dean gasped the dreamcatcher,"I need to go see Sammy."

sxybabe2_143 - January 27, 2006 09:46 PM (GMT)
OMG....SAM BIT...OMG....WEREWOLF....OMG...PLZZZ...WRITE MORE...

JHNNangel13 - January 27, 2006 09:48 PM (GMT)
OH I like it, I like it, I like it! Keep it up awesome start.

xJared-P.loverx - January 27, 2006 10:47 PM (GMT)
Chapter 2:Take My Advice

Dean turned before the chief could answer to him,and he went along the many tents to the last one in the row.As he entered he stood back looking at Sam.Sam looked way worse then before he looked ill and pale like a ghost.

Sam looked up as Dean entered and with all the energy he had left he lifted himself up,"Dean.."

Dean got wide eyed,"Sam lay down now!"

Sam frowned and without question he laid back down."Please Dean there must be a way I can help you."

"You can help me by staying in that bed," Dean said walking over and sitting down beside him.

"Dean," Sam mumbled,"do you know what's happening to me?"

Dean gulped then he nodded his head,"yea..yea I do."

Sam looked at him,"Dean I'm dieing.I can feel it-"

"Sam don't you say that you're not dieing!I won't let that happen."Dean blinked back tears,hearing Sam say this seemed to hurt him even more then it was already.Although he knew it was true,but he didn't want to be weak.

"Dean,"Sam said looking at him,"if you won't let me help then at least hear me out."

Dean nodded his head a bit.

Sam looked at him,"this thing is so fast Dean;faster then you can think.It's strong too.It will know your weakness."

"Don't worry Sammy I won't fail your life d-depends on," Dean said and he took a big breath letting it out.

"I wish I could help you," Sam said watching him then looking around the tent.

"Don't worry just as long as you don't get your ass out of this bed then we are all good,"Dean smiled a little.

Sam smiled then shook his head lightly,"if something were to happen to me Dean just remember I-I love you."

Dean a little shocked this was coming from Sam smiled and patted his head,"I love you to Sammy.."

"Its Sam," Sam smiled a bit,"sorry for the chick flick moment."

"Well sometimes you can't hide from them-"

Sam nodded and looked around the tent.

Dean got to his feet,"i'm gonna go Sam don't worry I won't let you-you know-"

"I know,"Sam said smiling,"because like you told me that one time with the reaper.If I die I will haunt your ass."

Dean smirked,"stilling my lines now huh?" He started to walk out.

"Dean," Sam yelled after him.

"Yea," Dean said stopping and glancing back at him.

"Be carefull.."

"I will Sammy I will," he walked on out leaving Sam staring after him.

Jenckles - January 27, 2006 11:10 PM (GMT)
:o Oh...very well done! You're a very talented writer...Sam can't DIE!!! :cry Plz, more ASAP! :bang

charmedsupernaturalfan - January 27, 2006 11:40 PM (GMT)
OHH....it is sooo sad Dean better save Sam.....!!!!!

inuyasha132191 - January 27, 2006 11:46 PM (GMT)
yeah before i literally hate him forever :hug:

xJared-P.loverx - January 28, 2006 04:07 AM (GMT)
thanks all.. I don't know Dean might not make it in time but I can't say more.It would ruin it all

Chapter 3:Amy


Dean stomped through the forest his gun in his hand at the ready.As soon he had left Sam's tent he had went right to the very forest Sam had got bit.Dean had been walking around the forest all night it was starting to turn day light which now meant he would have only till midnight that night to save Sam.He took one last look around the forest then he made his way gloomly out of the forest.What if he failed Sam?That was all that ran through his mind. As he edged out something caught his that made him point the gun up toward one of the trees.A girl was sitting on one of the branches watching him with raised eyebrows.She had long brown hair and her eyes were a soft blue.Dean lowered the gun and shook his head,"you better watch yourself."

She jumped down and walked over to him smirking,"me watch myself don't you think it should be the other way around?"

Dean glared not liking this girl one bit,"well sorry to about shoot you i'll be getting along now."

She followed him,"how long have you been in here?Don't you know the legend behind these woods?"

Dean stopped and turned to her,"no,but trust me I think I have a pretty good idea of what the 'legend' is."

The girl shook her head,"you visiters have no idea what happens around here.If you knew the truth you wouldn't be here now."

Dean looked over his shoulders then turned back to her shrugging,"hey I'm still here."

