Taichi, A born fighter....

Name: Taichi (Tai)
Age: 1
Gender: Male
Dwelling: Unsure
Breed: Lab/ Golden Retriever mix

Appearance: He's quite a handsome dog really. He has a golden pelt given it him from his father. When the sun hits him his fur shimmers and dances in the sunlight like gold. He has deep brown eyes just like his mother's. Though they shine with the playful happiness of a pup instead of his mother's kindness or his father's fire. His build is quite good, when he learns to fight he'll be a good fighter. He already bares one scar, from his own father. His father was very angry with him one night and slashed him across the face. Of course Taichi was treated quickly by his mother and she scolded his father. He has sharp claws and fangs and he has a chip missing in his left ear, also from his father. He truly is a born fighter.

Personality: He's not as fierce as he looks. He actually quite nice and playful. Go figure, he looks like his father who is tough and sometimes cruel and he acts like his mother who is kind and gentle. Though, he hates birds. That's probably the only thing he and his father have in common. They love tearing the little rats limb from limb. He and his father have tried to bond over it many times, but always ended up with his father getting angry at him. His father is often ashamed of his son. Taichi is just glad he has his mother. His mother always stood up for him and half the time she won in arguments with his father. Taichi often feels guilty of never making his father proud to say Taichi was his son. Half the time his father won't even look at him.

Pic: None.

RP Sample: "Why can't you be more like your sister you worthless pup? Your sister Kari, now I know she i my daughter! She is a fighter! Look at you, you could be the best fighter around! And here you are running around playing!" His father's words rang in Taichi's head. "That's enough Hawk! He's not worthless! You should be proud to call him your son!" His mother had argued. "Look Rose, I love you. But look at him! He looks like me, but let's face it. He'll never be worth anything!" His father had yelled. Taichi always tried so hard to make his father proud. But his father wouldn't even look at him. Taichi had heard all about his older sister Kari, who he had never met. His father always said he was more proud of Kari and she was a better dog than Taichi would ever be. When Taichi was smaller he used to try and act cute and playful to win his father's love. But it never worked.

He always got scolded for tugging playfully on his father's ear or pouncing on him. What did his sister do to earn his father's love? "UNTIL YOU BECOME A DOG THAT I CAN SAY IS MY SON I DON'T WANT TO SEE YOU AGAIN!" Is what his father had yelled after him when Taichi ran away. He couldn't take it, he was just a pup! What did he have to do? As Taichi walked the lonely streets of the city he thought about going back to the alley where his parents where. He knew if he went back his father would not be happy. But his mother would surely insist on letting him stay. No. He was not going back until he had won his father's love. Until he heard hi father say "That's my boy." Taichi looked up around the streets. The smell of a pizza hit his nose. He followed the scent and found a half eaten cheese pizza. It was gone in a matter of mintues. Once he was done licking the cheese out of the box he went in search of his sister. Maybe she could tell him what she did to make father so proud.

Do some more on appearance and personality and then it should be fine.

I edited it. (sorry it took so long)

Accepted