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Title: Stripped Away

Elffster - January 7, 2007 02:54 AM (GMT)
[dohtml]<center><font color="teal"><B>Stripped Away<BR><BR>

Here I stand,<BR>
On weaken knees, <BR>
A knife thrusted in my heart, <BR>
I slowly start to Bleed, <BR>
A twistt of a turn, <BR>
You Stripped your love out of me, <BR>
I slump to the ground, <BR>
In tears of pain, <BR>
Hurting, <BR>
Waiting, <BR>
For the Love to return</center></b></font>[/dohtml]

this was written out of the pain i was in,
alittle way to help relieve some of it :rain:

paulgro - January 7, 2007 09:56 AM (GMT)
Ya did good...

Elffster - January 7, 2007 06:17 PM (GMT)
thanks :cheer:

gonehiking - January 7, 2007 11:01 PM (GMT)
That's a beautiful poem, Elff. Sad, but beautiful. Writing can help a lot. I wrote a poem called "Roadkill" after the demise of my marriage - the roadkill being me. It's good to get the pain out and give it voice. Hope you're doing better now. user posted image

Elffster - January 8, 2007 01:41 AM (GMT)
Gone, thanks

the healing has started, will just take alittle time, but im up for it

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