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Posted: Oct 9 2006, 02:40 PM
Member No.: 1
Joined: 20-July 06
You dont have to, but I'd like to get some constructive comments on my fictions. It may help me to improve on my typing.
Also, I would like to use this thread myself to answer questions about either of the ficts, as well as point out small facts.
Such as.. where DoaE went to be about how multiple people view the same moment, Elementals goes to what a single person experiences, but also to get it a little chaotic, just text instead of actions. Which is obviously shown in part 1 of the 1st chapter, where there's only chat, as opposed to the prelude, where there was an obvious fight-scene.
Anyway, go and ask questions. I'll try to hand out a small fact with nearly each reply I make, but dont count on it to happen EVERY reply.