"Tick Tock goes the Clock,Tick Tock time stops,Tick Tock the bite forms,Tick Tock you die," she said in a sing like voice.

Dean stared at her,"well thank you for music listens,but i'm in a hurry."

"The name is Amy,and you better watch yourself around these parts.You might regret what you find," she turned and started walking off into the forest.

"Bitch," Dean muttered shaking his head and going on out of the forest.Though the tacky little song that Amy had song was still stuck in his head.Maybe she knew more then Dean thought her to.Sighing he walked getting in the Impala.Now even more time was running out what if he didn't save Sam.He picked up his cell phone with a shakey hand and thought of calling dad,but he shook his head and laid it back down.His mind racing for ideas.


Sam laid staring up at the ceiling he was starting to fell numb and even weaker.He wished he could just be out helping Dean,but the scary thought kept running through his mind that he might not get to see Dean again.Gulping quietly he tried to blink away tears,but they simply ran down his face."I don't won't to die,"he muttered,"I was just getting to know Dean better." He weakly wipped his face free of tears.Dean would save him.Dean wouldn't let him down.Sam nodded to himself and he turned his head his eyes shutting.

charmedsupernaturalfan - January 28, 2006 04:20 AM (GMT)
OHH....SO SAD AND YOU SAID MAYBE DEAN WONT MAKE IT...
YOU BETTER LET DEAN SAVE SAM...DONT BE EVIL.......

xJared-P.loverx - January 28, 2006 04:56 PM (GMT)
Chapter 4:Times running out!!!!!


Dean sat in his Impala his mind still on what to do.Once he had left the forest he had went to some stuffy little bar in the middle of no where,and was so close to buying drink after drink and get drunk,but then how would that help Sam.He turned on the car,and sat there for a few seconds then he pulled out planing to go back to the forest.

When Dean got there he got out and started in,but first making sure there was no insane girl hanging around any trees.Then he stombed on through the forest.Nothing really caught his eye though intill he saw something shiny in a bunch of leaves over to the side.Running over and picking it up it seemed to be a golden necklace.'Where have I seen this before?" Dean thought to himself as he stood to his feet and looked around.Then it came to him.Amy had been wearing this.Dean held it tightly as he looked around thinking Amy would just be standing there."Amy are you there?" No answer.He called out again,but still no answer.Then something to the side caught his eye that made that made him jump and turn.

Sam looked around the tent everything was starting to spin.A few minutes ago the head Indian chief had been in to check on him."Stay strong Sam," had been all he had said and Sam was going to stay it.He was shakening nonstop now and it seemed to be getting colder and colder.He turned his head softly to the side and was amazed at what he saw.There standing looking down at him was Jess.She smiled at him and said softly,but it still ringed around the tent,"join me Sam."Sam eyes were glued to her,and for a second he started to go for her.Then he shook his head and pulled back,"no."Jess frowned and vanished and Sam sat there shocked for words.His eyes wondered over to his cell phone which was laying useless next to him.He picked it up and flipped it open...

Dean ran fastly trying to out run the beast that was now behind him.A little girl was hanging around his neck crying nonstop.When he had found the necklace he had also found a small little 5 year old girl laying there shocked almost to death.An though Dean really didn't know to much about kids he had took the girl up trying to help her.Which helping wasn't going to good.Cause he had found the werewolf,but the thing was that he had ran up on it by mistake.It wasn't the way he had it figured out.The litte girl was still holding his neck crying and Dean loaded the gun with silver bullet and shot it back at the wolf.Damn.Missed.The wolf was getting closer and Dean was losing hope.It was now nearing 12 which meant Sam was in trouble.Thinking he ran behind a thicket of trees and sat the girl down.

"Stay here," Dean said looking at her.

She shook her head,"no no."She grabbed Dean's shirt and looked up at him crying harder.

"Don't worry it won't hurt you I promise," Dean said trying to get her to calm down.He sat her down on the ground then turned listening for it.Everything had got still and quiet.The only noise was coming from the sobbing little girl.He reached in his pocket and took out the dreamcatcher,and he put it in the girl's hand."Keep that with you it will keep you safe."

He watched as she held it close to her then looked up at him screaming.

