well here it is after some crits from zeid on PJ



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so any crits from you guys?

BUMP and an update

You cant post this piece as transparent on such a dark background. Its AA is designed for light backgrounds and it makes it look really bad because of its colours.

Good point!

That's something I often get wrong; if you pixel on a backgrond of one colour, chances are it'll look bad on another.

ok here it is without the transperent BG

Hmm, that looks worse.

heres the topic... now can I please just have some crits

i liked the one with transparent background
than the one with the white...

since the piece is so small, i couldn't detect
any obvious flaw, and since this a robot (smething that can have odd shapes)
i cannot bring up anatomy evaluation for it.

so good job there tomster.

thanks

I kinda agree with Teej.

There's one point though: Maybe try more exciting lines? These are boring with only the basic shapes and all. Maybe a dynamic pose, some more exiting forms and all?