Description: Episode Fifteen
kittsbud - November 7, 2006 06:45 PM (GMT)
samriverfox - November 7, 2006 07:32 PM (GMT)
Awesome beginning! Can't wait to read the next part tomorrow.
daisymay - November 7, 2006 10:19 PM (GMT)
Oh I love this! :D :clap Intriguing stuff. Poor Sammy, that was one helluva dream.
Looking forward to tomorrow's chapter. :)
Kaisa - November 7, 2006 11:03 PM (GMT)
ah, ah, interesting... I wonder how this will turn out... But, alas, I must wait until tomorrow. *sigh*
grkgrl88 - November 8, 2006 02:16 AM (GMT)
Thank you for the comments, and I'm glad you like it so far. :)
cooldude - November 8, 2006 03:02 AM (GMT)
winchester73 - November 8, 2006 07:16 AM (GMT)
Love it - can't wait :fire
kburch04 - November 8, 2006 11:03 AM (GMT)
Can I ask someone a big favor?
I can't get to the page because it's blocked here, can I have someone PM me the first part?
Thanks anyone who can help!
SN_FaNaTic_eTeRnAllY!! - November 8, 2006 02:52 PM (GMT)
this is very interesting... the dream in a dream thing could very well be a reality of the sn series... good one.
can't wait for what is going to happen... :lol:
kittsbud - November 8, 2006 06:32 PM (GMT)
samriverfox - November 8, 2006 06:44 PM (GMT)
Dang it's good! I can't wait for tomorrow!
daisymay - November 8, 2006 10:17 PM (GMT)
Great story. :clap And the possibility of some brotherly angst maybe with Sam's thought about Dean's reaction to his dreams at the end of that chapter.
Roll on tomorrow. :cheer
Kaisa - November 8, 2006 10:42 PM (GMT)
yay, next part!!!! Hmm, maybe some brotherly angst??? I hope there's more! (Kaisa = twisted)
kiara_ratterjmouse - November 9, 2006 03:13 AM (GMT)
yeah, i like the plot and that, it's great, it's just the way it's written. it just seems so - un sam and dean. like it was written by someone new to the idea of prose. i like it but htis is clearly wriiten by an amatuer
cooldude - November 9, 2006 03:22 AM (GMT)
I 'd like to dissagree with you thankyou all the fanfic writers are not the writers for the show
they are fans who like the plot of the show and take it it to write stories of their own
So I think you are wrong and that was rude too :rant
awesome job on the second part
can't wait for more
winchester73 - November 9, 2006 07:13 AM (GMT)
Can't access the internet tomorrow not good! :bang Give Dean a chance (sorry Sam's girls)!
whatyousee - November 9, 2006 07:54 AM (GMT)
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH the tortured souls that are sam and dean winchester! ho much can those guys go through before they break down?? i'm now expecting a huge break down from sam anytime...
episode is great!!! can't wait for part 3! i hate having to wait for the next parts lol it's so nerve racking with the cliff hangers grrrrrrr
winchester73 - November 9, 2006 12:57 PM (GMT)
Know what you mean. Meant to say love the episode frustration for next two days. Looks good !
Oceane - November 9, 2006 03:45 PM (GMT)
Great story so far. I enjoy the continuity from the other stories. Can't wait for part 3 :)
kittsbud - November 9, 2006 07:28 PM (GMT)
samriverfox - November 9, 2006 07:41 PM (GMT)
OMG! Sammy! Dean get your butt outta the car and save your brother again!
grkgrl88 - November 9, 2006 09:03 PM (GMT)
No worries. I hear the writer is a Sammy girl, so I'm sure he'll be fine. ;)
Kaisa - November 9, 2006 10:05 PM (GMT)
oh no, Sam! Dean, please get out of the Impala--it's time to rescue your brother from fire again!
Yay, conclusion tomorrow! (Double yay! Supernatural tonight!)
cooldude - November 9, 2006 10:19 PM (GMT)
daisymay - November 9, 2006 10:59 PM (GMT)
Aaagghh!! Sammy in trouble again!!! And this Sammy girl is just loving it!! :wub: :cheer
whatyousee - November 9, 2006 11:09 PM (GMT)
wow fire and sam never mix do they??
he's always in these lifethreatening situations everytime fire is brought up and poor dean keeps having to visualize sam burning up....CAN'T WAIT FOR PART 4!!
The Usual Suspects episode is on TV in about 3 HOURS!! HURRAH!!! POOR DEAN!!! POOR SAM!!
cooldude - November 10, 2006 03:55 PM (GMT)
sad it is not up yet :cry :cry :cry
kittsbud - November 10, 2006 04:28 PM (GMT)
Time for the end, guys! Pyromania Part 4
cooldude - November 10, 2006 04:48 PM (GMT)
samriverfox - November 10, 2006 04:49 PM (GMT)
Kaisa - November 10, 2006 08:20 PM (GMT)
yay, conclusion! And I do say, Sam-Sam IS quite lucky that Dean didn't have a spoon... :lol
Next week = Next virtual episode! Virtual episode = yippee meter 110%!
whatyousee - November 10, 2006 09:49 PM (GMT)
YAY!!! ENDING!!! i love how it was up so early too....i read it at 8:30am lol....unlike the others that are up around 12ish
I loved it! great job! you writers are unbelievable you know that?? next week's episode looks kinda freaky....i don't like it when sam is left alone he's so sad and woried not to mention he always blames dean's disappearances on himself :( but can't wait to read it.
crap more of the demon....i wish that thing just died and went back to hell already....all this crap and pain it's giving sam and dean and everyone else is unbelievable.
hey btw.....where's John?? haven't heard about him in a while....not since the Ranch when sammy was kidnapped......
daisymay - November 11, 2006 12:28 AM (GMT)
Just loved it. Great story. :clap And Sammy sleeping in the car at the end...awww.... :wub:
Wondering now if the boys are going to meet any of these families who have turned to hunting. :)
irismay42 - November 11, 2006 01:51 PM (GMT)
|QUOTE (whatyousee @ Nov 10 2006, 09:49 PM)|
| next week's episode looks kinda freaky....i don't like it when sam is left alone he's so sad and woried not to mention he always blames dean's disappearances on himself :( but can't wait to read it.|
...Not as freaky as the person who wrote it...
grkgrl88 - November 11, 2006 08:49 PM (GMT)
Thank you for the comments. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Oceane - November 11, 2006 09:16 PM (GMT)
So he was one of those children, that's a twist.
Sam sleeping in the car, I picture him, he must be so cute :)
Terrific story, I enjoyed it very much. Nice work grkgrl88 :)
halfblood - November 12, 2006 07:04 PM (GMT)
Great episode! The stories just keep getting better :D . All of the Writers, are very very talented.
burstynout - November 13, 2006 01:21 AM (GMT)
Is it too late to say congrats grkgrl on your awesome debut? Love ya darling. Don't know what we'd do without you.
keza_supernatural - November 13, 2006 10:22 PM (GMT)
WOW Great story!!
Cool twist with Matt being one of the Demons "children" like Sam.
Keep writing folks, you are doing a great job!!!
grkgrl88 - November 13, 2006 11:19 PM (GMT)