Dean turned slowly around to find the very werewolf that was killing his brother standing tall in front of him.It had the longest teeth Dean had ever saw.Slowly he backed up,but not before having it claws hit him dead on in the face.He fell to the ground his gun flying out of his hand.It landed in a patch of leaves over to his far right.Now the wolf was right right on him.He had failed Sam.It was going to bite him to."I failed you Sammy,"he muttered as its face came down level with his.Its brown fur was thick and its soft blue eyes were learing in his own.Hold up those eyes."Amy," he muttered.The wolf opened its mouth ready to bite,but then there was a loud shot from behind.That made Dean jump to high heaven.The wolf turned slowly back to who he had thought it was.Amy.An her now dead body fell limp onto him.Someone had just shot Amy.If it wasn't Dean then who was it?

charmedsupernaturalfan - January 28, 2006 06:38 PM (GMT)
OMG...........OMG...........
YOU BETTER WRITE THE NEXT CHATPER FAST...I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!

xJared-P.loverx - January 28, 2006 11:55 PM (GMT)
Chapter 5:Go without pain

"Dean are you alright?" came a strong voice that he knew at one without question.

"Dad," Dean muttered pushing Amy off him and sitting up to see John Winchester running over to him.

John stared down at his son then bent down helping him up,"Dean I thought I wouldn't save you in time."

Dean shook his head,"well at least Sam will be ok."

John looked down at the ground,"Dean I don't think I made it in time to save Sam."

Dean stared open mouth at him,"no.."

John looked back down shaking his head trying to hide tears,"When I shot the thing it was going past 12:01."

"No.."

"Dean," John stared at Dean who seemed to be into much shock to react,"Sam called and told me everything-"

Dean fell back down on his knees tears pouring down his face,.Sam couldn't be dead.He just couldn't.

The little girl edged out from behind the tree and ran over to Amy throwing her arms around her sobbing,"mommy!Mommy."

John sighed wishing he hadn't had to kill the girl,but she was on the urge of killing his son.He had no choice.

Dean watched the girl then he got up and went over picking her up,"I'm going to Sam."

"Dean its no use his-"

"No his not I can feel it when I get there Sam will be up and better ready to go," he nodded and looked at his dad then turned.

John grabbed his arm,"Dean-"

Dean turned from him,"don't even talk to me dad!"

"At least let me take the girl maybe she has family-"

Dean stopped and walked up to him handing the little girl to John then he turned,"don't screw up on that."An before he let his dad talk,yell,or anything he started out of the forest.

When Dean had reached Sam's tent he had the worse feeling you could get when worried.The indian chief came out of the tent,and looked at Dean giving him a solid look then he walked off to the fire.Dean watched him,and knew it could mean no good.As he entered he stopped dead in his tracks seeing his brother laying there not moving.Tears ran down his face as he walked over and sat down right next to Sam."Sammy please you can't leave." He watched as Sam just lay there his head turned to the side,"i'm sorry.."




don't kill me yet people

charmedsupernaturalfan - January 29, 2006 12:02 AM (GMT)
ok......I wont kill you if the next chatper it will tells us that Sam is ok........

kich - January 29, 2006 02:46 AM (GMT)
O...M...G!!! You can't kill him..no way no freakin how man. Post the next chapter and no one will run you over with the Impala. :car

xJared-P.loverx - January 29, 2006 03:47 AM (GMT)
Chapter 6:You were saying


"Wow," came a mutter that nearly made Dean jump out of his skin,"who knew Dean Winchester could ever cry." Dean looked down to see Sam staring up at him with raised eyebrows.

"Sam you-but-how?" Dean stumbled looking at him his eyes wide.

Sam looked at him,"I had faith in you Dean I knew you would pull it off."


Dean's mind raced back to dad should he tell Sam? He pushed it to the back of his mind,"yea just in time..."

Sam shook his head and sat up,"you learn a lot being stuck in a lame ass bed dieing."

Dean shook his head,"glad to have you back Sammy.God I thought i'd lost you."

"You're not getting gone with me that fast," Sam smiled lightly.

Dean smirked and looked at him pushing him softly back down,"rest."

Sam rolled his eyes,"I umm kind of called dad ,but I didn't get no answer I told him about everything though."

"Really," Dean said trying to act like he knew nothing about it."I guess he needed the right to know."

Sam nodded his head,"You think he even cares?"

"I'm sure he does.."

"So," Sam said smiling,"tell me everything before I go insane.How did you pull it all off?"

Dean told Sam every little thing that had happened well leaving out the part about their dad,and when he had finished Sam was looking at him with a simple shake of his head."Nice well I guess it was your turn to take something down,but remember i'm still in the lead."

Dean smirked,"Oh Sam I think i'm gonna cry."

