A little story I'm trying to develope
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Posted: Nov 2 2009, 06:27 AM


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I lost the first half to this on my hard drive somewhere so I'll give a brief explanation of the characters in this.
Alpha: The main character, He was a genetic experiment in hopes of creating the 'ultimate being'. In the beginning he defeats all of his brothers and sisters in combat, and to make sure they don't get killed frees them losses an arm and gets exploded and shot in the head. (short summary I'm too lazy to explain everything)

Sigma: Alpha's sister and love interest, after being freed by Alpha she and the others try to raise a rebellion only to have it fail horribly leaving her and 3 others searching for Alpha's body.

Omnigon: Alpha's eldest sibling, He is from an old age where cybernetics was key, he is known to be the 'ultimate being', Alpha killed him by destroying half his head, he returns and self destruct on Alpha destroying half of the facility they were contained in, Is rebuilt stronger to fight the rebellion.

Father (Kirishiro): He started the robotics cooperation and branched off to start trying to make a 'ultimate being' he is the cause of all the pain and suffering in this story.



as for anyone else I haven't made them yet so yeah.
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sorry for any confusion I was trying to make it seem like a play for some of it.

It's pretty crappy I think, if anyone has any suggestions and tips I'm listening.
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He laid there for what seemed like an eternity body lifeless many days had passed he wasn’t sure how many to be exact he stopped counting he was running low in energy barley enough to wake up each day and after a while he slept one last time, at first only days passed but then months and then years, finally he awoke again a familiar voice above him a women…. His sister “Alpha wake up, it will take more than just a bullet to kill you.” Alpha’s eyes opened the light was blinding but he would dare not blink for the chance this is all just an illusion, thoughts raced across his mind, his father, Omnigon, the escape they escaped they are free now. “It’s been almost a century brother; I have finally found you their death won’t be in vain.”,
Alpha gasped trying to breath “D….d...Dead, h...How?”
“We were searching for where they hid your body, many things have changed, our father is dead now but a new controls his company and has waged war on the rest of the world bringing death to everyone crushing every ones hope leaving wastelands where people oppose him, we tried to fight but… most of us died, they brought back Omnigon.”,
“That’s impossible he died trying to kill me his core exploded they couldn’t of.”

Before she could reply her eyes went dark she gasped for air she had been shot “Brother…. take this it’s my power core absorb it take my powers and destroy the dark armies.” She fell to the ground leaving him holding a purple orb a man stood at the opposite side of the room he was in his weapon smoking from the round he fired, “Code Red” he yelled as alarms started to go off.

Before he could get another round off Alpha was already upon him, Alpha grabbed his arm, and even with only one arm Alpha could easily throw this man he was nothing, but instead Alpha put this man’s head in his hand and squeezed letting the skull collapse under the pressure of his grip. Alpha turned back looking at his sister he could not leave her here so he picked her up and grabbed the man’s weapon it seem to be vaguely based on laser technology like the robots he had fought during his escape. He had very little challenge to escape this base they must of never thought we would wake up how wrong they were.




Enter Alpha
He is holding Sigma in his one arm.
The room is dark and dusty in the center lays an old table on it are research notes from the last occupant of this. To the right of Alpha is a tube like container with a glass cover it lays invitingly open.
To the left of him there is an extensive lab it has every piece of technological devices he was ever heard of and some he can’t make anything of.

Alpha lays sigma in the container and grabs the notes.

Alpha: “I have found the answer to my problems, with these I shall make her live again”

The notes explain that the device he set her in can put her in a state of suspended animation.

He walks over and pulls a lever on the wall suddenly the room lights up and a control panel flickers to

life.

Alpha: “With just one push I can send her to a deep sleep while I find a way to save her”

Many years passed while she was sleeping.


Enter Alpha many changes have happened to him, his left arm is now a mechanical skeleton weak but

works, his face is covered in scars and he is wearing an eye patch, he is looking over a table covered in

parts.

Alpha: “Just a few more twist and.... It’s ready!”

Alpha looks at Sigma.

Alpha: “I have finally made a device to save you.”

He goes over to the familiar control panel and hits a button

Steam like smoke comes out of the Cryo chamber as it opens he stands looking at Sigma.

Alpha: “I’ve worked for many years on this…. WAKE UP!”

He holds up the device as a rainbow colored beam of light hits her, her wounds heal, her eyes open she

gasp for air.

Alpha: “Sigma you’re back.”

The device starts to smoke and it explodes destroying Alpha mechanical arm.

Sigma: “Alpha!”

Sigma tries to take a step to help the now bleeding Alpha but falls forward, Alpha catches her

Alpha: “Sigma it’s been years since you’ve last walked take it slow.”

Sigma: “You’re hurt.”

Sigma looks at all the injuries on Alpha and starts to cry.

Alpha: “Don’t cry I stopped feeling pain since the day you had died.”

Sigma looks up at Alpha and starts to hug him, her brother, and the man who saved her.




Twenty years have passed since then, when the world suddenly went quiet they knew something was wrong. Alpha’s left arm is now a mechanical masterpiece stronger, faster, more durable it was made to suit his needs, his eye was replaced by a mechanical eye that glowed red a scar lay over it from the surgery.

Alpha: “I must check on the world something has happened.”

Sigma: “Don’t leave please; they are not worth risking your life”

Alpha glared at Sigma

Alpha: “I did not spend years working to save myself I did it for you and the world I did it to save those who were unaware of the dangers around them I did it to stop my fathers creations if the world is in peril then my preparations have prepared me for this.”

Alpha went to the control panel

Alpha: “Sigma…. I’m sorry”

Alpha pressed a button and in a flash of blue teleported to the surface world.


He ended up in the middle of a barren wasteland the skies had turn green from pollution the water was not safe to drink It glowed a sickly green color. He see a tree just standing there in the middle of what seems like hell itself the tree is green on it lie weird look fruits. When he goes to investigate he sees what are in the fruits. There are people in the fruits slowly rotting already dead.

“What is this, is this what my father created”

The ground begins to rumble as the tree starts to move exposing a horrible face that resembles a human skull, with a large roar it swings its roots at him.

Alpha hops over the roots and unleashes a volley of blast into the monster.

Alpha: “What beast could have created this not even my father could do anything like this.”

I swings it branches at him slamming him in the side and throwing him to the ground
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