The Gardner File, A story I'm working on
robertllynch
Posted: Jul 3 2009, 05:21 PM


I'll get you for this, He-Man!


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Wow, this place is dead. I'm out of free wifi range for a few weeks and the pagoda becomes a fucking ghost town..

Anywho, I'm working on a literary novela/fake documentary/sci-fi thing and I'd like you all to read it and give me your opinions.

It's called "The Gardner File: The True Story of the North Pointe Incident." It's sort of a vampire love story set in the future and told through documents found by this guy named Gardner.

If you're not daunted by the TL;DR nature of it, and want to check out the first couple parts, they're posted on my DA:

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5

Discuss.


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LukkiStarr
Posted: Jul 4 2009, 03:13 PM


The kanji says "Punishment"


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'Pire love story? Will there be sparkles?

Nevertheless, I'm going to read it. It's sitting in my inbox. Unfortunately, I feel it might encounter the same fate as the rest of the literature I have sitting around...

~Lukki


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robertllynch
Posted: Jul 4 2009, 04:11 PM


I'll get you for this, He-Man!


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No sparkles, just a simple retroviral infection mixed with some supersoldier genetic research. If you read through at least part 3 you'll see it's more science-fiction than fantasy/horror anyway.


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Meeko
Posted: Jul 4 2009, 09:11 PM


Hilarious Member Title


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I'm am currently daunted. Perhaps at a later date I will undauntify.


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