A few hours later after they had thanked the Indian chief and was now sitting in the Impala Dean was just about to start it up when his cell phone rang.

Sam shrugged his shoulders and Dean picked it up answering it,"hello."

"Is this Dean Winchester?" said a rough voice that Dean had never heard before.

"Yea it is," Dean said glancing over at Sam.

"I have your father and in less you want to see him again you and Sam will meet me where I tell you to go."

Dean got pale in the face as he yelled back,"if you hurt him I swear-"

Sam looked at Dean confused as Dean listened carefully then muttered,"we will be there,but if you dare hurt him-" He hung up and looked at Sam shock in his face,"they have dad..."

"What who has dad?" Sam asked getting worried.

JHNNangel13 - January 29, 2006 03:58 AM (GMT)
Nice very nice. Good turn of events! Can't wait for more!

kich - January 29, 2006 05:21 AM (GMT)
You twisted person you!!! At least you didn't kill Sam. What's to happen to dear ol' daddy here. I can't wait!!! :clap :clap

xJared-P.loverx - January 30, 2006 12:10 AM (GMT)
Chapter 7:An you said things couldn't get worse


"Dean who has dad?" Sam asked raising hs eyebrows slightly.

Dean looked over at Sam as he quickly jammed the keys in and started up the car,"I had a fight with dad before I came to see you."

Sam looked at him confused,"you're telling me this now!?Listen to me Dean who has dad?"

Dean turned and looked at him,"I think its the thing that killed mom and Jess."

"But-"

"We have to get there an fast," Dean said pulling out and turning to drive.

Sam stared at his brother,"relax we will save him."

Dean stared up ahead not looking at him.He had yelled at his dad before,but now that he was in real trouble..well he couldn't take it all in.

"Don't worry," Sam said trying to help his brother,which didn't seem to be happening anytime soon.Why not try something else?"So where are we heading to?"

Dean didn't look at Sam as he drove,but he spoke weakly,"New York."

Sam looked over at him,"that's days away."

"We are going-"

"You know,"Sam said biting his lip slightly,"I know a way we could get there faster."

Dean looked over at him then back at the road,"how?"

"Well there's always flying-"

"Flying?No." Dean shook his head,"out of the question."

"You do want to save dad don't you?" Sam smirked a bit looking at the scared look on Dean's face.Of coarse he was trying to hide it.In fact Dean had always been afraid of flying.Even when they were kids.

"Yea but-"

"Good," Sam nodded and looked out his window,"lets go to the air port get in the plane and hurry.If I meet the thing that killed Jess-" He broke off his eyes becoming stern.

Dean looked over at him,"I know you want to,but we just need to help dad.An get out then we can think about the other stuff."

Sam didn't answer back and for a while they remained quiet.

At the air port,

Sam got out and looked around he looked back at Dean who seemed to be taking his time."You know we have been on a plane before.."

"Doesn't mean i'm in love with 'em," Dean said rolling his eyes.

"Don't worry," Sam smirked at him,"if you get scared they have the breath masks."

Dean glared at him,"dad is in trouble and all you can do is nag?"

Sam looked down he had been only trying to make Dean feel better.

Dean walked over to him,"lets do this.."





ha ha very twisted.I know its all short now but i'm taking it in little post cause my computer messes up when I start posting long stuff,so I have to go for the short way


sxybabe2_143 - January 30, 2006 12:15 AM (GMT)
OOOOoooooOOOOooo...wirte more plzzz

charmedsupernaturalfan - January 30, 2006 12:25 AM (GMT)
Your have to update it !!!!!!!!!!!!!
They better get there in time and there father!!!!

friendly1009 - January 30, 2006 02:25 PM (GMT)
good story nice twist of events. ....

lcaron3 - January 30, 2006 02:53 PM (GMT)
Great story, keep it up. Write more soon.

cassi - January 30, 2006 07:06 PM (GMT)
Your mean!!! Mess up with Dean's fear of planes is mean, but really funny!!!! :D

xJared-P.loverx - January 30, 2006 10:50 PM (GMT)
Chapter 8:Family Problems


Dean smiled slightly at the pretty blonde who would be going up and down their row and him and Sam headed to the back of the plane.He turned to Sam,"ha might not be to bad."

Sam smirked a little as he headed to the very back were their seats were and he looked at Dean,"want window seat?" At this he had to hold in his breath so not to laugh.

"Ha ha Sammy get your ass in that seat before I force you,"Dean said pointing over at the window.

