Mp44 Lineart

[mtzsmoores]

Here's some lineart of an MP44 i made recently. It's not totally finished but i could use some guidance. What are some things i could do to fix it up?

[Cloveck]

Shouldn't this have been posted in the line art section?

Anyway, I don't know much about guns, so I can't offer much advice, other than that the grooves on the clip look a bit distorted. Actually.. the whole shape of the clip seems to be bent at the wrong angle. I'm not entirely sure though.

[mtzsmoores]

yea ur right the clip is really screwedd up i better fixed that. O and i forgot to put it in the lineart section lol my bad.

[LeaF]

Well, the part at the end of the barrel where the bullets actually come out is way too small.
Also, the extension under that has some sort of shape, I don't know what it is, but it goes up so high that if a bullet was shot, it would hit it.

[Opacus]

I think it's a tad busy, and it has some not so smooth lines. Get rid of those.
Further it's...functional. But that's where it ends. Think composition! Think exciting!