chocolate coated love!, A chocolat fiction

[Georgie]

Part 1

Lauren walked to the shop at the edge of the street with her purse clenched in her hand. She was hungry and needed something to eat. She reached the brown door of the shop. Lauren pushed the door open. The shop was more colourful inside. Lauren grabbed a shopping basket and started to hunt for her lunch. She had been to nearlly every isle in the shop when she saw what she was looking for the most... choclate! Licking her lips she gazed at it all. Lauren picked up some milk chocolate.
After she had finished her shopping she went back home. Lauren's stomache was grumbling so she decided to eat now and put the extra food away later. Lauren was about to bite into her cheese sandwich when there was a knock on the door.
"Hang on!" she shouted while she put her sandwich back on the plate. Lauren pulled the door open and her gaze met a man's who was about the same age as her.
"Sorry to desturb you," The gorgeous man said " but can i borrow your bottle opener? You see I'm having a party and I also want you to come."
She let the man in and rushed in to the kitchen to collect her bottle opener, her heart beating faster and faster. The man standing in her living room was the man she dreamt about every night, his name was Roux, he lived in the carivan next door and she wondered how he was going to have a party.
" Here you go, and I'll love to come to your party Roux." She said shakily.
"She noes my name!!" Roux thought.
Roux gently reached for laurens hand and clenched it into his...

[Johnny's Girl]

I love your story!

[Georgie]

Part 2

Lauren pinched her self to see if she was dreaming but this was real. The warmth from Roux's hand made Lauren's body tingle. She had loved this man for years and it was finaly her chance to be with him.
"So we going then?" Roux asked bringing Lauren back to reality.
"Yeah sure!" she replied
They went to Roux's party hand in hand. The party was outside Roux's The party was outside Roux's boat packed with loads of people that Lauren had never seen before but Lauren still had plenty of time alone with Roux. After a lot of drinking and dancing the party had finished. Roux staggered lauren back to her house.
"I had a great time!" Lauren said stopping at her front door.
"Me to," Roux said getting closer to lauren. "I'm glad you came other wise the party wouldn't have been a party without you."
"Awww you-"
Roux interupted her with a kiss.
"Good night Lauren!" he said with a twinkle in his eye.
"Good night" she said ...

[Violet Eyes]

Awww!! I love this story! Its soo sweet!! xxx

[Jack's Angel]

Short and Sweet

[Georgie]

Can some one do a joint story with me cause i cant think of any thing!

[Jack's Angel]

Yep no probs just give me a few days

[Georgie]

ok thanks!

[Jack's Angel]

Lauren awoke the next morning with Roux in her thoughts. She hummed to herself as she slowly got out of bed. "That was a wonderful night," She said to herself as she got dressed. "I love him..."
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Everyday after that party, Lauren dreamt of seeing Roux again. She often thought she saw a man with a blonde ponytail, but it was just her imagination.
One day, she was out shopping for food, when she saw a familiar face. Lauren's face lit up when she saw it. "Hi Roux," She beamed. "I haven't seen you for a while,".
"I've been busy," He gave her a heart melting smile. "I have something for you," He showed her a beautiful silver bracelet. "I made it myself,".
"Oh Roux, it's beautiful," Lauren beamed.
Roux slipped it round her wrist. "I thought you'd like it," He kissed her cheek.
"I love it!" Lauren admired the beautiful bracelet which was draped around her wrist. The bracelet had a L and R entwined on a silver heart...

sorry it was a bit short i couldn't think of anything else.

[Georgie]

thats ok its still gr8!

[Georgie]

Roux whiped the tears of happiness from Lauren's face. Lauren looked back at the bracelet. Roux gentley touched her chin a moved her face slightley to face him. She looked in to his dark brown chocolate eyes that hypnotised her everytime they got together. Suddentley they kissed passionatley.
"Come with me." He said when their lips were apart.
He grabbed her hand and lead her to the boats where all his friends were. Lauren was amazed she had never been down here before, it was so peaceful. Roux then took her to a little row boat. They both sat inside. Roux began to row the boat towards the middle of the lake. He stopped in the moonlight. Lauren noticed that he was so handsome with the moonlight shining on his soft sking.
"Its beautiful down here." Lauren said looking at the veiw behined her.
"Yes, it is but not as beautiful as you." He said softly. "Lauren, I have been wanting to ask you something." Roux started to hesitate.
" Take your time." Lauren said trying to calm him down.
"erm...," He said putting his hand in his pocket. He pulled out something and put it behind his back. " Will you marry me?"
He suddenley put the hand which was behined him in front of Lauren and opened it inside the little red box was a ring....

Its not much i couldn't really think of anything.

[*savvy?*]

Part 5

In a mixture of emotions she grabbed the ring and put it on her finger. Its was pure gold with silver shining diamonds in the top.
"I take that as a yes then." He said happily.
Lauren smiled her dreams were coming true. The man, the dates, the ring and maybe moving in it was all coming to her she is the luckiest women alive! She started to drown in her thoughts. She could hear her name repeating over and over again.
"LAUREN!!!"Roux shouted.
Lauren awoke she looked around. The boat was about half a mile away. Water suddenley stung her eyes. "Oh my god" She thought. Roux dived in the water swimming after her. " Don't worry honey I'm coming!" He bellowed.
Lauren was trying to stay calm but it is hard not to when your drowning. She hit a rock whick had come out of no where, red liquid started to appear. Her side was now stinging and evrything went dark....

[Georgie]

Part 6

Lauren woke up. Her side was aching. Her eye sight was blury and couldn't hardly see. She tried to get up but the pain started to go deep into her body.
"Shes awake!" She heard someone say.
A little giirl began to aproach her she had black hair and a filthy damp brown dress on. She looked at Lauren waving her hang in Laurens face to check if she can see. That helped Lauren a bit as the girl came in to focus.
"Where am I? Wheres Roux?" Lauren asked the girl.
"Your at the river bank amd Roux has gone to fetch some chocolate from the chocolatrie. The women who works there has magical stuff. The chocolate hes buying you is to help the pain go so you can start walking again." She replied camly (sp?)
Lauren smiled and waited for her fiance(SP?) to get back. A few miniutes later Roux returned. His hair was a mess and he was wet from saving her. Lauren looked at him and grabbed his hand. "He looks even sexier like this." She thought.
" Here eat this." He said in his sexy voice.
Lauren took the massive cube of chocolate, she bit into it slowly at first but she started to scoff it down as it was so magnificent. (sp?)
She could feel strength run through her body and the pain started to fade. Her eyes sight was becoming more clear. She sat up and gave Roux a big hug.
"Thanks for saving me." She whispered in his ear. "How can i ever repay you?"
"Well we are leaving tomorrow and... well .... my family might want to meet you as they are kind of strict but they will love you i promise." He said smiling.
"Is that it?" She said suprised and began to move her hand up his leg and winked at him.
He winked back "No thats not it." They started to laugh....