Sam walked in and sat down then from his back pack he pulled out his lap top,"ok hand me your cell phone."

"Why," Dean asked frowning slightly as he sat down and buckled up quickly.

"Well I can try and track the phone and we can hurry tp dad," he looked over at him and tilted his head,"you going to be ok?"

"Oh yea," Dean edged his cell phone out and handed it over to Sam.Then he took a breath,"yep yep fine."

Sam rolled his eyes and took the phone looking up the number then checking on the lap top.

The plane started to lift from the ground which gave it a shake.Dean looked wide eyed around then over at Sam,"you sure there isn't going to be another Exorcism in here."

"Dean relax its just the plane going up..you know in the air," Sam shook his head and turned back to the lap top.

"Shut up.."

"Hey I think I have something!" Sam shouted out before he could stop himself.He got a few stares from some people.

"Oh college boy is on to something," Dean said still looking a bit un easy.

Sam glared and turned the lap top to him.The headline read:FREEDOM TOWER.

Dean looked up at him,"so you think dad's in a tower?"

"Well yea.."

Dean shrugged his shoulders,"they told us to go to a certain plac-"

"Dean," Sam said cutting him off,"we just can't sit and wait to get attacked.We have to act first."

"Look I think its safer-"

"Are you joking," Sam said trying to keep his voice low,"we can't just play out in the open-"

It was Dean's turn to stop Sam,"I don't want to take any chances,Dad's in trouble Sam."

"An you don't think I don't know that?"Sam said getting mad."Stop acting like a 4 year old!"

"Well stop acting like a ass," Dean said glaring at him.

"Oh so you think i'm a ass do you?"

"Yea.."

Sam stared ahead then he turned back to him,"fine when we get in New York you can go your way and i'll go mine.."

"Sounds good to me," Dean said looking up ahead.

Sam shut the lap top,and stuffed it into his backpack,"good." He turned away from him to look out the window.

The plane gave another jerk and Dean grabbed the edge of his seat.'Great,' he thought to himself,'I save Sam then get him mad at me again..'

Sam bit his lip then jerked around at the sound of the girls voice.

"Can you two please keep your voices down.Some people are getting a bit un easy at your yelling,"said the girl from the front.

Dean looked up at her,"don't worry we're done."

She looked at them both then walked on back to the front.

Sam and Dean glanced at each other then turned away.



thanks people but it might be a bit till I write more.I'm a little stuck but will try for more

charmedsupernaturalfan - January 31, 2006 12:46 AM (GMT)
You are doing great!!!!!
I WANT MORE.......

lcaron3 - January 31, 2006 03:09 PM (GMT)
Very nice, can't wait to see what happens next!

cassi - January 31, 2006 06:08 PM (GMT)
The look like my parents!!! :D Can't live without each other, but can't stop fight either!!! :lol:

xJared-P.loverx - January 31, 2006 11:51 PM (GMT)
chapter 9:Just a thought


For the rest of the plane period Sam and Dean had stayed quiet seeing as if they spoke they might try to hang the other.Sometimes if they were lucky they would give glances at each other.Dean was still trying to remain calm and not freak out everytime the plane would give one of those tiny jerks.He hadn't moved from his seat once.Sam had spent most of the time looking things up on the laptop,looking out the window,or trying to get a glance at his brother.When they finally landed and were ok to get off Sam jumped up first bumping right pass Dean to get out.

Dean gulped very glad that the plane was still.For a minute he thought he could run outside and kiss the ground,but that seemed very low.He watched as Sam walked out and he jumped up going after him,but as he tried to get to the door more people crowded around him.An by the time he had got out.No Sam.Sighing he made his way to look for him.

Sam watched Dean from a distance making sure he was well out of sight then he turned running into someone,"sorry." His eyes froze on the person he had ran into.

A girl looked up into Sam's eyes and she backed up a bit,"sorry I wasn't watching myself."

Sam's eyes were still glued to the girl."Jess," he mumbled.

She looked at him raising a eyebrow,"do I know you?"

The girl looked very much like Jessica she could have went as her twin."Sorry wrong person." He shook his head and started turning away.

She followed him,"how did you know my name though?"

He stopped dead in his tracks and turned to her,"your name is Jessica?"

She nodded and bit her lip,"are you ok you look like you have seen a ghost?"

Sam stared at her open mouth then he turned away,"yea just thinking."

Jessica smiled a little,"hey you look like a guy for a party."She grabbed his hand and wrote an address on his hand,"come on by."she looked around,"well I have to run." Her eyes watched him for a few more seconds then she turned,and walked off.

Sam watched her walk off then turned and looked though the crowd for Dean,but he was no where to be seen.He sighed and looked down at his hand.

Dean sighed to himself as he looked around at all the buildings and people."Hmm the big apple not very surprising to me."He rolled his eyes a bit,"now to get-wow!"He broke off as he had swung his arm back hitting some old woman knocking her things on the ground."I'm so sorry."He bent down to pick up her things,but had got busted him in the head with her cane that she had.He rubbed his head handing her her stuff.

She grabbed her stuff and walked passed him rambling on about,"ungreatful kids these days.."

Dean shook his head and sighed,"Sam gets the hot chick and I get the old-" He cut off thinking back.He had saw Sam at the air port,but he looked to busy talking to some girl, so he just threw his bag over his shoulder and went one.'I wonder how Sam is going along?'

Sam let out a sigh as he looked up at the so called 'Freedom Tower.'After leaving the air port he had come right here.He just wanted to get a move on and find dad.Looking around to make sure no one was watching he went on up the steps to the tower and he tried opening the door.'Great locked,'he thought to himself as he looked around again.Standing back he kicked open the door and edged on in.Cob webs were hanging everywhere and there wasn't a light in sight.He pulled out his flashlight and turned it on.It looked like it hadn't been used in ages.He slowly flashed it to his right and as he did he thought he had saw something in the light.Shinning it back though there was nothing.Was his mind playing tricks on him or had there been something really there?He turned the flashlight upon a set of stairs,and he walked over shinning the light up them.They seemed to go up no stop.Shaking his head he started climbing them.

Dean walked into a muggy looking cafe only to find a few people sitting around with their backs turned.He looked around to the counter where a women stood pouring some guy a cup of coffee.He walked toward the back of the cafe and sat down.The people in here all looked like they weren't moving."Oh dear a house of wax moment."The door clinged open though at that moment and some rough looking guys came in.Their eyes flew over to Dean."Oh good they come," he muttered playing around with a salt shaker.They walked over and one spoke out,"are you Ben?"Dean let out breath.These weren't his guys."No why don't you try that guy over there," he said pointing to a random guy.

The guys looked at each over then walked away from Dean.

Dean looked around starting to think maybe he had come to the wrong place.Well that was till the door clinged open again.

charmedsupernaturalfan - February 1, 2006 12:32 AM (GMT)
MORE....MORE!!!!!!!

kich - February 1, 2006 12:52 AM (GMT)
Dude I need more..feed the addict!!! :jacket

xJared-P.loverx - February 2, 2006 09:19 PM (GMT)
Chapter 10:Hard day

Sam quietly went up the stairs that seemed like they had no end.He did know he was high up though cause when he would looked down over the ramp he could tell he was getting closer.Hearing voices though he stopped and listened to them.

"Once we get the boys here then we can finish them all off," said one voice.

"I don't see why we don't just get gone with the father right now-"

"You're right he does have no use-"

"No," said a strong voice that made Sam's hair on the back of his neck stand up,"without the father the boys won't come.Well at least the other one.I know one is in this very tower."

Sam gulped as he listened to the other confused voices.


Dean watched as some guys came walking into the cafe.He sat up better guessing these were his guys.They walked over to him and the one that seemed to be the leader sat down across from Dean,"Hello Winchester."

Dean tilted his head a bit to the side.'How did they know his name,' he thought to himself,but he shook it from his mind."I want to know where my dad is now.An I swear if he is hurt any-"

"Relax his safe for now,"the one guy said smirking.His eyes wondered around,"I thought I told you to come with your brother."

Dean glared at him trying to keep calm,"my brother doesn't like to listen.Now tell me where-"

"Well that just makes it worse on yourself," the guy said smiling a little.


Sam gulped for breath as he ran back down the steps.The guys were booming down after him and they seemed to be way faster then he was.As he jumped the last steps he made a clear run for the door which closed hardly in his face,and he grabbed the knob trying to get it open but it refused.Turning his back up against the door he looked around for a place to hide.

"You can run Winchester,but you can't hide,"said the same voice and he could see their dark figures coming down the steps.There was no way for him to go he wouldn't get there in time to hide anywhere.Taking an uneasy breath he watched as the guys came down.Sam's flashlight blinked then went out leaving it dark around the room.Sam couldn't make out anything,but the next thing he knew he was being held down.He fought to get lose,and stopped when he got a hard blow in his stomach that knocked him clean out of breath.The hands pushed him down on the ground as Sam still gasped for breath.

"You made it easy by coming Winchester,"said the same strong voice,"we don't have to hunt you down."


Dean stared at them coldly,"look if my dad is hurt in anyway I swear you all will wish you never messed with a Winchester."

The guy smirked,"an this just in if you refuse to come with us your brother will die."

Dean got wide eyed,"you don't even know where Sam is."

"Oh believe me we do know where Sam is his right in the very tower your father is and-" He checked his watch,"his just been caught."

"Wait-How-If you hurt him," Dean said looking at them madly.

"Hurt isn't even the beginning," a wicked smile spread across the guy face as he looked up at the other who were laughing softly.

"What do you want," Dean shouted getting a few stares from some people


The next thing Sam knew was happening was he was being carried up the steps into the very top.They had blind folded him and stuffed something in his mouth so he couldn't yell.An even wrapped up his arms and feet.He listened as a door opened and he was threw in.Hitting the ground knocked even more breath out of him.He needed Dean and bad.

charmedsupernaturalfan - February 2, 2006 09:26 PM (GMT)
OMG.......NOW THEY HAVE SAM!!!!!!!!!
DEAN BETTER GET SAM AND JOHN
AND IF THEY HURT THEM I AM GOING TO KILL THEM!!!!!!!

xJared-P.loverx - February 6, 2006 01:54 AM (GMT)
Chapter 11:I told you this wasn't all good


Sam stuggled deeply as he tried hard to get the ropes off.'What am I going to do?' He thought to himself as he listened for anyone that might be around.He jumped slightly when he heard something a little to his left.'Oh god now what?' It made a slight moaning noise and he sat up better looking around though he couldn't see.But he knew that voice and he quicky rubbed his mouth against the floor getting the rag that was in his mouth to fall out."Dad!" It became quiet then he heard his dad's frightened voice that truely scared him.

"Sam..Sam is that you!"

Sam froze,"yea dad it's me.Are you ok Dean and I-"

"Wait where's Dean is he ok?"He heard his dad ask.

"I don't know," Sam said truthfully,"we kind went different ways?" He waited for his dad to yell,shout,anything,but nothing came.

"We have to get out of here we are in very big trouble in here,"his dad's voice came finally.

"Dad,"Sam said still struggling against the ropes,"do you think I mean is that thing the thing that killed mom and Jess?"

John looked over at his son and for once wished he could go over and hug him,"no Sam it's not."

"Then who-what is it?" Sam asked his voice cracking.




Dean walked out of the cafe closely follwed he knew this would be a very rough trip,but if Sam or his dad was hurt any-He shruddered at the very thought of it.They had promised to let them go if he went reach really made no sense at the time but he really wasn't in the state of thinking.

"Get in," said of the guys pushing him to a van.

Dean glared at him,"well I'm trying." He got of in the back doors of the van and sat on a bench.Some of the guys kept giving him looks,but he pushed them away just wanting to know that his family was ok.

As the van stopped the guys stood up grabbing Dean,and they started toward the tower.Dean's eyes flashed around as he was brought in the old tower."Umm cheery place." He mumbled rolling his eyes.



Sam shook his head slowly frowning,"so it's just another demon."

John shook his head,"a pretty dam smart one." John picked his head up a bit,"I hear footsteps they must be coming in here."

Sam stuggled even harder as he tried to get the ropes off,but it was no good."Dad is there anything sharp near me?"

John looked over his eyes flying to an old looking table."Go to your right there's a table those edges look pretty sharp."

Sam crawled over to the table his head banging against the legs of it,slowly he lifted himself up and started to bang the rope against the edge.After a few minutes it fell to the ground and Sam pulled the blind fold off.His eyes flew to his dad.He looked really hurt.Sam ran over and started untieing his arms then started to do his feet.

John pushed his son away,"quick they are coming hide or something..."

"An leave you alone no," Sam walked over to the table and held it on the ground knocking one of its legs off.Then grabbing it up he went to the side of the door and waited.He could now hear the footsteps there was a lot of them.A very bad feeling came to him,but he shook it off.As the door opened he swung.

"Sam no!" John yelled getting wide eyed.

Sam looked over confused then back to the person he had hit.His heart skipped a few beats as he looked down at the limp body of Dean.

JHNNangel13 - February 6, 2006 02:25 AM (GMT)
Good update! More soon please!

charmedsupernaturalfan - February 6, 2006 02:28 AM (GMT)
OMG!!!!!!!!!!
DEAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MORE........

JHNNangel13 - February 8, 2006 11:14 AM (GMT)
Really Really good! More soon please!

xJared-P.loverx - February 8, 2006 10:18 PM (GMT)
Chapter 12:It never ends



John tried to get up,but he was so weak he could barely move.He watched as Sam sank to his knees looking at Dean,"Sam get up behind you!"

The guys who had brought Dean up to the room were now filling into the room laughing at Sam who was holding up Dean's head."We don't have to finish the boy off his brother can do it for us," said one guy looking down at Sam.

Sam stood to his feet his fist clenched tightly.He glared at them all then held up the table leg swinging it at them.Though they only moved out of the way,but he didn't care he was so mad he was shaking.

One of the hooded guys pulled out a gun which told him these people weren't even demons they were normal people.The guy held it down at Dean,"calm yourself or it will be the end of your brother."

Sam swung the pole knocking the gun out of his hand and across the room.They all now started jumping on Sam hitting him and punching him everywhere they could reach of him.Then there was a loud gun shot and the guy who had had the gun fell on the ground dead.Sam looked around to see his dad holding up the gun.Everyone around the room became quiet.

John rubbed his head and glared swiftly at the guys then looked over at Sam,"get your brother and get out of here.An Sam don't you dare come back.I want you on that plane out of here.Do you understand me?"

Sam nodded sure this had been the first time he was listening to his dad.Slowly Sam picked up Dean and started out the door,but stopped."Dad-"

"I gave you an order Sam now go!" John yelled wanting Sam to just get out unharmed

Sam gulped down a lumb in his throat then went from the room draging Dean after him.

Later on,

Dean's eyes flew open and he looked around seeing Sam staring down at him,"where-?"

Sam looked at him and gave him his best smile he could manage,"finally you wake up.."

"Sam where are we?where's dad?I remember seeing him.."

"Dean rest," Sam said looking down,"we are in the airport."

Dean gave him a very confused look,"well is dad ok?"

Sam frowned and looked at him,"Dean dad kind of vanished.."

"What?"Dean said staring at him then looking around at the people passing by who had looked over at him when he shouted out.

"In the tower he told me to get you out and I did and later when I went in to look for him it was empty.Everyone was gone.."

"You left dad in there alone!" Dean said his voice sounding angry.

"It was an order," Sam muttered looking down.

Dean watched Sam then he put his hand on his shoulder,"I'm sorry Sammy.."

Sam shook his head looking at him,"I shouldn't of listened I could of helped dad."

Dean looked at him,"don't you dare start that self pitty crap Sam.It wasn't your fault so lets drop it."

"I-"

"Well lets get on that plane and get back to my baby.I swear if there is one scartch on that car-"

"Dean do you know that we have to find the thing that killed mom and Jess and now the thing in that tower?"Sam asked looking at him.

Dean nodded,"yea your point?"

Sam shrugged his shoulders lightly and looked down.

"Relax Sam," Dean said looking at him,"I don't like planes either,but-"

Sighing Sam and Dean got back on the plane with nothing much more said.


When they had got back into the Impala and had started driving again Dean finally glanced at Sam."Sam there was nothing you could do.We will stop it.."

Sam looked at him,"how can you just be so strong Dean....?"

"Well for one I didn't lose both my brother another i'm just that kinda guy...."

Sam blinked as he said this then gave a weak smile,"so where we stopping next?"

Dean looked over at him then back at the road,"we you know our chances of going to LA-"

Sam rolled his eyes,"oh shut up now really where?"

Dean smirked,"I told you LA."

Sam was about to open his mouth to respond when his cell phone went off.They both exchanged looks then Sam took it out and opened it up.A few minutes later his head flew up,"Dean!"

"What," Dean said looking over at him and pulling the car over to the side,"what is it?"

Sam stared non stop at the phone then looked up at him slowly,"coordinates!"


The End

JALOVER - February 8, 2006 10:24 PM (GMT)
No! Don't stop now!

charmedsupernaturalfan - February 8, 2006 11:31 PM (GMT)
THE END?
IT IS OVER!!!!!!!!!!
They are not going to find there father?
You better make a new story to cont. this one....

xJared-P.loverx - February 9, 2006 02:01 AM (GMT)
yea that's it thanks for reading it....I guess it's the end till I think how the other one ends




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